The Seacretor (by Ryan Harding) - 3/5
Main character had little development, and his two friends seemed like stereotypes. I did like his increasingly doomed outlook, and that the writer stopped the narrative at the point he did (keeps you imagining all the horrific possibilities). It all reminded me of Lovecraft's scenarios, where the main characters always seem to end up in terrible situations with no apparent way out. My main problem is that this was a body horror story and didn't really fit in a splatterpunk anthology.
Garrote (by Lydian Faust) - 1/5
This started off strong and had some good moments (especially the first encounter with the killer and a character named Selene), but the ending was unsatisfying. None of the characters seemed to get any real development, and everyone felt interchangeable. The story would benefit if the 'message board' parts were removed (those didn't seem to fit the narrative).
The Junkyard Shift (by Ryan C. Thomas) - 1/5
The setup (workers at a mysterious junkyard where they dispose of bodies for an unnamed employer) had some splatterpunk promise. Instead, all this story delivers on is unredeemable characters, & an incomplete & abrupt ending (this whole story felt like it was a chapter taken from a longer work). Not a satisfying read at all.
Cougars (by Michelle Garza & Melissa Lason) - 3/5
If the main trio of guys were better developed, this story would have more impact. But other than a lack of developed characters, this gory story about a group of guys looking for a fun time at a remote brother is a solid read.
Guinea Pig Blues (by Chad Lutzke) - 3/5
At first this seems like your regular story of friends reconnecting, and realizing maybe they aren't as close as they used to be (if they were ever close at all). This story very quickly goes THERE. It gets very disgusting and uncomfortable fast, and as a reader you want to know exactly what is wrong with the 'guinea pig' friend Nate (and at the same time maybe you also don't). The ending balances both grossout elements and dark comedy well.
Blood On The Walls (by Saul Bailey) - 3/5
That first line is sure.....ughhhhhh...something.
This story really handles tension and paranoia well. Our main character, FBI agent Parker, is a nervous wreck, and always has the feeling that there is just something very wrong at work. Sure, there's the strange smell that no one else seems to notice, but there are also the bizarre dreams he's been having lately. This all leads to an explosive ending, which I won't reveal here. This was so out there and unpredictable, and that is hard to do in horror fiction. Bonus points for originality, definitely.
Chum (by Nathan Robinson) - 1/5
This story takes place in the middle of the sea, on a tiny fishing boat, and focuses on a revenge plot by a deranged father (who takes his anger on his daughter's boyfriend very very far). There are some good descriptions here, and the premise is interesting, but overall the story is disappointing. The villain is quickly devolved to a cliche, and the boyfriend character of Danny was so deeply unlikeable (all the way to the very end), that it's hard to care about anything happening to him at all.
The Bearded Woman (by Alessandro Manzetti) - 1/5
A circus setting is perfect for a dark and twisted horror story. This seemed to have all the ingredients. It takes place in a circus setting, but throwaway lines hint at a futuristic and crumbling world (there are hints of weird technologies and references to unspecified catastrophes throughout the text). It all gets pretty dark at the very end, but what drags this down is lack of any character development and extremely awkward writing (though this could be down to the fact that this was a translated story, perhaps something was lost in the process).
Finger Paint (by Robert Essiy) - 1/5
Horror stories and bullied teenagers can go hand in hand. There are so many ways to craft a creepy and gory story from that simple concept. The author creates an interesting mythology here, of a haunted/supernatural bathroom mirror that manifests whatever is drawn on it into reality. Our main character Bradley (and the gang of bullies that target him) at not developed much at all, and the story feels very jumbled (the narrative didn't 'flow' well). There's some good and disturbing imagery towards the end, but not enough to be truly effective.
Diamond In The Rough (by J. R. Park) - 1/5
This story of hidden identities, stolen talismans, and explicit body horror violence, had splatterpunk potential. The problem is that our main character Angel has no real development, and most of his backstory is revealed in info dumps (either told to other characters or quickly revealed by Angel himself). The ending, which I hoped would redeem the story, just didn't work for me as a reader.
Virtue Of Stagnant Waters (by Monica J. O'Rourke) - 1/5
This starts off as a slightly aloof reporter is chasing her big story, trying to get more details on a notorious serial killer. She's trying to get more from the survivors, and at the beginning you get immediate hints that she maybe actually looking for something else. This 'something else' is revealed at the very end in a kind of cliché manner. This story is clearly going for the shock and extreme gross-out factor (what with the graphic descriptions of assault and violent imagery), but without well-written characters (that never really develop beyond 'brutal killer' & 'helpless victim'), the story doesn't work at all.