Tsk tsk tsk.
As the rating says (two stars) it was just okay.
Honestly, this was probably the worst book I've ever read. However, I DID finish it, but it felt forced. I didn't touch it for a couple of days and was itching to move on to a different book, but I made myself finish it as I was almost done.
I'd say: skip it. It didn't really do anything for me. I would've been okay having never picked it up in the first place.
Positives:
1) Short chapters. I. Love. Short. Chapters.
2) Sometimes (and only sometimes) did I feel bad for a couple of the characters.
3) I greatly appreciated not every character ending up going to college. Had a more realistic feel.
Now, lets get down to the nitty gritty:
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I'm gonna go in order here through the book.
This book started off really cute. Excited Freshman, nervous and full of wonder. It brought back some old feels of 9th grade.
I got to April of their Freshman year and I wondered, WHY IS THERE NO TALK ABOUT THE WORK LOAD? Nothing! Absolutely. Nothing. No presentations. No essays. No tests. Like, WHAT?! That blew my mind.
(I wrote notes as I went along the book, work with me)
Now in May, where's homecoming? There might've been a tiny bit of talk about it (which I definitely don't recall) but from what I remember, there was no homecoming. COME ON. Homecoming is super important to the Freshman! Not to mention, there wasn't a homecoming for any of the years. Given, this school in particular may not have had a homecoming, I let it slide.
(Another post-it, tehe) I started only really KNOWING and being able to distinguish the characters by page 115! That's 115 pages of me being greatly confused and having to go back and forth pages to remember who is who.
Something else I found interesting, the entire Freshman year was told in 127 pages. Now now, I know what you're thinking and I agree. If a book realistically told the story of high school, Freshman to Senior year, it'd be astronomically long. YES. I GET IT. BUT SERIOUSLY. I was really trying to relate and I just... couldn't. Freshman year is probably the "longest" year in high school, I'd say. Not to mention, the summer after Freshman year was only 8 pages. WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAT.
Oh and remember when Mia was being followed and ran to Jakes' house? That was awkward to say the least. I get why the author might've put that in there, but it felt out of place lol. It left me with a "huh?" look on my face.
Junior year started and, NO TALK OF SUMMER ACTIVITIES. I was just...ugh. I had had enough by this point.
Remember when Zoe was freaking out about her interview at Bean? She was losing it! But, they didn't talk about it at all. The next time you hear about Zoe after that chapter, she has the job. The "check ins" or "chapters" of the characters were so far apart! It felt like a couple of months had passed in between.
Once again, another summer passed too fast. The summer after Junior year was 6 pages. Also, no talk of Whitney's theater program? What happened to that?
Senior year. October. Zoe. Page 358 mentions the she is snapping at her boyfriend because she's "moody"...oh. I get it. Her mom. Max. Jane. She's got some stuff going on. But she also broke up with him because she's "moody". Right. My post-it really says it all: "Moody? Really? Couldn't think of anything else, huh?"
Overall, imagery was awful. I couldn't even tell you what their school looked like. Or Zoe. Or Gregor.
The breakup between Jake and Ted. Only a text conversation, and that's it. The author does elaborate on the pain Jake is in, but I was more interested in how he was directly after the break up, how he coped, etc.
I noticed that Jake was more of a background character than a main character. When mentioned, it was either a text conversation, or about Ted. Honestly, I don't remember much about Jake, he was so irrelevant and boring.
Prom. PROM. You only get ONE experience of ONE prom! That's it! (okay sort of two but Whitney was an "additional" character in the chapter) What about the rest of the characters? I'm interested in how Mia or Zoe would've handled prom.
From page 415 to 441, there was only one mention of Mia and it was exchanges with her new love interest. Mia went M.I.A.
Talk about Mia, valedictorian? Once again, there was no mention on the work load or homework or any of that very important stuff.
Gregor and Whitney, so cute, so cliche.
A lot of important moments were skipped I felt. Towards the end, it felt hurried.
Would I read again, definitely not. It put me to sleep. I'd say it's more geared towards 13/14 year olds. Not a complete waste, but no gain either.