Nice , but there’s sadly not much to this...
Would I recommend this ?
No, not really ...... Why ? Because there’s not really much here ,there really isn’t .....
Nara and Cathian didn’t have quite as meat on it’s bones really as you need in a story you want to tease again and again, especially once you got past all the sex,but sadly this story is just about all bones barely any meat at all....
In the first book,where we meet Dovis, we see someone angry and aggressive and possibly a tad mysterious.... We almost get the feeling that there might be layers to him to pull back and reveal an interesting character hiding behind all that angst and anger a aggression but sadly no....
No, here we quickly find out in this redundant redundancy that is this story, that other than Dovis pushing sweet Mari away time after after time, we keep rehashing the facts about his past and his birth and his difference between him and his ppl over and over and over same ground constantly covered w/both him and Mari..... we never really learn anything all that new, all the while our gruff aggressive Dovis acts constantly insecure and does his best to act like a set of taps over a sink or tub running hot and cold and cold and hot w/Mari....
Dovis got back and forth on whether e wants her,or should want her, or if she REALLY wants him to make you dizzy and to wonder if he’s really a high school girl in disguise....
And really that’s all there was.....
There’s not character growth really,it’s made to sound like by the end of the book Mari has been n there at least a month or more, when one minute Dovis is getting rather close to her and the next he’s avoiding her,sleeping with her next ,( you guessed it) avoiding her what was weird was the avoiding felt like just a day or two but Mari is then saying Dovis has been avoiding her for weeks ..... weeks ?
That was weird,this book felt like it all happened in about a week two tops....
Mari is sweet but sadly this lacks the depth or the length needed to get see just who Mari could be now that she’s free...
Might ave been interesting....... Sane with Dovis we get his history and his fears thrown at us over and over it felt but nothing sadly to explain his mean,angry grouchy exterior before this,he’s been traveling w/Cathian and co. for a while ,nothing to explain exactly why he is like he is and not a lot of growth til the very end til he finally lets Mari and the others in .... while Mari makes sense,why he’s kept the others at a distance doesn’t ....
Honestly once this is a full and complete series,I feel you could skip this one and not miss a thing .....
Deep sigh, and really I’m starting to give up on this writer,I’ve tried just about all series now and I ON,Y like NS ( New Species) , and I’ve waited and waited and waited for about three years now for more for one my most favorite series, a series started I believe in her pre published days about 20 years ago,and if she didn’t put out a new book very often, sassy like some only one a year or something I’d understand...
but that’s not the case,VLG alone is up to 10 books,and then new abs revamped Cyborg books, plus that series started with Kele Moon,and this ?
While I don’t feel I have the right to tell a writer what to write,and when Ms.Dohner would say on FB how someone had been a jerk and itched at her and strongly complained at her for neglecting NS I felt that person itching at her was wrong ,we don’t have the right to dictate to the writer what she should do just because it’s what we want....
But here’s the but,after reading a book like this, that honestly falls soo incredibly flat,yet another book,story,series that isn’t the unwanted “step child “ NS feels like it’s become ,I feel like we readers are do some respect as well ....
I sit here and sit here and sit here ( I do move ;P ) waiting and waiting and waiting to buy the next NS book but instead this blink and you miss it story is put out instead, I’m hurt...
I can’t say how unimportant I feel as reader to Ms.Dohner,instead of of giving us characters we love and cherish we’re given the empty calories of a piece of fluff like this ,”Numbers” the last book made up of two novellas was better than both books in this series combined ...
Heck,just one of those stores Mourn and Dana or Hero and Candi could beat this ....
I’m sorry but I give up..... as a NS only reader, I feel I just don’t matter if this is what you’d rather do....
Thanks for NS ,I’ll appreciate it....