I'm not going to rate this book for its entertainment factor, because I don't think that was Gilman's main purpose (and it wasn't that entertaining anyway). I found so many things fascinating about Herland.
My notes:
I was interested to see that Gilman was more trapped in masculine culture and language than we are today (we're making progress, good!). For example, it seemed to be a compliment to her to describe the women of Herland as being like boys--does that show her opinion or the limited ways to praise? (104). Men-like women are above normal women (37). Is being "neuter" (115) Gilman's solution? But then again, what is normal? When describing the men's opinions of women, Gilman (perhaps purposely) leaves out the opinion of the narrator--is that so she won't lose the reader's trust for him? The narrator does slip in the idea that "femininity" is simply a way to please men instead of a natural characteristic (77).
Gilman writes during the history of Herland that "Nothing but earthquakes could destroy such architecture--huge solid blocks, holding by their own weight. They must have had efficient workmen and enough of them in those days" (73). Is that her own bias slipping in, or is that an artful way to show the narrator's true bias?
Gilman does a fine job of making her narrator male, writing things like, "We talk fine things about women, but in our hearts we know that they are very limited beings--most of them. We honor them for their functional powers, even while we dishonor them by our use of it; we honor them for their carefully enforced virtue, even while we show by our own conduct how little we think of that virtue; we value them, sincerely, for the perverted maternal activities which make our wives the most comfortable of servants, bound to us for life with the wages wholly at our own decision, their whole business, outside of the temporary duties of such motherhood as they may achieve, to meet our needs in every way" (156). Also, "All their wide mutual love, all the subtle interplay of mutual friendship and service, the urge of progressive thought and invention, the deepest religious emotion, every feeling and every act was related to this great central Power, to the River of Life pouring through them, which made them the bearers of the very Spirit of God" (155). Also, "What is this miracle by which a woman, even in your arms, may withdraw herself, utterly disappear till what you hold is as inaccessible as the face of a cliff?" (153).
I also found it interesting to see that Gilman's style of feminism included a cherishing of motherhood that quite left out any man whatsoever. Even in a culture without men, Gilman can't let go of women as mothers (78). Herland women claim that a group of mothers instinctively knows what's best for everyone, especially children (121). The relationship between men and women is described as "coming home to mother . . . It was a sense of getting home; of being clean and rested; of safety and yet freedom; of love that was always there, warm like sunshine in May, not hot like a stove or a featherbed--a love that didn't irritate and smother" (156). Yikes. Wrong kind of love, Gilman. I do like, however, that the men are also looked at in terms of parenthood, and that working is considered everyone's job. Men are treated as the male cats/pets, kept under surveillance (72).
I didn't get the weird claim that most dogs are males and women don't really like dogs? Heh? (70).
We always think that feminists must also be enlightened in other ways, but perhaps not. "White" is superior (72). Racism of Gilman's time?
I disagree that men "seek only for what we euphoniously term 'the joys of love'" (152) and the implication that only men seek those "joys."
Herland's religion: doing things from past generations, not for them, not revealed, unchanging religion. Not needing to live forever because life goes on in children. Cafeteria style: choosing what they wanted, no "respect for the past" (127). No ordinances exist here, like marriage (though the reason for the lack of that one is obvious). The folly of the notion "that if life was smooth and happy, people would not enjoy it" (121) is kind of a good wake-up call.
Women are portrayed as emotionally strong, and yet Ellador runs away very upset upon hearing about abortion. I like that she can show her feelings, but I don't feel like Ellador lives up to the masculine, emotionless state that Gilman has described.
To Herland women, stay-at-home moms are imprisoned. Gilman must think that. But she suggests that women should reproduce without men (85) and also leaves no suggestion as to how to reach ideals such as education (82). Unless, of course, her suggestion is to completely eliminate men.
I really wish Gilman had written a sequel of what happened once they got out of Herland and how soon it was before Ellador went RUNNING back.