The way this book makes me feel: what?
WHAT IS HAPPENING? This book confuses me in a bad way--when the main character would do something, I would ask, what is happening? Why is she doing this? What is she even doing? Before I get lost on a tangent, let me list what I did not like:
Negatives
Characters in general... I have to say that the only character I liked in this entire book was Jericho. The main character's image felt OC-ish, and the unrelenting description of her (her mahogany hair, strikingly blue eyes, pale skin, tasseled flight jacket, ARGH!) made it clear that this character was drawn before she was written. Her image is good, overwritten yes, but she does have a very clear physical presence. However, that is where the main character's positives end. Her character is muddled and annoying, varying from suicidal to ARGH-I'M-TERRIFIED-OF-DYING, and her backstory feels shoehorned in. It's annoying that every five seconds we are reminded that, oh yes, this main character suffered when she was a little kid, making her totally stand out from the crowd of other main characters who did not have a perfect childhood (see Harry Potter, Katniss, and Zelie). Sadie's relationship with the main character felt largely unearned, as she was referred to as a mother so many times, but overall spent very little page time besides screaming, hiding, or having the main character feel protective towards her. The two male leads were annoying as well. The Irish dude comes off as creepy, and I'm still insanely confused as to why the main character decided to trust him even after he tried killing her?? Also the man seen roaming in that other rustler town is so obviously the main character's father, I honestly snorted when I read the paragraph.
STOP WITH THE COLORS Geez, can this book go FIVE SECONDS without describing the color of something?? I know the colors of things in the book more than I know the actual plot! If you ever read this, do me a favor and keep a running score of how often the author describes the color of something. It's incredibly distracting and takes away from the book as a whole.
I was lied to the cover had a tagline that said: 'a steampunk western adventure.' I picked this book up because I've never read a western before, and I thought it would be an interesting experience. However, I also picked it up to read a good steampunk book, since I haven't read much of the genre. If you are a fan of steampunk, do not pick up this book. It has no steampunk elements whatsoever, none of the wonder that comes with the genre. It is just a western. Oh yeah, it isn't really an adventure either, since almost the entire story takes place in one town. It is incredibly frustrating when you get clickbaited by a book's tagline.
Positives
World-building needs work I know that sounds like a bad title, but overall, I did enjoy the world of the Bone Roses. However, it needed to be fleshed out much more. I would have loved for a map so I can actually picture where in the Americas they are. The Christian element of the book was alright, it fits in well, it just needs to be, again, fleshed out more. If this book was not already published, I would encourage the author to choose a few aspects of the world to focus on and accentuate to make the world stand out more.
Strong character images I can definitely picture the main character, but the problem is, I could picture her strongly after the third chapter. Despite this fact, I was relentlessly reminded of her goat-hair sweater, mahogany hair, blue eyes, etc., etc. This almost negated the positives from the character images completely, because it was frustrating to wade through endless amounts of description.
Overall, this book needed a much stronger editor to steer the author's vision. I did finish it, so it wasn't unbearable, but I was close to setting the book down.
1.5/5