I could not finish this entire anthology. It is with great pain (and a lot of regret) that I read books 1-5 in it. I am baffled as to why this author gets such rave reviews because I am usually fairly generous in my ratings and can't rate anything over 2.5 stars, most of them only 1 star. It probably averages to 1.5, but I'm going to round down because I can't in good conscience give it a 2.
The first book was awful. The second book was awful. But then the third book showed some slight improvement. And the beginning of the fourth book made it clear that she had been attending some writing workshops and making an attempt to develop her skills and craft. However, by the end of that fourth book, I saw fewer and fewer examples of those attempts. And the fifth book was awful again. That's when I decided I'd had enough agony and deserved to read a good book instead. Maybe I'll go back out of curiosity one day (and I do hate to leave books unfinished).
Why are these so bad, you ask?
First, she spends far too much time in California. There is so so so so much description of her navigation along the streets and towns. It doesn't further the stories, is incredibly tedious for the reader, and doesn't generally add to any ambience. It's also a perfect example of telling and not showing, as if she's trying to make the reader understand the maps and turn-by-turn directions to everywhere she goes. This probably takes up close to 25% of each book. Seriously. Additionally, I get the impression that the weather, politics, and culture of California are all she knows. Despite some characters being military personnel who came from other places and traveled all over, she doesn't bring that into their personalities at all, as if they've all been assimilated.
Second, there are just so many unrealistic and inconsistent things that I can't get a reasonable story that I can accept. She is constantly driving around everywhere, but rarely does it take her more than 20-30 minutes to get there (this is California, a big state with a lot of traffic). She spent four books talking about how black coffee is the elixir of life (ad nauseum and with great cliche), and suddenly in the fifth book, she's drinking lattes without mention of her previous obsession with black coffee. And tons of little bits all over that just don't sound reasonable at all, especially people's behavior and actions.
Third, the main character is generally flat (at best) and unlikable (at worst)! She sleeps with at least one other character involved in each investigation, during the investigation. She's always claiming she can take care of herself, but doesn't have any skills in that area at all (doesn't know how to fight, no self-defense skills, no gun... nothing but stubbornness). She's regularly asking the people in her life for favors, but never seems to be grateful or return one. There is nothing whatsoever that is particularly interesting about her.
And finally, her stories are OK-ish, but without good writing to flesh them out, they just get boring and tiresome. The fourth book was the only one that I cared about the "mystery" part, even though it was beyond obvious well before the end. Truthfully, her entire series through Book 5 felt amateurish. I went on Amazon and saw all the rave reviews and was stunned. Even those who rated them poorly mostly did so because of editing (which wasn't great) and technical issues with the books. I don't understand. I wouldn't recommend them to anyone and really wish *I* hadn't been so stubborn as to read these for as long as I did.