I liked this SO much more than Note To Self. I hope she's written more in this vein as I'll be on the lookout for them. I whizzed through this as I was just dying to know who died, who murdered, who was poking around in the case when they thought nobody else knew.......fascinating and interesting stuff. And as usual I guessed wrong......hehehe !! I was so sure that in this story I'd got it spot on, I should've known better. I've no imagination at all, so it's just as well I read and don't write.
I'd expected to read more about the 80s pop culture but it really could've been set in any decade as there were no real references to the era at all, which was a shame. Cassie was my favourite of the "gang" of four and Lisa I liked the least. I did enjoy a couple of little descriptive sentences she wrote, one about happy hair and another telling us what they called Cassie's granddad.
She did have a problem with speechmarks, though. They were used where nobody was actually speaking but for the most part dropped where someone was ! A couple of sentences also made no sense presented as they are, only needing a comma to sort them out. There were too many words dropped from sentences as well, like a/an/to......then recall was written and not recalled, guy not guys, he not she, a not as, ss not as, Lindberg not Lindbergh, murders not murderers, pointing not pointed, incredible not incredibly......too many rubbish errors like this cost it a 5* review from me. And this sentence, ".....he screamed into his obliterated face face"......I mean, how does any editor or proofreader not spot these yet they smacked me in the face ??
She also did that awful American English writing here and there. For example, "He stared at his phone for a couple of more seconds" or "Cassie had always went along with whatever the crowd was doing."
Not too many authors do this but it makes me wince when they do as it just comes out sounding backward to me.
A bit of a spit 'n' polish is what it needs, though. Don't let the presentation spoil the story.