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The Terebinth Tree Chronicles #1
Colors of Fear
One sorcerer. Four assassins. Uncover the stories of the warriors who will one day band together to kill the most powerful being in their world.
Fear. It is all around him. Wanderer sees it in the eyes of his fellow desert elves as they set out to fight a war that consumes countless lives. Hears it in his brother’s coughs as black magic slowly kills him. Feels it as strange colors appear in midair, seeking to suffocate him.
No matter how he twists it, he can only see two choices: Leave his sick brother and join a war where he will surely perish, or face his brother’s dying days and let his world be destroyed without putting up a fight.
To face one fear is to flee from another. Whichever path he chooses brands him a coward, but he cannot run any longer. Wanderer must make a choice: Will he allow fear to control him? Or will he find a way to reclaim his life?
Colors of Fear is the first short story in the YA Christian Fantasy series titled The Terebinth Tree Chronicles.
Fear. It is all around him. Wanderer sees it in the eyes of his fellow desert elves as they set out to fight a war that consumes countless lives. Hears it in his brother’s coughs as black magic slowly kills him. Feels it as strange colors appear in midair, seeking to suffocate him.
No matter how he twists it, he can only see two choices: Leave his sick brother and join a war where he will surely perish, or face his brother’s dying days and let his world be destroyed without putting up a fight.
To face one fear is to flee from another. Whichever path he chooses brands him a coward, but he cannot run any longer. Wanderer must make a choice: Will he allow fear to control him? Or will he find a way to reclaim his life?
Colors of Fear is the first short story in the YA Christian Fantasy series titled The Terebinth Tree Chronicles.
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Published February 2, 2018
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Faye Fite
10 books156 followersFaye Fite is a disabled author of fantasy and sci-fi. As somebody who lives with chronic pain and an autoimmune disease, she knows that life can be hard sometimes. Because of this, she makes it a point to write honest stories of struggle and strength, of darkness and light. She is passionate about disability advocacy and works to populate speculative fiction with disabled heroes going on magical adventures.
Faye lives in California, where she is attempting to wield magic with her keyboard, read all of the books on earth, join every nerd fandom within reach, and earn her PhD in nutrition without accidentally blowing anything up.
Faye lives in California, where she is attempting to wield magic with her keyboard, read all of the books on earth, join every nerd fandom within reach, and earn her PhD in nutrition without accidentally blowing anything up.
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October 27, 2019
This YA Christian fantasy short story is AMAZING and absolutely the best thing ever written. No. Seriously. It's the truth. I'm totally not biased in any way.
January 29, 2018
Rich, intriguing, and so incredibly relatable. This glimpse into the life of desert-elf, Wanderer, will leave you wanting more! The world is fascinating and so real you can almost feel the sand beneath your feet. Your heart will break for Wanderer's family, the seemingly irreversible fate of his little brother, and Wanderer's own isolation and fear. It is a beautifully crafted short story that pulses with layers of meaning and future possibilities. I can't wait for the next one!
March 31, 2020
This was such a lovely introduction to a fascinating world!
Wanderer, a desert elf from a region embroiled in war, does not want to follow in his father's footsteps. He doesn't want to join the ranks of the Warriors--a military branch with more deaths than victories. He also doesn't want to stay home and watch his brother die of the same sickness that has left Wanderer wracked with strange visions of colors overlapping his world.
He hopes to join the ranks of the Hunters--another branch of the military that will give him a chance to survive long enough to make a difference in the war. But the world is more complex than is easy to judge at first glance, and there's a chance that Wanderer is supposed to do something greater.
I really love Wanderer. Though it was initially difficult to picture, there was a visceral quality to the way he saw colors overlapping every part of the world--the way they could be sometimes helpful and sometimes distracting. His pain, rage and fear made perfect sense, and I loved how they could be so raw while he still remained likeable.
Also, I'm really intrigued by the world as a whole--there's so much more to explore.
This was a super fun read! Looking forward to picking up the next few books in the series :D
Wanderer, a desert elf from a region embroiled in war, does not want to follow in his father's footsteps. He doesn't want to join the ranks of the Warriors--a military branch with more deaths than victories. He also doesn't want to stay home and watch his brother die of the same sickness that has left Wanderer wracked with strange visions of colors overlapping his world.
He hopes to join the ranks of the Hunters--another branch of the military that will give him a chance to survive long enough to make a difference in the war. But the world is more complex than is easy to judge at first glance, and there's a chance that Wanderer is supposed to do something greater.
I really love Wanderer. Though it was initially difficult to picture, there was a visceral quality to the way he saw colors overlapping every part of the world--the way they could be sometimes helpful and sometimes distracting. His pain, rage and fear made perfect sense, and I loved how they could be so raw while he still remained likeable.
Also, I'm really intrigued by the world as a whole--there's so much more to explore.
This was a super fun read! Looking forward to picking up the next few books in the series :D
February 3, 2018
This is one of a series of prequel short stories Hannah Heath is releasing for her upcoming novel, The Stump of the Terebinth Tree--and if the future stories and books are going to carry on the high standard of this release, then we fantasy readers are in for a treat. This is a short but satisfying tale that introduces a fascinating world of warring elves. Color, as indicated by the title, plays a significant and intriguing role. Out of all the story’s impressive qualities, the characterization was what I enjoyed most. I felt immediately invested in the plight of the main character, Wanderer, as well as the family he’s desperate to protect. Also, Heath’s style is a joy to read--there’s a quotable line on every page. I did feel a little bereft when I’d finished the story, since it was just a tiny taste of a larger whole, but I realize that was intentional. I’m adding the Terebinth Tree stories to the list of indie projects I’m eagerly following in 2018.
February 13, 2018
What an incredible story! Short, to the point, yet full of depth despite only being 50 pages.
The writing is absolutely seamless! from the descriptions, to Wanderer's thoughts it's all just so smooth an effortless! It's as if each individual word was put in the story with a specific purpose and intent in mind.
Wanderer himself, was an extremely well developed and multi faceted character. I loved how he was all tough and rough on the outside, but surprisingly soft on the inside. The way his brother's sickness made him feel so scared and vulnerable, felt extremely real!
I loved the way the worldbuilding was described. Descriptive but not in an overbearing way, yet still enough to give you a clear picture of how everything looks.
But the thing I loved most, was how well the Christian themes in this story were handled. It has a very clear Christian allegory to it, yet I never felt preachy. It was just kind of there as a part of the culture Wanderer lived in, but it was also very iconic to our protagonist's character arc too! This is how you write Christian fic, people!
The writing is absolutely seamless! from the descriptions, to Wanderer's thoughts it's all just so smooth an effortless! It's as if each individual word was put in the story with a specific purpose and intent in mind.
Wanderer himself, was an extremely well developed and multi faceted character. I loved how he was all tough and rough on the outside, but surprisingly soft on the inside. The way his brother's sickness made him feel so scared and vulnerable, felt extremely real!
I loved the way the worldbuilding was described. Descriptive but not in an overbearing way, yet still enough to give you a clear picture of how everything looks.
But the thing I loved most, was how well the Christian themes in this story were handled. It has a very clear Christian allegory to it, yet I never felt preachy. It was just kind of there as a part of the culture Wanderer lived in, but it was also very iconic to our protagonist's character arc too! This is how you write Christian fic, people!
August 16, 2018
See full review here: >https://deborahkeltywriter.blogspot.com/2018/08/indie-book-review-colors-of-fear-by.html
Colors of Fear is a short story, written by one of my favorite bloggers Hannah Heath, and is the first of a collection called The Terebinth Chronicles. They are a prequel to her Christian YA fantasy novel, The Stump of The Terebinth Tree, which is yet to be published.
This introduction to Hannah's fantasy is very well written. I love the style and her execution of "show, don't tell" is executed fantastically. Each of the characters introduced, while briefly shown, are interesting and complex in their own way, with Wanderer portrayed as a flawed and vulnerable protagonist. I'm fascinated with her world setting and really hope to see more of it.
Even though Colors of Fear is just under sixty pages long, including the glossary at the end, it is a gripping tale of an elf who tries to become part of those who dare to stop Elgar, an evil sorcerer who cast a spell called the Muria which brought sickness to Wanderer's world....and his own brother. This leads him to choose between the life he's had for so long or the one that may lead to his death.
With all that said, were there any flaws at all? Well, the only exception I probably had a little trouble with was the explanation of the colors, which is the effect Wanderer had after surviving the Muria himself. I'm guessing it's some kind of hallucination or like floaters he gets under stress, but it is a little bit confusing at times. That said, it didn't bring the story down thanks to the story's pacing and all the other good thing I mentioned above. Overall, I really enjoyed it and it's a good place to start as a bridge to her upcoming book.
Anyone who's a fantasy fan and loves short stories will enjoy this!
Also, thanks again to Hannah Heath and her giveaway that I managed to get to read Colors of Fear! :D
Colors of Fear is a short story, written by one of my favorite bloggers Hannah Heath, and is the first of a collection called The Terebinth Chronicles. They are a prequel to her Christian YA fantasy novel, The Stump of The Terebinth Tree, which is yet to be published.
This introduction to Hannah's fantasy is very well written. I love the style and her execution of "show, don't tell" is executed fantastically. Each of the characters introduced, while briefly shown, are interesting and complex in their own way, with Wanderer portrayed as a flawed and vulnerable protagonist. I'm fascinated with her world setting and really hope to see more of it.
Even though Colors of Fear is just under sixty pages long, including the glossary at the end, it is a gripping tale of an elf who tries to become part of those who dare to stop Elgar, an evil sorcerer who cast a spell called the Muria which brought sickness to Wanderer's world....and his own brother. This leads him to choose between the life he's had for so long or the one that may lead to his death.
With all that said, were there any flaws at all? Well, the only exception I probably had a little trouble with was the explanation of the colors, which is the effect Wanderer had after surviving the Muria himself. I'm guessing it's some kind of hallucination or like floaters he gets under stress, but it is a little bit confusing at times. That said, it didn't bring the story down thanks to the story's pacing and all the other good thing I mentioned above. Overall, I really enjoyed it and it's a good place to start as a bridge to her upcoming book.
Anyone who's a fantasy fan and loves short stories will enjoy this!
Also, thanks again to Hannah Heath and her giveaway that I managed to get to read Colors of Fear! :D
April 10, 2018
I was so excited to read this short story. I read Hannah's previous work, Skies of Dripping Gold, and was thoroughly impressed.
Colors of Fear is much less Allegory than Skies of Dripping Gold and takes advantage of more typical fantasy tropes. Despite that, I wouldn't call this typical. I loved the desert setting and how Hannah used it to build the plot. There were a ton of characters packed into this small book. All of them were given enough depth to really fill out the world. The main character, Wanderer, was beautifully fleshed out, and I loved watching the frustrations and fears wrestle in his life.
I also want to make special note of the prose. There were some lines in this story that felt almost like a song. And a few that made me tear up just from the line alone. I think one of my favorites (Minor spoiler) was how Wanderer talked about his father dying, choking on "blood and honor".
I can't wait to see more of this world
P.S. The glossary in the back was AWESOME.
Colors of Fear is much less Allegory than Skies of Dripping Gold and takes advantage of more typical fantasy tropes. Despite that, I wouldn't call this typical. I loved the desert setting and how Hannah used it to build the plot. There were a ton of characters packed into this small book. All of them were given enough depth to really fill out the world. The main character, Wanderer, was beautifully fleshed out, and I loved watching the frustrations and fears wrestle in his life.
I also want to make special note of the prose. There were some lines in this story that felt almost like a song. And a few that made me tear up just from the line alone. I think one of my favorites (Minor spoiler) was how Wanderer talked about his father dying, choking on "blood and honor".
I can't wait to see more of this world
P.S. The glossary in the back was AWESOME.
May 11, 2018
3.5 stars. Hannah Heath strikes again! Colors of Fear is well-paced and full of unique concepts. Wanderer's inner conflict is expressed through his actions as well as his narrator voice, and several of the other characters definitely create intrigue. For such a short story (takes less than an hour to read), the world building is pretty solid. Desert elves are a nice break from the traditional 'Tolkien' variety.
Even though it's a prequel story, I did expect it to have a more defined resolution. It feels more like the pilot episode of a series than a stand-alone story. Which, you know, is fine. A second reading might help, but I'm also a bit confused about the colors. They're literal and seem to be physical manifestations of emotions, but I thought some clarification/explanation would've helped me understand how and why they work.
All in all, I'd recommend this story as a build-up to The Stump of the Terebinth Tree. Personally, I might have preferred it as part of a larger unit, since it doesn't have as much plot weight on its own.
Even though it's a prequel story, I did expect it to have a more defined resolution. It feels more like the pilot episode of a series than a stand-alone story. Which, you know, is fine. A second reading might help, but I'm also a bit confused about the colors. They're literal and seem to be physical manifestations of emotions, but I thought some clarification/explanation would've helped me understand how and why they work.
All in all, I'd recommend this story as a build-up to The Stump of the Terebinth Tree. Personally, I might have preferred it as part of a larger unit, since it doesn't have as much plot weight on its own.
August 6, 2018
I'm not sure what to say except that Hannah Heath is fast becoming one of my favorite writers. I read Skies of Dripping Gold a couple months ago and was blown away. So when I picked up this story, I had high expectations. Somehow she exceeded them. The prose is beautiful, the world intriguing (how!? It's a short story, for crying out loud), and the characters nuanced and believable (again, how!? They are ELVES). The only thing I will complain about is the length. I know the full-length book is coming out, but SERIOUSLY. It needs to be published. Like yesterday.
February 8, 2018
For such a short story, the plot and character development in Colors of Fear is impressive. Not only that, but we get a feel for the protagonist’s fears, his hopes, his desires, and what he finally decides to do in the end. Wanderer’s colors makes him unique, and it helps him stand out from any other desert elf in Nathungar. But his wish to make a difference without dying the way his father did and to keep his brother safe are two characteristics that help us connect with Wanderer on deeper levels—and even spiritually, as he begs Masiah for help, hardly believing that Masiah will even hear or answer his prayer.
Heath’s writing style is a joy to read. It’s simply satisfying. Not only is the information pacing and story flow a beautiful thing, but the storytelling is smooth, pleasant, and elegant. The descriptions and word choice flows with each new paragraph, concise and clear and colorful. Very colorful. After all, the POV character sees with colors, so it only makes sense.
I also love the uniqueness of the colors. The colors discourage Wanderer and show up as emotions. I know that sounds odd when I say it, but there is so much feeling and vividness in the descriptions of what the colors do to Wanderer and how they affect him, but it’s something you’re going to have to read for yourself.
Heath’s writing style is a joy to read. It’s simply satisfying. Not only is the information pacing and story flow a beautiful thing, but the storytelling is smooth, pleasant, and elegant. The descriptions and word choice flows with each new paragraph, concise and clear and colorful. Very colorful. After all, the POV character sees with colors, so it only makes sense.
I also love the uniqueness of the colors. The colors discourage Wanderer and show up as emotions. I know that sounds odd when I say it, but there is so much feeling and vividness in the descriptions of what the colors do to Wanderer and how they affect him, but it’s something you’re going to have to read for yourself.
February 25, 2018
I read and enjoyed Hannah Heath's previous short story, "Skies of Dripping Gold." Consequently, I snatched "Colors of Fear" up as soon as I saw it was published. I am so glad I did.
This is a beautiful story. From start to end, the imagery is stunning and poignant. The characters stand out on the page with freshness that surpasses characters in many far-longer books. The fantasy setting is unique, and I'm eager for more of it.
Two of the things I love most about "Skies of Dripping Gold" are the characters' relatable but seldom written struggles and the inclusion of powerful themes without preachiness. "Colors of Fear" did not disappoint in these areas. Above all, I absolutely loved Wanderer and his arc. As someone who has struggled with fear for the majority of her life, finding a main character who shares that struggle connected with something deep inside of me. I felt that Heath dealt with this struggle honestly and realistically.
If you enjoy fantasy, elves, competition, and creative storytelling, or if you, like me, have experienced fear, you will love this short story.
This is a beautiful story. From start to end, the imagery is stunning and poignant. The characters stand out on the page with freshness that surpasses characters in many far-longer books. The fantasy setting is unique, and I'm eager for more of it.
Two of the things I love most about "Skies of Dripping Gold" are the characters' relatable but seldom written struggles and the inclusion of powerful themes without preachiness. "Colors of Fear" did not disappoint in these areas. Above all, I absolutely loved Wanderer and his arc. As someone who has struggled with fear for the majority of her life, finding a main character who shares that struggle connected with something deep inside of me. I felt that Heath dealt with this struggle honestly and realistically.
If you enjoy fantasy, elves, competition, and creative storytelling, or if you, like me, have experienced fear, you will love this short story.
March 22, 2024
This is a short story, so there's not a whole lot to it as far as words go, but it's a really rich story despite how brief it is. I was immediately invested in the main character and his family, and the portrayal of his emotions was incredibly well-written. The orange-haired elf also fascinated me, and I really wanted to see more of her.
The world was just as enthralling as the characters. Even though you see only a tiny piece of the world in this story, you can tell how deep and rich the world is, and how different it is from most fantasy worlds. Even tiny things like the scars bring so much depth and realism. The use of color, almost like synesthesia, was also really intriguing.
I was disappointed when this ended because I absolutely loved the world and characters, and I can't wait for The Stump of the Terabinth Tree to come out.
The world was just as enthralling as the characters. Even though you see only a tiny piece of the world in this story, you can tell how deep and rich the world is, and how different it is from most fantasy worlds. Even tiny things like the scars bring so much depth and realism. The use of color, almost like synesthesia, was also really intriguing.
I was disappointed when this ended because I absolutely loved the world and characters, and I can't wait for The Stump of the Terabinth Tree to come out.
December 26, 2019
In 50 pages, Colors of Fear has immersed me in a world more completely than many full-length novels I've read. Desert Elves, war, religion, magic, this short story has it all! I quickly became attached to Wanderer, who wants to make a difference in his world and for his family. But fear threatens to consume him in more ways than one. The side characters were also intriguing, and I'm looking forward learn more about them in future installments of The Terebinth Tree Chronicles. Heath ends the story at a point where I feel the story in itself is complete but leaves you thirsting for more because you know there is more to come. If this is any indication of what her novel The Stump of the Terebinth Tree we're in for an awesome read!
September 8, 2018
My favorite aspect of Colors of Fear by Hannah Heath is that the main character, Wanderer, can see emotions in the form of colors, not only the emotions of others but his own. This ability haunts him and is difficult for him to deal with. The character arc is strong, but the story didn’t hold my interest the way I would have liked. I was easily distracted from the story, and that disappointed me because I really liked Hannah’s first story Skies of Dripping Gold, so had high hopes. I liked the idea of Colors of Fear, a young man trying to find his place while battling his fears of his future and his family’s future. Sometimes I felt that the flowery metaphor of Wanderer’s abilities got in the story’s way. I think if it were a bit more clear what each of the colors that Wanderer sees meant it may have been a bit more impactful.
I will still read book 2 because I see good potential in this story.
I will still read book 2 because I see good potential in this story.
April 16, 2023
I really enjoyed this short story! The world building was unique (desert elves, Wanderer having something similar to synthesia where he can see emotions — his own and others — as colors, a magical curse that has harmed the land and kills those who live there) and effortlessly incorporated in a way that added color (pun intended lol) to the world without bogging the story down. I loved the desert setting, the sweet relationship between Wanderer and his little brother Twig, and the beautiful prose.
Wanderer really captured my interest (and my heart) as the MC. He is so conflicted, and his struggles are so relatable and real — his very well grounded anxiety, his sick and potentially dying brother, his struggles with faith when he gets neither relief nor answers. Everything is raw and vulnerable in the best of ways. He is absolutely a character I can get behind for a whole series (good thing we are promised a larger story). And Jayel, the fiery-haired elf. I want more of them both.
My only wish is that this story was longer. The plot line is resolved and the ending is fitting, but I want more.
Wanderer really captured my interest (and my heart) as the MC. He is so conflicted, and his struggles are so relatable and real — his very well grounded anxiety, his sick and potentially dying brother, his struggles with faith when he gets neither relief nor answers. Everything is raw and vulnerable in the best of ways. He is absolutely a character I can get behind for a whole series (good thing we are promised a larger story). And Jayel, the fiery-haired elf. I want more of them both.
My only wish is that this story was longer. The plot line is resolved and the ending is fitting, but I want more.
February 19, 2018
I cannot recommend this book enough!
Hannah has an amazing talent for writing stories subtle but beautifully inspiring stories.
Colors of Fear is no different.
It is impossible not to empathise with the main character, Wanderer. Following the young protagonist, you can appreciate that he is destined for great things but you can relate to his drive but also his hesitation rather than being a bold, brave hero who throws himself into a quest.
Well written, addictive and refreshingly different, Hannah's imagination is somewhere I want to live.
Hannah has an amazing talent for writing stories subtle but beautifully inspiring stories.
Colors of Fear is no different.
It is impossible not to empathise with the main character, Wanderer. Following the young protagonist, you can appreciate that he is destined for great things but you can relate to his drive but also his hesitation rather than being a bold, brave hero who throws himself into a quest.
Well written, addictive and refreshingly different, Hannah's imagination is somewhere I want to live.
April 29, 2020
I loved the visual of the fears appearing as colors. Every time Wanderer experienced fear you could feel the overwhelming colors blinding him, making him lose his focus, and creating obstacles to achieving his goals. This is a very creative novella and a great introduction to the writing of Hannah Heath. Looking forward to more Terebinth Tree Chronicles!
February 2, 2018
Just yesterday, I preordered the ebook. Literally, as soon as it was available and in my kindle library, I read it. I can't wait to read next short story of yours. Love this. ‘Fear devours the soul.’ You don’t have to let it consume yours."
February 19, 2018
Colors of Fear is the perfect sneak peek at an exciting new fantasy world. Hints at complex cultures and historical mysteries piqued my interest in what was happening behind the scenes, but my curiosity will have to take a back seat until later because there's no arguing that this story was all about Wanderer, a desert elf who strives to overcome his extremely vivid fears.
Wanderer's emotional tension in this short little story was intense and continued to rise. I was grabbed by the strong visuals tied to his anxiety and fear. While this is definitely on the angsty side, there are some hopeful undercurrents that leave me eager to go on that journey with him. I was impressed by how much depth was packed into such a limited space and look forward to seeing how the story develops.
Wanderer's emotional tension in this short little story was intense and continued to rise. I was grabbed by the strong visuals tied to his anxiety and fear. While this is definitely on the angsty side, there are some hopeful undercurrents that leave me eager to go on that journey with him. I was impressed by how much depth was packed into such a limited space and look forward to seeing how the story develops.
February 26, 2018
Desert elves! Color schemes! Assassins! Memory scars! Kickass characters! Fear! Hallucinations! Determination! Evil sorcerers!
Is it bad that all of those are super exciting to me? They make for a super exciting short story, that's for sure.
Not that Colors of Fear is a light fluffy read, but it's compelling and it's creative and it's setting up such a cool world, one that I could easily get lost in with its culture and magic and war-torn state. And with Wanderer's fear and pain and concern for his brother, there's so much potential for character development and depth in later stories (and that development and depth is definitely hinted at in this story, too).
My full review is on my blog: https://justiceandwriteousness.wordpr...
Is it bad that all of those are super exciting to me? They make for a super exciting short story, that's for sure.
Not that Colors of Fear is a light fluffy read, but it's compelling and it's creative and it's setting up such a cool world, one that I could easily get lost in with its culture and magic and war-torn state. And with Wanderer's fear and pain and concern for his brother, there's so much potential for character development and depth in later stories (and that development and depth is definitely hinted at in this story, too).
My full review is on my blog: https://justiceandwriteousness.wordpr...
April 6, 2020
I quite enjoyed this brief introduction to the continent of Thane and the world of the Terebinth Tree.
I have followed Hannah Heath's blog for some time now. Her writing tips and insights are refreshing, and her warm, inviting (and deliciously nerdy!) demeanor shines in her posts. Since the release announcement, I eagerly awaited this first of five installments in The Terebinth Tree Chronicles, precursors to Heath's novel The Stump of the Terebinth Tree (TSotTT). Finally seeing the actuation of Heath's novel is a pleasure.
To start: there is a glossary, and if you are anything like me, you’ll want to know of its existence as you read. I didn’t see it until I had finished, and would have found some of the definitions very helpful as I was going through the story (my knowledge assimilation from context is wanting). It’s not that I think an explicit explanation is warranted every time, but I did get confused by some of the mentions early on.
Many of my highlights from this story come from the descriptors of how Wanderer sees colors and the way they interact with him and those around him. Some examples: “… seeing the black orbs gathering around his temples like a heavy crown.” and “Three out of five. The words rose up in front of him, dripping crimson.” Heath weaves a seamless integration of the concept of colors as emotions and entities that alter Wanderer’s perceptions and behavior.
My favorite passage centers on the reveal of the she-elf, Jayel. The dialogue and emotion had my stomach twisting and my heart writhing. When I started this review I was going to write that I hope she turns up in TSotTT, but through several of Heath’s release party live streams, I learned that Jayel is in fact the main character in the next Chronicle. On that note, I recommend checking the author’s blog for links to videos of the three streams if you are interested in more information on the story.
I loved how memory scars are incorporated. Their introduction is an excellent example of allowing the plot to drive exposition.
On to some of my gripes. To me, Thane and Nathungar, the oasis where Wanderer lives, felt a bit underdeveloped. Although this is a short story, as a lover of description I felt rather bereft of indicators for how big the oasis is, what the homes look like, what the desert elves wear. Though I applaud Heath’s ability to immerse me in this magical world through the characters and feelings, I had a hard time picturing the place overall.
Another thing I wanted better defined were Wanderer’s motivations. His disdain for the oasis and desire to leave are mentioned yet not expanded. When I asked in one of the Q&A livestreams, Heath did clarify that it is a spoiler for the novel, so though I understand that decision, I think a few more hints of that motivation would have helped, rather than just mentioning that he considers it a “forsaken oasis.” Wanderer’s strong desire to join the Hunters is also not elaborated, though I have a suspicion for that. We also are not privy to how and why he does not show a certain bias, which I definitely wanted explained (I cannot imagine that won’t be in TSotTT however).
Wanderer shows a tenderness with his brother that eclipses his fear and uncertainty in other aspects of his life, which rounds out his character nicely. Here we have a main character who doubts, who is afraid, and who is touched by magic in a way that seems more harm than boon.
Overall, most of my issues with Colors of Fear stemmed from simply wanting more. The world of Shard feels just out of reach, with strong driving forces in characters, religion, and vocations. For a first foray into the world of her novel, I find it well-satisfying.
I have followed Hannah Heath's blog for some time now. Her writing tips and insights are refreshing, and her warm, inviting (and deliciously nerdy!) demeanor shines in her posts. Since the release announcement, I eagerly awaited this first of five installments in The Terebinth Tree Chronicles, precursors to Heath's novel The Stump of the Terebinth Tree (TSotTT). Finally seeing the actuation of Heath's novel is a pleasure.
To start: there is a glossary, and if you are anything like me, you’ll want to know of its existence as you read. I didn’t see it until I had finished, and would have found some of the definitions very helpful as I was going through the story (my knowledge assimilation from context is wanting). It’s not that I think an explicit explanation is warranted every time, but I did get confused by some of the mentions early on.
Many of my highlights from this story come from the descriptors of how Wanderer sees colors and the way they interact with him and those around him. Some examples: “… seeing the black orbs gathering around his temples like a heavy crown.” and “Three out of five. The words rose up in front of him, dripping crimson.” Heath weaves a seamless integration of the concept of colors as emotions and entities that alter Wanderer’s perceptions and behavior.
My favorite passage centers on the reveal of the she-elf, Jayel. The dialogue and emotion had my stomach twisting and my heart writhing. When I started this review I was going to write that I hope she turns up in TSotTT, but through several of Heath’s release party live streams, I learned that Jayel is in fact the main character in the next Chronicle. On that note, I recommend checking the author’s blog for links to videos of the three streams if you are interested in more information on the story.
I loved how memory scars are incorporated. Their introduction is an excellent example of allowing the plot to drive exposition.
On to some of my gripes. To me, Thane and Nathungar, the oasis where Wanderer lives, felt a bit underdeveloped. Although this is a short story, as a lover of description I felt rather bereft of indicators for how big the oasis is, what the homes look like, what the desert elves wear. Though I applaud Heath’s ability to immerse me in this magical world through the characters and feelings, I had a hard time picturing the place overall.
Another thing I wanted better defined were Wanderer’s motivations. His disdain for the oasis and desire to leave are mentioned yet not expanded. When I asked in one of the Q&A livestreams, Heath did clarify that it is a spoiler for the novel, so though I understand that decision, I think a few more hints of that motivation would have helped, rather than just mentioning that he considers it a “forsaken oasis.” Wanderer’s strong desire to join the Hunters is also not elaborated, though I have a suspicion for that. We also are not privy to how and why he does not show a certain bias, which I definitely wanted explained (I cannot imagine that won’t be in TSotTT however).
Wanderer shows a tenderness with his brother that eclipses his fear and uncertainty in other aspects of his life, which rounds out his character nicely. Here we have a main character who doubts, who is afraid, and who is touched by magic in a way that seems more harm than boon.
Overall, most of my issues with Colors of Fear stemmed from simply wanting more. The world of Shard feels just out of reach, with strong driving forces in characters, religion, and vocations. For a first foray into the world of her novel, I find it well-satisfying.
March 29, 2021
I loved Colors of Fear. It was such a beautiful and believable story, from the characters, to the narrative, to the world, to the action scenes, to just about everything.
Heath's narration and descriptions were grounding and intensive, but never over-done, rambly, or boring.
The world building was very real and, as I said for the story as a whole, believable. It never info-dumped and it also didn't leave me in the dark, even without the glossary (which I didn't know was there until later).
I liked Wanderer right away, as well as his relationship with his brother. It only took the first ten pages for me to be sold on Wanderer as a character, and that was due to the way he interacted with and looked out for Twig. And from there, the more the story progressed, the more I empathized and I think understood Wanderer.
Length-wise, this short was perfect, considering this is one part of a bigger story. It definetly has me excited for the other short stories as well as the novel that it is leading to.
If I had to sum up this story in just a couple of words, "engaging" and "believable" would probably be it, and those are both things that I love to see in fantasy.
I very much so recommend this short story, and I'm excited to see where the others in this series take me.
Heath's narration and descriptions were grounding and intensive, but never over-done, rambly, or boring.
The world building was very real and, as I said for the story as a whole, believable. It never info-dumped and it also didn't leave me in the dark, even without the glossary (which I didn't know was there until later).
I liked Wanderer right away, as well as his relationship with his brother. It only took the first ten pages for me to be sold on Wanderer as a character, and that was due to the way he interacted with and looked out for Twig. And from there, the more the story progressed, the more I empathized and I think understood Wanderer.
Length-wise, this short was perfect, considering this is one part of a bigger story. It definetly has me excited for the other short stories as well as the novel that it is leading to.
If I had to sum up this story in just a couple of words, "engaging" and "believable" would probably be it, and those are both things that I love to see in fantasy.
I very much so recommend this short story, and I'm excited to see where the others in this series take me.
June 10, 2018
Colors of Fear introduces an intriguing new fantasy world and Wanderer—a desert elf who can see emotions in colors around him. The story moves quickly and Wanderer’s fear is written in a relatable way. It was easy to understand the struggles he wrestles with and root for him.
While a quick read, Colors of Fear paints a vivid picture of Wanderer and his world, and I look forward to learning more in future stories!
While a quick read, Colors of Fear paints a vivid picture of Wanderer and his world, and I look forward to learning more in future stories!
July 28, 2019
Fast-paced, intriguing short story, leaving me super ready for the rest of the series. (PS. TWIG IS A PRECIOUS CHILD THAT I WILL FIGHT FOR)
February 6, 2018
When the blurb said Wanderer sees fear, I didn't think it meant he actually sees fear. As in each character emanates colors based on different emotions. Nice twist!
Wow, the descriptions in this story were so good! The red sands were so tangible, I could almost taste it. Not that sand is pleasant to taste. Grinds on your teeth actually. (Yes, I am speaking from experience. You go to the beach often enough, and you will learn the taste of sand.)
I also like the concept of desert elves, even the way they honor and remember their dead friends and family. Usually, modern fantasy novels are populated with woodland elves derived from Tolkien's novels. While I can’t say the author, Hannah Heath, doesn’t necessarily draw from Tolkien, her sentient beings do not seem to be a copy thus far.
My only wish is that it could have been longer. Just as I thought it was getting good, it ended! But, as Heath put it, it’s the story before the story. Readers are actually getting the prequels before the novel instead of vice versa. While it’s a nice change, it only makes me eager to read more! I look forward to the release of her next story and, ultimately, her novel.
I gave this short story 4/5 stars for great world building and character development, but as it’s a prequel, it left me wanting more. I’d recommend it to anybody who enjoys well-written fantasy and desert settings.
Wow, the descriptions in this story were so good! The red sands were so tangible, I could almost taste it. Not that sand is pleasant to taste. Grinds on your teeth actually. (Yes, I am speaking from experience. You go to the beach often enough, and you will learn the taste of sand.)
I also like the concept of desert elves, even the way they honor and remember their dead friends and family. Usually, modern fantasy novels are populated with woodland elves derived from Tolkien's novels. While I can’t say the author, Hannah Heath, doesn’t necessarily draw from Tolkien, her sentient beings do not seem to be a copy thus far.
My only wish is that it could have been longer. Just as I thought it was getting good, it ended! But, as Heath put it, it’s the story before the story. Readers are actually getting the prequels before the novel instead of vice versa. While it’s a nice change, it only makes me eager to read more! I look forward to the release of her next story and, ultimately, her novel.
I gave this short story 4/5 stars for great world building and character development, but as it’s a prequel, it left me wanting more. I’d recommend it to anybody who enjoys well-written fantasy and desert settings.
December 25, 2019
Characters: 2/5
Worldbuilding: 3/5
Pacing: 5/5
Prose: 5/5
Originality 3/5
Worldbuilding: 3/5
Pacing: 5/5
Prose: 5/5
Originality 3/5
February 23, 2018
First off, I have to say I love the desert setting and Wanderer's strange ability (?) to see colors everywhere. I'm unclear about what they do or why they're there, or what they even stand for, but I liked them.
This short story seems to be setting up an angsty story about a young elf struggling with his faith. Fitting, as for the first three quarters of the book I was convinced that the god-figure, Masiah, was a demon. I'm not sure if this is intentional, but I hope it is, because that would be really cool. I mean, they just talk about Masiah cursing people all the time...what sort of benevolent god does that? It wasn't until I saw the temple, heard people give Masiah's blessing, and read the glossary that I realized Masiah was a god/creator. Either that, or the elves worship a demon. Anyway, I'm a big fan of nuance, so either way is great.
(And yes, I get what Masiah sounds like when you say it out loud. That just didn't even cross my mind until I started discussing the issue with my sister.)
My biggest criticism is that the writing can be a bit too vague. I couldn't connect well with the villainous threat as I couldn't tell whether the decay of Wanderer's community was due to the Big Bad, or just to the elves' buttheadedness.
In any case, I'm curious to read the next installments and see how all the characters are tied together. Best of luck, Hannah!
This short story seems to be setting up an angsty story about a young elf struggling with his faith. Fitting, as for the first three quarters of the book I was convinced that the god-figure, Masiah, was a demon. I'm not sure if this is intentional, but I hope it is, because that would be really cool. I mean, they just talk about Masiah cursing people all the time...what sort of benevolent god does that? It wasn't until I saw the temple, heard people give Masiah's blessing, and read the glossary that I realized Masiah was a god/creator. Either that, or the elves worship a demon. Anyway, I'm a big fan of nuance, so either way is great.
(And yes, I get what Masiah sounds like when you say it out loud. That just didn't even cross my mind until I started discussing the issue with my sister.)
My biggest criticism is that the writing can be a bit too vague. I couldn't connect well with the villainous threat as I couldn't tell whether the decay of Wanderer's community was due to the Big Bad, or just to the elves' buttheadedness.
In any case, I'm curious to read the next installments and see how all the characters are tied together. Best of luck, Hannah!
July 24, 2019
I wasnt quite in the mood for this type of fantasy whilst reading it, so my opinion may change. I am curious about the rest of the series. And I enjoyed the use of colours to depict anxiety/emotions. However, I felt that this was a bit confusing, though Heath did a great job showing all the back stories in such a short novella. I think I'll come back to this gain later when I'm more in the mood for this type of story.
March 9, 2022
The first book in the series follows the story of Wanderer, a desert elf who’s desperate to join the Hunters – an elite group of fighters dedicated to taking down the dark lord, Elgar. Three out of five Hunters dye within their first year of service, but he has a family to protect: his mother and chronically ill younger brother, Twig. While his brother wastes away from the disease that plagues their world – called Muria – Wanderer recovered, only to be left with a strange ability. He sees emotion as blinding color.
“Some days, he couldn’t even see the sky through his fears.”
When the colors choke his vision and make him stumble on the qualifying obstacle course, the Hunters turn Wanderer away, and force him to find a different path. He must choose between staying home, and watching his brother suffer, or leaving, following the orange strings, pulling him West, and putting his life on the line to kill Elgar and end their suffering once and for all.
Wanderer is such a compelling and relatable character, and I love how Faye works emotion into the magic system! I've been a fan of this series for years and I'm looking forward to the next installment :)
“Some days, he couldn’t even see the sky through his fears.”
When the colors choke his vision and make him stumble on the qualifying obstacle course, the Hunters turn Wanderer away, and force him to find a different path. He must choose between staying home, and watching his brother suffer, or leaving, following the orange strings, pulling him West, and putting his life on the line to kill Elgar and end their suffering once and for all.
Wanderer is such a compelling and relatable character, and I love how Faye works emotion into the magic system! I've been a fan of this series for years and I'm looking forward to the next installment :)
June 30, 2020
I'll definitely be coming back for more of the Terebinth Tree Chronicles! Colors of Fear left me wanting to know more about Wanderer and his world. The concept of the way he sees things was fascinating. And the relationship with his little brother? Heartwarming and heartbreaking at the same time.
If only short stories didn't have to be so...short. It ended just when I wanted it to keep going. But I'm encouraged by the fact that the story doesn't end there. I'm excited to check out the next one and have another glimpse into that world!
If only short stories didn't have to be so...short. It ended just when I wanted it to keep going. But I'm encouraged by the fact that the story doesn't end there. I'm excited to check out the next one and have another glimpse into that world!
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