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Convincing Arthur
A holiday in the country to indulge his wildest fantasies…
Arthur Barrington knows exactly what he wants. His old friend, Leopold Thornton, an overindulged son of a wealthy viscount with a reputation for vice and debauchery, couldn’t be less of a good candidate. Yet when Leopold extends an invitation to his country estate, Arthur agrees. Perhaps a holiday with the sinfully beautiful man will help him get over a recent breakup. Then he can return to his thriving London law practice and resume his quiet life.
Ten years ago, Leopold learned the hard way that patience doesn’t always have its rewards. Now that he has Arthur all to himself, he isn’t going to let a second opportunity pass him by. And he certainly isn’t above using pleasure to tempt Arthur into his bed.
Leopold has only a few days to open Arthur’s eyes to the possibility that he’s the man Arthur is looking for. That his love is genuine—and he’s worthy of Arthur’s heart.
Warning: Includes a gorgeous bad boy who’s been in love with a conservative solicitor for a decade. Indecent acts in a forest between two hot men. Angst. And expectations turned upside down.
(25,000 words)
Note: This is a previously published work. This second edition has been edited with minor changes. For readers who purchased the original edition, this second edition is not substantially different.
Arthur Barrington knows exactly what he wants. His old friend, Leopold Thornton, an overindulged son of a wealthy viscount with a reputation for vice and debauchery, couldn’t be less of a good candidate. Yet when Leopold extends an invitation to his country estate, Arthur agrees. Perhaps a holiday with the sinfully beautiful man will help him get over a recent breakup. Then he can return to his thriving London law practice and resume his quiet life.
Ten years ago, Leopold learned the hard way that patience doesn’t always have its rewards. Now that he has Arthur all to himself, he isn’t going to let a second opportunity pass him by. And he certainly isn’t above using pleasure to tempt Arthur into his bed.
Leopold has only a few days to open Arthur’s eyes to the possibility that he’s the man Arthur is looking for. That his love is genuine—and he’s worthy of Arthur’s heart.
Warning: Includes a gorgeous bad boy who’s been in love with a conservative solicitor for a decade. Indecent acts in a forest between two hot men. Angst. And expectations turned upside down.
(25,000 words)
Note: This is a previously published work. This second edition has been edited with minor changes. For readers who purchased the original edition, this second edition is not substantially different.
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First published July 21, 2009
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September 12, 2018
2.5
When you assume you make an ass out of you and me.
Not me! These two knuckleheads. They are woefully lacking in the communication skills department, but they make up for it in the sex department!
I'm not going to mince words I think this novella is confused about what it's supposed to be. How am I to rate a historical novella that's mostly sex with an outlandish HEA? The sex is hot and bountiful with rimming, felching, buttsex, in the woods... well, you get it. It happens often and it's pretty spine tingling, but the relationship development is lazy.
Arthur and Leopold met about a decade ago when they were 19. Evidently, Leopold fancied Arthur but was too shy? to approach him and missed his window. The implication put forth is that he spiraled into binge drinking and becoming a regular at all the local brothels because of said missed opportunity. That's a pretty big albatross to hang around someone's neck-'everything would've been bliss if you'd chosen me, but since you didn't I stayed foxed, spent all my free time at every gambling hell from London to Nottingham and when I wasn't there I was being buggered by every whore in the greater London area all in an effort to forget you, so if you leave... No pressure or anything.'
Leopold is ready to toss that torch he's been carrying for Arthur into the Thames and get his man! He's heard through the grapevine that Arthur's boyfriend has dumped him. So he invites him to his country estate for a holiday. And he literally pounces on him the moment he arrives. I'm surprised there weren't some watersports happening. Poor guy didn't even get a chance to use the loo!
They have wild, mind-blowing sex for a couple days with a pheasant hunt thrown in for good measure then there is a little angst driven melodrama which somehow rounds the block to arriving at an HEA? I could go into all the reasons why I find this difficult to swallow, but the bottom line is, I find this difficult to swallow.
I would've been happy with a cravat tied to the door to keep out the staff for "x" number of days, weeks, months while they go to town on each other. There is nothing wrong with stroke fic. No one expects fleshed out characters or relationship development, but you throw down an HEA and it's not OTT and meant to be super cheesy? I'm supposed to believe that recently dumped Arthur declares his forever love for a guy he's had sex with a handful of times after a couple days? My suspend reality rubber band laughed at me then smacked me in the face.
This is what's known as The Sex Fog when the sex is so good you mistake it for love. The problem is I'm not in The Sex Fog. So I give these dudes 6 months. Tops. Before they realize they have zippidy doo da in common.
Ordinarily, I enjoy Ava March and her style. She never skimps on the hotness, but everything else is bland except the cover which is scrumptious. There wasn't enough plot or historical references to sink my teeth into, so how to rate it? 2 hearts? 3 hearts? Confusing-just-should've-gone-for-stroke-fic hearts? Too bad we don't have a jpeg for that last one, so I guess I'll split the difference?
If you want a hot, quick historical read, this'll do. Maybe just let it flow over you though and not overthink it.
A review copy was provided in exchange for an honest review.
When you assume you make an ass out of you and me.
Not me! These two knuckleheads. They are woefully lacking in the communication skills department, but they make up for it in the sex department!
I'm not going to mince words I think this novella is confused about what it's supposed to be. How am I to rate a historical novella that's mostly sex with an outlandish HEA? The sex is hot and bountiful with rimming, felching, buttsex, in the woods... well, you get it. It happens often and it's pretty spine tingling, but the relationship development is lazy.
Arthur and Leopold met about a decade ago when they were 19. Evidently, Leopold fancied Arthur but was too shy? to approach him and missed his window. The implication put forth is that he spiraled into binge drinking and becoming a regular at all the local brothels because of said missed opportunity. That's a pretty big albatross to hang around someone's neck-'everything would've been bliss if you'd chosen me, but since you didn't I stayed foxed, spent all my free time at every gambling hell from London to Nottingham and when I wasn't there I was being buggered by every whore in the greater London area all in an effort to forget you, so if you leave... No pressure or anything.'
Leopold is ready to toss that torch he's been carrying for Arthur into the Thames and get his man! He's heard through the grapevine that Arthur's boyfriend has dumped him. So he invites him to his country estate for a holiday. And he literally pounces on him the moment he arrives. I'm surprised there weren't some watersports happening. Poor guy didn't even get a chance to use the loo!
They have wild, mind-blowing sex for a couple days with a pheasant hunt thrown in for good measure then there is a little angst driven melodrama which somehow rounds the block to arriving at an HEA? I could go into all the reasons why I find this difficult to swallow, but the bottom line is, I find this difficult to swallow.
I would've been happy with a cravat tied to the door to keep out the staff for "x" number of days, weeks, months while they go to town on each other. There is nothing wrong with stroke fic. No one expects fleshed out characters or relationship development, but you throw down an HEA and it's not OTT and meant to be super cheesy? I'm supposed to believe that recently dumped Arthur declares his forever love for a guy he's had sex with a handful of times after a couple days? My suspend reality rubber band laughed at me then smacked me in the face.
This is what's known as The Sex Fog when the sex is so good you mistake it for love. The problem is I'm not in The Sex Fog. So I give these dudes 6 months. Tops. Before they realize they have zippidy doo da in common.
Ordinarily, I enjoy Ava March and her style. She never skimps on the hotness, but everything else is bland except the cover which is scrumptious. There wasn't enough plot or historical references to sink my teeth into, so how to rate it? 2 hearts? 3 hearts? Confusing-just-should've-gone-for-stroke-fic hearts? Too bad we don't have a jpeg for that last one, so I guess I'll split the difference?
If you want a hot, quick historical read, this'll do. Maybe just let it flow over you though and not overthink it.
A review copy was provided in exchange for an honest review.
July 26, 2009
I’ve decided that I am going to join in Shayne’s “Let’s chain Ava March to her computer so she can write faster” bandwagon. I just read her latest book, Convincing Arthur, and I really liked it! As usual, her sexy heroes and the interesting story they told, made me lose all track of time. Before I knew it I had the book read in one sitting, and it was time for supper!
When Leopold Thornton (Thorn) and Arthur Barrington first met at the age of nineteen, both men wanted something more out of life. Arthur wanted a man who would he could spend the rest of his life with, and Thorn just wanted Arthur. Unfortunately the day Thorn decided to make his feelings known to his friend was the day Arthur started getting involved (discreetly of course) with an old school mate.
Thorn became determined to wait for Arthur to be free, so someday he can pledge his devotion to the unsuspecting Arthur. As the years go by, even though Thorn’s determination and feelings hasn’t changed for Arthur, Thorn has developed a bad reputation by not being discreet with his affairs, and going through a legion of lovers. He parties all night, he drinks too much and he is completely miserable not having Arthur in his life.
Ten years after Thorn and Arthur met, Thorn finds out that Arthur is no longer in a committed relationship. Knowing he must make his feelings for Arthur known, he invites Arthur to his country manor for a few days to reconnect as friends and to do some hunting. To Thorn’s surprise and delight, Arthur surprisingly accepts Thorns invitation and agrees to spend a few days at Thorn’s estate. Alone.
Arthur has been in a loveless relationship for the past ten years. After his lover left him unexpectedly, Arthur now realizes that he, himself was going through the motions with his previous lover, just so he could have someone to call his own and grow old with. Arthur becomes determined to one day find a man who will love him and want to be with him until they were both old and gray.
When Arthur accepted Thorns invitation to stay with him and have a short holiday, he suspects that Thorn wants more from him than to just rekindle their old friendship. In Arthur’s opinion, Thorn’s roguish reputation and his heavy drinking make him an unacceptable lover.
What Arthur doesn’t expect is the instant attraction and camaraderie he and Thorn have once they spend time together. Plus, Thorn seems determined to wedge his way into Arthur’s life and well guarded heart.
I really liked Arthur, but it was Thorn who stole my heart. His undying love and determination to have Arthur as his lifelong partner, made me feel compassion for him. I found myself hoping Arthur would take a chance on Thorn and the love he had for him.
Arthur himself is a noble man. I understood his hesitation to give Thorn a chance to win his heart, but I have to admit there were times I wanted Arthur to just stop being so stubborn, and give into Thorn and his obvious effort to win Arthur heart a chance.
In my opinion this is more of a HFN ending. There were some unresolved issues between them that I would love to see answered and worked out. I would also love to see Arthur maybe appreciate Thorn a little more than he did. Plus, the ending left me wanting more. So, I am hoping that there will be a sequel to Convincing Arthur because I really liked them and would love to see then with a very happy ending. Both Thorn and Arthur deserve it.
When Leopold Thornton (Thorn) and Arthur Barrington first met at the age of nineteen, both men wanted something more out of life. Arthur wanted a man who would he could spend the rest of his life with, and Thorn just wanted Arthur. Unfortunately the day Thorn decided to make his feelings known to his friend was the day Arthur started getting involved (discreetly of course) with an old school mate.
Thorn became determined to wait for Arthur to be free, so someday he can pledge his devotion to the unsuspecting Arthur. As the years go by, even though Thorn’s determination and feelings hasn’t changed for Arthur, Thorn has developed a bad reputation by not being discreet with his affairs, and going through a legion of lovers. He parties all night, he drinks too much and he is completely miserable not having Arthur in his life.
Ten years after Thorn and Arthur met, Thorn finds out that Arthur is no longer in a committed relationship. Knowing he must make his feelings for Arthur known, he invites Arthur to his country manor for a few days to reconnect as friends and to do some hunting. To Thorn’s surprise and delight, Arthur surprisingly accepts Thorns invitation and agrees to spend a few days at Thorn’s estate. Alone.
Arthur has been in a loveless relationship for the past ten years. After his lover left him unexpectedly, Arthur now realizes that he, himself was going through the motions with his previous lover, just so he could have someone to call his own and grow old with. Arthur becomes determined to one day find a man who will love him and want to be with him until they were both old and gray.
When Arthur accepted Thorns invitation to stay with him and have a short holiday, he suspects that Thorn wants more from him than to just rekindle their old friendship. In Arthur’s opinion, Thorn’s roguish reputation and his heavy drinking make him an unacceptable lover.
What Arthur doesn’t expect is the instant attraction and camaraderie he and Thorn have once they spend time together. Plus, Thorn seems determined to wedge his way into Arthur’s life and well guarded heart.
I really liked Arthur, but it was Thorn who stole my heart. His undying love and determination to have Arthur as his lifelong partner, made me feel compassion for him. I found myself hoping Arthur would take a chance on Thorn and the love he had for him.
Arthur himself is a noble man. I understood his hesitation to give Thorn a chance to win his heart, but I have to admit there were times I wanted Arthur to just stop being so stubborn, and give into Thorn and his obvious effort to win Arthur heart a chance.
In my opinion this is more of a HFN ending. There were some unresolved issues between them that I would love to see answered and worked out. I would also love to see Arthur maybe appreciate Thorn a little more than he did. Plus, the ending left me wanting more. So, I am hoping that there will be a sequel to Convincing Arthur because I really liked them and would love to see then with a very happy ending. Both Thorn and Arthur deserve it.
March 22, 2013
Read a bit more, but still couldn't finish.
Should be called "(Thinking About Things and Fucking) Arthur."
I am sad.
Should be called "(Thinking About Things and Fucking) Arthur."
I am sad.
April 6, 2016
~3.5~
I read the first editions of Convincing Arthur and Convincing Leopold a couple years back. Most recently, I read Convincing the Secretary (the third book in this series to be published March 2016), and I liked it so much, I reread the second editions of the first two books, which, as far as I can tell, don’t contain any significant content changes (although the new covers are hella sexy!).
Leopold has been in love with Arthur for a decade, but Arthur, ever loyal and steady, was with another man. When that man, who's a cheating cad, suddenly decides to marry a woman, Arthur is left single.
Leopold pounces on the opportunity to be with Arthur. He invites Arthur to his country home and proceeds to seduce him with his skillful tongue and hands. And dick.
Arthur doesn’t think Leopold, known to frequent brothels and gambling hells, can change his wicked ways. Even after Arthur gives in to the physical attraction, he keeps an emotional distance from Leopold, which was rather cruel.
Leopold does all the work, while Arthur discounts him over and over again. The final scene has Arthur finally relenting, but I still don't think Arthur was fully convinced.
This is a very steamy read with a HFN ending.
Convincing Arthur can be read as a standalone, although it’s really half a book. Convincing Leopold, which should really be called Convincing Arthur, Part Two, continues Arthur and Leopold's story and ends with a HEA.
I read the first editions of Convincing Arthur and Convincing Leopold a couple years back. Most recently, I read Convincing the Secretary (the third book in this series to be published March 2016), and I liked it so much, I reread the second editions of the first two books, which, as far as I can tell, don’t contain any significant content changes (although the new covers are hella sexy!).
Leopold has been in love with Arthur for a decade, but Arthur, ever loyal and steady, was with another man. When that man, who's a cheating cad, suddenly decides to marry a woman, Arthur is left single.
Leopold pounces on the opportunity to be with Arthur. He invites Arthur to his country home and proceeds to seduce him with his skillful tongue and hands. And dick.
Arthur doesn’t think Leopold, known to frequent brothels and gambling hells, can change his wicked ways. Even after Arthur gives in to the physical attraction, he keeps an emotional distance from Leopold, which was rather cruel.
Leopold does all the work, while Arthur discounts him over and over again. The final scene has Arthur finally relenting, but I still don't think Arthur was fully convinced.
This is a very steamy read with a HFN ending.
Convincing Arthur can be read as a standalone, although it’s really half a book. Convincing Leopold, which should really be called Convincing Arthur, Part Two, continues Arthur and Leopold's story and ends with a HEA.
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February 12, 20104.25Stars
Leopold Thornton has waited ten years for this moment, ten years for the man of his dreams, ten years to simmer and wait for his time – now that it was upon him he knew he cannot waste time on niceties.
The man of the moment, of this deep and long standing yearning is solicitor Mr. Arthur Barrington and he has arrived at Leopold’s country estate with alot of trepidation. From every thing rumoured and known about Leopold he was as easy as they come and he is certainly not the soul of discretion and that was the one thing that was most important to Arthur, irrespective of how attracted he was to the man.
Leopold waste no time in making his move and before Arthur knew what was happening he is being serviced by the best and once his head has stopped spinning he finds himself exposed to another side of Leopold and he was despite his best intention liking what he was seeing.
As giving as Leopold was and as perfect as he feels, Arthur knows he cannot go any further with Leopold and it is for the obvious reasons of propriety and discretion – Arthur however has no idea how much this man he wants to call friend will do and give up just for him.
I have had this book for awhile now and I am not proud to say I have been pushing it back on the hard drive every time it comes within viewing distance. This week I took the bull by the horn and clicked and it was a spectacular journey. The reason for pushing it back is merely the fact that it is a historical – I have not read a historical in more years than I care to remember.
Positive
There is a freshness to a genre when you have not read it for a while and CONVINCING ARTHUR was stunning in it’s detail and wording. Where else but a historical would you find words like “Iron grey”, “forwent” and “buggered”, yeah buggered and it meant exactly what it sounds like…
The portags were swoon worthy material – Arthur for the fact that he epitomises what a historically correct hero would be like, strong, athletically built, have a strong moral code to himself and of course has the prerequisite “gone bad relationship” in his past.
Leopold was a surprise, from the moment the book opens you know this is not a strong lad, the more his character is developed I not only wanted to shelter him myself – but I was only so willing to take onboard his dragons.
There was clear and present smut riddled within these pages. Leopold was a slut, there is not two ways about it. He had his justification for why he did the things he did. For me I was only glad he had the know how to go after Arthur with blinkers on – because Arthur was certainly not going to break ranks and take the road less travelled.
The abruptness of this book lends itself heavily to the plan that Leopold had. I wont say “a short read” as short does not do justice to what Leopold had planned. He knew what he wanted, he struck without no warning and he was like a puppy at how happy the simplest things made him.
The emotional upheaval was spot on, Ms. March got me involved in this want and need tale. I wanted Leopold to have his utmost wish and needed to knock Arthur right over the head to get his act together and take a chance.
One of the reasons why I stopped reading historicals awhile ago was due to the fact that most authors either are never consistent to the period they are writing about or they fall down on little details on the period. Ms. March got it in one. The clothing, the house, the staff even simple detail as lube – it was mentioned by the correct term in the book and to enhance this she went on to mention little detail about that scene that make the book all that more credible.
Even with all the other positives I must say I like Ms. March’s voice in this book – it’s not shrouded in the words the way most historicals are, it give the necessary detail, cut to the chance and amp up the mood to make sure I was heavily involved in Leopold’s and Arthur’s life.
Niggles
This is not a “with this ring I these wed sort of book” – the book ends at quite a pivotal point, the point where all the compromises needs to be made, where all the tears will be shed and I saw none of that so I would put this in the happy for now category.
While I love the story that was presented to me, I hope Ms. march revisit these characters as I felt Arthur’s character was written to “not be liked” and I can see so much more to him than the arrogant, workaholic who is overly concern with propriety person that we get in CONVINVING AUTHUR. That said Leopold in this book is “easy” and under the best light would only have his looks and his fathers wealth going for him, however he was written to be loved and I did love him – I felt this book was Leopold’s books and I would love for a more appreciative and softer side of Arthur to be seen if and when Ms. March does a follow up… “HINT”
Bottom Line
CONVINVING AUTHUR is a surprising good books that literally knocked my sock off. With characters that even if you didn’t love them or liked them for that matter was so well presented that I had to sympathise with their cause and root for them despite the challenges I see ahead for them.
Leopold Thornton has waited ten years for this moment, ten years for the man of his dreams, ten years to simmer and wait for his time – now that it was upon him he knew he cannot waste time on niceties.
The man of the moment, of this deep and long standing yearning is solicitor Mr. Arthur Barrington and he has arrived at Leopold’s country estate with alot of trepidation. From every thing rumoured and known about Leopold he was as easy as they come and he is certainly not the soul of discretion and that was the one thing that was most important to Arthur, irrespective of how attracted he was to the man.
Leopold waste no time in making his move and before Arthur knew what was happening he is being serviced by the best and once his head has stopped spinning he finds himself exposed to another side of Leopold and he was despite his best intention liking what he was seeing.
As giving as Leopold was and as perfect as he feels, Arthur knows he cannot go any further with Leopold and it is for the obvious reasons of propriety and discretion – Arthur however has no idea how much this man he wants to call friend will do and give up just for him.
I have had this book for awhile now and I am not proud to say I have been pushing it back on the hard drive every time it comes within viewing distance. This week I took the bull by the horn and clicked and it was a spectacular journey. The reason for pushing it back is merely the fact that it is a historical – I have not read a historical in more years than I care to remember.
Positive
There is a freshness to a genre when you have not read it for a while and CONVINCING ARTHUR was stunning in it’s detail and wording. Where else but a historical would you find words like “Iron grey”, “forwent” and “buggered”, yeah buggered and it meant exactly what it sounds like…
The portags were swoon worthy material – Arthur for the fact that he epitomises what a historically correct hero would be like, strong, athletically built, have a strong moral code to himself and of course has the prerequisite “gone bad relationship” in his past.
Leopold was a surprise, from the moment the book opens you know this is not a strong lad, the more his character is developed I not only wanted to shelter him myself – but I was only so willing to take onboard his dragons.
There was clear and present smut riddled within these pages. Leopold was a slut, there is not two ways about it. He had his justification for why he did the things he did. For me I was only glad he had the know how to go after Arthur with blinkers on – because Arthur was certainly not going to break ranks and take the road less travelled.
The abruptness of this book lends itself heavily to the plan that Leopold had. I wont say “a short read” as short does not do justice to what Leopold had planned. He knew what he wanted, he struck without no warning and he was like a puppy at how happy the simplest things made him.
The emotional upheaval was spot on, Ms. March got me involved in this want and need tale. I wanted Leopold to have his utmost wish and needed to knock Arthur right over the head to get his act together and take a chance.
One of the reasons why I stopped reading historicals awhile ago was due to the fact that most authors either are never consistent to the period they are writing about or they fall down on little details on the period. Ms. March got it in one. The clothing, the house, the staff even simple detail as lube – it was mentioned by the correct term in the book and to enhance this she went on to mention little detail about that scene that make the book all that more credible.
Even with all the other positives I must say I like Ms. March’s voice in this book – it’s not shrouded in the words the way most historicals are, it give the necessary detail, cut to the chance and amp up the mood to make sure I was heavily involved in Leopold’s and Arthur’s life.
Niggles
This is not a “with this ring I these wed sort of book” – the book ends at quite a pivotal point, the point where all the compromises needs to be made, where all the tears will be shed and I saw none of that so I would put this in the happy for now category.
While I love the story that was presented to me, I hope Ms. march revisit these characters as I felt Arthur’s character was written to “not be liked” and I can see so much more to him than the arrogant, workaholic who is overly concern with propriety person that we get in CONVINVING AUTHUR. That said Leopold in this book is “easy” and under the best light would only have his looks and his fathers wealth going for him, however he was written to be loved and I did love him – I felt this book was Leopold’s books and I would love for a more appreciative and softer side of Arthur to be seen if and when Ms. March does a follow up… “HINT”
Bottom Line
CONVINVING AUTHUR is a surprising good books that literally knocked my sock off. With characters that even if you didn’t love them or liked them for that matter was so well presented that I had to sympathise with their cause and root for them despite the challenges I see ahead for them.
January 3, 2016
Review for the second edition.
**3.25 stars**
Convincing Arthur was about....well, Convincing Arthur. It's short, light and very very steamy.
Leopold has been in love with Arthur for the past decade, but he never managed to make his feelings known. Unable to find love in any other man, he develops a rather bad reputation. He frequents brothels, he drinks too much and is totally indiscreet about his affairs. But now he gets a second chance. All he has to do is Convince Arthur.
Arthur just got out of a serious relationship. He is looking for a discreet and serious man who isn't afraid of commitment. But first, he decides he should have some fun, and his old friend, Leopold is the man for it.
Ok, Arthur irritated me a lot. He was too standoffish, too judgemental and too quick to jump to conclusions. Also, he could be a bit of a prick.
Leopold: “I’m good enough to fuck, but that’s all. Is that what you’re telling me?”
Me:"Noooo....that's not what he means. He can't be that much of an asshole.
Arthur: "Yes".
But both characters have redeeming qualities; Arthur might be uptight, but he's a very giving lover. And I loved how fierce and assertive Leopold got, when he thought he was losing his chance with Arthur.
There is too much telling here, instead of showing. Arthur and Leopold think things to death, and when they 're not thinking they 're having sex.
I consider the ending to be a HFN and I wanted to see more relationship development. BUT, there is a sequel, which I'm definately going to read soon, so I expect to find all the things that I missed here.
*Also posted on Gay Book Reviews.*
October 30, 2016
Muy muy hot, pero la historia podría haber dado bastante más de sí.
July 16, 2015
This sums it all:
Straight to the point, let's not waste time.
Just the thing I was looking for at the moment, so I enjoyed it a lot.
The MC were VERY cute in the end.
It's short, cute and hot.
Straight to the point, let's not waste time.
Just the thing I was looking for at the moment, so I enjoyed it a lot.
The MC were VERY cute in the end.
It's short, cute and hot.
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August 3, 2009If Leopold was a woman, it would have been the classical heroine who no romance author chooses as main character. Usually a widow, or a fallen woman, in the Regency romance they are friends, mistress (usually abandoned at the beginning of the story), housekeeper. Some daring romance authors made them the main heroine, but seldom, and usually with no much success. And so that Ava March decided to write the story of a corresponding male version it's quite original, and daring as well. In the few M/M historical romance you can find around, the men are strong and dominant figures, full of sense of honor, or innocent young boys, the male version of the damsel in distress. If the man is a rake, it's probably due to a poor childhood, to a lack of love that made him aloof.
Leopold instead is "weak" to the pleasure of flesh since he is basically easy to fall into temptation. At 19 years old, when he was starting to realize that he preferred men, he fell in love with Arthur, the nephew of his father's solicitor. While Leopold was a noble man, the fourth son of a Viscount, Arthur, even if middle class and wealthy, was on a different level. To Leopold that didn't matter, but he was really young, and as I said, not so strong, neither then. He let pass too much time to make clear his feelings with Arthur, and the man chose another. Falling in despair, Leopold spent the following ten years drinking stupor his pain, and sharing his favors with everyone was willing. Not a good way to prove to Arthur that he did the wrong choice.
Where Leopold could care less of the society, his father's title and money protecting him, Arthur has to be discreet; his position depends from his job, and his job from his reputation. A relationship with a discreet man, albeit cold, it's better than an hot affair with a young man apparently unable to be low profile. But even if sure, the relationship is also unsatisfying, and when it ends, for natural death, Arthur is tempted to accept an invite for a brief stay at Leopold's country home. Leopold's intentions are clear, and Arthur is willing to surrender, only for few days.
While Arthur is the hero you are expecting from a man on man Regency romance, as I said, it's Leopold who wins my sympathy. Leopold is not a strong man, without Arthur's love he is no one, not "man" enough to resolve his self-confidence issues by himself. Basically Leopold is a spoiled child, as fourth male child, his father doesn't expect to much from him, but loving him, he gave everything to his child. Not having the bear his father's expectation, Leopold is free to live his life as he wants, but on the other hand, he has no real purpose. I don't feel as Leopold charges of something his father, he is a beloved child, and he expects to be loved. When Arthur doesn't do that by himself, Leopold his willing to help him to take the right decision, to let him taste what he is missing. From the unconditionally love of his father, Leopold wants to pass to the unconditionally love of Arthur: it's only natural, why someone shouldn't love him?
Said like that, it could seem that Leopold isn't a nice character, and it's absolutely wrong. Ava March describes him in a way that the reader is all for Leopold, and when Arthur, with right, states his perplexity, the reader only thinks that he is not right with Leopold, that he should be more flexible and understanding. Leopold is an easy man to love (no pun intended).
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Leopold instead is "weak" to the pleasure of flesh since he is basically easy to fall into temptation. At 19 years old, when he was starting to realize that he preferred men, he fell in love with Arthur, the nephew of his father's solicitor. While Leopold was a noble man, the fourth son of a Viscount, Arthur, even if middle class and wealthy, was on a different level. To Leopold that didn't matter, but he was really young, and as I said, not so strong, neither then. He let pass too much time to make clear his feelings with Arthur, and the man chose another. Falling in despair, Leopold spent the following ten years drinking stupor his pain, and sharing his favors with everyone was willing. Not a good way to prove to Arthur that he did the wrong choice.
Where Leopold could care less of the society, his father's title and money protecting him, Arthur has to be discreet; his position depends from his job, and his job from his reputation. A relationship with a discreet man, albeit cold, it's better than an hot affair with a young man apparently unable to be low profile. But even if sure, the relationship is also unsatisfying, and when it ends, for natural death, Arthur is tempted to accept an invite for a brief stay at Leopold's country home. Leopold's intentions are clear, and Arthur is willing to surrender, only for few days.
While Arthur is the hero you are expecting from a man on man Regency romance, as I said, it's Leopold who wins my sympathy. Leopold is not a strong man, without Arthur's love he is no one, not "man" enough to resolve his self-confidence issues by himself. Basically Leopold is a spoiled child, as fourth male child, his father doesn't expect to much from him, but loving him, he gave everything to his child. Not having the bear his father's expectation, Leopold is free to live his life as he wants, but on the other hand, he has no real purpose. I don't feel as Leopold charges of something his father, he is a beloved child, and he expects to be loved. When Arthur doesn't do that by himself, Leopold his willing to help him to take the right decision, to let him taste what he is missing. From the unconditionally love of his father, Leopold wants to pass to the unconditionally love of Arthur: it's only natural, why someone shouldn't love him?
Said like that, it could seem that Leopold isn't a nice character, and it's absolutely wrong. Ava March describes him in a way that the reader is all for Leopold, and when Arthur, with right, states his perplexity, the reader only thinks that he is not right with Leopold, that he should be more flexible and understanding. Leopold is an easy man to love (no pun intended).
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November 4, 2012
Not bad. Unfortunately, though, for me it has several flaws.
A few examples:
1. We are never given any reasons why Leopold fell in love with Arthur in the first place.
2. Although there is no insta-love on Leopold's part (as explained in the story, he's been in love with Arthur for 10 years), Arthur is swearing life-long fealty after just two days together in the country. Uh-huh.
3. The story is too short to develop anything adequately, much less give enough time to a developing love and trust.
4. Oh, trust -- that's another thing -- Arthur is never given any convincing reason why he should trust Leopold's discretion or fidelity (yes, Leopold SAYS he loves Arthur and all that, but really -- the guy's been a dedicated slut and drunkard for 10 years, why in the world would anybody believe him based on just 2 days close acquaintance??). Nonetheless, Arthur just all of a sudden decides to believe everything Leopold says. Really?? Arthur's a LAWYER, fercrissake. Surely he knows better than to hand out blind trust like that??
So those are the main problems for me. I'll be reading the sequel to see if any of my concerns are addressed there!
A few examples:
1. We are never given any reasons why Leopold fell in love with Arthur in the first place.
2. Although there is no insta-love on Leopold's part (as explained in the story, he's been in love with Arthur for 10 years), Arthur is swearing life-long fealty after just two days together in the country. Uh-huh.
3. The story is too short to develop anything adequately, much less give enough time to a developing love and trust.
4. Oh, trust -- that's another thing -- Arthur is never given any convincing reason why he should trust Leopold's discretion or fidelity (yes, Leopold SAYS he loves Arthur and all that, but really -- the guy's been a dedicated slut and drunkard for 10 years, why in the world would anybody believe him based on just 2 days close acquaintance??). Nonetheless, Arthur just all of a sudden decides to believe everything Leopold says. Really?? Arthur's a LAWYER, fercrissake. Surely he knows better than to hand out blind trust like that??
So those are the main problems for me. I'll be reading the sequel to see if any of my concerns are addressed there!
February 3, 2016
Review originally posted on The Book Adventures of Annelise Lestrange :)
The Story
Arthur Barrington knew exactly what awaited for him when he accepted Leopold’s invitation for a short holiday at his friend’s country house in Yorkshire: pleasure beyond anything he knew and total chances of forgetting about his shattered heart. Recently out of a 10-years-long relationship, Arthur just needs to have a good time before search for another discreet gentleman, one willing to be committed, loyal and in love with him.
Leopold Thornton knew exactly what awaited him when he invited Arthur for a short holiday at his country house in Yorkshire: a chance to finally prove himself worthy of the man he has been in love with for the past ten years. Leopold knew he had to take it slow and that his ill and well-built reputation as the biggest whore in London would be held against him, but Leopold couldn’t stand to witness Arthur’s heartache any longer. Or to bear his own either.
Arthur and Leopold’s chemistry is undeniable and soon enough all it takes for both gentlemen to disrupt themselves in feverish desire is to be on each other’s company. Arthur is having the time of his life in Leopold’s bed and Leopold is on the fight with everything he has to win Arthur’s heart.
The only problem is that their life roles are switched. Can Leopold cure Arthur’s heartache without acquiring one of his own?
The Analysis
Just remembering that those were my impressions and opinion as reader :)
To be honest, I lost track of how many times I have read this book. Despite being normally a hardcore fan of Ava’s work, Leopold also happens to be one of my Top Males from her. Yup, a lot of re-reads through the years since I’m 17 :) Just like my 16-year-old face, my favoritism still is the same as back then.
Convincing Arthur has almost all the elements that I most adore in a book: a gay couple, a historical setting in 19th century England, hot non-vulgar sex scenes, deep and developed characters, a happy ending and third person styled narrator with switching points of viewand Ava March’s flawless writing style. It would be ridiculous if I gave it any less than five stars.
As we’ll be talking about a literary piece of art and perfection, all impartiality will be left behind.
As my spoilerish summary indicated, the narrative style is third person and we get to be inside both Leopold and Arthur’s heads. This is my favorite style, as it gives the reader a full picture of what is happening. It works very well for March, as there is not a mystery element to the book. The whole feeling of the book leads the reader to guess the outcome of the romance, but not on a bothersome level. Just like a regular sugared historical romance, we wonder how the couple will manage to stay together. The details are the delight, haha!
As this is the first volume in a series, I think it doesn’t make sense to talk about lose ends :)
The plot is very simple with minor twists, but very well executed. Regency boy reconnects with wealthier regency boy, they have sex and now must decide whether both parts are happy in continuing the relationship or if it was indeed a one-time deal. The key is how the couple will communicated and this is the turning point on their relationship, what measures their success or failure. It is so real that my heart clenches: if there is no communication, there is no relationship.
One of the things that I like the most about March’s works is that I notice something different each time that I read her books. There is always something new that I need to add on my mental database about the portrayed couple. A line of thinking, a shed word, body responses to one another. It is just magical, haha!
Then, there are the characters.
My heart is Leopold’s and I will stand by him until the end of the days, but Arthur is also an incredible character. They are two men trying to make a completely forbidden relationship to work when all odds are against them. Besides being really romantic, it is sensible and beautiful. Their struggles are daily just like mine or yours and the reader is involved on their consciousness in such a way that we just want to help them to understand each other. We want to tell them what they think of themselves and we want to force them to talk, to clear things up.
Leopold is beautiful, rich, funny, smart, loyal and skillful ~ if you catch my drift ~, but he bares several insecurities and a particular condition that will be more apparent and discussed on the second book. Arthur is the boy next door, dutiful and hardworking, but he dreads the idea of being utterly alone in the world, having the need of sharing his life with someone – actually, anyone that will have him on his terms, as we soon learn in the begging of the book. They are perfect on both qualities and flaws. Both were lacking individuals before the holiday in Yorkishire. Together, they help each other to become better people. Isn’t this beautiful?
Honestly, I can’t with myself. It’s too much love for only one person, haha!
A strong and ever present element in March’s books are the sex scenes. They are hot, explicit and dashing. You see, March has this gift that allows her to portray desire in a way that leads her readers into believing that the involved couple are in heaven while having sex. The sexual need of the partners is strong and restless and there’s nothing they’d rather do than be there, on that second, sharing their bodies with each other. This bound ensures high quality and well written scenes and vulgarity-free desire. All sex scenes are justified and helpful into building the relationship. They’re not there for mere appreciation of the moment, to put I mildly ;) And I love March for being capable of this.
Bonus point: 19th century London on March’s hands. You feel like you are walking London’s streets along Leopold and Arthur, as if you know all the directions they need to take to move around and reach their destinations. It’s not just a whatever scenario, it is alive and pulsing behind all the drama and romance <3
Overall, I don’t care if it is a homosexual romance, I think everybody should read Ava March’s books because she is that awesome. #justsaying
Thank you for indulging my fangirling and congrats for finishing this review!
The Story
Arthur Barrington knew exactly what awaited for him when he accepted Leopold’s invitation for a short holiday at his friend’s country house in Yorkshire: pleasure beyond anything he knew and total chances of forgetting about his shattered heart. Recently out of a 10-years-long relationship, Arthur just needs to have a good time before search for another discreet gentleman, one willing to be committed, loyal and in love with him.
Leopold Thornton knew exactly what awaited him when he invited Arthur for a short holiday at his country house in Yorkshire: a chance to finally prove himself worthy of the man he has been in love with for the past ten years. Leopold knew he had to take it slow and that his ill and well-built reputation as the biggest whore in London would be held against him, but Leopold couldn’t stand to witness Arthur’s heartache any longer. Or to bear his own either.
Arthur and Leopold’s chemistry is undeniable and soon enough all it takes for both gentlemen to disrupt themselves in feverish desire is to be on each other’s company. Arthur is having the time of his life in Leopold’s bed and Leopold is on the fight with everything he has to win Arthur’s heart.
The only problem is that their life roles are switched. Can Leopold cure Arthur’s heartache without acquiring one of his own?
The Analysis
Just remembering that those were my impressions and opinion as reader :)
To be honest, I lost track of how many times I have read this book. Despite being normally a hardcore fan of Ava’s work, Leopold also happens to be one of my Top Males from her. Yup, a lot of re-reads through the years since I’m 17 :) Just like my 16-year-old face, my favoritism still is the same as back then.
Convincing Arthur has almost all the elements that I most adore in a book: a gay couple, a historical setting in 19th century England, hot non-vulgar sex scenes, deep and developed characters, a happy ending and third person styled narrator with switching points of view
As we’ll be talking about a literary piece of art and perfection, all impartiality will be left behind.
As my spoilerish summary indicated, the narrative style is third person and we get to be inside both Leopold and Arthur’s heads. This is my favorite style, as it gives the reader a full picture of what is happening. It works very well for March, as there is not a mystery element to the book. The whole feeling of the book leads the reader to guess the outcome of the romance, but not on a bothersome level. Just like a regular sugared historical romance, we wonder how the couple will manage to stay together. The details are the delight, haha!
As this is the first volume in a series, I think it doesn’t make sense to talk about lose ends :)
The plot is very simple with minor twists, but very well executed. Regency boy reconnects with wealthier regency boy, they have sex and now must decide whether both parts are happy in continuing the relationship or if it was indeed a one-time deal. The key is how the couple will communicated and this is the turning point on their relationship, what measures their success or failure. It is so real that my heart clenches: if there is no communication, there is no relationship.
One of the things that I like the most about March’s works is that I notice something different each time that I read her books. There is always something new that I need to add on my mental database about the portrayed couple. A line of thinking, a shed word, body responses to one another. It is just magical, haha!
Then, there are the characters.
My heart is Leopold’s and I will stand by him until the end of the days, but Arthur is also an incredible character. They are two men trying to make a completely forbidden relationship to work when all odds are against them. Besides being really romantic, it is sensible and beautiful. Their struggles are daily just like mine or yours and the reader is involved on their consciousness in such a way that we just want to help them to understand each other. We want to tell them what they think of themselves and we want to force them to talk, to clear things up.
Leopold is beautiful, rich, funny, smart, loyal and skillful ~ if you catch my drift ~, but he bares several insecurities and a particular condition that will be more apparent and discussed on the second book. Arthur is the boy next door, dutiful and hardworking, but he dreads the idea of being utterly alone in the world, having the need of sharing his life with someone – actually, anyone that will have him on his terms, as we soon learn in the begging of the book. They are perfect on both qualities and flaws. Both were lacking individuals before the holiday in Yorkishire. Together, they help each other to become better people. Isn’t this beautiful?
Honestly, I can’t with myself. It’s too much love for only one person, haha!
A strong and ever present element in March’s books are the sex scenes. They are hot, explicit and dashing. You see, March has this gift that allows her to portray desire in a way that leads her readers into believing that the involved couple are in heaven while having sex. The sexual need of the partners is strong and restless and there’s nothing they’d rather do than be there, on that second, sharing their bodies with each other. This bound ensures high quality and well written scenes and vulgarity-free desire. All sex scenes are justified and helpful into building the relationship. They’re not there for mere appreciation of the moment, to put I mildly ;) And I love March for being capable of this.
Bonus point: 19th century London on March’s hands. You feel like you are walking London’s streets along Leopold and Arthur, as if you know all the directions they need to take to move around and reach their destinations. It’s not just a whatever scenario, it is alive and pulsing behind all the drama and romance <3
Overall, I don’t care if it is a homosexual romance, I think everybody should read Ava March’s books because she is that awesome. #justsaying
Thank you for indulging my fangirling and congrats for finishing this review!
December 22, 2015
Review for the 2nd Edition
3.5 stars
Ten years ago, Leopold Thornton missed his chance to tell his friend Arthur Barrington how he felt. Trying to forget Arthur, Leopold practically drowns his sorrow by building up his reputation as notorious rake, whose dalliances are not limited to the female gender. Now, after Arthur and his lover separated, Leopold plans to convince Arthur to finally give him a chance, and invites the solicitor to come to his house at Yorkshire...
I haven't read the original edition of this short novella, so I wouldn't know what changes that have been made. To be honest, I wasn't impressed with the first third quarter of the book. Since the book opened immediately to the present time, as Leopold waiting for Arthur to arrive at Ramsey House, I missed the relationship built up. So Leopold has been keeping a deep feeling for Arthur for the past ten years? But I didn't feel that, you see? I couldn't really understand how and why Leopold falling for Arthur. I didn't feel their friendship ten years ago.
Then I wasn't in empathy for his plan to convince Arthur is by pleasure of the flesh. I have never been a believer of that sex would be the answer to long lasting companionship and relationship. Maybe it is because of my asexuality. Maybe it is because of the Indonesian (Asian) culture that is not very sexual society (at least in public). But could you really stay with your partner only for the sex? I think I skimmed this book after the third sex scenes. If I am a judge and jury of this relationship, Leopold will not win his case.
... until the last two chapters, where Leopold finally stripped his heart bare to win Arthur's heart once and for all. Those two chapters were like punches to my gut, it was emotionally raw and painfully honest. I admit that I choked up a little bit at that moment *sniff*. It was the best part of this story for me, and rest assured I will be there for the follow-up.
The ARC is generously provided by the author for an exchange of fair and honest review. No high rating is required for any ARC received.
3.5 stars
Ten years ago, Leopold Thornton missed his chance to tell his friend Arthur Barrington how he felt. Trying to forget Arthur, Leopold practically drowns his sorrow by building up his reputation as notorious rake, whose dalliances are not limited to the female gender. Now, after Arthur and his lover separated, Leopold plans to convince Arthur to finally give him a chance, and invites the solicitor to come to his house at Yorkshire...
I haven't read the original edition of this short novella, so I wouldn't know what changes that have been made. To be honest, I wasn't impressed with the first third quarter of the book. Since the book opened immediately to the present time, as Leopold waiting for Arthur to arrive at Ramsey House, I missed the relationship built up. So Leopold has been keeping a deep feeling for Arthur for the past ten years? But I didn't feel that, you see? I couldn't really understand how and why Leopold falling for Arthur. I didn't feel their friendship ten years ago.
Then I wasn't in empathy for his plan to convince Arthur is by pleasure of the flesh. I have never been a believer of that sex would be the answer to long lasting companionship and relationship. Maybe it is because of my asexuality. Maybe it is because of the Indonesian (Asian) culture that is not very sexual society (at least in public). But could you really stay with your partner only for the sex? I think I skimmed this book after the third sex scenes. If I am a judge and jury of this relationship, Leopold will not win his case.
... until the last two chapters, where Leopold finally stripped his heart bare to win Arthur's heart once and for all. Those two chapters were like punches to my gut, it was emotionally raw and painfully honest. I admit that I choked up a little bit at that moment *sniff*. It was the best part of this story for me, and rest assured I will be there for the follow-up.
The ARC is generously provided by the author for an exchange of fair and honest review. No high rating is required for any ARC received.
October 12, 2009
Oh my heavens! This story had me so emotionally involved that I was in tears throughout most of the last half. Ava March has created a story that I would happily, very happily, read again and again... and again. The manner in which she introduced us to the shared past between Arthur and Leopold was smoothly done and detailed enough but not so much that we would lose focus on the here and now. The cast of characters was small, but all the more telling for that.
Leopold Thornton is so much more than his reputation and his past would suggest and the reason for both is his unrequited love for Arthur Barrington. My heart broke for the years of Thornton's pain and yet rejoiced that he had another chance at love with the only one he's ever had such feelings for.
And I loved that Thornton continued, over and over, to surprise Arthur; Arthur thought that he knew all about Leopold ~ the gossip and rumours about Thornton were fairly explicit ~ but really, it was a mask, a panacaea.
Arthur, well I liked him too. I felt so much for Thornton, but Arthur had longings and dreams unrealised as well; but the heart of the story was definitely with Thornton... and I loved every second, every choked breath, every tear of it.
And even though the end was not cut-and-dried ~ and that usually leaves me a tad dissatisfied ~ I had not one problem with it. It worked for the story and for the times... but oh would I ever love to see more of Thorn and Arthur... yes, indeedy!
And even though the end was not cut-and-dried ~ and that usually leaves me a tad dissatisfied ~ I had not one problem with it. It worked for the story and for the times... but oh would I ever love to see more of Thorn and Arthur... yes, indeedy!
BTW, I'm off to buy the rest of Ava's books... wow!
Leopold Thornton is so much more than his reputation and his past would suggest and the reason for both is his unrequited love for Arthur Barrington. My heart broke for the years of Thornton's pain and yet rejoiced that he had another chance at love with the only one he's ever had such feelings for.
And I loved that Thornton continued, over and over, to surprise Arthur; Arthur thought that he knew all about Leopold ~ the gossip and rumours about Thornton were fairly explicit ~ but really, it was a mask, a panacaea.
Arthur, well I liked him too. I felt so much for Thornton, but Arthur had longings and dreams unrealised as well; but the heart of the story was definitely with Thornton... and I loved every second, every choked breath, every tear of it.
And even though the end was not cut-and-dried ~ and that usually leaves me a tad dissatisfied ~ I had not one problem with it. It worked for the story and for the times... but oh would I ever love to see more of Thorn and Arthur... yes, indeedy!
And even though the end was not cut-and-dried ~ and that usually leaves me a tad dissatisfied ~ I had not one problem with it. It worked for the story and for the times... but oh would I ever love to see more of Thorn and Arthur... yes, indeedy!
BTW, I'm off to buy the rest of Ava's books... wow!
March 29, 2011
01/18/13: Revised rating after a couple of years of reading m/m: from 5 to 4.
What love can do to you! The love you were denied can lead you to a life of vice that can make you lose the same and only love you've ever wanted. This is what happens to the wealthy and handsome Leopold. On the night he decided to declare his love to his friend Arthur, he found out that Arthur had committed himself to another man. Not being able to forget Arthur, Leopold spends his life in endless and meaningless encounters, in drinking and gambling. Ten years later Arthur's relationship is over and Leopold finds the courage to invite the serious and heartbroken Arthur to his country home to convince him that Leopold is the right man.
There are some big misunderstandings in this story, but they work beautifully. You can really feel Leopold's love for the other man. It's heartbreaking. Arthur is maybe too uptight, but he is reserved, he's been hurt by his lover and he can't see the things that could make him realize that Leopold is in love with him. The difference in their social status is an obstacle too, especially because Arthur can't afford to let rumors about his sexuality spread around. Arthur is a simple man, who wants a real relationship, someone to spend his time and life with. There's also something more in Arthur and Leopold can bring this stronger side to life when they make love. They are great together.
It's a short story, but it's full of romantic moments and it was a delight to read.
What love can do to you! The love you were denied can lead you to a life of vice that can make you lose the same and only love you've ever wanted. This is what happens to the wealthy and handsome Leopold. On the night he decided to declare his love to his friend Arthur, he found out that Arthur had committed himself to another man. Not being able to forget Arthur, Leopold spends his life in endless and meaningless encounters, in drinking and gambling. Ten years later Arthur's relationship is over and Leopold finds the courage to invite the serious and heartbroken Arthur to his country home to convince him that Leopold is the right man.
There are some big misunderstandings in this story, but they work beautifully. You can really feel Leopold's love for the other man. It's heartbreaking. Arthur is maybe too uptight, but he is reserved, he's been hurt by his lover and he can't see the things that could make him realize that Leopold is in love with him. The difference in their social status is an obstacle too, especially because Arthur can't afford to let rumors about his sexuality spread around. Arthur is a simple man, who wants a real relationship, someone to spend his time and life with. There's also something more in Arthur and Leopold can bring this stronger side to life when they make love. They are great together.
It's a short story, but it's full of romantic moments and it was a delight to read.
January 20, 2018
Leopold Thornton has been in love with Arthur Barrington ever since he met him ten years ago. But when he finally had the courage to tell him how he felt, he saw Arthur with another guy. So he decided to devote his life to every form of debauchery, all in a desperate effort to forget the one guy he cared about.
Ten years later, Arthur has just broken up with his lover. Leopold decides to take his chance and invites him to his country house for a getaway to help him forget.
This was very short, but still their development felt believable. You know it's Ava March, so these two had some scorching hot scenes.
But.
Oh the intense chemistry did not really make up for all the angst for me. See, I HATE angst. Loathe it. Why these two idiots always assumed the worst, went off sulking, and then ignored the other one instead of talking things out is beyond me. Because all their problems could've easily been solved with one very simple conversation.
Anyways. I'm off to the next in the series now!
Ten years later, Arthur has just broken up with his lover. Leopold decides to take his chance and invites him to his country house for a getaway to help him forget.
This was very short, but still their development felt believable. You know it's Ava March, so these two had some scorching hot scenes.
But.
Oh the intense chemistry did not really make up for all the angst for me. See, I HATE angst. Loathe it. Why these two idiots always assumed the worst, went off sulking, and then ignored the other one instead of talking things out is beyond me. Because all their problems could've easily been solved with one very simple conversation.
Anyways. I'm off to the next in the series now!
January 19, 2020
I completely fell in love with Leopold Thornton. That being said this book made me all twisted up and frustrated inside. Leopold was giving off waves of love and devotion for Arthur. Arthur gave cold acceptance. Like, 'ok, cool. Let's fuck.' Leopold deserves better!!!! I just needed some more love, maybe some chase or grand gesture on Arthur's part. I dont know if I want to read the sequel. I feel like I'll spend the whole time cheering for Leopold to leave him.
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January 6, 2016
Review for the 2nd edition
3.5 stars
Told in alternate third person POVs, Convincing Arthur was about two estranged friends reunited. Ten years ago, a turn of event forced Leopold to walk different path, lamenting over his tardiness by imbibing in carnal pleasures and spirits. Now he had a chance to make it right. Inviting Arthur to take a few days off to his country home in Yorkshire, Leopold planned to do his best to convince Arthur they were meant to be together.
To be honest, the beginning of the story felt like being shoved in the middle of an ongoing plot for me. It started with the day of Arthur's arrival at Ramsey House and Leopold worrying over his plan.
For a nearly thirty year old gentleman of that era, Leopold Thornton stroke me to be a rather man-child. Him indulging for ten years to drown his sorrow didn't impress me at all. Oh I pity him. But his anxiety whether Arthur would accept that he's changed, that now he's a reformed libertine, was of his own making.
Arthur Barrington was no better. The long years of passable relationship and his broken heart had bern the results of him taking the easy way out; taking what was there instead of looking for the best.
Admittedly, these two produced some heavy and steamy scenes. Boy did they ever! Indoor or outdoor, standing up or laying down, they practised all the carnal manners known to man. Not that I was impressed with Leopold tactics though.
Then I got to the last two chapters where I got my heart twisted, teary-eyed, and ended up hiding in bed for I became a sniffling idiot! Those two chapters moved me, had me tear-up while Leopold fight to win the man he loved. It's like the final battle where two opponents faced off with barely last ammunition left. And it got BAD before turning up better.
Just... if you're a soppy sod like myself, have a box of tissues nearby. Or whatever handy.
It's an absolute "Yes" that I'll be reading the next installment and enjoy more of Arthur and Leopold. I am so looking forward to it.
ARC is kindly received from the author for the exchange of fair and honest review.
3.5 stars
Please, let him find something, anything, worthy in me.I don't know why I waited long to read this story. It was the sort of heart-tugged one, the end left me in a sniffling mess. In a good way of course.
Told in alternate third person POVs, Convincing Arthur was about two estranged friends reunited. Ten years ago, a turn of event forced Leopold to walk different path, lamenting over his tardiness by imbibing in carnal pleasures and spirits. Now he had a chance to make it right. Inviting Arthur to take a few days off to his country home in Yorkshire, Leopold planned to do his best to convince Arthur they were meant to be together.
To be honest, the beginning of the story felt like being shoved in the middle of an ongoing plot for me. It started with the day of Arthur's arrival at Ramsey House and Leopold worrying over his plan.
For a nearly thirty year old gentleman of that era, Leopold Thornton stroke me to be a rather man-child. Him indulging for ten years to drown his sorrow didn't impress me at all. Oh I pity him. But his anxiety whether Arthur would accept that he's changed, that now he's a reformed libertine, was of his own making.
Arthur Barrington was no better. The long years of passable relationship and his broken heart had bern the results of him taking the easy way out; taking what was there instead of looking for the best.
Admittedly, these two produced some heavy and steamy scenes. Boy did they ever! Indoor or outdoor, standing up or laying down, they practised all the carnal manners known to man. Not that I was impressed with Leopold tactics though.
Then I got to the last two chapters where I got my heart twisted, teary-eyed, and ended up hiding in bed for I became a sniffling idiot! Those two chapters moved me, had me tear-up while Leopold fight to win the man he loved. It's like the final battle where two opponents faced off with barely last ammunition left. And it got BAD before turning up better.
Just... if you're a soppy sod like myself, have a box of tissues nearby. Or whatever handy.
It's an absolute "Yes" that I'll be reading the next installment and enjoy more of Arthur and Leopold. I am so looking forward to it.
ARC is kindly received from the author for the exchange of fair and honest review.
March 31, 2018
Ava March's Regency M/M romances are like a total addiction. She's one of the few authors who at least makes a point of trying to keep to the style and tone of a Regency novel, so I never feel jarred with the usage of modern slang. Not to mention her characters are just yummy in their cravats and trousers and Hessians. And normally, I dislike the so-called "rake" character, but I just can't help to cheer for poor Leopold, who's wanted his best friend, the reticent and more conservative Arthur, for years. These two men belong together. That's something else Iove about March's books--her men are men, not stereotypes. No matter which character is the more dominant or the submissive, they're still masculine.
I'm happy that a sequel is coming down the pike, because I just can't get enough of Leopold and Arthur.
I'm happy that a sequel is coming down the pike, because I just can't get enough of Leopold and Arthur.
February 4, 2017
There was unrequited love requited, super hot sexy times, and two men grappling intelligently with the realities of the Regency era - all A+ material as far as I am concerned - but the story ends with a HFN rather than a HEA and that felt like a ploy.
Bear with me for a sec...
I don't mind reading subsequent books about established couples if there is a compelling plot arc running alongside the relationship arc (like in Abi Roux's Cut & Run or Charlie Cochet's THIRDS series), but when the sum total of the book's plot is the successful relationship of our two main characters, the story feels unfinished when you leave me with a HFN.
So, a slightly disappointed 3 stars for Convincing Arthur even though I accept that Ms. March is one of the most talented m/m historical writers in the genre.
Bear with me for a sec...
I don't mind reading subsequent books about established couples if there is a compelling plot arc running alongside the relationship arc (like in Abi Roux's Cut & Run or Charlie Cochet's THIRDS series), but when the sum total of the book's plot is the successful relationship of our two main characters, the story feels unfinished when you leave me with a HFN.
So, a slightly disappointed 3 stars for Convincing Arthur even though I accept that Ms. March is one of the most talented m/m historical writers in the genre.
June 21, 2011
3.5 stars. Another good m/m Regency romance! It turns out that I don't mind (and actually enjoy) historicals if they aren't overburdened with historical details. I know that some love reading elaborate details of the clothes, the furnishings, the food... but that's what turned me off of historicals in the past. Anyway! Leopold's been waiting for Arthur to be free from a long-term and unfaithful lover. Now that Arthur's free, will Leopold's own debauched reputation keep Arthur away?
May 25, 2015
Did I mention I love Ava March? Regency and hot men, the perfect combination. I can't wait to finish Arthur and Leopold's story in Convincing Leopold
September 11, 2018
This story starts promising, but it feels rushed and not enough time to taken to really establish WHY Leo loves Authur so much (and for so long) nor is enough time established for Authur to return that affection so quickly. The only thing that redeems this story is Ava March's talent as a writer and a couple steamy sex scenes.
February 26, 2022
3.5 stars
October 18, 2009
I was recently read a review of Convincing Arthur at Erotic Horizon. The idea of a m/m in a historical setting really appealed to me. I immediately purchased it and when I added it to my Goodreads list, I noticed Barbara had also given it high marks so I told myself I would read just the first chapter to get a feel for the book. A few hours later I was done ;)
Leopold Thornton, or "Thorn" is a known playboy. He has a new male lover every other day but as the reader you learn he really only has one true love - Arthur Barrington. Problem is Arthur has been in a monogamous ten year relationship with another man, so Thorn has had to wait. He has passed his time having fun, but his life is definitely missing the depth of having a true love. His luck has turned around though - he has learned Arthur has left his long-term partner, and eager to have his chance, he invites Arthur to his country estate for a long weekend of hunting, and other "social" engagements.
Arthur agrees and he suspects what Thorn is after, but he really wants to forget the man he has spent the last ten years with and he knows Thorn will be a good distraction. When he arrives at Thorn's place within the first thirty minutes he is being seduced. Although Arthur has been in a relationship for ten years, he soon realizes the passion he has been missing out on. With his thoughts in turmoil, he lets his attraction lead the way.
Thorn is overwhelmed that he finally has his dream guy at his house. Now only to convince him that he has true feelings for him, that he is not just another play toy of his. Arthur needs to be convinced Thorn is the real deal, with his confidence shaky at best, Thorn has a big task ahead of him.
Convincing Arthur was a truly great read. Thornton has slept around most of his life and drinks too much and lives off of his wealthy parent's money. In all essence we should not like him as readers but, you can't help but fall in love with him from the first paragraph. He is waiting in his house for Arthur to show up and Arthur is very late. Thorn thinks he is not coming. His sadness and desperation to prove to Arthur he wants a relationship with him is heartbreaking. And then when Arthur's carriage finally appears, Thorn gets this goofy grin on his face and gets all fussy with his appearance. It is very endearing.
Arthur doesn't know what to feel - he is definitely attracted to Thorn but he is also coming out of a long relationship - one he is slowly realizing wasn't a great one to begin with. Arthur is not necessarily shy, but he is not as forward as Thorn and very worried about being discreet. I really enjoyed playful attitude of Thorn matched against the more serious demeanor of Arthur. My favorite moments in the book was when the romantic tension would get high, and Arthur would have a brief moment of indecision or being uncomfortable, and Thorn would wink. Just that little wink, reassuring Arthur that giving into your lust and attraction was ok. All would work out.
He glanced to Thornton and met gray eyes darkened with passion. It stopped Arthur in his tracks. They stared at each other for a long moment, the air crackling between them. Then Thornton winked. Before he knew it, hands pushed against his shoulders, his back connected with a tree trunk, and soft lips slanted over his.
You know I love a good romp in the woods!
My tiniest complaint is that the ending wrapped up too quick for me. I liked the decision made at the end, but I thought it was a little rushed.
I would love for Ava March to revisit these characters! Yes, I will beg if I have to! The love scenes are written very well - very steamy, yet also very sweet.
Ava March is now on my auto-buy list
Leopold Thornton, or "Thorn" is a known playboy. He has a new male lover every other day but as the reader you learn he really only has one true love - Arthur Barrington. Problem is Arthur has been in a monogamous ten year relationship with another man, so Thorn has had to wait. He has passed his time having fun, but his life is definitely missing the depth of having a true love. His luck has turned around though - he has learned Arthur has left his long-term partner, and eager to have his chance, he invites Arthur to his country estate for a long weekend of hunting, and other "social" engagements.
Arthur agrees and he suspects what Thorn is after, but he really wants to forget the man he has spent the last ten years with and he knows Thorn will be a good distraction. When he arrives at Thorn's place within the first thirty minutes he is being seduced. Although Arthur has been in a relationship for ten years, he soon realizes the passion he has been missing out on. With his thoughts in turmoil, he lets his attraction lead the way.
Thorn is overwhelmed that he finally has his dream guy at his house. Now only to convince him that he has true feelings for him, that he is not just another play toy of his. Arthur needs to be convinced Thorn is the real deal, with his confidence shaky at best, Thorn has a big task ahead of him.
Convincing Arthur was a truly great read. Thornton has slept around most of his life and drinks too much and lives off of his wealthy parent's money. In all essence we should not like him as readers but, you can't help but fall in love with him from the first paragraph. He is waiting in his house for Arthur to show up and Arthur is very late. Thorn thinks he is not coming. His sadness and desperation to prove to Arthur he wants a relationship with him is heartbreaking. And then when Arthur's carriage finally appears, Thorn gets this goofy grin on his face and gets all fussy with his appearance. It is very endearing.
Arthur doesn't know what to feel - he is definitely attracted to Thorn but he is also coming out of a long relationship - one he is slowly realizing wasn't a great one to begin with. Arthur is not necessarily shy, but he is not as forward as Thorn and very worried about being discreet. I really enjoyed playful attitude of Thorn matched against the more serious demeanor of Arthur. My favorite moments in the book was when the romantic tension would get high, and Arthur would have a brief moment of indecision or being uncomfortable, and Thorn would wink. Just that little wink, reassuring Arthur that giving into your lust and attraction was ok. All would work out.
He glanced to Thornton and met gray eyes darkened with passion. It stopped Arthur in his tracks. They stared at each other for a long moment, the air crackling between them. Then Thornton winked. Before he knew it, hands pushed against his shoulders, his back connected with a tree trunk, and soft lips slanted over his.
You know I love a good romp in the woods!
My tiniest complaint is that the ending wrapped up too quick for me. I liked the decision made at the end, but I thought it was a little rushed.
I would love for Ava March to revisit these characters! Yes, I will beg if I have to! The love scenes are written very well - very steamy, yet also very sweet.
Ava March is now on my auto-buy list
January 18, 2024
Ummm ... this book just didn't work for me. I mean, there's nothing wrong with loads and loads (and um, loads ) of sex with a little bit of plot to string it all together with just the lightest hint of the historical period but ...
Arthur and Leopold Thornton were friends when they were 19. Arthur begins what turns out to be a 10-year relationship with someone and Leopold, missing his chance with Arthur, immediately turns to whoring his way through London and the outlying area plus drinking himself to sleep most nights to forget his pain. Umm, okay. When Thorn learns Arthur's relationship is over, he invites him to spend the weekend at his estate, which apparently both men understand is going to be non-stop sex, except for a bit of grouse hunting. Okay.
So, the sex is good and plentiful, but these two can't manage to simply communicate in any meaningful way, beyond preconceptions about one another. There is the requisite Big Misunderstanding and a HFN which reads more like a recipe for disaster than the Start of Something Good. I dunno. This is the first Ava March book where I haven't been dying to drive into the next book in the series. (But, yeah, I'm going to read the next book because I want to see how and if these two manage to actually communicate).
Arthur and Leopold Thornton were friends when they were 19. Arthur begins what turns out to be a 10-year relationship with someone and Leopold, missing his chance with Arthur, immediately turns to whoring his way through London and the outlying area plus drinking himself to sleep most nights to forget his pain. Umm, okay. When Thorn learns Arthur's relationship is over, he invites him to spend the weekend at his estate, which apparently both men understand is going to be non-stop sex, except for a bit of grouse hunting. Okay.
So, the sex is good and plentiful, but these two can't manage to simply communicate in any meaningful way, beyond preconceptions about one another. There is the requisite Big Misunderstanding and a HFN which reads more like a recipe for disaster than the Start of Something Good. I dunno. This is the first Ava March book where I haven't been dying to drive into the next book in the series. (But, yeah, I'm going to read the next book because I want to see how and if these two manage to actually communicate).
July 30, 2018
my first ava march book
my second m/m historical romance
and it was GOOOD!!!!
i've always been obsessed with Historical Romance and have been wanting to read a m/m HR book for like soooooo loooooonnngggg
and i didn't really think that it would be possible to pull off since LGBT was prohibited in the 1800's and could likely get you killed but March pulled it off.
if i'm being ruthless i liked Cat sebastian better, because her stories had more depth and this was more like a quick read, but still good.
maybe im ready for Mackenzi Lee?????
my second m/m historical romance
and it was GOOOD!!!!
i've always been obsessed with Historical Romance and have been wanting to read a m/m HR book for like soooooo loooooonnngggg
and i didn't really think that it would be possible to pull off since LGBT was prohibited in the 1800's and could likely get you killed but March pulled it off.
if i'm being ruthless i liked Cat sebastian better, because her stories had more depth and this was more like a quick read, but still good.
maybe im ready for Mackenzi Lee?????
February 14, 2010
Ava March knows how to write hot erotica, which is good since that is the main focus of her latest offering. Fans of the author will likely enjoy this new story, which plays on familiar themes and characters the author portrays well. The high level of angst and drama may not sit well with all readers, but the hot sex overcomes a lot of those problems. Well written with emotion and lack of much setting, this story focuses more on the sex and the men than the historical aspect. Mostly this tale is entertaining and enjoyable for the tantalizing erotica and the compelling characters.
This is a classic tale of unrequited love that is popular among the author’s books and adds in the theme of reforming a rake with the love of a good man. Leopold is the classic rake who has indulged in every vice known to man and has a reputation for bedding anything and everything, of either sex. This reputation is surprising given the author’s usual strict attention to the historical period and hiding overt homosexual behavior. Here, both characters are given almost openly gay relationships ~ either transient or established ~ and little is offered in the way of society standards. However, the majority of the action occurs at an isolated estate so readers aren’t likely to dwell on these inaccuracies.
Leopold is the more compelling character, although he is the most dramatic and angst filled. His response to unrequited love for Arthur is to drink himself to distraction and fall into a deep emotional depression. This tendency to drink while proclaiming his woes instead of taking action is annoying when he clearly is meant to have a strong, forceful personality. Only once throughout the weekend does Leopold take action to gain the affection of Arthur. However, at the same time there is very little reason or understanding for why Leopold has carried a torch for Arthur all this time. Clearly Arthur thought very little of the man in the intervening decade, yet Leopold carries a deep, emotional love for the man without much offered justification.
For his part, Arthur is a decent enough workaholic that fears getting hurt while yearning for commitment. He is a rather classic stereotype of a man who hopes an affair will clear his palate of a bad breakup only to be shocked when the object of said affair actually wants more than a quick weekend tryst. Arthur is constantly running away and hiding for most of the weekend, when he’s not indulging in sex with Leopold. Arthur’s emotional detachment is the opposite of Leopold’s dramatic angst and eventually fit together.
The story is decent but the characters are too dramatic and angst filled without much rationale to prolong the interaction. The focus on hot sex and final emotional outburst are the strongest aspects of the book so those looking for well written erotica and in the mood for heavy angst will enjoy the story without being bothered by the problems presented. This reads very similar to classic bodice rippers with two men and thus romance erotica fans are likely to appreciate this offering.
This is a classic tale of unrequited love that is popular among the author’s books and adds in the theme of reforming a rake with the love of a good man. Leopold is the classic rake who has indulged in every vice known to man and has a reputation for bedding anything and everything, of either sex. This reputation is surprising given the author’s usual strict attention to the historical period and hiding overt homosexual behavior. Here, both characters are given almost openly gay relationships ~ either transient or established ~ and little is offered in the way of society standards. However, the majority of the action occurs at an isolated estate so readers aren’t likely to dwell on these inaccuracies.
Leopold is the more compelling character, although he is the most dramatic and angst filled. His response to unrequited love for Arthur is to drink himself to distraction and fall into a deep emotional depression. This tendency to drink while proclaiming his woes instead of taking action is annoying when he clearly is meant to have a strong, forceful personality. Only once throughout the weekend does Leopold take action to gain the affection of Arthur. However, at the same time there is very little reason or understanding for why Leopold has carried a torch for Arthur all this time. Clearly Arthur thought very little of the man in the intervening decade, yet Leopold carries a deep, emotional love for the man without much offered justification.
For his part, Arthur is a decent enough workaholic that fears getting hurt while yearning for commitment. He is a rather classic stereotype of a man who hopes an affair will clear his palate of a bad breakup only to be shocked when the object of said affair actually wants more than a quick weekend tryst. Arthur is constantly running away and hiding for most of the weekend, when he’s not indulging in sex with Leopold. Arthur’s emotional detachment is the opposite of Leopold’s dramatic angst and eventually fit together.
The story is decent but the characters are too dramatic and angst filled without much rationale to prolong the interaction. The focus on hot sex and final emotional outburst are the strongest aspects of the book so those looking for well written erotica and in the mood for heavy angst will enjoy the story without being bothered by the problems presented. This reads very similar to classic bodice rippers with two men and thus romance erotica fans are likely to appreciate this offering.
June 9, 2010
Leopold thinks he’s been stood up, and he drinks and paces in his study.
This book starts promisingly Leopold is quickly introduced and we get a measure of the kind of man he is, one that will sleep with anyone, male or female. He blew his chances with the man he’s been obsessed with, Arthur Barrington, ten years ago and now Arthur has broken his his lover of ten years, he’s hoping to get him at last.
Leopold then goes on to mentally castigate his rival, Amherst: the man who has been with Arthur for ten years and whom Leopold finds objectionable because Amherst has loose morals. At least Leopold has the grace to realise that this is a little bit of the Pot calling the Kettle black!
Her research and detailing is impressive, solid and convincing. There’s no extraneous description, to my eyes, just enough to give a feel of the rooms and the decoration without a list that sounds like a Gillow’s catalogue. Little touches like game shooting in November. I’ve seen books where the men go grouse shooting in June! There’s a nice smattering of language of the time too, but it explains itself in context, so you aren’t forced to rush off to find Grose’s Dictionary of the Vulgar Tongue.
He recognized the name—Madame Delacroix’s, a decadent West End brothel with a near-endless supply of beautiful women, and according to rumor, a handful of handsome, accommodating men as well. At least Randolph had the good sense not to go to some nunnery in the stews. Those places were rife with diseases.
Ava March writes well, and I’ve enjoyed her other historicals that I’ve reviewed on the site–my major gripe would be one that I’ve said many times before, that I feel a little cheated with a story of a mere 80 pages, and this story particularly deserves more to do it justice. The author goes to great pains to explain that these two men have a history, have known each other for ten years, and that Arthur trod the virtuous path while Leopold was gobbled up by a corrupting London and they went their separate ways. We are told details about Arthur’s relationship with Randolph and I’m left thinking “But I’d like to KNOW about this, not just get told about it!” There’s more than enough material here for a novel.
Because we are told, not shown, all this detail – the story folds in on itself and was for me, little more than a PWP–and that takes the pleasure out of the journey for me. They are at it like bunnies in chapter two, in fact. And three….
But that aside, it’s well written and the personal longing for a big meaty novel from Ms March doesn’t stop her smaller works being an auto-buy for me.
This book starts promisingly Leopold is quickly introduced and we get a measure of the kind of man he is, one that will sleep with anyone, male or female. He blew his chances with the man he’s been obsessed with, Arthur Barrington, ten years ago and now Arthur has broken his his lover of ten years, he’s hoping to get him at last.
Leopold then goes on to mentally castigate his rival, Amherst: the man who has been with Arthur for ten years and whom Leopold finds objectionable because Amherst has loose morals. At least Leopold has the grace to realise that this is a little bit of the Pot calling the Kettle black!
Her research and detailing is impressive, solid and convincing. There’s no extraneous description, to my eyes, just enough to give a feel of the rooms and the decoration without a list that sounds like a Gillow’s catalogue. Little touches like game shooting in November. I’ve seen books where the men go grouse shooting in June! There’s a nice smattering of language of the time too, but it explains itself in context, so you aren’t forced to rush off to find Grose’s Dictionary of the Vulgar Tongue.
He recognized the name—Madame Delacroix’s, a decadent West End brothel with a near-endless supply of beautiful women, and according to rumor, a handful of handsome, accommodating men as well. At least Randolph had the good sense not to go to some nunnery in the stews. Those places were rife with diseases.
Ava March writes well, and I’ve enjoyed her other historicals that I’ve reviewed on the site–my major gripe would be one that I’ve said many times before, that I feel a little cheated with a story of a mere 80 pages, and this story particularly deserves more to do it justice. The author goes to great pains to explain that these two men have a history, have known each other for ten years, and that Arthur trod the virtuous path while Leopold was gobbled up by a corrupting London and they went their separate ways. We are told details about Arthur’s relationship with Randolph and I’m left thinking “But I’d like to KNOW about this, not just get told about it!” There’s more than enough material here for a novel.
Because we are told, not shown, all this detail – the story folds in on itself and was for me, little more than a PWP–and that takes the pleasure out of the journey for me. They are at it like bunnies in chapter two, in fact. And three….
But that aside, it’s well written and the personal longing for a big meaty novel from Ms March doesn’t stop her smaller works being an auto-buy for me.
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