Absorbing Suspenseful Sci Fi
This is the first in an ongoing series. Though there is no cliffhanger you are aware there is probably more to come.
Zara is a Name on her home planet of Newyan, which means she was a member of a Founding Family. Her grandfather ruled her family with an iron fist and she was made very aware that she was failing the family for her aversion to being used as a political tool. Her abilities and interests outside the normal path of becoming marriageable helped her to survive when the rest of her family is wiped out in a wide ranging plot to destroy her family Name and steal all their assets. She manages to escape off world by the skin of her teeth and heads towards an unknown planet to take a very vague offer of employment to become a Dance Mistress for a young woman. She knows that the term Dance Mistress to a Name means someone with a very particular set of skills that are not simply dance related.
I found this book really hard to put down. The world building was excellent and woven into the story seamlessly. The universe in which this story is set is intriguing and believable. The characters are interesting, especially Zara, the MFC, but I particularly liked Hanna, the ‘other’ Dance Mistress, who was a complex and intriguing character. In fact, I would have really liked this story if told from her point of view because a lot of her unstated backstory looked like it might be fascinating. Rhoswyn, Zara’s charge, is mixed up jumble of an early teenager who is engaging, interesting and sweet, at the same time infuriating because of the idiotic ideas she acts upon. Then of course there is the darkly damaged father of Rhos, the Duke, who governs the province and lost his beloved wife 18 months earlier. He is hard to read, and closed off, even from his daughter. He is devoted to his planet and it’s people, which means that his duty often prevents him from the things he loves, but on the whole his people love and admire him.
This story is mainly focused on the suspense aspect of this romantic suspense. To be honest the Sci-Fi part of the story isn’t genre that jumps out the most, even if it is very important to aspects of the storyline. The romance is a minimal part, and the book is ‘clean’, for those that care about that sort of thing. The thing that drives this story is the need Zara has to protect those she cares about even if it puts herself in danger, and she is definitely put in danger multiple times in this book.
Despite it’s very absorbing nature, I felt that the story was let down a little by the character work. Zara doesn’t actually have much backstory beyond being a disappointment to her grandfather and her being a Name. There is very little reference to her parents for instance and we only really know much about her feelings in relation to her grandfather other than they are slightly conflicted, which is hardly surprising when looking at a 21 year old. I also feel that there could have been more about Bledyn, the Duke who seems to be nothing but painted on attributes of duty and being a widower with a daughter he doesn’t understand. It may be in future books we get to know more about all of these things, but for this book I felt it detracted from my enjoyment.
All that being said, I enjoyed the book and will probably read the next in the series at some point when I’m in the mood for some straight-up plot driven Sci-Fi suspense.