So, as far as spoilers and reviews go, this is my disclaimer:
Stop at the dotted line if you don't want to know any plot lines, otherwise read at your own risk.
Ella Miles' writing style was enjoyable for a "present to past to jumping back to present" type of story. Not only do you have the timeline shifts, you have the point-of-view changes as well. I did catch myself having to look up several times to see whose perspective was being shown. The author kept me engaged through most (3/4th) of the book, because I was trying to guess how the plot twists were going to play out. If you pay enough attention, you can have the entire book figured by about 45% into the story. However, it is the last quarter of the book (beginning of the timeline to the jump into present day) that really holds the details to bring the book together. I felt that Hunter lacked strength throughout the book, and in the end, you will learn why his weak-minded, wishy-washy choices feel like just that- not his choices and weak. I think my biggest issue with the delivery was the "it will all be okay" wrap up in the end. When I escape into a book, I don't want everything to be wrapped up within a short epilogue in a bow of "the future will only tell how our happily-ever-after works out." I get enough of the uncertainty crap in real life. Is the main male character, Hunter, hot? I would think so, because he is supposed to be a tight-end for the Dallas Cowboys, but I couldn't really tell you what he looks like in my head. In fact, I couldn't really tell you what Quinn, the lead female character, looks like. Sad, but true. Maybe I gave the book too many stars? Or is it okay to not really have an image of the people in your mind? I need to think on that one. Were scenes steamy and mommy-pornish? Nope. Sometimes they were completely unrealistic and the dialogue because cheesy. The supporting characters become non-existent in depth, and I barely remember them. I felt the entire book was more about Quinn's financial struggles, but the lack of emotion really had me not caring one bit.
Now, you might think that I disliked the book, because of the review below- remember to not read it if you don't want to read spoilers. But it wasn't as horrible as it seems, because the writing of the author is fluid. She can deliver structured, outrageous scenarios, and she makes the story work for those that have no intention of leaving a detailed review and thinking too hard on the book. That is why she is a great author.
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Now for the spoilers:
Let's start with the beginning... not the storyline beginning, but the opening of the book.
Let's just jump right in.
Hunter stands Quinn up at the airport and it is "really over this time" for them both. Good Lord, help me to not scream. How many times do we hear this? It's over, it isn't. It's back on, it's over. They are "friends" then they can't be. We can't be together, but we are. Good riddance.
You immediately get that there is something other than sex between the two characters, and a sad or hostile connection exists between all the characters. Animosity, jealousy, weirdness.. you get the picture.
You, somewhere in between all the nonsense of Quinn's instability, find out about Ava and that Quinn isn't her real mother. You get snippets of "I am just now going to foster her" in the span of less than 24 hours from Hunter for Quinn who is only 19. You also will read about how he 'saves' Quinn and tons of crap that feels pretty shallow and incredibly hard to digest. Which has to be bad, because I love a far-fetched love story.
Regardless, I digress... back to the ridiculous:
It isn't until towards the end of the book (the beginning of the past) that you learn in a couple of paragraphs that Quinn and Sabrina, Hunter's dead fiancee, are in fact sisters, and Quinn tried to kill herself when she heard her sister and her niece (supposedly) died. Wait! Stop the press! Sisters, you say?!?! They were raised separately in foster care and found each other... it is a stretch that even Gumby has a hard time adjusting to. And the delivery was ridiculous.
Truly, to sum it up:
Quinn: You tell me your bad news then I'll tell you my good news. My good will cheer up your bad.
Sabrina: I am dying.
Quinn: I am your biological sister.
blah.blah.blah. Yup, that's how that goes down. And that isn't the real plot twist. Everyone figures out that Ava is Hunter's kid, because everyone including the hospital staff let him believe that his infant daughter died. As you read the book, you can pick up the parentage pretty easy. You try to tell yourself that she isn't. You gloss over the thick of it, and then try to feel surprised about it... but you aren't really surprised. You are annoyed. Or at least, I am. Because, the loser father would be Hunter, and he just has an epiphany that Ava is his at the end. FML. I am not that stupid as a reader to absorb this as okay. And there is the general public reading the book that aren't idiots also. But the story needed to be wrapped up... so cue the dad stepping up to the play ten years later. Whatever. The final killjoy is when Sabrina dies, and Quinn finds out by Sabrina's stepsister calling her. Guess who the stepsister is? Oh hell, you guessed it too... Camille. So, essentially, Hunter got down with sisters- all three of them. Hello, Respect, please meet Door. Out you go.
Okay-- I am stopping there. I don't want to think about it anymore.