This book annoyed me. For several reasons, I was relieved once I had finally reached the Epilogue and, whilst the ending surprised me, I was too far gone with my judgement to award this novel anything more than three stars. Allow me to explain…
No one, and I repeat, no one, in this novel appears to be straight. The whole cast are crooked, criminals, “chancers” if you life – all committing some form of deception and involved in a type of illegal activity. And if they don’t fall into this category, then they are off performing adultery: none of the characters appear to have a loyal bone in their body. Frustratingly, the females all fall under the male spell and are forever weak and in need of “saving” – sexually or physically. All in all, it felt so dated and cliched that this was one of the main reasons that the novel lost my interest. (This book was published last year, so I can only imagine that the retroactive attitudes are supposed to reflect Melissa’s traditional upbringing?)
The protagonist, Jason, is the man living the life of crime. He is dodgy from the beginning and the tale follows as he gets involved in deeper crimes, no thanks to his inability to “keep it in his trousers”, have unfavourable friends and a terrible mother who has allowed Jason’s brothers and sister to fall into similar difficult situations. Wanting to give Jason a good slap and seeing to, it was no surprise when it is revealed that he intends to use Melissa as a means of providing a mother-figure to his daughter, Shay. Mel is in a similar situation – also a single mother – and feels Jason can fulfil the role missing from her son’s life. Plot development was predictable and obvious and, at times, a little cringe-worthy. The awkwardness of reading how Melissa’s wedding day occurred was awful and she also needed a good shake to make her realise how naive and stupid she was being.
Melissa, Jason’s ever-suffering wife, appears to have no clue about Jason’s background and infidelities. She is described as preferring ignorance to how Jason earns his money yet, seems surprised when the law eventually catches up with them. Instead, she is happy to spend, spend, spend, making her no better, in my opinion, than her dodgy husband. Not intending to lift a finger and contribute to the house finances, she expects Jason to keep an expensive roof over her head, allow her to live a life of luxury, and send the two children to private schools. Materialistic and dozy, I was glad when life started to fall apart around her.
These two characters embodied many principles that I disagree with and, as a result, it felt uncomfortable reading. I do realise that reading allows you to immerse yourself into an imaginary world, but this was too far-fetched for my liking. The naivety of the characters was incredible, particularly with the forever-absent police. Seeing where the plot would go was a further disappointment, although the final twist was satisfying and I really did not see it coming.
I felt like this was a dated crime story that abandoned so many literary principles. It is a shame there weren’t stronger female characters and morality absent. Crooked and corrupt, whilst there were some chuckles at the dialogue, for the most part I was left feeling frustrated. Refreshingly, this is a stand-alone novel, (I find it difficult to come across crime novels that are not part of a series) and I would be interested to read another of Chambers’s works, just to see if it tickles my literary taste buds a little better.