Unnecessary Chapters
Giving this book a 3 is me being kind. There are plenty of moments (not enough) when I couldn’t put the book down. The last 10-20 chapters of the book kept me on the edge with the Adrian-Laurel-Sam predicament. The chapter when Laurel has a talk with Sam’s mother at the restaurant was a highlight in the book because it provides some insight on what Sam’s possible punishment would be if he continues to see Laurel. Reading and visualizing Sam and Laurel being together was a magical moment for me. Yet, I’m still tired of their “we can’t or shouldn’t be together” conversations.
What I don’t like. The reason I really want to give this book a 2 is it’s repetitiveness. I felt the author did this to lengthen the book, but it wasn’t necessary. This book would have been fine it were 100 pages less. Laurel is hard headed and doesn’t seem to care about her own safety, or the fact that demigods are risking their lives for her. They’re constantly getting into predicaments because of something she has done, all the while she keeps telling them she doesn’t want them getting into trouble over her. Laurel is weak and easily persuaded. I had to remind myself that Laurel is 19 not 15, although her dialogues was often 15ish, repetitive and unnecessary.
Just when you think some big revelation is about to come, it falls short only to have the person speaking lose focus on what they were about to say, or have them say something basic like “I’m in love with a Titan”.
The age thing. The you’re immortal (Sam) and won’t age and I (Laurel) will age. Sounds familiar. I’m thinking Twilight familiar. Especially when it comes to Laurel’s possible pregnancy that could kill her. I can almost guarantee that Laurel will some how became immortal to save her life after the birth of her and Sam’s child. Again, Twilight.