Great story, a lot.) of small errors of punctuation and typos, mostly, not enough to stop me from reading.
18 yr old Eva doesn't want to leave Virgil for the Oregon Trail. For one thing, she'll miss her granny, who isn't up to the trip. Plus, she'll miss her friends. And she may end up forced by her dad to marry a man who is a drunk and a bully, not the one she has loved since they were kids (and who reciprocates her feelings). Plus, she has twin 16 yr old sisters, one a tomboy and a flirt, the other quiet and far more observant that anyone realizes...plus a 7 yr old brother. And she knws her mom doesn't really want to go, either.
But her dad says they're going. Period. End of discussion. His wife and children must follow him.
David is one of 2 sons of the town drunk. After they buried their mother, the older one left David alone and no one has heard from him since. He hasn't enough money to go...but hires on with a family from town that has 2 girls but no sons. He makes a mark for himself on the trail and with the trailmaster. He is just gaining some success despite his father's alcoholism when Eva's father's preferred beau for her daughter accuses him of a crime. Like the bully he is, it seems he has managed to manipulate others into backing his story.
Is David guilty? If he isn't, why won't anyone defend him? And who is it that believes in David so much - not Eva, as a hint - who will make sure there is, at the very least, a trial instead of a lynching? Who else seemingly inadvertently helps Eva out, and David as well? Will Eva's dad ever see his preferred husband for Eva as the lying, cheating boozer he is, and realize that David will cherish his daighter and do his utmost to provide for her?