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The Prince of the Moon
All Solae wants is to be accepted and loved by the family that has always rejected him. But given it was his late mother who cursed the kingdom to eternal winter, the chances of that happening are minimal. If he can find a way to break the curse, however, surely that would be enough to change their minds regarding him.
But Solae is forbidden to practice magic because of his mother, which limits his ability to pursue solutions. Desperate for advice and new ideas, he contacts a famous curse breaker—and has no idea what to do when the unexpectedly shows up, handsome and friendly and dangerously intriguing.
Publisher Note: This story was previously released in Fairytales Slashed Volume 4
But Solae is forbidden to practice magic because of his mother, which limits his ability to pursue solutions. Desperate for advice and new ideas, he contacts a famous curse breaker—and has no idea what to do when the unexpectedly shows up, handsome and friendly and dangerously intriguing.
Publisher Note: This story was previously released in Fairytales Slashed Volume 4
81 pages, ebook
First published July 3, 2012
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January 7, 2017
With getting to know a gentle prince, unofficially exiled to his tower by an uncaring family, being introduced to a handsome, scarred curse breaker, and experiencing the magic, both literal and figurative, between the two, the first half of this story kept me completely engaged.
However, the second half of the story felt much less compelling and somewhat predictable, which would have been fine, except that the ending just sort of fizzled for me.
Instead of the bad guys getting their comeuppance, the good guys (our heroic MC's) simply left, leaving the bad guys to enjoy the fruits of their labor, which I truly didn't find satisfying at all.
Also, the real story about the 'False Queen' was never fully revealed.
Did she cast a love spell on the King? Was she truly evil, a little evil, or not even the slightest bit evil? We're never told, as only the King knows for sure.
Or was the 'golden and glorious' King simply some asshole who burned his wife at the stake due to his own pride and fear of what his kingdom might think of him marrying a witch?
If the story had continued as it began, start to finish, this would have easily been a 4+ star read for me; however, with the somewhat blah ending and unanswered questions, it was about a 3-star story.
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** My ARC copy of the story was provided by the publisher through NetGalley in exchange for a fair, unbiased review.
February 6, 2017
This was short and enjoyable.
I liked both MCs a lot. The progression into a relationship was a bit rushed for me but I guess it has more to do with the length of the book than anything else. The writing was good as usual with this author with an engaging pace.
However, I would've liked more retribution given to Solae's despicable family for they way they treated him. They were just awful. I'm not saying Solae should've done the "revenging" himself but I felt that AT LEAST they must have been dealt with for their evil someway,somewhow.
Anywhoo! Aside from that , I really really liked it. If you're looking for a very short,"insta-relationshipy" PNR book. Check this one out. It might just be your jam.
***eARC Graciously Provided By Publisher In Exchange For a Fair, Unbiased Review***
I liked both MCs a lot. The progression into a relationship was a bit rushed for me but I guess it has more to do with the length of the book than anything else. The writing was good as usual with this author with an engaging pace.
However, I would've liked more retribution given to Solae's despicable family for they way they treated him. They were just awful. I'm not saying Solae should've done the "revenging" himself but I felt that AT LEAST they must have been dealt with for their evil someway,somewhow.
Anywhoo! Aside from that , I really really liked it. If you're looking for a very short,"insta-relationshipy" PNR book. Check this one out. It might just be your jam.
***eARC Graciously Provided By Publisher In Exchange For a Fair, Unbiased Review***
February 28, 2017
I was sent this book as an advance copy by the publisher via NetGalley for reviewing purposes, but all opinions are my own.
I quite enjoyed this book. It was extremely short (I'm a slow reader in English and it took me maybe around two hours, I bet a native speaker could read it in less than one) and just what I was in the mood for.
Because of its length, I find it hard to see some things that normally would annoy me (like the instalove) as flaws, and yet I must say that I still wished I was given a little bit more time to start shipping it. I was never shown the two MCs before they started mutually pining, therefore I didn't see why they should get together. Later on, some more backstory was given about both of them, but by that point the romance was pretty much set. Still, it's a great short story if you want to read something without a lot of unnecessary angst.
A few situations were a bit too convenient, but then again, given the length of this, there was no time for things to be otherwise, and I was never truly annoyed.
I was genuinely interested in the story and there were a couple of twists I definitely didn't see coming.
This was the first book I read from the author, and I really enjoyed the writing, even though I think it would shine more in a more lengthy novel. I'll consider checking out more of her works.
I'd recommend it to anyone looking for an easy and fluffy read.
I quite enjoyed this book. It was extremely short (I'm a slow reader in English and it took me maybe around two hours, I bet a native speaker could read it in less than one) and just what I was in the mood for.
Because of its length, I find it hard to see some things that normally would annoy me (like the instalove) as flaws, and yet I must say that I still wished I was given a little bit more time to start shipping it. I was never shown the two MCs before they started mutually pining, therefore I didn't see why they should get together. Later on, some more backstory was given about both of them, but by that point the romance was pretty much set. Still, it's a great short story if you want to read something without a lot of unnecessary angst.
A few situations were a bit too convenient, but then again, given the length of this, there was no time for things to be otherwise, and I was never truly annoyed.
I was genuinely interested in the story and there were a couple of twists I definitely didn't see coming.
This was the first book I read from the author, and I really enjoyed the writing, even though I think it would shine more in a more lengthy novel. I'll consider checking out more of her works.
I'd recommend it to anyone looking for an easy and fluffy read.
January 7, 2017
Started out strong as a fairy tale prince who is misunderstood and punished for his mother's crimes. Then the "rescuer" comes to save him and show everyone how wrong they've been about Prince Solae. Oops. That part didn't really play out. I didn't like how hateful everyone was, even in fairy tale world. Somebody (or several) needed some comeuppance. And the first sex scene was off page! I love Derr's writing, so that saved it, but not the story I thought it would be.
May 27, 2020
Really interesting premise but it just seemed to be lacking quite a bit of personality on the characters part. It might be due to the short length though, I would love to see this as a full length Ed novel with a more devolved ending!
November 15, 2022
2.5 stars.
This book feels like barely finished draft rather than a released product for sale. From the editing to the unfinished, twisted threads to insta-love and suspension of disbelief.
Did I mention a very unsatisfying HEA? *sigh*
And yet, and yet... I still love meself a short Megan Derr story on a cold autumn day 😻
Very fitting cover, too!
This book feels like barely finished draft rather than a released product for sale. From the editing to the unfinished, twisted threads to insta-love and suspension of disbelief.
Did I mention a very unsatisfying HEA? *sigh*
And yet, and yet... I still love meself a short Megan Derr story on a cold autumn day 😻
Very fitting cover, too!
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January 27, 2017Does it even make sense to add EACH AND EVERY short of Megan's on my tbr??? It would almost double its content as I want to read them ALL!!! She does know how to write sweet, fairytale-like gems... :)
January 7, 2017
3.5 stars
I enjoy Megan Derr's fairy-tale stories but this one fell short. I adored both Solae and Millio. My heart went out for kind and sweet Solae. I thought their relationship was lovely. The ending most particularly, put a huge smile to my face. They were so cute together! I also loved the twist on how the curse was broken...
Unfortunately, I didn't like how the 'bad guys' didn't exactly get what they deserved, especially the king. After the way he treated Solae, plus the fact that apparently there might not even an enchanting spell in the first place?? I guess I was disappointed knowing that the curse was broken, and the kingdom was saved, but it drove Solae away from it.
Oh, I know, I know, Solae was happy, he was loved, he could travel with Millio while learning his magic and have an adventure ... Yes, maybe it was the better future for him rather than staying at the kingdom, but still I wasn't completely satisfied with how it turned out for the king. Where is the justice? *pout*
FYI, this story was originally published in Fairytales Slashed 4; I haven't read that one so I don't know if there is something essentially changed from the first edition.
The ARC is provided by the publisher via Netgalley for an exchange of fair and honest review. No high rating is required for any ARC received.
I enjoy Megan Derr's fairy-tale stories but this one fell short. I adored both Solae and Millio. My heart went out for kind and sweet Solae. I thought their relationship was lovely. The ending most particularly, put a huge smile to my face. They were so cute together! I also loved the twist on how the curse was broken...
Unfortunately, I didn't like how the 'bad guys' didn't exactly get what they deserved, especially the king. After the way he treated Solae, plus the fact that apparently there might not even an enchanting spell in the first place?? I guess I was disappointed knowing that the curse was broken, and the kingdom was saved, but it drove Solae away from it.
Oh, I know, I know, Solae was happy, he was loved, he could travel with Millio while learning his magic and have an adventure ... Yes, maybe it was the better future for him rather than staying at the kingdom, but still I wasn't completely satisfied with how it turned out for the king. Where is the justice? *pout*
FYI, this story was originally published in Fairytales Slashed 4; I haven't read that one so I don't know if there is something essentially changed from the first edition.
The ARC is provided by the publisher via Netgalley for an exchange of fair and honest review. No high rating is required for any ARC received.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 14, 2017
Received to review via Netgalley
The Prince of the Moon is a fairytale-like story of princes, queens and curses, along with true love, a pure heart, and other such trappings of the genre. The difference being that the witch burning may not be entirely justified — certainly there are at least two good witches in the story — and the people who have been cursed may just deserve it somewhat. Oh, and the romantic couple are both men, but that’s becoming more common lately and honestly didn’t feel like the point of the story. Which is kind of exciting, actually! M/M fairytales which aren’t just about changing genders, but also about interrogating other aspects of the story, like the wicked witch and her son.
It’s pretty short and mostly sweet, and the romance feels a little bit rushed… but on the other hand, of course it does: this is coming out of fairytales, after all. The only thing I honestly don’t get is why Solae keeps trying to help his family, when it’s fairly clear no one has ever stretched out a hand to him. He’s a good person, and yet he’s learned that goodness all out of nowhere.
Then again: it’s a fairytale. Who taught Rapunzel to be good?
The sex scenes are, well, not terrible or laughable or awkward, but neither were they necessary to the story. I just skipped past them, given lack of interest. But there is sex in this book, if that matters to you.
Originally posted on my blog.
The Prince of the Moon is a fairytale-like story of princes, queens and curses, along with true love, a pure heart, and other such trappings of the genre. The difference being that the witch burning may not be entirely justified — certainly there are at least two good witches in the story — and the people who have been cursed may just deserve it somewhat. Oh, and the romantic couple are both men, but that’s becoming more common lately and honestly didn’t feel like the point of the story. Which is kind of exciting, actually! M/M fairytales which aren’t just about changing genders, but also about interrogating other aspects of the story, like the wicked witch and her son.
It’s pretty short and mostly sweet, and the romance feels a little bit rushed… but on the other hand, of course it does: this is coming out of fairytales, after all. The only thing I honestly don’t get is why Solae keeps trying to help his family, when it’s fairly clear no one has ever stretched out a hand to him. He’s a good person, and yet he’s learned that goodness all out of nowhere.
Then again: it’s a fairytale. Who taught Rapunzel to be good?
The sex scenes are, well, not terrible or laughable or awkward, but neither were they necessary to the story. I just skipped past them, given lack of interest. But there is sex in this book, if that matters to you.
Originally posted on my blog.
March 15, 2020
~ 3.5 stars ~
Thank you, Winter Cherry Elf, for this gift during the Secret Santa gift exchange 2018 :)
Ahhh, this was such a lovely story with adorable MCs who made a really great couple!
The idea was very intriguing, the writing was engaging, and even though the relationship was a bit rushed, I could forgive it here because of the shortness of the story.
The shortness, though, is also why I don't rate this book higher. I didn't want it to be over so soon and there are some things I desperately wanted to know the answers to. Like what really happened between the king and Solae's mother? Also, it seems like I'm not the forgiving kind because I really wanted to see the 'bad guys' getting what they deserved.
Thank you, Winter Cherry Elf, for this gift during the Secret Santa gift exchange 2018 :)
Ahhh, this was such a lovely story with adorable MCs who made a really great couple!
The idea was very intriguing, the writing was engaging, and even though the relationship was a bit rushed, I could forgive it here because of the shortness of the story.
The shortness, though, is also why I don't rate this book higher. I didn't want it to be over so soon and there are some things I desperately wanted to know the answers to. Like what really happened between the king and Solae's mother? Also, it seems like I'm not the forgiving kind because I really wanted to see the 'bad guys' getting what they deserved.
January 23, 2017
Sooo, this was nice? And well, this could also be all that is to say about this high fantasy/fairy tale novella, which is to say, this is neither a bad story nor something to shout out about.
The world building is alright, the writing style easy-going, the premise interesting enough.
The characters are likeable, but the certain something about them is missing. They and their love is simple, plain. Um, also really, really sweet (and for once, I don’t mean that in a good way) and way too fast, too eternal to actually get me invested in the couple and their happily ever after. I mean, it’s fine, really, I’m just not overwhelmed or excited or anything. There is some lovely love making, though ;-)
Now the plot, oh… I don’t know. I just… I rolled my eyes a few times, because all the damn kissing all the damn time when they are in danger, on the run etc. And the villain here is just eeevil and too simplistic for my taste, as is the whole antagonistic kingdom. Unreal. The solution in the end? Oh, yeah, the idea is nice enough, but the execution kinda unbelievable, especially the reaction of Solae’s brother.
Haha, I don’t believe I’m the right audience for this story…
To come to the end here, you might want to read this if you are in the mood for something easy, something nice? Some fairy tale ;-)
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Genre: Fairy Tale/Fantasy Romance
Tags: M/M Pairing, Gay/Bisexual Characters
Rating: 3 stars
Blog: Review for Just Love
Disclosure: ARC for Review
The world building is alright, the writing style easy-going, the premise interesting enough.
The characters are likeable, but the certain something about them is missing. They and their love is simple, plain. Um, also really, really sweet (and for once, I don’t mean that in a good way) and way too fast, too eternal to actually get me invested in the couple and their happily ever after. I mean, it’s fine, really, I’m just not overwhelmed or excited or anything. There is some lovely love making, though ;-)
Now the plot, oh… I don’t know. I just… I rolled my eyes a few times, because all the damn kissing all the damn time when they are in danger, on the run etc. And the villain here is just eeevil and too simplistic for my taste, as is the whole antagonistic kingdom. Unreal. The solution in the end? Oh, yeah, the idea is nice enough, but the execution kinda unbelievable, especially the reaction of Solae’s brother.
Haha, I don’t believe I’m the right audience for this story…
To come to the end here, you might want to read this if you are in the mood for something easy, something nice? Some fairy tale ;-)
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Genre: Fairy Tale/Fantasy Romance
Tags: M/M Pairing, Gay/Bisexual Characters
Rating: 3 stars
Blog: Review for Just Love
Disclosure: ARC for Review
December 7, 2017
Disclaimer - I received this book in exchange for an honest review.
I did not enjoy this book. I felt like it rushed the whole story line. I think I would've enjoyed it more if it took the time to explain more. I loved the overall idea of the story. It involves witches, magic, curses and romance. The romance was something I enjoyed though, it was different and unique.
I felt like the characters should've been more developed. And I would've liked to see the romance gradually work it's way up. Instead, the romance immediately took off in the beginning.
I also felt as though this book would be really good if it took the time to carefully work through the plot lines. If the book was longer and slower, it may of been more enjoyable.
I did love the characters, especially Solae. Even though Solae was constantly pushed away and ignored by his family, it didn't stop him from being nice to everyone. He cared for his family even if they didn't acknowledge him.
I also loved how Solae is known as "The Prince Of The Dark," but Millio decided that he was not the Prince of the Dark, he was the Prince of the Moon.
I did not enjoy this book. I felt like it rushed the whole story line. I think I would've enjoyed it more if it took the time to explain more. I loved the overall idea of the story. It involves witches, magic, curses and romance. The romance was something I enjoyed though, it was different and unique.
I felt like the characters should've been more developed. And I would've liked to see the romance gradually work it's way up. Instead, the romance immediately took off in the beginning.
I also felt as though this book would be really good if it took the time to carefully work through the plot lines. If the book was longer and slower, it may of been more enjoyable.
I did love the characters, especially Solae. Even though Solae was constantly pushed away and ignored by his family, it didn't stop him from being nice to everyone. He cared for his family even if they didn't acknowledge him.
I also loved how Solae is known as "The Prince Of The Dark," but Millio decided that he was not the Prince of the Dark, he was the Prince of the Moon.
May 28, 2017
I always love Megan Derr's books, but, seriously, those jerks didn't deserve to have their curse broken.
May 26, 2018
What an interesting novella from Megan Derr. I enjoying the story even it feels way too short and not enough to reveals some important part that seems to be 'neglected' due to the shortness of the story, but the writing was good and yes, I love the surprise twist!
I must admit that I have the tendencies to auto-marked Megan Derr novellas because even its always feels way too short, still it's feels enjoyable enough to read, especially when you need a short reading between the 'heavy' full length novel that sometimes drained your emotions and you need something a bit light and fluffy story to enjoy in between to bring back the mood. Well, I can assure you that this novella is 'crispy' enough to enjoy as one 'snack read'.
September 9, 2021
It doesn’t happen very often, but this book left me wanting… wanting vengeance… wanting justice… or even just a plain ole apology…
IMO the whole romance was overshadowed by the King’s treatment of Solae. And with that being such a huge part of the plot, I was so disappointed when we were just left hanging… yes the romance and book in general got an HEA… but the unresolved daddy issues just killed me.
For such a short book it’s ridiculous to think how much I craved the King seeing Solae for who he was, and Solae getting some recognition and maybe some love in return. But nope… didn’t happen… ***sad tears***
IMO the whole romance was overshadowed by the King’s treatment of Solae. And with that being such a huge part of the plot, I was so disappointed when we were just left hanging… yes the romance and book in general got an HEA… but the unresolved daddy issues just killed me.
For such a short book it’s ridiculous to think how much I craved the King seeing Solae for who he was, and Solae getting some recognition and maybe some love in return. But nope… didn’t happen… ***sad tears***
February 18, 2023
This one's okay. The plot's good, but the execution was less tight than this author's capable of.
February 27, 2017
Cortito y cursi pero no es gran cosa porque me encanta los fairytales.
December 20, 2021
I had to drop this in the third chapter as it creeped me out. I was creeped out well before that, but read that far to give it a chance to change the dynamic, but nope. The Prince is so very desperate for attention and the ML is so instantly pushy about instigating a physical relationship that I found it very eww, even though the attraction was mutual. I'm never fond of insta-lust as a plot mechanic as it feels like a shortcut to skip the first third to half of a book to get to touching without any trust or relationship building, but when the relationship is this unbalanced, it's extra not great. It's not dubcon, but the experience and confidence disparity is so vast that it feels like it, especially with how grabby the ML is and how little explicit consent there is to that from the MC. *Shudder*
May 15, 2024
Read twice in Fairytales Slashed 4.
A shunned witch prince in a cursed and isolated kingdom meets a kind man and gets acknowledged for the first time in his life.
A shunned witch prince in a cursed and isolated kingdom meets a kind man and gets acknowledged for the first time in his life.
June 23, 2017
Book – The Prince of the Moon
Author – Megan Derr
Star rating - ★★★☆☆
No. of Pages – 81
Cover – Okay.
POV – 3rd person, dual POV
Would I read it again – Probably not.
Genre – LGBT, Fantasy, Fairytale
** COPY RECEIVED THROUGH NETGALLEY **
This story was a little different and a little familiar, all at the same time. It had hints of Snow White, Rapunzel and other fairytale characters to it, while also being about a witch who had cursed an entire kingdom to winter. Not a new concept, but the way it was handled certainly was.
I enjoyed the plot and how it unravelled, finding that Solae was charming, relateable and sweet. He was a great character to have the POV of, while Millio didn't get to tell his side as often, but had an impact as the witch who broke rules and did what was best, regardless of the consequences.
It began with 'once upon a time' and a retelling of the entire back plot of the story as if it was a book Solae was reading, yet it knew too much, predicted what was about to happen and Solae acted as if he didn't know half the information in the story that he had been, apparently, reading. That part, for me, was a little cheesy and predictable.
I also really didn't get the why of why Solae had been punished for his mother's apparent crimes, while being progressively ill treated and ignored by a family who were thought to be beautiful and bright, but were nothing more than stupid egoists. It didn't make much sense to me, how not even the servants or the commoners noticed that the only decent member of the family was being hidden away, while the others were nothing more than tyrants. Not one person, until Millio arrived, saw Solae for the human being he was, innocent of any wrongdoing, and ever thought that it was wrong the way he was being treated? All because he was a witch? There isn't enough claims/backstory to suggest that witches were always considered evil to validate this intense fear people had of him. Just one witch making one King fall in love with her – even if that's what happened, which isn't clear from the ending – it not enough to explain why no one will even look at Solae. It makes no sense, to me.
There were few editing issues, though the repetition was almost identical between the storytelling portion of the first few pages to the following few pages, as Solae basically acted out what was in the 'story'.
I liked that we got a dual POV, because it showed us things about Solae that we wouldn't have known otherwise and I found the chemistry between him and Millio quite believable. However, I in no way believed the insta-lust that hit them the moment they clapped eyes on each other and I never felt that they ever progressed into a deep emotional connection with each other until the very end, which was a little late. The fact that the entire story took place over just a few days made it harder to believe. I think it could have worked if it had been a few weeks or months, but a few days just didn't over the credibility to the 'romance' aspect that I needed.
Overall, it was a decent story, but there were issues, for me. I needed a little more in terms of romance and characterisation, particularly in exploring Solae, who remained a mystery throughout most of the book. I would have liked a more concise ending, because the one I read was a little too neat and wrapped up in a bow to sit well with me. I wanted to know the truth about Solae's mother, even if it was in some sort of long lost letter that he found in an old magic book of hers, in the epilogue. Something would have been nice. Because, without that, I'm left asking questions, and I'm seriously beginning to question why his father never threw the accusation at Solae that he'd bewitched Millio the same way his mother had bewitched the King. It would have suited his purposes, but he never brought it up and I find myself wondering why.
Left with too many questions and too many niggles in the story, it was just good but not as great as it could have been, with a little more attention to detail.
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Favourite Quote
“You are the only sunlight I will ever see.”
“Should I die tomorrow on a pyre, I will think it worth it to have spent three days with you.”
Author – Megan Derr
Star rating - ★★★☆☆
No. of Pages – 81
Cover – Okay.
POV – 3rd person, dual POV
Would I read it again – Probably not.
Genre – LGBT, Fantasy, Fairytale
** COPY RECEIVED THROUGH NETGALLEY **
This story was a little different and a little familiar, all at the same time. It had hints of Snow White, Rapunzel and other fairytale characters to it, while also being about a witch who had cursed an entire kingdom to winter. Not a new concept, but the way it was handled certainly was.
I enjoyed the plot and how it unravelled, finding that Solae was charming, relateable and sweet. He was a great character to have the POV of, while Millio didn't get to tell his side as often, but had an impact as the witch who broke rules and did what was best, regardless of the consequences.
It began with 'once upon a time' and a retelling of the entire back plot of the story as if it was a book Solae was reading, yet it knew too much, predicted what was about to happen and Solae acted as if he didn't know half the information in the story that he had been, apparently, reading. That part, for me, was a little cheesy and predictable.
I also really didn't get the why of why Solae had been punished for his mother's apparent crimes, while being progressively ill treated and ignored by a family who were thought to be beautiful and bright, but were nothing more than stupid egoists. It didn't make much sense to me, how not even the servants or the commoners noticed that the only decent member of the family was being hidden away, while the others were nothing more than tyrants. Not one person, until Millio arrived, saw Solae for the human being he was, innocent of any wrongdoing, and ever thought that it was wrong the way he was being treated? All because he was a witch? There isn't enough claims/backstory to suggest that witches were always considered evil to validate this intense fear people had of him. Just one witch making one King fall in love with her – even if that's what happened, which isn't clear from the ending – it not enough to explain why no one will even look at Solae. It makes no sense, to me.
There were few editing issues, though the repetition was almost identical between the storytelling portion of the first few pages to the following few pages, as Solae basically acted out what was in the 'story'.
I liked that we got a dual POV, because it showed us things about Solae that we wouldn't have known otherwise and I found the chemistry between him and Millio quite believable. However, I in no way believed the insta-lust that hit them the moment they clapped eyes on each other and I never felt that they ever progressed into a deep emotional connection with each other until the very end, which was a little late. The fact that the entire story took place over just a few days made it harder to believe. I think it could have worked if it had been a few weeks or months, but a few days just didn't over the credibility to the 'romance' aspect that I needed.
Overall, it was a decent story, but there were issues, for me. I needed a little more in terms of romance and characterisation, particularly in exploring Solae, who remained a mystery throughout most of the book. I would have liked a more concise ending, because the one I read was a little too neat and wrapped up in a bow to sit well with me. I wanted to know the truth about Solae's mother, even if it was in some sort of long lost letter that he found in an old magic book of hers, in the epilogue. Something would have been nice. Because, without that, I'm left asking questions, and I'm seriously beginning to question why his father never threw the accusation at Solae that he'd bewitched Millio the same way his mother had bewitched the King. It would have suited his purposes, but he never brought it up and I find myself wondering why.
Left with too many questions and too many niggles in the story, it was just good but not as great as it could have been, with a little more attention to detail.
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Favourite Quote
“You are the only sunlight I will ever see.”
“Should I die tomorrow on a pyre, I will think it worth it to have spent three days with you.”
May 27, 2025
Rating: 3½ Stars
Every now and then, I come across a story that feels like a whispered secret from another world—The Prince of the Moon is one such tale. A fairytale in structure but with modern undertones, it introduces us to Solae, a gentle, kind-hearted prince wrongfully maligned for his mother’s fate and quietly exiled to a tower. His story unfolds with a poignancy that’s immediate and emotionally resonant. Solae’s innate goodness is never in question, but its origins—given the cold, even cruel treatment from his family—make him feel like a character born more of fairy dust than logic. Yet that’s part of his charm.
The arrival of Millio, the scarred curse breaker, adds a spark—both literal and emotional—that gives the first half of the novella a compelling energy. Their relationship veers into "instalove", yes, but the chemistry is sincere, and there’s something refreshing about the lack of cynicism in their connection. It’s the kind of romance that doesn’t need grand speeches to convince you; their quiet moments are enough.
Still, as enchanting as the beginning was, I couldn’t shake the feeling that the second half of the story faltered in its momentum. While the curse resolution brought an unexpected and thoughtful twist, much of the surrounding conflict was left frustratingly unresolved. The villains remain unpunished, their misdeeds seemingly swept aside, and the story ends not with justice, but with escape. For a tale that starts with such emotional weight and tension, the ending felt... emotionally thin. Some narrative threads—particularly surrounding the so-called False Queen—were left tantalizingly vague. Was she truly a villain, or merely convenient collateral in a more complex story of power, fear, and image? We never find out. That ambiguity might work in a longer, more layered novel, but here, it felt like missed potential.
It’s not that I needed a fiery reckoning; rather, I wanted the story to reckon—with its characters, its world, and especially with the notion of what makes a hero, a villain, and a kingdom.
Despite its brevity and unresolved threads, Megan Derr’s writing shines with a fairytale cadence that draws you in. There’s genuine warmth between the protagonists, and the atmosphere—equal parts dreamy and tragic—lingers after the last page. I only wish the story had been longer, not just to spend more time with Solae and Millio, but to let the world unfold with the depth it hinted at.
Recommended if you’re looking for:
- A sweet, low-angst M/M romance
- Classic fairytale elements with modern sensibilities
- Gentle protagonists and wistful magic
- A short read with emotional charm, if not closure
This isn’t a book I’ll revisit for plot, but for tone—wistful, kind, and quietly magical. And for Solae, who deserved the moon.
Every now and then, I come across a story that feels like a whispered secret from another world—The Prince of the Moon is one such tale. A fairytale in structure but with modern undertones, it introduces us to Solae, a gentle, kind-hearted prince wrongfully maligned for his mother’s fate and quietly exiled to a tower. His story unfolds with a poignancy that’s immediate and emotionally resonant. Solae’s innate goodness is never in question, but its origins—given the cold, even cruel treatment from his family—make him feel like a character born more of fairy dust than logic. Yet that’s part of his charm.
The arrival of Millio, the scarred curse breaker, adds a spark—both literal and emotional—that gives the first half of the novella a compelling energy. Their relationship veers into "instalove", yes, but the chemistry is sincere, and there’s something refreshing about the lack of cynicism in their connection. It’s the kind of romance that doesn’t need grand speeches to convince you; their quiet moments are enough.
Still, as enchanting as the beginning was, I couldn’t shake the feeling that the second half of the story faltered in its momentum. While the curse resolution brought an unexpected and thoughtful twist, much of the surrounding conflict was left frustratingly unresolved. The villains remain unpunished, their misdeeds seemingly swept aside, and the story ends not with justice, but with escape. For a tale that starts with such emotional weight and tension, the ending felt... emotionally thin. Some narrative threads—particularly surrounding the so-called False Queen—were left tantalizingly vague. Was she truly a villain, or merely convenient collateral in a more complex story of power, fear, and image? We never find out. That ambiguity might work in a longer, more layered novel, but here, it felt like missed potential.
It’s not that I needed a fiery reckoning; rather, I wanted the story to reckon—with its characters, its world, and especially with the notion of what makes a hero, a villain, and a kingdom.
Despite its brevity and unresolved threads, Megan Derr’s writing shines with a fairytale cadence that draws you in. There’s genuine warmth between the protagonists, and the atmosphere—equal parts dreamy and tragic—lingers after the last page. I only wish the story had been longer, not just to spend more time with Solae and Millio, but to let the world unfold with the depth it hinted at.
Recommended if you’re looking for:
- A sweet, low-angst M/M romance
- Classic fairytale elements with modern sensibilities
- Gentle protagonists and wistful magic
- A short read with emotional charm, if not closure
This isn’t a book I’ll revisit for plot, but for tone—wistful, kind, and quietly magical. And for Solae, who deserved the moon.
February 20, 2017
The Prince of the Moon Kindle Edition
by Megan Derr
A new fairy-tale is born.
I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review
With the impact of Beauty and the Beast, this LGBTQIA romance does what I thought was not possible. Megan Derr created an entirely new fairy-tale. The story of Solae is beautiful, giving to young men and boys their own Sleeping Beauty, Belle and Snow White. Her writing is pure bliss, although perhaps her feminization of Solae's appearance might have been a little over the top, possibly playing into some of the stereotypes that many people try to avoid. She does it so deftly though, and so thoughtfully that I can't fault her. And at times he does come over as much younger than he actually is and titch whiny. But, his past is so horrible and painful, I can see what she was aiming for.
As the A it the acronym, my experience is limited to what young men need in a fairy-tale.
Her writing is pure, clean and sweet, and her attention to detail and description is luscious. At times, I could feel the texture of the fabrics of their costumes!
This story ranks up there in my heart and mind with Cloak and Silence by Sherrilyn Kenyon in its heart. Her characters are well drawn, both heroes with strengths and damage. Millios reminds me in a way of Marris of C&S and the other League novels. Millios does steal the show.
While it probably will never be a Disney movie, complete with dancing cups and dishes, it should probably be.
If I could I would definitely give it more stars than five.
5 stars out of 5
A beautiful read for anyone with a heart, soul and a love of a HEA.
by Megan Derr
A new fairy-tale is born.
I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review
With the impact of Beauty and the Beast, this LGBTQIA romance does what I thought was not possible. Megan Derr created an entirely new fairy-tale. The story of Solae is beautiful, giving to young men and boys their own Sleeping Beauty, Belle and Snow White. Her writing is pure bliss, although perhaps her feminization of Solae's appearance might have been a little over the top, possibly playing into some of the stereotypes that many people try to avoid. She does it so deftly though, and so thoughtfully that I can't fault her. And at times he does come over as much younger than he actually is and titch whiny. But, his past is so horrible and painful, I can see what she was aiming for.
As the A it the acronym, my experience is limited to what young men need in a fairy-tale.
Her writing is pure, clean and sweet, and her attention to detail and description is luscious. At times, I could feel the texture of the fabrics of their costumes!
This story ranks up there in my heart and mind with Cloak and Silence by Sherrilyn Kenyon in its heart. Her characters are well drawn, both heroes with strengths and damage. Millios reminds me in a way of Marris of C&S and the other League novels. Millios does steal the show.
While it probably will never be a Disney movie, complete with dancing cups and dishes, it should probably be.
If I could I would definitely give it more stars than five.
5 stars out of 5
A beautiful read for anyone with a heart, soul and a love of a HEA.
December 3, 2017
Reviewed on The Blogger Girls
It’s no secret I’m a Megan Derr fan so when I saw this one was coming out, I was excited to read it. I’m not very big into reading stories in anthologies or the like so it finally gave me a chance to read this one. In this one, I loved that there was a curse on the kingdom. It was sad to see that everyone blamed Solae for that curse even though he didn’t have anything to do with it. However, I did adore the fact that Solae didn’t grow up bitter or evil. Instead, he was sweet and always thought of the kingdom first. While I enjoyed Solae as a character, though, I couldn’t really get into Millio as a character. We get his POV but I felt like we didn’t know much about him. I did love the two of them together, they were so cute and sweet!
While I enjoyed the story, I was a little disappointed in the ending. I LOVED the Solae and Million part because it was just sooooo sweet. It put a huge smile on my face BUT I was expecting things to be resolved with the bad guys in a different way. As it was, they aren’t dealt with in any way and I felt like that wasn’t right. I liked how the curse was broken but the way it was done, the people who REALLY should have realized they were the cause of the curse should have been affected in some way and they weren’t.
All in all, though, I really enjoyed this story. I loved Solae and Millio together and while I wasn’t very satisfied on how the bad guys were handled, I did love seeing everything play out and the ending between Solae and Millio was such a sweet moment, I loved it.
It’s no secret I’m a Megan Derr fan so when I saw this one was coming out, I was excited to read it. I’m not very big into reading stories in anthologies or the like so it finally gave me a chance to read this one. In this one, I loved that there was a curse on the kingdom. It was sad to see that everyone blamed Solae for that curse even though he didn’t have anything to do with it. However, I did adore the fact that Solae didn’t grow up bitter or evil. Instead, he was sweet and always thought of the kingdom first. While I enjoyed Solae as a character, though, I couldn’t really get into Millio as a character. We get his POV but I felt like we didn’t know much about him. I did love the two of them together, they were so cute and sweet!
While I enjoyed the story, I was a little disappointed in the ending. I LOVED the Solae and Million part because it was just sooooo sweet. It put a huge smile on my face BUT I was expecting things to be resolved with the bad guys in a different way. As it was, they aren’t dealt with in any way and I felt like that wasn’t right. I liked how the curse was broken but the way it was done, the people who REALLY should have realized they were the cause of the curse should have been affected in some way and they weren’t.
All in all, though, I really enjoyed this story. I loved Solae and Millio together and while I wasn’t very satisfied on how the bad guys were handled, I did love seeing everything play out and the ending between Solae and Millio was such a sweet moment, I loved it.
January 3, 2021
I loved this little book more than I thought I was going to. It was HELLA CUTE. Like, so cute. And I think I honestly teared up a few times, but that was probably because I was sleep deprived and on winter break and not thinking clearly. Or maybe I was and it was just that good. I will never know.
Anyway, this book. Oh, where to begin?
Do you like curses? Fancy two boys falling in love? Maybe a prince or two? Some magic? A little self-sacrifice? Mysteries? If you said yes to even one of those things (that probably being the two boys thing, if I'm being honest), then check out this book. Please. Do it for me.
So what's so special about it? Well, I'm not really sure. I have a soft spot for misunderstood characters like Solae, who has basically spent his entire life being blamed for the curse on his father's kingdom. He's lonely and isolated, and no one in his life has ever bothered to get to know him. Millio sees Solae for who he is, actually bothers to get to know him, and then...oh, it's just so adorable I can't stand it.
Now, for all the adorable cliches (I mean, they fall in love in like 3 days--if that isn't cliche, I don't know what is!), there are definitely some elements that need fixing. I'm always a fan of expanding these stories because Derr does such a good job with world building that I want to see more, and I never feel like I see enough, even in longer novellas like this one. There are some plot holes or some elements that needed more attention that would have received it should the book have been longer. That is always my main criticism of her work, but it bears repeating.
This was still one of my favorite books of hers so far. Really tempted for the 5 star rating, but I just can't bring myself to do it.
Anyway, this book. Oh, where to begin?
Do you like curses? Fancy two boys falling in love? Maybe a prince or two? Some magic? A little self-sacrifice? Mysteries? If you said yes to even one of those things (that probably being the two boys thing, if I'm being honest), then check out this book. Please. Do it for me.
So what's so special about it? Well, I'm not really sure. I have a soft spot for misunderstood characters like Solae, who has basically spent his entire life being blamed for the curse on his father's kingdom. He's lonely and isolated, and no one in his life has ever bothered to get to know him. Millio sees Solae for who he is, actually bothers to get to know him, and then...oh, it's just so adorable I can't stand it.
Now, for all the adorable cliches (I mean, they fall in love in like 3 days--if that isn't cliche, I don't know what is!), there are definitely some elements that need fixing. I'm always a fan of expanding these stories because Derr does such a good job with world building that I want to see more, and I never feel like I see enough, even in longer novellas like this one. There are some plot holes or some elements that needed more attention that would have received it should the book have been longer. That is always my main criticism of her work, but it bears repeating.
This was still one of my favorite books of hers so far. Really tempted for the 5 star rating, but I just can't bring myself to do it.
December 23, 2023
Solae is the third son of the king and his second wife, a witch who died under somewhat mysterious circumstances, which involved her cursing the kingdom to suffer an endless winter. Solae was raised in near isolation, bullied due to his mother's actions, and hides his witching skills in fear he'll suffer the same fate of his mother. As he grows up, he studies magic, and all kinds of witch folklore, in an attempt to break his mother's curse, which leads him to request advice from Millio, a famous curse breaker and author of multiple volumes discussing them. Boy is Solae in for a surprise when Millio shows up in person!
I think this short story was a bit of a miss. There were a lot of threads brought in and... almost none of them were addressed. What really happened with his mother and his father? He has two brothers but only one of them has a short scene towards the end. Millio is frequently described as a former courtesan and heavily scarred- what happened there? What happened in the kingdom after
I usually enjoy Derr's work but this one was a miss. 2 stars.
I think this short story was a bit of a miss. There were a lot of threads brought in and... almost none of them were addressed. What really happened with his mother and his father? He has two brothers but only one of them has a short scene towards the end. Millio is frequently described as a former courtesan and heavily scarred- what happened there? What happened in the kingdom after
I usually enjoy Derr's work but this one was a miss. 2 stars.
September 6, 2017
This was lovely, as per usual the author created such a perfect pair. They were soooo insta-love but it worked out well within the fairytale atmosphere!
The plot twist about the pure of heart was a beautiful way to end the story. At the same time, we got to see these fairy tale characters in a more realistic portrayal. Most characters ended up not being what we think at first, and that made this story so refreshing.
I would have loved to see the exchange of letters before Millio arrives to the castle though. It would have improved this and shown the gradual growth and frienship between our main characters.
The plot twist about the pure of heart was a beautiful way to end the story. At the same time, we got to see these fairy tale characters in a more realistic portrayal. Most characters ended up not being what we think at first, and that made this story so refreshing.
I would have loved to see the exchange of letters before Millio arrives to the castle though. It would have improved this and shown the gradual growth and frienship between our main characters.
April 16, 2018
This is a dreamy novella-length fairytale, one of Megan Derr's specialities. I loved the setting and the set-up, and how really awful the villains were without being caricatures.
The ending felt a little rushed? I'd have liked to linger over the climax a little more, but personally I loved the resolution decisions Derr made here. The villains don't exactly get a good old comeuppance, but here the best revenge is both living well and knowing you were *right*, which I appreciate.
The ending felt a little rushed? I'd have liked to linger over the climax a little more, but personally I loved the resolution decisions Derr made here. The villains don't exactly get a good old comeuppance, but here the best revenge is both living well and knowing you were *right*, which I appreciate.
May 20, 2017
A cute fairy tale about a cursed kingdom trapped in ice. It's pretty short so there is little character development and they tend to be either entirely good or evil, but it works with this type of story.
December 7, 2017
Very cute! I love the idea of a rugged and world-traveled fantasy adventurer coming across a shy reclusive mage and opening up his world. It was very pleasant read with some moments of true tension to break up all the sweetness. I am really excited to read more by Megan Derr and have already bought another one of her fantasy novellas.
July 12, 2020
Pretty good short read. I really just wanted to read more fr this author and stumbled upon this. The book is only about 8 chapters long. You could say to feels rushed but it s a short book so it's understandable. The magic was pretty cool. I would have liked the bad characters to be more explored so we know why they're that way, but overall not bad. 3.5/5
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