Honestly, I really wanted to like this one, folks. In fact, it is pretty dang hard for me not to like a Scottish historical romance when I find the main couple likable/respectable. What went wrong? Well, the author was taking too dang long to tell the tale regarding the heroine’s implied sexual assault when she was a young girl at the hands of Norsemen. I am not a fan of that material being interwoven in my romantic reads as it is. It is even more frustrating when it is drawn out in such a way we are told one thing, then something else is implied courtesy of the heroine’s confusing nightmares, then at 60% we find she was still a virgin and is mostly upset because she thinks she killed her attacker. If I didn’t know better, I think even the author didn’t really know what happened or kept changing her mind in how to handle this element.
At 55%, we know there may have been more than one man, there was groping, but was there more? No, I don’t want a blow by blow account, but since the author keeps shoving this in my face I wanted her just to spit it and out and be done with it. I didn’t appreciate the rehashing of it in nightmares. At first, she also implied nothing happened to the much younger sister, Gracie. Then I was lead to think otherwise. Which is it? Ms. Montclair, please make up your mind. At 60%, the hero is intimate with her and discovers she was in fact still a virgin.
Also, I could have lived without Rhona, the now deceased so can never do anything wrong wife of the hero, who he would mention at the drop of a hat. I.e., when he offered to braid the heroine’s long hair, because he did so every night while married to his beloved. At least these two women were so different he didn’t see any similarities and fell for the heroine early on in the book. He, however, had actually known the heroine for some time, just never noticed her/gave her a second thought/glance. The heroine was living with the clan during the time the hero’s wife died in childbirth, btw, and had felt bad for him.
What had me finally giving up on this one after grinding my teeth wanting the assault details put behind her? It was when I had to endure the heroine asking the hero if she could see his manly equipment right after they had a smexy moment that she ended abruptly. Frankly, folks, I felt insulted. Does the author really think I am that stupid to think that would actually happen? The “let me see/touch it, so I won’t be so afraid of it” scenario lead me to actually say aloud, “You’ve got to be kidding me!” Then they would discuss his manly family jewels in casual conversation like it was no big deal, which I found crass/crude/unbelievable. If she does think we are idiots, she has another thing coming, rather going, and that’s me as I’m going to leave this one in my “didn’t want to finish” pile and move on to something better, which is a shame because I normally like her books.
Title: Ashlyn, Series: The Highland Clan (Book 5), Author: Keira Montclair, Pages: 211, stopped reading at 60%, hero still loves deceased wife but quickly starts to fall for the heroine, implied sexual assault,
(This review is based on Kindle Unlimited version, not ARC ebook.)