This story was both predictable yet unpredictable. It doesn’t follow the same template if you will with the other contemporary romance of Susan Donovan peers – mainly Susan Elizabeth Phillips. Now before we go any further, please not that I mentioned SEP name in this review. If you need a good book, an exceptional extraordinary contemporary novel that will have you sighing, crying, laughing and a story that will be with you for life, then read one of her books. Any of them really, they’re all individually amazing though Call Me Irresistible, Breathing Room and Dream A Little Dreams are some of my favorites ones; don’t tell the others though, I heard it’s a sin to have favorites since yes, I treat these books as if they’re my children. But I’m getting off track now.
Okay, about this book. This is a political contemporary novel which unfortunately doesn’t really focus all that much on the political side of things, which honestly would be far more interesting than having Christy, Brandon and that good-for-nothing Mitchell storyline. Meet Jack Tolliver – someone please get me someone like him pronto – who was once a NFL quarterback, lost a senate election once due to a scandal about a sexist remark and was now planning on running again. The trouble was, his image needs a severe makeover to convince the general Indianapolis population to vote for him for the job. The ladies in the population might dig the womanizing bad boy but they’d need a majority votes to win the race.
Meet Samantha Monroe, a widow with two sully teenagers that she didn’t realize have suddenly grown up and who she almost knew nothing about and a three year old who wasn’t properly potty-trained, causing him to be kicked out of Wee Ones Academy – I’m not shitting you, that’s really what’s it called. Sam has a client turned friend Kara, who was involved in running Jack’s campaign. She came out with the idea to hire Sam as Jack’s pretend fiancée and in turn, Sam could pay her bills, make sure her kids have trust funds and basically get to live well off. Now there’s so many troubling things happening here that truly I’m appalled. And please don’t say I know what I’m getting into when I most probably have read the excerpt but I didn’t realize how much of an opportunist Sam is. She literally milked as much pay out as she could out of this arrangement, I don’t even understand or could comprehend why Jack would go along with this. It’s too much money just to be someone’s pretend fiancée for six months.
I don’t want to spoil too much of things, but there’s something about Samantha Monroe that just rubbed me the wrong way. I get that she’s desperate, but this is not the kind of heroine I can support or get behind. Now let’s talk about what I mentioned in the beginning. The formula of contemporary novels usually follows as: they meet, they get on each other nerves, as the dislike grows so does the sexual tension, they become friends with benefit, one of them falls in love yet the other didn’t want to commit, angst ensued before the one who didn’t want commitment come to the realization that they’re wrong and chase after their one true love. This story doesn’t go like this though we could very well tell how the plot of the whole fake fiancée thing will be found out and how Christy will ultimately get the news out. On the other hand, the hero and heroine fall in love half way through the book before they face challenges, have to go on their separate ways being miserable before finding their way back.
Anyway, the story has so much potential I was a bit disappointed how it turned out. It wasn’t bad but I expected so much more from someone who was compared to the great SEP. Granted, maybe my expectation was a tad too high but hey, I didn’t make the recommendation.
Three and a half stars for me.