Ok so...I really like all the references to the movies; with John being Dutch's brother, the joke about Schwarzennegger's sci-fi movie, etc. It was really cool, and I liked the characters ok; Rasche get way better through the book.
BUT I got two problems. John Schaefer character was...bland for me. The book start him off silent, in-tuned type, which lead me to think he was going to be smarter than Dutch (who pretty smart in the movie), but than he on his own and you realize he's really not...he doesn't piece thing together when it come to the Feds or anything. He doesn't even ask the right questions, like why the feds didn't want a fight. He just assume they covering their own butts; not thinking maybe they're trying to save millions of peoples. And I get that he has a sense on these creature but still, its like he doesn't care at all for any human life. Even when people point out that these creature could destroy the world if they want revenge, he just shrugs it off. No question if he's doing the right thing, no really planning at all other than blast things. He was just a muscle head that finally got to go buck wild with explosives. I just didn't like him, there were moments that I did, but overall I didn't care for him.
My second problem was the ending. Like John goes out of his way, to stand up with some sort of moral idea of saving people (even though what he's doing could kill millions of more people than what have already died), but he indicates he wants to stop them. That it wasn't just about surviving them, he want to stop them from killing anyone else in his city; his cops, his crooks, etc. BUT after all this, it ends with the Predators choosing to leave, John letting them, and than HE points out that they just made the hunt MORE interesting for the Predators, and that the will be back again. Meaning that instead of these hunts being more or less random every few years, they could become yearly and the death total going to skyrocket.
It just seem like a super redundant plot that had no purpose. I mean I get him trying to survive, no one going to let themselves die, but he contradicts himself when you compare that he says in the book to his actions at the end of the book. For one, he returns to a heavily populated place, like this is New York, they got a huge park. They have docks, but no just in the middle of a random street.
And there was no set up, like they had all day to plan, cause they were waiting for the right target, they even point out the thugs snoozing, waiting for action. They couldn't sit their and compile a list of what they do know; like that water mess with their tech; which they just saw hours previously. Yah they use that, but they didn't plan too, it was on the spot. He knows their masks can be messed with, that they don't notice things like knives if they grab you, etc. No traps, no arrange combat, or coordinated assault; no just go in ablaze and see what happens. I mean, they could have figure things out before they shot a ship, call the Predators down, put civilians and thugs alike to death. They had the time, the author points out they had the time.
I like a lot of things about this story but a lot of it felt pointless and bland. Which for the first Predator book I've read, that does not inspire confidant for the rest of the series of books. I do hope the next one is better.