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The Queen of Rosings Park #2
The Trouble to Check Her: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
Lydia Bennet faces the music…
Running off with Mr. Wickham was a great joke—until everything turned arsey-varsey. That spoilsport Mr. Darcy caught them and packed Lydia off to a hideous boarding school for girls who had lost their virtue.
It would improve her character, he said.
Ridiculous, she said.
Mrs. Drummond, the school’s headmistress, has shocking expectations for the girls. They must share rooms, do chores, attend lessons, and engage in charitable work, no matter how well born they might be. She even forces them to wear mobcaps! Refusal could lead to finding themselves at the receiving end of Mrs. Drummond's cane—if they were lucky. The unlucky ones could be dismissed and found a position … as a menial servant.
Everything and everyone at the school is uniformly horrid. Lydia hates them all, except possibly the music master, Mr. Amberson, who seems to have the oddest ideas about her. He might just understand her better than she understands herself.
Can she find a way to live up to his strange expectations, or will she spend the rest of her life as a scullery maid?
Sweet Regency Romance
Running off with Mr. Wickham was a great joke—until everything turned arsey-varsey. That spoilsport Mr. Darcy caught them and packed Lydia off to a hideous boarding school for girls who had lost their virtue.
It would improve her character, he said.
Ridiculous, she said.
Mrs. Drummond, the school’s headmistress, has shocking expectations for the girls. They must share rooms, do chores, attend lessons, and engage in charitable work, no matter how well born they might be. She even forces them to wear mobcaps! Refusal could lead to finding themselves at the receiving end of Mrs. Drummond's cane—if they were lucky. The unlucky ones could be dismissed and found a position … as a menial servant.
Everything and everyone at the school is uniformly horrid. Lydia hates them all, except possibly the music master, Mr. Amberson, who seems to have the oddest ideas about her. He might just understand her better than she understands herself.
Can she find a way to live up to his strange expectations, or will she spend the rest of her life as a scullery maid?
Sweet Regency Romance
288 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 30, 2016
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Maria Grace
100 books316 followersSix time BRAG Medallion Honoree, #1 Best-selling Historical Fantasy author Maria Grace has her PhD in Educational Psychology and is a 16-year veteran of the university classroom where she taught courses in human growth and development, learning, test development and counseling. None of which have anything to do with her undergraduate studies in economics/sociology/managerial studies/behavior sciences. She pretends to be a mild-mannered writer/cat-lady, but most of her vacations require helmets and waivers or historical costumes, usually not at the same time.
She stumbled into Jane Austen fan-dom in the mid '90s with Emma Thompson's Sense and Sensibility film, having somehow graduated HS without ever having read Austen. It was only a short leap then to consume all of Austen's works, in all their various media forms. In the hopes of discovering more works by Austen, she stumbled into the fan fiction forums, which naturally led to asking 'What if...' herself. Twenty nine books later, she still asks that question.
She writes gaslamp fantasy, historical romance and non-fiction to help justify her research addiction.
She stumbled into Jane Austen fan-dom in the mid '90s with Emma Thompson's Sense and Sensibility film, having somehow graduated HS without ever having read Austen. It was only a short leap then to consume all of Austen's works, in all their various media forms. In the hopes of discovering more works by Austen, she stumbled into the fan fiction forums, which naturally led to asking 'What if...' herself. Twenty nine books later, she still asks that question.
She writes gaslamp fantasy, historical romance and non-fiction to help justify her research addiction.
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August 21, 2016
It is helpful to understand that this is a sequel to Mistaking Her Character: A Pride and Prejudice Variation, although this is a stand-alone novel and it is not absolutely necessary to read the previous book. You will want to keep in mind, though, that Mr. Bennet was transformed to DOCTOR Bennet and previously was the private doctor caring for Anne DeBourgh at Rosings. He also was far from being a benign but disinterested parent; instead, he has rained criticism and disdain upon all his daughters, although he still never disciplined them properly. Lydia disgraced herself in somewhat similar fashion to the original, having allowed Mr. Wickham to have his way with her. Doctor Bennet washed his hands of her, and Lizzy and Mr. Darcy have taken over guardianship. They enroll her in Mrs. Drummond's school for wayward girls in the hopes that Lydia will learn discipline and proper manners there.
The Trouble to Check Her: A Pride and Prejudice Variation begins with Lydia's arrival at the school. She is appalled to learn she has to wear a mob cap, lose the designation of "Miss Bennet," do the chores of a common servant, and apply herself to lessons in a variety of subjects. Mrs. Drummond is a force to be reckoned with, though, and Lydia fears having the headmistress' cane used on her for infraction of the rules, so Lydia does her best to conform while inwardly seething over this unfair treatment. Her friends, Amelia and Joan, feel the same, but she is stuck with Juliana as a roommate. Juliana is sweet and docile, somewhat similar in personality to Jane but not as self-centered (again, a deviation in Jane's character found in the previous book). Juliana also happens to be pregnant, meaning that Lydia often has to do extra work that her roommate is unable to do.
While Lydia chafes at the regimen, she gradually comes to appreciate the opportunity to develop her artistic and musical talents. The new music instructor, Mr. James Amberson, who is Mrs. Drummond's nephew, gently encourages her, but he has secrets of his own. Things get really interesting as an arranged marriage is in the works for Annabelle Fitzgilbert, one of Lydia's schoolmates, with Sir Anthony, but they have some issues to work out between them. Lydia also faces a medical emergency.
I've read and enjoyed all of Maria Grace's novels, and this is no exception. Her writing is superb. Lydia grows as a character from a selfish, immature girl to a humble, mannerly young lady in gradual and believable fashion, and all the supporting players are given three-dimensional personalities. Considering how rarely Lydia gets a book of her own, it's fun to see her given the spotlight and made a sympathetic character.
The Trouble to Check Her: A Pride and Prejudice Variation begins with Lydia's arrival at the school. She is appalled to learn she has to wear a mob cap, lose the designation of "Miss Bennet," do the chores of a common servant, and apply herself to lessons in a variety of subjects. Mrs. Drummond is a force to be reckoned with, though, and Lydia fears having the headmistress' cane used on her for infraction of the rules, so Lydia does her best to conform while inwardly seething over this unfair treatment. Her friends, Amelia and Joan, feel the same, but she is stuck with Juliana as a roommate. Juliana is sweet and docile, somewhat similar in personality to Jane but not as self-centered (again, a deviation in Jane's character found in the previous book). Juliana also happens to be pregnant, meaning that Lydia often has to do extra work that her roommate is unable to do.
While Lydia chafes at the regimen, she gradually comes to appreciate the opportunity to develop her artistic and musical talents. The new music instructor, Mr. James Amberson, who is Mrs. Drummond's nephew, gently encourages her, but he has secrets of his own. Things get really interesting as an arranged marriage is in the works for Annabelle Fitzgilbert, one of Lydia's schoolmates, with Sir Anthony, but they have some issues to work out between them. Lydia also faces a medical emergency.
I've read and enjoyed all of Maria Grace's novels, and this is no exception. Her writing is superb. Lydia grows as a character from a selfish, immature girl to a humble, mannerly young lady in gradual and believable fashion, and all the supporting players are given three-dimensional personalities. Considering how rarely Lydia gets a book of her own, it's fun to see her given the spotlight and made a sympathetic character.
September 5, 2016
I had originally intended to have a vlog in defense of Lydia Bennet filmed to go along with today's review, but alas, I somehow managed not to account for Labor Day, and that just didn't happen. Next year, I suppose, but I do have to say, I've come to look at a lot of Austen characters differently as I've gotten older and pondered more, and I can't seem to muster up the annoyance and dislike of Lydia that I once held. (And even though I didn't end up talking about her in it, Lydia was actually one of the main inspirations behind this book chat about Austen's bitches, in which I found myself defending characters I never thought I would, including the likes of Caroline Bingley and Mrs Norris! I know, I surprised myself. And we're all just gonna ignore that unfortunate lipstick choice, 'k?)
But all of this is to say, since I am always on the look out for Austen rewrites that address characters beyond just Lizzie & Darcy, I've been finding myself especially curious to see what writers would do with Lydia's story, and whether she can be made sympathetic and still retain her Lydia-ness — so of course, I was very happy to learn that the second book in Maria Grace's Queen of Rosings Park series was tackling "the Lydia problem"! And for the most part, I think it does so quite well.
Now, before I get into all of the pros and cons and whys, I need to make clear that the Queen of Rosings Park series takes a very different approach to the canon of Pride & Prejudice, shaking pretty much everything up and creating a whole new (and rather unpleasant) upbringing for the Bennet sisters. This means that the Lydia we know from P&P is already on quite a different path than what we're used to. I mean, she's still Lydia, and she still does the traditional thoughtless-Lydia things. But her life and the events that have formed her are just not the same, and that really comes into play in this story, in how her transformation comes about. But though her life and experiences are so different, and her internalized feelings maybe more extreme as a result, I found them to be a pretty fascinating and potentially accurate reflection of who she is or could be.
The idea of Lydia as a creative, who loves to draw and paint and seems to have almost an inexplicably exceptional natural talent for it, at first seemed a little off to me. I couldn't picture Lydia applying herself to something, and I wasn't sure if she really had that spark of creativity and intelligence needed to be the talented artist that she appeared to be. But then — silly as it is — I recalled the scene with the bonnet, the very ugly bonnet, that she might as well buy as not; she had plans, you see, to pick it to pieces and rework it. On first reading, this seems like another bit of frivolity on her part -- shallow, heedless, bad with money, idle hands and devils work and all that. But actually it speaks to a a self-assuredness that she can remake it into something more, and a desire for creativity and occupation -- albeit not one she finds boring. Add in the fact that the Bennet girls never had masters to teach them such things, or seek out the seeds of such a talent, and it becomes a little less far-fetched that those seeds could be inside Lydia, just waiting to burst forth.
It actually became one of my favorite aspects of the story, seeing Lydia's burgeoning ability, almost an awakening, and watching how it brings her to life. (Having this an aspect of her brain and personality also makes sense in other ways: many creatives struggle with the mundane, some with learning things in a traditional manner; many are flamboyant, messy, and flout convention -- there are a lot of aspects of her personality that actually dovetail quite nicely with this choice on Grace's part.) Her growing passion for art, and the realization that she has a talent and isn't just a trifling, silly girl, actually works (in a rather sad way), with some of the negative aspects of her life — and I don't just mean the altered course that Maria Grace has laid out. Even the treatment of her family in the original text plays well with Trouble-Lydia's need for approval, and general amazement that she's good for/at something. It is actually very sad, and sadly realistic, and makes you question whether her unchecked penchant for fun at all costs is a distraction from how unhappy and undervalued she feels — and how in turn, this would make her exceedingly easy prey for Wickham...
I found these things very fascinating, and they added such a nice layer to the story, because not only do they serve to give Lydia more depth, but they also cause me to reflect back on the original text in new ways, which is part of why I love Austenesque stories so much. (This, by the way, is something I find Maria Grace particularly talented at.) I had only two real detractions, and these are they:
1) There came a point where the male lead made my skin crawl a little bit, and I was almost really put off by him, and their relationship. BUT I came to realize that this is just as much a story of redemption for him as it is for her, and if I can forgive her some things, I can forgive him, too, so long as he's demonstrated a willingness to be better (and he has. He certainly has).
and 2) It definitely needs a little more Lydia feel. I make allowances for the fact that this is, as mentioned, a totally new interpretation of her (and all of the characters), and so, because her life has been so different, she's obviously not going to behave quite as Austen's Lydia would. Bus she starts out a bit too demure and tractable, and she learns and grows too easily. I can't help but feel Lydia would dig in her heels more, and she's certainly not an easy character to make feel shame (as evidenced by her wedding and reaction in the original text -- she was essentially ruined, and still found it all a lark). Even in her manner of speech, she feels a bit too mature and buttoned up, right from the start, for me. I need a few more "Oh, la!"s and general noisy exclamations. This Lydia is no wallflower, certainly, but she's lacking that characteristic boisterousness that makes Lydia Lydia. And frankly, I want to see a Lydia that can be "reformed" and have a Happy Ever After while not being totally dampened or losing her spark.
But again, Grace has a juggling act of being both true to Austen and to the quite altered retelling that she's set out to tell, and I do make allowances for that. All told, this is another strong book in a fascinating series, and though it may be too far removed from the original to make it to everyone's liking, I think it is an excellent example of what a classic-inspired retelling or continuation can be. Definitely recommended for fans of the series, JAFF, and those curious about Lydia (as well as those who just plain like historical romance that falls on the more wholesome, rather than steamy, side). If you're reading it for the Austen: definitely read book 1 first; you'll really need that world-building. If reading it for the histrom, you could probably jump right in, without knowing more than the basics of P&P, and still find it completely enjoyable.
Reviewed September 5, 2016
But all of this is to say, since I am always on the look out for Austen rewrites that address characters beyond just Lizzie & Darcy, I've been finding myself especially curious to see what writers would do with Lydia's story, and whether she can be made sympathetic and still retain her Lydia-ness — so of course, I was very happy to learn that the second book in Maria Grace's Queen of Rosings Park series was tackling "the Lydia problem"! And for the most part, I think it does so quite well.
Now, before I get into all of the pros and cons and whys, I need to make clear that the Queen of Rosings Park series takes a very different approach to the canon of Pride & Prejudice, shaking pretty much everything up and creating a whole new (and rather unpleasant) upbringing for the Bennet sisters. This means that the Lydia we know from P&P is already on quite a different path than what we're used to. I mean, she's still Lydia, and she still does the traditional thoughtless-Lydia things. But her life and the events that have formed her are just not the same, and that really comes into play in this story, in how her transformation comes about. But though her life and experiences are so different, and her internalized feelings maybe more extreme as a result, I found them to be a pretty fascinating and potentially accurate reflection of who she is or could be.
The idea of Lydia as a creative, who loves to draw and paint and seems to have almost an inexplicably exceptional natural talent for it, at first seemed a little off to me. I couldn't picture Lydia applying herself to something, and I wasn't sure if she really had that spark of creativity and intelligence needed to be the talented artist that she appeared to be. But then — silly as it is — I recalled the scene with the bonnet, the very ugly bonnet, that she might as well buy as not; she had plans, you see, to pick it to pieces and rework it. On first reading, this seems like another bit of frivolity on her part -- shallow, heedless, bad with money, idle hands and devils work and all that. But actually it speaks to a a self-assuredness that she can remake it into something more, and a desire for creativity and occupation -- albeit not one she finds boring. Add in the fact that the Bennet girls never had masters to teach them such things, or seek out the seeds of such a talent, and it becomes a little less far-fetched that those seeds could be inside Lydia, just waiting to burst forth.
It actually became one of my favorite aspects of the story, seeing Lydia's burgeoning ability, almost an awakening, and watching how it brings her to life. (Having this an aspect of her brain and personality also makes sense in other ways: many creatives struggle with the mundane, some with learning things in a traditional manner; many are flamboyant, messy, and flout convention -- there are a lot of aspects of her personality that actually dovetail quite nicely with this choice on Grace's part.) Her growing passion for art, and the realization that she has a talent and isn't just a trifling, silly girl, actually works (in a rather sad way), with some of the negative aspects of her life — and I don't just mean the altered course that Maria Grace has laid out. Even the treatment of her family in the original text plays well with Trouble-Lydia's need for approval, and general amazement that she's good for/at something. It is actually very sad, and sadly realistic, and makes you question whether her unchecked penchant for fun at all costs is a distraction from how unhappy and undervalued she feels — and how in turn, this would make her exceedingly easy prey for Wickham...
I found these things very fascinating, and they added such a nice layer to the story, because not only do they serve to give Lydia more depth, but they also cause me to reflect back on the original text in new ways, which is part of why I love Austenesque stories so much. (This, by the way, is something I find Maria Grace particularly talented at.) I had only two real detractions, and these are they:
1) There came a point where the male lead made my skin crawl a little bit, and I was almost really put off by him, and their relationship. BUT I came to realize that this is just as much a story of redemption for him as it is for her, and if I can forgive her some things, I can forgive him, too, so long as he's demonstrated a willingness to be better (and he has. He certainly has).
and 2) It definitely needs a little more Lydia feel. I make allowances for the fact that this is, as mentioned, a totally new interpretation of her (and all of the characters), and so, because her life has been so different, she's obviously not going to behave quite as Austen's Lydia would. Bus she starts out a bit too demure and tractable, and she learns and grows too easily. I can't help but feel Lydia would dig in her heels more, and she's certainly not an easy character to make feel shame (as evidenced by her wedding and reaction in the original text -- she was essentially ruined, and still found it all a lark). Even in her manner of speech, she feels a bit too mature and buttoned up, right from the start, for me. I need a few more "Oh, la!"s and general noisy exclamations. This Lydia is no wallflower, certainly, but she's lacking that characteristic boisterousness that makes Lydia Lydia. And frankly, I want to see a Lydia that can be "reformed" and have a Happy Ever After while not being totally dampened or losing her spark.
But again, Grace has a juggling act of being both true to Austen and to the quite altered retelling that she's set out to tell, and I do make allowances for that. All told, this is another strong book in a fascinating series, and though it may be too far removed from the original to make it to everyone's liking, I think it is an excellent example of what a classic-inspired retelling or continuation can be. Definitely recommended for fans of the series, JAFF, and those curious about Lydia (as well as those who just plain like historical romance that falls on the more wholesome, rather than steamy, side). If you're reading it for the Austen: definitely read book 1 first; you'll really need that world-building. If reading it for the histrom, you could probably jump right in, without knowing more than the basics of P&P, and still find it completely enjoyable.
Reviewed September 5, 2016
May 10, 2021
Source: I received an ARC copy of this book from the author in return for an honest review.
Mr. Darcy has sent Lydia off to a girls boarding school in hopes that she may be reformed. Is her fate to be better than the wife of Mr. Wickham? Not in her mind it isn't. The owner and mistress, Mrs. Drummond was starch and stiff in Lydia's eyes and no one understood her...well maybe her new friends Amelia and Joan did. But are they really her friends? The music teacher, Mr. Amberson is odd but he nurtures talent and offers advice in a way that doesn't come across as a lecture..."Condemnation is far easier than compassion..."
For me, this book was raw emotion. The first chapter alone sets the stage. Lydia is angry, afraid and refuses to face the consequences of her actions. You feel these emotions with her and when she sees the flash of red from her cape that Wickham bought her as her trunks are being unpacked, she breaks down and cries and so did I. Ms. Grace's ability to have you feel empathy for Lydia as she learns some harsh lessons and some hard truths, is so beautifully done. Throughout this book, I was so choked up hoping Lydia would come to realize who her true friends were and that she still had choices. There are many powerful passages and evocative scenes to this story. There is such flow, like a wave, that carries this story to completion. Like Elizabeth in Book 1, the mental anguish inflicted by Dr. Bennet is heartbreaking, but there is an inner core to Lydia that one never suspects. Ms. Grace has given her wings and it's a joy to see her fly.
The Trouble to Check Her is Book 2 in the Queen of Rosings Park series. It can be read as a stand alone but I recommend reading Book 1 to have a more clear understanding of the storyline.
Mr. Darcy has sent Lydia off to a girls boarding school in hopes that she may be reformed. Is her fate to be better than the wife of Mr. Wickham? Not in her mind it isn't. The owner and mistress, Mrs. Drummond was starch and stiff in Lydia's eyes and no one understood her...well maybe her new friends Amelia and Joan did. But are they really her friends? The music teacher, Mr. Amberson is odd but he nurtures talent and offers advice in a way that doesn't come across as a lecture..."Condemnation is far easier than compassion..."
For me, this book was raw emotion. The first chapter alone sets the stage. Lydia is angry, afraid and refuses to face the consequences of her actions. You feel these emotions with her and when she sees the flash of red from her cape that Wickham bought her as her trunks are being unpacked, she breaks down and cries and so did I. Ms. Grace's ability to have you feel empathy for Lydia as she learns some harsh lessons and some hard truths, is so beautifully done. Throughout this book, I was so choked up hoping Lydia would come to realize who her true friends were and that she still had choices. There are many powerful passages and evocative scenes to this story. There is such flow, like a wave, that carries this story to completion. Like Elizabeth in Book 1, the mental anguish inflicted by Dr. Bennet is heartbreaking, but there is an inner core to Lydia that one never suspects. Ms. Grace has given her wings and it's a joy to see her fly.
The Trouble to Check Her is Book 2 in the Queen of Rosings Park series. It can be read as a stand alone but I recommend reading Book 1 to have a more clear understanding of the storyline.
June 20, 2016
Book 2 The Queen of Rosings Park: OMG!!!
I put off reading this book 2 in The Queen of Rosings series by Maria Grace for the simple fact I didn’t care about the Lydia character and didn’t think I cared about what happened to her. I finally decided to bite the bullet and simply get it out of my TBR pile. Oh, my goodness, was I ever wrong.
I would suggest not skipping over book one. It is possible to read this as a stand-a-lone; there are enough hints at the back story to let the reader know what has gone on before. Having said that, if this were read first…you will definitely want to read book one in order to better understand the hints, flashbacks and reflections Lydia has regarding her parents, sisters and even Wickham.
Book one focused on Elizabeth, but it also laid the foundation for the character of Dr. and Mrs. Bennet and that... is the main thread that runs through both books. Based on that, it would be best to start with book one…Mistaking Her Character. This second book focuses completely on Lydia with references to the rest of the family and their dynamics. Mr. and Mrs. Darcy do not appear again until the end.
Our story opens with a recalcitrant Lydia being shipped off to Mrs. Drummond’s boarding school for girls who have lost their virtue. She is not best pleased with her situation. She is rude to everyone, and blames all for her ill treatment. It proceeds as you would think. There is the usual resistance to doing chores that she feels are beneath her. She rebels and sulks using tactics that normally worked at home only to discover they will not work at Mrs. Drummond’s. No one cares what she thinks or feels. She is there to improve.
As we progress through our story we see the dynamics within the society of the other students as they too have had to adjust to their surroundings. Many have come from families within the various levels of society. They have shamed their families and have been cast aside in order to improve their situation/attitude. For some, if they improve, they will be received back into their family and society. If they fail to improve, then they will be dead to their family and forced into a life of service.
There are friends to be made in spite of her placement. Annabelle and Juliana are delightful characters. I just loved them. There are also those Caroline Bingley types that just grate the nerves and never seem to learn their lesson no matter the opportunities placed before them. They will always crash and burn. It was amazing to watch these girls do just that…and make life miserable for those around them.
You know we have to proceed through the angst and the sullen attitude that Lydia is known for. However, as we journey with her we see the façade surrounding her began to crack and crumble. Soon we begin to see a glimpse of a Lydia we have never known before. We are also privy to the affects her family had on her development. I was touched by how she perceived her place within the Bennet family. I ached with her as she began to realize the lax parenting from her mother and father. It was touching to watch as she began to emerge from the depths of her character and to surface as a new creation, a new Lydia that we could like and love.
Mr. Amberson was the music teacher that unlocked the door to Lydia’s creativity. How many times has a teacher had the privilege of unlocking the potential within their students? How delightful that we got to see this happen with Lydia. I was so moved by how the author evoked such powerful descriptive words to show us what was truly within Lydia Bennet. OMG!!! I was blown away. It was so moving being swept away with her art, her music and as love blossomed within a heart so sensitive to those around her.
I was mesmerized by the writing at this point. It was so different from the first of the book I couldn’t believe it was the same author. I simply could not put it down. I finally had to go to bed and finished it the next morning. OMG!!! I cannot tell you how expressive and emotional the glimpse we were given as Lydia and James [Amberson] played the pianoforte together…it was sensual, sexual, emotion evoking and I was almost embarrassed as we were privy to such soul rendering feelings that words could not express. I was speechless and moved to tears, it was so beautiful. Well done Maria Grace.
Perhaps this writing is too close to Father’s Day and I am too emotional. I so resent Dr. Bennet after reading these books. It is not canon and Dr. Bennet is definitely not our gentle Mr. Bennet. This man is someone completely different and his behavior is reprehensible. I cannot like him. I will not like him and his actions put into motion all that has happened to his family. It is sad and heartbreaking as Lizzy and Lydia reconcile and discuss what has gone on within their family since Lydia left. I wanted to cry for them.
As we draw to the close of our story, Elizabeth and Lydia have an opportunity to discuss their sisters. Jane, in canon, was always portrayed as so perfect. Grace pulls back the outer layer that surrounds Jane and reveals the true inner core of what motivates her. It is shocking and yet so revealing. I hurt for these sisters. I am humbled by what Grace has written and…[it must be the hormones]…I simply want to cry my eyes out for them. WOW!!! What a story and I almost missed it.
I put off reading this book 2 in The Queen of Rosings series by Maria Grace for the simple fact I didn’t care about the Lydia character and didn’t think I cared about what happened to her. I finally decided to bite the bullet and simply get it out of my TBR pile. Oh, my goodness, was I ever wrong.
I would suggest not skipping over book one. It is possible to read this as a stand-a-lone; there are enough hints at the back story to let the reader know what has gone on before. Having said that, if this were read first…you will definitely want to read book one in order to better understand the hints, flashbacks and reflections Lydia has regarding her parents, sisters and even Wickham.
Book one focused on Elizabeth, but it also laid the foundation for the character of Dr. and Mrs. Bennet and that... is the main thread that runs through both books. Based on that, it would be best to start with book one…Mistaking Her Character. This second book focuses completely on Lydia with references to the rest of the family and their dynamics. Mr. and Mrs. Darcy do not appear again until the end.
Our story opens with a recalcitrant Lydia being shipped off to Mrs. Drummond’s boarding school for girls who have lost their virtue. She is not best pleased with her situation. She is rude to everyone, and blames all for her ill treatment. It proceeds as you would think. There is the usual resistance to doing chores that she feels are beneath her. She rebels and sulks using tactics that normally worked at home only to discover they will not work at Mrs. Drummond’s. No one cares what she thinks or feels. She is there to improve.
As we progress through our story we see the dynamics within the society of the other students as they too have had to adjust to their surroundings. Many have come from families within the various levels of society. They have shamed their families and have been cast aside in order to improve their situation/attitude. For some, if they improve, they will be received back into their family and society. If they fail to improve, then they will be dead to their family and forced into a life of service.
There are friends to be made in spite of her placement. Annabelle and Juliana are delightful characters. I just loved them. There are also those Caroline Bingley types that just grate the nerves and never seem to learn their lesson no matter the opportunities placed before them. They will always crash and burn. It was amazing to watch these girls do just that…and make life miserable for those around them.
You know we have to proceed through the angst and the sullen attitude that Lydia is known for. However, as we journey with her we see the façade surrounding her began to crack and crumble. Soon we begin to see a glimpse of a Lydia we have never known before. We are also privy to the affects her family had on her development. I was touched by how she perceived her place within the Bennet family. I ached with her as she began to realize the lax parenting from her mother and father. It was touching to watch as she began to emerge from the depths of her character and to surface as a new creation, a new Lydia that we could like and love.
Mr. Amberson was the music teacher that unlocked the door to Lydia’s creativity. How many times has a teacher had the privilege of unlocking the potential within their students? How delightful that we got to see this happen with Lydia. I was so moved by how the author evoked such powerful descriptive words to show us what was truly within Lydia Bennet. OMG!!! I was blown away. It was so moving being swept away with her art, her music and as love blossomed within a heart so sensitive to those around her.
I was mesmerized by the writing at this point. It was so different from the first of the book I couldn’t believe it was the same author. I simply could not put it down. I finally had to go to bed and finished it the next morning. OMG!!! I cannot tell you how expressive and emotional the glimpse we were given as Lydia and James [Amberson] played the pianoforte together…it was sensual, sexual, emotion evoking and I was almost embarrassed as we were privy to such soul rendering feelings that words could not express. I was speechless and moved to tears, it was so beautiful. Well done Maria Grace.
Perhaps this writing is too close to Father’s Day and I am too emotional. I so resent Dr. Bennet after reading these books. It is not canon and Dr. Bennet is definitely not our gentle Mr. Bennet. This man is someone completely different and his behavior is reprehensible. I cannot like him. I will not like him and his actions put into motion all that has happened to his family. It is sad and heartbreaking as Lizzy and Lydia reconcile and discuss what has gone on within their family since Lydia left. I wanted to cry for them.
As we draw to the close of our story, Elizabeth and Lydia have an opportunity to discuss their sisters. Jane, in canon, was always portrayed as so perfect. Grace pulls back the outer layer that surrounds Jane and reveals the true inner core of what motivates her. It is shocking and yet so revealing. I hurt for these sisters. I am humbled by what Grace has written and…[it must be the hormones]…I simply want to cry my eyes out for them. WOW!!! What a story and I almost missed it.
July 22, 2018
This review was first posted on Babblings of a Bookworm.
This book is a follow-on to ‘Mistaking Her Character’, which is a ‘Pride and Prejudice’ variation that I haven’t yet read, but I understand that in that variation, Mr Bennet is Dr Bennet, the private physician to Anne de Bourgh. He is a harsher and less forgiving man than Mr Bennet of canon. Here, Lydia has had a failed elopement with George Wickham but this hasn’t led to their marriage. In ‘Pride and Prejudice’, Darcy admits that his original intention was to remove Lydia from Wickham, not bring about the marriage, so I thought this was an excellent springboard for a variation:
‘He saw Wickham, and afterwards insisted on seeing Lydia. His first object with her, he acknowledged, had been to persuade her to quit her present disgraceful situation, and return to her friends as soon as they could be prevailed on to receive her, offering his assistance as far as it would go. But he found Lydia absolutely resolved on remaining where she was. She cared for none of her friends; she wanted no help of his; she would not hear of leaving Wickham; she was sure they should be married some time or other, and it did not much signify when. Since such were her feelings, it only remained, he thought, to secure and expedite a marriage.’ – from ‘Pride & Prejudice’ by Jane Austen
At first glance Lydia doesn’t seem like heroine fodder; she is flighty, silly, selfish, and she has forward manners but I always felt a little sorry for her. In ‘Pride & Prejudice’ the direction of her life is changed forever by a foolish decision made at the tender age of just 15 – it’s a high price to pay for teenage stupidity. Whose fault is it that she is so forward and over-confident? Her parents of course. Personally, I think we can absolve Mrs Bennet from a lot of the blame; she is a person of little natural refinement or taste and genuinely doesn’t see Lydia’s faults, but Mr Bennet does see her faults and is too apathetic and indolent to take the trouble to check her. Had he done so, who knows how differently she may have turned out.
When we first meet Lydia, en route to Mrs Drummell’s school for girls she is feeling extremely hard done by and unrepentant.
“You do not know—”
“I do not need to. Every girl who comes to this school has virtually the same story. Any many who would put you in position to be sent here, is no gentleman.”
Lydia tossed her head and sniffed. “Well, you are simply wrong. I am not like any of the others.”
However, held in check by fear of corporal punishment she complies with the rules and little by little a different girl emerges. She starts to understand herself and is humbled by what she sees.
Applying herself for the first time, Lydia realises that she has untapped talents; she is a gifted artist and can be a competent musician. Most helpfully of all, she also begins to realise that the most fun and attractive people in company are not always the most faithful friends and those who seem more dutiful and less exciting at first may prove to be better friends in the long run.
I loved the gradual growth in her character as she matured from a heedless, silly girl into a woman humbled by the realisation of the magnitude of her previous actions.
‘Lydia’s cheeks burned. Once she had gone into town and Mama pulled her and Kitty aside, pointing out a group of very pretty girls surrounded by a cloud of young men. She warned them to stay away from those ‘ladybirds’ as their reputations were tarnished and they were not fit company for good society. Could that be what those women were saying now—or worse?’
Lydia begins to wonder whether she will ever be worthy of being loved, but with the regard of true friends, and a growth in self-esteem related to becoming an accomplished lady she at last learns how to be a true friend herself and put the needs of others before her own. This was a real coming of age story, and I very much enjoyed seeing the least promising Bennet sister finally tapping some of her potential. I’d recommend this book and I’d rate it as a 4½ star read.
*I was provided with an ebook of this story by the author for my honest review.
This book is a follow-on to ‘Mistaking Her Character’, which is a ‘Pride and Prejudice’ variation that I haven’t yet read, but I understand that in that variation, Mr Bennet is Dr Bennet, the private physician to Anne de Bourgh. He is a harsher and less forgiving man than Mr Bennet of canon. Here, Lydia has had a failed elopement with George Wickham but this hasn’t led to their marriage. In ‘Pride and Prejudice’, Darcy admits that his original intention was to remove Lydia from Wickham, not bring about the marriage, so I thought this was an excellent springboard for a variation:
‘He saw Wickham, and afterwards insisted on seeing Lydia. His first object with her, he acknowledged, had been to persuade her to quit her present disgraceful situation, and return to her friends as soon as they could be prevailed on to receive her, offering his assistance as far as it would go. But he found Lydia absolutely resolved on remaining where she was. She cared for none of her friends; she wanted no help of his; she would not hear of leaving Wickham; she was sure they should be married some time or other, and it did not much signify when. Since such were her feelings, it only remained, he thought, to secure and expedite a marriage.’ – from ‘Pride & Prejudice’ by Jane Austen
At first glance Lydia doesn’t seem like heroine fodder; she is flighty, silly, selfish, and she has forward manners but I always felt a little sorry for her. In ‘Pride & Prejudice’ the direction of her life is changed forever by a foolish decision made at the tender age of just 15 – it’s a high price to pay for teenage stupidity. Whose fault is it that she is so forward and over-confident? Her parents of course. Personally, I think we can absolve Mrs Bennet from a lot of the blame; she is a person of little natural refinement or taste and genuinely doesn’t see Lydia’s faults, but Mr Bennet does see her faults and is too apathetic and indolent to take the trouble to check her. Had he done so, who knows how differently she may have turned out.
When we first meet Lydia, en route to Mrs Drummell’s school for girls she is feeling extremely hard done by and unrepentant.
“You do not know—”
“I do not need to. Every girl who comes to this school has virtually the same story. Any many who would put you in position to be sent here, is no gentleman.”
Lydia tossed her head and sniffed. “Well, you are simply wrong. I am not like any of the others.”
However, held in check by fear of corporal punishment she complies with the rules and little by little a different girl emerges. She starts to understand herself and is humbled by what she sees.
Applying herself for the first time, Lydia realises that she has untapped talents; she is a gifted artist and can be a competent musician. Most helpfully of all, she also begins to realise that the most fun and attractive people in company are not always the most faithful friends and those who seem more dutiful and less exciting at first may prove to be better friends in the long run.
I loved the gradual growth in her character as she matured from a heedless, silly girl into a woman humbled by the realisation of the magnitude of her previous actions.
‘Lydia’s cheeks burned. Once she had gone into town and Mama pulled her and Kitty aside, pointing out a group of very pretty girls surrounded by a cloud of young men. She warned them to stay away from those ‘ladybirds’ as their reputations were tarnished and they were not fit company for good society. Could that be what those women were saying now—or worse?’
Lydia begins to wonder whether she will ever be worthy of being loved, but with the regard of true friends, and a growth in self-esteem related to becoming an accomplished lady she at last learns how to be a true friend herself and put the needs of others before her own. This was a real coming of age story, and I very much enjoyed seeing the least promising Bennet sister finally tapping some of her potential. I’d recommend this book and I’d rate it as a 4½ star read.
*I was provided with an ebook of this story by the author for my honest review.
June 4, 2016
4.5 stars! Lydia Bennet Improves Upon Acquaintance
(Note: Potential readers should be made aware that this is the second book in Maria Grace’s The Queen of Rosings Park series. And while it is a stand alone novel, it is better to read this series in order because as fans of Maria Grace may already know, she has a penchant for altering situations and personalities!)
So yeah…I was so eager to read this book that I didn’t realize it was the second book of a series! oops! (Oh well, wouldn’t be the first time this has happened!) While I had some questions about what happened in book 1, what I did know and understand quickly was that Lydia’s attempted elopement with Wickham was unsuccessful, Mr. Bennet has disowned Lydia (and apparently has a harsh and hurtful nature!), and the newly married Darcys thought it was in Lydia’s best interest for her to attend a boarding school for young women who have lost their virtue.
As you can imagine, Lydia is not at all thrilled with this decision. She feels hurt, alone, and unloved. Mrs. Drummond’s school horrifies her – all lessons and charitable work, no fun, frivolity, or flirting. However, when Lydia stops dwelling on her own complaints of ill-use and learns more about those around her, a new awareness and understanding develops within her. She learns that her options for her future are severely limited – most girls at the school hope for an arranged marriage or position as a governess, companion, or maid. Even though the stain on her reputation has cost her better opportunities and prospects, Lydia is determined to improve, despite her uncertain and bleak future.
One area Lydia has found great solace is her art – both with drawing and playing the piano. Lydia learns a lot about herself at Mrs. Drummond’s school. She learns that she isn’t stupid and empty-headed, that she has natural artistic abilities, and that when she can’t find the correct words she can express her more complex emotions with a pencil or piano keys. Mr. Amberson, the new music master, recognizes Lydia’s talents and helps her develop them. Which leads to something of a different nature developing within Lydia’s heart…
Oh la! Do you find Lydia infuriating, immature, and overly indulged? Don’t worry, she doesn’t remain this way for long. Maria Grace’s Lydia has some depth and hidden qualities to her. I really liked how Ms. Grace illustrated a gradual and plausible improvement of Lydia’s character. Even with her changed perceptions there would be a moment or two where her selfishness or desire to complain would flair up, and I found that to be very believable. In addition, I also enjoyed how Ms. Grace portrayed Lydia as having some insecurities and a lack of confidence in her abilities. Knowing how she was treated by her sisters and parents, this is also very believable.
Aside from seeing Lydia improve upon acquaintance, the other aspect of the story I loved was this new world and set of characters introduced my Maria Grace. Mrs. Drummond, the teachers of her school, the other students – all were interesting, memorable, and well-drawn. I especially loved Miss Fitzgilbert and Mr. Ambrose and was so happy to see both these characters featured prominently. Moreover, my heart swelled to see Lydia learn to appreciate and value people that she didn’t before. The relationships she developed with friends, teachers, and family members were heartwarming and gratifying.
Even if you are not a fan of Lydia and believe she has no good qualities to speak of, I entreat you to give this story a try. Maria Grace takes one of the least favorable characters in Pride and Prejudice and creates a sympathetic and delightful tale filled with heart, friendship, and music.
Now to get my hands on Book 1 – Mistaking Her Character!
(Note: Potential readers should be made aware that this is the second book in Maria Grace’s The Queen of Rosings Park series. And while it is a stand alone novel, it is better to read this series in order because as fans of Maria Grace may already know, she has a penchant for altering situations and personalities!)
So yeah…I was so eager to read this book that I didn’t realize it was the second book of a series! oops! (Oh well, wouldn’t be the first time this has happened!) While I had some questions about what happened in book 1, what I did know and understand quickly was that Lydia’s attempted elopement with Wickham was unsuccessful, Mr. Bennet has disowned Lydia (and apparently has a harsh and hurtful nature!), and the newly married Darcys thought it was in Lydia’s best interest for her to attend a boarding school for young women who have lost their virtue.
As you can imagine, Lydia is not at all thrilled with this decision. She feels hurt, alone, and unloved. Mrs. Drummond’s school horrifies her – all lessons and charitable work, no fun, frivolity, or flirting. However, when Lydia stops dwelling on her own complaints of ill-use and learns more about those around her, a new awareness and understanding develops within her. She learns that her options for her future are severely limited – most girls at the school hope for an arranged marriage or position as a governess, companion, or maid. Even though the stain on her reputation has cost her better opportunities and prospects, Lydia is determined to improve, despite her uncertain and bleak future.
One area Lydia has found great solace is her art – both with drawing and playing the piano. Lydia learns a lot about herself at Mrs. Drummond’s school. She learns that she isn’t stupid and empty-headed, that she has natural artistic abilities, and that when she can’t find the correct words she can express her more complex emotions with a pencil or piano keys. Mr. Amberson, the new music master, recognizes Lydia’s talents and helps her develop them. Which leads to something of a different nature developing within Lydia’s heart…
Oh la! Do you find Lydia infuriating, immature, and overly indulged? Don’t worry, she doesn’t remain this way for long. Maria Grace’s Lydia has some depth and hidden qualities to her. I really liked how Ms. Grace illustrated a gradual and plausible improvement of Lydia’s character. Even with her changed perceptions there would be a moment or two where her selfishness or desire to complain would flair up, and I found that to be very believable. In addition, I also enjoyed how Ms. Grace portrayed Lydia as having some insecurities and a lack of confidence in her abilities. Knowing how she was treated by her sisters and parents, this is also very believable.
Aside from seeing Lydia improve upon acquaintance, the other aspect of the story I loved was this new world and set of characters introduced my Maria Grace. Mrs. Drummond, the teachers of her school, the other students – all were interesting, memorable, and well-drawn. I especially loved Miss Fitzgilbert and Mr. Ambrose and was so happy to see both these characters featured prominently. Moreover, my heart swelled to see Lydia learn to appreciate and value people that she didn’t before. The relationships she developed with friends, teachers, and family members were heartwarming and gratifying.
Even if you are not a fan of Lydia and believe she has no good qualities to speak of, I entreat you to give this story a try. Maria Grace takes one of the least favorable characters in Pride and Prejudice and creates a sympathetic and delightful tale filled with heart, friendship, and music.
Now to get my hands on Book 1 – Mistaking Her Character!
April 1, 2016
I had started reading this book on a Fan fiction site several months ago and knew I had to buy it as soon as it was released.
This is a truly original look at the characters of Pride and Prejudice. This is a sequel to Mistaking Her Character: A Pride and Prejudice Variation. You aren't required to read the first book to enjoy this one but it will add to your enjoyment.
This story begins with Lydia Bennet arriving alone at a Seminary for Young ladies in the English countryside. She has been sent there as a result of her attempted and thwarted elopement with Wickham. Mr. Bennet; who is a cruel tyrant in this series, has washed his hands of her; while the Darcy's have opted to send her to be reformed and reeducated.
The early Lydia is the silly, spoiled creature of Miss Austen's original, but quickly learning her place in the world and how her missteps not only ruined her reputation but damaged her family. She sees and experiences life on the other side of the baize door; forced to clean and mend and care for others. Gradually she comes to the realization that she had little to offer and was unnecessarily cruel.
As she improves in not just attitude but mind and soul we meet other damaged young ladies; who are also attempting to work work their way back to the good graces of society and their families.
This story is beautiful and compelling. A must read.
This is a truly original look at the characters of Pride and Prejudice. This is a sequel to Mistaking Her Character: A Pride and Prejudice Variation. You aren't required to read the first book to enjoy this one but it will add to your enjoyment.
This story begins with Lydia Bennet arriving alone at a Seminary for Young ladies in the English countryside. She has been sent there as a result of her attempted and thwarted elopement with Wickham. Mr. Bennet; who is a cruel tyrant in this series, has washed his hands of her; while the Darcy's have opted to send her to be reformed and reeducated.
The early Lydia is the silly, spoiled creature of Miss Austen's original, but quickly learning her place in the world and how her missteps not only ruined her reputation but damaged her family. She sees and experiences life on the other side of the baize door; forced to clean and mend and care for others. Gradually she comes to the realization that she had little to offer and was unnecessarily cruel.
As she improves in not just attitude but mind and soul we meet other damaged young ladies; who are also attempting to work work their way back to the good graces of society and their families.
This story is beautiful and compelling. A must read.
September 15, 2016
What a wonderful book! I don't normally go for too many sequels and particularly not ones that aren't about Elizabeth and Darcy, however I am so glad I made this one of the exceptions. I enjoyed the book that this follows, Mistaking Her Character, and love Maria Grace's writing so I knew I was in with a good chance of an enjoyable ride. This really was 5 stars of pleasure for me. I thoroughly enjoyed Lydia's well paced journey, and the characters of the other girls at the school and the impact they made on our reluctant heroine. Mrs Drummond reminded me of my own headmistress so much! I was also rewarded with a lovely little bit of Elizabeth and Darcy's input at the end. Now, Maria Grace, I wonder what Kitty is up to?
March 16, 2023
This is a wonderful continuation to the series. This book follows Lydia after her fall from grace. It is quite interesting how Ms Grace reintroduced the reader to Lydia as childish, selfish and self-absorbed at the beginning of the tale but she slowly started improving herself without losing her vivacious nature. This is a book that I know I will come back to read again and again.
September 21, 2020
Loved! So terrific!
Reread: Probably my favorite Lydia story. Disappointed that at the end of the next book in the series she is portrayed more flighty again. This book though gets her just right.
Reread: Probably my favorite Lydia story. Disappointed that at the end of the next book in the series she is portrayed more flighty again. This book though gets her just right.
April 26, 2016
I will start off by saying that Lydia has never been one of my favorite characters from Pride and Prejudice. But Ms. Grace has done a fantastic of redeeming the youngest Bennet daughter in my eyes. I've always believed that Lydia and Wickham were never a good fit and that they should have ended up with different partners. The idea of Lydia being sent off to school to better herself has always in my mind been a good idea. Actually I think Kitty needs to be sent too but that's just my opinion.
In this book Lydia does start off as a unappreciative brat but she grows into this mature young woman who I wouldn't mind calling a friend. I also loved Mr. Anderson as a suitor for her. I enjoyed that he had a scandalous past just like the girls at the school. This novel is a great addition to The Queen of Rosings Park series and I'm looking forward to the next in the series.
Rating: 4½ stars out of 5
In this book Lydia does start off as a unappreciative brat but she grows into this mature young woman who I wouldn't mind calling a friend. I also loved Mr. Anderson as a suitor for her. I enjoyed that he had a scandalous past just like the girls at the school. This novel is a great addition to The Queen of Rosings Park series and I'm looking forward to the next in the series.
Rating: 4½ stars out of 5
November 2, 2016
The story continues with this second book in the Rosings series with the tale of Lydia. After her disgrace she is sent to Mrs. Drummond boarding school for basically fallen females. Can Lydia change and learn where she went wrong, can there ever be a happy ending for her.
I really enjoyed the story and the style of writing was a joy to read. Hoping there will be another in the series. Though I think I might have to go back and re-read the first book.
I really enjoyed the story and the style of writing was a joy to read. Hoping there will be another in the series. Though I think I might have to go back and re-read the first book.
May 17, 2016
This is one of my favorite P & P variations. Lydia Bennet finally gets it right. She changes enough to change her destiny.
April 14, 2016
This may be my favorite Maria Grace work to date! It was such an original story, it had so many compelling characters and was told beautifully.
Jane Austen would be proud.
Jane Austen would be proud.
February 27, 2019
I really enjoyed this book the transformation of Lydia was stunning
April 29, 2018
I read this book on Maria Grace's blog and on the Austen Variations site, and I loved it!! It's the second book in the Queen of Rosings Park series...although, in this volume, there is neither hide nor hair of the "Queen of Rosings Park," Lady Catherine. Mr. Darcy has given Lydia the opportunity to attend a "finishing school" of sorts--Mrs. Drummond's School for Girls, an institution for young ladies like Lydia who have lost their reputations to men who refused to marry them. Darcy has agreed to pay Lydia's tuition, but if she is expelled, she is completely on her own and will likely have to work as a servant.
Lydia enters the school in typical Lydia-style, immediately finding and befriending the rebels of the school and disdaining the young ladies who are trying to make amends for serious mistakes in their lives. Lydia is upset that she cannot room with Amelia and Joan, the aforementioned rebels, but instead must share a room with Juliana, a girl who is hugely pregnant and too sweet and naive for Lydia's tastes. Lydia detests the lessons, especially the new music teacher, Mr. Amberson, who chides her for her lack of practice on the pianoforte. And to be expected to clean her own room...like a maid-of-all-work?? No thank you!!
Will Lydia end up out on the streets so many miles from home, or will she begin to find her worth as she learns to work, study, and even play the pianoforte?
A wonderful story--with some romance from a very unusual direction!! I very much enjoyed reading it as a weekly serial and also now in e-book form!!
Lydia enters the school in typical Lydia-style, immediately finding and befriending the rebels of the school and disdaining the young ladies who are trying to make amends for serious mistakes in their lives. Lydia is upset that she cannot room with Amelia and Joan, the aforementioned rebels, but instead must share a room with Juliana, a girl who is hugely pregnant and too sweet and naive for Lydia's tastes. Lydia detests the lessons, especially the new music teacher, Mr. Amberson, who chides her for her lack of practice on the pianoforte. And to be expected to clean her own room...like a maid-of-all-work?? No thank you!!
Will Lydia end up out on the streets so many miles from home, or will she begin to find her worth as she learns to work, study, and even play the pianoforte?
A wonderful story--with some romance from a very unusual direction!! I very much enjoyed reading it as a weekly serial and also now in e-book form!!
May 18, 2021
After being so thoroughly disappointed by Mistaking her Character a years or two ago, I wrote off Grac's work. But recently Misty from The Book Rat spoke so highly of The Trouble to Check her, that I decided to give Grace another shot. I don't know what changed, but I this one really worked for me.
Lydia isn't 100% cannon, the premise shifts her starting point somewhat, but she's still the flighty, self-centered, thoughtless, frivolous girl we know from the original, just with a few more practical skills to start with. She complains and gossips her way through the beginning of the book in a way that is authentic to the original character. And then she starts to change, ever so slightly at first, in ways that also feel authentic. She takes steps forwards and backwards in recognizing and considering other people's feelings. She finds an outlet for her passion in art and music. She starts to recognize manipulation when she sees it. All of these changes happen gradually enough that they felt convincing.
The romance is sweet and swoony, but it's not the main focus of the novel. It's mostly about Lydia's growth. This novel worked for me, and I want to spend more time with Grace's characters.
Lydia isn't 100% cannon, the premise shifts her starting point somewhat, but she's still the flighty, self-centered, thoughtless, frivolous girl we know from the original, just with a few more practical skills to start with. She complains and gossips her way through the beginning of the book in a way that is authentic to the original character. And then she starts to change, ever so slightly at first, in ways that also feel authentic. She takes steps forwards and backwards in recognizing and considering other people's feelings. She finds an outlet for her passion in art and music. She starts to recognize manipulation when she sees it. All of these changes happen gradually enough that they felt convincing.
The romance is sweet and swoony, but it's not the main focus of the novel. It's mostly about Lydia's growth. This novel worked for me, and I want to spend more time with Grace's characters.
April 9, 2020
Maria Grace is one of my favorite writers of Pride and Prejudice variations. She won my heart with her Jane Austen's Dragons series and I have been enjoying exploring her author titles. The Trouble to Check Her accomplished something I never thought possible- she made me empathize with Lydia Bennet and care about both her back story and her future. I have thought many times since reading this about the messages we tell our children and how Lydia doesn't develop her other talents until she is forced into an environment where she is not judged solely on her looks or for being silly.
Grace does a beautiful job here exploring creativity and the need for creative expression. As a writer and an artist, I deeply related to Lydia finding her voice through art and music and how strongly people can connect over that shared language. I enjoyed all three books in The Queen of Rosings Park series, but this title really stood out and resonated for me.
Grace does a beautiful job here exploring creativity and the need for creative expression. As a writer and an artist, I deeply related to Lydia finding her voice through art and music and how strongly people can connect over that shared language. I enjoyed all three books in The Queen of Rosings Park series, but this title really stood out and resonated for me.
January 16, 2025
Lydia reveals a true goodness of character.
Maria Grace wrote a very worthy Lydia redemption story that reveals her true goodness of character—one that could only come forth without the influence or company of Mr. Bennet. I always think I won’t like a Lydia variation, but it seems I always am pleased with them in the end. I feel like this one is truly noteworthy.
I also enjoyed the narration very much. Parkin’s performance is very good. Her Lydia voice sort of grated on me for the first chapter, but isn’t that what Lydia’s voice should be? I think it softens as the tale progresses and with Lydia’s education and maturity. Her particular accomplishments with respect to art and music make her love story very unique and one you wouldn’t expect for her.
Highly recommend.
Maria Grace wrote a very worthy Lydia redemption story that reveals her true goodness of character—one that could only come forth without the influence or company of Mr. Bennet. I always think I won’t like a Lydia variation, but it seems I always am pleased with them in the end. I feel like this one is truly noteworthy.
I also enjoyed the narration very much. Parkin’s performance is very good. Her Lydia voice sort of grated on me for the first chapter, but isn’t that what Lydia’s voice should be? I think it softens as the tale progresses and with Lydia’s education and maturity. Her particular accomplishments with respect to art and music make her love story very unique and one you wouldn’t expect for her.
Highly recommend.
March 16, 2024
Trigger warnings: pregnancy trauma, loss of newborn, unsupportive family.
Lydia has been disgraced, turned out by her parents, and now by her sisters. Mr Darcy sent her away to a school for reformed girls.
Lydia cannot see what she has done wrong, is determined to fake her way out of it and get away to try to find Wickham or some other fun husband.
Instead, Lydia finds herself in a school of other young women who have been disgraced. Initially keen to join the other young women who are just trying to find whatever fun they can, she starts to respond to the positive encouragement of the headmistress, the art teacher and the new music teacher.
Lydia continues to be the fun person from P&P but also starts to discover a new side of creativity and friendship.
Beautiful spin off of P&P. Excellent story - so detailed and clever.
Lydia has been disgraced, turned out by her parents, and now by her sisters. Mr Darcy sent her away to a school for reformed girls.
Lydia cannot see what she has done wrong, is determined to fake her way out of it and get away to try to find Wickham or some other fun husband.
Instead, Lydia finds herself in a school of other young women who have been disgraced. Initially keen to join the other young women who are just trying to find whatever fun they can, she starts to respond to the positive encouragement of the headmistress, the art teacher and the new music teacher.
Lydia continues to be the fun person from P&P but also starts to discover a new side of creativity and friendship.
Beautiful spin off of P&P. Excellent story - so detailed and clever.
November 2, 2018
Excellent until the end
I was supremely impressed with this 2nd installment up until the very end. I was enthralled by the depth Lydia’s character was given. Too often Lydia is cast as a kind of Ophelia: pretty, heedless, and insignificant. A true fiscelle. I enjoyed the triumvirate of Girls and found their stories compelling too. By the time Amelia’s letter was found, however, the story became, in my opinion, cliched variation.
I was supremely impressed with this 2nd installment up until the very end. I was enthralled by the depth Lydia’s character was given. Too often Lydia is cast as a kind of Ophelia: pretty, heedless, and insignificant. A true fiscelle. I enjoyed the triumvirate of Girls and found their stories compelling too. By the time Amelia’s letter was found, however, the story became, in my opinion, cliched variation.
January 13, 2024
SO GOOD!!!!
My sister recommended this series to me after reading and I love it!!! The way Maria Grace writes her version of the beloved characters so well formed and enticing. I hardly could wait to continue reading each time I had a moment to! Lydia's transformation from a spoiled, self centered girl to a caring, mature young woman is precious and left me a little teary eyed. This is a sweet and easy, but intriguing read that I didn't want to put down!
My sister recommended this series to me after reading and I love it!!! The way Maria Grace writes her version of the beloved characters so well formed and enticing. I hardly could wait to continue reading each time I had a moment to! Lydia's transformation from a spoiled, self centered girl to a caring, mature young woman is precious and left me a little teary eyed. This is a sweet and easy, but intriguing read that I didn't want to put down!
September 12, 2017
One of the best I have read out of hundreds
Did not expect this book to have so much emotion in it . Actually I read it a couple of years ago and it didn't seem as good as it was now . Mainly because I read it out of context . I had not read the first book yet . I found myself laughing and crying which I never do . It was a delightful experience
Did not expect this book to have so much emotion in it . Actually I read it a couple of years ago and it didn't seem as good as it was now . Mainly because I read it out of context . I had not read the first book yet . I found myself laughing and crying which I never do . It was a delightful experience
October 29, 2021
After Lydia Bennet's escapade with George Wickham, she is unceremoniously carted off to a seminary for wayward girls, where, if she is lucky, she will be trained for a life in domestic service. She is not prepared for what she finds there: acceptance, friendship, purpose, and an unexpected passion.
September 2, 2023
A beautifully conceived and well written book. More precisely, its first part, where Lydia first encounters duties and responsibilities. The second part, where artistic talent awakens in Lydia and great love happens to her, spoils everything with obvious implausibility. Lydia is much more suited to Amelia's fate. It's a shame because the first half was great.
January 6, 2020
We are proud to announce that THE TROUBLE TO CHECK HER: A Pride and Prejudice Variation by Maria Grace is a B.R.A.G.Medallion Honoree. This tells readers that this book is well worth their time and money!
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January 30, 2021Made me cry happy tears
I think it lovely to reform Lydia and give her a chance at finding her inner self. I wish every Darcy had done the same. It's a shame about Jane and Kitty. Do we get to hear their stories, too?
I think it lovely to reform Lydia and give her a chance at finding her inner self. I wish every Darcy had done the same. It's a shame about Jane and Kitty. Do we get to hear their stories, too?
July 4, 2022
No Epilogue
Great book in which the response to Lydia’s attempted elopement was the right one; send her to a school where she could learn appropriate behavior. Why the 4 rating? No epilogue.
Great book in which the response to Lydia’s attempted elopement was the right one; send her to a school where she could learn appropriate behavior. Why the 4 rating? No epilogue.
September 8, 2017
Lydia's story
First story to make me cry in a long time. Characters are well rounded. Villains get there just desserts! Can't wait for the next book!
First story to make me cry in a long time. Characters are well rounded. Villains get there just desserts! Can't wait for the next book!
July 17, 2018
It seems that her writing gets better with subsequent books in the series. I enjoyed this one and would probably enjoy reading it again.
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