I'm really debating giving this "book" a 1 star rating but I will leave it as 2 for now because I did enjoy the first half. This review will contain spoilers as most of what I have a problem with will be mentioned.
To enjoy this book, please open the book to approximately the center, and tear it in half. Keep the beginning, as that is the new book with a cliff hanger ending. You can now imagine our heroes continuing down their part of finding out information about if their home country is in danger. Will our Druid (not knight), become friendlier? Will Wynter, our most grounded character and could definitely use the most character development become more interesting? In our imagination he can! What about Brenna, our council woman and sorcerous, will she have two life long friends?
Now for the 2nd half, throw away that rough draft as you won't be needing it. If you frown upon destroying any kind of literature as any civilized person would, I would recommend only reading the Maligor villain parts, as he is the most interesting character (besides our beloved Szass Tam).
Firstly, can we talk about how the main characters treated the slaves as SLAVES? They never actually freed any. "But Kyle" you may say "they bought the dwarves, and the pleasure women in the castle..." oh ho ho no I don't think so my friend, after leaving the dwarves in the cold and eating a warm meal, they threw the dwarves a bag of fruit and made their ropes a little less uncomfortable. The dwarves freed themselves. Now the women in the castle? After our "heroes" locked them in a room and later unlocked it, they all left within the night by themselves, not before we have Galvin bossing them around telling them to wake him up on time and telling a slave girl (she doesn't get a name in this book" to lead them around the castle, so still treating them like slaves. Also, to make matters worse, we are often told that the slaves are looting and stealing, giving the reader a sense that the slaves "deserved" it as they were criminals, which was not the case, most being taken from their families. The miners were not freed either, they just ran out when the mountain was going to collapse.
Now for the plot. So the "heroes" get kidnaped and are forced to work for Szass Tam, ok, kind of random but whatever, so their goal changes from "Find information about an incoming attack on our home country" to "Put a dent in Maligor's forces to ruin his plains and then leave the country with the information we have since our home country isn't in danger." Again whatever, so they are walking with the undead and Wynter just books it and almost dies from a plant? So the druid, the DRUID, the nature priest, starts slashing at the plant, and yay they save Wynter, but oh no, he now has severe brain damage, to which Galvin WISHES HIS FRIEND DIED INSTEAD OF HAVING THE MIND OF A CHILD. I am not making this up, he says it twice. So, may of you might not know this, but I worked in the disability field, and I can assure you most people would rather be alive than dead, fun fact. Ok so Galvin has his ego, and "well in nature the strong survive.." So Wynter isn't good enough to survive because Galvin, the main character, says so? ok George Milton I guess we are going to take Lennie, I mean Wynter, out back. Seriously??
So after the wraiths tell everyone how mean they are and what they do (evil ghosts that just peace out randomly even though they make their presence continuously known), we find out where the gnoll army is headed. Ok, so the next plan would be to go after the gnolls, survive, then leave Thay, right? NOPE. Hey let's explore the castle because why not. Oh look we found a map on the floor of a random jail cell to where Maligor MIGHT be located. So that's a big assumption, so instead of just leaving Galvin realizes Maligor kills animals and now it is his sole mission to defeat Maligor. They made their mission 10 times harder. Is this why Wynter was given a brain injury for this part (one that he quickly recovers from btw) so that he can't logically reason with any of them? After mostly feeling like a dungeon and dragons campaign of a random frog monster (One that bleeds acid, so naturally instead of Brenna using projectile magic Galvan the man fights it close up to protect the women) we find out that not only is Galvin a druid with animal mastery, but he can speak to ROCKS. So now Galvin is talking to the floor for half an hour, no exaggeration, it says so, he learns from the floor about Maligor's evil plans. Yada yada yada Brenna doesn't fight using her spells against Asp but throws herself at her, bunch of rocks, No qualm about killing human miners because I'm not sure, and then Galvin turns into a demon bat, is telepathic, and talks to the rocks again to help him in the final battle, all heroes go their separate ways.
Characters: Galvin is unlikable. He is self centered, has an ego, is kind of mean and rude to Brenna, and really doesn't care about Wynter. He was a normal druid until the second half, where he becomes a master swords fighter and a super druid that can change into ANY living creature, can earth bend, telepathically communicate with far away creatures, knows every animal language, and can literally speak with rocks. Such great qualities huh, well Brenna thinks so! She gets rid of all her self respect when she says the big ILY to Galvin, the best part is that he just ignored her saying that and just wants to sleep with her in the next few pages. Like WHAT. He was awful to her this entire time, showing her the minimal amount of kindness possible on the journey so far and she says she loves him and tries to kiss him?! WHAT. It's like the author was like "aw crap I knew the boss told me I had to force romance into my book some how." No. That is some patriarchal BS where the female main character has to be in love with the male main character. NO.
Wynter, although not practically interesting, becomes useless in the second half. He is always hurt, gets brain damage, and we are constantly reminded how the castle and mines are not fit for his hooves. Like why bother making him a centaur if he can't go to half the places in the adventure. Ohhh to avoid Brenna falling for him? Honestly if she got with Wynter I would have been happy, they had some great chemistry. Yes, it would have been odd, but you know what it would have been better than loving Galvin the misogynist.
Maligor is his true self the entire time and I loved it, he knew who he was and never changed. Was he evil just for the sake of being evil? Sure, but that's a classic villain for ya. Asp is interesting in her own right until she is in the mines, and Szass Tam was fun to learn about.
I really, really, wanted to prove that the reviews for this book were wrong. "I'm more than 100 pages into this book and really liking this, how could it go wrong?" Oh how I was so naïve.
If you are reading this for the Harpers series as I was, it can be an easy skip as you learn nothing new about the Harpers and Galvin and Wynter are not worth it. If you want to learn more about Thay and the Red Wizards, skip the hero parts, it's just not worth your time. The book needs to be rewritten in order to get a passing grade. The 2nd half was either lazy or rushed, and definitely forced.