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256 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 26, 2016
a. Fiona, a gently-bred bluestocking knew how to hold a gun, pretend to be a highwaywoman and snarl.
b. Percival, a big man who fought with the French wasn't able to overpower a woman. It didn't matter if he didn't have any weapons nor he was missing a leg. He can use his strength and wit. Whatever happened to his military common sense? Got hit by a canon ball during the war? Additionally, the coach driver, who was also an ex-soldier (with complete limbs, by the way) cowered from a woman who was holding a knife?? He already had an advantage because he was carrying a gun!
c. Chapter 26: Madeline had never truly harmed Fiona, only contributed to the gossip of the other girls during their season?? This is a rather idiotic logic. Besmirching someone's else reputation and laughing about it is already harmful enough.
d. Chapter 27: Arthur, Percival's younger brother, said, "A pretty woman will ease your troubles, and a marriage will ease your conscience." Sooooo da-a-a-a-aft. If Percival doesn't straighten himself while being a bachelor, he'll be more miserable after getting married. Plus, he'll be ruining another person's life. Moreover, Arthur was also such an asshole for using his brother's pain as an amusement.
e. What even it made more stupid was Percival and Fiona had been together for only 3 to 4 days but still couldn't move on after half a year. Their separation was 60x longer but they can't let go. In human standards since it was only a winter fling, they would have moved on a looong time ago.
a. In my point of view, chapter 7 is unnecessary. They could just simply skip the journey, musings and conversations (or shorten them) and head to the tavern and escape scene.
b. It took 8 chapters for Fiona to tell Percival the factuality of his abduction.
c. Chapter 19 to 22: Percival didn't explain immediately nor THO-ROUGH-LY that everything was a misunderstanding. He definitely had a lot of time in speaking about trivial stuffs but didn't efficiently use it to save Fiona.
a. Bloody useless! He didn't even punched Seymour (Fiona's uncle) for being an a-hoe. Furthermore, he was easily swayed. A little talk here, and a bit of dialogue there and voila! He believed it instantly. Sheesh! What kind of a solder he was anyway? Apparently an imbecile one that his cousin needed to save him and he still lost a leg.
b. Quitter. He gave Fiona up without giving a fight. Did really just lose a leg in a war? I think he also lost his balls somewhere during the melee.
b. Weak! Not only physically but emotionally. He couldn't even defend himself from his aunt. No wonder Arthur didn't have any respect for him.