Well now. That was something. I’m not sure if I should reflect on “Serious Potential” a bit longer, or write a review while my thoughts are still fresh. Oh, F**k it, let's just do this and move on.
First – I really, REALLY, loved book one. The vibe clearly was competing with Melissa Brayden’s beloved SOHO Savvy series (which I loved!), and the author managed to create her own characters and world of interacting lesbians that just WORKED! It was joyous without the over-the-top angst of Melissa’s three books. I couldn't wait for “Serious Potential” to arrive on Audible, and so I bought it as a Kindle book, and read it as quickly as I could. Only Georgia Beers’ puppy love book #3 deserved this rush on my part so far!
But “Serious Potential” just doesn’t repeat the joy. The key word for book two is melancholy. Unnecessary melancholy if two words are allowed. It’s like the author realized she didn’t have much angst in book one, so she doubled down on book two.
On the good side of this review, we again follow multiple pairings and could-be pairings of women we know from book one, mixed in with newcomers. Most books that present multiple threads of romance generally mess up, but the multiple romances approach continues to work well here. Over the course of many months, we participate in the lives of women we’re beginning to know much better. “Serious Potential” picks up a year after the prior book, btw.
But…drama increases exponentially, and characters fail to communicate too often and too unnecessarily. Please forgive any lack of clarity, but I hope to make a few example comments without spoilers…if I can. I’m frustrated that Meg wrote off a love interest for making a smaller mistake than did Tracey, whose love interest forgave her. Yes, people are different, but nothing felt “right” about the dichotomy. Further, the drama over Lexi and Jesse’s wedding, teased in the summary, was…a non-event. Odd that the only drama warning we had was pretty much non-drama…in a book filled with drama.
But…more of the back-story is teased about long-term couples, and the stunning surprise voyeuristic observed make out, yet it doesn't feel right leaving the resolution for the assumed book three. Well…can’t say more without spoilers.
So…bottom line….I’m really disappointed. Certainly not a 5*. I’m tempted to rate the book 3* just because I’m pissed at sitting down for a book that annoyed me. Yet, while I really want neat HEAs in my fiction books, or at least HFNs, I was hooked enough into the lives of these women that I want to see where the assumed book three will take their current relationships. So…I’m giving this a 3.5* rounded up to 4* for GoodReads. But….I don’t know that I’ll rush to buy book three….I’ll wait for the Audible book. Two years or so from now, I’ll be less pissed at several of the women, and wondering how it all worked out. It’s dogma that book two of a trilogy is the weakest. Let’s hope that’s the case here.