The title is a bit misleading. The story only covers one year of a five-year career of driving. As far as the cat, Kitty is mentioned as a side story through the bulk of the work. It isn’t until the last chapter does Rick actually start talking about his passenger.
I’ve worked in construction for over thirty years and have had plenty of experiences with truckers and dispatchers. The author does nail this on the head. They have a love-hate relationship. Several times I would give dispatchers exact instructions on what type of trailer to bring and the hours our yard would be opened. Invariably, simple instructions were apparently too easy to follow. I request a flat bed and they’d send a load in a box. The driver would have to go back to the terminal and either switch out trailers or move the load so our forks would reach. Other times they’d show up at 10:00pm or later as I was locking up the yard. They had two choices, park in the yard until 7:00am or stay at a hotel. Most of the drivers didn’t get upset, but the occasional one would show his ass and spend the night at a hotel or somewhere off my lot.
Now, let’s talk about storytelling. As I know many drivers, whether they’re OTR or Entertainment bus drivers, their stories are flowery and for the most part interesting and engaging. This story is anything but that. It’s more of a chronological account of his first year on the road and all of the deliveries he made. What helped the story along is, Rick did a lot of historical research on many of the towns, hamlets and cities he visited over the years. Triple A or Michelin might be interested in using this as a travel guide. For that, it was worth the read.
Other than that, it’s not very exciting. Remember that long, boring history book you had to read in junior high, high school or the college prep course? This is its companion. Granted, there are some great moments of storytelling, especially when he’s in Big Sky Country. The descriptions of the beauty and serenity of this part of the United States is excellent. Too bad it didn’t filter through the rest of the tale.
There are some minor grammatical issues, but nothing to detract from the story.
I always look for consistency in a tale and this one needs help.
EX: One time, he doesn’t use a pee jug, then he does, then he doesn’t. Which is it? Yes or no?
He mentions a horrific traffic accident and then never mentions where or when it happened. I understand not going into details, but it was brought up and then nothing. Don’t bring it up if you’re not going to following through.
Sever pain in his shoulder and arm. We are led to believe the pain is excruciating, And then nothing for another chapter.
The story has a lot of potential, but Rick needs to clear his mind and go back and re-read this with a fresh set of eyes.
If you’re thinking about becoming an eighteen wheel driver, this will give a good insight into the glamorous world you’re about to venture into.
Three stars