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Frozen Footprints
"Thou shalt not be afraid of the terror of the night."
When her twin brother disappears and a ransom note shows up, eighteen-year-old Charlene's world is shattered. Fearing the worst, she determines to find him before it's too late. Her quest hurls her into a twisted, frigid world of snow and ice . . . and leads to terror in an isolated cabin. Together the twins struggle for survival while enduring fierce trials of mind, body, and spirit. Devoid of all worldly comfort and consolation, will faith and hope be enough to get them through this chilling nightmare? And where is Charlene's hero when she needs one most?
Christian suspense thriller for ages 16 and up
An Amazon Kindle #1 Bestseller in Religious Drama
CALA Award Finalist
CWG Seal of Approval
When her twin brother disappears and a ransom note shows up, eighteen-year-old Charlene's world is shattered. Fearing the worst, she determines to find him before it's too late. Her quest hurls her into a twisted, frigid world of snow and ice . . . and leads to terror in an isolated cabin. Together the twins struggle for survival while enduring fierce trials of mind, body, and spirit. Devoid of all worldly comfort and consolation, will faith and hope be enough to get them through this chilling nightmare? And where is Charlene's hero when she needs one most?
Christian suspense thriller for ages 16 and up
An Amazon Kindle #1 Bestseller in Religious Drama
CALA Award Finalist
CWG Seal of Approval
286 pages, Paperback
First published November 7, 2012
1744 people are currently reading
1716 people want to read
About the author
Therese Heckenkamp
9 books221 followersBorn in Australia but raised in the USA as a homeschooled student, Therese Heckenkamp has been writing stories since before she could spell. At age 18, she completed the first draft of her first published novel. She is now the award-winning author of four Christian romance/suspense novels: Past Suspicion, Frozen Footprints, After the Thaw (a 2016 Readers' Favorite Bronze Medal Winner in Christian Fiction), and The Butterfly Recluse (her newest release).
Therese's books have reached #1 bestseller in various Amazon Kindle categories, including Religious Romance, Religious Mysteries, and Inspirational Religious Fiction.
A busy wife and mother of five, Therese fits in writing time whenever she can manage (and sometimes when she can't). A member of American Christian Fiction Writers, she looks forward to writing many more novels in the future.
Visit Therese online at ThereseHeckenkamp.com
Follow Therese on Facebook: www.facebook.com/therese.heckenkamp
Therese's books have reached #1 bestseller in various Amazon Kindle categories, including Religious Romance, Religious Mysteries, and Inspirational Religious Fiction.
A busy wife and mother of five, Therese fits in writing time whenever she can manage (and sometimes when she can't). A member of American Christian Fiction Writers, she looks forward to writing many more novels in the future.
Visit Therese online at ThereseHeckenkamp.com
Follow Therese on Facebook: www.facebook.com/therese.heckenkamp
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October 16, 2022
DNF @ 62%
I did not want to mark this DNF for a couple of reasons.
1) I was over halfway through.
2) The story is so incredibly captivating. This is one of those books that you just can't put down because you have to see how it ends. And believe me, I really want to see how it ends and I tried to keep going, but I can't bring myself to finish.
Why? Aside from a few qualms I had (I'll get into that later) my biggest hang-up was when we find out just how evil the main antagonist is and he performs a satanic wedding ceremony for two unwilling participants. I don't even feel comfortable writing what he said (let alone reading it) but it was basically Satan-worshipping. That is what made me call it quits. Now I get trying to make the villain seem as evil as possible. And up till then, he was despicable. Including this aspect to his character gave him a somewhat supernatural element and it completely turned me off and, like I said, made reading very comfortable.
Aside from that, the tone of the story felt very materialistic. The characters felt shallow and off-putting. I hated the grandfather. This is labeled as an ideal read for Christmas, but the only Christmassy element was the fact that it was the day after Christmas. That's about it as far as I read. Another issue I had was that this is labeled Christian fiction and that was very misleading. The characters are Catholic. Praying to saints, using rosaries, and attending Mass.
This isn't an all-negative review. This was fast-paced, very suspenseful and on-the-edge-of-your-seat thrilling. Despite the long chapters, I could easily devour at least two before making myself put it down and go to bed. I also really liked that there wasn't any language.
Overall, 2 stars. I personally, don't recommend this to readers of Christian fiction. But if the cons/dislikes I listed wouldn't bother you, then you will probably love this and won't be able to put it down.
I did not want to mark this DNF for a couple of reasons.
1) I was over halfway through.
2) The story is so incredibly captivating. This is one of those books that you just can't put down because you have to see how it ends. And believe me, I really want to see how it ends and I tried to keep going, but I can't bring myself to finish.
Why? Aside from a few qualms I had (I'll get into that later) my biggest hang-up was when we find out just how evil the main antagonist is and he performs a satanic wedding ceremony for two unwilling participants. I don't even feel comfortable writing what he said (let alone reading it) but it was basically Satan-worshipping. That is what made me call it quits. Now I get trying to make the villain seem as evil as possible. And up till then, he was despicable. Including this aspect to his character gave him a somewhat supernatural element and it completely turned me off and, like I said, made reading very comfortable.
Aside from that, the tone of the story felt very materialistic. The characters felt shallow and off-putting. I hated the grandfather. This is labeled as an ideal read for Christmas, but the only Christmassy element was the fact that it was the day after Christmas. That's about it as far as I read. Another issue I had was that this is labeled Christian fiction and that was very misleading. The characters are Catholic. Praying to saints, using rosaries, and attending Mass.
This isn't an all-negative review. This was fast-paced, very suspenseful and on-the-edge-of-your-seat thrilling. Despite the long chapters, I could easily devour at least two before making myself put it down and go to bed. I also really liked that there wasn't any language.
Overall, 2 stars. I personally, don't recommend this to readers of Christian fiction. But if the cons/dislikes I listed wouldn't bother you, then you will probably love this and won't be able to put it down.
March 18, 2013
Warning: do NOT pick up this book if you have (a) life responsibilities, (b) less than 24 hours to commit to reading it continuously, and/or (c) the inability to walk away from a stirring and compelling storyline. I should have taken my own warning and saved this book for vacation… It should go without saying that I loved this book–I was on the edge of my seat and I caught myself almost praying for the characters (I modified my prayers and prayed for those who may be caught in similar situations). This is a fast-paced thriller by a Catholic author, though calling it a “Catholic book” makes it sound like faith is shoved down your throat, which it is NOT. You could let your teen read it, but make sure you treat yourself to the adventure of reading it before you do! Highly recommended from me!
March 10, 2013
I'll be quite honest here. In the days after receiving the book, it sat on my "to read" pile, and I passed over it several times. I didn't think I would like this book. When I finally opened it up, I didn't feel a whole lot different. I didn't think I would like it. After the first page or two, the feeling hadn't changed. I kept thinking to myself, "if I put this book down, what am I going to read next?"
But somewhere around page four or so, she did it. Therese Heckenkamp grabbed my by the collar and hooked me in... In to a marvelous thriller of murder, dysfunctional relationships, and superb intrigue.
Other reviewers have remarked about their lack of understanding of some of the Catholic related subjects. I'm in the same boat. Not a Catholic myself, but I treated these Catholic references as an opportunity to learn more about the beliefs and practices of the Church.
I loved the characters, and found myself recollecting the bonds that I had with my brother. We were very close and he was lost in a traffic accident when he was 18. So, I could relate to the sibling bonds here.
Therese Heckenkamp is a wonderful writer, with a very positive future in writing. I look forward to future volumes from this gifted young lady, and wish her all the best as she continues to master her craft as an excellent story-teller.
This has it all.... mystery, intrigue, a screwed up family, and more. If you are looking for an interesting, compelling, and entertaining read, get ahold of this book. You will be glad you did.
I received this book directly from the author with the understanding that I would give a fair and honest appraisal. I have not personal or professional affiliations with Therese Heckenkamp or the publisher. There were not financial considerations offered nor expected regarding this review from the writer, publisher, or this reviewer. You may also find this review posted on Amazon.com; Goodreads.com; and my blog: BookReviewsByJon.wordpress.com.
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But somewhere around page four or so, she did it. Therese Heckenkamp grabbed my by the collar and hooked me in... In to a marvelous thriller of murder, dysfunctional relationships, and superb intrigue.
Other reviewers have remarked about their lack of understanding of some of the Catholic related subjects. I'm in the same boat. Not a Catholic myself, but I treated these Catholic references as an opportunity to learn more about the beliefs and practices of the Church.
I loved the characters, and found myself recollecting the bonds that I had with my brother. We were very close and he was lost in a traffic accident when he was 18. So, I could relate to the sibling bonds here.
Therese Heckenkamp is a wonderful writer, with a very positive future in writing. I look forward to future volumes from this gifted young lady, and wish her all the best as she continues to master her craft as an excellent story-teller.
This has it all.... mystery, intrigue, a screwed up family, and more. If you are looking for an interesting, compelling, and entertaining read, get ahold of this book. You will be glad you did.
I received this book directly from the author with the understanding that I would give a fair and honest appraisal. I have not personal or professional affiliations with Therese Heckenkamp or the publisher. There were not financial considerations offered nor expected regarding this review from the writer, publisher, or this reviewer. You may also find this review posted on Amazon.com; Goodreads.com; and my blog: BookReviewsByJon.wordpress.com.
Thanks. Your feedback is always appreciated.
November 17, 2012
Eighteen-year-old twins Charlene and Max Perigard have grown up under their wealthy but often cruel grandfather. When Max disappears and a ransom note is received, Charlene tries to persuade her grandfather to pay the ransom, but the older man thinks this is another attempt by his grandson to get money from him. Without her grandfather’s help, Charlene tries to find her brother before it’s too late.
Therese Heckenkamp’s second novel is an exciting page turner with non-stop action. It’s a very different experience than the author’s first book, Past Suspicion (Christian Romantic Suspense). Frozen Footprints has all the elements of an edgy thriller with Catholic references interspersed throughout the novel.
The protagonists are well-developed with flaws and strengths. The antagonists are frightening and believable. As a former court reporter, I enjoyed the courtroom chapters.
For me, as a reader, the measure of a good novel is to be there with the characters as they move forward in the story. Therese Heckenkamp’s talent as a storyteller is the ability to create a plot, characters and setting that are realistic and at the same time entertaining. Her writing style is crisp and varied and she keeps the reader on the edge of his/her seat.
Caution to parents: Some parts of this book are graphically violent. However, it is well worth the read and I highly recommend it for older teens and adults.
Therese Heckenkamp’s second novel is an exciting page turner with non-stop action. It’s a very different experience than the author’s first book, Past Suspicion (Christian Romantic Suspense). Frozen Footprints has all the elements of an edgy thriller with Catholic references interspersed throughout the novel.
The protagonists are well-developed with flaws and strengths. The antagonists are frightening and believable. As a former court reporter, I enjoyed the courtroom chapters.
For me, as a reader, the measure of a good novel is to be there with the characters as they move forward in the story. Therese Heckenkamp’s talent as a storyteller is the ability to create a plot, characters and setting that are realistic and at the same time entertaining. Her writing style is crisp and varied and she keeps the reader on the edge of his/her seat.
Caution to parents: Some parts of this book are graphically violent. However, it is well worth the read and I highly recommend it for older teens and adults.
September 9, 2016
As a Catholic and a lover of suspense novels, there is so much I could say about this riveting book! It's about time someone wrote a thriller with a Catholic twist ... and left out the foul language and "Rated R" scenes which for me spoil so many otherwise excellent books. Thank you, Therese! I'm sure many Christians will appreciate this.
From page one the reader is gripped and never let go of. I was instantly drawn into the story and found it easy to identify with the main character, 18-year-old Charlene Perigard, who, together with her twin brother Max, is thrown into a battle for survival against a ruthless killer in an isolated mountain cabin. As their situation grows more desperate, the twins find themselves turning more and more to God and His Blessed Mother, especially through the rosary, and thus a beautiful message of faith is woven into the tale (yet without being "preachy" in the least). But don't get me wrong: you don't have to be a Catholic to enjoy this book.
The only ones I would not recommend it to are those who are extremely squeamish as there are some scenes of violence. At one point the villain tortures Charlene with his putrid-smelling feet and just reading it made me want to throw up! No doubt that's the effect the author was aiming for and it definitely worked! There is also a brief reference to rape, although nothing happens, and I have to confess I found one loop-hole in the plot. (But Hollywood gets away with that all the time,doesn't it?) and it didn't detract from the rest of the story, so I still enthusiastically give it five stars.
Overall, I really enjoyed this book and look forward to the sequel. I think Mrs. Heckenkamp will emerge over time as a Catholic Lois Duncan!
(Reviewed by Susan Peek, Goodreads Author)
From page one the reader is gripped and never let go of. I was instantly drawn into the story and found it easy to identify with the main character, 18-year-old Charlene Perigard, who, together with her twin brother Max, is thrown into a battle for survival against a ruthless killer in an isolated mountain cabin. As their situation grows more desperate, the twins find themselves turning more and more to God and His Blessed Mother, especially through the rosary, and thus a beautiful message of faith is woven into the tale (yet without being "preachy" in the least). But don't get me wrong: you don't have to be a Catholic to enjoy this book.
The only ones I would not recommend it to are those who are extremely squeamish as there are some scenes of violence. At one point the villain tortures Charlene with his putrid-smelling feet and just reading it made me want to throw up! No doubt that's the effect the author was aiming for and it definitely worked! There is also a brief reference to rape, although nothing happens, and I have to confess I found one loop-hole in the plot. (But Hollywood gets away with that all the time,doesn't it?) and it didn't detract from the rest of the story, so I still enthusiastically give it five stars.
Overall, I really enjoyed this book and look forward to the sequel. I think Mrs. Heckenkamp will emerge over time as a Catholic Lois Duncan!
(Reviewed by Susan Peek, Goodreads Author)
May 16, 2013
Therese Heckenkamp's story of a brother and sister who get caught up in a nightmare beyond their control is well-written and evokes powerful emotions from the reader.
As I read, I found myself identifying more and more with the protagonist, a Christian girl who turns to prayer in even the darkest of circumstances. As the characters struggle to escape from their captor, a man who epitomizes evil itself, the difficulties of continuing to believe in God's power to deliver are revealed.
Although there are just a few main characters who are involved throughout the core of the novel, they all have very different outlooks and personalities, which helps keep things interesting and makes it easy for the reader to relate to the characters. All in all, a great read and a wonderful story of perseverance, faith, and redemption.
As I read, I found myself identifying more and more with the protagonist, a Christian girl who turns to prayer in even the darkest of circumstances. As the characters struggle to escape from their captor, a man who epitomizes evil itself, the difficulties of continuing to believe in God's power to deliver are revealed.
Although there are just a few main characters who are involved throughout the core of the novel, they all have very different outlooks and personalities, which helps keep things interesting and makes it easy for the reader to relate to the characters. All in all, a great read and a wonderful story of perseverance, faith, and redemption.
September 25, 2016
I had a preconceived notion that this YA story would be written to appeal more to females than to males. The author proved me wrong. Her handling of action and suspense should engage teenage boys as well as girls. Dainty girls sensitive to violence in fiction, be forewarned. I like that the protagonist is focused on her twin brother, not a love interest. And the brother is a well-developed character I think guys can connect with. But you needn't worry about profanity in this Catholic Christian novel.
February 21, 2013
Frozen Footprints is an intriguing thriller made for the teenagers and curious alike. The story, the tension, the wonderful imagery and descriptions make this book hard to put down.
If the prologue doesn't draw you in from the start, nothing you ever read again in life will either.
Charlene Perigard, a rich young woman was used to having a privileged and safe life under her tyrant grandfather, the well-known Mr. Perigard. All of that is taken from her when her twin brother is kid-knapped and, worst of all, because of his law-breaking past nobody, even the police believe he really was taken in a criminal act. The ransom demands millions and only his trusting sister believes the note is genuine. So the duty falls on Charlene to find Max and rescue him herself . . . but what will Charlene discover as now she is out of her comfort zone and has ignored her faith for so long? Will the religion she abandoned for years be important to her again or will she and her brother die with no chance at salvation?
This book is so descriptive the writer even challenges the talents of writers like Ted Dekker and others that are well-known. I think she is better at coming up with ways of gorgeous word-usage that make the story fly by in a wondrous fashion.
Many times I told myself to just read a chapter and by the time it ended I would say to myself "Nah. I should read just one more." This thriller writer has a way with words.
The content of the story is very well-handled. I was impressed by how realistic the relationships felt and there were many portrayed so well. I like the contrasting twin siblings. And when certain captives end up stuck with each other their love-hate struggle that would change daily just felt real. And one character who was stuck between doing what was right and what his sibling was forcing to do made me feel as like it almost hit close to home. When one is not confident about themselves somebody else will take over and force you into things.
I feel teenagers and people that are older (like me) will enjoy this read. I do have a warning though about a brief section that gets into evil themes (that part bothered me!) and some surprisingly unpleasant scenes involving violence but other than that this book is great.
I also hope this book would become an independent film (not Hollywood because they would most likely take out the religious aspect altogether or make it vague to the story). Everything that I read I could imagine as celluloid as it would take great images and make it thrilling to the story.
Frozen Footprints is clever even in its title. It lets you know that it is a thriller and Christian themed at the same time.
And it is definitely worth a read!
If the prologue doesn't draw you in from the start, nothing you ever read again in life will either.
Charlene Perigard, a rich young woman was used to having a privileged and safe life under her tyrant grandfather, the well-known Mr. Perigard. All of that is taken from her when her twin brother is kid-knapped and, worst of all, because of his law-breaking past nobody, even the police believe he really was taken in a criminal act. The ransom demands millions and only his trusting sister believes the note is genuine. So the duty falls on Charlene to find Max and rescue him herself . . . but what will Charlene discover as now she is out of her comfort zone and has ignored her faith for so long? Will the religion she abandoned for years be important to her again or will she and her brother die with no chance at salvation?
This book is so descriptive the writer even challenges the talents of writers like Ted Dekker and others that are well-known. I think she is better at coming up with ways of gorgeous word-usage that make the story fly by in a wondrous fashion.
Many times I told myself to just read a chapter and by the time it ended I would say to myself "Nah. I should read just one more." This thriller writer has a way with words.
The content of the story is very well-handled. I was impressed by how realistic the relationships felt and there were many portrayed so well. I like the contrasting twin siblings. And when certain captives end up stuck with each other their love-hate struggle that would change daily just felt real. And one character who was stuck between doing what was right and what his sibling was forcing to do made me feel as like it almost hit close to home. When one is not confident about themselves somebody else will take over and force you into things.
I feel teenagers and people that are older (like me) will enjoy this read. I do have a warning though about a brief section that gets into evil themes (that part bothered me!) and some surprisingly unpleasant scenes involving violence but other than that this book is great.
I also hope this book would become an independent film (not Hollywood because they would most likely take out the religious aspect altogether or make it vague to the story). Everything that I read I could imagine as celluloid as it would take great images and make it thrilling to the story.
Frozen Footprints is clever even in its title. It lets you know that it is a thriller and Christian themed at the same time.
And it is definitely worth a read!
February 27, 2013
This is a great thriller and at times I felt like I was watching (in my mind) Criminal Minds without the FBI being involved. The book moves a little slow at first but don't give up on it because it doesn't take long for it to grab you and once it does you can't put it down. I ended up reading the last half of the book last night until I finished it around 2 a.m. this morning. I couldn't go to bed until I finished it!
Frozen Footprints is about a rich family and a very controlling grandfather and when Max the grandson is missing and a ransome note shows up he doesn't care because he thinks Max is just doing it himself and waiting his money but Max's twin sister Charlene knows something is very wrong because her twin vibe is telling her something isn't right. Charlene goes out on her own and goes looking for Max and when she does she finds danger.
I don't want to give out the ending so I am just going to say for me I was a little disappointed that there wasn't more mention about the outcome in the last chapter (for the ones that have read the book will know what I am talking about). I felt like I would have loved to know what happened but maybe there is going to be another book in the future?
*Please note: I received a free copy of this book in exchange for my honest review.
Frozen Footprints is about a rich family and a very controlling grandfather and when Max the grandson is missing and a ransome note shows up he doesn't care because he thinks Max is just doing it himself and waiting his money but Max's twin sister Charlene knows something is very wrong because her twin vibe is telling her something isn't right. Charlene goes out on her own and goes looking for Max and when she does she finds danger.
I don't want to give out the ending so I am just going to say for me I was a little disappointed that there wasn't more mention about the outcome in the last chapter (for the ones that have read the book will know what I am talking about). I felt like I would have loved to know what happened but maybe there is going to be another book in the future?
*Please note: I received a free copy of this book in exchange for my honest review.
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February 12, 2013
Amazing story! Action packed and intriguing! The story held my interest the entire time and is a real page turner. I couldn't put it down!
August 18, 2025
It was a 5 star up until the ending. To leave an ending without closure is not something a reader will like. It would been better to leave out the trial altogether. I rate it a 4.5 star for that reason.
I will say this book had me compelled from beginning to end and its very rare that I read books in a 24 hour period. Unfortunately this book does not end in closure.
I will say this book had me compelled from beginning to end and its very rare that I read books in a 24 hour period. Unfortunately this book does not end in closure.
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May 15, 2014
I first read Therese Heckenkamp’s Catholic suspense novel Frozen Footprints about a year ago. A big fan of Heckenkamp’s work (after reading her debut novel, Past Suspicion), I meant to do a review of Frozen Footprints when I finished it; but I procrastinated just long enough to realize that if I wanted to do the book justice, I would have to re-read it so that I could write about it while the details were still fresh in my mind.
I recently did read Frozen Footprints again--and boy, am I ever glad I did! I remembered that I couldn’t stop turning the pages the first time I read it, anxious to see what was going to happen next. And I remembered that faith played a huge role in the story. But I actually had a deeper appreciation of Heckenkamp’s award-winning book (a recipient of the Catholic Writers Guild Seal of Approval) the second time I read it, even though I knew exactly what was going to happen this time around. I was struck by just how deft a storyteller she is, and just how expertly and movingly she has woven elements of the Catholic Faith into this edge-of-your-seat thriller.
The story revolves around the kidnapping of Maxwell Goodwyne Perigard III ("Max"), the teenage grandson of Maxwell Goodwyne Perigard I and the twin brother of Charlene. The twins have been under the care of their selfish and tight-fisted grandfather since their father’s accidental death left them orphans a couple of years back. Grandfather is an extremely wealthy man who lives in a lavish mansion, complete with a chapel for Mass (although outside the doors of this chapel, he doesn’t come close to acting like a Christian); his great wealth—along with the ruthless business tactics he has employed--make him a perfect target for acts of revenge.
When Max suddenly goes missing, his grandfather assumes he’s just playing a prank and doesn’t take it seriously at all. After all, he’s threatened to run away many times in the past. Charlene, however, receives a frightening call from the kidnapper, with instructions for delivering a $2 million ransom, and she intuitively knows this is no joke. When the police, over whom her grandfather has undue influence, refuse to look into the matter properly, Charlene starts doing her own detective work. Her sleuthing leads her to Max; but unfortunately, she also ends up being taken captive by the same crazed, vengeful, violent man who kidnapped her brother. The two siblings are locked in a cold, tomb-like hole, underneath a lonely ramshackle cabin in the middle of nowhere. There is no phone, no electricity…and most likely, no way out. And because it's winter and the outside world is blanketed with white, if they attempt escape they will leave easy-to-follow footprints in the snow.
Heckenkamp has created a truly terrifying character in kidnapper Abner Morrow; he is a brutal, evil man who is undoubtedly possessed by the forces of darkness. He is utterly barbaric in his treatment of the Perigard twins--and even his younger brother Clay, who unwittingly becomes part of the kidnapping plan, is not spared the violence of his words and his fists. She has also created one of the most resourceful and determined characters in Charlene Perigard, who is about as fully rounded-out as any character I’ve come across in my reading travels of late. She goes through the whole gamut of emotions in the course of the story: despair at the hopelessness of their situation; hope, which keeps her working tirelessly to come up with a way to survive the ordeal; anger—at God, at the kidnappers; empathy--for Clay, who in a way is as much a victim as she and Max; and ultimately, deep faith, which sustains her in her darkest hours.
My husband, a former military man, used to repeat that well-known adage, “There are no atheists in foxholes.” Yet it is rare in this secularized world of ours to find characters in books or movies who turn to God when they are in extremely dangerous and terrifying situations and their lives are in mortal danger. It is rare to see them turn to prayer for comfort and refuge. Heckenkamp’s characters aren’t all as strong in their faith as they should or could be when the story begins; but when they are thrown together into a living nightmare—a true life-or-death situation—they do turn to Him. Sometimes, in their desperation, they wonder if He’s listening at all. But they do pray. And a Rosary Charlene has in her pocket when she’s taken captive proves to be a life-saver, in more ways than one.
This book really has it all, truly. It’s a page-turning thrill ride; but it’s also an insightful character study, and there are even hints of a love story in there. Most of all, Frozen Footprints is a testament to the Catholic Faith, and how it makes sense of the most senseless hardships and sufferings in life. Heckenkamp shows that to believe is to know real courage in the face of fear. The last page of this book illustrates this message so beautifully that it will bring tears to your eyes.
Highly recommended!
I recently did read Frozen Footprints again--and boy, am I ever glad I did! I remembered that I couldn’t stop turning the pages the first time I read it, anxious to see what was going to happen next. And I remembered that faith played a huge role in the story. But I actually had a deeper appreciation of Heckenkamp’s award-winning book (a recipient of the Catholic Writers Guild Seal of Approval) the second time I read it, even though I knew exactly what was going to happen this time around. I was struck by just how deft a storyteller she is, and just how expertly and movingly she has woven elements of the Catholic Faith into this edge-of-your-seat thriller.
The story revolves around the kidnapping of Maxwell Goodwyne Perigard III ("Max"), the teenage grandson of Maxwell Goodwyne Perigard I and the twin brother of Charlene. The twins have been under the care of their selfish and tight-fisted grandfather since their father’s accidental death left them orphans a couple of years back. Grandfather is an extremely wealthy man who lives in a lavish mansion, complete with a chapel for Mass (although outside the doors of this chapel, he doesn’t come close to acting like a Christian); his great wealth—along with the ruthless business tactics he has employed--make him a perfect target for acts of revenge.
When Max suddenly goes missing, his grandfather assumes he’s just playing a prank and doesn’t take it seriously at all. After all, he’s threatened to run away many times in the past. Charlene, however, receives a frightening call from the kidnapper, with instructions for delivering a $2 million ransom, and she intuitively knows this is no joke. When the police, over whom her grandfather has undue influence, refuse to look into the matter properly, Charlene starts doing her own detective work. Her sleuthing leads her to Max; but unfortunately, she also ends up being taken captive by the same crazed, vengeful, violent man who kidnapped her brother. The two siblings are locked in a cold, tomb-like hole, underneath a lonely ramshackle cabin in the middle of nowhere. There is no phone, no electricity…and most likely, no way out. And because it's winter and the outside world is blanketed with white, if they attempt escape they will leave easy-to-follow footprints in the snow.
Heckenkamp has created a truly terrifying character in kidnapper Abner Morrow; he is a brutal, evil man who is undoubtedly possessed by the forces of darkness. He is utterly barbaric in his treatment of the Perigard twins--and even his younger brother Clay, who unwittingly becomes part of the kidnapping plan, is not spared the violence of his words and his fists. She has also created one of the most resourceful and determined characters in Charlene Perigard, who is about as fully rounded-out as any character I’ve come across in my reading travels of late. She goes through the whole gamut of emotions in the course of the story: despair at the hopelessness of their situation; hope, which keeps her working tirelessly to come up with a way to survive the ordeal; anger—at God, at the kidnappers; empathy--for Clay, who in a way is as much a victim as she and Max; and ultimately, deep faith, which sustains her in her darkest hours.
My husband, a former military man, used to repeat that well-known adage, “There are no atheists in foxholes.” Yet it is rare in this secularized world of ours to find characters in books or movies who turn to God when they are in extremely dangerous and terrifying situations and their lives are in mortal danger. It is rare to see them turn to prayer for comfort and refuge. Heckenkamp’s characters aren’t all as strong in their faith as they should or could be when the story begins; but when they are thrown together into a living nightmare—a true life-or-death situation—they do turn to Him. Sometimes, in their desperation, they wonder if He’s listening at all. But they do pray. And a Rosary Charlene has in her pocket when she’s taken captive proves to be a life-saver, in more ways than one.
This book really has it all, truly. It’s a page-turning thrill ride; but it’s also an insightful character study, and there are even hints of a love story in there. Most of all, Frozen Footprints is a testament to the Catholic Faith, and how it makes sense of the most senseless hardships and sufferings in life. Heckenkamp shows that to believe is to know real courage in the face of fear. The last page of this book illustrates this message so beautifully that it will bring tears to your eyes.
Highly recommended!
May 29, 2013
Frozen Footprints, penned by Therese Heckenkamp, is a page-turner Catholic thriller for teens 16 and older.
After the death of their father, eighteen-year-old twins Max and Charlene Perigard have been living with their stepmother and stepsister under the protection of their tyrannical, oil-tycoon grandfather, Maxwell Goodwyne Perigard I.
Max is totally discontented with his grandfather's demeanor and decides to confront him. After a heated argument, Max disappears. The next day, Mr. Perigard receives a ransom note demanding two million dollars, in unmarked bills, to be delivered to the Whitecap Mountain Ski Resort lodge, where Max frequently goes skiing. Mr. Perigard is convinced this is a scam by Max and refuses to pay the ransom. However, Charlene's instincts as Max's twin and an brusque telephone conversation with the kidnapper convince her that Max is in real danger. Unable to accept her grandfather's indifference regarding the kidnapper's demands, she decides to investigate. Her findings will bring extremely painful consequences to the twins.
Heckenkamp is a good story teller who keeps the reader engaged throughout the narrative with the exception of some overdramatic and questionable scenes that challenge the laws of physics and biology. The bizarre captivity chapters include one mild satanic cult ceremony and two brief but graphic torture scenes. As the story unfolds, the twins' beliefs will be tested. At the end of the story, however, the author presentsthe reader with an unexpected twist of fate and it is proved that God is always in control.
My favorite two characters were Abner Morrow and Max Perigard. I liked Abner because he was the best-developed character in the book. He was a skillful hunter. A perfect villain: extremely wicked and sarcastic, who liked to inflict pain on others. He represents the stray sheep who have bitterly left the flock and were ensnared by Satan's deceitful schemes. He preyed on and manipulated his younger brother, Clay, who was weak and insecure. Max, on the other hand, was clever, humorous, and extremely protective of his twin sister. He plays the role of the knight in shinning armor defending his beloved one.
I recommend Frozen Footprints to older teens and adults who fancy reading Catholic thrillers. Parental discretion is advised as this book is not suitable for young readers.
After the death of their father, eighteen-year-old twins Max and Charlene Perigard have been living with their stepmother and stepsister under the protection of their tyrannical, oil-tycoon grandfather, Maxwell Goodwyne Perigard I.
Max is totally discontented with his grandfather's demeanor and decides to confront him. After a heated argument, Max disappears. The next day, Mr. Perigard receives a ransom note demanding two million dollars, in unmarked bills, to be delivered to the Whitecap Mountain Ski Resort lodge, where Max frequently goes skiing. Mr. Perigard is convinced this is a scam by Max and refuses to pay the ransom. However, Charlene's instincts as Max's twin and an brusque telephone conversation with the kidnapper convince her that Max is in real danger. Unable to accept her grandfather's indifference regarding the kidnapper's demands, she decides to investigate. Her findings will bring extremely painful consequences to the twins.
Heckenkamp is a good story teller who keeps the reader engaged throughout the narrative with the exception of some overdramatic and questionable scenes that challenge the laws of physics and biology. The bizarre captivity chapters include one mild satanic cult ceremony and two brief but graphic torture scenes. As the story unfolds, the twins' beliefs will be tested. At the end of the story, however, the author presentsthe reader with an unexpected twist of fate and it is proved that God is always in control.
My favorite two characters were Abner Morrow and Max Perigard. I liked Abner because he was the best-developed character in the book. He was a skillful hunter. A perfect villain: extremely wicked and sarcastic, who liked to inflict pain on others. He represents the stray sheep who have bitterly left the flock and were ensnared by Satan's deceitful schemes. He preyed on and manipulated his younger brother, Clay, who was weak and insecure. Max, on the other hand, was clever, humorous, and extremely protective of his twin sister. He plays the role of the knight in shinning armor defending his beloved one.
I recommend Frozen Footprints to older teens and adults who fancy reading Catholic thrillers. Parental discretion is advised as this book is not suitable for young readers.
May 6, 2014
allegorical, youth-oriented, engaging
The Good: great message for teenagers; enjoyable protagonist; plot keeps you guessing
The Bad: no serious plot twist
Frozen Footprints is a novel where teenager Charlene Perigard goes on a search and rescue mission when she discovers her twin brother Max has been kidnapped and held for ransom. Because everyone else thinks that the ransom is actually a hoax, she is completely alone in her search.
Characters:
Charlene is a delightful, adorable protagonist: a caring, prudent sister with several cute little peccadilloes, such that you do become emotionally attached to her as you progress through the book. Other than Charlene, you have the skeptical, tyrannical grandfather, the mischievous, adventurous brother, the one-dimensional villain, Abner, a Satanist who is exclusively motivated by vengeance and hatred of God, and Clay, who is Abner’s brother and reluctant co-conspirator. Although he is not the main character, Clay is the central figure in the moral message of the story.
Plot:
Alongside the drama involving the physical well-being of Charlene and Max is the drama involving the spiritual well-being of Clay. He is against the cruelty of his brother; however, his feeble resistance leaves you frustrated at how pathetic he is. The reader never becomes emotionally invested in Clay, so this side of the plot falls flat. On the other hand, the plot involving Charlene and Max is intense, as you ultimately keep turning the pages to find out what happens to them.
Style:
Heckenkamp's writing style is slightly unpolished but engaging. She knows how to write effective antagonistic characters. More importantly, she knows how to keep the reader guessing. Overall, the story is enjoyable and serves as a pleasant medium to deliver the author's message which is an important one for teenagers: when you see evil being done, even by friends or family, you can’t sit idly by.
The Good: great message for teenagers; enjoyable protagonist; plot keeps you guessing
The Bad: no serious plot twist
Frozen Footprints is a novel where teenager Charlene Perigard goes on a search and rescue mission when she discovers her twin brother Max has been kidnapped and held for ransom. Because everyone else thinks that the ransom is actually a hoax, she is completely alone in her search.
Characters:
Charlene is a delightful, adorable protagonist: a caring, prudent sister with several cute little peccadilloes, such that you do become emotionally attached to her as you progress through the book. Other than Charlene, you have the skeptical, tyrannical grandfather, the mischievous, adventurous brother, the one-dimensional villain, Abner, a Satanist who is exclusively motivated by vengeance and hatred of God, and Clay, who is Abner’s brother and reluctant co-conspirator. Although he is not the main character, Clay is the central figure in the moral message of the story.
Plot:
Alongside the drama involving the physical well-being of Charlene and Max is the drama involving the spiritual well-being of Clay. He is against the cruelty of his brother; however, his feeble resistance leaves you frustrated at how pathetic he is. The reader never becomes emotionally invested in Clay, so this side of the plot falls flat. On the other hand, the plot involving Charlene and Max is intense, as you ultimately keep turning the pages to find out what happens to them.
Style:
Heckenkamp's writing style is slightly unpolished but engaging. She knows how to write effective antagonistic characters. More importantly, she knows how to keep the reader guessing. Overall, the story is enjoyable and serves as a pleasant medium to deliver the author's message which is an important one for teenagers: when you see evil being done, even by friends or family, you can’t sit idly by.
June 28, 2016
I hate to admit it, but the first words out of my mouth upon finishing this book were; "I hate you." I don't of course, but that was a tortuous cliff hanger. Especially for a book that wasn't intended to have a sequel (it's a good thing that it is going to after all.)
I was delighted to see how far Therese Heckencamp's writing has come when compared with Past Suspicion. Granted, I read the 2003 edition of that book, even though the author requested that readers read the re-release version instead. I was up late into the night reading this book.
There were a number of parts that made me feel nauseous and squeamish. This book has a lot more violence then 'Past Suspicion' did, but I still managed to enjoy the suspense and character growth.
I kept hoping that the Charlene's grandfather would see the error of his way, but alas, he had no visitation from any spirits, past, present or yet-to-come. Charlene and Max were likeable, and they both experienced character growth in the book, though it is rather difficult to pinpoint any of the spots where they were growing, and, while I never disliked Charlene, I found myself liking her better as she grew. Clay also experienced a lot of character growth and it was much easier to see that his occurred almost whenever Charlene got hurt.
Ugh, why name the evil-possessed villain Abner though. That name always makes me think of Alice Pierce as Gladys Kravitz yelling; "Abner! Abner! " and trying to convince him she saw Samantha Stephens doing something impossible.
There were a number of parts that made me feel nauseous and squeamish. This book has a lot more violence then 'Past Suspicion' did, but I still managed to enjoy the suspense and character growth.
I was delighted to see how far Therese Heckencamp's writing has come when compared with Past Suspicion. Granted, I read the 2003 edition of that book, even though the author requested that readers read the re-release version instead. I was up late into the night reading this book.
There were a number of parts that made me feel nauseous and squeamish. This book has a lot more violence then 'Past Suspicion' did, but I still managed to enjoy the suspense and character growth.
I kept hoping that the Charlene's grandfather would see the error of his way, but alas, he had no visitation from any spirits, past, present or yet-to-come. Charlene and Max were likeable, and they both experienced character growth in the book, though it is rather difficult to pinpoint any of the spots where they were growing, and, while I never disliked Charlene, I found myself liking her better as she grew. Clay also experienced a lot of character growth and it was much easier to see that his occurred almost whenever Charlene got hurt.
Ugh, why name the evil-possessed villain Abner though. That name always makes me think of Alice Pierce as Gladys Kravitz yelling; "Abner! Abner! " and trying to convince him she saw Samantha Stephens doing something impossible.
There were a number of parts that made me feel nauseous and squeamish. This book has a lot more violence then 'Past Suspicion' did, but I still managed to enjoy the suspense and character growth.
February 14, 2013
I loved this book!
The characters were awesome, I especially loved Charlene and Max, their relationship was so cool and reminded me a lot of my relationship with my brother!
This very talented authors writing hooked me on page one and I hated to put the book down from that point on!
The action, suspense and settings of the scenes were portrayed so wonderfully that I felt as though I was watching a movie play out in my head!!!
While reading this book, I found myself experiencing every emotion that the characters experienced so strongly, it felt like I was living the story with them! This the mark of a truly incredible author!!!
And the suspense! Oh my goodness, it was SO good! It is one of the most suspenseful books I have ever read, while reading Frozen Footprints there that I found myself holding my breath and literally sitting on the edge of my seat in anticipation of what would happen next!
Frozen Footprints is the definition of a suspenseful page turner! This book is a must read for all fans of Christian suspense!
I would recommend this book for mature readers, as there are a few scenes of violence that younger readers may find disturbing.
Overall, an amazing read (definitely a keeper), I really hope there will be a sequel because I was not ready to say goodbye to these characters!
Highly recommend!
I received this book from the author, in exchange for my honest review. The above is my honest opinion.
All thoughts and opinions are one hundred percent my own.
January 5, 2021
Frozen Footprints is a well-written, fast-paced Christian suspense story. I enjoyed the author's ability to make what might seem a farfetched plot quite believable, as the courageous (if a bit impetuous) Charlene, or "Char," as she does not like to be called, sets off on a single-handed mission to rescue her brother. For me at least, a suspense/thriller type story has to maintain that sense of being grounded in reality, that sense of "this could totally happen, and if it did, it would probably be just this way" or it loses me very quickly.
In this story, I was well over halfway through before doubt began to creep in, and then, it was only because of the sensationally diabolical villain, not because of anything our main characters did. They remained strong, and true to their personalities to the end, which again, isn't necessarily easy to pull of in a thriller, where character development is often lost as one narrow shave follows another.
While the development and strengthening of Charlene's faith was an important plot element, I think the author might have accomplished this just as well without having the kidnapper/villain be an actual Satan-worshipper, thus making her crisis of faith too literal, too predictable, which didn't really fit with the more subtle development through the rest of the story. It is also this particular element of the story that leads me to be cautious about recommending it, especially for younger readers.
In this story, I was well over halfway through before doubt began to creep in, and then, it was only because of the sensationally diabolical villain, not because of anything our main characters did. They remained strong, and true to their personalities to the end, which again, isn't necessarily easy to pull of in a thriller, where character development is often lost as one narrow shave follows another.
While the development and strengthening of Charlene's faith was an important plot element, I think the author might have accomplished this just as well without having the kidnapper/villain be an actual Satan-worshipper, thus making her crisis of faith too literal, too predictable, which didn't really fit with the more subtle development through the rest of the story. It is also this particular element of the story that leads me to be cautious about recommending it, especially for younger readers.
April 28, 2017
Frozen Footprints is a page-turner that kept me up past my bedtime. Despite spending most of the book in mortal peril, Charlene, Max, and Clay are well-rounded characters displaying depth. The evil villain, Abner, is multi-faceted as well. Only Max and Charlene's stone-hearted grandfather is somewhat one-dimensional, his behavior propelling Charlene into danger with his cold indifference.
The ending was PERFECT and in keeping with the novel's emphasis on faith as a sustaining constant that points to eternal joy over temporary happiness or relief from suffering. Faith, like love, is a decision.
Can't wait to delve into the the sequel!
(I received a free review copy for my honest review. The author is a fellow member of the Catholic Writers Guild.)
The ending was PERFECT and in keeping with the novel's emphasis on faith as a sustaining constant that points to eternal joy over temporary happiness or relief from suffering. Faith, like love, is a decision.
Can't wait to delve into the the sequel!
(I received a free review copy for my honest review. The author is a fellow member of the Catholic Writers Guild.)
October 14, 2020
Absolutely compelling read. The characters and situations are so real, you feel caught up in the fear and frustration as Charlene desperately searches for her missing twin.
Charlene knows something awful has happened to her brother Max when her twin intuition tells her he is in trouble. The problem is teenager Max has threatened to run away before.
Then Charlene finds her grandfather has received a ransom note. Surely now grandfather and the police will take her brothers disappearance seriously. When they insist it's a prank of Max's to get money, Charlene takes it on herself to find her brother.
Charlene knows something awful has happened to her brother Max when her twin intuition tells her he is in trouble. The problem is teenager Max has threatened to run away before.
Then Charlene finds her grandfather has received a ransom note. Surely now grandfather and the police will take her brothers disappearance seriously. When they insist it's a prank of Max's to get money, Charlene takes it on herself to find her brother.
July 9, 2018
This book was violent and disturbing. While Catholic, the themes of faith were appricated and I agreed with most of the basics, if not some of the rituals. The characters were well done and the ending...I loved that.
Simply because I found parts of this distrubing, I won't be reading more. However, if you are looking for a very relistic and evil bad guy, lots of paril, danger, and a plot that keeps you on your toes, this would be a good choice.
Simply because I found parts of this distrubing, I won't be reading more. However, if you are looking for a very relistic and evil bad guy, lots of paril, danger, and a plot that keeps you on your toes, this would be a good choice.
February 10, 2018
Great Read!
Kept me on the edge wondering what now...God never promised life without pain or suffering, but He did promise that He’d be there with us each step of the way...This story reminded me of that promise.
Kept me on the edge wondering what now...God never promised life without pain or suffering, but He did promise that He’d be there with us each step of the way...This story reminded me of that promise.
February 28, 2018
Excting thriller
Frozen Footsteps catches your interest and imagination from the first chapter. The characters are real and multi dementional. You can feel her fear,hear her desperate prayers. I recommend this book.
Frozen Footsteps catches your interest and imagination from the first chapter. The characters are real and multi dementional. You can feel her fear,hear her desperate prayers. I recommend this book.
February 27, 2013
Excellent! Very suspenseful.
August 19, 2017
Captivzting
I could not put this book down. It seemed there was never a break in the story when I could.
I could not put this book down. It seemed there was never a break in the story when I could.
January 29, 2018
Thrilling
I found this book to be a real exciting thriller. I could hardly put it down and now I look forward to the sequel...After the Thaw.
I found this book to be a real exciting thriller. I could hardly put it down and now I look forward to the sequel...After the Thaw.
August 29, 2018
Excellent read. Hard book to put down.
March 13, 2023
Just wanted to make a short elucidation: Amazon markets this book as "Christian Suspense Thriller." But this book is not Christian; it is Catholic. There's a difference. I came into this story thinking it was Christian and was surprised when I saw Catholic elements. However, this story was gripping and had a lot of statements about faith in God which I agreed with.
⚠️WARNING: Frozen Footprints contains a lot of unpalatable things. I was repulsed, disgusted, and horrified at the things Agner did (and meant to do) to Max and Charlene and Clay. However, it is a reminder that things like this are actually happening in the world today. Christians all over the world are being persecuted and tortured for their faith right now, and this should remind us to keep them in our prayers and check our own faith.
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When her twin brother Max goes missing and a ransom note comes, Charlene goes on the search to find him. No one believes her that the kidnapping is real, not even her own rich, stingy grandfather, so Charlene is desperate to find Max and prove them wrong.
Her search brings her to a snowy mountain, where she gets stranded out in the cold and receives the aid of a young man named Clay. Clay brings her into a nearby cabin, and Charlene is shocked to find that the cabin belongs to Clay's brother, Abner, Max's kidnapper. She is thrown into a dark cellar with her brother, and the two must rely on each other, and Clay, to survive captivity.
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The character development was great. Charlene, with the inner turmoil and conflict she went through, was believable, and her struggle to work out her faith was stirring. It was touching to see her mature. You see Charlene grow in her faith so much through her actions, words, and thoughts:
I didn't care for Max at the start, but as you read on, he slowly changes and draws closer to Charlene. You really see that he cares for her and you come to love him as much as you love Charlene.
Clay was an interesting character to read. He was stuck in the middle and had a lot of conflict, but ultimately he made the right choice. I really liked how he was not the typical "hot and angsty with a super ripped body" love interest you find in so many books these days (like, seriously, that trope is getting too old). He kind of reminded me of a hobbit, how he wasn't super strong or anything, yet he stood up for what was right anyway, time and time again, even though he knew he could get hurt or worse (one of the reasons why hobbits are one of my favorite fantasy characters ^‿^).
The romance wasn't excessive, and I think it was better that way. It helped to focus more on what Charlene was going through and make the story more believable.
Most of the book is centered on them in their captivity, and this sometimes made the story feel long and drawn out. However, with all the attempts they made to escape—and all of them failing—it was never uneventful for too long. They tried so many times to escape and I found myself rooting for them, holding my breath, even though I knew they were going to fail.
The plot in general was fine. I liked how you don't get the full story until closer to the end. It was both exciting and agonizing waiting and trying to figure out what really happened. However, there were times when the story just didn't feel . . . full, if you get what I mean. The story seemed a bit empty sometimes, albeit it was subtly covered up by the action. In addition, the story ends abruptly. Not exactly a major cliffhanger—it didn't bother me too much—but those of you who hate cliffhangers will probably not like it and will have to read the sequel to be sated. I personally don't think I'll read the sequel. Creating a short HEA in my mind is enough for me, as the story had adequate closure to it.
One scene I just can't get out of my head is when Abner tells Max and Charlene that he'll let them live if they deny Jesus. It was heartbreaking yet inspiring.
To see Charlene and Max come from a place of indifference about their faith to total commitment to Jesus Christ was touching and thought-provoking. It made me wonder if I will ever have the strength and courage to stay true to Jesus if I am ever faced with the same choice. Reading of their commitment and faith made me want to strengthen my own relationship with God.
I would not recommend this book to anyone who is 15 or under. I think younger readers should wait on this one till they're older. As I mentioned earlier, the majority of the book is spent on their captivity, and there are many intense, heavy scenes. There is a reference to sex, plus many appalling scenes and gore. Max gets his toe cut off, and Charlene gets branded. This is NOT a read for young minds.
"We’re not meant to ‘win.’ We’re not playing a game with God. He knows what He’s doing with us, and we have to trust Him. What can I say?” She spread her palms. “There are no easy answers. We won’t understand God’s ways till we get to heaven. That’s why we need faith.”
⚠️WARNING: Frozen Footprints contains a lot of unpalatable things. I was repulsed, disgusted, and horrified at the things Agner did (and meant to do) to Max and Charlene and Clay. However, it is a reminder that things like this are actually happening in the world today. Christians all over the world are being persecuted and tortured for their faith right now, and this should remind us to keep them in our prayers and check our own faith.
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When her twin brother Max goes missing and a ransom note comes, Charlene goes on the search to find him. No one believes her that the kidnapping is real, not even her own rich, stingy grandfather, so Charlene is desperate to find Max and prove them wrong.
Her search brings her to a snowy mountain, where she gets stranded out in the cold and receives the aid of a young man named Clay. Clay brings her into a nearby cabin, and Charlene is shocked to find that the cabin belongs to Clay's brother, Abner, Max's kidnapper. She is thrown into a dark cellar with her brother, and the two must rely on each other, and Clay, to survive captivity.
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The character development was great. Charlene, with the inner turmoil and conflict she went through, was believable, and her struggle to work out her faith was stirring. It was touching to see her mature. You see Charlene grow in her faith so much through her actions, words, and thoughts:
"Suddenly, I saw with horrible clarity what blaming God could lead to: Denying God, hating God, thinking you were your own God."
I didn't care for Max at the start, but as you read on, he slowly changes and draws closer to Charlene. You really see that he cares for her and you come to love him as much as you love Charlene.
Clay was an interesting character to read. He was stuck in the middle and had a lot of conflict, but ultimately he made the right choice. I really liked how he was not the typical "hot and angsty with a super ripped body" love interest you find in so many books these days (like, seriously, that trope is getting too old). He kind of reminded me of a hobbit, how he wasn't super strong or anything, yet he stood up for what was right anyway, time and time again, even though he knew he could get hurt or worse (one of the reasons why hobbits are one of my favorite fantasy characters ^‿^).
The romance wasn't excessive, and I think it was better that way. It helped to focus more on what Charlene was going through and make the story more believable.
Most of the book is centered on them in their captivity, and this sometimes made the story feel long and drawn out. However, with all the attempts they made to escape—and all of them failing—it was never uneventful for too long. They tried so many times to escape and I found myself rooting for them, holding my breath, even though I knew they were going to fail.
The plot in general was fine. I liked how you don't get the full story until closer to the end. It was both exciting and agonizing waiting and trying to figure out what really happened. However, there were times when the story just didn't feel . . . full, if you get what I mean. The story seemed a bit empty sometimes, albeit it was subtly covered up by the action. In addition, the story ends abruptly. Not exactly a major cliffhanger—it didn't bother me too much—but those of you who hate cliffhangers will probably not like it and will have to read the sequel to be sated. I personally don't think I'll read the sequel. Creating a short HEA in my mind is enough for me, as the story had adequate closure to it.
One scene I just can't get out of my head is when Abner tells Max and Charlene that he'll let them live if they deny Jesus. It was heartbreaking yet inspiring.
“So what will it be? Life and Satan, or death and your feeble Jesus?”
With no hesitation, I replied, “I choose Jesus Christ.”
“Jesus Christ, ”Max answered at the same moment.
To see Charlene and Max come from a place of indifference about their faith to total commitment to Jesus Christ was touching and thought-provoking. It made me wonder if I will ever have the strength and courage to stay true to Jesus if I am ever faced with the same choice. Reading of their commitment and faith made me want to strengthen my own relationship with God.
I would not recommend this book to anyone who is 15 or under. I think younger readers should wait on this one till they're older. As I mentioned earlier, the majority of the book is spent on their captivity, and there are many intense, heavy scenes. There is a reference to sex, plus many appalling scenes and gore. Max gets his toe cut off, and Charlene gets branded. This is NOT a read for young minds.
February 3, 2020
I chose this book because it was advertised as a Christian Suspense. I was surprised when i discovered that the two main characters were Catholic and so their practices of prayer and God seeking were different than mine. That was ok, and it was encouraging to watch them grow stronger in their faith through the story.
I felt that the whole unfolding story of the antagonists was overly dreadful and unsettling for me. I felt the author overdid it in trying to make them believable. However, i found i had to finish the story, but i felt a little dissatisfying.
I felt that the whole unfolding story of the antagonists was overly dreadful and unsettling for me. I felt the author overdid it in trying to make them believable. However, i found i had to finish the story, but i felt a little dissatisfying.
January 11, 2026
I did not finish this book. I just couldn't get myself to pick it up. The main characters were shallow and uninteresting and I couldn't care about them at all.
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