I don't know where to start with this book, it didn't feel like a mystery story at all, it felt like a child playing at being a detective. I had so many questions, and so many things were unexplained and unbelievable.
1) Initially the newspaper says that 'several' businesswomen have been kidnapped in the past weekend. But then, it turns out that there were only 2. 2 is not several. It also wasn't really explained how the connection between these two women's kidnappings had been made, just that they were both successful businesswomen.
2) Wendy drove me nuts moaning about waking up at 8:37, moaning about how many people are about, and moaning in general.
3) Wendy and Black decide to visit the places where the women were kidnapped, but how the hell do they know the exact locations? I very much doubt that was in the newspaper.
4) Black sniffing a bit and deciding that a man had lifted a heavy struggling load into a car right here. Really? 🙄
5) Keith is worried that his dad will be next! Er, his dad isn't a businesswoman.
6) Keith says his dad's business has picked up massively since these women were kidnapped. Er, in less than a week?
7) They look online at some list of the most successful businesses in the area, Keith's dad's business has moved up because of the women disappearing! Er, in less than a week?
8) People would prefer to go somewhere that is appropriately managed? Er, surely if these women are so successful, they have staff to the business for them? And, oh, yes, it's been less than a week!
9) Black says Keith's dad must be behind it! Wendy argues that he isn't, because she likes both Keith and his dad.
10) They hatch a plan! Wendy dresses in a suit, and puts her hair in a bun, and gets her make-up done, then walks past Keith's dad pretending to talk on the phone and tell someone that she's going to have the number one business 🙄🤦 Really????
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11) Wendy is being followed! Her businesswoman disguise yesterday must have worked!! 😲😲😲
12) Wendy goes to do some washing, and gets kidnapped!
13) She's been kidnapped by Keith's step-mother 😲 she wants Keith's dad to buy her more stuff 😲 She wants to know why Wendy was dressed as a businesswoman yesterday! She threatens to kill her 😲
14) Black gets into the house through a hole in the wall, which takes him directly to Wendy, how convenient!
15) Wendy wiggles out of the ropes she's tied up with! How convenient!
16) We're free! Shall we call the police? No! Let's find the businesswomen and set them free 🙄
17) Wendy pulls at the door with the force of 10 men 😲 How?? Just how??
18) I know, lets run into the woods (which are awfully handy). Seriously? Find someone with a phone!
19) Wendy is all happy because she's a true detective 🙄. Having a freaking laugh. What a joke.