With more than a hundred published novels and more than seventeen million copies of his books in print, USA Today bestselling author Dean Wesley Smith knows how to write fiction. And he has traversed every stage of writing along the way.
In this WMG Writer’s Guide, Dean takes you step-by-step through the stages most fiction writers go through and how not to lose hope along the way.
Want to enjoy your writing more and let your storytelling evolve in its own time? Then learn from Dean’s experience and discover what to expect at each stage of a fiction writer’s career.
“Dean Wesley Smith’s blog gives both a slightly different view of the publishing world than I’d seen before and detailed hands-on ‘here’s how to get from A to B’ instruction.” —Erin M. Hartshorn, A Resource for Writers
Dean Wesley Smith is the bestselling author of over ninety novels under many names and well over 100 published short stories. He has over eight million copies of his books in print and has books published in nine different countries. He has written many original novels in science fiction, fantasy, mystery, thriller, and romance as well as books for television, movies, games, and comics. He is also known for writing quality work very quickly and has written a large number of novels as a ghost writer or under house names.
With Kristine Kathryn Rusch, he is the coauthor of The Tenth Planet trilogy and The 10th Kingdom. The following is a list of novels under the Dean Wesley Smith name, plus a number of pen names that are open knowledge. Many ghost and pen name books are not on this list because he is under contractual obligations not to disclose that he wrote them. Many of Dean’s original novels are also under hidden pen names for marketing reasons.
Dean has also written books and comics for all three major comic book companies, Marvel, DC, and Dark Horse, and has done scripts for Hollywood. One movie was actually made.
Over his career he has also been an editor and publisher, first at Pulphouse Publishing, then for VB Tech Journal, then for Pocket Books.
Currently, he is writing thrillers and mystery novels under another name.
Definitely pricey, considering the length, but I found it a useful read. The good thing about these kinds of short craft books is that they're no nonsense and give clear, practical advice without going on and on about the same thing over and over again like a lot of self help. And if you balk at the price, you can get nearly all the same info at Dean's website for free. So there.
Writing a novel is just the start of a life long journey to becoming a better writer. It's great to have that journey broken down and to use this to decide what to focus on in terms of craft.
I picked up the sample for this book and balked at paying the $6 for the ebook, so I read the blog post version instead. Perhaps some greatness crept in between the blog posts and the final version, but given that DWS is a great proponent of Heinlein's Rules, I doubt there was much difference. I enjoyed reading it, if only to argue half of the points he was trying to make.
A summary, from the final post in the series:
Stage one and two writers are typists. Stage three writers tell stories. Stage four writers are entertainers. - See more at: http://www.deanwesleysmith.com/stages...
While I agree with a lot of what he's written, I am not at all sold on the idea that the further a writer progresses, the fewer revisions they do, and revision will only steal your unique voice and stymie your progression as a writer. If you're trying to write pulp romance or action adventure stories, that may be fine advice, but for me, it doesn't work. Also, although I think that writers generally improve as they go along, there are a lot of great novels written early authors' careers, and this summary makes no allowance for that.
Finally, this series convinced me (again) that it's time to do more serious reading and analysis of great books, so in that was valuable to me. However, my role model books probably won't even overlap DWS's recommended reading list.
I have never seen a writer come at storytelling from this angle. I love it, and think DWS hast absolutely blown my mind in a good way. Absolutely, priceless.
Book: Stages of a Fiction Writer Author: Dean Wesley Smith, 2015
Have you ever read a book that feels part like fiction and the other half as non-fiction? That was the feeling I had as I read Stages of a Fiction Writer. Dean Smith intertwines how-to information with a story on Poker to illustrate the different stages that a writer goes as they progress from stage one to four - from writing for the sake of achieving a certain number of words to a level where the author captures and entertains a reader.
How did I come to read this book? I completed reading a fast-paced novel, The Letter (see my previous blog), after which I started two different novels and stopped. I checked through the 702 books in my Kindle and stopped at Smith’s book, started reading and continued to completion.
Have you ever wondered what stage you are in as a fiction writer, and what you need do to reach the apex? Here are Smith’s four stages:
1. Focused on polishing sentences, grammar and punctuation. 2. The focus is still on words, but the writer is shifting to an understanding of the elements of story. 3. The focus is more on telling a good story – having an interesting plot, great characters, openings, generally on getting a reader into a story and holding them there. 4. The writer’s focus is on how to capture and hold a reader from the first to the last page of the story. What the reader will be thinking and feeling as they read the story? At this stage the writer becomes what Smith calls an entertainer.
I recommend this book to fiction writers. I found the information useful, it helped me to identify the stage I am at in my writing process and what I need to make more progress. I identified myself as being in stage three – I no longer mind about the number of words I have typed or how polished they are. Looking back, I crossed to stage three last year when I started to rely more on professionals - editors, proofreaders and book cover designers.
Now, each time I get the urge to stop writing because I need to edit, I remind myself of the editors who will do a better job for me. The frequent self-reminders keep me focused on writing the story. Also, knowing that many writers disappear in stage three scares me enough to keep going, learning and writing.
I gave the book four and half stars because the Poker examples were too long a read for me, sometimes made me feel like I was reading a book on Poker and not fiction writing.
Until then, enjoy the book and stay tuned. I will be back with more book reviews. Dean Wesley Smith
The content was fine, so maybe it's just the book showing it's age (1995 IIRC). However, as of 2010+ I would expect an upgraded version of this content to be freely available on any decent blog.
The idea is fine, if not already broadly accepted, but the book lacks in two key areas: 1. 50% of the content is irrelevant for someone who would choose to read the book (as noted by the author themselves), and 2. After the lengthy lecture, there are no actionable steps other than what someone who chose to read that book is probably already doing.
The takehome message:
1. Focus on good storytelling — including well executed plots, good pacing, complex characters, and settings written in deep POV — rather than writing one perfect, grammatically correct sentence at a time.
2. Always continue to learn and improve your craft.
3. To learn and improve your craft, read books from top authors in your genre and, for the ones you love, study their technique.
It also comes with what I would consider questionable advice: don't join peer writing and critique groups, and don't edit your work.
Instead of the book, I just read the version of this available on Dean's blog for free. I dunno if it'll still be there next year/when he'll remove it, so get on it. This is an extremely short book, and while it does have some really intriguing food for thought, I do think it needed to be expanded way more than it is. For one, I would have liked to see how to practice to reach stage 3 and 4, instead of just saying you need to practice and study other writers. He did give some to read, but there's a difference between reading and studying, and I really would have liked to know how he does or how to go about it aside of reading for pleasure and then a second time for studying. It's definently not a how-to book, or even a craft one (though he says it is, to me a craft book tells you/explains how to go about improving/reaching higher skills), but it's nice to put perspective. It's very passable though, if you don't feel curious where you're at, and it won't improve your writing or give you tools to improve per se. Just...give you awareness, which is also good!
I don't have the experience (or the time machine) to judge the validity of Smith's advice. There were moments I felt the author was overstating to make a point, and moments where I thought the advice could be more specific, and moments where the advice seemed just obvious. Nonetheless, I did find value in it, and certainly some great points to think about and discuss with fellow writers. I'm interested to see how much more it makes sense to me as I learn more about the craft and grow.
Hay algunos puntos muy interesantes en este libro sobre las fases por las que pasa un escritor profesional. Por mi parte creo que debo estar entre la fase dos y la tres, así que toca trabajar mucho para seguir aprendiendo y escribiendo. Una lectura concisa y al grano, recomendable.
Más que libros, este hombre escribe capítulos sueltos. De todos modos es una buena aproximación a una forma de medir en qué nivel profesional está un escritor.
Faltaría un quinto nivel para el escritor que ha llegado al cuatro pero no ha podido seguir el ritmo.
This short book gave me a lot to think about as a writer and helped me understand my journey. I know I've got a lot to learn and will never stop learning, and this little book was a real eye-opener and reminder about how we must always be in the learning stage.
The framework in this book is so ridiculously useful, and can be applied to so many different fields, that I seriously don’t know where I would be if I hadn’t read it.
Stages
1. Complete noob Zero meta awareness. You have no f**ing clue what you’re doing. You don’t even know if you’re good or bad at the thing (hint: you’re bad). You’re so bad, you can’t even see how bad you are.
As a writer you write pretty sentences and that’s all you’re capable of. Your focus is so limited, you can only see the immediate sentence in front of you and that’s it. Your stories are boring as fuck. People literally fall asleep reading your shit. But you think you’re a genius. Nobody wants to read your shit and you wonder why. (Literary fiction noobies tend to get stuck here.)
2. Slightly more informed noob You have a tiiny little bit of awareness than before. You at least know you’re a noob. You know that you suck. But you still can’t really see the difference between you and a master.
You start to catch on to things like story and character, and you try to put more of these things in there, but you still don’t really get it. Your main focus is still on pretty words and sentences.
3. Storyteller You’re now aware of the bigger picture. You’re now aware that there’s a big thing out there called an “audience” and “other people”. You see that sentences don’t mean shit — it’s all about the story, the entire experience, the bigger picture.
Yeah you’re not as good as you want to be, but your readers don’t think so. They WANT to read your books and WANT to pay money to read them. What a difference from back in stage 1 when you had to force people to critique your work!
You dropped the idiotic hyperfocus on individual sentences. You’re focused on telling a good story and giving everyone a good time. But there’s still lots to learn and to be honest, it’s kind of scary there’s so much you don’t know. So you keep on learning, which eventually leads to ...
4. Master storyteller You completely control the minds and hearts of your readers. Every fucking word, every sentence, serves a purpose. There are no random words you throw in there “because it sounds nice”. Everything is connected, and has a solid reason.
Selling authors tend to end their careers in stage three, according to the author. Which makes sense too because you see it all the time in other fields— people that quit learning once they “figure it out” and start earning money. A great pity, but I guess I can’t blame them. They were never told there’s a stage beyond that.
From my experience, literary fiction people tend to get stuck at stage one (for life), while people coming from genre and fanfic (it is romance after all) quickly get to stage two and will advance into stage three if they read enough.
I'm too early in the fiction writing process to get a lot out of this book. I'd put myself at Dean's Stage Two. When I hit his Stage Three, I'll be sure to revisit this short book. I did enjoy many of his tips for more observant writing. Some of his writing exercises interested me greatly. I'll also avoid the pitfalls he described. I wonder, however, if there is a Stage Five beyond Dean's four stages where a writer who has mastered his craft and his business, and who has mastered the art of storytelling, can focus again on the words. I do believe that there is an art there to be explored. I don't dispute Dean's observations, but I know that not every writer wants to follow his path.
Some great points in this book, and certainly an interesting read. However, there are some flaws in the way writers are classified that smacks of a lack of nuance. For instance, if I was ever a stage 1 writer where I 'only cared about the words, not what they were saying', then I don't remember and good riddance. Otherwise, I'm not sure how much of a benefit it is to consider one's ability in stages.
Is it meant to be inspirational? Confrontational? Reassuring? I don't know. It made me think for a while, but then just shake my head, and get back to work.
I definitely loved seeing the different stages of an fiction writers path laid out in this book. If read with an honest and open mind, it can give flagging writers a lot of hope for the future and even a few pointers in the direction that best suits them.
A couple interesting concepts to ponder, but none explored in any depth. Would've served better as a chapter of a larger craft book than as an independent publication.