After reading the reviews—and with a 4.1 rating—I was eagerly anticipating reading this book. I have lived in Italy, am a scholar in sixteenth- and seventeenth-century Italian history, and enthusiastically devour anything set in that time and locale. I expected there to be artistic license taken with the historical record for the sake of Lafferty’s fictional narrative. What I didn’t expect was to be so thoroughly bored by this novel.
The characters were one-dimensional and unappealing, which was pretty surprising. The Medici were some of the most fascinating actors in Italian religious, political, and diplomatic history, yet I found their scenes wearying and perplexing. Because of my research, I think I have a decent sense of the motivation for much of their behavior, but I got no inkling of it from reading the novel. The shepherdess who was ‘mad for horses’ and seemed to have a special affinity for them and they for her had such potential as a protagonist, but she came off mainly as self-absorbed, arrogant, and remarkably resistant to understanding anything outside of her own narrow aspiration.
The book was also rather torturous to read. The dialogue was shallow and took twice as long as needed to impart the emotional or narrative information it seemed designed to convey. I kept plugging, thinking that eventually, the author would start giving some justification for what was happening: explaining the reactions of the conservative peasantry towards Virginia as well as what she and her family and friends realistically hoped for her future (I was pretty amazed that the aunt, who had figured so prominently as the voice of narrow-mindedness and intolerance in Virginia’s first 10 years, never appeared during her training or her early rides!).
Finally, about halfway through, I had to call the time of death on this book. Maybe the author addresses some of these issues in the second half of the novel, but life is too short to continue reading a book that I knew I would pan.
ETA: Apparently, I should have read ALL of the reviews! I just read Erin’s Goodreads review of 7 January 2015 in which she said pretty much everything I’d said (even to pulling the plug on the book) Overall, though, I am rather surprised to see the high rating here at Goodreads, and decided to read on for another 30 or so pages. I stopped again, and I still feel the same.
I’m done.