This series is so much fun! So far, even the annoying characters (Grandma and Mrs V) are at least amusing. I'm glad to see that Jill and Detective Jack Maxwell are moving from an adversarial to more of a dating relationship.
Errors found in Kindle text (mostly comma usage): p. 12, If you want something doing (something done) ; p. 31, why focus on the (focussing on) ; p. 36, are you Lizzie? (you, Lizzie) ; p. 62, Her boyfriend, Battery, though (boyfriend Battery, though) ; p. 62, --no really-- (no, really) ; p. 64, How are you darlin'? (you, darlin') ; p. 64, If you needed a particular car stealing (car stolen) ; p. 86, I didn't think much to being old (much of being old) ; p. 89, threatening me, young lady or (me, young lady, or) ; p.90, only one eye isn't it (eye, isn't) ; p. 94, --hot too, (hot, too,) ; p. 95, Magical powers eh? (powers, eh) ; p. 96, I'd only had chance (had the chance) ; p. 97, Well for starters (Well, for) ; p. 98, nose breaking judging by (breaking, judging) ; p. 102, investigator aren't you (investigator, aren't) ; p. 104, Well thanks for (Well, thanks) ; p. 104, but sure knock (sure, knock) ; p. 107. is digital isn't it (digital, isn't) ; p. 108, in a few days time (few days' time) ; p. 123, I'm sorry dear (sorry, dear) ; p. 123, except Grandma of course (Grandma, of) ; p. 127, And, besides she told (And besides, she) ; p. 129, Well at least (Well, at) ; p. 131, Pearl you get (Pearl, you) ; p. 131, Amber you have (Amber, you) ; p. 133, You first Pearl (first, Pearl) ; p. 133, before her time that daughter (time, that) ; p. 135, behind Grandma who was (Grandma, who) ; p. 137, Nice though weren't they (though, weren't) ; p. 138, if I join you do you (you, do) ; p. 138, great night wasn't it (night, wasn't) ; p. 140, Open the door, Pearl or I will (door, Pearl, or) ; p. 142, stunner aren't you (stunner, aren't) ; p. 143, no Pug or Papillion (or Papillon) ; p. 144, Nothing most likely (Nothing, most) ; p. 145, Hi you two (Hi, you) ; p. 145, any consolation she gave (consolation, she) ; p. 148, He's right though (right, though) ; p. 151, Good eh (Good, eh) ; p. 152, Nothing dear (Nothing, dear) ; p. 159, for what eh, buddy (what, eh, buddy) ; p. 160, Come on Daze (on, Daze) ; p. 161, I wanted answering too (answering, too) ; p. 161, out of my way boy (way, boy) ; p. 169, with Peter who felt (Peter, who) ; p. 170, well she asked (well, she) ; p. 175, Coke please (Coke, please) ; p. 186, No sleep for me then (me, then) ; p. 188, What do they do then (do, then) ; p. 189, think they aren't doing? (aren't doing that?) ; p. 189, Or maybe, I'll eat (maybe I'll) ; p. 190, do much good did it (good, did) ; p. 190, No I haven't (No, I) ; p. 196, Okay, well thanks (Okay, well, thanks) ; p. 197, Hi guys (Hi, guys) ; p. 202, Come back Walter (back, Walter) ; p. 205, Good thing too (thing, too) ; p. 211, she hadn't called, had me (called had) ; p. 214, Nothing for me thanks (me, thanks) ; p. 215, to tell me though (me, though) ; p. 215, still working after all (working, after) ; p. 215, can I help you then (you, then) ; p. 216, Maybe, I should buy (Maybe I should) ; p. 216, Three Strikes Baby (Strikes, Baby) ; p. 223, hypothetically of course (hypothetically, of).