I realize that romance mixed with aliens in a post apocalyptic world isn't everyone's flavor of literature. But, this type of story happens to be one of my very guilty pleasures... Sssshhhh, don't tell;)
So, of course, if aliens and a dystopian/ post apocalyptic type world isn't your thing, then you aren't going to like the book and it's best to just move on along.
If you do dig it, then this book has a decent storyline with lots of action, a nice little romance, some interesting characters for future installments, fair world building, a high speed pace, and a wham-bam writing style that packs a serious punch.
It's kind of a smorgasbord of "Starship Troopers," "Jurassic Park," "War of The Worlds," & "Terminator" meets a sci fi version of "Mission Impossible" and "Indiana Jones" type action. It's wild and tightly packed into less than 150 pages.
The Writing
While I really like the author's pace and nuts and bolts writing style that omits any and all irrelevant fluff, I'd say the author's weakest point is her tone, especially in the narrative.
^ It's a little stiff in tone of voice. I think this problem stems from NOT having this be a first person narrative where the character is addressing the reader with his or her own thoughts vs having a third person narration of the thoughts, feelings, and musings.
It would've been a much smoother ride and easier to connect with the characters, especially given this is such a short book with tons of characters, had the author done a dual first person POV between Marcus and Ellianna.
Characters
I liked the characters. It just took me a long time to emotionally connect with them because of how they were written in voice. The reader to character connection was purely through respect of their actions vs that multidimensional feature of connecting with characters through their thoughts, dialogue, and
physical actions. Again, it needed first person narration. I've never liked when a third party narrator tell me what a character(s) is thinking and feeling vs giving each a unique voice of their own to tell me themselves!
Marcus is that sexy badass mfer that you'd want beside you, under you, and atop you during an alien invasion! Nuff said~
Ellia was a sheltered chick that survived somehow & now realizes that mall trips and BMWs aren't the epitome of life. She's a little slow naive when it comes to sexuality... 'no, he couldn't like me like that' ... kinda Bambi between headlights chick when it comes to men.
However, I LOVE that she's brave, otherwise intelligent, & is neither a constantly yelping damsel in distress nor a socialite turned Rambo. It's true to form of what would happen if you take a pampered princess with underlying grit, intelligence, and determination and place her in the apocalypse. I love real characters! She's brave enough to risk her life to help, but isn't so unreal as to not admit that she's f'ing nervous about going up against a bunch of alien supermen.
The Plot
There's a little disconnect here on the time frame. A timeline and current time is never given. There are a lot of techy futuristic elements that infer years into the future, but I'd have liked a little bit more detail on when the alien invasion happened & present time?!? A prologue, perhaps, is needed to give detail to the invasion and solidify a timeline of events.
Otherwise, the storyline itself is pretty unique to the genre. The aliens are unique. Think Jurassic Park meets Terminator.
There's a motley crew of alpha, military badasses from all different backgrounds and countries fighting to save humanity.
"It's always darkest before dawn, sweetheart. But even the longest night always ends." "For now, we just have to find whatever light we can, hold on to it, and use it to guide us until the sun comes up."
So they fight on to book two! ... Where I'm headed now:)
Rating
For creativity & no-fluff flow, this one is a solid four in this genre of para romantic action. I'm deducting a star because of my issues with the narration, which impacted character likability and my own enjoyment of the storyline. = 3 stars