This is a really nice, slim collection of poems. The book is a unique (at least to me) experiment in poetic conversation, since the two authors do not have their names appended to any of the poems inside the book. This erasure of authorship is explained on the back of the book, and it doesn't even tell you which of the authors came up with the idea. Basically, these are all micro-poems of approximately haiku length (and sometimes of haiku style) which were mailed back and forth between the two authors, apparently later in life, since there is mention of Kooser's cancer diagnosis. There is a strange irony to this, as he outlived the other author, and I even got to meet him a few years back (in fact, shortly after the other author, Jim Harrison, died).
The poems vary quite widely in quality and content matter, but the former is to be expected with any poetry collection, and the latter is to be expected if the theme(s) weren't "decided" upon by the two friends. The most common themes include nature, aging, mortality, time, writing, women, and politics, with the latter two being the two which felt like they didn't fit in as well. I'm pretty sure that those last two were mostly Harrison's work, since I've never really seen Kooser write poems on either topic. After a brief glancing through Harrison's work and reviews of his work, it looks like he includes both, especially women, in his writing.
This all raises a very interesting angle, as I was somewhat attempting to decipher which author wrote which poems as I went along. Perhaps it would be better to read this collection if you knew both the authors or neither of them, but I'm only familiar with Kooser (and quite decently so at that). Some of the poems were just.... bad, and those were often the ones about women or politics. Kooser is such a timeless author that I'd find it hard to picture him writing some of those, but you never know, since these were initially included in private letters between friends. It seems equally hard to imagine that the shower-room talk was one-sided, that Harrison was constantly bringing up those two topics despite Kooser. If you're looking for an introduction for each poet's work, I don't think I'd recommend this, as its quality varies so much. Kooser's Wheeling Year is a great starting place, and I'm going to explore Harrison's work soon.
As for the poems themselves, they vary in form, but are never longer than 5 lines, averaging at 3. There are a couple which are only 1 or 2, and those actually hit really hard:
But the seventeen-year cicada
has only one syllable.
Trust snow to keep a secret.
An empty boat
will volunteer for anything.
The sparrow is not busy
but hungry.
I prefer the skyline
of a shelf of books.
The blind man navigates
by stars behind the daylight.
There are some true haiku in this collection, where there are two main nature images, a cutting word between them, a sense of impermanence, some wabi-sabi, but many are just short contemporary American poems. The poems about nature are the most consistently good of the collection, while the ones about age, time, and women vary the widest in quality. The Time ones vary from "wow, that sounds like a fragment of a shakespeare sonnet" to "wow, that's just tedious". One of the authors in particular kept mentioning a clock he has that is broken at 5:30, and he makes a groan-inducing boomer remark about it "being right twice a day". I'm really just surprised that that reference made it into so many poems. Some examples of the better ones:
Each time I go outside the world
is different. This has happened
all my life.
Some nights are three nights long,
some days are a mere noon hour, then whistled
back to work, the heart-dredging sludge.
Midday silence is different
from nighttime silence.
I can't tell you how.
Likewise, the poems about women ranged from tastefully poetic to kinda disgusting. It's always a little uncomfortable to hear older people talking about sexuality, since we often assume that they've either become less sexual or that their opinions on the matter don't matter since they're largely out of the pool. Anyway, here's a couple that didn't suck:
When she left me
I stood out in the thunderstorm,
hoping to be destroyed by lightning.
It missed, first left, then right.
It's nice to think that when
we're fossils we'll all be in the same
thin layer of rock.
Oh, to be in love,
with all five buckets
of the senses
overflowing!
The poems about aging ranged about as much, but aging is a topic that Kooser has been working on for a while now, so I think he probably had some of the better ones in here. The author(s) made several remarks about the youth of old age, the fact that we never stop feeling like kids, that we all are just overgrown children. It's humbling to think like that when looking at others, and it's surprising how many people have noted the same thing. Another thing they noticed is something I've thankfully already figured out, namely that you should never ever wish away time, especially when you're bored. If you find yourself bored, that's a sign to daydream or write poetry or just be observant. Anyway, have a few examples:
At my age,
even in airports,
why would you wish
time to move faster?
How can it be
that everyone my age
is older than I?
As a boy when desperate I'd pray with bare knees
on the cold floor. I still do,
but from the window I look like an old man.
Getting older I'm much better at watching
rain. I skip counting individual drops
in favor of the general feeling of rain.
Like an old dog
I slowly lower and arrange myself
in a heap of sighs.
The most inconspicuous category of poems are those about writing, but perhaps that makes since since these friends are a couple of authors. I think that Harrison might have more books published, but Kooser is a more public author, being a pulitzer-prize winner, the poet laureate of the US for a year, and teaching at the University of Nebraska. He is known for his poetry, whereas Harrison is known for novellas. It's not a competition... or is it? Either way, have some poems:
Strange world indeed:
a poet keeping himself awake
to write about insomnia.
At the tip of memory's
great funnel-cloud
is the nib of a pen.
I surely understand paper and how poets
disappear despite it. These days I write
so lightly I don't quite touch it.
The poet holds the podium
in both hands
like a garbage bag of words.
Lastly, we have the nature poems, which are somewhat Kooser's specialty. Though Kooser has a distinctly Nebraska taste to his choice of imagery, his images, his diction, and his terminology are never pretentious, never excluding to those "not from around here," and that's why I love him. He's conversational, accessible, and still extremely engaging. I'm kinda tempted to go to another book signing of his so I can ask if my favorites from this book were written by him. I'll leave you with a sampling of some good nature-poems:
Fear is a swallow
in a boarded-up warehouse,
seeking a window out
The pigeon
has swallowed a fountain!
Listen!
The black sleeve falls back
from the scalded fist:
a turkey vulture.
What is it the wind has lost
that she keeps looking for
under each leaf?
The butterfly
jots a note on the wind
to remind itself of something.
In my garden
the late sun glows
through a rabbit's ears.