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The Other Inheritance
One girl. Two worlds. Hunted in both.
Seventeen-year-old Reggie Lang is used to dealing with her alcoholic mother and fighting school bullies, but fate has thrown her a curve ball.
A biker dude shows up in her dreams, babbling about magic and a world called the Other. As the incidents keep piling up—like bringing a frog back to life in class—Reggie has to confront the mounting evidence that she’s not the normal girl she craves to be.
Reggie's life is changing, and she has no idea why. Or whether she should believe the man in her dreams, who claims she's in danger and that only he can keep her safe. But if there's one thing Reggie will learn, nowhere is safe.
Seventeen-year-old Reggie Lang is used to dealing with her alcoholic mother and fighting school bullies, but fate has thrown her a curve ball.
A biker dude shows up in her dreams, babbling about magic and a world called the Other. As the incidents keep piling up—like bringing a frog back to life in class—Reggie has to confront the mounting evidence that she’s not the normal girl she craves to be.
Reggie's life is changing, and she has no idea why. Or whether she should believe the man in her dreams, who claims she's in danger and that only he can keep her safe. But if there's one thing Reggie will learn, nowhere is safe.
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First published November 6, 2014
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February 4, 2017
Disclaimer: This book was sent to me by the publisher, Aelurus Publishing, Via Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
Opinion: I haven’t posted in a review in a little over a week, and this book is purely the cause of why. It takes me a day (sometimes two) to read a book, but this book took me over a week to finish. When I was actually reading it, I was skimming through paragraphs whilst doing my best not to constantly roll my eyes at the unattached characters and over-dramatized dialogue. Usually I can say that the plot is what kept me reading, but I honestly can’t even say that in regards to this book.
I’m not even going to bother writing a proper description for this book like I usually do, that’s how uninterested I am in it. Here’s my brief explanation: this story is basically about a girl named Reggie that has a few incidents at school where she accidentally brings dead creatures back to life. She starts getting pulled into these elaborate dreams where she speaks to a man who knew her father, who eventually explains to her that she has magic and that she needs to be brought back to another world called “the Other” in order to keep her safe. While all this is taking place, a bad guy from “the Other” sends his servant, Asher, to fetch Reggie from “the Real” (which is basically our world) so that he may steal her magical powers. So ensues an adventure in which Reggie falls for some “badass” servant guy while she learns how to use her magic...blah blah blah.
With that said let’s get to the point, this is the first work by the author Rebecca Jaycox. Though I commend her for her efforts, I just didn’t like much of anything in regards to this book. I’m overly curious if I was reading the same book as many other readers on Goodreads and Amazon, because this story has gotten a lot of reviews deeming it to be wonderful. I didn’t find this story to be wonderful at all, I found it to be simplistic and full of holes. I felt like an uncared for reader being drug through the mud and muck of a land that wasn’t even finished being constructed.
This story clips along at a fast pace, but so many things are only touched on and never explained again as the reader tries to catch up to where the author is going. Our main character Reggie suddenly realizes that she can wield magic, which is a pretty incredible concept to grasp if you’re an ordinary person (or Muggle) such as myself. This character is shocked for about three seconds, but then she starts acting as if a man/wolf creature is normal or that her gift to make roots from the earth move towards her is just OH SO CASUAL. Not only does she learn to almost completely control her powers in just one or two dreamscapes with her deceased father (realistic? I think not!), but she starts making out with the indentured named Asher (slave from “the Other”) after only knowing him for a few days! If you guys like a story with a rushed and highly awkward romance, you should definitely read this. I could have went along with this rushed romance that was forcefully shoved upon me, but it was nearly impossible to connect with any of these characters.
The CHARACTERS…UGH! They had no depth, no personality! I didn’t connect to one, NOT ONE! The author didn’t put the time in to carefully construct these characters, and it showed immensely. This could have been salvaged through dialogue, but that only made it worse for me. When Reggie and her alcoholic mother conversed, it felt so fluffed up and unrealistic. The conversations between Reggie and Asher literally made me groan in frustration because everything they said felt one-dimensional and were filled with too many exclamations. To me, the repetitiveness of multiple exclamation points looks like the writer took the easy way out when it came to describing a characters emotions in that moment. Asher saying “Reggie!” doesn’t tell me how angry he is, but “Reggie! “ he spit through gritted teeth with eyes raging like the depths of Hell itself…that does.
I’m usually not this brutal in a review, and I always try to showcase SOME sort of positivity…but I just can’t when it comes to this book. The plot was lacking and nothing set it apart from any other fantasy story that I have read. The characters were like wallpaper and the entire read was predictable and blasé. I was hoping that this story would improve as I kept reading, because that has happened in so many first-time books by authors that I have read. I kept hoping and hoping for it to get better, but it didn’t. Not even a little bit. I really don’t recommend reading this…
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Opinion: I haven’t posted in a review in a little over a week, and this book is purely the cause of why. It takes me a day (sometimes two) to read a book, but this book took me over a week to finish. When I was actually reading it, I was skimming through paragraphs whilst doing my best not to constantly roll my eyes at the unattached characters and over-dramatized dialogue. Usually I can say that the plot is what kept me reading, but I honestly can’t even say that in regards to this book.
I’m not even going to bother writing a proper description for this book like I usually do, that’s how uninterested I am in it. Here’s my brief explanation: this story is basically about a girl named Reggie that has a few incidents at school where she accidentally brings dead creatures back to life. She starts getting pulled into these elaborate dreams where she speaks to a man who knew her father, who eventually explains to her that she has magic and that she needs to be brought back to another world called “the Other” in order to keep her safe. While all this is taking place, a bad guy from “the Other” sends his servant, Asher, to fetch Reggie from “the Real” (which is basically our world) so that he may steal her magical powers. So ensues an adventure in which Reggie falls for some “badass” servant guy while she learns how to use her magic...blah blah blah.
With that said let’s get to the point, this is the first work by the author Rebecca Jaycox. Though I commend her for her efforts, I just didn’t like much of anything in regards to this book. I’m overly curious if I was reading the same book as many other readers on Goodreads and Amazon, because this story has gotten a lot of reviews deeming it to be wonderful. I didn’t find this story to be wonderful at all, I found it to be simplistic and full of holes. I felt like an uncared for reader being drug through the mud and muck of a land that wasn’t even finished being constructed.
This story clips along at a fast pace, but so many things are only touched on and never explained again as the reader tries to catch up to where the author is going. Our main character Reggie suddenly realizes that she can wield magic, which is a pretty incredible concept to grasp if you’re an ordinary person (or Muggle) such as myself. This character is shocked for about three seconds, but then she starts acting as if a man/wolf creature is normal or that her gift to make roots from the earth move towards her is just OH SO CASUAL. Not only does she learn to almost completely control her powers in just one or two dreamscapes with her deceased father (realistic? I think not!), but she starts making out with the indentured named Asher (slave from “the Other”) after only knowing him for a few days! If you guys like a story with a rushed and highly awkward romance, you should definitely read this. I could have went along with this rushed romance that was forcefully shoved upon me, but it was nearly impossible to connect with any of these characters.
The CHARACTERS…UGH! They had no depth, no personality! I didn’t connect to one, NOT ONE! The author didn’t put the time in to carefully construct these characters, and it showed immensely. This could have been salvaged through dialogue, but that only made it worse for me. When Reggie and her alcoholic mother conversed, it felt so fluffed up and unrealistic. The conversations between Reggie and Asher literally made me groan in frustration because everything they said felt one-dimensional and were filled with too many exclamations. To me, the repetitiveness of multiple exclamation points looks like the writer took the easy way out when it came to describing a characters emotions in that moment. Asher saying “Reggie!” doesn’t tell me how angry he is, but “Reggie! “ he spit through gritted teeth with eyes raging like the depths of Hell itself…that does.
I’m usually not this brutal in a review, and I always try to showcase SOME sort of positivity…but I just can’t when it comes to this book. The plot was lacking and nothing set it apart from any other fantasy story that I have read. The characters were like wallpaper and the entire read was predictable and blasé. I was hoping that this story would improve as I kept reading, because that has happened in so many first-time books by authors that I have read. I kept hoping and hoping for it to get better, but it didn’t. Not even a little bit. I really don’t recommend reading this…
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October 21, 2015
I was hooked from the first chapter until the very end!
Reggie is just another teenage girl who has had a tough upbringing. Between a dead father and alcoholic mother, she has had all she can deal with. So throw in a power to raise the dead (and do many other things) and a magical other world and she can deal, right? Well, when you had in the fact that some people in the other world wanted her dead while the others want her to lead a revolution, she has no choice but to deal.
Then there’s a cute boy. What teenage girl can resist a charming boy with a good smile? The only problem is that this boy may not be who he seems when Reggie decides to embark on the ultimate journey with him. Is she going towards the safety of those who would use her to combat evil? Or is she walking to her own execution? You’ll have to read the book yourself to answer these questions. Any don’t worry, you won’t be disappointed.
I can just see the other world in my mind. The excitement and the danger at every turn. It doesn’t let up. I love these kinds of stories- full of magic and adventure. Miss Jaycox does a brilliant job of including the mystical element without making the book too fantastical and unreal. The characters are very real and well developed. You don’t feel like they are that different from you and me.
The only issue I had was the beginning of their relationship. It seemed rushed. Like- “we’re both here and alone so I must jump your bones”. That could be chalked up to them being so young and the rushed feeling does go away very quickly. I eventually ended up rooting for them and getting upset every time they were separated.
I can’t wait to dive into book two when it is released. This is a story that keeps you wanting more!
Reggie is just another teenage girl who has had a tough upbringing. Between a dead father and alcoholic mother, she has had all she can deal with. So throw in a power to raise the dead (and do many other things) and a magical other world and she can deal, right? Well, when you had in the fact that some people in the other world wanted her dead while the others want her to lead a revolution, she has no choice but to deal.
Then there’s a cute boy. What teenage girl can resist a charming boy with a good smile? The only problem is that this boy may not be who he seems when Reggie decides to embark on the ultimate journey with him. Is she going towards the safety of those who would use her to combat evil? Or is she walking to her own execution? You’ll have to read the book yourself to answer these questions. Any don’t worry, you won’t be disappointed.
I can just see the other world in my mind. The excitement and the danger at every turn. It doesn’t let up. I love these kinds of stories- full of magic and adventure. Miss Jaycox does a brilliant job of including the mystical element without making the book too fantastical and unreal. The characters are very real and well developed. You don’t feel like they are that different from you and me.
The only issue I had was the beginning of their relationship. It seemed rushed. Like- “we’re both here and alone so I must jump your bones”. That could be chalked up to them being so young and the rushed feeling does go away very quickly. I eventually ended up rooting for them and getting upset every time they were separated.
I can’t wait to dive into book two when it is released. This is a story that keeps you wanting more!
September 27, 2015
The MC, Reggie, in The Other Inheritance drew me into this book right from the beginning. She was a bit of an odd bird. Bullied by her peers and known as the 'alcoholic's daughter' she's had to learn to develop a tough skin and a snarky side that I loved. Her situation worsens when she is observed bringing a dead frog back to life in biology class. Her title changes from 'weird' to 'freak.'
Add to that the strange Hells Angel dude who visits her in her dreams, the handsome stranger who comes to her rescue, and the new knowledge that she is the last of the Aether Mages, and you have the makings of a great tale of magic and adventure.
I really enjoyed this story, especially the characters. They were extremely well written and so easy to fall in love with. My favourite by far though, was the changeling, Brwyn. He kind of stole the show for me, and I hope we get to see a lot more of his character in the next book.
Jaycox's writing flows effortlessly and draws you completely into the story. Her descriptive passages make you feel as if you are actually in this 'Other' world. There was never a dull moment. Chase scenes, magic battles, and hateful evil villains. What more could you ask for?
My only criticism was the love story between Reggie and Asher. It was a sweet love story, but I am not a fan of the 'instant love' thing. I felt the love blossomed too quickly between them and that distracted me a little from the story. I did, however, easily overlook that for the great storyline and characters.
Overall a fantastic read! 4.5 stars out of 5. Can't wait for the next in the series!
Add to that the strange Hells Angel dude who visits her in her dreams, the handsome stranger who comes to her rescue, and the new knowledge that she is the last of the Aether Mages, and you have the makings of a great tale of magic and adventure.
I really enjoyed this story, especially the characters. They were extremely well written and so easy to fall in love with. My favourite by far though, was the changeling, Brwyn. He kind of stole the show for me, and I hope we get to see a lot more of his character in the next book.
Jaycox's writing flows effortlessly and draws you completely into the story. Her descriptive passages make you feel as if you are actually in this 'Other' world. There was never a dull moment. Chase scenes, magic battles, and hateful evil villains. What more could you ask for?
My only criticism was the love story between Reggie and Asher. It was a sweet love story, but I am not a fan of the 'instant love' thing. I felt the love blossomed too quickly between them and that distracted me a little from the story. I did, however, easily overlook that for the great storyline and characters.
Overall a fantastic read! 4.5 stars out of 5. Can't wait for the next in the series!
December 22, 2015
Remember the first 10-15 minutes of The Wizard of Oz? When Dorothy was living her simple life in Kansas and dealing with problems based in reality before the twister takes her, Toto, and her house to Oz? But once the house landed in Oz, everything opens up, the story truly comes to life, and you're off and running with Dorothy on this wonderful adventure?
That's the same feeling I got while reading Rebecca Jaycox's "The Other Inheritance." The first 70 or so pages read very slow, but each page is necessary as it's all about setting up Jaycox's main character, Reggie Lang, and the journey she'll be going on very soon. The little glimpses are fascinating and tantalizing enough to assure you that the two of you (you and Reggie) are heading toward something very special, but while you just want Jaycox to get on with it, you have to trust her to make this otherworld worth the wait.
And boy, is it ever worth it! Once Reggie and her protector Asher make the transition from our world to the Other, you can feel the pacing of the book accelerating. Not 0 to 60 in two seconds, but it's getting a little faster, then a little faster, then a little faster, and you can't help but smile as you're getting further and further into this story as Reggie is going further and further into this strange new world.
Highly recommended for young adult readers looking for something in the same vein as Rick Riordan's Percy Jackson series.
That's the same feeling I got while reading Rebecca Jaycox's "The Other Inheritance." The first 70 or so pages read very slow, but each page is necessary as it's all about setting up Jaycox's main character, Reggie Lang, and the journey she'll be going on very soon. The little glimpses are fascinating and tantalizing enough to assure you that the two of you (you and Reggie) are heading toward something very special, but while you just want Jaycox to get on with it, you have to trust her to make this otherworld worth the wait.
And boy, is it ever worth it! Once Reggie and her protector Asher make the transition from our world to the Other, you can feel the pacing of the book accelerating. Not 0 to 60 in two seconds, but it's getting a little faster, then a little faster, then a little faster, and you can't help but smile as you're getting further and further into this story as Reggie is going further and further into this strange new world.
Highly recommended for young adult readers looking for something in the same vein as Rick Riordan's Percy Jackson series.
January 2, 2017
I received this book from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review, thanks! This is my first book through Netgalley, so I hope I'm doing this right!
The good: an interesting 'alternate magical universe' world that is very well built, and explained as the character learns about it, not through painful infodumps. The magic system is interesting and well thought-out. Also there is an extremely charming Changeling. The pacing was good as well, and had me wanting to stay up late to find out what happens!
The bad: sometimes, the dialogue is a little campy. The end is a bit of a cliffhanger, without too much resolution to the main plot. Some people will love the love story, but I felt it moved too quickly.
The picky: the main character is touted as good at self defense/martial arts because she takes kickboxing classes. Unfortunately, one of the first things she does in self-defense is punch someone in the face-- OUCH! Too many bones. It would have been much better to go for the gut. There weren't too many other hand-to-hand altercations as she learned magic.
I would recommend this to the older teen crowd as there is a little too much sex, slavery, and prostitution for readers under 15 or so.
The good: an interesting 'alternate magical universe' world that is very well built, and explained as the character learns about it, not through painful infodumps. The magic system is interesting and well thought-out. Also there is an extremely charming Changeling. The pacing was good as well, and had me wanting to stay up late to find out what happens!
The bad: sometimes, the dialogue is a little campy. The end is a bit of a cliffhanger, without too much resolution to the main plot. Some people will love the love story, but I felt it moved too quickly.
The picky: the main character is touted as good at self defense/martial arts because she takes kickboxing classes. Unfortunately, one of the first things she does in self-defense is punch someone in the face-- OUCH! Too many bones. It would have been much better to go for the gut. There weren't too many other hand-to-hand altercations as she learned magic.
I would recommend this to the older teen crowd as there is a little too much sex, slavery, and prostitution for readers under 15 or so.
January 1, 2017
I received this book from Netgalley for an honest review, thank you!
I was inclined to give this book three stars at first but after thinking on it for a bit and letting everything settle into my mind I decided it really deserved another star.
It was an original, action packed, and fast paced read that was drawing you into the world of the Other with every chapter. The characters were witty and comical and the plot was unlike any other. I appreciated Reggie's fast and humorous comebacks every step of the way. The romance was sweet and the emotions were real. It touched slightly on some difficult topics such as alcoholism and slavery. The content was some what mature with strong language here and there.
However, every book has its downside. As much as I loved this book it still had some minor problems. I personally feel that the romance moved too quickly and some arguments between characters were unnecessary and drawn out. As I said they were minor.
Overall the story was fantastic and I can't wait for book two to be released so I can get my hands on it!
I was inclined to give this book three stars at first but after thinking on it for a bit and letting everything settle into my mind I decided it really deserved another star.
It was an original, action packed, and fast paced read that was drawing you into the world of the Other with every chapter. The characters were witty and comical and the plot was unlike any other. I appreciated Reggie's fast and humorous comebacks every step of the way. The romance was sweet and the emotions were real. It touched slightly on some difficult topics such as alcoholism and slavery. The content was some what mature with strong language here and there.
However, every book has its downside. As much as I loved this book it still had some minor problems. I personally feel that the romance moved too quickly and some arguments between characters were unnecessary and drawn out. As I said they were minor.
Overall the story was fantastic and I can't wait for book two to be released so I can get my hands on it!
November 7, 2016
A highly enjoyable story of an ordinary girl thrown into extraordinary circumstances.
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February 4, 2017
The blurb for this book pulled me in. I found myself needing to know who this biker guy was and what this alternate world was.
Reggie is a teenage girl who's always been different from everyone else. When she's suddenly able to bring a dead frog back to life during the middle of biology class, things take a turn. That's also when she dreams of a biker guy who tells her of this world called the Other.
I liked Reggie, but she believed everything that she was told a little too easily. She never questioned Asher taking her through a portal or the things she saw when she get to the Other. She simply shrugs and carries on. Even when she discovers someone has been less than honest with her, she quickly forgives them. That made it a little hard to see Reggie as this heroine that was going to save everyone.
Asher is our tortured hero, but even he was a little soft. I'd expect someone who lived what he'd been through to have a harder edge to him. Not someone who would easily trust or love. But that was not Asher at all.
I know this is a YA book, but I like mine with more angst and a little edgier.
Reggie is a teenage girl who's always been different from everyone else. When she's suddenly able to bring a dead frog back to life during the middle of biology class, things take a turn. That's also when she dreams of a biker guy who tells her of this world called the Other.
I liked Reggie, but she believed everything that she was told a little too easily. She never questioned Asher taking her through a portal or the things she saw when she get to the Other. She simply shrugs and carries on. Even when she discovers someone has been less than honest with her, she quickly forgives them. That made it a little hard to see Reggie as this heroine that was going to save everyone.
Asher is our tortured hero, but even he was a little soft. I'd expect someone who lived what he'd been through to have a harder edge to him. Not someone who would easily trust or love. But that was not Asher at all.
I know this is a YA book, but I like mine with more angst and a little edgier.
March 9, 2018
Received an ARC copy for an honest review.
The Other Inheritance is a book that grabs you from the beginning and makes you wonder what could possibly happen next. The Other is a unique and original world that is both beautiful and scary. The characters are likable, witty, and easy to care about. Most teenagers feel flat and stereotypical in novels, but both John and Reggie feel like real teenagers, dealing with real emotions and judgmental peers, outside of the magic that has entered their lives. It takes you back to high school and the reality of how easy it was to be bullied and rejected.
Reggie is a character you both love and hate. She has been thrust into a new world of magic, having inherited the ability to raise the dead from her deceased father, and handles it a little too well for my liking. She is witty, smart, and caring, but has a few faults that are hard to ignore. She is too easy to trust and doesn't come off as strong as you would expect from a heroine.
Asher was a character I liked a fair bit. You knew from the beginning that he would protect her and that he'd care for her quickly. That may have felt annoying, as his mission seemed more important in the beginning than as the book went on, but you cared about him. They fell in love all too fast, but in ways his personality and presence made this a little more bearable.
This, mixed with the fact that the story felt like it moved too fast (including the romance between our two main characters), left me rating it 4 starts instead of 5. However, if there were to be a sequel to this story I would be more than happy to pick it up and see what happens to our dear Reggie.
What Worked
1. The characters were believable, witty, smart, and made you care about their story and what fate had in store for them.
2. The world and magic created by Rebecca Jaycox was original, unique, fun, terrifying, and very easy to escape into and get caught up in.
3. The creatures and races created for the "Other" were actually interesting and didn't seem useless in the setting created for them.
What Didn't Work
1. The story moved far too fast. I felt that it could have been slowed down and even made into two books if the author had wished. There was a lot of room to do extraordinary things that sadly did not get taken advantage of.
2. The romance happened too quickly. I have never been a fan of instant love because it takes away from the realistic feel of a story. Yes, we are reading fantasy, but we should still be able to feel like this world is real to us.
February 5, 2017
Review to come
February 6, 2017
The beginning of the book was a bit weird for me, almost as if the book started in the middle of the beginning. Reggie had already been visited by Rhys multiple times and has brought a dead frog back to life in the middle of science class, However I quickly got past my confusion and immediately begun to like Reggie and sympathize with her life. Her mother Arlene is a Alcoholic and so Reggie is in charge of caring for her and her mother. Plus she is constantly bullied at school and only has one friend, John.
We find out that Reggie is a Aether Mage, a powerful magician that has control of the four elements. Being a Aether Mage is illegal and they are being hunted and killed because of their powerful magic, and Reggie is on that list. Reggie meets Asher who agrees to help take her to Rhys in The Other. The place were Reggie actually belongs.
They fall in love and I can say I don't mind that. I really like Asher and he and Reggie seen to be great together. Although Reggie does need to learn how to control her powers, as her emotions cause her magic to flare.
There are a couple of things that make it so this book does not get all five stars. First of all Arlene, she just seems incapable of doing anything right, I hope in the second book to the series she redeems herself because right now she's killing it.
It looks like there might be a love triangle with John, Reggie and Asher. It's not mentioned in this book, but it's kinda hinted at and I really hope that it does not happen.
Also Reggie had the perfect chance to kill the villain and she wasted it. Saying she does not like killing, However she has no trouble killing others. It's a bit inconsistent on feelings on this matter.
I did enjoy this book and I will try to read the second one when it comes out.
We find out that Reggie is a Aether Mage, a powerful magician that has control of the four elements. Being a Aether Mage is illegal and they are being hunted and killed because of their powerful magic, and Reggie is on that list. Reggie meets Asher who agrees to help take her to Rhys in The Other. The place were Reggie actually belongs.
They fall in love and I can say I don't mind that. I really like Asher and he and Reggie seen to be great together. Although Reggie does need to learn how to control her powers, as her emotions cause her magic to flare.
There are a couple of things that make it so this book does not get all five stars. First of all Arlene, she just seems incapable of doing anything right, I hope in the second book to the series she redeems herself because right now she's killing it.
It looks like there might be a love triangle with John, Reggie and Asher. It's not mentioned in this book, but it's kinda hinted at and I really hope that it does not happen.
Also Reggie had the perfect chance to kill the villain and she wasted it. Saying she does not like killing, However she has no trouble killing others. It's a bit inconsistent on feelings on this matter.
I did enjoy this book and I will try to read the second one when it comes out.
August 7, 2020
All Reggie Lang wants to do is escape her dreary life. Her father died when she was a baby and in grief, her mother turned to the bottle to dull the pain. She’s had to grow up fast and deal with gangs of school bullies who insist on calling her a freak. Maybe she is, for it can’t be normal to raise dead creatures, can it? But when a strange man invades her dreams claiming to be her guardian from another world, he offers her the escape she craves. She’s having second thoughts, though, as she worries about who will take care of her mum if she goes to this other world. She takes the leap to a new world in order to protect her mum. As she tries to adjust to the new world, she realizes she’s in over her head. Her father’s killer is a dark mage and he’s after her blood. He’s hunting her and Reggie is on the run in a world foreign to her. Can she outrun the dark mage while trying to control her own powers or will she end up like her father… dead?
Secret Mage is an adrenaline-rushing magical fantasy with intriguing characters, plenty of conflicts and nonstop action. The plot moves at a fast pace with heavy doses of emotional arcs. Descriptive narration so realistic adds to the depth of the story. There are quite a few coming of age themes to Secret Mage readers can relate to. The conflict Reggie deals with is intense, especially the bullying. The action scenes are well-written and play out like a movie. I found myself whipping through the pages the more I read. The ending left me breathless. I look forward to reading more in this series. Highly recommend, especially to magical fantasy fans.
My Rating: 5 stars
Secret Mage is an adrenaline-rushing magical fantasy with intriguing characters, plenty of conflicts and nonstop action. The plot moves at a fast pace with heavy doses of emotional arcs. Descriptive narration so realistic adds to the depth of the story. There are quite a few coming of age themes to Secret Mage readers can relate to. The conflict Reggie deals with is intense, especially the bullying. The action scenes are well-written and play out like a movie. I found myself whipping through the pages the more I read. The ending left me breathless. I look forward to reading more in this series. Highly recommend, especially to magical fantasy fans.
My Rating: 5 stars
February 6, 2017
Jaycox’s young adult debut The Other Inheritance offers something for every reader, whether they come some heated kissing, intense magic scenes, or diverse travels across a new world. Violence, romance, and resistance abound. Though the immersive fantasy tendencies of the narrative often overshadow its portal fantasy frame, Reggie and her companions' fight promises thrills, danger, betrayal, romance, and more. Join Reggie as she comes to terms with her magic and struggles to master it — as do some of the most dangerous people in the Other. With the weight of the Other on her shoulders, can she traverse this world’s battles over power, purity, and magic and save those she loves most in the process?
August 2, 2025
This book took me sooo long to get into. It was also hard to follow, like there would be a really good part then it wouldn’t make sense. I rounded up from 3.5 to 4 because there were some parts that I enjoyed, but was still confused. Other than that it was a pretty good book!
February 13, 2021
Greetings, bookworms! Welcome to my review of Secret Mage by Rebecca Jaycox. I'd like to thank Aelurus Publishing for providing me with a copy in exchange for an honest review. Now let's dive into this review!
Reggie Lang has a tough life, but things get worse when she begins making strange things happen by accident. It's bad enough when Reggie discovers she can bring dead creatures back to life, but then a strange man begins invading her dreams, claiming he's her guardian from another world. He warns her that she is in danger: the evil mage who killed her father is now out to get her. As Reggie is thrown into a new world of magic and danger, she must learn how to wield her powers and fight to stay alive.
Firstly, I'd like to say that I loved all the world-building that went into this book, with our world, the Other, and the mirror realm. It was certainly a wild ride reading about Reggie and her companion Asher traveling across the Other with people trying to either kill or kidnap them at every turn! There were some rather unbelievable, cheesy moments that left me shaking my head in astonishment, but those were few and far between. There was a lot of deception in this book, but I loved how it increased the suspense. My favorite character hands-down was Brwyn the Changeling. I liked his witty humor and flirtatious personality. I also liked Reggie; she was a strong female lead and was interesting to read about. I enjoyed how complex Asher's character was, and he had an interesting backstory. The romance in this book did feel a bit rushed to me, but it was cute nonetheless. Also, one funny thing I'd like to share about this book is that near the beginning, Reggie described Asher's eyes as being the same shade of green as cat eyes, so now whenever I look at my cats' green eyes I always think that must be what Asher's eyes looked like! 😂
Overall, this book was a pretty typical fantasy novel, but it did have several unique aspects to it that I liked. Although it wasn't expectation-defying, it was still an enjoyable read. I gave it 3.5 Stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️✨.
Reggie Lang has a tough life, but things get worse when she begins making strange things happen by accident. It's bad enough when Reggie discovers she can bring dead creatures back to life, but then a strange man begins invading her dreams, claiming he's her guardian from another world. He warns her that she is in danger: the evil mage who killed her father is now out to get her. As Reggie is thrown into a new world of magic and danger, she must learn how to wield her powers and fight to stay alive.
Firstly, I'd like to say that I loved all the world-building that went into this book, with our world, the Other, and the mirror realm. It was certainly a wild ride reading about Reggie and her companion Asher traveling across the Other with people trying to either kill or kidnap them at every turn! There were some rather unbelievable, cheesy moments that left me shaking my head in astonishment, but those were few and far between. There was a lot of deception in this book, but I loved how it increased the suspense. My favorite character hands-down was Brwyn the Changeling. I liked his witty humor and flirtatious personality. I also liked Reggie; she was a strong female lead and was interesting to read about. I enjoyed how complex Asher's character was, and he had an interesting backstory. The romance in this book did feel a bit rushed to me, but it was cute nonetheless. Also, one funny thing I'd like to share about this book is that near the beginning, Reggie described Asher's eyes as being the same shade of green as cat eyes, so now whenever I look at my cats' green eyes I always think that must be what Asher's eyes looked like! 😂
Overall, this book was a pretty typical fantasy novel, but it did have several unique aspects to it that I liked. Although it wasn't expectation-defying, it was still an enjoyable read. I gave it 3.5 Stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️✨.
May 18, 2020
I would like to preface this review by saying that I received a free E-pub copy of this book via the Author on YABS Facebook page and so I thank her for this opportunity to read and review Secret Mage.
The thing that initially drew me to want to read this book was the unusual and unique take on a magical fantasy. A young Girl forced into adulthood by the burden of taking care of her alcoholic mother struggling to cope with her husbands death. A History of hardship sprung from a childhood assault and long-standing bulling. Her path in life is changed by the sudden revelation of her unique and supernatural ability to revive a frog from death. This then leads to a greater discovery of her ancestry and a calling greater than any Human has known before.
Please be advised that from here on out the review will contain some spoilers from the book and so read at your own discretion.
I would like to say that from a general stand point I thought that the book in it's entirety was an okay YA read. The book itself it actually very short and extremely fast paced. Almost too fast paced for my personal preference.
The level of detail and content required to successfully deliver a tale with so many major characters and such and overwhelmingly special magical aura, to me, cannot be done in such a short and rapid manner.
Notably, Jaycox has a wonderful talent with descriptives and her level of skill in creating solid imagery was a reason why I decided to give this story a three star rating instead of a two star. Personally I think that with a hearty level of fleshing out this story could be a solid four star read.
The reason I say this is because I think that with Fantasy novels that has to be a level serious capturing of the world in which the story is set. Imagery is a must for me and creating a picture in the readers mind so clearly that they can almost see it is key for a successful Fantasy novel.
I think that Jaycox has a wonderful way with words and if she weaved in more description to create a sense of realness to the appearance surrounding the 'Other' it would really create a cohesive and clear sense of just how magical of a place it is.
Speaking of descriptions, I feel that Jaycox has created a very unique set of characters that could honestly exist in reality. However I feel that because the book is so short and moves at such a fast pace, there is not a lot of solid characterisation.
While it is clear that Regina is supposed to be the 'main' character in the story I felt I had a greater emotional connection to Asher as he was the character that the Author went most into detail about regarding both the appearance and the character's history.
I would very much like to see a more fleshed out version of this plot that builds upon each individual character at a steady pace so that a connection can be developed between the characters and the reader and the relationships between each of the characters is more clear.
Moreover I feel that the supposedly 'bad-ass' female protagonist of the story is very much underwhelming in practice because of a lack clear identity. We know that she has been attacked at a young age and that she has had a great deal of responsibility forced upon her to look after her mother making her feel like the adult in the relationship.
However this sense of a strong and mature character is lost almost instantly as the story progresses and she seems to fall into a very dependable and defenceless position which does not fit the character that we would expect from years of hardship and responsibility.
This, to me, makes the story feel less unique and has a large amount of 'eye-rolling' moments throughout the book as she continuously finds herself being helpless and essentially babied through the book by the other characters.
I think that this is the most disappointing part of the book for me as Regina has this very glorified prophesy to for-fill but we never actually get to really feel a connection to the character. Supposedly she has one of the most incredible abilities and is the 'last hope' for her the people of 'The Other'.
My issue is that we never actually get to see any of the growth and progression in Regina's magic. The secrets her farther tells her from the dream realm are never really shared in the book and so it just ends up being rather sequential and tiresome.
I think that if Jaycox were to add much more detail and if the reader was able to see the growth of Regina from a all be it unhappily burdened character into a flourishing Mage discovering her exciting new power. The reader would have a greater understanding of what it means to be an Aether Mage and in-turn the pinnacle of the story would be reinforced tenfold.
It must be said that the plot is interesting and in my opinion not like anything we have really seen before. Jaycox hints at very heavy topics such as sexual prostitution, political rivalry and addiction. However none of these topics are really explored as much as I would have hoped.
I would say that Jaycox, in a psychologically impacting sense, has the makings of The Hunger Games at her finger tips but does not explore the potential of a long-standing emotional impact on the reader.
For me, many successful fiction authors such as Brandon Sanderson, Margot Atwood and George Orwell have a magical way of emotionally impacting the reader enough to make then stop, think and feel, feel strongly about the topics raised and encourage the readers the question the difference between right and wrong.
I adore the idea of this incredible fantasy 'Other' world full of magic and Sigils and all the things us Fantasy readers wish were real,being nothing more than a whimsical Facade decadently disguising real, modern day issues. It is books with a purpose, a meaning that grip a reader in my opinion.
The plot, when dissected in this sense is fairly weak and leaves a lot of unanswered questions and contradictions. For instance Asher is a slave to Andrius, abused and sexually solicited for political gain. The reason Asher complies is because his family are at Andrius's mercy and Asher is trapped in torture device disguised as a slaves collar.
At the end of the book Asher essentially makes the decision to trade information to a Whore house owner in return for his and Regina's safe delivery to the leader of the revolution against Andrius, thus leaving his family to their demise of the Mage of Death.
Although this should be a moving and difficult moment in the narrative it actually just poses the question as to why Asher did not just do this in the first place when he later reveals he 'loved' Regina from the moment he met her and already had the realisation that his family were essentially already dead.
Moreover we have this magical, mystical world that draws power from the Earth and the last Aether Mage alive, speculated to be the single most powerful being that can challenge Andrius and yet the thing that leads to her escape is a gun.
I'm not sure if there is supposed to be some kind of symbolism in there somewhere but honestly it raises more confusion than investing the reader into Regina as this 'bad-ass' character.
In conclusion then I think that Jaycox has an incredible mind for creating such a unique and powerful sounding idea for a YA Fantasy series. I think that the author obviously has a beautiful way with words and has the ability to weave an image into the readers mind. However Jaycox has omitted a lot of the detail, characterisation and solidarity of the plot for the sake of making the story fast paced.
What I would like to see is longer and more detailed version of this story that presents the incredible skills we can clearly see the writer has. More though is needed into making the plot cohesive and the actual structure of the novel needs to be done in a more steady and enticing way.
I think that if these things were done the novel could be so very beautiful and make it a book that would be one incredibly hard to put down. I really hope some changes are made as the idea of this series is something I could really get behind. It just needs to have a real depth to it to make me want to read the entire series.
All in all it was an okay book and if you fancy a lighter read that is very fast paced and doesn't require much contemplation, then I think you would enjoy this YA Fantasy novel.
The thing that initially drew me to want to read this book was the unusual and unique take on a magical fantasy. A young Girl forced into adulthood by the burden of taking care of her alcoholic mother struggling to cope with her husbands death. A History of hardship sprung from a childhood assault and long-standing bulling. Her path in life is changed by the sudden revelation of her unique and supernatural ability to revive a frog from death. This then leads to a greater discovery of her ancestry and a calling greater than any Human has known before.
Please be advised that from here on out the review will contain some spoilers from the book and so read at your own discretion.
I would like to say that from a general stand point I thought that the book in it's entirety was an okay YA read. The book itself it actually very short and extremely fast paced. Almost too fast paced for my personal preference.
The level of detail and content required to successfully deliver a tale with so many major characters and such and overwhelmingly special magical aura, to me, cannot be done in such a short and rapid manner.
Notably, Jaycox has a wonderful talent with descriptives and her level of skill in creating solid imagery was a reason why I decided to give this story a three star rating instead of a two star. Personally I think that with a hearty level of fleshing out this story could be a solid four star read.
The reason I say this is because I think that with Fantasy novels that has to be a level serious capturing of the world in which the story is set. Imagery is a must for me and creating a picture in the readers mind so clearly that they can almost see it is key for a successful Fantasy novel.
I think that Jaycox has a wonderful way with words and if she weaved in more description to create a sense of realness to the appearance surrounding the 'Other' it would really create a cohesive and clear sense of just how magical of a place it is.
Speaking of descriptions, I feel that Jaycox has created a very unique set of characters that could honestly exist in reality. However I feel that because the book is so short and moves at such a fast pace, there is not a lot of solid characterisation.
While it is clear that Regina is supposed to be the 'main' character in the story I felt I had a greater emotional connection to Asher as he was the character that the Author went most into detail about regarding both the appearance and the character's history.
I would very much like to see a more fleshed out version of this plot that builds upon each individual character at a steady pace so that a connection can be developed between the characters and the reader and the relationships between each of the characters is more clear.
Moreover I feel that the supposedly 'bad-ass' female protagonist of the story is very much underwhelming in practice because of a lack clear identity. We know that she has been attacked at a young age and that she has had a great deal of responsibility forced upon her to look after her mother making her feel like the adult in the relationship.
However this sense of a strong and mature character is lost almost instantly as the story progresses and she seems to fall into a very dependable and defenceless position which does not fit the character that we would expect from years of hardship and responsibility.
This, to me, makes the story feel less unique and has a large amount of 'eye-rolling' moments throughout the book as she continuously finds herself being helpless and essentially babied through the book by the other characters.
I think that this is the most disappointing part of the book for me as Regina has this very glorified prophesy to for-fill but we never actually get to really feel a connection to the character. Supposedly she has one of the most incredible abilities and is the 'last hope' for her the people of 'The Other'.
My issue is that we never actually get to see any of the growth and progression in Regina's magic. The secrets her farther tells her from the dream realm are never really shared in the book and so it just ends up being rather sequential and tiresome.
I think that if Jaycox were to add much more detail and if the reader was able to see the growth of Regina from a all be it unhappily burdened character into a flourishing Mage discovering her exciting new power. The reader would have a greater understanding of what it means to be an Aether Mage and in-turn the pinnacle of the story would be reinforced tenfold.
It must be said that the plot is interesting and in my opinion not like anything we have really seen before. Jaycox hints at very heavy topics such as sexual prostitution, political rivalry and addiction. However none of these topics are really explored as much as I would have hoped.
I would say that Jaycox, in a psychologically impacting sense, has the makings of The Hunger Games at her finger tips but does not explore the potential of a long-standing emotional impact on the reader.
For me, many successful fiction authors such as Brandon Sanderson, Margot Atwood and George Orwell have a magical way of emotionally impacting the reader enough to make then stop, think and feel, feel strongly about the topics raised and encourage the readers the question the difference between right and wrong.
I adore the idea of this incredible fantasy 'Other' world full of magic and Sigils and all the things us Fantasy readers wish were real,being nothing more than a whimsical Facade decadently disguising real, modern day issues. It is books with a purpose, a meaning that grip a reader in my opinion.
The plot, when dissected in this sense is fairly weak and leaves a lot of unanswered questions and contradictions. For instance Asher is a slave to Andrius, abused and sexually solicited for political gain. The reason Asher complies is because his family are at Andrius's mercy and Asher is trapped in torture device disguised as a slaves collar.
At the end of the book Asher essentially makes the decision to trade information to a Whore house owner in return for his and Regina's safe delivery to the leader of the revolution against Andrius, thus leaving his family to their demise of the Mage of Death.
Although this should be a moving and difficult moment in the narrative it actually just poses the question as to why Asher did not just do this in the first place when he later reveals he 'loved' Regina from the moment he met her and already had the realisation that his family were essentially already dead.
Moreover we have this magical, mystical world that draws power from the Earth and the last Aether Mage alive, speculated to be the single most powerful being that can challenge Andrius and yet the thing that leads to her escape is a gun.
I'm not sure if there is supposed to be some kind of symbolism in there somewhere but honestly it raises more confusion than investing the reader into Regina as this 'bad-ass' character.
In conclusion then I think that Jaycox has an incredible mind for creating such a unique and powerful sounding idea for a YA Fantasy series. I think that the author obviously has a beautiful way with words and has the ability to weave an image into the readers mind. However Jaycox has omitted a lot of the detail, characterisation and solidarity of the plot for the sake of making the story fast paced.
What I would like to see is longer and more detailed version of this story that presents the incredible skills we can clearly see the writer has. More though is needed into making the plot cohesive and the actual structure of the novel needs to be done in a more steady and enticing way.
I think that if these things were done the novel could be so very beautiful and make it a book that would be one incredibly hard to put down. I really hope some changes are made as the idea of this series is something I could really get behind. It just needs to have a real depth to it to make me want to read the entire series.
All in all it was an okay book and if you fancy a lighter read that is very fast paced and doesn't require much contemplation, then I think you would enjoy this YA Fantasy novel.
January 31, 2017
We start our story meeting Reggie, a young adult who has had a sad start. She has lost her father and her mother has turned to drink from the loss. She is a social outcast at the best of times, so when a biology lesson results in the unexpected reanimation of a frog at her hand, she finds herself a laughing stock and utterly confused with her ability. That’s not the only issue that Reggie is dealing with, visited by a man named Rhys in her dreams she learns that her father was not all he has seemed. Rhys comes to her dreams from “the Other” (our world is “the Real”) and revelations that her father was from magic leads Reggie to discover she inherited that magical gift. Reggie's "gift" very soon becomes her curse when she is told she must uproot her life to come to the other for protection as there are those that would seek to harm her for what she is. Someone is coming to protect her in her journey
Asher works as a slave for Andrius, ruler of the other, he is tasked to recover Reggie before Rhys, and return to the Other under a false pretence. When Reggie and Asher meet, they connect immediately and trust is given freely. Their journey is fraught with danger and twists in allegiance, can the foe become the friend? What is Reggie and why is she so important?
In the round this was a very enjoyable read, all the main characters are instantly likeable and relatable in their flaws. Even Reggie’s mother can’t be seen as bad for turning to drink, she is clearly broken over the loss of Reggie’s father, Sebastian. The world of the Other has some spectacular scenery and creations which is why I love reading fantasy so much! it really allows your imagination free reign and this story gives you just enough to build that world without too much and overwhelming you with description over plot. By far my favourite character though is Brwyn, a changeling, who has an uncanny knack of being at the right place at the right time. He is enigmatic, charming yet entirely loveable as you know there is no hidden agenda, I loved it when he turned up!
The action really ramps up in the last 30% as Reggie starts to fully embrace her legacy and allows herself to open up to her powers without fear. In this latter 3rd it becomes a real page turner and I couldn't put it down, willing the characters forward, one part where Reggie has to hide in a fireplace will have you holding your breath as you read.
My only downside with this story is that I occasionally found some dialogue confusing and there were parts which for me, could have had some more explanation. The ending, however, is bittersweet because as a reader we are privy to more information than Reggie which sets us up nicely for book 2
January 18, 2017
BOOK REVIEW: THE OTHER INHERITANCE
The Other Inheritance (Book One)
By Rebecca Jaycox
Published by Aelurus January 2017
Summarize: Reggie was your average teenage girl, well almost average, she could bring back things from the dead. She mostly brought back frogs and beetles, though only on accident. After loosing her father to what some say death (no body was ever found) and loosing her mother to alcohol and pills what she craves the most in normalcy. Unfortunately, that is not what she is! She is pulled into a war many decades in the making in a place that is fueled by magic and she is the most powerful of them all. Against her best friend John’s wishes she follows Asher (a boy she believes Rhy, her dream guardian, has sent) across an invisible barrier between her world and the Other. Reggie has to make a decision that could cost her not only her life but the life of the boy she has fallen in love with. Can she save the Others and bring balance back to a war that has been raging long before her time?
RAVES: OMG What did I just read, this book had be second guessing my reality. The way that Rebecca brought magic to life and showed me how real it could be had my head spinning. I am pretty sure that I was right there with John as he tried to keep Reggie from following Asher. I mean come on the cute ones are always the bad ones! This story is brand new, I can honestly say I have never read anything quite like it! Watching Reggie go from a scared teen to a kick butt woman in a matter of a few chapters was breath taking. The unconditional love that she showed Asher, and the un dough-ting trust she put in to the wolf despite her back ground was inspiring. I will be putting the second book on my pre-order list!
RANTS: Honesty whats not to love? This book had everything you would want, romance, drama, suspense, action and even some comedy. I cannot say enough good about it…so no rants from this peanut gallery!
STARS: 5 out of 5 stars for sure! I recommend this book for teen to adult (diffidently no one under like 16 do to one sexual scene); It is making my Top 10 list of 2017!
HOW TO GET IT: This book is not on shelves yet but you can be the first to know when it does hit shelves by following Rebecca Jaycox on her twitter and Facebook pages
Twitter: @RebeccaJaycox Facebook/RebeccaLJaycox
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The Other Inheritance (Book One)
By Rebecca Jaycox
Published by Aelurus January 2017
Summarize: Reggie was your average teenage girl, well almost average, she could bring back things from the dead. She mostly brought back frogs and beetles, though only on accident. After loosing her father to what some say death (no body was ever found) and loosing her mother to alcohol and pills what she craves the most in normalcy. Unfortunately, that is not what she is! She is pulled into a war many decades in the making in a place that is fueled by magic and she is the most powerful of them all. Against her best friend John’s wishes she follows Asher (a boy she believes Rhy, her dream guardian, has sent) across an invisible barrier between her world and the Other. Reggie has to make a decision that could cost her not only her life but the life of the boy she has fallen in love with. Can she save the Others and bring balance back to a war that has been raging long before her time?
RAVES: OMG What did I just read, this book had be second guessing my reality. The way that Rebecca brought magic to life and showed me how real it could be had my head spinning. I am pretty sure that I was right there with John as he tried to keep Reggie from following Asher. I mean come on the cute ones are always the bad ones! This story is brand new, I can honestly say I have never read anything quite like it! Watching Reggie go from a scared teen to a kick butt woman in a matter of a few chapters was breath taking. The unconditional love that she showed Asher, and the un dough-ting trust she put in to the wolf despite her back ground was inspiring. I will be putting the second book on my pre-order list!
RANTS: Honesty whats not to love? This book had everything you would want, romance, drama, suspense, action and even some comedy. I cannot say enough good about it…so no rants from this peanut gallery!
STARS: 5 out of 5 stars for sure! I recommend this book for teen to adult (diffidently no one under like 16 do to one sexual scene); It is making my Top 10 list of 2017!
HOW TO GET IT: This book is not on shelves yet but you can be the first to know when it does hit shelves by following Rebecca Jaycox on her twitter and Facebook pages
Twitter: @RebeccaJaycox Facebook/RebeccaLJaycox
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February 3, 2017
3.5 stars
*I received an uncorrected proof of this book in exchange for feedback
In "The Other Inheritance", Reggie Lang discovers she has a strange power, and this discovery leads her to a hidden world of magic and monsters, where she is either going to join the resistance or fall into the hands of this world's evil oppressor. Her guide in this world is the mysterious Asher, and many more magical allies and enemies are introduced along the way.
While the high fantasy, hidden magical world angle of this book is one of my favorite fantasy tropes, and is not necessarily executed poorly here, I have some problems with The Other Inheritance.
Mainly--the writing style doesn't feel put together enough to grip an older teen audience, but there are themes (such as sex, non-consensual sex, alcoholism, and semi graphic torture/descriptions of wounds) that would keep me from recommending this book to anyone under sixteen.
What I mean by my critique of the writing style, is that it is driven by often convenient plot developments, and has minimal characterization for the leads and none at all for supporting characters. A lot of scenes important to the development of the plot and the relationship between our two main characters feel rushed and out of left field.
I give almost every book a minimum of three stars because I acknowledge that the process of writing a book and getting it published is a true feat in and of itself, but that doesn't excuse glaring problems.
Overall, I ended this book unsure of who it was really intended for. If it is intended for the older end of the YA spectrum then the writing style needs to come up to par with this books rivals in its field, and if it was intended for people under sixteen then my criticism is that it really shouldn't be.
*I received an uncorrected proof of this book in exchange for feedback
In "The Other Inheritance", Reggie Lang discovers she has a strange power, and this discovery leads her to a hidden world of magic and monsters, where she is either going to join the resistance or fall into the hands of this world's evil oppressor. Her guide in this world is the mysterious Asher, and many more magical allies and enemies are introduced along the way.
While the high fantasy, hidden magical world angle of this book is one of my favorite fantasy tropes, and is not necessarily executed poorly here, I have some problems with The Other Inheritance.
Mainly--the writing style doesn't feel put together enough to grip an older teen audience, but there are themes (such as sex, non-consensual sex, alcoholism, and semi graphic torture/descriptions of wounds) that would keep me from recommending this book to anyone under sixteen.
What I mean by my critique of the writing style, is that it is driven by often convenient plot developments, and has minimal characterization for the leads and none at all for supporting characters. A lot of scenes important to the development of the plot and the relationship between our two main characters feel rushed and out of left field.
I give almost every book a minimum of three stars because I acknowledge that the process of writing a book and getting it published is a true feat in and of itself, but that doesn't excuse glaring problems.
Overall, I ended this book unsure of who it was really intended for. If it is intended for the older end of the YA spectrum then the writing style needs to come up to par with this books rivals in its field, and if it was intended for people under sixteen then my criticism is that it really shouldn't be.
January 8, 2017
Pretty interesting book!!!! Love Reggie!!!! I really loved the first book in this series. I thought Reggie the heroine in the story was very interesting and wasn't a weakling. She could get herself out of trouble without having to be rescued by a big strong guy all the time.
Reggie's love interest so far is okay, I really am not all that sold on Asher as her soul mate. I really like her friend John and another character named Brwyn more, so far. I am not all that sure about Reggie's mother as of yet. And so far I am really liking Rhys a lot as well. And I am not sure about the villain Andrius yet, his a jerk that's for sure, and his a tyrant, but his not super big and scary to me as of yet.
The book was good and parts were full of adventure, but it was slow and boring at times, and that is why I only gave it 4 out of 5 stars. I was at first going to give it only 3 1/2 stars, but I really liked almost all the characters so far, and I really enjoyed the plot. And I want to buy the next book whenever it comes out, so the book to me deserved 4 stars.
I am so glad I received this book from the way of netgalley, I was the one to request the book, and this review so my honest opinion on how I felt about the book. I would definitely recommend this book to my family and friends.
Reggie's love interest so far is okay, I really am not all that sold on Asher as her soul mate. I really like her friend John and another character named Brwyn more, so far. I am not all that sure about Reggie's mother as of yet. And so far I am really liking Rhys a lot as well. And I am not sure about the villain Andrius yet, his a jerk that's for sure, and his a tyrant, but his not super big and scary to me as of yet.
The book was good and parts were full of adventure, but it was slow and boring at times, and that is why I only gave it 4 out of 5 stars. I was at first going to give it only 3 1/2 stars, but I really liked almost all the characters so far, and I really enjoyed the plot. And I want to buy the next book whenever it comes out, so the book to me deserved 4 stars.
I am so glad I received this book from the way of netgalley, I was the one to request the book, and this review so my honest opinion on how I felt about the book. I would definitely recommend this book to my family and friends.
October 1, 2015
The Other Inheritance is one of those books where you think you're not very far into it, when you realise you're 70% in and it's going to end soon. It's only then you realise how far the story has come, and how much has happened. The story takes a natural progression and is paced really well.
The story follows kick-ass Reggie on her search for her father's friend Rhys in the Other, a neighbouring realm where magic, giants, elves and witches exist.
Asher was sent to Reggie to bring her to the evil Andrius. When will evil dudes learn that sending a super hot nineteen-year-old boy to abduct a spunky firecracker seventeen-year-old girl is never a good idea? As if they aren't going to fall in love!
I was glad to get some insight into Asher's mind as he struggled with the morality of what he had to do, all the while realising he doesn't want to hurt Reggie. While I wouldn't have minded being as blindsided as Reggie in finding out he was working for the wrong side, I'm kind of glad that we the reader were aware of his mission from the start. I probably wouldn't have liked him as much as I do had it been a shock that he was working for Andrius.
There's a great set of supporting characters, in best friend John, and in the wolf changeling Brwyn who is itching to steal the spotlight from Reggie and Asher (and because he looks like one of the Hemsworth brothers in my mind, I'm totally okay with that.)
I'm really disappointed the next one isn't out yet! But I will be eagerly awaiting it.
The story follows kick-ass Reggie on her search for her father's friend Rhys in the Other, a neighbouring realm where magic, giants, elves and witches exist.
Asher was sent to Reggie to bring her to the evil Andrius. When will evil dudes learn that sending a super hot nineteen-year-old boy to abduct a spunky firecracker seventeen-year-old girl is never a good idea? As if they aren't going to fall in love!
I was glad to get some insight into Asher's mind as he struggled with the morality of what he had to do, all the while realising he doesn't want to hurt Reggie. While I wouldn't have minded being as blindsided as Reggie in finding out he was working for the wrong side, I'm kind of glad that we the reader were aware of his mission from the start. I probably wouldn't have liked him as much as I do had it been a shock that he was working for Andrius.
There's a great set of supporting characters, in best friend John, and in the wolf changeling Brwyn who is itching to steal the spotlight from Reggie and Asher (and because he looks like one of the Hemsworth brothers in my mind, I'm totally okay with that.)
I'm really disappointed the next one isn't out yet! But I will be eagerly awaiting it.
May 19, 2015
This book Was Given To Me By The Author In Exchange For An Honest Review
Beautiful and truly magical work! Rebecca Jaycox is a truly creative and whimsical writer, the blending but yet keeping separate two worlds who so truly belong together working side by side.
I loved how different the two worlds were from each other but how they shared a lot of the same qualities. I was fascinated by everything in the Other, how people lived, how they travelled and how there lives differed from the people in the Real. Rebecca has a brilliant and creative mind that blossoms and explodes on to every page and I couldn't wait to see what was to happen next!
Reggie and Asher were the total power couple and I was rooting for them throughout the whole book! I like that the bad guy is someone not totally seen throughout the book and they are never quite sure who to trust and who is by their side.
The ending was great and I really hope Rebecca goes further with the story as I would love to read what is in store next! don't miss out on this wild and magical adventure!
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Beautiful and truly magical work! Rebecca Jaycox is a truly creative and whimsical writer, the blending but yet keeping separate two worlds who so truly belong together working side by side.
I loved how different the two worlds were from each other but how they shared a lot of the same qualities. I was fascinated by everything in the Other, how people lived, how they travelled and how there lives differed from the people in the Real. Rebecca has a brilliant and creative mind that blossoms and explodes on to every page and I couldn't wait to see what was to happen next!
Reggie and Asher were the total power couple and I was rooting for them throughout the whole book! I like that the bad guy is someone not totally seen throughout the book and they are never quite sure who to trust and who is by their side.
The ending was great and I really hope Rebecca goes further with the story as I would love to read what is in store next! don't miss out on this wild and magical adventure!
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June 19, 2015
The story starts with Regina "Reggie" becoming aware of a power she never knew she had. With that she has to learn what's really happening to her. She has her friend, John, who doesn't think she's crazy. Her mom is an alcoholic. Something bad happened to her and she hasn't been the same.
Reggie has had a lot of bad luck. For some reason people just don't like her. Reggie is told that she's very important in a different world. That's where her journey starts and it's crazy!
I have to say Brwyn was my favorite character! How can you not like a changeling?
I didn't know what to think when I got this book. I was actually hooked from the beginning. The writing is fantastic and you can tell the time it took to create such an awesome world. A lot of times you get Young Adult books and their similar. But I felt this one was unique. There wasn't too much going on. You understood quite easily about these worlds.
What an ending! I hope there's a book two coming out really soon. Please please.. I can't get enough...Lissa
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Reggie has had a lot of bad luck. For some reason people just don't like her. Reggie is told that she's very important in a different world. That's where her journey starts and it's crazy!
I have to say Brwyn was my favorite character! How can you not like a changeling?
I didn't know what to think when I got this book. I was actually hooked from the beginning. The writing is fantastic and you can tell the time it took to create such an awesome world. A lot of times you get Young Adult books and their similar. But I felt this one was unique. There wasn't too much going on. You understood quite easily about these worlds.
What an ending! I hope there's a book two coming out really soon. Please please.. I can't get enough...Lissa
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February 5, 2017
Solid 3 stars. I was pleasantly surprised I liked Rebecca Jaycox's debut novel! I thought it was beautifully written. I loved the characters, the character development, the vivid intriguing world, and the dialogue. I was hesitant at first, when I thought the story would revolve around the typical cliche of the 'chosen one' but when it came to it, I wasn't that disappointed because somehow it revolved around every character in the story instead of the chosen one. It's told in third pov following various characters but it usually sticks to Reggie. I found Reggie to be a strong, and capable heroine and I adored her love interest, Asher, but I was disappointed in how fast their relationship evolved in a matter of a week, but overall I thought they were a strong couple together and I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
January 18, 2017
ARC via Netgalley
I was surprised by this one. By the time I finished reading it I was a tad disappointed that there wasn't more. It suffers from "girl discovers she's special" cliche (by using the entirely new world of the Other) but I didn't find too much fault with how it was revealed. I found Reggie to be a capable heroine but while the relationship between Asher starts off sort of "insta" it gradually goes beyond that and improves throughout the book.
I did like the character development and the world building and none of it felt forced which made this a fast read. Jaycox has talent and I'm curious to see where she takes these characters and the worlds they occupy.
I was surprised by this one. By the time I finished reading it I was a tad disappointed that there wasn't more. It suffers from "girl discovers she's special" cliche (by using the entirely new world of the Other) but I didn't find too much fault with how it was revealed. I found Reggie to be a capable heroine but while the relationship between Asher starts off sort of "insta" it gradually goes beyond that and improves throughout the book.
I did like the character development and the world building and none of it felt forced which made this a fast read. Jaycox has talent and I'm curious to see where she takes these characters and the worlds they occupy.
January 23, 2017
This is a book I think older teen readers will enjoy. There is a lot of action, fantasy and a little romance. Reggie is a good lead character, she seems to be a normal high school girl who has an alcoholic mother, is bullied by other students and can bring dead animals back to life. When a boy appears and offers help, she is transported to Other world and is now hunted because of her power. I like books that use elemental magic, Reggie has earth magic and is not very good at controlling her power. Hope this is book one of a new series. This appears to be Rebecca Jaycox's first book and she has presented a fine story.
January 23, 2017
I received a free copy via Netgalley in exchange for a honest review.
This is a good read with plenty of action and great characters.
The story finishes with you wanting more.
I will definitely be reading the next in the series.
This is a good read with plenty of action and great characters.
The story finishes with you wanting more.
I will definitely be reading the next in the series.
January 30, 2017
it takes a lot to keep me interested in a book and this one did just that. the story and the characters were all great. everthing kept ne wanting to read more and more. I can't wait for the second installment!!!
November 26, 2017
I feel like this book has a split personality & isn’t sure which audience it’s meant for. Parts seem Y/A, parts seem N/A, parts seem adult. I definitely wouldn’t recommend for Y/A due to the sexual references (though it’s not super descriptive, it’s still referenced multiple times), or the graphic violence. That being said, why do some parts feel so geared for Y/A? I’m not even sure what age Reggie is, since it never says in the story, or even refers to what grade she is in high school to guess, I can only assume between 16 to 18 because she’s in high school.
The characters seem to be a little flat, except for the changeling, Brwyn. He was the most interesting character in the whole book in my opinion. Reggie came across to trusting & naive for a strong heroine, which also makes me question her age. She also seemed too easily to accept her magic, learning with limited help, never questioning what’s going on around her or who to to trust or question, never having a melt down over the whole thing. She never gave me the feeling that her abilities could defeat anyone even with help either. She gets upset over killing the enemy soldiers, but can’t bring herself to kill the enemy mage/leader. To much contradictory stuff going on. Asher was ok for a Hero, but I would have liked more interaction between Asher & Reggie, before they became intimate (not that I’m thrilled that a 16 to 18 year old heroine is being portrayed as intimate in the story with the hero that I believe was mentioned as about 19 or 20) or even proclaiming love for each other. I feel that the sexually active heroines in books or movies that N/A readers would read should be atleast 18 (legal adults)! Y/A readers shouldn’t be reading that stuff yet, it’s a bad example for them. I felt their sex actually hurt the story line, the story would have been better with just kissing between them due to her age & inexperience, with no mention of love. I’m a 56 year old grandmother & read erotic as well as Y/A but I don’t like the mixed signals from this book.
The world building kind of was learned as Reggie learned, but there were some points that were glossed over & other points that were repetitive. The flow was decent, & it held my interest enough to stay up late to finish the book. It did end on a cliff-hanger, only thing that book this accomplished was finally getting her to Rhys & the resistance fighters, & that Asher now is no longer a slave to the evil mage. This seemed like 2 steps forward to every 4 steps backward in the plot. To many pages (Amazon says 314) for what seems like so little accomplishment to the tale, I needed more than this to keep me reading a series. Not sure I would want to pay for the next book in the series, & I’m not even sure how many more books there will be in the series.
The characters seem to be a little flat, except for the changeling, Brwyn. He was the most interesting character in the whole book in my opinion. Reggie came across to trusting & naive for a strong heroine, which also makes me question her age. She also seemed too easily to accept her magic, learning with limited help, never questioning what’s going on around her or who to to trust or question, never having a melt down over the whole thing. She never gave me the feeling that her abilities could defeat anyone even with help either. She gets upset over killing the enemy soldiers, but can’t bring herself to kill the enemy mage/leader. To much contradictory stuff going on. Asher was ok for a Hero, but I would have liked more interaction between Asher & Reggie, before they became intimate (not that I’m thrilled that a 16 to 18 year old heroine is being portrayed as intimate in the story with the hero that I believe was mentioned as about 19 or 20) or even proclaiming love for each other. I feel that the sexually active heroines in books or movies that N/A readers would read should be atleast 18 (legal adults)! Y/A readers shouldn’t be reading that stuff yet, it’s a bad example for them. I felt their sex actually hurt the story line, the story would have been better with just kissing between them due to her age & inexperience, with no mention of love. I’m a 56 year old grandmother & read erotic as well as Y/A but I don’t like the mixed signals from this book.
The world building kind of was learned as Reggie learned, but there were some points that were glossed over & other points that were repetitive. The flow was decent, & it held my interest enough to stay up late to finish the book. It did end on a cliff-hanger, only thing that book this accomplished was finally getting her to Rhys & the resistance fighters, & that Asher now is no longer a slave to the evil mage. This seemed like 2 steps forward to every 4 steps backward in the plot. To many pages (Amazon says 314) for what seems like so little accomplishment to the tale, I needed more than this to keep me reading a series. Not sure I would want to pay for the next book in the series, & I’m not even sure how many more books there will be in the series.
March 29, 2019
Great beginning for an epic battle between good and evil
Excellent novel ! Comparable to the movie Star War's and The Lord of the Ring's trilogy . It definitely leaves you with the same feeling that some movies used to years ago. That feeling being that you had experienced for a short time an almost magical experience where you were left feeling totally elated having connected with the characters , and storyline of the movie that you wished it had never ended. In all seriousness you could definitely coin this as a feel good novel. Three friends , Sebastian,Rhys, and Andrius set the stage for what's to come. Andrius ,who ends up craving more power as a mage has the Ather mages hunted down to the point of extinction using their blood to increase his own power, and separating their souls from their bodies to insure his total dominance over everyone. Andrius's two friends Sebastian,and Rhys end up opposing him to form an alliance to end his control of Twin Cities,and the Other. Reggie daughter of Sebastian,and Arlene has come of age to where she begins to experience her powers as the last of the Ather mages thus putting her in the position of being discovered by Andrius, endangering her position of freeing the people of the Other from Andrius control. Absolutely worth reading. I highly recommend it !
Excellent novel ! Comparable to the movie Star War's and The Lord of the Ring's trilogy . It definitely leaves you with the same feeling that some movies used to years ago. That feeling being that you had experienced for a short time an almost magical experience where you were left feeling totally elated having connected with the characters , and storyline of the movie that you wished it had never ended. In all seriousness you could definitely coin this as a feel good novel. Three friends , Sebastian,Rhys, and Andrius set the stage for what's to come. Andrius ,who ends up craving more power as a mage has the Ather mages hunted down to the point of extinction using their blood to increase his own power, and separating their souls from their bodies to insure his total dominance over everyone. Andrius's two friends Sebastian,and Rhys end up opposing him to form an alliance to end his control of Twin Cities,and the Other. Reggie daughter of Sebastian,and Arlene has come of age to where she begins to experience her powers as the last of the Ather mages thus putting her in the position of being discovered by Andrius, endangering her position of freeing the people of the Other from Andrius control. Absolutely worth reading. I highly recommend it !
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