Kurukshetra, the third and final installment in the Aryavarta Chronicles Trilogy by Krishna Udayasankar. To put it in one word, it is marvelous. However, as with anything, there is a ‘but’.
Now, there are a bunch of things that work in favour of the book and for these, credit must be given to the author. Remember, this is her debut outing in fiction.
First, the book assumes intelligence on part of the reader. A lot of it. On top of it, familiarity with the Mahabharata is not necessary, though it would help. Putting these two together is a noteworthy feat in itself. So, no two plus two equals four kind of spoon feeding here. The book assumes you can figure that out for yourself and rightly so. So, as you are reading the book, your mind races to keep pace with the plot and the unfolding of events, which happen at a quick pace.
That brings me to the next point – the pace of the plot. It’s racy and hurtles through, and you as a reader are expected to keep pace. If you don’t, you can quickly fall off the train and not know where you landed. That pace was very visible in the first installment – Govinda, seemed to flag a bit in the second, Kaurava and the first hundred or so pages on the last, Kurukshetra. All that moves aside once the battle of Kurukshetra starts and things start getting interesting again.
The next thing that works – the battle scenes of the Kurukshetra. They are extremely well wrought, like a work of art. The scenes literally unfold in front of your eyes and I was amazed that the author could fill over 200 pages with just the 18 days of battle, not once letting interest flag. The description of the astras, battle formations, duels are beautifully explained, sans superhuman strength of the warriors and shorn of miracles. The mastery of the warriors is simply a matter of skill and training and the destruction caused by the weapons, simply a mastery over the science of metal working and chemistry. The battle scenes themselves are straight out of a well choreographed action movie – capturing the valour, fear, tumult, screams and shrieks of war. And the emotions of war.
The highlight of the book is the way the emotions and motives of the protagonists are captured – they are very human, with very human motives, desires and fears. That, and their ideals. Sometimes misplaced, other times misunderstood. So, neither Syoddhan (Duryodhana) a clear villain nor Dharma (Yudhishthir) the clearly wronged. There are shades of grey to all characters. And white, and black and blue and green and pink. So it is that the author weaves a rainbow of layers to the protagonists characters.
But then, here is where I have a complaint. While the characters are well wrought, there is a subtle inconsistency across the series. Govinda Shauri (Krishna) is initially shown as scheming and manipulative initially but by the end, ends up as nearly divine. The transition is not exactly gradual, though it doesn’t jar. But sitting back, one cannot but notice the inconsistency. It almost seems that the author was overwhelmed by the divinity of the Krishna who uttered the Gita while at the same time, reconciles him to the scheming Krishna who suggested that Bhima attack Duryodhana’s thigh (though this episode is narrated differently). There is also a very complex relationship that Govinda has with Panchali (Draupadi) that vacillates between the platonic, to the divine-romance, to Panchali simply being a pawn in the hands of Govinda. At times, we are not sure if it is Govinda who is the pawn in the hands of Panchali.
The same happens with other characters too. The first two books give the impression that Sanjaya is one of the key ringmasters in the plot, but in the third book, he is totally absent, making an unconvincing cameo appearance towards the end. If there is one character who remains consistent throughout, it is Shikhandin and the importance accorded to him was a pleasant departure – to weave a story that has this much reviled, possibly androgynous character as Govinda’s bosom buddy and a key player in the events that shape Aryavarta, and a chest thumping masculine warrior matching Partha (Arjuna) and Ashwathama in skill, takes conviction and skill. The author carries this beautifully. He remains true to his knitting throughout the plot.
The plot itself has enough twists and turns to put a jalebi to shame. That is where the author credits the reader with intelligence. This is not a dumbed down version of the Mahabharata. It is neither a retelling nor a reinterpretation. It is a re-imagination and how! The basic plot is of an old rivalry between the Firstborn (led by the sage Dwaipayana, who dons the honorific title of Vyasa) and the Firewrights (led by Ghora Angirasa). The Firstborn are given to protect the Divine Order, which in essence sets rules, systems of social and political hierarchy supposedly to maintain order in society. The Firewrights are essentially scientists who have harnessed the secrets of nature. These secrets were initially used for the benefit of humanity, such as implements of agriculture etc., but soon, turned into instruments of war. Naturally, the kings of the realm outdo each other to procure these weapons of destruction that can give them power. Greed, fear and insecurities set in. To ensure that such great power does not fall into hands that do not know restraint, there is a grand cleansing of the Firewrights (called the Great Scourge) that decimates the Firewrights and their knowledge. Bhishma Devavrata (Bhishma) is at the forefront leading the cleansing, with able assistance from Dwaipayana Vyasa. Some firewrights survive and carry on their agenda in secret. Govinda is one of them. Much plots, sub-plots and twists and turns later, it boils down to a grand confrontation between the armies and allies of Syoddhan (striving to protect the Divine Order) and the armies and allies of Dharma (who is but an instrument in the hands of Govinda, striving to tear down the Divine Order to establish, in simple terms, a true democracy). That is the essence of the plot.
The plot only has a vague resemblance to the original Mahabharata – the key events from the Mahabharata are taken and re-imagined with the plot of the Firstborn and Firewrights woven around it. With this structure, the author explains with sound reason and rationale many of the events of the Mahabharata that otherwise seem beyond reason. And the explanations fit in extremely well, convincingly.
Coming back to the third book – Kurukshetra, it can be divided into two parts. One part is the action packed page turner of the 18 days of war. The other part is the exposition of the Firstborn-Firewright philosophy, the essence of the Gita and to some extent, the meaning of existence itself. The first part – Kurukshetra war - nestles cozily in the middle of the book. The first 100 or so pages set out the conflicts and the principles of the two warring groups, as well as their motives and insecurities. This makes the book flag in those parts. The last 100 or so pages, with some pages in between, are actually the true achievement of the book. In this, the author captures the essence of the Gita, the divinity of Krishna (remember, in this book he is NOT a god, just a human being, very much mortal), dvaita-advaita, maya, atman and narayana. This part may not appeal to many indeed, many may not even be able to appreciate this, but the book scores a ‘out of the park hit’ with this.
That also makes the book subject to comparisons, primarily with the immensely popular Meluha series by Amish Tripathi and Anand Neelakantan’s Ajaya/Asura. In all these, as well as the Aryavarta series, the overall plot is the same. While in Meluha it was Suryavanshis versus Chandravanshis where neither are clearly black/white or good/evil, it was the class struggle for equality in Ajaya (where there is a clear good-evil). So it is with Aryavarta Chronicles – Firstborn versus Firewright, where neither is clearly good or evil. But the comparison ends there.
The language is good – though simple, the prose has a poetic quality to it. A minor niggle is on the proofreading – there are several spelling errors, missed out words, grammatical errors – hopefully these will be taken care of in the next print run.
The book packs in a lot – many key characters, many events and incidents, many twists turns plots and sub plots, many philosophies. To pack in so much into three paperbacks, retaining the page turner quality for a good part is no mean achievement. Looking back, that could also be the book’s undoing because in this age of ‘ready to consume’ in all walks of life where the attention span is not more than 144 characters or a 10 second ad spot, not too many may appreciate a book that is not a ‘open-read-forget’ kind of metro read. But if you are not looking for adolescent romances (nothing against them) or rich girl-poor boy plots (nothing against them either), go for this series. But only if you are willing to ride a whirlwind and enjoy being tossed and turned around!