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The Knight of Eldaran #1
The Traitor's Heir
2014 INDIES Winner - Bronze in Fantasy Fiction
'A thrilling story fraught with uncertainty and betrayal.’ Publishers Weekly
In an epic and mystical tale that resonates with modern times, the young Eamon Goodman goes on a journey of discovery. A journey which sees him taking an increasingly pivotal role in the battle between the rival forces of the king and the master, and takes him from being a young soldier in his home of Edesfield to being a fast-rising hero in the dense and rotten city of Dunthruik.
Under the watchful eye of Lord Cathair, in the loving arms of Lady Alessia Turnholt, and torn between enemy forces, Eamon’s experiences lead him to question the nature and true meaning of some of the most important things in life - love and friendship, loyalty and honour, and who he really is. But will the answers he finds lead him to become true to himself and true to his name? Will they lead him to become a good man?
'A thrilling story fraught with uncertainty and betrayal.’ Publishers Weekly
In an epic and mystical tale that resonates with modern times, the young Eamon Goodman goes on a journey of discovery. A journey which sees him taking an increasingly pivotal role in the battle between the rival forces of the king and the master, and takes him from being a young soldier in his home of Edesfield to being a fast-rising hero in the dense and rotten city of Dunthruik.
Under the watchful eye of Lord Cathair, in the loving arms of Lady Alessia Turnholt, and torn between enemy forces, Eamon’s experiences lead him to question the nature and true meaning of some of the most important things in life - love and friendship, loyalty and honour, and who he really is. But will the answers he finds lead him to become true to himself and true to his name? Will they lead him to become a good man?
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October 20, 2015
The cover of this book was definitely enticing but I wasn't sure what to expect, and when it arrived and I saw the size of it, 541 pages, I was wondering what I had got myself in to.
But then I opened the book, and I was hooked. This is the first in the trilogy, The Knight of Eldaran, and once you read this one, you will definitely want the rest of the series.
This is the story of Eamon and his childhood friends Aeryn, Ladomer and their friend Hughan whom disappeared, and the choices they make, good or evil, and the consequences of these choices. Eamon will be told whom he really is, not just the son of the bookbinder but oh so much more. But how could that be possible when he is often overcome by a dark and sinister voice, telling him lies about who he is, and what he can and can not do.
"The hideous voice crept into his mind, clearer than ever.
'You have no need of him to pour witless sympathies about your feet. He cannot help you, and would not if he could. Leave!
Eamon rose to his feet.
Hughan laid his hand on Eamon's arm. 'You needn't listen to him, Eamon.' His eyes met and held Eamon's own. 'Do you want to sit?'
'Yes,' Eamon whispered.
"Then put the voice behind you, and be at peace.'
At the authority of the King's voice a growl thundered through Eamon's skull. The voice within suddenly relinquished its hold and died away." pg. 148
On the way to Dunthruik, having been promoted to Lieutenant, the ship Eamon is traveling on is overtaken by the Wayfarer's and only Eamon and his Cadet Mathaiah Grahaven are left alive. The Hands come upon the hidden village of Wayfarer's, while looking for any survivor's of the downed ship, and Eamon soon realizes that he must give up himself to save the many in hiding. He arranges to meet up with them later, and by then his cadet has decided to join in with him for this adventure.
When they meet up to be taken to Dunthruik the cadet begins to act quite strangely and Eamon is not sure if it is something the Hand has done to Mathaiah or if in fact he is playing. And continues to worry as he realizes the Hands are taking Mathaiah with them, while leaving Eamon at the West Quarter Guantlet College. Later while they share in a hunt together Mathaiah shares a little of what happened to him when they were separated.
"It was frightening at first. But then someone came to me. I don't know where from, or who he was. He... he was like Hughan--and yet unlike him. His face was wrong, yet somehow more right, too, and his voice! I cannot describe it to you. there was a kind of light all around him-blue, or white, or sliver all at once...The cadet paused, as though drawing his thoughts into order. Eamon listened in awe. 'He seemed kind, so I asked him to stay with me. He wasn't at all frightening. He knew my name and spoke to me of courage. He told me that I was a King's man and that although I was in darkness it couldn't keep me or hold me. He made me feel better--stronger and less afraid.
'He said that the Hands had brought me to Dunthruik and that they wanted to get into my mind--no, 'breach' was the word he used-but that I shouldn't worry, because they would find it unreachable. He said I was safe and that you would come; he stayed with me until you did and then he left, but I didn't see him go...Then I woke up.'" pg. 280
Lady Alessia invites Eamon to be her escort at the masque at the palace, and he goes in search of a costume, and finds quite the 'piece'. He is definitely making a statement.
"On a splintered hanger was a dark pair of trousers with a thin slivered strip running down the seam. With it hung a pale blue shirt, thinning in the sleeves. It had a dark blue cloak with a high collar. But it was the shirt that caught Eamon's eye, for on it were the faded remains of a stitched sword and star...Though a little thinned in places the trousers were well made; their silver seam shimmered in the lamplight. The shirt sat easily on his shoulders and the cloak, as it fell about him, enfolded him comfortingly. He felt the embroidery over his heart and was encouraged by it.....
'I think it fits.'
The shopkeeper nodded. 'There's just one more thing.' He hobbled forward and tugged with a veined hand at the chain showing at Eamon's neck. The heart of the King spilled forward to shimmer in the light. 'Now it fits,' he whispered, hie old eyes rimming with tears. pg. 306,307
Although he has good intentions and even desires, he struggles with living in the world, and not being conformed to it. He struggles with making the right choices, and many times even knowing what the right choice is.
"Had he ever known whom he served? It was Hughan who had called him First Knight, under that name and with Hughan's blessing, Eamon had come to Dunthruik to aid the King. Or had he come to rise to Right Hand, to be vested in black and serve the glory of the flame-faced Master?
He had done neither.
'Eamon.' Her grip tightened on his hand. 'You cannot serve them both.'
'I know.'
'You have to choose.'
It was the truth he had long sought to evade. Now he faced it. 'I thought I had chosen,' he whispered. 'But I never did. I suppose I thought that I could pick and choose my fealty. But I can't. It has to be all, or nothing.'" pg. 414
A dear friend, colleague is injured in battle and having watched so many die from his mistakes, Eamon does what many of us do at times, we beg.
"He closed his eyes. He pleaded with the blue light, the King's grace, begging it to overlook his oaths and transgressions, imploring it to come and save a man whose life surely deserved saving. Was it not but little to ask?
You are not a Serpent's man. Cease your unseemly pleading. No grace will come to you, son of Eben. You serve me.
The voice worked cruelly in his mind and his hope fell, crushed. No grace would come. Anderas would die.
He tore his hand away and rose. He could not stay there." pg. 461
Although Eamon struggles with choices, it is obvious to him, that many including Aeryn, her father and now his young cadet, once friend, Mathaiah have made their choice and are willing to stand up for their belief no matter the outcome.
"There is no man here to whom I may bend my knee!" Mathaiah gasped, eyes clenched against the pain....
The Master held out one hand. He laid it on Mathaiah's bare shoulder. The boy wrenched back as though it brought with it intolerable pain. Red light roared about the Master's fingertips...Mathaiah howled as the light scoured him, broken sobs from cracked lips....
The red light, stronger than bands or flames, increased, and suddenly Mathaiah was cast on his knees. There was a horrid crack as they struck the cold, hard floor....
'You may break my body, or make it kneel, 'he gasped, 'but you will not have my heart. I am a King's man." pg 521, 522
Finally he finds the courage to stand up and face his demons, and make the choice.
"His will and heart rose to the call. Rising above the insidious, crawling din of the unseen beast that hounded him, he made his choice:
'In the name and grace of the King, get behind me!" Eamon yelled. 'Do you hear? Behind me and hence!'
The darkness was gone." pg 532
This novel reminds me of the writings of C.S. Lewis, in that as you read the story there is a whole different, more intense meaning happening behind the scenes. I was a little surprised to see the use of some language that I would not expect to find in a Christian book, but based on how it was used I could see it fitting into the story line. There was also Eamon sharing a bed with Alessia, but the reality is this stuff happens all the time and this section was short and once you turned the page the story moved on.
I thoroughly enjoyed this fast reading book, full of adventure, intrigue, but mostly Eamon and the fact that he was not perfect and struggled much as I do at times. I would highly recommend this book to Christians and non-Christians alike. Two thumbs up!! Pick up this book and see if you don't agree, and run out to get the rest of the series as well.
Thank you to bookfun.org for the opportunity to read this book in exchange for an honest review.
But then I opened the book, and I was hooked. This is the first in the trilogy, The Knight of Eldaran, and once you read this one, you will definitely want the rest of the series.
This is the story of Eamon and his childhood friends Aeryn, Ladomer and their friend Hughan whom disappeared, and the choices they make, good or evil, and the consequences of these choices. Eamon will be told whom he really is, not just the son of the bookbinder but oh so much more. But how could that be possible when he is often overcome by a dark and sinister voice, telling him lies about who he is, and what he can and can not do.
"The hideous voice crept into his mind, clearer than ever.
'You have no need of him to pour witless sympathies about your feet. He cannot help you, and would not if he could. Leave!
Eamon rose to his feet.
Hughan laid his hand on Eamon's arm. 'You needn't listen to him, Eamon.' His eyes met and held Eamon's own. 'Do you want to sit?'
'Yes,' Eamon whispered.
"Then put the voice behind you, and be at peace.'
At the authority of the King's voice a growl thundered through Eamon's skull. The voice within suddenly relinquished its hold and died away." pg. 148
On the way to Dunthruik, having been promoted to Lieutenant, the ship Eamon is traveling on is overtaken by the Wayfarer's and only Eamon and his Cadet Mathaiah Grahaven are left alive. The Hands come upon the hidden village of Wayfarer's, while looking for any survivor's of the downed ship, and Eamon soon realizes that he must give up himself to save the many in hiding. He arranges to meet up with them later, and by then his cadet has decided to join in with him for this adventure.
When they meet up to be taken to Dunthruik the cadet begins to act quite strangely and Eamon is not sure if it is something the Hand has done to Mathaiah or if in fact he is playing. And continues to worry as he realizes the Hands are taking Mathaiah with them, while leaving Eamon at the West Quarter Guantlet College. Later while they share in a hunt together Mathaiah shares a little of what happened to him when they were separated.
"It was frightening at first. But then someone came to me. I don't know where from, or who he was. He... he was like Hughan--and yet unlike him. His face was wrong, yet somehow more right, too, and his voice! I cannot describe it to you. there was a kind of light all around him-blue, or white, or sliver all at once...The cadet paused, as though drawing his thoughts into order. Eamon listened in awe. 'He seemed kind, so I asked him to stay with me. He wasn't at all frightening. He knew my name and spoke to me of courage. He told me that I was a King's man and that although I was in darkness it couldn't keep me or hold me. He made me feel better--stronger and less afraid.
'He said that the Hands had brought me to Dunthruik and that they wanted to get into my mind--no, 'breach' was the word he used-but that I shouldn't worry, because they would find it unreachable. He said I was safe and that you would come; he stayed with me until you did and then he left, but I didn't see him go...Then I woke up.'" pg. 280
Lady Alessia invites Eamon to be her escort at the masque at the palace, and he goes in search of a costume, and finds quite the 'piece'. He is definitely making a statement.
"On a splintered hanger was a dark pair of trousers with a thin slivered strip running down the seam. With it hung a pale blue shirt, thinning in the sleeves. It had a dark blue cloak with a high collar. But it was the shirt that caught Eamon's eye, for on it were the faded remains of a stitched sword and star...Though a little thinned in places the trousers were well made; their silver seam shimmered in the lamplight. The shirt sat easily on his shoulders and the cloak, as it fell about him, enfolded him comfortingly. He felt the embroidery over his heart and was encouraged by it.....
'I think it fits.'
The shopkeeper nodded. 'There's just one more thing.' He hobbled forward and tugged with a veined hand at the chain showing at Eamon's neck. The heart of the King spilled forward to shimmer in the light. 'Now it fits,' he whispered, hie old eyes rimming with tears. pg. 306,307
Although he has good intentions and even desires, he struggles with living in the world, and not being conformed to it. He struggles with making the right choices, and many times even knowing what the right choice is.
"Had he ever known whom he served? It was Hughan who had called him First Knight, under that name and with Hughan's blessing, Eamon had come to Dunthruik to aid the King. Or had he come to rise to Right Hand, to be vested in black and serve the glory of the flame-faced Master?
He had done neither.
'Eamon.' Her grip tightened on his hand. 'You cannot serve them both.'
'I know.'
'You have to choose.'
It was the truth he had long sought to evade. Now he faced it. 'I thought I had chosen,' he whispered. 'But I never did. I suppose I thought that I could pick and choose my fealty. But I can't. It has to be all, or nothing.'" pg. 414
A dear friend, colleague is injured in battle and having watched so many die from his mistakes, Eamon does what many of us do at times, we beg.
"He closed his eyes. He pleaded with the blue light, the King's grace, begging it to overlook his oaths and transgressions, imploring it to come and save a man whose life surely deserved saving. Was it not but little to ask?
You are not a Serpent's man. Cease your unseemly pleading. No grace will come to you, son of Eben. You serve me.
The voice worked cruelly in his mind and his hope fell, crushed. No grace would come. Anderas would die.
He tore his hand away and rose. He could not stay there." pg. 461
Although Eamon struggles with choices, it is obvious to him, that many including Aeryn, her father and now his young cadet, once friend, Mathaiah have made their choice and are willing to stand up for their belief no matter the outcome.
"There is no man here to whom I may bend my knee!" Mathaiah gasped, eyes clenched against the pain....
The Master held out one hand. He laid it on Mathaiah's bare shoulder. The boy wrenched back as though it brought with it intolerable pain. Red light roared about the Master's fingertips...Mathaiah howled as the light scoured him, broken sobs from cracked lips....
The red light, stronger than bands or flames, increased, and suddenly Mathaiah was cast on his knees. There was a horrid crack as they struck the cold, hard floor....
'You may break my body, or make it kneel, 'he gasped, 'but you will not have my heart. I am a King's man." pg 521, 522
Finally he finds the courage to stand up and face his demons, and make the choice.
"His will and heart rose to the call. Rising above the insidious, crawling din of the unseen beast that hounded him, he made his choice:
'In the name and grace of the King, get behind me!" Eamon yelled. 'Do you hear? Behind me and hence!'
The darkness was gone." pg 532
This novel reminds me of the writings of C.S. Lewis, in that as you read the story there is a whole different, more intense meaning happening behind the scenes. I was a little surprised to see the use of some language that I would not expect to find in a Christian book, but based on how it was used I could see it fitting into the story line. There was also Eamon sharing a bed with Alessia, but the reality is this stuff happens all the time and this section was short and once you turned the page the story moved on.
I thoroughly enjoyed this fast reading book, full of adventure, intrigue, but mostly Eamon and the fact that he was not perfect and struggled much as I do at times. I would highly recommend this book to Christians and non-Christians alike. Two thumbs up!! Pick up this book and see if you don't agree, and run out to get the rest of the series as well.
Thank you to bookfun.org for the opportunity to read this book in exchange for an honest review.
January 20, 2021
It was ok but I struggled a bit with it.
The world building was good and gave a good insight into the world the characters inhabit.
It didn't exactly jump off the page though but it's a dour world so that fits but it did make it very bleak.
The characters were what I struggled with most. I just couldn't relate at all and didn't connect to them or their stories.
Not sure why but just didn't feel their struggle.
There's a few characters that are prominent but again none of them really grabbed me. The characterisations were also not quite there either and a bit all over the place. Some things they did just seemed out of character and not fitting what was going on.
The plot is a bit convoluted and not really clear.
No spoilers but I struggled to make sense of what it was all about or why things were happening as they were.
I'm glad I read it but I am hoping the second one connects with me a bit more.
I'm thinking it will as this seems like it was just a setting the scene book but we'll see soon I guess.
The world building was good and gave a good insight into the world the characters inhabit.
It didn't exactly jump off the page though but it's a dour world so that fits but it did make it very bleak.
The characters were what I struggled with most. I just couldn't relate at all and didn't connect to them or their stories.
Not sure why but just didn't feel their struggle.
There's a few characters that are prominent but again none of them really grabbed me. The characterisations were also not quite there either and a bit all over the place. Some things they did just seemed out of character and not fitting what was going on.
The plot is a bit convoluted and not really clear.
No spoilers but I struggled to make sense of what it was all about or why things were happening as they were.
I'm glad I read it but I am hoping the second one connects with me a bit more.
I'm thinking it will as this seems like it was just a setting the scene book but we'll see soon I guess.
August 27, 2015
For over five hundred years the River Realm has laid in the hand of the Master. And it is the dream of every young man to join the Gauntlet; the Master's army who is out to overthrow the growing rebellion of Serpents. For Cadet Eamon Goodman, that dream is about to become reality as he takes the oath to serve the Master.
But in his swearing ceremony, something unexpected happens and a dark, haunting voice starts to control his thoughts, offering him unlimited power. Eamon is confused and unsettled. When his friend is captured and found guilty of being a Serpent, he volunteers to take her to Duntruik, the capital, with the hope of rescuing her.
When their ship is set upon by Serpent men and a young cadet is hurt, Eamon finds he has the power of the King's Grace. Even more confused than before, Eamon discovers that the stories he had been told as a child are true. The line of Kings is alive and well, and the next king is his old friend Hughan, whom he thought long dead.
Swearing to serve the King as his First Knight, a name that stirs him as none before, Eamon is sent to serve the King in the heart of the Master's kingdom - Duntruik itself.
With two completely conflicting, completely unbreakable vows on his shoulders, who is Eamon going to decide to serve? The self enthroned Master? Or the one true King?
♥ ♥ ♥
First off let me say that The Traitor's Heir was a great allegory of the gospel. I could see how Hughan (The King) was the figure of Jesus or God. His grace came upon Eamon and enabled him to do things he was unable to do apart from him. He gave Eamon a peace and a power he did not understand. Hughan was thought dead by those close to him and revealed himself first to Aeryn, (who we find out later is his betrothed) the close friend of Eamon who he later saves from death.
Eamon shows the person of faith and the walk of it. He is sworn to serve the Master, and struggles with staying true to the King. He vows to serve the king in the heart of the Master's domain. My favorite part of the book is where Hughan asks Eamon to serve him in this way.
Eamon looked once more at Hughan. "What would you have me do?" he asked.
"Keep your promise to the Hands. Go with them to Dunthruik and there, First Knight, in the very heart of my enemy's stronghold, I would ask you to serve me."
~ The Traitor's Heir • By Anna Thayer ~
I feel that this is the exact thing our King of Kings asks us to do every day. To serve him in a world steeped with the the Master (devil) and he is our power against him.
While I did love this book, I have to give it less than five stars due to a couple things.
1) While the allegory was wonderful, there was a use of profanity that shocked me. The term b*****d was used multiply times as were d**n, d****d, b***h and a*s. While this is a UK published book, and things are laxer over there then here, there is no reason for this amount of swearing. Especially since this is a 'Christian' publisher.
2) Eamon is a man who is losing himself in the Master's world. This said, he is being tempted and lured by the Master to reveal his secrets. One way is by a lady. There is parts where Eamon falls and succumbs to the woman's beauty and what she offers him. Nothing explicit is mentioned, but a observing reader knows where they are going and what they are doing.
I can't tell you what to read. You must be the judge. I loved this book apart from the two things mentioned above. I won't be recommending it for anyone younger than 16 and will be hesitant to share it with anyone I know is new to the faith, struggles with swearing, etc. There are two more book sin the series as well, so if you are a must-read-every-book, I wouldn't suggest this book to you.
I give this book a four star out of five.
I was given this book for my honest review from the Cook Club Network.
But in his swearing ceremony, something unexpected happens and a dark, haunting voice starts to control his thoughts, offering him unlimited power. Eamon is confused and unsettled. When his friend is captured and found guilty of being a Serpent, he volunteers to take her to Duntruik, the capital, with the hope of rescuing her.
When their ship is set upon by Serpent men and a young cadet is hurt, Eamon finds he has the power of the King's Grace. Even more confused than before, Eamon discovers that the stories he had been told as a child are true. The line of Kings is alive and well, and the next king is his old friend Hughan, whom he thought long dead.
Swearing to serve the King as his First Knight, a name that stirs him as none before, Eamon is sent to serve the King in the heart of the Master's kingdom - Duntruik itself.
With two completely conflicting, completely unbreakable vows on his shoulders, who is Eamon going to decide to serve? The self enthroned Master? Or the one true King?
♥ ♥ ♥
First off let me say that The Traitor's Heir was a great allegory of the gospel. I could see how Hughan (The King) was the figure of Jesus or God. His grace came upon Eamon and enabled him to do things he was unable to do apart from him. He gave Eamon a peace and a power he did not understand. Hughan was thought dead by those close to him and revealed himself first to Aeryn, (who we find out later is his betrothed) the close friend of Eamon who he later saves from death.
Eamon shows the person of faith and the walk of it. He is sworn to serve the Master, and struggles with staying true to the King. He vows to serve the king in the heart of the Master's domain. My favorite part of the book is where Hughan asks Eamon to serve him in this way.
Eamon looked once more at Hughan. "What would you have me do?" he asked.
"Keep your promise to the Hands. Go with them to Dunthruik and there, First Knight, in the very heart of my enemy's stronghold, I would ask you to serve me."
~ The Traitor's Heir • By Anna Thayer ~
I feel that this is the exact thing our King of Kings asks us to do every day. To serve him in a world steeped with the the Master (devil) and he is our power against him.
While I did love this book, I have to give it less than five stars due to a couple things.
1) While the allegory was wonderful, there was a use of profanity that shocked me. The term b*****d was used multiply times as were d**n, d****d, b***h and a*s. While this is a UK published book, and things are laxer over there then here, there is no reason for this amount of swearing. Especially since this is a 'Christian' publisher.
2) Eamon is a man who is losing himself in the Master's world. This said, he is being tempted and lured by the Master to reveal his secrets. One way is by a lady. There is parts where Eamon falls and succumbs to the woman's beauty and what she offers him. Nothing explicit is mentioned, but a observing reader knows where they are going and what they are doing.
I can't tell you what to read. You must be the judge. I loved this book apart from the two things mentioned above. I won't be recommending it for anyone younger than 16 and will be hesitant to share it with anyone I know is new to the faith, struggles with swearing, etc. There are two more book sin the series as well, so if you are a must-read-every-book, I wouldn't suggest this book to you.
I give this book a four star out of five.
I was given this book for my honest review from the Cook Club Network.
October 6, 2015
This is a wonderful and entertaining fantasy story that starts off with a bang. One I did not want to put down. Can't wait to read book 2 in this series. Anna Thayer has created such realistic characters and the world they live in that I felt I was with them and could picture them in my mind. This is a mystical story of good battling evil. Something we deal with everyday.
The setting for this story is The River Realm; a world of the supernatural and intrigue. Eamon Goodman, the main character, has always wanted to be a Gauntlet in the Master's army. After giving his oath to follow and serve the master he meets the King and begins to question his oath to be a gauntlet. He is trying to serve two masters. Will he decide to follow The Master (Satan) or the King, Our Lord and Savior? Whom will be betray?
A well written story of epic proportions filled with choices, power, control, forgiveness, redemption, love and so much more. Anna did a great job with all of the characters even the evil ones. There is some profanity and graphic details of the cruelty inflicted upon others in the story.
I love fantasy stories and this was a great read.
I received a free copy of this book from bookfun.org for my honest opinion and review.
The setting for this story is The River Realm; a world of the supernatural and intrigue. Eamon Goodman, the main character, has always wanted to be a Gauntlet in the Master's army. After giving his oath to follow and serve the master he meets the King and begins to question his oath to be a gauntlet. He is trying to serve two masters. Will he decide to follow The Master (Satan) or the King, Our Lord and Savior? Whom will be betray?
A well written story of epic proportions filled with choices, power, control, forgiveness, redemption, love and so much more. Anna did a great job with all of the characters even the evil ones. There is some profanity and graphic details of the cruelty inflicted upon others in the story.
I love fantasy stories and this was a great read.
I received a free copy of this book from bookfun.org for my honest opinion and review.
July 9, 2014
Originally posted at: http://thebookplank.blogspot.com/2014...
Before being presented with the request to review The Traitor's Heir I had never heard of Anna Thayer nor of the publisher Lion Hudson, this first book had already gotten a lot of positive news. And reading the synopsis it was really a book right up my alley, I am always in for another Epic Fantasy adventure and The Traitor's Heir proved just to have that. This is a action packed start of a new Epic Fantasy series. Anna Thayer is off to a solid start!
From the first moment that you pick up The Traitor's Heir you are right in the middle of an action scene, focusing on the main protagonist Eamon Goodman. In the prologue to the story you are readily introduced to terms such as the "Gauntlet" and "Hand" later you learn that have reference towards specific military roles but with this Anna Thayer did manage to inspire that all important feeling of really creating her own set of rules and the world that flowed from this.
After the action packed prologue the story picks up a slightly gentler pace in the subsequent chapter giving in a clear introduction to Eamon Goodman and that he is a bookbinder turned soldier, an interesting career change to say the least. Eamon is about to take part in a ritual known as the "swear" where Eamon pledges full allegiance to the Master, the one who sits on the throne. Pledging you allegiance might be a simple saying as I do, but you get much more in return, you get an sigil of the Master on your hand, and the Master will grant you a special magical power. This swearing is something that Eamon has had mind on for a long time, he always wanted to be part of the most Elite warrior of the River Realm. Having passed this is, only gives rise to the first set of problems. Eamon has made good friends in his village but now there are rumors that there are snakes present amongst them, also known as wayfarer's and the King's people. These snakes directly oppose the Master, the one who rules. So when a friend of Eamon is executed because he is a snake, Eamon's mind does get put to thinking: How could this have happened? After this execution Eamon also gets to learn the power of the King... with some dire consequences... From this point onwards Eamon is thrown in an epic adventures of coming-of-age, power struggles and betrayal. With some reference to his ancestors, it seems that Eamon is reliving past events... but the question remains, will Eamon be able to choose where his allegiance lies? At the hand of the Master or on the side of the King?
The story that Anna Thayer tells in The Traitor's Heir is really solid, there are some many things going on that I could talk about it for a while more but since there is a lot of intrigue and betrayals I won't this is something that you have to read for yourself so you get the best kickout of it. Another thing that readily falls to note is the skill with which Anna Thayer has written The Traitor's Heir. Anna Thayer is an English teacher by day and this is seen back in the engaging way in which the story is written. The dialogues flow freely as well as the detailed environments of the River Realm.
The idea's behind the story is the struggle of power and finding your true allegiance. These idea's are readily found back in the way that the main protagonist, Eamon, acts. I have to say that when it comes down to showing a very humane protagonist this is just what Anna Thayer did with Eamon. These elements are all found back in his character. Eamon is just 23 years old at the start of the book and was training by his father as a bookbinder but choose for a military career instead. This "rookieness" is shown in the early pages of the book but as the story progresses, Eamon's character goes trough many transformations learning more and more and this really bolstered a certain coming-of-age aspect of the story. Eamon isn't a dumb fellow and as betrayals are done to him so does he do to others. One other thing that Anna Thayer manages to show in a great way is the inner struggle that Eamon has with himself when it comes down to choosing the Master or the King. He has always grown up with the idea of the Master being the true leader but when he learns about the King he doesn't know what to do and takes part into both... but a divided allegiance can only be kept up for so long. Eamon just can't seem to choose and when certain encounters are inevitable the tension can rise pretty high. I liked how Anna Thayer continued to build up on this aspect making it more and more difficult for Eamon to choose his path.
The characterization of Eamon was just spot on and Anna Thayer continued down this path for he secondary characters as well. There are several characters both on the side of the Master and on the side of the King. From both sides Eamon has made friends and this makes it all that much more complicated for him. On the Master's side I enjoyed reading about Lord Cathair, a nefarious and ruthless presence, that has no mercy at all, another that I liked was that of Ladomer Kentigern, though he only makes sporadic entries in the book, he is one of those character that will put a smile on your face despite the dire setting of the book, his character somehow seemed to lighten and brighten up the dark tones of the book. On the side of the King we find Hughan and Aeryn. Aeryn and Eamon grew up together and her father execution sets several things into motion which causes Eamon to eventually wind up with Hughan a Kings man in full blood and he tells Eamon just what his destiny might be. Very interesting characters that each have their own personality and voice.
With a book like The Traitor's Heir, Anna Thayer directly makes a name for herself. It's it one of those hidden gem of a book that you wish more people knew about. Like I said before I had never heard of Lion Hudson but was glad that I got the opportunity to read The Traitor's Heir. In this first book Anna Thayer introduces some very cool concepts directly in the lines of a true epic fantasy story. From the first page she manages to put the setting just right and this is continued all throughout the story. The characters and mainly, Eamon, is one that stands-out heads above shoulders, you will be directly relating to all the hardships he has gone through and is still going through. The Traitor's Heir is an exciting new fantasy story that you don't want to miss.
Before being presented with the request to review The Traitor's Heir I had never heard of Anna Thayer nor of the publisher Lion Hudson, this first book had already gotten a lot of positive news. And reading the synopsis it was really a book right up my alley, I am always in for another Epic Fantasy adventure and The Traitor's Heir proved just to have that. This is a action packed start of a new Epic Fantasy series. Anna Thayer is off to a solid start!
From the first moment that you pick up The Traitor's Heir you are right in the middle of an action scene, focusing on the main protagonist Eamon Goodman. In the prologue to the story you are readily introduced to terms such as the "Gauntlet" and "Hand" later you learn that have reference towards specific military roles but with this Anna Thayer did manage to inspire that all important feeling of really creating her own set of rules and the world that flowed from this.
After the action packed prologue the story picks up a slightly gentler pace in the subsequent chapter giving in a clear introduction to Eamon Goodman and that he is a bookbinder turned soldier, an interesting career change to say the least. Eamon is about to take part in a ritual known as the "swear" where Eamon pledges full allegiance to the Master, the one who sits on the throne. Pledging you allegiance might be a simple saying as I do, but you get much more in return, you get an sigil of the Master on your hand, and the Master will grant you a special magical power. This swearing is something that Eamon has had mind on for a long time, he always wanted to be part of the most Elite warrior of the River Realm. Having passed this is, only gives rise to the first set of problems. Eamon has made good friends in his village but now there are rumors that there are snakes present amongst them, also known as wayfarer's and the King's people. These snakes directly oppose the Master, the one who rules. So when a friend of Eamon is executed because he is a snake, Eamon's mind does get put to thinking: How could this have happened? After this execution Eamon also gets to learn the power of the King... with some dire consequences... From this point onwards Eamon is thrown in an epic adventures of coming-of-age, power struggles and betrayal. With some reference to his ancestors, it seems that Eamon is reliving past events... but the question remains, will Eamon be able to choose where his allegiance lies? At the hand of the Master or on the side of the King?
The story that Anna Thayer tells in The Traitor's Heir is really solid, there are some many things going on that I could talk about it for a while more but since there is a lot of intrigue and betrayals I won't this is something that you have to read for yourself so you get the best kickout of it. Another thing that readily falls to note is the skill with which Anna Thayer has written The Traitor's Heir. Anna Thayer is an English teacher by day and this is seen back in the engaging way in which the story is written. The dialogues flow freely as well as the detailed environments of the River Realm.
The idea's behind the story is the struggle of power and finding your true allegiance. These idea's are readily found back in the way that the main protagonist, Eamon, acts. I have to say that when it comes down to showing a very humane protagonist this is just what Anna Thayer did with Eamon. These elements are all found back in his character. Eamon is just 23 years old at the start of the book and was training by his father as a bookbinder but choose for a military career instead. This "rookieness" is shown in the early pages of the book but as the story progresses, Eamon's character goes trough many transformations learning more and more and this really bolstered a certain coming-of-age aspect of the story. Eamon isn't a dumb fellow and as betrayals are done to him so does he do to others. One other thing that Anna Thayer manages to show in a great way is the inner struggle that Eamon has with himself when it comes down to choosing the Master or the King. He has always grown up with the idea of the Master being the true leader but when he learns about the King he doesn't know what to do and takes part into both... but a divided allegiance can only be kept up for so long. Eamon just can't seem to choose and when certain encounters are inevitable the tension can rise pretty high. I liked how Anna Thayer continued to build up on this aspect making it more and more difficult for Eamon to choose his path.
The characterization of Eamon was just spot on and Anna Thayer continued down this path for he secondary characters as well. There are several characters both on the side of the Master and on the side of the King. From both sides Eamon has made friends and this makes it all that much more complicated for him. On the Master's side I enjoyed reading about Lord Cathair, a nefarious and ruthless presence, that has no mercy at all, another that I liked was that of Ladomer Kentigern, though he only makes sporadic entries in the book, he is one of those character that will put a smile on your face despite the dire setting of the book, his character somehow seemed to lighten and brighten up the dark tones of the book. On the side of the King we find Hughan and Aeryn. Aeryn and Eamon grew up together and her father execution sets several things into motion which causes Eamon to eventually wind up with Hughan a Kings man in full blood and he tells Eamon just what his destiny might be. Very interesting characters that each have their own personality and voice.
With a book like The Traitor's Heir, Anna Thayer directly makes a name for herself. It's it one of those hidden gem of a book that you wish more people knew about. Like I said before I had never heard of Lion Hudson but was glad that I got the opportunity to read The Traitor's Heir. In this first book Anna Thayer introduces some very cool concepts directly in the lines of a true epic fantasy story. From the first page she manages to put the setting just right and this is continued all throughout the story. The characters and mainly, Eamon, is one that stands-out heads above shoulders, you will be directly relating to all the hardships he has gone through and is still going through. The Traitor's Heir is an exciting new fantasy story that you don't want to miss.
August 2, 2014
I received this book from Kregel Publications for no charge in exchange for my honest review of this book. The opinions expressed here are my own.
Book Description:
Like many from his village, young Eamon Goodhand dreamed of joining the Gauntlet, the army of the overlord Eldered. Now he is about to complete his training and swear his loyalty to Eldered and his commanders, the Hands, who uphold Eldered's tight control of the land.
Entering into the service of the Gauntlet, Eamon's gifts, particularly his potent Sight, quickly become valuable to his superiors and he advances to the command rank at a speed that arouses the suspicions of fellow officers.
However, Eldered's bloody rule, and Eamon's personal friendships, start to challenge the young soldier's assumptions about what might be true, and worthy of service. And soon Eamon must conceal a fatal secret: he is sworn to both Eldered and to Hughan, the rightful king of the land. Yet he may not forswear the vows he has uttered in all good faith so however he serves, his name will be traitor.
As tensions and military skirmishes increase, Eamon finds himself trusted by both his masters. How can he possibly maintain his integrity, act justly to his fellow officers of the Gauntlet, and act on behalf of all the warring people of the land?
My Thoughts:
The Traitor's Heir is the debut novel of Anna Thayer. The Traitor's Heir is the first book in her series, The Knight of Eldaran, and it is a good book. I do not read a lot in the Fantasy Genre but there are a few that I enjoy and The Traitor's Heir is one of them. When I read the book description and the fact that this is Anna Thayer's debut book, well I really wanted to read it. Eamon Goodhand wants nothing more than to be part of the Gauntlet, the army of Eldered, an overlord who took the kingdom long ago. Eamon has second thoughts about joining the Gauntlet after talking to a friend of his and then decided when another of their friends tells him what the Gauntlet has in store for him and Eamon swears the oath and his loyalty to Eldered. As his superiors realize the strong gift of Sight Eamon has they are quick to move him up the ranks, which causes fellow officers to be suspicious. After his ship is taken over, Eamon and another soldier are captured and taken to a village. There Eamon gets a big shock, a friend who he thought gone, was standing there in front of him. Hughan is alive and is the rightful king of the land. Eamon finds himself sworn to Eldered and to Hughan, no mater who he serves he is a traitor.
The Traitors Heir is a great book. Anna Thayer did a fantastic job creating this whole world of fantasy. Anna Thayer transplants her readers into this world with vivid descriptions, high action, and suspense. As I read this book, I felt like I was there experiencing the events with our characters. From start to finish this book kept my attention and moved at a great pace. There are many twists and turns throughout that really keeps the reader guessing. As someone who doesn't read much in the Fantasy genre I found myself really enjoying this book. I highly recommend this book to anyone who enjoys fantasy like The Lord of The Rings and Narnia, you will not be disappointed. I look forward to reading the rest of the books in this trilogy. I give this book 4 STARS.
Book Description:
Like many from his village, young Eamon Goodhand dreamed of joining the Gauntlet, the army of the overlord Eldered. Now he is about to complete his training and swear his loyalty to Eldered and his commanders, the Hands, who uphold Eldered's tight control of the land.
Entering into the service of the Gauntlet, Eamon's gifts, particularly his potent Sight, quickly become valuable to his superiors and he advances to the command rank at a speed that arouses the suspicions of fellow officers.
However, Eldered's bloody rule, and Eamon's personal friendships, start to challenge the young soldier's assumptions about what might be true, and worthy of service. And soon Eamon must conceal a fatal secret: he is sworn to both Eldered and to Hughan, the rightful king of the land. Yet he may not forswear the vows he has uttered in all good faith so however he serves, his name will be traitor.
As tensions and military skirmishes increase, Eamon finds himself trusted by both his masters. How can he possibly maintain his integrity, act justly to his fellow officers of the Gauntlet, and act on behalf of all the warring people of the land?
My Thoughts:
The Traitor's Heir is the debut novel of Anna Thayer. The Traitor's Heir is the first book in her series, The Knight of Eldaran, and it is a good book. I do not read a lot in the Fantasy Genre but there are a few that I enjoy and The Traitor's Heir is one of them. When I read the book description and the fact that this is Anna Thayer's debut book, well I really wanted to read it. Eamon Goodhand wants nothing more than to be part of the Gauntlet, the army of Eldered, an overlord who took the kingdom long ago. Eamon has second thoughts about joining the Gauntlet after talking to a friend of his and then decided when another of their friends tells him what the Gauntlet has in store for him and Eamon swears the oath and his loyalty to Eldered. As his superiors realize the strong gift of Sight Eamon has they are quick to move him up the ranks, which causes fellow officers to be suspicious. After his ship is taken over, Eamon and another soldier are captured and taken to a village. There Eamon gets a big shock, a friend who he thought gone, was standing there in front of him. Hughan is alive and is the rightful king of the land. Eamon finds himself sworn to Eldered and to Hughan, no mater who he serves he is a traitor.
The Traitors Heir is a great book. Anna Thayer did a fantastic job creating this whole world of fantasy. Anna Thayer transplants her readers into this world with vivid descriptions, high action, and suspense. As I read this book, I felt like I was there experiencing the events with our characters. From start to finish this book kept my attention and moved at a great pace. There are many twists and turns throughout that really keeps the reader guessing. As someone who doesn't read much in the Fantasy genre I found myself really enjoying this book. I highly recommend this book to anyone who enjoys fantasy like The Lord of The Rings and Narnia, you will not be disappointed. I look forward to reading the rest of the books in this trilogy. I give this book 4 STARS.
August 1, 2014
Anna Thayer in her new book “The Traitor’s Heir” Book One in The Knight of Eldaran series published by Lion Hudson introduces us to Eamon Goodhand .
From the back cover: Every man has a destiny. His is to betray.
Like many from his village, young Eamon Goodhand dreamed of joining the Gauntlet, the army of the overlord Eldered. Now he is about to complete his training and swear his loyalty to Eldered and his commanders, the Hands, who uphold Eldered’s tight control of the land.
Entering into the service of the Gauntlet, Eamon’s gifts, particularly his potent Sight, quickly become valuable to his superiors and he advances to the command rank at a speed that arouses the suspicions of fellow officers.
However, Eldered’s bloody rule, and Eamon’s personal friendships, start to challenge the young soldier’s assumptions about what might be true, and worthy of service. And soon Eamon must conceal a fatal secret: he is sworn to both Eldered and to Hughan, the rightful king of the land. Yet he may not forswear the vows he has uttered in all good faith so however he serves, his name will be traitor.
As tensions and military skirmishes increase, Eamon finds himself trusted by both his masters. How can he possibly maintain his integrity, act justly to his fellow officers of the Gauntlet, and act on behalf of all the warring people of the land?
I think it takes an incredibly gifted author to create a whole world and fill it with empires and kings. That is exactly what Anna Thayer has done and she has done it spectacularly. Welcome to The River Realm where Eldered rules. However he rules by force and murder and is not the true king. Eamon meets and knows the true King but is torn in his soul because he is sworn to both and eventually he will have to betray one. This is a great way to begin a new first-rate series. This story is like Robin Hood and King Arthur all rolled up into one and it is an allegory for many things most importantly the battle between God and the devil and who will man ultimately serve. Ms. Thayer has given us a unique action adventure that will keep you on the edge of your chair as you read and flip pages as fast as possible. I recommend this book highly and look forward to the next book in this series.
Disclosure of Material Connection: I received this book free from Lion Hudson. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255: “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.”
From the back cover: Every man has a destiny. His is to betray.
Like many from his village, young Eamon Goodhand dreamed of joining the Gauntlet, the army of the overlord Eldered. Now he is about to complete his training and swear his loyalty to Eldered and his commanders, the Hands, who uphold Eldered’s tight control of the land.
Entering into the service of the Gauntlet, Eamon’s gifts, particularly his potent Sight, quickly become valuable to his superiors and he advances to the command rank at a speed that arouses the suspicions of fellow officers.
However, Eldered’s bloody rule, and Eamon’s personal friendships, start to challenge the young soldier’s assumptions about what might be true, and worthy of service. And soon Eamon must conceal a fatal secret: he is sworn to both Eldered and to Hughan, the rightful king of the land. Yet he may not forswear the vows he has uttered in all good faith so however he serves, his name will be traitor.
As tensions and military skirmishes increase, Eamon finds himself trusted by both his masters. How can he possibly maintain his integrity, act justly to his fellow officers of the Gauntlet, and act on behalf of all the warring people of the land?
I think it takes an incredibly gifted author to create a whole world and fill it with empires and kings. That is exactly what Anna Thayer has done and she has done it spectacularly. Welcome to The River Realm where Eldered rules. However he rules by force and murder and is not the true king. Eamon meets and knows the true King but is torn in his soul because he is sworn to both and eventually he will have to betray one. This is a great way to begin a new first-rate series. This story is like Robin Hood and King Arthur all rolled up into one and it is an allegory for many things most importantly the battle between God and the devil and who will man ultimately serve. Ms. Thayer has given us a unique action adventure that will keep you on the edge of your chair as you read and flip pages as fast as possible. I recommend this book highly and look forward to the next book in this series.
Disclosure of Material Connection: I received this book free from Lion Hudson. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255: “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.”
July 31, 2015
Eamon has wanted one thing for as long as he can remember to become a Gauntlet and serve the Master but now because he disobeyed an order and followed his instincts he has been told that he will not be able to swear in the ceremony. To his amazement and delight he is told that he will join the rest of his classmates as they all make their pledge to the Master. His best friend Aeryn asks him to reconsider his plans and warns him that serving is not what he believes it to be but he ignores her warnings and pledges his life, body and blade to the Master and receives a mark on his hand in the shape of an Eagle. As he is marked he has a vision and hears a voice and he also realizes that he has made a huge mistake. This firs novel in the series is about Eamon’s struggles as he realizes that he has made a mistake but does not know how to fix it. When he is given an opportunity to fix not only his mistake but one that was done by an ancestor of his many years ago he readily agrees not realizing that the task will be harder than he can imagine; the Master does not let go of those he has marked and he has big plans for Eamon.
While I enjoyed this novel overall, I feel that too much was devoted to Eamon’s struggle between the two sides that he is on and it took away from the story. One minute he was committed in is decision to serve as First Knight to the rightful and in the next instance he was committing evil deeds in the name of the Master. I realize that Eamon is an unsophisticated, naive young man but I think that common sense would have told him that he needed to be wary of Alessia; he had been told by the king that she and her family were committed to the master and that the only one he could trust in that household was her maid, Lillybeth. Despite this and knowing that she was the girlfriend of the man who had made it clear since his arrival that he was out to get him he allows himself to be seduced by her and as a result becomes more ruthless and cruel. I realize that the story is about a man torn between good and evil but I think that it is a little overdone and detracted from the story and made it move a little slower. Overall it is a good beginning to the series and I am planning on reading the next two where I hope to see more action and less moralizing. The world building is good and the characters are well drawn and while there is not as much action as I like in this genre I think that this will be addressed in future novels.
While I enjoyed this novel overall, I feel that too much was devoted to Eamon’s struggle between the two sides that he is on and it took away from the story. One minute he was committed in is decision to serve as First Knight to the rightful and in the next instance he was committing evil deeds in the name of the Master. I realize that Eamon is an unsophisticated, naive young man but I think that common sense would have told him that he needed to be wary of Alessia; he had been told by the king that she and her family were committed to the master and that the only one he could trust in that household was her maid, Lillybeth. Despite this and knowing that she was the girlfriend of the man who had made it clear since his arrival that he was out to get him he allows himself to be seduced by her and as a result becomes more ruthless and cruel. I realize that the story is about a man torn between good and evil but I think that it is a little overdone and detracted from the story and made it move a little slower. Overall it is a good beginning to the series and I am planning on reading the next two where I hope to see more action and less moralizing. The world building is good and the characters are well drawn and while there is not as much action as I like in this genre I think that this will be addressed in future novels.
August 12, 2015
One of my favorite genres is sci-fi/fantasy also known as speculative fiction. For that reason I am harsher in my reviews and thoughts on a book. No, I refuse to compare books to Tolkien or Lewis or even Tad Williams or Asimov, unless the book really reminds me of the style.
Sadly this book falls short. The narrative at times jumped from person to person with no warning jarring me from the storyline. The book blurb: "For over five hundred years the River Realm has lain in the charge of the Master, and the Master's glory has kept the land strong against its enemies. As Cadet Eamon Goodman swears to serve the Master--his highest ambition--a dark voice penetrates his mind, and offers him unsettling power. Then Eamon meet the true King. Despite having made a binding oath to the Master, his heart longs to be a King's man. Whom will Eamon betray?"
Sounds inviting, doesn't it?
Unfortunately, I found the book lacking.
Kregel Publications represents Lion Hudson of the UK. Being an evangelical Christian company, I was confident in receiving a clean and well produced book. Not so.
There were multiple uses of "b*****d" and its variations, "d****d", and "d**n", all written out of context and used in their swearing (cursing) format. A sexual aftermath scene, although not descriptive in act, did not seem necessary to further the plot. Some of the wording used then and in a future scene elicited imaginings of the act.
If this was a secular aka general market book, I would think nothing of it. But coming from a well known Christian publisher, I expected higher standards in their books they produce and represent.
I understand UK language is more lax than American language when it comes to the Christian scene, but it doesn't excuse the profanity used throughout this book.
Other than that, the story was average and would have made a good fantasy if the scenes had not been drawn out so much. I wished for more character depth and more conflict between serving two masters.
All in all, I will not consider reading this author again and will research books offered by Kregel in future.
**I received this book from Kregel Publications through BookFun.org in exchange of an honest and complete review.**
Sadly this book falls short. The narrative at times jumped from person to person with no warning jarring me from the storyline. The book blurb: "For over five hundred years the River Realm has lain in the charge of the Master, and the Master's glory has kept the land strong against its enemies. As Cadet Eamon Goodman swears to serve the Master--his highest ambition--a dark voice penetrates his mind, and offers him unsettling power. Then Eamon meet the true King. Despite having made a binding oath to the Master, his heart longs to be a King's man. Whom will Eamon betray?"
Sounds inviting, doesn't it?
Unfortunately, I found the book lacking.
Kregel Publications represents Lion Hudson of the UK. Being an evangelical Christian company, I was confident in receiving a clean and well produced book. Not so.
There were multiple uses of "b*****d" and its variations, "d****d", and "d**n", all written out of context and used in their swearing (cursing) format. A sexual aftermath scene, although not descriptive in act, did not seem necessary to further the plot. Some of the wording used then and in a future scene elicited imaginings of the act.
If this was a secular aka general market book, I would think nothing of it. But coming from a well known Christian publisher, I expected higher standards in their books they produce and represent.
I understand UK language is more lax than American language when it comes to the Christian scene, but it doesn't excuse the profanity used throughout this book.
Other than that, the story was average and would have made a good fantasy if the scenes had not been drawn out so much. I wished for more character depth and more conflict between serving two masters.
All in all, I will not consider reading this author again and will research books offered by Kregel in future.
**I received this book from Kregel Publications through BookFun.org in exchange of an honest and complete review.**
September 13, 2015
The Traitor’s Heir (The Knight of Eldaran #1) by Anna Thayer is the first book in the fantasy trilogy, The Knight of Eldaran. Christian Fantasy is not my favorite genre to read, but this book kept my interest until I finished. I felt that there was spiritual meaning behind the story (choice between good and evil) but did not comprehend fully. There was some language that I did not care to read although I realize that it was written in dialogue to portray the characters in the time period. Cadet Eamon Goodman’s life ambition is to train to be in the Gauntlet and serve the Master who has ruled the River Realm for over 500 years. Once he swears his oath, an evil voice begins to speak in Eamon’s mind causing him to do things out of character for him. After witnessing the arrest and burning at the stake of his good friend’s father for being a “snake,” a supporter of the dethroned King and enemy of the Master, Eamon begins to question his decision in being in the Gauntlet. His friend is arrested, and being promoted to Lieutenant, he is ordered to help escort her to the Master in Dunthruik. The King’s men attack the ship rescuing the prisoner who is the King’s fiancé and kill all the men except for Eamon and one young cadet. Lieutenant Goodman is surprised to discover the King is a childhood friend and to learn the history of his own ancestor being a traitor in the battle between the Master and the original King. He vows to serve the King who informs him that he is the First Knight, and Eamon agrees to be a spy in Dunthrueik. Will Eamon be able to overcome the evil voice in his mind to follow his heart in serving the King? Will power in the Master’s kingdom and a beautiful woman influence him? Is his destiny to betray as his ancestor? He must make a choice. No man can serve two masters. What will Eamon choose and what will it cost him? Anna Thayer is a gifted author of Christian fantasy such as C. S. Lewis and J. R. R. Tolkien. Even though I am not a reader of this genre, the book left me being interested in reading the other two books in this trilogy to see what happens to the characters. I received a copy from the author and publisher of The Book Club Network in exchange for an honest review.
October 3, 2015
When I first saw The Traitor's Heir available for review, I thought it was going to be an enthralling read. The description and cover were fascinating, with a premise I wanted to see explored. Unfortunately, it did not fully live up to my expectations. While there is a good bit to commend about the novel, there is also enough to critic that I was not captivated.
For starters, Eamon is fairly likable character. He is people pleasing and honorable, even at the cost of himself. While those around him insist he look out for himself, he instead looks out for those around him. He is also relateable in his desire to do something worth while and struggles with contradictory messages in the world around him.
Yet as likable as Eamon is, most of the other characters have nothing that sets them as enjoyable characters. The true King has the unfortunate depiction of being a mortal king, who has now power to see the future or any other "divine" characteristics, and yet shown as so perfect (as a symbol of God) that he followed almost without question. I found it hard to care about him one way or the other, and found no worthy reason for Eamon to serve this mortal king.
As to the Master, who is clearly a symbol of Satan, there was also some issues with his depiction. I spent much of the book confused as to whether or not he was mortal as well (as he seems to have powers and has lived for at least 200 years). Other than his Hands, who are depicted as sickly in color, and his attempts to stamp out all followers of the King, he did not seem like a despotic ruler. His people lived in peace and prospered, so that if he were a mortal king and not daemonic, I think he would have been a better ruler than the King.
With a story so laden with symbolism, I would have expected the exact nature of the King and Master to have been more clear, with the Master's reign far more vile. While Eamon is a likable and relatable character, I did not quiet buy into the world. Knowing this, I believe that readers could enjoy The Traitor's Heir, it simply was not for me.
I received this book through Bookfun in exchange for an honest review.
For starters, Eamon is fairly likable character. He is people pleasing and honorable, even at the cost of himself. While those around him insist he look out for himself, he instead looks out for those around him. He is also relateable in his desire to do something worth while and struggles with contradictory messages in the world around him.
Yet as likable as Eamon is, most of the other characters have nothing that sets them as enjoyable characters. The true King has the unfortunate depiction of being a mortal king, who has now power to see the future or any other "divine" characteristics, and yet shown as so perfect (as a symbol of God) that he followed almost without question. I found it hard to care about him one way or the other, and found no worthy reason for Eamon to serve this mortal king.
As to the Master, who is clearly a symbol of Satan, there was also some issues with his depiction. I spent much of the book confused as to whether or not he was mortal as well (as he seems to have powers and has lived for at least 200 years). Other than his Hands, who are depicted as sickly in color, and his attempts to stamp out all followers of the King, he did not seem like a despotic ruler. His people lived in peace and prospered, so that if he were a mortal king and not daemonic, I think he would have been a better ruler than the King.
With a story so laden with symbolism, I would have expected the exact nature of the King and Master to have been more clear, with the Master's reign far more vile. While Eamon is a likable and relatable character, I did not quiet buy into the world. Knowing this, I believe that readers could enjoy The Traitor's Heir, it simply was not for me.
I received this book through Bookfun in exchange for an honest review.
July 25, 2014
A fantasy novel written in somewhat Medieval Times about a the main character by the name of Eamon Goodman, who for the right idea, pledged his service to The Master. Through his childhood, Eamon thought of being a chivalrous Knight or servant of The Hand, the illustrious right hand guard of The Master. Little did he know that upon pledging himself the day he was to become a servant and Ensign of The Master that things would never be the same. The cities and towns who fall under the protection of The Master are protected and kept safe by The Throned one, but are they under his protection or enslaved by his powers and armies?
His childhood friend, a girl by the name of Aeryn, who grew up watching him turn from a young boy with a harsh childhood into a brave young man warned him about accepting the Mark and swearing to obey The Master’s Commands. Wishing to prove himself worthy, he disregards his best friends advise and pledges himself to The Master. Will Eamon be lured over to the Dark Forces of The Master or will he reveal himself to be a King’s Man from a time before the Thrown was stolen! The rest of the story will have to be read rather than reviewed!
Read for yourself the story of Eamon Goodman to see if he truly is a Traitor's Heir or if he makes his own history in this epic novel.
I received The Traitor's Heir by Anna Thayer compliments of Kregel Publications for my honest review. I did not receive any monetary compensation for a favorable review and the opinions expressed here are strictly my own. I rate this book a 5 out of 5 Stars! It has tales of old heroes and a plot that would rival the great King Arthur and The Knights of Camelot! This is the first book in The Knight of Eldaran Series Trilogy and a debut novel as well. I can't wait to read the next novel in the series, The King's Hand!
His childhood friend, a girl by the name of Aeryn, who grew up watching him turn from a young boy with a harsh childhood into a brave young man warned him about accepting the Mark and swearing to obey The Master’s Commands. Wishing to prove himself worthy, he disregards his best friends advise and pledges himself to The Master. Will Eamon be lured over to the Dark Forces of The Master or will he reveal himself to be a King’s Man from a time before the Thrown was stolen! The rest of the story will have to be read rather than reviewed!
Read for yourself the story of Eamon Goodman to see if he truly is a Traitor's Heir or if he makes his own history in this epic novel.
I received The Traitor's Heir by Anna Thayer compliments of Kregel Publications for my honest review. I did not receive any monetary compensation for a favorable review and the opinions expressed here are strictly my own. I rate this book a 5 out of 5 Stars! It has tales of old heroes and a plot that would rival the great King Arthur and The Knights of Camelot! This is the first book in The Knight of Eldaran Series Trilogy and a debut novel as well. I can't wait to read the next novel in the series, The King's Hand!
July 29, 2014
Like many from his village, young Eamon Goodman dreamed of joining the Gauntlet, the army of the overlord Eldered. Now he is about to complete his training and swear his loyalty to Eldered and his commanders, the Hands, who uphold Eldered’s tight control of the land.
Entering into the service of the Gauntlet, Eamon’s gifts, particularly his potent Sight, quickly become valuable to his superiors and he advances to the command rank at a speed that arouses the suspicions of fellow officers.
However, Eldered’s bloody rule, and Eamon’s personal friendships, start to challenge the young soldier’s assumptions about what might be true, and worthy of service. And soon Eamon must conceal a fatal secret: he is sworn to both Eldered and to Hughan, the rightful king of the land. Yet he may not forswear the vows he has uttered in all good faith so however he serves, his name will be traitor.
As tensions and military skirmishes increase, Eamon finds himself trusted by both his masters. How can he possibly maintain his integrity, act justly to his fellow officers of the Gauntlet, and act on behalf of all the warring people of the land?
This is the first in the series of 3 books
This would make a great reading for those that love to read about the age of knights and kings and the medieval times. The author takes us into a world of world of divided loyalties, conspiracies and more. An easy read, that keeps the reader captivated.
If you enjoy the J.R,R, Tolkien books, then this is the novel for you. I can not wait until the next book comes out.
I received this book free from the publisher. I was not required to write a positive review and the opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255 : “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.”
Entering into the service of the Gauntlet, Eamon’s gifts, particularly his potent Sight, quickly become valuable to his superiors and he advances to the command rank at a speed that arouses the suspicions of fellow officers.
However, Eldered’s bloody rule, and Eamon’s personal friendships, start to challenge the young soldier’s assumptions about what might be true, and worthy of service. And soon Eamon must conceal a fatal secret: he is sworn to both Eldered and to Hughan, the rightful king of the land. Yet he may not forswear the vows he has uttered in all good faith so however he serves, his name will be traitor.
As tensions and military skirmishes increase, Eamon finds himself trusted by both his masters. How can he possibly maintain his integrity, act justly to his fellow officers of the Gauntlet, and act on behalf of all the warring people of the land?
This is the first in the series of 3 books
This would make a great reading for those that love to read about the age of knights and kings and the medieval times. The author takes us into a world of world of divided loyalties, conspiracies and more. An easy read, that keeps the reader captivated.
If you enjoy the J.R,R, Tolkien books, then this is the novel for you. I can not wait until the next book comes out.
I received this book free from the publisher. I was not required to write a positive review and the opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255 : “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.”
August 20, 2015
About the Book:
In an epic and mystical tale that resonates with modern times, the young Eamon Goodman goes on a journey of discovery. A journey which sees him taking an increasingly pivotal role in the battle between the rival forces of the king and the master, and takes him from being a young soldier in his home of Edesfield to being a fast-rising hero in the dense and rotten city of Dunthruik.
Under the watchful eye of Lord Cathair, in the loving arms of Lady Alessia Turnholt, and torn between enemy forces, Eamon’s experiences lead him to question the nature and true meaning of some of the most important things in life - love and friendship, loyalty and honour, and who he really is. But will the answers he finds lead him to become true to himself and true to his name? Will they lead him to become a good man?
My Review:
Eamon Goodman's dream is to swear to serve to the Master. But little did he expect that his life would be utterly changed after the swearing process. Or that the swearing would put a large burn on his hand. Not even a day after being sworn in, everything he knew to be true is turn upside down. His good friend is said to be a traitor to the Master and her father is burned at the stake. As chaos surrounds him, who is he to believe?
Meeting the king changes his outlook. But is everything about the Master true? Eamon must find his way among the darkness of it all. Is he destined to be loyal to the Master or to follow the king?
The Traitors heir is volume one in The Knight of Eldaran trilogy. I have no words to explain how much I enjoyed this book! I loved the whole book. This author has done an amazing job and I can not wait to see what she writes next!
**Disclosure** This book was sent to me free of charge for honest review from Book Fun.
In an epic and mystical tale that resonates with modern times, the young Eamon Goodman goes on a journey of discovery. A journey which sees him taking an increasingly pivotal role in the battle between the rival forces of the king and the master, and takes him from being a young soldier in his home of Edesfield to being a fast-rising hero in the dense and rotten city of Dunthruik.
Under the watchful eye of Lord Cathair, in the loving arms of Lady Alessia Turnholt, and torn between enemy forces, Eamon’s experiences lead him to question the nature and true meaning of some of the most important things in life - love and friendship, loyalty and honour, and who he really is. But will the answers he finds lead him to become true to himself and true to his name? Will they lead him to become a good man?
My Review:
Eamon Goodman's dream is to swear to serve to the Master. But little did he expect that his life would be utterly changed after the swearing process. Or that the swearing would put a large burn on his hand. Not even a day after being sworn in, everything he knew to be true is turn upside down. His good friend is said to be a traitor to the Master and her father is burned at the stake. As chaos surrounds him, who is he to believe?
Meeting the king changes his outlook. But is everything about the Master true? Eamon must find his way among the darkness of it all. Is he destined to be loyal to the Master or to follow the king?
The Traitors heir is volume one in The Knight of Eldaran trilogy. I have no words to explain how much I enjoyed this book! I loved the whole book. This author has done an amazing job and I can not wait to see what she writes next!
**Disclosure** This book was sent to me free of charge for honest review from Book Fun.
August 25, 2014
Received in exchange for a review from LibraryThing.com's Early Reviewers program
Perhaps the most striking thing about this book is its purple prose—the author, among other things, has an excellent command of a thesaurus. In some cases, the turn of phrase was awkward, in some it was downright laughable (particularly when juxtaposed with the puns!), and most of the time it was simply stilted.
That aside, this was an entertaining read. It took a while for me to get into it and into the main character's head—it's definitely the kind of book that's best consumed in large chunks rather than bit by bit. A little frustrated with the book's inscrutability after reading it a chapter at a time, I spent a lazy Sunday finishing the final 400 pages and was much more satisfied.
The thing that the author does particularly well is to highlight the internal struggle of deciding between two options. The heartrending indecision and attempts to follow one's moral compass is palpable. Also to her benefit, the author creates characters on either side of the struggle that I as the reader couldn't bear to leave behind or watch as the main character betrayed their trust.
With past unfortunate Early Reviewers experiences where I get a "fantasy" novel that's actually a thinly-disguised Bible story (STOPPIT), I was more than a little wary about checking the "Request" button on this book. For me, the allegorical nature of this book was easy enough for me to ignore, but other reviewers' mileage has varied on this point.
Naturally, this book leaves off at a natural breaking point in the sequence of events, and so now I'm left to find a copy of the second book in the trilogy to find out what torturous indecision happens next...
Perhaps the most striking thing about this book is its purple prose—the author, among other things, has an excellent command of a thesaurus. In some cases, the turn of phrase was awkward, in some it was downright laughable (particularly when juxtaposed with the puns!), and most of the time it was simply stilted.
That aside, this was an entertaining read. It took a while for me to get into it and into the main character's head—it's definitely the kind of book that's best consumed in large chunks rather than bit by bit. A little frustrated with the book's inscrutability after reading it a chapter at a time, I spent a lazy Sunday finishing the final 400 pages and was much more satisfied.
The thing that the author does particularly well is to highlight the internal struggle of deciding between two options. The heartrending indecision and attempts to follow one's moral compass is palpable. Also to her benefit, the author creates characters on either side of the struggle that I as the reader couldn't bear to leave behind or watch as the main character betrayed their trust.
With past unfortunate Early Reviewers experiences where I get a "fantasy" novel that's actually a thinly-disguised Bible story (STOPPIT), I was more than a little wary about checking the "Request" button on this book. For me, the allegorical nature of this book was easy enough for me to ignore, but other reviewers' mileage has varied on this point.
Naturally, this book leaves off at a natural breaking point in the sequence of events, and so now I'm left to find a copy of the second book in the trilogy to find out what torturous indecision happens next...
September 16, 2015
Another book that caused me to lose a lot of sleep. I hated to put it down, but my eyes kept fogging over. Trouble is, even after I put it down, my brain didn't. Intrigue upon intrigue, peril upon peril, and the lure of power filled my dreams.
There are Eamon, the young man serving two masters; Alessia, the woman he loves, who serves her master too well; and Mathaiah, Eamon's ward and conscience.
Eamon didn't realize that when he gave his oath to become a gauntlet that it would be written in his flesh, and immediately he begins experiencing the power hunger of the brutal and cruel Master he pledged to serve with his blood, his blade, and his body.
His friend Aeryn, a girl raised as close to him as a sister, nearly becomes the first victim to the new voice in his head. He must learn to control himself!
When the ship he's on is boarded by the people who follow the King instead of the Master, he struggles to save his shipmates, but he fails miserably. Instead he and one other are taken captive. That's when he finds Hughan, a childhood friend, is now the King. Before he leaves to return to his duties with the Master, he swears fealty to the King--and thus begins the tumultuous struggle between the good of the King and the evil of the Master warring in his life.
Anna Thayer's adept weaving of this fantasy on the order of The Lord of the Rings will keep you riveted, guaranteed. Available from Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and Christian Book Distributors.
This is sorta edgy Christian fiction only because of some of the swear words included and some sexual reference--never graphic. I received this book in free in return for an honest review.
There are Eamon, the young man serving two masters; Alessia, the woman he loves, who serves her master too well; and Mathaiah, Eamon's ward and conscience.
Eamon didn't realize that when he gave his oath to become a gauntlet that it would be written in his flesh, and immediately he begins experiencing the power hunger of the brutal and cruel Master he pledged to serve with his blood, his blade, and his body.
His friend Aeryn, a girl raised as close to him as a sister, nearly becomes the first victim to the new voice in his head. He must learn to control himself!
When the ship he's on is boarded by the people who follow the King instead of the Master, he struggles to save his shipmates, but he fails miserably. Instead he and one other are taken captive. That's when he finds Hughan, a childhood friend, is now the King. Before he leaves to return to his duties with the Master, he swears fealty to the King--and thus begins the tumultuous struggle between the good of the King and the evil of the Master warring in his life.
Anna Thayer's adept weaving of this fantasy on the order of The Lord of the Rings will keep you riveted, guaranteed. Available from Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and Christian Book Distributors.
This is sorta edgy Christian fiction only because of some of the swear words included and some sexual reference--never graphic. I received this book in free in return for an honest review.
May 21, 2014
When it comes to epic tales, there are few out there in modern literature that truly deserve the title, however Anna Thayer’s Traitor’s Heir is a book that really does live up to the expectation of being an epic tale.
Set in a fantasy realm where betrayal is common place, the books follows Eamon who is caught in the middle of a power struggle, intrigue and seduction as the protagonist struggles to stay loyal to his king. There are twists in the narrative that test the very core of Eammon’s beliefs as well as his loyalty and nothing within this world is black or white.
Thayer joins the ranks of modern authors who do not shy away from killing off their characters, even in the most brutal manner. With a tyrannical leader on the throne denying the true king his place, Thayer embraces the realities of a kingdom trapped under an oppressive boot.
This book is not one for those who prefer light-hearted fantasy reads; action enriches the story that keeps the pace of the book from becoming slow and dull. This book is one that is truly a page turner in every sense of the word that is well written in an enjoyable style.
The characters are well written and even the ones that are not so likeable are endearing in their own ways as the story unfolds. This book is a must read for those who enjoy the less fantastical and more realistic genre of fantasy books.
The climax of the book is excellent and really does leave the reader wanting more, eager to read the next book in the Knight of Eldaran series.
Set in a fantasy realm where betrayal is common place, the books follows Eamon who is caught in the middle of a power struggle, intrigue and seduction as the protagonist struggles to stay loyal to his king. There are twists in the narrative that test the very core of Eammon’s beliefs as well as his loyalty and nothing within this world is black or white.
Thayer joins the ranks of modern authors who do not shy away from killing off their characters, even in the most brutal manner. With a tyrannical leader on the throne denying the true king his place, Thayer embraces the realities of a kingdom trapped under an oppressive boot.
This book is not one for those who prefer light-hearted fantasy reads; action enriches the story that keeps the pace of the book from becoming slow and dull. This book is one that is truly a page turner in every sense of the word that is well written in an enjoyable style.
The characters are well written and even the ones that are not so likeable are endearing in their own ways as the story unfolds. This book is a must read for those who enjoy the less fantastical and more realistic genre of fantasy books.
The climax of the book is excellent and really does leave the reader wanting more, eager to read the next book in the Knight of Eldaran series.
August 1, 2014
The Traitor's Heir
The Knight of Eldaran Book 1
By Anna Thayer
Every man has a destiny.
His is to betray...
Eamon Goodman is about to swear his loyalty and devotion to the Master. This has been his goal and dream for many years. But something occurs during this ceremony, something he cannot understand or explain. But he is loyal until one of the Master's enemies causes him to question everything he has ever believed. The battle for Eamon and his allegiance could cost him his life.
The Master has plans for Eamon, but what Eamon doesn't know is that he is of great importance to the King. Eamon has a destiny to fulfill. A destiny in which he must betray someone, the only question is whom will he betray.
This is the first book in The Knight of Eldaran series and though it is in of and itself unique fans of Lord of the Rings, Chroncicles of Narnia, and the Tales of Goldstone Wood will find much to delight and thrill them in The Traitor's Heir. Eamon is caught up in an epic struggle, one in which he finds his loyalties tested. To whom will Eamon ultimately pledge himself - for whom is he willing to die? And who will feel the affects of his betrayal?
This is a book which I think would have broad appeal to Tweens, Teens, and Adults. Fans of Fantasy fiction will be well pleased with the reading of this book, as it is well-written in both character believablity and a well-flowing plot. This one story you'll want to read again and to share.
I was provided a copy of this book by the publish in exchange for my honest review.
The Knight of Eldaran Book 1
By Anna Thayer
Every man has a destiny.
His is to betray...
Eamon Goodman is about to swear his loyalty and devotion to the Master. This has been his goal and dream for many years. But something occurs during this ceremony, something he cannot understand or explain. But he is loyal until one of the Master's enemies causes him to question everything he has ever believed. The battle for Eamon and his allegiance could cost him his life.
The Master has plans for Eamon, but what Eamon doesn't know is that he is of great importance to the King. Eamon has a destiny to fulfill. A destiny in which he must betray someone, the only question is whom will he betray.
This is the first book in The Knight of Eldaran series and though it is in of and itself unique fans of Lord of the Rings, Chroncicles of Narnia, and the Tales of Goldstone Wood will find much to delight and thrill them in The Traitor's Heir. Eamon is caught up in an epic struggle, one in which he finds his loyalties tested. To whom will Eamon ultimately pledge himself - for whom is he willing to die? And who will feel the affects of his betrayal?
This is a book which I think would have broad appeal to Tweens, Teens, and Adults. Fans of Fantasy fiction will be well pleased with the reading of this book, as it is well-written in both character believablity and a well-flowing plot. This one story you'll want to read again and to share.
I was provided a copy of this book by the publish in exchange for my honest review.
October 7, 2015
"The Traitor's Heir" is book one of "The Knight of Eldaran trilogy." This is a fantasy novel depicting the battle between good and evil. Unfortunately, one can't always tell which is which.
Eamon Goodman has always desired to serve the Master. He wants to be the best cadet possible, in order to impress the "Hands." He looks up to those in leadership and wishes to one day, be just like them. He has been raised to view these men as good.
This book follows Eamon as he goes through his training and makes choices about following the Master. When he sees a close friend of his burned at the stake, by order of the Master, he starts to question what or whom is truly good. Eamon's journey will take you through many trials, strange lands and you will see that he is a young man of great integrity and brains. When he meets an old friend he thought was deceased he begins to question everything he thought he knew about right and wrong, good and evil.
Eamon has the Master's voice in his head, reading his thoughts and giving him orders. For a time the King helps him eliminate this voice, but then he allows it back. Whom does he follow? Who is the rightful king? You will have to read the book to find out!
The Traitor's Heir is a lengthy, action filled novel. I thought it was rather violent, but I could see guys liking the action, torture and battles, as well as enjoying the military type training.
I received this book from The Book Club Network in exchange for my honest review.
Eamon Goodman has always desired to serve the Master. He wants to be the best cadet possible, in order to impress the "Hands." He looks up to those in leadership and wishes to one day, be just like them. He has been raised to view these men as good.
This book follows Eamon as he goes through his training and makes choices about following the Master. When he sees a close friend of his burned at the stake, by order of the Master, he starts to question what or whom is truly good. Eamon's journey will take you through many trials, strange lands and you will see that he is a young man of great integrity and brains. When he meets an old friend he thought was deceased he begins to question everything he thought he knew about right and wrong, good and evil.
Eamon has the Master's voice in his head, reading his thoughts and giving him orders. For a time the King helps him eliminate this voice, but then he allows it back. Whom does he follow? Who is the rightful king? You will have to read the book to find out!
The Traitor's Heir is a lengthy, action filled novel. I thought it was rather violent, but I could see guys liking the action, torture and battles, as well as enjoying the military type training.
I received this book from The Book Club Network in exchange for my honest review.
July 31, 2014
The Traitor’s Heir is the debut novel from Anna Thayer, who is both an English teacher and a lecturer in the works of both C.S. Lewis and J.R.R. Tolkien. She’s no stranger to fantasy worlds, and has created her own here.
The world she has created centers on The River Realm, and we explore it through the life of Eamon Goodman. This world holds both magic and intrigue, though perhaps “magic” isn’t quite the right term. It would be more accurate to say that there is a more open metaphysical realm in this world than in our own.
At issue within the River Realm is this question: Who should be the ruler? Is it the Master? Is it someone else? And how does one tell the difference between power used of necessity and power abused of excess?
It’s not nearly as simple as the good guys in bright colors and bad guys in plaid. There are questions of loyalty, and the issue of whether or not someone can be honorable while serving the wrong side.
Plot pacing flows well through The Traitor’s Heir, and there is backstory aplenty for both Goodman and the whole realm. The characters are mostly fleshed out, with a few obvious gaps left for the further portions of the series.
Overall, I’d put this at a good read from high school on up. Content is very direct with warfare and violence, but not overly gruesome. It’s a good read, and a great start for a series I look forward to finishing.
Free book in exchange for the review.
The world she has created centers on The River Realm, and we explore it through the life of Eamon Goodman. This world holds both magic and intrigue, though perhaps “magic” isn’t quite the right term. It would be more accurate to say that there is a more open metaphysical realm in this world than in our own.
At issue within the River Realm is this question: Who should be the ruler? Is it the Master? Is it someone else? And how does one tell the difference between power used of necessity and power abused of excess?
It’s not nearly as simple as the good guys in bright colors and bad guys in plaid. There are questions of loyalty, and the issue of whether or not someone can be honorable while serving the wrong side.
Plot pacing flows well through The Traitor’s Heir, and there is backstory aplenty for both Goodman and the whole realm. The characters are mostly fleshed out, with a few obvious gaps left for the further portions of the series.
Overall, I’d put this at a good read from high school on up. Content is very direct with warfare and violence, but not overly gruesome. It’s a good read, and a great start for a series I look forward to finishing.
Free book in exchange for the review.
September 23, 2015
Epic fantasy is not my usual genre to read but this book 'The Traitor's Heir' by Anna Thayer is a great read. My first thoughts turned to Lord of the Rings or Lion, Witch and the Wardrobe, as writings I could compare this book to. Even had thoughts of seeing this on the movie screen.
Eamon Goodman always wanted to become part of the Gauntlet, part of a larger army of men, and women who served the Master. Some of his friends tried to stop him from saying and pledging the vow to the Master, but Eamon could not be persuaded. What Eamon did not know until that fateful moment was that he was pledging to become a slave to 'The Master'.
The struggle in this book is good against evil, and the other way around. You cannot serve two masters, even if you have the mark of 'The Master' on his hand, and in his mind. It isn't until Eamon meets 'The King' that he realizes that there are two masters, and that he can have a choice and make a choice. There is so much Eamon has not discovered or learned as the book starts, but the writing carries you through each page with captivating words and thoughts. This is a book that you cannot put down and won't want to. Can't wait until the 2nd book comes out to read it I love a book that leaves you wanting more.
I received this book from BookFunClub in exchange for my honest opinion..
Eamon Goodman always wanted to become part of the Gauntlet, part of a larger army of men, and women who served the Master. Some of his friends tried to stop him from saying and pledging the vow to the Master, but Eamon could not be persuaded. What Eamon did not know until that fateful moment was that he was pledging to become a slave to 'The Master'.
The struggle in this book is good against evil, and the other way around. You cannot serve two masters, even if you have the mark of 'The Master' on his hand, and in his mind. It isn't until Eamon meets 'The King' that he realizes that there are two masters, and that he can have a choice and make a choice. There is so much Eamon has not discovered or learned as the book starts, but the writing carries you through each page with captivating words and thoughts. This is a book that you cannot put down and won't want to. Can't wait until the 2nd book comes out to read it I love a book that leaves you wanting more.
I received this book from BookFunClub in exchange for my honest opinion..
September 25, 2015
The Traitor’s Heir is the first book in the fantasy trilogy, The Knight of Eldaran. It is Anna Thayer’s first novel and very entertaining. The 541 pages seemed shorter to me and the book was very enjoyable. I had hesitated at first to read it as fantasy is not usually my first genre of choice.
The story takes place in the River Realm. It is essentially a fight between good and evil while following the main character, Eamon Goodman. He finally becomes the “soldier” that he always dreamed of being and swears allegiance to the Master. Only then does he begin to see the evil around him and what he has really gotten himself into. Then he has another chance to serve the true King who is good. Will he switch sides?
I saw the whole book as an allegory, though I am not sure if the author intended it to be so. The Master (Devil) puts his mark on Eamon’s hand (not forehead). The King is a type of Christ calling to Eamon and offering to be there with him in times of trouble. Both the Master and the King have strong powers. Who will win out?
The ending is such that you will want to read on to the next book to find out what happens.
I received this book for free from The Book Club Network at www.bookfun.org in exchange for an honest review. I would recommend it.
The story takes place in the River Realm. It is essentially a fight between good and evil while following the main character, Eamon Goodman. He finally becomes the “soldier” that he always dreamed of being and swears allegiance to the Master. Only then does he begin to see the evil around him and what he has really gotten himself into. Then he has another chance to serve the true King who is good. Will he switch sides?
I saw the whole book as an allegory, though I am not sure if the author intended it to be so. The Master (Devil) puts his mark on Eamon’s hand (not forehead). The King is a type of Christ calling to Eamon and offering to be there with him in times of trouble. Both the Master and the King have strong powers. Who will win out?
The ending is such that you will want to read on to the next book to find out what happens.
I received this book for free from The Book Club Network at www.bookfun.org in exchange for an honest review. I would recommend it.
May 24, 2022
This originally appeared at The Irresponsible Reader.
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WHAT'S THE TRAITOR'S HEIR ABOUT?
When the book opens, Eamon Goodman, the orphaned son of a bookbinder currently a cadet in the final stages of his training as a member of the army of the Master of the River Realm. He doesn't seem to be very good at being a soldier but is committed to passing and taking the oath. Beyond that, his heart doesn't seem to be in it, either—but maybe it's just the best route for some sort of security for him.
He seems to be a decent guy in an army that doesn't have a lot of them—although those traits seem to be highly valued. After taking his oath, and achieving more success than seems deserved he meets someone who claims to be a descendant of the true king, deposed some centuries ago. Eamon agrees to work for this King in the capital.
Eamon isn't the Chosen One—that's (presumably) the King. However, Eamon is a direct descendant of the last King's First Knight—champion and advisor. He's not the Chosen One—he's more like the Chosen Sidekick. Eamon's calling seems to be to aid the King to reclaim the throne and serve him.
He goes to the capital and follows the King's wishes. Until, with the help of a beautiful noblewoman, he gets distracted and serves the Master. Then circumstances lead him back to the King. And then...he ping-pongs between the two until he makes a final choice.
WHAT I DON'T GET...
I've run into this issue before, this isn't me picking on Thayer. The reader is clearly to get invested in this struggle between the King and the Master, we're supposed to want to see the Master defeated and the King to retake the throne. But...
There is no reason to root for the King and his forces here beyond "generations ago his ancestor lost the throne due to the duplicity of his trusted knight. We have no vision of how he'll improve anything for anyone but those supporters of his that have to hide their allegiance or have to live in his secret campground. His being on the throne would allow them to live openly and/or in society. Yes, he seems to be kind, compassionate, and honorable, but...there are a lot of good guys who happen to be related to someone who used to be in power that shouldn't be put back in a position of authority.
There aren't a lot of reasons for the reader to want to see the downfall of The Master. Sure, he treats those sewing dissension in the populace and/or actively working to bring down his government harshly. But...what government doesn't? The methods he uses seem extreme and capricious, but also seem like the kind of thing a government in this setting would do.
Don't get me wrong, it's clear that The Master is evil, he manipulates Eamon throughout—and anyone who gets "behind the curtain" to see how the government is run should have qualms about it. But John and Jane Smith working away in their village outside the city aren't being oppressed. They're not being starved. They're not being exploited. The same is true for Jill or Joe practicing their trades or selling their wares in the cities.
I can tell you why Panem's President Snow should be defeated. I can tell you why the Golds should be replaced by the government that Darrow's revolt made possible. The Sheriff of Nottingham? Oh, absolutely—Robin Hood is in the right. The White Witch and her never-ending (and Christmas-free) Winter need to be overthrown. But I can't tell you how things are going to be better for the River Realm or its people. That's really hard for me to push past.
SO, WHAT DID I THINK ABOUT THE TRAITOR'S HEIR?
Thayer has a thinly disguised allegory here—our protagonist is a good man who has sworn an allegiance to an evil master while being given grace by the rightful king, who appeals to him to freely choose to serve this king. Allegories aren't necessarily supposed to be subtle, but this was just one degree shy of Pilgrim's Progress-level obviousness. Go for allegory if you want, but unless you're Bunyan, do something other than use it like a 2x4 in the hands of "Hacksaw" Jim Duggan.
Eamon didn't struggle between the two who wanted his allegiance. If you think of his allegiance as a number line from -10 to 10, he was wholly devoted to -10 and then swung to the other extreme. Then he'd rush back to -10. He never spent any time at 5, or -5—always the extreme. Show me some wavering. Show him spending some time around 0, teetering in each direction. Give me conflict. All I see is a flake that two antagonists are vying over—for no discernible reason than his status as Chosen Sidekick.
Eamon is a problematic character for me—even without his wavering allegiances. I clearly can't buy into the political struggle. I'm dissatisfied with the world-building (I had a section detailing it, but deleted it because this post was becoming too negative). This book was headed for the DNF pile...and yet.
And yet...
Thayer kept ensnaring me. I couldn't stop reading. I wasn't enjoying anything, didn't think I was reading a decent book—but I had to know what the next page held. And the next. And the next. Sure, I kept checking the page number so I knew how much longer this would go (and kept wishing the number was closer to 541)—but I'd have to see what 253 held. It makes no sense to me—but Thayer got her hooks in me. Her knack for that means I can't go lower than 3 (begrudging) stars
So yeah, this was a compelling, if frustrating, read. Your results may vary. I know at least one friend/sometimes reader of this blog will disagree with me (he is, after all, who recommended the book to me). Others are more than welcome—encouraged, even—to weigh in and tell me what I missed. Give this a shot if the idea appeals to you—the trilogy looks like it'll take a different shape than most. Just that novelty may be enough to intrigue you (it pulls on me).
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WHAT'S THE TRAITOR'S HEIR ABOUT?
When the book opens, Eamon Goodman, the orphaned son of a bookbinder currently a cadet in the final stages of his training as a member of the army of the Master of the River Realm. He doesn't seem to be very good at being a soldier but is committed to passing and taking the oath. Beyond that, his heart doesn't seem to be in it, either—but maybe it's just the best route for some sort of security for him.
He seems to be a decent guy in an army that doesn't have a lot of them—although those traits seem to be highly valued. After taking his oath, and achieving more success than seems deserved he meets someone who claims to be a descendant of the true king, deposed some centuries ago. Eamon agrees to work for this King in the capital.
Eamon isn't the Chosen One—that's (presumably) the King. However, Eamon is a direct descendant of the last King's First Knight—champion and advisor. He's not the Chosen One—he's more like the Chosen Sidekick. Eamon's calling seems to be to aid the King to reclaim the throne and serve him.
He goes to the capital and follows the King's wishes. Until, with the help of a beautiful noblewoman, he gets distracted and serves the Master. Then circumstances lead him back to the King. And then...he ping-pongs between the two until he makes a final choice.
WHAT I DON'T GET...
I've run into this issue before, this isn't me picking on Thayer. The reader is clearly to get invested in this struggle between the King and the Master, we're supposed to want to see the Master defeated and the King to retake the throne. But...
There is no reason to root for the King and his forces here beyond "generations ago his ancestor lost the throne due to the duplicity of his trusted knight. We have no vision of how he'll improve anything for anyone but those supporters of his that have to hide their allegiance or have to live in his secret campground. His being on the throne would allow them to live openly and/or in society. Yes, he seems to be kind, compassionate, and honorable, but...there are a lot of good guys who happen to be related to someone who used to be in power that shouldn't be put back in a position of authority.
There aren't a lot of reasons for the reader to want to see the downfall of The Master. Sure, he treats those sewing dissension in the populace and/or actively working to bring down his government harshly. But...what government doesn't? The methods he uses seem extreme and capricious, but also seem like the kind of thing a government in this setting would do.
Don't get me wrong, it's clear that The Master is evil, he manipulates Eamon throughout—and anyone who gets "behind the curtain" to see how the government is run should have qualms about it. But John and Jane Smith working away in their village outside the city aren't being oppressed. They're not being starved. They're not being exploited. The same is true for Jill or Joe practicing their trades or selling their wares in the cities.
I can tell you why Panem's President Snow should be defeated. I can tell you why the Golds should be replaced by the government that Darrow's revolt made possible. The Sheriff of Nottingham? Oh, absolutely—Robin Hood is in the right. The White Witch and her never-ending (and Christmas-free) Winter need to be overthrown. But I can't tell you how things are going to be better for the River Realm or its people. That's really hard for me to push past.
SO, WHAT DID I THINK ABOUT THE TRAITOR'S HEIR?
Thayer has a thinly disguised allegory here—our protagonist is a good man who has sworn an allegiance to an evil master while being given grace by the rightful king, who appeals to him to freely choose to serve this king. Allegories aren't necessarily supposed to be subtle, but this was just one degree shy of Pilgrim's Progress-level obviousness. Go for allegory if you want, but unless you're Bunyan, do something other than use it like a 2x4 in the hands of "Hacksaw" Jim Duggan.
Eamon didn't struggle between the two who wanted his allegiance. If you think of his allegiance as a number line from -10 to 10, he was wholly devoted to -10 and then swung to the other extreme. Then he'd rush back to -10. He never spent any time at 5, or -5—always the extreme. Show me some wavering. Show him spending some time around 0, teetering in each direction. Give me conflict. All I see is a flake that two antagonists are vying over—for no discernible reason than his status as Chosen Sidekick.
Eamon is a problematic character for me—even without his wavering allegiances. I clearly can't buy into the political struggle. I'm dissatisfied with the world-building (I had a section detailing it, but deleted it because this post was becoming too negative). This book was headed for the DNF pile...and yet.
And yet...
Thayer kept ensnaring me. I couldn't stop reading. I wasn't enjoying anything, didn't think I was reading a decent book—but I had to know what the next page held. And the next. And the next. Sure, I kept checking the page number so I knew how much longer this would go (and kept wishing the number was closer to 541)—but I'd have to see what 253 held. It makes no sense to me—but Thayer got her hooks in me. Her knack for that means I can't go lower than 3 (begrudging) stars
So yeah, this was a compelling, if frustrating, read. Your results may vary. I know at least one friend/sometimes reader of this blog will disagree with me (he is, after all, who recommended the book to me). Others are more than welcome—encouraged, even—to weigh in and tell me what I missed. Give this a shot if the idea appeals to you—the trilogy looks like it'll take a different shape than most. Just that novelty may be enough to intrigue you (it pulls on me).
October 23, 2015
Eamon Goodman is taking his oath to become a member of the Gauntlet. This has been a goal of his for years. At the time he is taking the oath he feels something is speaking to him. This also made him do things he would have never dreamt he would do. This leads to his life being set in turmoil. Then he meets someone that has the same characteristics that he believes in. Now he must choose follow the King or keep the oath.
I was drawn into the story by the story overview plus the fact that it is a fantasy book. After the main character is turned, the reader is not sure which path he is going to take. The characters in the book were so well-written that I caught myself feeling for them and caring for what would happen. I believe that those that enjoy fantasy will also enjoy this book.
I was given this book by bookfun.org in exchange for my honest review.
I was drawn into the story by the story overview plus the fact that it is a fantasy book. After the main character is turned, the reader is not sure which path he is going to take. The characters in the book were so well-written that I caught myself feeling for them and caring for what would happen. I believe that those that enjoy fantasy will also enjoy this book.
I was given this book by bookfun.org in exchange for my honest review.
June 3, 2015
This story fills in very well Eamon's cadet career in the army called the Gauntlet, rapid rise to power in River Realm, and his lust for a seductress. His feelings are torn between keeping his oath to the cruel, fear inspiring Master, and his promise to the King. Very moving; very thoughtful. Eamon was a well-rounded, very human character, facing temptations and sometime falling, the way we all do. I could identify with him.
Although I've already read Book 3 and know the outcome, I can't wait to read the next installment to see what comes next. For anyone reading this trilogy, I absolutely recommend reading the volumes in numerical order.
Although I've already read Book 3 and know the outcome, I can't wait to read the next installment to see what comes next. For anyone reading this trilogy, I absolutely recommend reading the volumes in numerical order.
September 17, 2015
The Traitor's Heir is the first installment to The Knight of Eldaran series. This is not my normal genre I like to read, but I have to admit, it was pretty good. I look forward to read the rest of the series.
4 stars.
I received this book from bookfun.org in exchange for my honest review, which was given.
4 stars.
I received this book from bookfun.org in exchange for my honest review, which was given.
September 18, 2015
The Traitor’s Heir was a great book. I like this kind of story and I liked the characters and the suspense and the story itself. It was a good book.
I received this book for free from the author and The Book Club Network in exchange for my honest review. I have posted my review on Amazon, Barnes and Noble, Goodreads, and Deeper Shopping (if it is there).
I received this book for free from the author and The Book Club Network in exchange for my honest review. I have posted my review on Amazon, Barnes and Noble, Goodreads, and Deeper Shopping (if it is there).
March 20, 2022
3.5 stars after reread.
April 4, 2016
I think I have something of a love/hate relationship with Epic Fantasy. On the one hand, I'm a huge Lewis fan- and a lover of the Tolkien movies- but I'm also a Medievalist who has never read the Lord of the Rings, and its accomanying volumes. Some might say that makes me a disgrace to my profession.
For a while I didn't really like fantasy except Lewis, unless it was Historical Fantasy (like historical fiction but not set in a real time or place), or human centred fantasy. I still don't always go in for dragons, goblins, and the such. I wasn't even intersted in this when I first saw, it, but then I saw recommendations from a friendly acquaintance, and that the author is an expert on Tolkien and Lewis, I decided to try it.
As another review has stated- 'The Traitor's Heir' is human-centred fantasy. There are no mythical creatures. It is centred around a fairly ordinary chap- Eamon Goodman, an orphaned young man whose only dream since chidhood was to become an officer in the Gauntlet- and elite military Unit supposed to protect the River Realm and serve its ruler known as The Master.
Eamon is just that- very ordinary, and very human. In the first chapter he makes a mistake and botches a military assingment which jeapordizes his future. The next thing we see, he is in his garden, weeping, despondant at his failure. He's no fantasy superhero, and that is something I found rather endearing and relatable.
To cut a long story short, Eamon's wish is fulfilled with help from some of his oldest friends, and finally he takes his oath on his inaugaration to the Gauntlet. From then on events take a darker turn when Eamon starts having troubling dreams, and unsettling things begin to happen. A strange power seems to exude from the mark of Master, which all the Gauntlet bear on thier hands, a power which at times takes control of him, and drives him do things he does not wish. He also began to he hears a dark voice- the voice of the master- goading and cajoling him, constantly reminding him of his allegience.
Then Eamon is devested when a close friend and his daughter, Aeryn, are arrested, accused of being 'snakes'- enemies of the Master and of the realm- and worse, claiming loyalty to the King- the King who was deposed and killed 500 years before.
To prove himself, Eamon is chosen to join a troop of men to take Aeryn as a prisoner to a far distant part of the realm. Eamon thinks he has found his place, and is starting to earn the respect and love of his men, when his ship is attacked, and many of his comrades slaughtered. Saved only by the intercession of Aeyrn, Eamon is bought before Hughan, a man he knew from childhood and long though to be dead- a man who is called the King, and claims to be the last of the line once deposed.
The King has a startling revelation which explains Eamon's dreams, and offers him and choice- to swear to serve him as his true Master, to undo the wrongs of the pas. Eamon swears willingly, though both know he must return the capital, and serve the King in the midst of the enemies' territory.
From then on, Eamon struggles with his two oaths, his true allegience, and the legacy of his bloodline. There is great darkness, cruelty and evil at the heart of the River Realm- but Eamon loves his men, strives to be a good leader- and craves to please his superiors and excel in his work. Part of his heart is still for the Master- although he believes and knows that the King is the true and rightful Lord.
Its true the book is a bit of a task at nearly 550 pages, it does lag in places, and the setting is a little unclear. Its got the Medieval type elements typical of the genre with swords, knights etc- but many other details, especially relating to army, seemed rather more modern. The characterisation was perhaps not all it should have been (but I don't theink the Master's Hands- the Highest of his officers were meant to be well-rounded, complicated human beings).
Yet persistence paid off. I personally think that Eamon's struggle, central to the story, was was best and strongest aspect of it. He is torn, tempted, fails and is often in two minds. Part of him wants to please his superiors and just get on in the world- but another part is appaling by all that his 'duty' involves, and for a higher calling under the service of the King.
By the end, Eamon wants to be free from both his oath the King and the Master, and just wants to live a peaceful life.
In a way, his experiences are reminiscent of the stuggles that Christians face in thier own lives- and his frailty and helplessness are something we can identify with. Even his bad choices. One such choice involves falling for, and engaging in a sexual relationship with a noblewoman, Alessia Turnholt.
Other readers have flagged this up as an objectionable aspect which caused them to give the novel a lower rating. Its true that some scenes are bordering on a little bit descriptive- but I didn't feel they went as too far, and certainly weren't graphic. By the end, one could even understand what was happening- that both he and Alessia were being used and abused by the Master and his men- and that Eamon should have listened to the warnings of his friends.
Objection has also been raised to the langauge. The 'B' word is used quite a few times, not usually in context, as well as 'wh---' and 'damn'. Personally, this was not something I had a huge issue with. I'm afraid the 'B' word is something British people are inclined to come out with-and the author is British. I think very few of us are controlled enough to say, 'Oh my goodness, you're such a jerk!' all the time. Its just not realistic.
I understand that this might be a off-putting to a lot of Christian Fiction readers, so they might find the book is not for them.
However, I found it a satisfying and, in the end, compulsive read. Eamon fell, yet in the end, found his strength. There was also a wonderful note of hope, through the character of the young soldier Eamon took under his wing, Matatiah. A character who appears to be one of the weakest of the ranks, picked on by the others, but emerges as a wonderful example of unyeilding loyalty, courage, faith and endurance, it spite of his terrible suffering.
Don't know how long I'll be able to put off reading the next installment 'The King's Hand' to continue with Eamon's story (and hopefully more of Matatiah too). Recommended for lovers of more realistic fantasy, with deeper characters and themes.
For a while I didn't really like fantasy except Lewis, unless it was Historical Fantasy (like historical fiction but not set in a real time or place), or human centred fantasy. I still don't always go in for dragons, goblins, and the such. I wasn't even intersted in this when I first saw, it, but then I saw recommendations from a friendly acquaintance, and that the author is an expert on Tolkien and Lewis, I decided to try it.
As another review has stated- 'The Traitor's Heir' is human-centred fantasy. There are no mythical creatures. It is centred around a fairly ordinary chap- Eamon Goodman, an orphaned young man whose only dream since chidhood was to become an officer in the Gauntlet- and elite military Unit supposed to protect the River Realm and serve its ruler known as The Master.
Eamon is just that- very ordinary, and very human. In the first chapter he makes a mistake and botches a military assingment which jeapordizes his future. The next thing we see, he is in his garden, weeping, despondant at his failure. He's no fantasy superhero, and that is something I found rather endearing and relatable.
To cut a long story short, Eamon's wish is fulfilled with help from some of his oldest friends, and finally he takes his oath on his inaugaration to the Gauntlet. From then on events take a darker turn when Eamon starts having troubling dreams, and unsettling things begin to happen. A strange power seems to exude from the mark of Master, which all the Gauntlet bear on thier hands, a power which at times takes control of him, and drives him do things he does not wish. He also began to he hears a dark voice- the voice of the master- goading and cajoling him, constantly reminding him of his allegience.
Then Eamon is devested when a close friend and his daughter, Aeryn, are arrested, accused of being 'snakes'- enemies of the Master and of the realm- and worse, claiming loyalty to the King- the King who was deposed and killed 500 years before.
To prove himself, Eamon is chosen to join a troop of men to take Aeryn as a prisoner to a far distant part of the realm. Eamon thinks he has found his place, and is starting to earn the respect and love of his men, when his ship is attacked, and many of his comrades slaughtered. Saved only by the intercession of Aeyrn, Eamon is bought before Hughan, a man he knew from childhood and long though to be dead- a man who is called the King, and claims to be the last of the line once deposed.
The King has a startling revelation which explains Eamon's dreams, and offers him and choice- to swear to serve him as his true Master, to undo the wrongs of the pas. Eamon swears willingly, though both know he must return the capital, and serve the King in the midst of the enemies' territory.
From then on, Eamon struggles with his two oaths, his true allegience, and the legacy of his bloodline. There is great darkness, cruelty and evil at the heart of the River Realm- but Eamon loves his men, strives to be a good leader- and craves to please his superiors and excel in his work. Part of his heart is still for the Master- although he believes and knows that the King is the true and rightful Lord.
Its true the book is a bit of a task at nearly 550 pages, it does lag in places, and the setting is a little unclear. Its got the Medieval type elements typical of the genre with swords, knights etc- but many other details, especially relating to army, seemed rather more modern. The characterisation was perhaps not all it should have been (but I don't theink the Master's Hands- the Highest of his officers were meant to be well-rounded, complicated human beings).
Yet persistence paid off. I personally think that Eamon's struggle, central to the story, was was best and strongest aspect of it. He is torn, tempted, fails and is often in two minds. Part of him wants to please his superiors and just get on in the world- but another part is appaling by all that his 'duty' involves, and for a higher calling under the service of the King.
By the end, Eamon wants to be free from both his oath the King and the Master, and just wants to live a peaceful life.
In a way, his experiences are reminiscent of the stuggles that Christians face in thier own lives- and his frailty and helplessness are something we can identify with. Even his bad choices. One such choice involves falling for, and engaging in a sexual relationship with a noblewoman, Alessia Turnholt.
Other readers have flagged this up as an objectionable aspect which caused them to give the novel a lower rating. Its true that some scenes are bordering on a little bit descriptive- but I didn't feel they went as too far, and certainly weren't graphic. By the end, one could even understand what was happening- that both he and Alessia were being used and abused by the Master and his men- and that Eamon should have listened to the warnings of his friends.
Objection has also been raised to the langauge. The 'B' word is used quite a few times, not usually in context, as well as 'wh---' and 'damn'. Personally, this was not something I had a huge issue with. I'm afraid the 'B' word is something British people are inclined to come out with-and the author is British. I think very few of us are controlled enough to say, 'Oh my goodness, you're such a jerk!' all the time. Its just not realistic.
I understand that this might be a off-putting to a lot of Christian Fiction readers, so they might find the book is not for them.
However, I found it a satisfying and, in the end, compulsive read. Eamon fell, yet in the end, found his strength. There was also a wonderful note of hope, through the character of the young soldier Eamon took under his wing, Matatiah. A character who appears to be one of the weakest of the ranks, picked on by the others, but emerges as a wonderful example of unyeilding loyalty, courage, faith and endurance, it spite of his terrible suffering.
Don't know how long I'll be able to put off reading the next installment 'The King's Hand' to continue with Eamon's story (and hopefully more of Matatiah too). Recommended for lovers of more realistic fantasy, with deeper characters and themes.
April 23, 2020
I found this book whilst looking for an engaging fantasy book with good morals and I'm *so* glad I gave it a try. Traitor's Heir is a brilliant story, the most original and engrossing fantasy book I've read in years, and much more. I cannot recommend it more highly!!
The main character Eamon is young man trying to find his way in life, torn between personified spiritual powers of good and evil. In ways it's an astonishing authentic portrayal of the charismatic Christian experience, but don't fear for a minute that this is a preachy book, or something that only religious types would enjoy. Eamon's character development throughout the book is captivating, and as aspiring and believable an anti-hero as Frodo Baggins or Jean Valjean!
In terms of comparisons - it's deeper than Narnia, lighter than Les Mis, faster paced and more tense than Middle Earth, but darker a world than any of these.
I couldn't get it out of my head and picked it up at every opportunity. I've recently finished book two, and have got number three on the shelf but I can't bear to star it just yet because when's it's over, I'll have no next-in-series to look forward to, so I'm planning to leave that until summer.
Please, please give this book a try, Anna Thayer has done a tremendous job and its well worth of a read!
The main character Eamon is young man trying to find his way in life, torn between personified spiritual powers of good and evil. In ways it's an astonishing authentic portrayal of the charismatic Christian experience, but don't fear for a minute that this is a preachy book, or something that only religious types would enjoy. Eamon's character development throughout the book is captivating, and as aspiring and believable an anti-hero as Frodo Baggins or Jean Valjean!
In terms of comparisons - it's deeper than Narnia, lighter than Les Mis, faster paced and more tense than Middle Earth, but darker a world than any of these.
I couldn't get it out of my head and picked it up at every opportunity. I've recently finished book two, and have got number three on the shelf but I can't bear to star it just yet because when's it's over, I'll have no next-in-series to look forward to, so I'm planning to leave that until summer.
Please, please give this book a try, Anna Thayer has done a tremendous job and its well worth of a read!
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