The Good
I love a book that starts out with a pure adrenaline rush, and what's more of a rush than a thief jumping, running, and clawing (parkours) her way across buildings in Hell's Kitchen while being chased by a hot guy, right?
I also immediately liked the author's phrasing and writing style. Example... She thinks she gave the hot guy the slip and thinks: "I mourned my relief as I ran through my options." I love an author that can say in ONE concise, potent sentence what most authors take two or three paragraphs worth of musings to convey.
It's a "The Real McCoy" meets adrenaline junkie parkour type of story that's certainly unique, but it does have a fair amount of problems in the details.
Erotica: Disclosure of Female/Female Sex Scene and Bisexual MC
I don't appreciate being blindsided by books that have sensitive, taboo, or trigger topics. The author specifies the book is erotica in the blurb, but doesn't warn that the female MC is bisexual and that the book contains a female/female sex scene.
"erotica : works of art or literature that deal with sex and are meant to cause sexual feelings : erotic works"
Authors need to stop using erotica as a catch-all disclosure label! This book's blurb should warn readers so they can gauge their comfort level with the content. Not all readers of erotica are comfortable with f/f, m/m, m/f/m, or f/m/f sex scenes AND should be warned of such inclusions before they BUY. It's about ethics and transparency in what we, the readers, are BUYING from you, the author!
You've Got To Be F'ing Kidding Me!
So female MC is chased by a random stranger across the city parkouring. He catches her and she just DEMANDS he screw her on a rooftop. Didn't see that shit coming at all!
^ Okay, a lota slutty, but hey, get in where you fit in. She runs off after the sex and they remain anonymous.
The stranger asks around, figures out who she is, and arranges for her to deliver a package to him (she's a messenger). She's pissed; okay, fine, she wanted to remain an anonymous one roof stand... I get it. But WTH is with her calling him a creep over and over just because he wanted to meet her? She just stops and fucks some random guy chasing her BUT she thinks it is creepy for him to then track her down and ask her out. Good Gawd ... A series wtf book moment.
Suspended Reality
There are some elements that kinda take your basis in reality and kick it into deep space orbit.
I mean he has a 15 million dollar painting and 1) he's a parkour photographer that got his big break on social media ~oookay~ 2) his apartment is just run of the mill shit on an average floor with limited security ~ he's a millionaire, right? ~ 3) he dialogues about having trust issues with people only interested in his money/status but turns around and trusts this woman he doesn't even know into his home with a 15 million dollar painting just hanging there ~TSTL? Idk?~ .
Female MC describes herself as being out of high school 10 years, making her at least 28. I have a hard time fathoming a gang of chicks that've known each other since high school just running around through the night like Catwoman stealing shit FOR 10 FING YEARS!
Bottom Line
I'm at a loss of wtf to rate this book. Apparently, my peers like it. I liked the writing style and premise of the plot, but I wasn't crazy about any of the characters and had a hard time believing/imagining a lot of the details in the plot points. If it's free for you, then MAYBE give it a chance. If not, then I'd skip it. I don't, however, think I'll be reading the rest if the series.