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Force of Gravity
"I blast the stereo in a vain attempt to drown out my thoughts. I don’t want to be thinking about him and analyzing every detail of first period. It makes me feel like a young, foolish girl, and I’m embarrassed that I can’t control the way my body reacts every time his eyes meet mine."
In a quiet town in the East Valley of Phoenix, Arizona, everything in life is seemingly perfect for eighteen-year-old Kaley Kennedy. She has loving parents, loyal friends, and is dating the hottest boy in school. With only a few months left of her senior year, she’s looking forward to an epic summer before heading off to Los Angeles for college.
Without warning, a gorgeous new math teacher interrupts Kaley’s predictable little world, challenging who she is. Suddenly, parties, dates, and Friday nights with her friends seem empty and unfulfilling as she finds herself obsessing over his every move. Desperate for something more, but determined to ignore her fierce attraction, every single relationship in her life begins to crumble by forces beyond her control. Struggling to transition from adolescence to adulthood, Kaley must choose between playing it safe or risking more than just her heart. . . .
In a quiet town in the East Valley of Phoenix, Arizona, everything in life is seemingly perfect for eighteen-year-old Kaley Kennedy. She has loving parents, loyal friends, and is dating the hottest boy in school. With only a few months left of her senior year, she’s looking forward to an epic summer before heading off to Los Angeles for college.
Without warning, a gorgeous new math teacher interrupts Kaley’s predictable little world, challenging who she is. Suddenly, parties, dates, and Friday nights with her friends seem empty and unfulfilling as she finds herself obsessing over his every move. Desperate for something more, but determined to ignore her fierce attraction, every single relationship in her life begins to crumble by forces beyond her control. Struggling to transition from adolescence to adulthood, Kaley must choose between playing it safe or risking more than just her heart. . . .
425 pages, Kindle Edition
First published July 9, 2014
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August 27, 2015
I've tried to deny it. I've tried to move on, but the truth is...I love high school. This was a really captivating read! Thanks to the reader who suggested this, and I'll definitely look for the next book in the series.
I love taboo, especially when the author capitalizes on that aspect and makes it truly forbidden. That was done very well in this book. As far as student-teacher romances go, this one sets itself apart in two respects: the student and teacher meet as student and teacher. There is no first-meeting off school grounds to where they're unaware of what they're relationship is (or should be) AND Mr. Slate is totally swoon-worthy and romantic but not always so nice, which is different, but something I liked a lot. The story also had a lot of angst, and I was a little--okay, a lot--stressed out about what was going to happen next, but it kept my attention, and it's been a long time since a book had me that enthralled.
And the book is not a cliff-hanger, but it's obvious at the end that there is more to the story coming. Can't wait for the next one!
I love taboo, especially when the author capitalizes on that aspect and makes it truly forbidden. That was done very well in this book. As far as student-teacher romances go, this one sets itself apart in two respects: the student and teacher meet as student and teacher. There is no first-meeting off school grounds to where they're unaware of what they're relationship is (or should be) AND Mr. Slate is totally swoon-worthy and romantic but not always so nice, which is different, but something I liked a lot. The story also had a lot of angst, and I was a little--okay, a lot--stressed out about what was going to happen next, but it kept my attention, and it's been a long time since a book had me that enthralled.
And the book is not a cliff-hanger, but it's obvious at the end that there is more to the story coming. Can't wait for the next one!
September 23, 2014
3.5 Forbidden love…Stars
Kaley Kennedy is an eighteen year old senior and is a few months away from graduation when her calculus teacher suddenly dies, and is replaced with Mr. Slate. Kaley is immediately drawn to Mr. Slate. After one class with Mr. Slate she is questioning her 7 month relationship with her boyfriend. Needless to say, the story is told from Kaley’s point of view and let’s face it Kaley is an eighteen year old girl, she is quick to love, jump to conclusions, and isn’t aways rational.
Mr. Slate is twenty-five years old and the black sheep in his wealthy family, that includes medical professional and lawyers. While we are not privy to Mr. Slate's thoughts throughout the book you would think Mr. Slate would be the one to be reasonable, but that isn't the case. In my opinion his actions are pretty reckless and a little unbelievable.
For a lot of readers the age difference would bother them, but that doesn’t really bother me since Kaley is of age. My main issue is the insta-love between Kaley and Slate. Their love for each other felt rushed, and I didn’t think they had enough conversations or interactions to really know each other let alone fall in love. Now, I get insta-lust, that shits real, but the book was selling this all consuming love and I wasn’t able to buy into that.
Despite the insta-love I do believe the book deserves 3.5 stars, because I wasn’t able to put it down. I wasn’t sure what was going to happen or when, and I found myself dying to read it. The moments between Slate and Kaley were hot and secretive…love it!
I am not sure this book is for everyone, but I did thoroughly enjoy it.
Kaley Kennedy is an eighteen year old senior and is a few months away from graduation when her calculus teacher suddenly dies, and is replaced with Mr. Slate. Kaley is immediately drawn to Mr. Slate. After one class with Mr. Slate she is questioning her 7 month relationship with her boyfriend. Needless to say, the story is told from Kaley’s point of view and let’s face it Kaley is an eighteen year old girl, she is quick to love, jump to conclusions, and isn’t aways rational.
Mr. Slate is twenty-five years old and the black sheep in his wealthy family, that includes medical professional and lawyers. While we are not privy to Mr. Slate's thoughts throughout the book you would think Mr. Slate would be the one to be reasonable, but that isn't the case. In my opinion his actions are pretty reckless and a little unbelievable.
For a lot of readers the age difference would bother them, but that doesn’t really bother me since Kaley is of age. My main issue is the insta-love between Kaley and Slate. Their love for each other felt rushed, and I didn’t think they had enough conversations or interactions to really know each other let alone fall in love. Now, I get insta-lust, that shits real, but the book was selling this all consuming love and I wasn’t able to buy into that.
Despite the insta-love I do believe the book deserves 3.5 stars, because I wasn’t able to put it down. I wasn’t sure what was going to happen or when, and I found myself dying to read it. The moments between Slate and Kaley were hot and secretive…love it!
I am not sure this book is for everyone, but I did thoroughly enjoy it.
October 25, 2023
Okay first off we can add this book to the list of my favorite titles, and to my list of books I cover-lust. Those might be the two things that drew me into this book, but it wasn't the reason I stayed around. What hooked me in was how this book was purely, oh so entertaining. I've been in one of the worst reading slumps ever, and this brought me right out of it!
When it came to Force's main character Kaley there was something that would usually bother me about her, but somehow ended up working in her favor. Kaley was an emotional lead, and I like my leading ladies to be human, but I also don't like when girls are big criers... Ok that might sound like a little much. She isn't balling on every page or anything she is just going through so much, but her emotions and how much she felt everything really helped throw me fully into the story. The best part of her character though was her humor. She would sprinkle little one liners and they would have me rolling! I think she's funny, personable, and overall an enjoyable character to read. Then there's Mr. Slate (Elijah)... I had no problem at all liking him. As soon as he was introduced I knew I was going to be hooked. While Kaley is dropping her little one liners Elijah is never short behind to say something as equally adorable and witty. Their relationship too, y'all I loved everything about it. Some people will read this book and think "these two are just physically attracted to one another, not emotionally attracted"... and for those of you that might think that you can piss off (in the nicest way possible lol) because you missed the point. I even liked most of the side characters. They were another thing I was completely surprised by. I usually like my side characters to be closer to main characters than side ones, but in this case they all fit perfectly where they were.
When it came to the plot and pacing I was beyond happy. The pacing was so perfect I found myself waiting for the moments where I could sit in peace and read this. The way the events in this story played out felt realistic and were perfectly timed. Even with this book leaning closer to insta love and built on a lot of build up I never felt like the story or romance were rushed. I'm not one of those readers who feeds off of a building romance, I'm completely content with things going down right away... If you know what I mean *wiggles eyebrows*, but I was feeding off this build up!!!
I love that Kelly Stevenson took a taboo idea and just went 100% for it! The Force of Gravity is kind of like when you find a new favorite make-up item... A part of you wants to shout to the world how amazing it is, but another part doesn't want to tell a soul so you can keep it all to yourself!!! That reason might be why my review is shorter than usual. There's just so much I want to say, but so much I want to keep it a secret! This book left me wanting more! (I was bouncing off the walls when I found out there are going to be more books in this series following the same characters!!!)
This book is perfect for fans of forbidden student/teacher romances or for readers who enjoyed Unteachable by Leah Reader. I also think this would make the perfect winter read.
When it came to Force's main character Kaley there was something that would usually bother me about her, but somehow ended up working in her favor. Kaley was an emotional lead, and I like my leading ladies to be human, but I also don't like when girls are big criers... Ok that might sound like a little much. She isn't balling on every page or anything she is just going through so much, but her emotions and how much she felt everything really helped throw me fully into the story. The best part of her character though was her humor. She would sprinkle little one liners and they would have me rolling! I think she's funny, personable, and overall an enjoyable character to read. Then there's Mr. Slate (Elijah)... I had no problem at all liking him. As soon as he was introduced I knew I was going to be hooked. While Kaley is dropping her little one liners Elijah is never short behind to say something as equally adorable and witty. Their relationship too, y'all I loved everything about it. Some people will read this book and think "these two are just physically attracted to one another, not emotionally attracted"... and for those of you that might think that you can piss off (in the nicest way possible lol) because you missed the point. I even liked most of the side characters. They were another thing I was completely surprised by. I usually like my side characters to be closer to main characters than side ones, but in this case they all fit perfectly where they were.
When it came to the plot and pacing I was beyond happy. The pacing was so perfect I found myself waiting for the moments where I could sit in peace and read this. The way the events in this story played out felt realistic and were perfectly timed. Even with this book leaning closer to insta love and built on a lot of build up I never felt like the story or romance were rushed. I'm not one of those readers who feeds off of a building romance, I'm completely content with things going down right away... If you know what I mean *wiggles eyebrows*, but I was feeding off this build up!!!
I love that Kelly Stevenson took a taboo idea and just went 100% for it! The Force of Gravity is kind of like when you find a new favorite make-up item... A part of you wants to shout to the world how amazing it is, but another part doesn't want to tell a soul so you can keep it all to yourself!!! That reason might be why my review is shorter than usual. There's just so much I want to say, but so much I want to keep it a secret! This book left me wanting more! (I was bouncing off the walls when I found out there are going to be more books in this series following the same characters!!!)
This book is perfect for fans of forbidden student/teacher romances or for readers who enjoyed Unteachable by Leah Reader. I also think this would make the perfect winter read.
May 20, 2023
I wish there would have been opinions about situations from the male main character (Elijah Slate) POVs... And not just the "Epilogue" being his thoughts. I must admit that I found the ending really horrible (maybe even not that logical, not too sure) and I think it becomes apparent that it calls for a part 2 of the story (which does not exist (yet?)). Additionally, I found the female main character really immature. Even when I was 18 I oftentimes wouldn't have behaved, acted and thought like she did.
Overall, the story/plot was quite interesting!! However, in my opinion, involved quite a lot of unnecessary and rather childish drama...
To conclude, I would not read this book twice. Nevertheless, for a one-time-read it's quite alright. Nothing too special.
Overall, the story/plot was quite interesting!! However, in my opinion, involved quite a lot of unnecessary and rather childish drama...
To conclude, I would not read this book twice. Nevertheless, for a one-time-read it's quite alright. Nothing too special.
September 8, 2014
Maybe I'm too old for this shit. I mean, I like forbidden taboo love stories, but maybe I should stick with "student/professor" as in college age. The writting was good, but Kaley made me want to pat her on the shoulder and give her some friendly advice. "Suck it up and get it together" would have been number 1. She was whiney and insecure. It took half the book for them to finally get together and when they did... it escalated quickly. I felt like I missed a couple chapters that explained how their "love" grew. And wow! The drama! Her parents, her college aspirations, her boyfriend, her teacher, even her best friend bugged the funk outta me. I would have been a chain smoking, beer guzzling, bitter bitch if I had to take all that on in the span of my senior year. Jesus. I need a cigarrette now just thinking about it.
November 15, 2017
5+++ stars
If you like reading teacher/student forbidden romance stories then i promise you, you'll definitely enjoy this one. It was the page-turner of all page-turners. I loved it!
There was nothing original about the story,especially if you read a lot of t/s novels, but in this kind of forbidden romances usually the guy/teacher comes off as a creepy predator. Lets face it, when a teacher goes after an underage (which in this case she was not), naive student you can't help but think that there must be something wrong with the guy...
Well i didn't get that at all with this book... maybe because the teacher, Mr. Slate, was 25 years old and the student, Kaley, was 18 going to 19, so there's only a 6-7 year age difference, which is not creepy at all (at least not to me, but what do i know, I'm European!!:)).
Now the story...
Kaley is an 18 year old student who seems to be happy and pleased with her life. She has good grades, has been accepted to college in LA, has a lot of friends and has been dating the school's QB for the past 8 months, Tommy. Tommy is your normal, teenage, popular, hot, athletic, horny high school guy... and i don't blame him for "pressuring" Kaley to have sex with him. I mean they are both 18, they supposedly love each other and are in a committed relationship. Kaley didn't have any issues with having sex but she seemed to have issues with having sex with Tommy... So, Kaley should have realized that maybe Tommy wasn't the guy for her after all. To me, Tommy was a pretty decent teenage boyfriend...
Then we have a new teacher in the house. Young, hot Mr. Slate; all the girls are attracted and focused on the new math teacher but Kaley doesn't want to like him, even though she so does! And you can imagine what happens next...
The book was surprisingly very well written and i finished it in one sitting. And it's a looong book (400+ pages), that says a lot. So, if you like taboo, t/s stories, The force of gravity is one of the best I've ever read. It does end on a cliffhanger, a small one, and i can't wait for the next book! Hurry up Mrs Stevenson!!
If you like reading teacher/student forbidden romance stories then i promise you, you'll definitely enjoy this one. It was the page-turner of all page-turners. I loved it!
There was nothing original about the story,especially if you read a lot of t/s novels, but in this kind of forbidden romances usually the guy/teacher comes off as a creepy predator. Lets face it, when a teacher goes after an underage (which in this case she was not), naive student you can't help but think that there must be something wrong with the guy...
Well i didn't get that at all with this book... maybe because the teacher, Mr. Slate, was 25 years old and the student, Kaley, was 18 going to 19, so there's only a 6-7 year age difference, which is not creepy at all (at least not to me, but what do i know, I'm European!!:)).
Now the story...
Kaley is an 18 year old student who seems to be happy and pleased with her life. She has good grades, has been accepted to college in LA, has a lot of friends and has been dating the school's QB for the past 8 months, Tommy. Tommy is your normal, teenage, popular, hot, athletic, horny high school guy... and i don't blame him for "pressuring" Kaley to have sex with him. I mean they are both 18, they supposedly love each other and are in a committed relationship. Kaley didn't have any issues with having sex but she seemed to have issues with having sex with Tommy... So, Kaley should have realized that maybe Tommy wasn't the guy for her after all. To me, Tommy was a pretty decent teenage boyfriend...
Then we have a new teacher in the house. Young, hot Mr. Slate; all the girls are attracted and focused on the new math teacher but Kaley doesn't want to like him, even though she so does! And you can imagine what happens next...
The book was surprisingly very well written and i finished it in one sitting. And it's a looong book (400+ pages), that says a lot. So, if you like taboo, t/s stories, The force of gravity is one of the best I've ever read. It does end on a cliffhanger, a small one, and i can't wait for the next book! Hurry up Mrs Stevenson!!
March 15, 2017
What?! What kind of ending is that??????
Rate: 4/3-3.5 stars.
Rate: 4/3-3.5 stars.
August 15, 2014
One of the best student- teacher forbidden relationships I've read in a while.
I.could.not.put.this.book.down!
I.could.not.put.this.book.down!
June 20, 2021
While this is technically the first in a series, it can be read as a standalone. That said, where the heck is the second book?! This one came out in 2014, and as of the writing of this review (in 2021), the second has yet to be released. However, this book wraps most things up, so a sequel isn’t necessary. BUT it would be greatly appreciated, because holy smokes, was this book good.
One of the things that makes this book stand out is that Kaley isn’t a tortured teen in the slightest. Sure, there have been a few injustices thrown her way (mostly her parents telling her she can’t go to her dream college because $60 K a year is outside of their budget. The AUDACITY!). But Kaley is just an ordinary teen that most girls can relate to. The progression of the taboo relationship is gradual and sweet, and Kaley makes mistakes just like any other teenager would. We only get Kaley’s point of view in the book, and it would have been nice sometimes to find out what Elijah was thinking at some points. However, this adds to the experience, because Kaley hasn’t a clue what he’s thinking either. Sometimes, I think that Elijah didn't even know 😂
Kaley makes a lot of mistakes and can be selfish, and it was refreshing to read such an honest interpretation of a teenager in love. This book felt a little more genuine than other similar books that I”ve read lately, which is why I gave it 5 stars. Unfortunately, some of the subplots are not resolved in this book, likely left to be resolved in subsequent instalments in the series, but I can live with leaving them open ended. Maybe someone will write a fanfic extended epilogue?
One of the things that makes this book stand out is that Kaley isn’t a tortured teen in the slightest. Sure, there have been a few injustices thrown her way (mostly her parents telling her she can’t go to her dream college because $60 K a year is outside of their budget. The AUDACITY!). But Kaley is just an ordinary teen that most girls can relate to. The progression of the taboo relationship is gradual and sweet, and Kaley makes mistakes just like any other teenager would. We only get Kaley’s point of view in the book, and it would have been nice sometimes to find out what Elijah was thinking at some points. However, this adds to the experience, because Kaley hasn’t a clue what he’s thinking either. Sometimes, I think that Elijah didn't even know 😂
Kaley makes a lot of mistakes and can be selfish, and it was refreshing to read such an honest interpretation of a teenager in love. This book felt a little more genuine than other similar books that I”ve read lately, which is why I gave it 5 stars. Unfortunately, some of the subplots are not resolved in this book, likely left to be resolved in subsequent instalments in the series, but I can live with leaving them open ended. Maybe someone will write a fanfic extended epilogue?
February 6, 2017
Edit
So to sum things up the protagonist ( forgot her name) comes to class and is told her Math teacher died and a new one took his place, Elijah Slate. He is 25 and "hot" in the typical way (u know what I am talking abt). The fall in love( insert insta love) and have a secret relationship. Her parents are having trouble and well she has trust issues. The end.
It was OK. Nothing I haven't read before. I swear though if I have to hear Slate say baby one more time I will scream and break my tablet. It annoyed the heck out of me. The relationship can never come close to Pretty Little Liars Ezria though... Oh and somewhere halfway through the book Slate became a blank cardboard character. It gets really annoying like halfway through and loses the steam. I won't really recommend this to anyone.
So to sum things up the protagonist ( forgot her name) comes to class and is told her Math teacher died and a new one took his place, Elijah Slate. He is 25 and "hot" in the typical way (u know what I am talking abt). The fall in love( insert insta love) and have a secret relationship. Her parents are having trouble and well she has trust issues. The end.
It was OK. Nothing I haven't read before. I swear though if I have to hear Slate say baby one more time I will scream and break my tablet. It annoyed the heck out of me. The relationship can never come close to Pretty Little Liars Ezria though... Oh and somewhere halfway through the book Slate became a blank cardboard character. It gets really annoying like halfway through and loses the steam. I won't really recommend this to anyone.
February 12, 2018
Well this was a drag and I am bummed!
It is common knowledge that I'd die for a good and gritty cup of forbidden romance between a student and a teacher, so naturally I had to pick this book up. However, I found it lacking in many aspects.
For a teacher-student romance to grab my attention, it has to drag me around by my heart, play with my emotions, and actually make sense to me at the same time. I have to feel how wrong it is and still want it to happen. That's why I like teacher-student romances, because it’s not ok!
This book, however, was none of that. It could've easily been about a girl falling for a slightly older man and it would've made much, much more sense.
I think that this book would actually appeal more to those who find any romance between a student and a teacher rant worthy.
I, on the other hand, found it extremely disappointing. Maybe I just like my teachers more alpha and my students more fucked up. But it makes a lot more sense for a student with a dysfunctional family and background to fall for her teacher rather than someone with a wholesome family like the MC in this book.
The unrealistic aspects of the book, the not so attractive personality of the MC, and the fact that it had to drag and add unnecessary drama that frankly came out of nowhere towards the end of the book made for a very bumpy and unsatisfying read that I could not wait to finish already.
The first half of the book was much better. I don't know why it had to drag us through that unnecessary second half that killed any hope of self growth and life-altering realization for the MC!
At any rate, I think this was just not MY cup of tea, but I can see that many people would actually enjoy this a lot. I just need much, much more from my books.
So if you’re also looking for a realistic teacher-student romance that actually reads like one and you don't mind a lot of hot sex in your books, I recommend Dark Notes by Pam Godwin. If you do mind a lot of hot sex in your books, then I recommend The Yearning by Kate Belle.
It is common knowledge that I'd die for a good and gritty cup of forbidden romance between a student and a teacher, so naturally I had to pick this book up. However, I found it lacking in many aspects.
For a teacher-student romance to grab my attention, it has to drag me around by my heart, play with my emotions, and actually make sense to me at the same time. I have to feel how wrong it is and still want it to happen. That's why I like teacher-student romances, because it’s not ok!
This book, however, was none of that. It could've easily been about a girl falling for a slightly older man and it would've made much, much more sense.
I think that this book would actually appeal more to those who find any romance between a student and a teacher rant worthy.
I, on the other hand, found it extremely disappointing. Maybe I just like my teachers more alpha and my students more fucked up. But it makes a lot more sense for a student with a dysfunctional family and background to fall for her teacher rather than someone with a wholesome family like the MC in this book.
The unrealistic aspects of the book, the not so attractive personality of the MC, and the fact that it had to drag and add unnecessary drama that frankly came out of nowhere towards the end of the book made for a very bumpy and unsatisfying read that I could not wait to finish already.
The first half of the book was much better. I don't know why it had to drag us through that unnecessary second half that killed any hope of self growth and life-altering realization for the MC!
At any rate, I think this was just not MY cup of tea, but I can see that many people would actually enjoy this a lot. I just need much, much more from my books.
So if you’re also looking for a realistic teacher-student romance that actually reads like one and you don't mind a lot of hot sex in your books, I recommend Dark Notes by Pam Godwin. If you do mind a lot of hot sex in your books, then I recommend The Yearning by Kate Belle.
March 4, 2015
Unteachable ruined everything for me.
Had I not read UT before The Force of Gravity, I probably would've rated this 4 stars. I'm telling you, everything.
As I've mentioned again and again, student-teacher books rate about as high in my preference list as shifter dolphin ménage books rate low. (It does exist, by the way. I cried too.)
Knowing this, it should come as no surprise that I jumped on TFoG when I learned of its existence.
Now, let me tell you a little about the characters.
I'm going to start with the teacher, and you'll understand why later. Or maybe you won't. I have a weird thought process.
Anyway, his name is Elijah, and like any smart person, this is how I pictured him all along:
Yes, it was about his name at first. BUT when I think about it, I have to admit the similarities are there: hot guy, always wearing suits, older (he IS about 2000 years old in the series, after all), and he's always the voice of reason.
The only things missing are fangs. And the whole serial killer thing. (Let's be honest, they all kill about as often as we brush our teeth, and with the same amount of guilt. I'm talking about Vampire Diaries, BTW. Not the book.)
But I'm rambling.
Next we have Kaley. AND because Elijah was, well, the other Elijah in my head, (if you're lost, that makes two of us. it'll become clearer later. Maybe.) I just HAD to cast the MC as Katherine.
Part of it is because she briefly dates Elijah (in TVD), but most of it was because I love her. She's pretty, and I like pretty people.
Also she's a bitch. What's not to love ?
(Still talking about Katherine here, not Kaley. Sorry.)
Just like with Elijah, you have to admit the similarities are there: the first two letters of their names are the same ! Ahem.
Then you have Tommy, (what is he, five?) Laney's boyfriend.
In a nutshell, he's an asshole.
"You know you'd never leave me"
How's your ego, these days, asshole ?
He wouldn't be alive if he'd said that to me. Unfortunately, Kaley doesn't share the same violent urges. Fortunately, she still has a good reaction.
"I glare back at him. “You know what, asshole? Watch me."
You go girl !!
There are a few other minor characters that I won't get into because, well, laziness.
The plot is exactly what you would expect for a student-teacher book. A shiny new (hot) teacher arrives and the MC falls head over heels in love or in lust with him. Of course, the sentiment is shared. Because you couldn't get your HEA otherwise, and we all know how important these are.
There's one thing that is always lacking in teacher-student romance, and it's questioning.
We all know we're drawn to the frobidden -how many of us did something that was verboten and enjoyed ourselves immensely because of it ? Don't lie.
Knowing we're drawn to the forbidden, how could you not wonder if you're attraction towards you teacher or student is not just an attraction to the forbidden. This is one thing that was handled really well in Unteachable (I'm still trying to find smething wrong with that book, honestly. But no. Not even a typo.)
Another problem I've encountered with s-t books is the lack of characterization and personality to start with.
I've often noticed that the characters felt hollow. When I read a book, I want to understand the characters and their motivations.
Why do they do what they do ? Why do they think what they think ? Who made them that way ?
I want a background, and I want to see the influence this background has on the characters.
Like most, Gravity lacked these elements. I honestly think that, if not for the forbidden aspect of their relationship, Elijah and Kaley would never be attracted to each other.
They don't know each other. They don't even know themselves. (At least Kaley doesn't, I can't say anything for Elijah, since the book wasn't in his POV.)
I had a huge problem with the way cheating was presented in this book.
Despite all these examples, it's alwways the same. The cheated forgives the cheater. The cheater does not find any kind of retribution and absolutely no sentiment of guilt or shame is expressed.
This book is shelved as YA on Goodreads, and this is not what I'd like teenagers think cheating is.
Yes, there should be retributions. No, the cheated shouldn't forgive so easily.
Despite all the problems I had with this book, I found myself enjoying it immensely.
The writing was better than I expected, and I rather liked the main character.
3.5 stars
Had I not read UT before The Force of Gravity, I probably would've rated this 4 stars. I'm telling you, everything.
As I've mentioned again and again, student-teacher books rate about as high in my preference list as shifter dolphin ménage books rate low. (It does exist, by the way. I cried too.)
Knowing this, it should come as no surprise that I jumped on TFoG when I learned of its existence.
Now, let me tell you a little about the characters.
I'm going to start with the teacher, and you'll understand why later. Or maybe you won't. I have a weird thought process.
Anyway, his name is Elijah, and like any smart person, this is how I pictured him all along:
Yes, it was about his name at first. BUT when I think about it, I have to admit the similarities are there: hot guy, always wearing suits, older (he IS about 2000 years old in the series, after all), and he's always the voice of reason.
The only things missing are fangs. And the whole serial killer thing. (Let's be honest, they all kill about as often as we brush our teeth, and with the same amount of guilt. I'm talking about Vampire Diaries, BTW. Not the book.)
But I'm rambling.
Next we have Kaley. AND because Elijah was, well, the other Elijah in my head, (if you're lost, that makes two of us. it'll become clearer later. Maybe.) I just HAD to cast the MC as Katherine.
Part of it is because she briefly dates Elijah (in TVD), but most of it was because I love her. She's pretty, and I like pretty people.
Also she's a bitch. What's not to love ?
(Still talking about Katherine here, not Kaley. Sorry.)
Just like with Elijah, you have to admit the similarities are there: the first two letters of their names are the same ! Ahem.
Then you have Tommy, (what is he, five?) Laney's boyfriend.
In a nutshell, he's an asshole.
"You know you'd never leave me"
How's your ego, these days, asshole ?
He wouldn't be alive if he'd said that to me. Unfortunately, Kaley doesn't share the same violent urges. Fortunately, she still has a good reaction.
"I glare back at him. “You know what, asshole? Watch me."
You go girl !!
There are a few other minor characters that I won't get into because, well, laziness.
The plot is exactly what you would expect for a student-teacher book. A shiny new (hot) teacher arrives and the MC falls head over heels in love or in lust with him. Of course, the sentiment is shared. Because you couldn't get your HEA otherwise, and we all know how important these are.
There's one thing that is always lacking in teacher-student romance, and it's questioning.
We all know we're drawn to the frobidden -how many of us did something that was verboten and enjoyed ourselves immensely because of it ? Don't lie.
Knowing we're drawn to the forbidden, how could you not wonder if you're attraction towards you teacher or student is not just an attraction to the forbidden. This is one thing that was handled really well in Unteachable (I'm still trying to find smething wrong with that book, honestly. But no. Not even a typo.)
Another problem I've encountered with s-t books is the lack of characterization and personality to start with.
I've often noticed that the characters felt hollow. When I read a book, I want to understand the characters and their motivations.
Why do they do what they do ? Why do they think what they think ? Who made them that way ?
I want a background, and I want to see the influence this background has on the characters.
Like most, Gravity lacked these elements. I honestly think that, if not for the forbidden aspect of their relationship, Elijah and Kaley would never be attracted to each other.
They don't know each other. They don't even know themselves. (At least Kaley doesn't, I can't say anything for Elijah, since the book wasn't in his POV.)
I had a huge problem with the way cheating was presented in this book.
Despite all these examples, it's alwways the same. The cheated forgives the cheater. The cheater does not find any kind of retribution and absolutely no sentiment of guilt or shame is expressed.
This book is shelved as YA on Goodreads, and this is not what I'd like teenagers think cheating is.
Yes, there should be retributions. No, the cheated shouldn't forgive so easily.
Despite all the problems I had with this book, I found myself enjoying it immensely.
The writing was better than I expected, and I rather liked the main character.
3.5 stars
December 6, 2014
2.5 out of 5 stars
So, I was really really really really really really excited to read this book. I knew that it was a teacher student romance where the student and teacher didn’t meet until after they were already teacher and student, and that made me really excited, because I haven’t read one like that before and it was on my teacher-student-story wishlist. I hoped that my other teacher-student-wishlist items might also be in this book—most importantly, a heroine who is actually mature enough (and sensible enough) to be capable of handling this kind of relationship.
This story started out strong for me. I will show you a status update quote as evidence:
The problem was, all of that was a lie.
I enjoyed the writing style, it was very readable—I read the first half of the book in the space of one evening. I read another quarter the next day. But then I was so frustrated with the couple that I needed a break from them, and came back with a fresh perspective…but then I got annoyed all over again when I finally finished the last of it.
I also enjoyed the realism the author injected, like Slate's 8-pack diet, and the humor. Oh, and the cover. I adore the cover.
My biggest issues with the story? Kaley does not have the maturity for this relationship. At all. She is not mature for her age, she does not mature as the book goes on, she’s just an insecure, reckless, at times crazy girl who should be dating boys her own age. Slate is not believable to me. He is too old to be so stupid and reckless. Their insta-love? I can’t with that.
First, Kaley’s ridiculous overreaction to her attraction to a teacher? Is she 13? Has she never been attracted to someone before? All of her friends who have the exact same attraction react the way normally functioning human teenagers react to a hot teacher, so what was Kaley’s deal?
The emotions in this story moved way too fast for me. A three piece suit, caramel eyes, and abs might get me excited, but your hero still has to win me over, and you still have to convince me your love is worth risking it all (in a teacher-student story). This book failed to convince me of anything. I have no idea why these two apparently love each other. Because they like looking at each other? Because Slate has a weakness for girls going through family drama? Because reasons? I don’t know.
Second, the promise of all those things in the quote up there, and how they disappointed me by being a bunch of bullshit. In NA books, the best friends are always these overbearing people that drive me nuts. Initially, it seemed like Emily was going to actually be a good friend (although each time Kaley called her Ems, I literally ground my teeth). That was not to be. I hated Emily. She earned a spot on my “shitty friends” shelf—she was Tommy’s friend and Derek’s girlfriend before she was Kaley’s friend, and I didn’t like her at all.
Kaley’s family? Kaley is an only child, so it makes sense that she’s close to her parents—except she isn’t. Her parents only pop on the screen to blow shit up, or to tell her to “watch her mouth” like she’s 12 instead of 18—or, in the most ridiculous parts of the mother-daughter relationship of all time, the mother only appearing to try to push her daughter into getting back together with the ex she didn’t really love, because they were so “perfect” together. Yeah. OKAY.
Also, she's so pissed at them because they can't afford $60k a year? ARE YOU KIDDING ME?
The boyfriend. I was so excited that Tommy seemed like he was just going to be a normal, good/decent boyfriend, because so often the boyfriend is a douche as an easy-out. But Tommy was, in fact, quite a douche.
Now, my other biggest issue was the book was that inexplicably-besotted Slate couldn’t even think with his big head when Kaley was being a lunatic.
As if it’s a joke! No big deal! This chick is acting like a straight psycho with almost no legitimate cause, and could EASILY ruin your whole life, but yeah, definitely play it off like a joke instead of saying, “If you pull bullshit like this ever again, we are done. DONE. I’m putting my ass on the line for this relationship and you are acting like a child. If you aren’t mature enough to handle this relationship, then there can be no relationship.”
Since his response was the exact opposite of that, I lost all respect for him there and then. And my interest in their relationship evaporated. I stopped reading the book for about a week to get past my irritation/apathy.
ARE YOU KIDDING ME?! You knew what you were getting into! What did you think a relationship with a teacher would be like? Holding hands, skipping down the hallway?
Basically, I didn’t buy their epic love. *Shrug*
I would probably read the next book to see what happens, but…I did have issues with this one. (For more details, see my frequent status updates.)
REC: If you enjoyed this one, check out
.
So, I was really really really really really really excited to read this book. I knew that it was a teacher student romance where the student and teacher didn’t meet until after they were already teacher and student, and that made me really excited, because I haven’t read one like that before and it was on my teacher-student-story wishlist. I hoped that my other teacher-student-wishlist items might also be in this book—most importantly, a heroine who is actually mature enough (and sensible enough) to be capable of handling this kind of relationship.
This story started out strong for me. I will show you a status update quote as evidence:
"I'm loving how atypical these relationships are! Close to her parents, who have a NORMAL marriage, a boyfriend who isn't a jerk just to facilitate her liking someone else... Two thumbs up so far!"
The problem was, all of that was a lie.
I enjoyed the writing style, it was very readable—I read the first half of the book in the space of one evening. I read another quarter the next day. But then I was so frustrated with the couple that I needed a break from them, and came back with a fresh perspective…but then I got annoyed all over again when I finally finished the last of it.
I also enjoyed the realism the author injected, like Slate's 8-pack diet, and the humor. Oh, and the cover. I adore the cover.
My biggest issues with the story? Kaley does not have the maturity for this relationship. At all. She is not mature for her age, she does not mature as the book goes on, she’s just an insecure, reckless, at times crazy girl who should be dating boys her own age. Slate is not believable to me. He is too old to be so stupid and reckless. Their insta-love? I can’t with that.
First, Kaley’s ridiculous overreaction to her attraction to a teacher? Is she 13? Has she never been attracted to someone before? All of her friends who have the exact same attraction react the way normally functioning human teenagers react to a hot teacher, so what was Kaley’s deal?
The emotions in this story moved way too fast for me. A three piece suit, caramel eyes, and abs might get me excited, but your hero still has to win me over, and you still have to convince me your love is worth risking it all (in a teacher-student story). This book failed to convince me of anything. I have no idea why these two apparently love each other. Because they like looking at each other? Because Slate has a weakness for girls going through family drama? Because reasons? I don’t know.
Second, the promise of all those things in the quote up there, and how they disappointed me by being a bunch of bullshit. In NA books, the best friends are always these overbearing people that drive me nuts. Initially, it seemed like Emily was going to actually be a good friend (although each time Kaley called her Ems, I literally ground my teeth). That was not to be. I hated Emily. She earned a spot on my “shitty friends” shelf—she was Tommy’s friend and Derek’s girlfriend before she was Kaley’s friend, and I didn’t like her at all.
Kaley’s family? Kaley is an only child, so it makes sense that she’s close to her parents—except she isn’t. Her parents only pop on the screen to blow shit up, or to tell her to “watch her mouth” like she’s 12 instead of 18—or, in the most ridiculous parts of the mother-daughter relationship of all time, the mother only appearing to try to push her daughter into getting back together with the ex she didn’t really love, because they were so “perfect” together. Yeah. OKAY.
Also, she's so pissed at them because they can't afford $60k a year? ARE YOU KIDDING ME?
The boyfriend. I was so excited that Tommy seemed like he was just going to be a normal, good/decent boyfriend, because so often the boyfriend is a douche as an easy-out. But Tommy was, in fact, quite a douche.
Now, my other biggest issue was the book was that inexplicably-besotted Slate couldn’t even think with his big head when Kaley was being a lunatic.
“And honestly, I would have felt the same way. I can’t say I would have reacted the same way,” he says with a wink, “but I understand…”
As if it’s a joke! No big deal! This chick is acting like a straight psycho with almost no legitimate cause, and could EASILY ruin your whole life, but yeah, definitely play it off like a joke instead of saying, “If you pull bullshit like this ever again, we are done. DONE. I’m putting my ass on the line for this relationship and you are acting like a child. If you aren’t mature enough to handle this relationship, then there can be no relationship.”
Since his response was the exact opposite of that, I lost all respect for him there and then. And my interest in their relationship evaporated. I stopped reading the book for about a week to get past my irritation/apathy.
But it’s not right to ask me to live in a proverbial closet, either.
ARE YOU KIDDING ME?! You knew what you were getting into! What did you think a relationship with a teacher would be like? Holding hands, skipping down the hallway?
Basically, I didn’t buy their epic love. *Shrug*
I would probably read the next book to see what happens, but…I did have issues with this one. (For more details, see my frequent status updates.)
REC: If you enjoyed this one, check out
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August 12, 2014
This was another teacher-student romance book that also touched on family issues and high school drama. I loved Elijah (the teacher) but he seemed exponentially more emotionally mature than Kayley. Other than the fact that she is beautiful, I didn't see what Elijah found attractive in her.
In a nutshell, this was an entertaining read. I liked it!
In a nutshell, this was an entertaining read. I liked it!
July 17, 2016
4 "Forbidden" Stars
Wow! Wasn't that book incredibly AMAZING?! I expected to like it, simply because I REALLY like teacher/student Romance and have yet to find one I didn't like. But the truth is: I didn't like it, I FREAKING LOVED IT! This book sucked me in from the very first page, I literally couldn't stop reading. At one point I even decided that sleep wasn’t a priority at four in the morning. Sleep is insignificant when you're reading an amazing book!
First, meet Kaley Kennedy an 18 years old girl that has it all. She has a loving family, great friends, the hottest guy in school as her boyfriend, and her future doesn't seem anything but bright and perfect. Everything in her life is in order, everything seems right. Satisfying. Until it isn't anymore… In walks Mr. Slate, her new 25 years old math teacher. He's hot, he's intriguing and he's WAY off-limits. The problem is, she can't seem to get rid of the pull that's constantly drawing her to him. And neither can he. What happens when what is SO wrong feels SO right, and what once felt right, now feels somehow wrong. When Kaley's world comes crashing down, the last thing she needs is that stupid attraction she feels towards her sexy math teacher... Or is it?
Let's get something straight, first and foremost: Math has never seemed sexier than when Elijah Slate teaches it. Really. I mean even the name sounds sexy: Elijah. Urgh. I love it. I have to say: this book literally made me want to go back to High School to find myself an Elijah.
Some might say that things move "pretty quickly" between Kaley and Elijah, but surprisingly, I absolutely did NOT care. I'm normally one to complain when things escalate too fast, and by that, I certainly mean when "instalove" happens, but in this book it didn't matter one single bit. I loved the pace of the book, it wasn't too fast, and it wasn't too slow. For me it felt like the perfect mix of anticipation, frustration, and eagerness. The build-up to them being together as a couple had me falling in love with Mr. Slate, but I'll confess that once it happened; I fell in love with him ALL OVER AGAIN. Man, was that man sweet. And sexy. So sexy. I need to find myself an Elijah. Have I said that already?
The good news is; THERE WILL BE A SECOND BOOK! And I CAN'T freaking wait! Give it to me, and give it to me RIGHT THIS SECOND! I need more Elijah, I couldn't get enough.
I've heard a bit of criticism directed at the character of Kaley. Some people said she was a bit immature for Elijah and that they didn't understand what he liked in her. Well, I'll tell you this: I disagree completely. I did not think Kaley was immature. She reacted exactly the way an 18 years old would react to the things that happened in her life, and I DID understand why Elijah loved her. It's the force of gravity, people, you can't fight gravity. It’s a pull.
I'm extremely pleased with this book, and I'm now adding the second book of this series to my never-ending list of "Books I Can't Freaking Wait To Read".
If you love teacher/student romance, what the heck are you waiting for? Grab yourself a copy, and ENJOY! Mr. Slate is waiting for you, I promise you won't regret it. You might even suddenly find Friday nights math sessions interesting... *wink*
Wow! Wasn't that book incredibly AMAZING?! I expected to like it, simply because I REALLY like teacher/student Romance and have yet to find one I didn't like. But the truth is: I didn't like it, I FREAKING LOVED IT! This book sucked me in from the very first page, I literally couldn't stop reading. At one point I even decided that sleep wasn’t a priority at four in the morning. Sleep is insignificant when you're reading an amazing book!
First, meet Kaley Kennedy an 18 years old girl that has it all. She has a loving family, great friends, the hottest guy in school as her boyfriend, and her future doesn't seem anything but bright and perfect. Everything in her life is in order, everything seems right. Satisfying. Until it isn't anymore… In walks Mr. Slate, her new 25 years old math teacher. He's hot, he's intriguing and he's WAY off-limits. The problem is, she can't seem to get rid of the pull that's constantly drawing her to him. And neither can he. What happens when what is SO wrong feels SO right, and what once felt right, now feels somehow wrong. When Kaley's world comes crashing down, the last thing she needs is that stupid attraction she feels towards her sexy math teacher... Or is it?
Let's get something straight, first and foremost: Math has never seemed sexier than when Elijah Slate teaches it. Really. I mean even the name sounds sexy: Elijah. Urgh. I love it. I have to say: this book literally made me want to go back to High School to find myself an Elijah.
Some might say that things move "pretty quickly" between Kaley and Elijah, but surprisingly, I absolutely did NOT care. I'm normally one to complain when things escalate too fast, and by that, I certainly mean when "instalove" happens, but in this book it didn't matter one single bit. I loved the pace of the book, it wasn't too fast, and it wasn't too slow. For me it felt like the perfect mix of anticipation, frustration, and eagerness. The build-up to them being together as a couple had me falling in love with Mr. Slate, but I'll confess that once it happened; I fell in love with him ALL OVER AGAIN. Man, was that man sweet. And sexy. So sexy. I need to find myself an Elijah. Have I said that already?
The good news is; THERE WILL BE A SECOND BOOK! And I CAN'T freaking wait! Give it to me, and give it to me RIGHT THIS SECOND! I need more Elijah, I couldn't get enough.
I've heard a bit of criticism directed at the character of Kaley. Some people said she was a bit immature for Elijah and that they didn't understand what he liked in her. Well, I'll tell you this: I disagree completely. I did not think Kaley was immature. She reacted exactly the way an 18 years old would react to the things that happened in her life, and I DID understand why Elijah loved her. It's the force of gravity, people, you can't fight gravity. It’s a pull.
I'm extremely pleased with this book, and I'm now adding the second book of this series to my never-ending list of "Books I Can't Freaking Wait To Read".
If you love teacher/student romance, what the heck are you waiting for? Grab yourself a copy, and ENJOY! Mr. Slate is waiting for you, I promise you won't regret it. You might even suddenly find Friday nights math sessions interesting... *wink*
March 20, 2016
I should've seen this coming but not at this level of immaturity. The h is in HS so I tried to be "understanding".
However...
The h killed this book (in a bad way). I can take some some but don't overdo it.
Sorry ya'll not the book for me. She basically made out with 3 different guys while dating two of them...couldn't keep up.
However...
The h killed this book (in a bad way). I can take some some but don't overdo it.
Sorry ya'll not the book for me. She basically made out with 3 different guys while dating two of them...couldn't keep up.
January 14, 2018
disappointed.
October 19, 2014
3.5 almost 4 stars
Student-teacher stories are a fave of mine, all that sneaking around and forbidden naughtiness can make for a really good read.
This is narrated in first person by 18 year Kaley and unfortunately I did find her to be a little immature which had the unfortunate effect of making her love/lust interest Slate seem a little too much like a creepy predator at times. These stories can easily move between creepy uncomfortable and forbidden scorching, it's a fine line sometimes. Their instant attraction wasn't that believable for me, although through the story their relationship definitely grew on me. Kaley' s angst over her parents' disintegrating relationship and her handsy boyfriend was very well done and made a gripping background to the main story.
That said this was easy to read and I lost myself in it, but it just lacked the sizzling chemistry of other student-teacher stories I've enjoyed, particularly at the start.
It's the first in a series and while it doesn't end on a cliffhanger, their story isn't finished. Although their chemistry wasn't quite there for me at the beginning, by the end I was really feeling it so I'm invested enough to want to read the next book when it's available.
Student-teacher stories are a fave of mine, all that sneaking around and forbidden naughtiness can make for a really good read.
This is narrated in first person by 18 year Kaley and unfortunately I did find her to be a little immature which had the unfortunate effect of making her love/lust interest Slate seem a little too much like a creepy predator at times. These stories can easily move between creepy uncomfortable and forbidden scorching, it's a fine line sometimes. Their instant attraction wasn't that believable for me, although through the story their relationship definitely grew on me. Kaley' s angst over her parents' disintegrating relationship and her handsy boyfriend was very well done and made a gripping background to the main story.
That said this was easy to read and I lost myself in it, but it just lacked the sizzling chemistry of other student-teacher stories I've enjoyed, particularly at the start.
It's the first in a series and while it doesn't end on a cliffhanger, their story isn't finished. Although their chemistry wasn't quite there for me at the beginning, by the end I was really feeling it so I'm invested enough to want to read the next book when it's available.
December 6, 2014
Possible Spoilers.....I couldn't stand Kaley. I thought shes was so immature and very whiny. Truthfully I kinda felt bad for Tommy. I thought it was so stupid she was mad at him for cheating. She treated him like crap for weeks and was obsessed with another guy.I was rolling my eyes through the whole book.
September 11, 2018
I almost NEVER read stories like this because I don’t care much for them (so that may affect my review), but I was looking for something I could read with my best friend. We needed to find common ground, and we found it here. When I picked this up I did not realize it was the author’s debut novel! To me it reads like an experienced novelist had written it, so kudos to the author who has a true talent. Onto the story itself.
“It’s like the force of gravity, Kaley. You can’t fight it, no matter how hard you try-”
Throughout the story I found myself alternating between liking Kaley and disliking Slate, and then disliking Kaley and liking Slate. To be completely honest, I found them both a bit frustrating and (mostly Kaley) immature. It’s not off that her character should be immature, she is a teenager. Slate, on the other hand, is the same age as me and I can’t get behind most of his actions.
That being said, I felt for Kaley a lot throughout the story. She was a sensitive girl who I could relate to, and a genuinely nice person. However, she was not quite as strong as I would have hoped. There were a few scenes where Slate would become closed off, hide things, and make her hide in the closet. This clearly upset Kaley to the point of tears, and then when she would confront Slate she would end up blaming herself and apologizing. I don’t think anyone needs to apologize for being upset over something that clearly bothered them?
There was one scene in particular where a heretofore unknown woman shows up to Slate’s house and he forces her to hide in the closet, and Kaley thinks:
I should be euphorically happy. But instead, I’m hiding in his closet for the second time today. I know it’s not his fault, and I know he doesn’t want to hide me, but no matter how I look at it, it leaves me feeling inadequate.
And then after she confronts Slate and he explains “oh it’s just my ex don’t worry baby” and launches into a sob story, Kaley backs down immediately and she even says:
“So, I guess I’m just a stupid drama queen then?”
On another note, this is probably just me personally, but when Slate starts calling her “baby” every other sentence, I got super annoyed.
Also, it’s a miracle Kaley turned out to be the person that she is because her parents are morons and her friends are all pieces of shit except for one girl who she hides everything from.
So anyways this was actually a good book and I’m sure anyone who seeks these stories out will love it. I guess it’s considered a taboo, slow burn romance? I don’t see many other works by this author but if she decides to put anything else out I would definitely give it a look!
“It’s like the force of gravity, Kaley. You can’t fight it, no matter how hard you try-”
Throughout the story I found myself alternating between liking Kaley and disliking Slate, and then disliking Kaley and liking Slate. To be completely honest, I found them both a bit frustrating and (mostly Kaley) immature. It’s not off that her character should be immature, she is a teenager. Slate, on the other hand, is the same age as me and I can’t get behind most of his actions.
That being said, I felt for Kaley a lot throughout the story. She was a sensitive girl who I could relate to, and a genuinely nice person. However, she was not quite as strong as I would have hoped. There were a few scenes where Slate would become closed off, hide things, and make her hide in the closet. This clearly upset Kaley to the point of tears, and then when she would confront Slate she would end up blaming herself and apologizing. I don’t think anyone needs to apologize for being upset over something that clearly bothered them?
There was one scene in particular where a heretofore unknown woman shows up to Slate’s house and he forces her to hide in the closet, and Kaley thinks:
I should be euphorically happy. But instead, I’m hiding in his closet for the second time today. I know it’s not his fault, and I know he doesn’t want to hide me, but no matter how I look at it, it leaves me feeling inadequate.
And then after she confronts Slate and he explains “oh it’s just my ex don’t worry baby” and launches into a sob story, Kaley backs down immediately and she even says:
“So, I guess I’m just a stupid drama queen then?”
On another note, this is probably just me personally, but when Slate starts calling her “baby” every other sentence, I got super annoyed.
Also, it’s a miracle Kaley turned out to be the person that she is because her parents are morons and her friends are all pieces of shit except for one girl who she hides everything from.
So anyways this was actually a good book and I’m sure anyone who seeks these stories out will love it. I guess it’s considered a taboo, slow burn romance? I don’t see many other works by this author but if she decides to put anything else out I would definitely give it a look!
January 29, 2025
4.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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از اون استاد دانشجو های مورد علاقم بود.
از اونجایی که کتاب سال ۲۰۱۵ نوشته شده حس و حال همون فیلمای تینیجری اون سالهارو میده .
"Force of Gravity" از کلی استیونسون یه کتاب عاشقانه-درامه. رابطه بین یه معلم و شاگردش رو نشون میده. داستانش جذابه، اما خب، موضوع حساسی داره چون این رابطه ممنوعه. شخصیتها خوب نوشته شدن، ولی برای بعضیا، مخصوصاً با توجه به موضوع، ممکنه زیادی درگیرکننده باشه.
1.🌶️
از اون استاد دانشجو های مورد علاقم بود.
از اونجایی که کتاب سال ۲۰۱۵ نوشته شده حس و حال همون فیلمای تینیجری اون سالهارو میده .
"Force of Gravity" از کلی استیونسون یه کتاب عاشقانه-درامه. رابطه بین یه معلم و شاگردش رو نشون میده. داستانش جذابه، اما خب، موضوع حساسی داره چون این رابطه ممنوعه. شخصیتها خوب نوشته شدن، ولی برای بعضیا، مخصوصاً با توجه به موضوع، ممکنه زیادی درگیرکننده باشه.
September 9, 2016
4 Solid Stars for FOG
This was a very interesting take on a student teacher romance. I very much enjoyed it; although I wanted to scream through half the book. The characters in this book baffled me beyond belief. I don't think I've ever talked to myself or yelled this much whilst dealing with a muted, unresponsive object! I had to keep reminding myself - these are high-school students here.
The basic concept is about a high school student- Kaley- a lost soul. She is running through life on auto pilot. Her friends and boyfriend pretty much dictate her existence. She isn't happy but doesn't really realize it until her math teacher dies and Elijah Slate is sent to complete the school year, in his place. He awakens feelings inside her, emotionally and sexually that she has never felt for her boyfriend.
Her best friend Emily, pissed me off something serious. This girls sole purpose was to bag on her friend whenever she didn't want to participate in her random, routine bull. She made comments that I truly felt no real friend would make. Her concerns were only about what Kaley could do for her, like being the DD after a night of drinking or trying to keep their foursome together (since her boyfriend and Kay's boyfriend were besties as well). Her annoyance was persistent. She constantly reminded Kay that her boyfriend was hot and could have any girl in school. What kind of friend makes you feel inferior to your mate and tells you to sleep with him in order to keep him?
Her boyfriend Tommy...no better. He quickly earned the award for super douche of the year. Kay was a virgin and this guy spent every waking moment trying to get into her pants. It was like a full-time job for this dude. I really thought this kid was getting paid for this! He was not above begging or groveling either; no shame what so ever. That was just the tip of the iceberg with this moron. He goes from bad to worse in no time.
I spent a lot of time feeling sorry for Kay. She had it pretty bad. Her family life was falling apart and her friends were crap but at times she got on my nerves, as well. She was such a pushover and the epitome of a naive teenager but I guess that's one of the things I enjoyed. She made decisions with the maturity of a teen, staying very true to her age.
I found myself mirroring her feelings when her teacher started to pay her special attention. I was so desperate for this chick to get a break and feel something other than failure or mortification. For a while she thinks this attraction might be a figment of her imagination but later, as the relationship builds, she realizes it could be something special.
The rest is a very interesting take on a forbidden romance I'd rather not spoil. I really enjoyed this book. It was certainly a page turner and I seriously couldn't put it down. I experienced a wide range of emotions, making this a book one I would definitely recommend. Enjoy!
This was a very interesting take on a student teacher romance. I very much enjoyed it; although I wanted to scream through half the book. The characters in this book baffled me beyond belief. I don't think I've ever talked to myself or yelled this much whilst dealing with a muted, unresponsive object! I had to keep reminding myself - these are high-school students here.
The basic concept is about a high school student- Kaley- a lost soul. She is running through life on auto pilot. Her friends and boyfriend pretty much dictate her existence. She isn't happy but doesn't really realize it until her math teacher dies and Elijah Slate is sent to complete the school year, in his place. He awakens feelings inside her, emotionally and sexually that she has never felt for her boyfriend.
Her best friend Emily, pissed me off something serious. This girls sole purpose was to bag on her friend whenever she didn't want to participate in her random, routine bull. She made comments that I truly felt no real friend would make. Her concerns were only about what Kaley could do for her, like being the DD after a night of drinking or trying to keep their foursome together (since her boyfriend and Kay's boyfriend were besties as well). Her annoyance was persistent. She constantly reminded Kay that her boyfriend was hot and could have any girl in school. What kind of friend makes you feel inferior to your mate and tells you to sleep with him in order to keep him?
Her boyfriend Tommy...no better. He quickly earned the award for super douche of the year. Kay was a virgin and this guy spent every waking moment trying to get into her pants. It was like a full-time job for this dude. I really thought this kid was getting paid for this! He was not above begging or groveling either; no shame what so ever. That was just the tip of the iceberg with this moron. He goes from bad to worse in no time.
I spent a lot of time feeling sorry for Kay. She had it pretty bad. Her family life was falling apart and her friends were crap but at times she got on my nerves, as well. She was such a pushover and the epitome of a naive teenager but I guess that's one of the things I enjoyed. She made decisions with the maturity of a teen, staying very true to her age.
I found myself mirroring her feelings when her teacher started to pay her special attention. I was so desperate for this chick to get a break and feel something other than failure or mortification. For a while she thinks this attraction might be a figment of her imagination but later, as the relationship builds, she realizes it could be something special.
The rest is a very interesting take on a forbidden romance I'd rather not spoil. I really enjoyed this book. It was certainly a page turner and I seriously couldn't put it down. I experienced a wide range of emotions, making this a book one I would definitely recommend. Enjoy!
October 4, 2014
....it's like a force of gravity you can't fight it, no matter how hard you try, it's scientific fact. It can't be stopped....
I think I waited the whole book to read and like this quote.. but frankly I found this book a bit disturbing, I Know it's the "ole Taboo" romance thing and I have read similar subject matter but this just felt so over the line for me. And finding it being a series even makes me cringe a wee bit more.
As a tech/ timeline thing I found some big "WWWhat holes" the major being when Slate was telling the story to Kay about his last girlfriend how when he found out she was pregnant how he went and got his degree, bought a house, bought his Tahoe. I think these things take a little more time, and then she gets an abortion,anyhow I found several through out the book, which almost made to feel like either bad editing or just plan drop a chapter and carry on.
So I just don't know here, I really try to even finish the books I am not liking to "see it to the end" But this, I should have ended it, it was like watching a train wreak that could have been prevented. Giving an extra star for the quote...nothing more
I think I waited the whole book to read and like this quote.. but frankly I found this book a bit disturbing, I Know it's the "ole Taboo" romance thing and I have read similar subject matter but this just felt so over the line for me. And finding it being a series even makes me cringe a wee bit more.
As a tech/ timeline thing I found some big "WWWhat holes" the major being when Slate was telling the story to Kay about his last girlfriend how when he found out she was pregnant how he went and got his degree, bought a house, bought his Tahoe. I think these things take a little more time, and then she gets an abortion,anyhow I found several through out the book, which almost made to feel like either bad editing or just plan drop a chapter and carry on.
So I just don't know here, I really try to even finish the books I am not liking to "see it to the end" But this, I should have ended it, it was like watching a train wreak that could have been prevented. Giving an extra star for the quote...nothing more
June 22, 2025
This was the perfect student/teacher romance for me. I liked the story, the characters. Fast paced read, but it wasn't rushed - the author took her time in setting the stage for their relationship so it was believeable. I bought this for my kindle, but this is the type of book that I would purchase again just to have a hard copy. I anticipate many re-reads in the future. Anxiously waiting for the next installments in the series.
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Added 2025: decided to reread this after 6 years, and I am now too old for the high school drama and characters portrayed here, so while I stand by my original review, I probably won't read it again.
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Added 2025: decided to reread this after 6 years, and I am now too old for the high school drama and characters portrayed here, so while I stand by my original review, I probably won't read it again.
November 20, 2020
⭐️⭐️
Not my favorite. Very fast-paced and a lot of information dump on the first chapters. Some of the writings often feels robotic and the chemistry between the MCs are... nonexistent. I hate it when writers rush a connection. I like it when they go slow, building up the tension, but this one just deflate like a balloon in just the first chapter.
I particularly didn’t enjoy the first scene they had together. It was very bland and vanilla. No heightened anything. I think i disliked the most was that he watched her lips as she put on lipgloss inside his classroom.
The first time they met.
As a student and teacher.
Bruh.
Giving this a solid 2/10 worth the read deadass.
Not my favorite. Very fast-paced and a lot of information dump on the first chapters. Some of the writings often feels robotic and the chemistry between the MCs are... nonexistent. I hate it when writers rush a connection. I like it when they go slow, building up the tension, but this one just deflate like a balloon in just the first chapter.
I particularly didn’t enjoy the first scene they had together. It was very bland and vanilla. No heightened anything. I think i disliked the most was that he watched her lips as she put on lipgloss inside his classroom.
The first time they met.
As a student and teacher.
Bruh.
Giving this a solid 2/10 worth the read deadass.
December 24, 2014
3.5 stars
March 10, 2021
This book was so addicting in every way possible. It had so much drama that I was so hooked from the very first page. There was so much going on. The high school life was portrayed so well.
Kaley’s life goes from what she deems as perfect to it falling apart. You see her lie to her friends, begin to have feelings for her math teacher, losing her boyfriend, and seeing her parents constantly fight. Through the stress of it all she finds solace through Slate.
We see Slate struggle with wanting her and choosing his career. He goes back and forth from letting her in and keeping his distance. Until his fear of losing her becomes too great.
Their chemistry was just right and filled each other’s pieces well. I adore how much effort they put into trying to be together through the many obstacles they both endured.
Kaley’s life goes from what she deems as perfect to it falling apart. You see her lie to her friends, begin to have feelings for her math teacher, losing her boyfriend, and seeing her parents constantly fight. Through the stress of it all she finds solace through Slate.
We see Slate struggle with wanting her and choosing his career. He goes back and forth from letting her in and keeping his distance. Until his fear of losing her becomes too great.
Their chemistry was just right and filled each other’s pieces well. I adore how much effort they put into trying to be together through the many obstacles they both endured.
September 27, 2014
I'm a HUGE fan of teacher/student romances. I love the forbiddenness, how undeniably wrong that attraction can feel despite how right I want to believe it is. But let's face it, teacher/student romances of late can feel cliche. At the end of the day, how many different ways can that plot line go, really? What I loved about The Force of Gravity was the effort this author made to set this book apart. In many T/S books I've read, the teacher meets the student BEFORE they ever realize that they are a teacher and a student. Romance blossoms and then there's this epic realization that "OMG, he's my teacher!," followed almost certainly by that constant uncertainty of how or when they'll get caught. Not in this story. This story literally evolves around a forbidden attraction that starts IN the classroom.... which makes this feel so much more wrong. There's no justifying to myself that this is okay because they met before school started, or when they met they had no idea how old she was or what he did for a living. No, it just feels totally inappropriate because he KNOWS she is his student, she KNOWS he is her teacher. And yet they can't look away. So despite all that wrongness, the attraction between Kaley and Mr Slate feels so right. And I LOVED that so much.
To add to the forbidenness of the dynamic between Mr Slate and Kaley, there's an added layer of wrongness that comes in the form of Tommy. Not only is this student lusting after her teacher, but she has a boyfriend, who happens to play on the baseball team that the sexy young teacher coaches! Combine that with the plethora of family drama Kaley is dealing with, her fragile relationships with her friends, the angst offered up by the other women in Slate's life, the changes Kaley is facing as she nears graduation and you have a non-stop ride of uncertainty, unpredictability and secrecy that never ends. The web of impropriety in this story is ever growing and it all makes for such a meaty story that I just couldn't put down.
The writing in this story is rather consuming. It's not often enough that a book grabs you from the very first page and doesn't let up. The writing isn't over-the-top flowery or overly descriptive at all. It just flows, feels clean. The dialogue just feels very authentic, a must in any truly great book, in my opinion. I need the dialogue to feel natural, and the dialogue in this book feels exactly that way for much of it. There's also a layer of humor and sarcasm within the dialogue and inner monologue and it just works. I have so much appreciation for writing that doesn't feel forced. This story reads like it flowed effortlessly from this author. That doesn't happen often in this writing climate and when I find it, I feel like I discovered a gem.
There are a few things that gave me pause while reading... a few minor details that initially made me think the author could have tweaked to make the characters more likeable. Emily, for example, doesn't come off as a very good friend for much of the story. She seems to side with Tommy more than with Kaley. She seems very self centered. Derek comes off as judgemental and uppity at times, always watching Kaley with looks of distrust. Kaley, herself, seems overly emotional, a little melodramatic, immature. But... and it's a big BUT... in the grand scheme of things, those personality flaws and character facets further cement to me how consistent the author actually is with her character development and story telling. These are teenagers. Teenagers are immature, they are superficial and self-absorbed. They're overly dramatic and hormonal and bratty, all of which are realistic and necessary in demonstrating just how very different of a place Kaley is from Mr Slate in their lives. Those little details, traits, nuances are all perfectly placed reminders of just how vast the divide is between Kaley and her teacher, both emotionally... and legally.
Very near to the end of the book, I made a hasty judgment that the ending may have been a little too perfect, a little too easy, wrapping up a little too neatly after everything that had transpired. I realized my original opinion was off when I was surprised with the epilogue that introduced an entire array of new problems Kaley and Elijah will surely be facing in the sequel, which I was overjoyed to find would come next! So what seemed like an easy, all-too-perfect ending is really anything but. The Force of Gravity is an unputdownable story of two people fighting that pull toward one another, knowing how very wrong it is, yet discovering it might just be the only thing that's perfectly right. I found this book as a whole to be an utterly consuming story of forbidden attraction, friendship and love and I thoroughly enjoyed this fresh take on one if my favorite literary themes. I can't wait for more to this story!
To add to the forbidenness of the dynamic between Mr Slate and Kaley, there's an added layer of wrongness that comes in the form of Tommy. Not only is this student lusting after her teacher, but she has a boyfriend, who happens to play on the baseball team that the sexy young teacher coaches! Combine that with the plethora of family drama Kaley is dealing with, her fragile relationships with her friends, the angst offered up by the other women in Slate's life, the changes Kaley is facing as she nears graduation and you have a non-stop ride of uncertainty, unpredictability and secrecy that never ends. The web of impropriety in this story is ever growing and it all makes for such a meaty story that I just couldn't put down.
The writing in this story is rather consuming. It's not often enough that a book grabs you from the very first page and doesn't let up. The writing isn't over-the-top flowery or overly descriptive at all. It just flows, feels clean. The dialogue just feels very authentic, a must in any truly great book, in my opinion. I need the dialogue to feel natural, and the dialogue in this book feels exactly that way for much of it. There's also a layer of humor and sarcasm within the dialogue and inner monologue and it just works. I have so much appreciation for writing that doesn't feel forced. This story reads like it flowed effortlessly from this author. That doesn't happen often in this writing climate and when I find it, I feel like I discovered a gem.
There are a few things that gave me pause while reading... a few minor details that initially made me think the author could have tweaked to make the characters more likeable. Emily, for example, doesn't come off as a very good friend for much of the story. She seems to side with Tommy more than with Kaley. She seems very self centered. Derek comes off as judgemental and uppity at times, always watching Kaley with looks of distrust. Kaley, herself, seems overly emotional, a little melodramatic, immature. But... and it's a big BUT... in the grand scheme of things, those personality flaws and character facets further cement to me how consistent the author actually is with her character development and story telling. These are teenagers. Teenagers are immature, they are superficial and self-absorbed. They're overly dramatic and hormonal and bratty, all of which are realistic and necessary in demonstrating just how very different of a place Kaley is from Mr Slate in their lives. Those little details, traits, nuances are all perfectly placed reminders of just how vast the divide is between Kaley and her teacher, both emotionally... and legally.
Very near to the end of the book, I made a hasty judgment that the ending may have been a little too perfect, a little too easy, wrapping up a little too neatly after everything that had transpired. I realized my original opinion was off when I was surprised with the epilogue that introduced an entire array of new problems Kaley and Elijah will surely be facing in the sequel, which I was overjoyed to find would come next! So what seemed like an easy, all-too-perfect ending is really anything but. The Force of Gravity is an unputdownable story of two people fighting that pull toward one another, knowing how very wrong it is, yet discovering it might just be the only thing that's perfectly right. I found this book as a whole to be an utterly consuming story of forbidden attraction, friendship and love and I thoroughly enjoyed this fresh take on one if my favorite literary themes. I can't wait for more to this story!
September 29, 2014
This may be my favorite student/teacher romance. This book was seriously fantastic. I didn’t love every character or each scene, but that’s what made it stand out from all the others. It had a realness that I think is missing in many NA romance. Snarky, supposed “best friends,” boyfriends that pressure you into sex, and the realization that your parents are people too, all played a part in this story. The Fine Art of Pretending is the perfect mix of the normal high school problems everyone deals with and the fictional problems you wish you had.
The book begins with Kaley realizing she has a crush on Mr. Slade but understanding that it can never go anywhere. In fact, she’s a little embarrassed that she would even be crushing on her teacher.
This man is my teacher. Even if he wasn’t, he’d still be too old for me. He’s a grown man, with a grown-up life and would probably laugh his ass off if he knew what I was feeling.
It was hard to tell what Mr. Slate was thinking. One moment I agreed he wasn’t interested in her and the next he was toeing the line of inappropriate. I liked that I couldn’t automatically feel the pull between them. It kept me guessing, did Slate want Kaley or was it just a misplaced crush?
Kaley’s friends and family were kind of awful. Her “best friend,” Emily, was a vapid bitch. All she cared about was not rocking the boat. Emily wanted Kaley to put out and play nice with her doofus boyfriend, Tommy, because it was convenient to their group’s dynamic.
“ . . . you’re crazy if you think Tommy’s going to put up with it much longer. No offense, but he can get any girl he wants.”
Kaley’s parents weren’t much better. What kind of parents treat their daughter’s college aspirations with such disdain? They basically tell her, “We didn’t think you were smart enough to get into the college you wanted. Oh, and we’re not going to help you with student loans. So, you know, good luck with that.” Not to mention Kaley’s mother constantly pushing her to stay with Tommy (because her mother has such good luck with romance, right).
So who did I like? Well, one of the reasons I enjoyed this book so much was Kaley’s self-awareness. That Kaley could take a step back from her emotions and rationally think about the relationship between her and Slate is something most student/teacher romances are lacking.
We were doomed from the very beginning.
I loved that where most books end and give us a happy ever after is not where Kaley and Elijah’s story stopped. Plus it gave me more time to try and understand Elijah. Oh Mr. Slate, you are one tough nut to crack. I have to admit there were many times Mr. Slate had me feeling dirty and *blushes* I kind of liked it. The tiny bit we did get to see inside Elijah’s head left me begging for more.
This book totally took me by surprise. I was looking forward to kicking back and relaxing with a good book, what I was not prepared for was staying up all night desperate to find out how Kaley and Elijah’s story would end. This is a fantastic debut from Kelly Stevenson and I cannot wait for the sequel.
Review posted at Love Between the Sheets
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