So, for the unaware, the Kagerou Daze light novel series is another branch of the much more expansive Kagerou Project. While I won't be covering them here, I heavily suggest at least listening to the original vocaloid songs. They'll give you a good idea of the story and characters before heading in, and will hopefully save you from being monumentally confused. I suppose you could consider it a problem that you'd need to do such a thing, but trust me, it'll be worth it.
Now, onto the main topic; Vol. 1.
I'll be throwing in some spoilers to help prove some of my points, but I'll do my best to be vague. While this volume may be not as packed with juicy lore and answers as others, trust me, getting heavily spoiled for this series is a REAL downer.
So, the plot of this novel revolves around two character perspectives; Shintaro and Momo Kisaragi. Shintaro's POV is given to us mostly in the second chapter of the book, giving us an outsider perspective of the main event. The rest of the book, save for three chapters that I'll get to later, revolve around his sister, Momo, who gets involved with a group of strange individuals calling themselves the Mekakushi Dan. In truth, the story of this volume isn't all that important. It mostly serves as an excuse to introduce us to the characters we'll be following throughout this series. Not that it's bad, per se, but I wouldn't call it anything special.
Now, for the meat and potatoes of this volume; the characters. Starting with our leading roles, Shintaro Kisaragi is an eighteen year old shut in. He's an aspiring musician and a bit of an asshole. We get a hint of his back story toward the end of his main chapter, but so far, this is what we know about him. As such, I don't feel ready to make a judgement on his character. Living inside his computer is the mysterious troublemaker known as Ene (helping the chapter title, Artificial Enemy, make plenty of sense.) She's been known to change Shintaro's passwords, rename and delete files, and even threatens to reveal some "interesting information" should he not comply with her demands. Most of the time their conversations and bickering make for some fun exchanges, but there are some times where I can find her more annoying than anything else. Early on in the second chapter, when Shintaro demands she give him the new password to his video account, she proceeds to delete all the work he's done on his recent song and pull up a multiple choice quiz to make him earn his passwords back. I understand I might just be sensitive, but that was one of the few times where her actions bordered on agitation. Like Shintaro, I don't have a good enough grasp on her character to make a judgement, but my current impression of her is mixed.
Our final lead character is Momo Kisaragi, who by far and away gets the most characterization in this volume. In short, she's a pop idol who draws everyone's attention just by being noticed. As I read through her section of the book, it became pretty clear to me that she was my favorite character this volume. Seeing how this power negativity affects both her personal and school life makes me empathize with her more than anyone else so far.
The rest of the characters in this volume, the members of the Mekakushi Dan, are played more as a collection of weirdos for now. Of course, we do get an idea of their personalities; Kido, the group leader, speaks with a cool tone and spends a good amount of her time on page giving her fellow member, a cat-eyed boy named Kano, plenty of beatings. This is mostly due to his interest in poking fun at the other members and being so carefree that I have a hard time believing during his conversations with others that anyone actually likes him. The one who seems to get the worst of his torment is a girl named Marie. She's a shy, innocent, naive person(?) who seems oblivious to how the world works, much to the dismay of Kido and Kano. They certainly make a mixed impression, but I'll again have to hold judgement until further notice.
Overall, the characters of this volume make a mostly good impression, especially Momo, and it's easy to say that they carry this volume. Ultimately, your enjoyment of this book will come down to if you enjoy the characters more than anything else.
Before I get to the writing, I want to address something. Three chapters in the book, named Kagerou Days, are completely pointless. The two characters that narrate these chapters serve no importance to this volume's story, nor do we get a good enough idea of their characters to have it be enjoyable in that way. Each chapter is only two pages long, so removing them wouldn't be detrimental to the story, and they only really have some kind of payoff in the epilogue, whose only purpose is to lead into the second volume without it being jarring, but not having those chapters doesn't change the epilogue at all. They may have a point in a later volume, but not here.
My biggest problem with the book actually isn't the chapter's stated above (they're a mild annoyance at most) but rather with the dialogue. Towards the second half of the book there will be a lot of instances of dialogue without telling us who's saying what, which in itself isn't a problem. In fact, it's a good way of making people pay attention to dialogue to discern different speech patterns for different characters. The problem here, though, is that a lot of the character's dialogue sounds the same. The difference between Kano and Momo's speech patterns can be hard to discern, and occasionally Kido can get jumbled with everyone else. The only one who's easy to tell is Marie, due to the fact that most of her dialogue includes an ellipsis. It gets confusing and can often ruin the tension of certain scenes. An easy fix would be to just say who's speaking, but making character speech more distinct, while difficult, will serve the double purpose of making the point above unnecessary, and making your writing more interesting.
In conclusion, Kagerou Daze Vol. 1 was a fun, short read. Despite some mixed feelings on characters, pointless chapters, and confusing writing, the characters have this charm to them that make reading their antics an enjoyable experience. The hints at a bigger story and the many questions left unanswered leave me excited for more. As a first volume, it does its job well. Hopefully the next volume fixes some of the problems stated above, and If it does, I might have a new favorite series on my hands.
Rating: 3.5/5