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Ard's Oath #5
Merchant of Rebellion
Ard joins the war with an explosive start, the Garrish army is marching through the pass to the ruined Chillwind Fort. The only defenders are Ard and company to hold out until reinforcements can arrive.
Though his accolades are too startling and he draws the attention of The King only for General Trevis to swoop in and send Ard on a mission behind enemy lines. He's to stir up the populace of their rival kingdom to rebellion.
Though his accolades are too startling and he draws the attention of The King only for General Trevis to swoop in and send Ard on a mission behind enemy lines. He's to stir up the populace of their rival kingdom to rebellion.
514 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 7, 2024
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About the author
Bruce Sentar
51 books811 followersBorn and raised in the agricultural midwest, I moved every year after school even as far as Shanghai before settling down with my wife in Chicago.
I have always enjoyed Wuxia stories and became thrilled when I discovered harem stories spreading to western books. I've written down my day dreams for years as an idle hobby. Inspired by the harem genre I'm finally fleshing them out into full blown novels.
I'm excited to share my stories with you as I turn them into novels and series.
Connect with me on Facebook for updates on my latest books.
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I have always enjoyed Wuxia stories and became thrilled when I discovered harem stories spreading to western books. I've written down my day dreams for years as an idle hobby. Inspired by the harem genre I'm finally fleshing them out into full blown novels.
I'm excited to share my stories with you as I turn them into novels and series.
Connect with me on Facebook for updates on my latest books.
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February 17, 2025
love the book
It’s truly enjoy reading the series please keep it up would even buy it if avialiable on kindle thank you
It’s truly enjoy reading the series please keep it up would even buy it if avialiable on kindle thank you
June 20, 2025
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February 15, 2026
Title: Merchant of Rebellion — War, Wit, and the Burden of Power
Hook and Thesis
Merchant of Rebellion by Bruce Sentar continues the escalation of the Ard’s Oath series, shifting from contained political maneuvering toward larger-scale war, espionage, and ideological conflict. While the novel delivers engaging action and expanding stakes, it also highlights recurring strengths and weaknesses of the series: compelling progression, energetic pacing, and imaginative magic contrasted with tonal inconsistency and a polarizing protagonist.
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Introduction
As the fifth installment in the Ard’s Oath series, Merchant of Rebellion functions both as continuation and transition. It picks up directly after prior events, pushing Ard into increasingly dangerous territory—both physically and morally. The book aims to deepen the overarching conflict while exploring rebellion, loyalty, and identity through an increasingly complex narrative structure.
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Basic Plot Summary
The story opens amid war, with Ard defending against the advancing Garrish forces at Chillwind Fort. After drawing significant attention from powerful political figures, he is redirected into a covert mission behind enemy lines. There, Ard must incite rebellion within rival territories, navigating shifting alliances, social unrest, and manipulation by higher powers. As tensions rise, the involvement of gods and deeper magical forces suggests a coming escalation beyond traditional warfare.
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Analysis / Evaluation
The strongest aspect of the novel lies in its narrative momentum. The transition from battlefield defense to espionage broadens the scope of the world and introduces new dynamics that prevent stagnation. However, reader reactions suggest mixed reception toward pacing—particularly the extended opening that resolves earlier conflicts rather than immediately launching into new plotlines. This choice reinforces continuity but risks slowing early engagement.
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Characters
Ard remains the central figure and the most divisive element. His wit, irreverence, and confidence create energy and humor, yet for some readers his persistent joking undermines dramatic tension. Supporting characters—particularly his anchors and allies—expand emotional depth and world context, often grounding the narrative when Ard’s personality risks overshadowing serious stakes. The ensemble cast continues to grow, reinforcing the series’ harem-fantasy structure while adding political and personal complexity.
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Setting
The worldbuilding evolves beyond court intrigue into broader geopolitical landscapes. Enemy territories, war zones, and clandestine operations create a sense of movement and expansion. The magical system remains a defining feature, shaping social structures and character relationships, and serves as both narrative engine and thematic framework.
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Structure
Structurally, the novel is divided into two primary arcs:
This dual structure strengthens continuity but may feel uneven to readers expecting immediate forward momentum.
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Themes
Key themes include:
- Power versus responsibility.
- The cost of rebellion and leadership.
- Identity shaped by expectation.
- Loyalty within unconventional relationships.
The novel also examines how humor functions as armor—particularly through Ard’s coping mechanisms.
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Writing Style
Sentar’s prose is accessible, fast-paced, and dialogue-driven. Action sequences remain clear and energetic, while character banter provides a strong tonal signature. Some readers praise the immersive readability, while others critique tonal shifts between serious war themes and comedic dialogue.
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Tone
The tone balances adventure, humor, romance, and darker undertones tied to war and divine conflict. This hybrid approach is a core strength but also a potential weakness, as tonal clashes occasionally disrupt immersion.
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Impact
Merchant of Rebellion expands the stakes significantly, positioning the series for larger conflicts involving gods, nations, and ideological warfare. It serves more as a bridge toward future climaxes than as a fully self-contained narrative resolution.
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Praise and Critique
Praise:
- Expands worldbuilding and stakes effectively.
- Engaging magic system tied to social structure.
- Strong ensemble cast and evolving relationships.
- Energetic pacing once the main mission begins.
Critique:
- Opening pacing may feel slow due to extended resolution from previous volume.
- Ard’s constant humor divides readers and occasionally reduces tension.
- Some continuity or characterization inconsistencies noted by readers.
- Structural unevenness between early and later arcs.
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Comparison
Compared to earlier entries like Frigid Magic or Drums of War, this installment leans more into espionage and rebellion themes rather than pure progression fantasy. It maintains the series’ trademark mix of humor and high stakes but attempts greater narrative complexity.
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Conclusion
Merchant of Rebellion reinforces why Ard’s Oath remains appealing to fans of progression fantasy and harem adventure: strong momentum, imaginative systems, and escalating stakes. At the same time, it highlights ongoing challenges—particularly tonal balance and protagonist characterization—that may determine whether readers remain fully invested. As a transitional volume setting up larger conflicts, it succeeds in widening the narrative horizon, even if not every structural choice resonates equally with all audiences.
--------------------------------------------------
Hook and Thesis
Merchant of Rebellion by Bruce Sentar continues the escalation of the Ard’s Oath series, shifting from contained political maneuvering toward larger-scale war, espionage, and ideological conflict. While the novel delivers engaging action and expanding stakes, it also highlights recurring strengths and weaknesses of the series: compelling progression, energetic pacing, and imaginative magic contrasted with tonal inconsistency and a polarizing protagonist.
--------------------------------------------------
Introduction
As the fifth installment in the Ard’s Oath series, Merchant of Rebellion functions both as continuation and transition. It picks up directly after prior events, pushing Ard into increasingly dangerous territory—both physically and morally. The book aims to deepen the overarching conflict while exploring rebellion, loyalty, and identity through an increasingly complex narrative structure.
--------------------------------------------------
Basic Plot Summary
The story opens amid war, with Ard defending against the advancing Garrish forces at Chillwind Fort. After drawing significant attention from powerful political figures, he is redirected into a covert mission behind enemy lines. There, Ard must incite rebellion within rival territories, navigating shifting alliances, social unrest, and manipulation by higher powers. As tensions rise, the involvement of gods and deeper magical forces suggests a coming escalation beyond traditional warfare.
--------------------------------------------------
Analysis / Evaluation
The strongest aspect of the novel lies in its narrative momentum. The transition from battlefield defense to espionage broadens the scope of the world and introduces new dynamics that prevent stagnation. However, reader reactions suggest mixed reception toward pacing—particularly the extended opening that resolves earlier conflicts rather than immediately launching into new plotlines. This choice reinforces continuity but risks slowing early engagement.
--------------------------------------------------
Characters
Ard remains the central figure and the most divisive element. His wit, irreverence, and confidence create energy and humor, yet for some readers his persistent joking undermines dramatic tension. Supporting characters—particularly his anchors and allies—expand emotional depth and world context, often grounding the narrative when Ard’s personality risks overshadowing serious stakes. The ensemble cast continues to grow, reinforcing the series’ harem-fantasy structure while adding political and personal complexity.
--------------------------------------------------
Setting
The worldbuilding evolves beyond court intrigue into broader geopolitical landscapes. Enemy territories, war zones, and clandestine operations create a sense of movement and expansion. The magical system remains a defining feature, shaping social structures and character relationships, and serves as both narrative engine and thematic framework.
--------------------------------------------------
Structure
Structurally, the novel is divided into two primary arcs:
1. Resolution of previous conflict (defense and aftermath).
2. Spy mission and rebellion narrative.
This dual structure strengthens continuity but may feel uneven to readers expecting immediate forward momentum.
--------------------------------------------------
Themes
Key themes include:
- Power versus responsibility.
- The cost of rebellion and leadership.
- Identity shaped by expectation.
- Loyalty within unconventional relationships.
The novel also examines how humor functions as armor—particularly through Ard’s coping mechanisms.
--------------------------------------------------
Writing Style
Sentar’s prose is accessible, fast-paced, and dialogue-driven. Action sequences remain clear and energetic, while character banter provides a strong tonal signature. Some readers praise the immersive readability, while others critique tonal shifts between serious war themes and comedic dialogue.
--------------------------------------------------
Tone
The tone balances adventure, humor, romance, and darker undertones tied to war and divine conflict. This hybrid approach is a core strength but also a potential weakness, as tonal clashes occasionally disrupt immersion.
--------------------------------------------------
Impact
Merchant of Rebellion expands the stakes significantly, positioning the series for larger conflicts involving gods, nations, and ideological warfare. It serves more as a bridge toward future climaxes than as a fully self-contained narrative resolution.
--------------------------------------------------
Praise and Critique
Praise:
- Expands worldbuilding and stakes effectively.
- Engaging magic system tied to social structure.
- Strong ensemble cast and evolving relationships.
- Energetic pacing once the main mission begins.
Critique:
- Opening pacing may feel slow due to extended resolution from previous volume.
- Ard’s constant humor divides readers and occasionally reduces tension.
- Some continuity or characterization inconsistencies noted by readers.
- Structural unevenness between early and later arcs.
--------------------------------------------------
Comparison
Compared to earlier entries like Frigid Magic or Drums of War, this installment leans more into espionage and rebellion themes rather than pure progression fantasy. It maintains the series’ trademark mix of humor and high stakes but attempts greater narrative complexity.
--------------------------------------------------
Conclusion
Merchant of Rebellion reinforces why Ard’s Oath remains appealing to fans of progression fantasy and harem adventure: strong momentum, imaginative systems, and escalating stakes. At the same time, it highlights ongoing challenges—particularly tonal balance and protagonist characterization—that may determine whether readers remain fully invested. As a transitional volume setting up larger conflicts, it succeeds in widening the narrative horizon, even if not every structural choice resonates equally with all audiences.
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January 26, 2025
I didn’t leave a review of the previous 4 books because I couldn’t wait to read the next one
The was amazing! I love the characters, the plot, the progression, the magic system. Sure the character has a Harem, but it wasn’t exclusive to him, it’s baked into the social life of mages in general caused by the magic system itself. The character development was also great. I can’t wait for more Izzy, she was fun. Too bad the afterword made it feel like there are only two more books before the end of the series. I hope book 6 comes out very soon.
The was amazing! I love the characters, the plot, the progression, the magic system. Sure the character has a Harem, but it wasn’t exclusive to him, it’s baked into the social life of mages in general caused by the magic system itself. The character development was also great. I can’t wait for more Izzy, she was fun. Too bad the afterword made it feel like there are only two more books before the end of the series. I hope book 6 comes out very soon.
February 16, 2025
DNF @27% To be honest, the story for this book hasn't even started yet. The first 20% of this book is finishing up the big battle from book 4.
What really made me decide to dump this book is when Uncle Valken gets re-introduced for this book. If you've made it to the fifth book of this series you should know Valken is a 500 year-old Vel'shae serpent sphere mage. That means he's vaguely reptilian in appearance. Bald head, slit eyes, maybe some scales. Except, this time Sentar describes him as
If the author doesn't care enough to get these details right, why am I wasting my time reading the series?
What really made me decide to dump this book is when Uncle Valken gets re-introduced for this book. If you've made it to the fifth book of this series you should know Valken is a 500 year-old Vel'shae serpent sphere mage. That means he's vaguely reptilian in appearance. Bald head, slit eyes, maybe some scales. Except, this time Sentar describes him as
Uncle Valken was an older man, appearing to be in his sixties with what little hair he had gone white. Yet, he didn't possess the frailness of a sixty-year-old. Instead, he had a lithe, athletic form that moved with confidence. He wasn't an overly tall man, but he looked tall standing next to Eva.
If the author doesn't care enough to get these details right, why am I wasting my time reading the series?
December 10, 2024
Masterful
As always, when you see my review, you know that I am going to give Bruce the raving he deserves. Mans a legend and once again time after time kills it. Are the books always perfect, no. There is indeed just like the others some inconsistencies and things that really don't make sense when you sit long and hard and think about all his series as a whole, but the best part about it??? It does t matter, cause he does such a great job making you enthrall yourself in the story that the noticeable things don't take anything away. I hope this and all the books you are working on right now last a long time!
As always, when you see my review, you know that I am going to give Bruce the raving he deserves. Mans a legend and once again time after time kills it. Are the books always perfect, no. There is indeed just like the others some inconsistencies and things that really don't make sense when you sit long and hard and think about all his series as a whole, but the best part about it??? It does t matter, cause he does such a great job making you enthrall yourself in the story that the noticeable things don't take anything away. I hope this and all the books you are working on right now last a long time!
December 15, 2024
The importance of a main character!
It’s amazing I’ve managed to make it this far in this series. Although the story has great potential the main character has brought to all down. He’s arrogant and treats no situation with the seriousness that’s required to accomplish the task. He seems to think he’s some kind of comedian. If the author had written the MC with more consideration and seriousness instead of trying to make every situation a joke, this series could be fantastic. The MC doesn’t miss an opportunity to make a joke at every situation. It’s old and annoying almost beyond belief. I’m DONE with this series… I just can’t take it anymore.
It’s amazing I’ve managed to make it this far in this series. Although the story has great potential the main character has brought to all down. He’s arrogant and treats no situation with the seriousness that’s required to accomplish the task. He seems to think he’s some kind of comedian. If the author had written the MC with more consideration and seriousness instead of trying to make every situation a joke, this series could be fantastic. The MC doesn’t miss an opportunity to make a joke at every situation. It’s old and annoying almost beyond belief. I’m DONE with this series… I just can’t take it anymore.
March 22, 2025
Took me a long time to finish this, and that'll put anything out of the running for 5 stars. Ard is less obnoxious as the series progresses, and I finally finished it today. I downloaded it in Dec 2024, so a lot of things were more of a draw, despite this one not suffering the worst of the flaws of the earlier books. Ard did some lasting damage to my confidence in this author's brand.
This book resolves one big problem and sets up for the boss fight, presumably in the next book. I'll try to finish that more quickly, building on the progress I see here.
This book resolves one big problem and sets up for the boss fight, presumably in the next book. I'll try to finish that more quickly, building on the progress I see here.
March 17, 2025
Still exciting, though it took me a little while to warm up to the story
Ard continues to be an irreverant pain in the butt, but quite powerful as a mage. He takes on a mission to spy against the country at war with his nation. This puts him in conflict with various polities but also gets him some allies who are in rebellion against the king. All the while, a conflict between the gods is setting up.
Ard continues to be an irreverant pain in the butt, but quite powerful as a mage. He takes on a mission to spy against the country at war with his nation. This puts him in conflict with various polities but also gets him some allies who are in rebellion against the king. All the while, a conflict between the gods is setting up.
December 16, 2024
More magic more fun more jokes !
Next up is more woman more fun and alot more eyeroll worthy puns! If you are still reading Ard by this point you know what to expect from him and the woman who surround him. This one is even more plot and fun with a bit less spicey time it feels like, at least till the end. Still an awsome series that's keeping my interest.
Next up is more woman more fun and alot more eyeroll worthy puns! If you are still reading Ard by this point you know what to expect from him and the woman who surround him. This one is even more plot and fun with a bit less spicey time it feels like, at least till the end. Still an awsome series that's keeping my interest.
December 25, 2024
Are
The most interesting and irritating mage to walk the world is having another grand adventure. New enemies, old enemies. Love... Maybe. Psychopathic maid?? Oh yes, yes indeed. Honestly this cast of characters are simply the best and with each new story we get to know them better. Cheers and see you next time.
The most interesting and irritating mage to walk the world is having another grand adventure. New enemies, old enemies. Love... Maybe. Psychopathic maid?? Oh yes, yes indeed. Honestly this cast of characters are simply the best and with each new story we get to know them better. Cheers and see you next time.
January 20, 2025
Book 6 please!
I started this series as I was bored.
But Bruce really hooked me.
Great characters, great world building, and a very engaging plot.
So yeah, I started out of boredom. And read everything start to finish. Well, book 5, as thankfully the story isn’t done yet!
And ended horribly frustrated! (But only in waiting for the next book! 😏)
Read it and enjoy…
I started this series as I was bored.
But Bruce really hooked me.
Great characters, great world building, and a very engaging plot.
So yeah, I started out of boredom. And read everything start to finish. Well, book 5, as thankfully the story isn’t done yet!
And ended horribly frustrated! (But only in waiting for the next book! 😏)
Read it and enjoy…
January 24, 2025
And two chapters in, I’d had enough of Ard, the preening dickhead. It was just a matter of time to be honest. Still, at least I got to read the bit where he falls face-first into a pit of steaming manure and sinks slowly to the bottom, his mouth and nose filled with dung.*
* This might not have actually happened, but a man can dream, can’t he? A man can dream.
* This might not have actually happened, but a man can dream, can’t he? A man can dream.
June 14, 2025
Ramping up the stakes
Alternate universe, save the kingdom, magic, harem adult situations
Arden and his anchors help save Fort Chillwind, then take an assignment to spy within the drier enemy lands being bled by King Martin and his magical experiments. Apparently, the cover is Eva, potential mage wife two.
Excellent editing. Engrossing. Off to read book 6!
Alternate universe, save the kingdom, magic, harem adult situations
Arden and his anchors help save Fort Chillwind, then take an assignment to spy within the drier enemy lands being bled by King Martin and his magical experiments. Apparently, the cover is Eva, potential mage wife two.
Excellent editing. Engrossing. Off to read book 6!
December 11, 2024
Another great read
I couldn't put it down from start to finish what more needs to be said. Give it a read. This book really sets things up for some future excitement with Ard and the Girls.
I couldn't put it down from start to finish what more needs to be said. Give it a read. This book really sets things up for some future excitement with Ard and the Girls.
December 12, 2024
Another great one!
Ards super secret spy mission was a fantastic arc, and it sounds like we might get a little more of it. This series is constantly one of the favorites (most of Bruce's books are), and this book follows that same path. I'm looking forward to the next one!
Ards super secret spy mission was a fantastic arc, and it sounds like we might get a little more of it. This series is constantly one of the favorites (most of Bruce's books are), and this book follows that same path. I'm looking forward to the next one!
December 13, 2024
Some fun developments
I liked the direction this book went from wrapping up on the border to traveling into New lands, it held a lot of excitement and some new romance. The ending battle was definitely entertaining too.
I liked the direction this book went from wrapping up on the border to traveling into New lands, it held a lot of excitement and some new romance. The ending battle was definitely entertaining too.
December 15, 2024
My favorite series by this author!!!
When this series releases its Alliance do to not stop what I'm currently reading to immediately read it!!! The author has created a fantastic world for us to journey in with outstanding characters!!!
When this series releases its Alliance do to not stop what I'm currently reading to immediately read it!!! The author has created a fantastic world for us to journey in with outstanding characters!!!
December 15, 2024
Another great entry but I liked this one more than the last. Probably not my favorite of the series but still damn good. I think I hesitate because it was fairly slow with some slice of life moments sprinkled throughout, but it was exactly what I was looking forward to.
December 16, 2024
Great Book 5
Always interesting to see where Ard will go next. This was a fun one. The beginning picked up right from the last and then transitions to a new fun place for the group to explore. I love how excited Ard is about being a spy. Looking forward to book 6!
Always interesting to see where Ard will go next. This was a fun one. The beginning picked up right from the last and then transitions to a new fun place for the group to explore. I love how excited Ard is about being a spy. Looking forward to book 6!
December 16, 2024
I gave it 5 stars because I'm enjoying the story so much. HOWEVER, the immature attempt at comedy in every situation by Ard is getting VERY old. Bruce, if you read these reviews, please take heed and let Ard "grow up" in the next book. His arrogance I can take, but the jokes are not funny.
December 22, 2024
Another great one.
I really enjoyed reading this book. It was fun and entertaining. The story and characters were incredibly interesting and engaging. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. This book and series are definitely worth checking out.
I really enjoyed reading this book. It was fun and entertaining. The story and characters were incredibly interesting and engaging. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. This book and series are definitely worth checking out.
December 31, 2024
It great
If you enjoyed the previous books in the series you're going to like this. Plenty of action spice and a main character who isn't an idiot. Plot advances smoothly throughout. Looking forward to the next one in the series 👍
If you enjoyed the previous books in the series you're going to like this. Plenty of action spice and a main character who isn't an idiot. Plot advances smoothly throughout. Looking forward to the next one in the series 👍
January 2, 2025
There are times...
I both like and dislike our main character. I like him because he is quick-witted and resourceful, kind and capable. I dislike him due to the fact that he still acts like a grade schooler who doesn't think ahead
I both like and dislike our main character. I like him because he is quick-witted and resourceful, kind and capable. I dislike him due to the fact that he still acts like a grade schooler who doesn't think ahead
January 18, 2025
Very enjoyable
Ard continually grows, and his demeanor is changing as well. The smart assed-ness is definitely still there. The banter he had with his anchors is great. The threats and obstacles he had are challenging. Overall, a great book.
Ard continually grows, and his demeanor is changing as well. The smart assed-ness is definitely still there. The banter he had with his anchors is great. The threats and obstacles he had are challenging. Overall, a great book.
February 3, 2025
exciting, reading!
Ards adventures continues. The pace he gets in trouble continues to amazes me. I love the way he learns his magic. Come along with me and we will enjoy it together.
Ards adventures continues. The pace he gets in trouble continues to amazes me. I love the way he learns his magic. Come along with me and we will enjoy it together.
February 11, 2025
Another great book in the Ard's oath series. This one racks up the drama and never ending humor of ard. If you liked the previous books of Bruce, this one I'll hit all the inches.
4.5 stars. Can't wait for the next one.
4.5 stars. Can't wait for the next one.
August 18, 2025
Great Fun Series
Solid entertaining harem fantasy with a quirky MC and a cadre of females who are not just gorgeous, but each are uniquely talented (Maribelle is my favorite). The storyline is interesting, well written and entertaining with plenty of action.
Solid entertaining harem fantasy with a quirky MC and a cadre of females who are not just gorgeous, but each are uniquely talented (Maribelle is my favorite). The storyline is interesting, well written and entertaining with plenty of action.
December 10, 2024
Fanfreakingtastic!
What an amazing book! I absolutely loved this book and such wonderful characters! I can not wait for the next book to come out!
What an amazing book! I absolutely loved this book and such wonderful characters! I can not wait for the next book to come out!
December 11, 2024
Awesome
Another masterful tale for Ard done. It was very exciting to see all of the things Ard got up to this time! Already can't wait to see what happens next.
Another masterful tale for Ard done. It was very exciting to see all of the things Ard got up to this time! Already can't wait to see what happens next.
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