Liked it enough
Charlie has come to a Hawaiian island for a much-needed vacation and has already gotten involved in solving a murder the very first day. During the vacation, she not does clever snooping, she finds romance and has a close shave with death.
I liked the pace of this book, something significant happening with each chapter. It was light reading, yet engaging.
I liked how the book left hints about the story preceding this one and what will follow next. The blurb of the next one was intriguing and the hints about what had happened to warrant a vacation were also successful in making me curious. I might end up reading the whole series then :)
Having said that, I will still go with 4 stars because these bothered me. 1. The sales attendant offering information so unprofessionally - and those were the first crucial clues! - was so lame. Charlie could have been shown to be more cunning here, just as she was at Gil's office and in the morgue. 2. The criminal bothering to explain how and why of the murder to Charlie instead of just getting her out of the way - I thought that too was unrealistic. Who does that cheesy stuff, except Bollywood?? Ugh. I would have loved to discover the how and why in an interrogation once the criminal was behind the bars. 3. Lack of editing - by no means was it as bad as some of the recent stuff I have read - but when I see a paragraph ending in a comma (chapter 7) or simply wrong grammar such as - "This was best" (chapter 4) and some more punctuation and grammatical errors, it annoys me a bit.
These aside, the pidgin used by the island inhabitants was enjoyable, so was the description of the island's natural as well as man-made surroundings. I could also picture the Westin hotel quite well and how the helicopter ride must have felt. I did feel I was with Charlie, in Hawaii.
Get this book if you are looking for a light but engaging short read.