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Elizabeth is not a Bennet: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
Elizabeth’s future is uncertain.
Mr. Darcy’s admiration is not.
Before his death, Elizabeth Stowe’s father sent her to live with the Bennets. She has lived most of her life at Longbourn and is startled to learn she is heiress to an estate in Scotland. Mr. Bennet adores his adopted niece, and he could not bring himself to tell Elizabeth the details of her long distant past ... but now he must.
Fitzwilliam Darcy did not expect to fall in love with a beautiful orphan, but from the moment he met her, he was entranced by Elizabeth’s fine eyes and sharp wit, which relentlessly demand his attention.
When Elizabeth is attacked by a mysterious antagonist, it is Darcy who comes to her rescue and finds a way to keep her safe from danger. Does the attack have something to do with her dead mother’s Scottish estate? With Darcy as her protector, Elizabeth leaves Longbourn and steps forward into an uncertain future.
This novel is a sweet and clean, low angst Pride and Prejudice variation where all of the Bennet sisters have happy endings, with a satisfying epilogue.
Mr. Darcy’s admiration is not.
Before his death, Elizabeth Stowe’s father sent her to live with the Bennets. She has lived most of her life at Longbourn and is startled to learn she is heiress to an estate in Scotland. Mr. Bennet adores his adopted niece, and he could not bring himself to tell Elizabeth the details of her long distant past ... but now he must.
Fitzwilliam Darcy did not expect to fall in love with a beautiful orphan, but from the moment he met her, he was entranced by Elizabeth’s fine eyes and sharp wit, which relentlessly demand his attention.
When Elizabeth is attacked by a mysterious antagonist, it is Darcy who comes to her rescue and finds a way to keep her safe from danger. Does the attack have something to do with her dead mother’s Scottish estate? With Darcy as her protector, Elizabeth leaves Longbourn and steps forward into an uncertain future.
This novel is a sweet and clean, low angst Pride and Prejudice variation where all of the Bennet sisters have happy endings, with a satisfying epilogue.
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Published October 3, 2024
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Laraba Kendig
42 books105 followersI am a scientist by training, but a writer at heart. I have always loved reading with a passion and turned my hand to fanfiction a few years ago. I write stories similar to the ones I enjoy reading. They are interesting but light, romantic but not steamy. I am a super fan of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice, and have been having a wonderful time writing P&P variations, exploring how new circumstances affect the beloved characters. So far I have published two novel-length Pride and Prejudice variations plus one short story via Amazon. My books include ‘I am Jael’ and ‘The Blind Will See’.
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October 22, 2024
An Unexpected Hero
In Elizabeth is Not a Bennet, our dear girl is portrayed as the adopted niece of Mr Bennet, when in fact, she is the orphaned daughter of his best friend from his university days. At the Meryton Assembly, you’d expect Darcy’s usual cold insult, but when he turns to look at her, he is visibly struck by her fiery red hair and immediately asks for an introduction. From there, an easy friendship develops, and Elizabeth and Darcy begin as friends, eventually leading to a very civil proposal.
One can usually anticipate an angst-free read from Laraba Kendig, but in this one, you can definitely sense a bit of tension. Elizabeth is set to inherit a Scottish estate when she comes of age, but someone from her past doesn’t want that to happen. A responsible Mr Bennet steps up and requests the aid of the last character you’d expect to help trap the villain.
Stevie Zimmerman’s narration and performance is never a disappointment and is always spot on in her interpretation.
This is a sweet and clean variation. Definitely enjoyed this one and highly recommend both the book and audiobook.
In Elizabeth is Not a Bennet, our dear girl is portrayed as the adopted niece of Mr Bennet, when in fact, she is the orphaned daughter of his best friend from his university days. At the Meryton Assembly, you’d expect Darcy’s usual cold insult, but when he turns to look at her, he is visibly struck by her fiery red hair and immediately asks for an introduction. From there, an easy friendship develops, and Elizabeth and Darcy begin as friends, eventually leading to a very civil proposal.
One can usually anticipate an angst-free read from Laraba Kendig, but in this one, you can definitely sense a bit of tension. Elizabeth is set to inherit a Scottish estate when she comes of age, but someone from her past doesn’t want that to happen. A responsible Mr Bennet steps up and requests the aid of the last character you’d expect to help trap the villain.
Stevie Zimmerman’s narration and performance is never a disappointment and is always spot on in her interpretation.
This is a sweet and clean variation. Definitely enjoyed this one and highly recommend both the book and audiobook.
October 17, 2024
I like not a Bennet tropes
This is an engaging story. While there is intrigue, it's not high angst.
I liked the dynamics between all the Bennets and also their 'cousin". No caricature characters, which is refreshing.
Loved that Darcy was a smitten kitten from the moment he laid eyes on Elizabeth!
This is an engaging story. While there is intrigue, it's not high angst.
I liked the dynamics between all the Bennets and also their 'cousin". No caricature characters, which is refreshing.
Loved that Darcy was a smitten kitten from the moment he laid eyes on Elizabeth!
October 10, 2024
“The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong.” –Mahatma Gandhi, All Men Are Brothers: Autobiographical Reflections
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: Sweet and clean [per author]. I questioned that as I would rate it a mature teen. There was an attempted murder, a character was shot, injury described, madness, assassin for hire to commit murder, and attempted inheritance theft. It was free of graphic sex; however, there was a wedding night and the couple was in the bedroom.
>>Angst Level: low angst [per author]. Again, I feel it should be medium angst. Someone was shot and we didn’t know who, what, or why. It was a bit angsty when a character had to go into hiding for their safety.
>>Source: Borrowed via KU [10-7-24] and I volunteered to leave a review:
>>Religious Element: There was a slight reference to a character acknowledging their need to change their life. The recognition of a higher power was consistent with the time/era. This acknowledgment held a mirror in their face and what they saw was a sinner. Then came the realization there had been consequences to their past behavior. Suddenly, life took on new meaning.
>>Trope: [1] Elizabeth is not a Bennet [my favorite trope]. There was also the fact she was Scottish and that sent my Scottish Blood humming. Elizabeth was a fiery redhead. How about that? [2] Redemption of Wickham as he had a change of character
Elizabeth Stowe’s father sent her to live with Mr. Bennet in Hertfordshire before he died. His reasoning was just and would be revealed later in the story. The mystery hung in the air and drove the story forward. Elizabeth lived at Longbourn most of her life. She was startled to learn that she was, in fact, an heiress. Mr. Bennet had adored his adoptive niece and could not bear to tell her of her long-distant past. However, now he must. They learned that upon her majority, she would inherit an estate left to her from her mother. That side of the family was still alive and coveted the property as their estate was heavily indebted.
Only the death of Elizabeth Stowe would allow the land/inheritance grab. Fitzwilliam Darcy had fallen in love with the fiery redhead and when she was shot, he went into protection mode. Bennet had no choice but to send Elizabeth away to keep her safe.
“I wonder if that was how forgiveness budded; not with the fanfare of epiphany, but with pain gathering its things, packing up, and slipping away unannounced in the middle of the night.” –Khaled Hosseini, The Kite Runner
I hate to say this. I cannot explain this except to say that I enjoyed George Wickham. I know and I bit my tongue when I said that. Man, that was handled so well. It was not an instant 180°-degree turn, but a gradual realization of who and what he was. His self-examination and acknowledgment of his life and situation pulled back the curtain and revealed the chaos and damage he had done over the years. That was so poignant. I wanted to cry for him. This surprised me. His HEA was most excellent. I liked him. I was suspicious of him throughout the book until the brilliant climax. Elizabeth and Darcy were large and in charge and changed the lives of tenants and servants alike.
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: Sweet and clean [per author]. I questioned that as I would rate it a mature teen. There was an attempted murder, a character was shot, injury described, madness, assassin for hire to commit murder, and attempted inheritance theft. It was free of graphic sex; however, there was a wedding night and the couple was in the bedroom.
>>Angst Level: low angst [per author]. Again, I feel it should be medium angst. Someone was shot and we didn’t know who, what, or why. It was a bit angsty when a character had to go into hiding for their safety.
>>Source: Borrowed via KU [10-7-24] and I volunteered to leave a review:
>>Religious Element: There was a slight reference to a character acknowledging their need to change their life. The recognition of a higher power was consistent with the time/era. This acknowledgment held a mirror in their face and what they saw was a sinner. Then came the realization there had been consequences to their past behavior. Suddenly, life took on new meaning.
>>Trope: [1] Elizabeth is not a Bennet [my favorite trope]. There was also the fact she was Scottish and that sent my Scottish Blood humming. Elizabeth was a fiery redhead. How about that? [2] Redemption of Wickham as he had a change of character
Elizabeth Stowe’s father sent her to live with Mr. Bennet in Hertfordshire before he died. His reasoning was just and would be revealed later in the story. The mystery hung in the air and drove the story forward. Elizabeth lived at Longbourn most of her life. She was startled to learn that she was, in fact, an heiress. Mr. Bennet had adored his adoptive niece and could not bear to tell her of her long-distant past. However, now he must. They learned that upon her majority, she would inherit an estate left to her from her mother. That side of the family was still alive and coveted the property as their estate was heavily indebted.
Only the death of Elizabeth Stowe would allow the land/inheritance grab. Fitzwilliam Darcy had fallen in love with the fiery redhead and when she was shot, he went into protection mode. Bennet had no choice but to send Elizabeth away to keep her safe.
“I wonder if that was how forgiveness budded; not with the fanfare of epiphany, but with pain gathering its things, packing up, and slipping away unannounced in the middle of the night.” –Khaled Hosseini, The Kite Runner
I hate to say this. I cannot explain this except to say that I enjoyed George Wickham. I know and I bit my tongue when I said that. Man, that was handled so well. It was not an instant 180°-degree turn, but a gradual realization of who and what he was. His self-examination and acknowledgment of his life and situation pulled back the curtain and revealed the chaos and damage he had done over the years. That was so poignant. I wanted to cry for him. This surprised me. His HEA was most excellent. I liked him. I was suspicious of him throughout the book until the brilliant climax. Elizabeth and Darcy were large and in charge and changed the lives of tenants and servants alike.
October 8, 2024
I am sure when Cinderella went to that ball, she took a great deal more pleasure in outsmarting her stepmother than in the carriage and ball gown and glass slippers. — Gita V. Ready
This book explains the premise in the title, in case I had any doubt. Elizabeth is not a Bennet, even though she has spent most of her life in the Bennet household, calling the Bennets Aunt, Uncle, and Cousins.
Elizabeth has an evil stepmother; for a change, it is not the usual suspect. Mrs. Bennet is a loving aunt to Elizabeth. How, then, can a stepmother appear?
The stepmother is not just an ordinary evil, either. She is a would-be murderer. Elizabeth needs protection and a safe place where she cannot be discovered. How can anyone outsmart this woman?
“Elizabeth is not a Bennet” is one of my favorite tropes. This one comes with a twist. Loved it.
Tonight was a perfect example of why Cinderella and the prince get married twenty-four hours after they meet. Because when you’re living with your stepmother, there’s no happily ever after. — Melissa Kantor
This book explains the premise in the title, in case I had any doubt. Elizabeth is not a Bennet, even though she has spent most of her life in the Bennet household, calling the Bennets Aunt, Uncle, and Cousins.
Elizabeth has an evil stepmother; for a change, it is not the usual suspect. Mrs. Bennet is a loving aunt to Elizabeth. How, then, can a stepmother appear?
The stepmother is not just an ordinary evil, either. She is a would-be murderer. Elizabeth needs protection and a safe place where she cannot be discovered. How can anyone outsmart this woman?
“Elizabeth is not a Bennet” is one of my favorite tropes. This one comes with a twist. Loved it.
Tonight was a perfect example of why Cinderella and the prince get married twenty-four hours after they meet. Because when you’re living with your stepmother, there’s no happily ever after. — Melissa Kantor
October 5, 2024
Lizzy has bright red hair
A friend of Mr Bennet is going to die soon and doesn’t trust his relatives. He sends Lizzy to the Bennets at the age of two. As the story opens she is close to being 21. The story is about surviving her relatives she doesn’t know she had. Original, fun. Thumbs up.
A friend of Mr Bennet is going to die soon and doesn’t trust his relatives. He sends Lizzy to the Bennets at the age of two. As the story opens she is close to being 21. The story is about surviving her relatives she doesn’t know she had. Original, fun. Thumbs up.
January 2, 2025
A mysterious story
A delightful mystery inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Laraba Kendig. I really enjoyed the twists and turns in this story.
A delightful mystery inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Laraba Kendig. I really enjoyed the twists and turns in this story.
November 3, 2024
A Stowe who is sent away
3.5* rounded up.
This is a low angst story where the villain is a new character. So the typical villains are either not as bad or fully reformed—into an undercover detective in one instance! I noticed a greater presence of biblical allusions compared to the author's recent Christian-themed stories. I had some difficulty picturing Elizabeth as a redhead, and the visuals in my head of Kelly Reilly as Caroline Bingley jarred me from the story several times—but that's just my personal problem. Definitely an unique plot, with an early HEA for Darcy and Elizabeth.
The audiobook, narrated by Stevie Zimmerman, is excellent.
3.5* rounded up.
This is a low angst story where the villain is a new character. So the typical villains are either not as bad or fully reformed—into an undercover detective in one instance! I noticed a greater presence of biblical allusions compared to the author's recent Christian-themed stories. I had some difficulty picturing Elizabeth as a redhead, and the visuals in my head of Kelly Reilly as Caroline Bingley jarred me from the story several times—but that's just my personal problem. Definitely an unique plot, with an early HEA for Darcy and Elizabeth.
The audiobook, narrated by Stevie Zimmerman, is excellent.
October 10, 2024
Elizabeth Stowe is a ward of Mr Bennet when a surprise letter about inheriting an estate arrives. This leads to intrigue and possibly murder. The story unravels that situation with a bit of Fitzwilliam Darcy romance on the side.
There is no pride, no prejudice, not much angst, and 3 epilogues.
There is no pride, no prejudice, not much angst, and 3 epilogues.
October 8, 2024
Greatly enjoyable
I found I loved this variation because it portrays a lovely Bennet family and an enchanting romance between our dear couple. I also enjoyed the differences in the other characters that are well written and believable.
I found I loved this variation because it portrays a lovely Bennet family and an enchanting romance between our dear couple. I also enjoyed the differences in the other characters that are well written and believable.
December 13, 2024
Quite the mystery, quite the epic.
I really liked the premise that Elizabeth was being raised with cousins and loving aunt and uncle, the loving part being a refreshing change from recent reads where the Bennets are portrayed as over-the-top mean and avaricious. But Elizabeth must find out she isn’t a cousin after all when her guardian Mr Bennet receives word that she has inherited an estate now that she is close to her majority. Her connection to the family is nonetheless very heartwarming.
Then everything changes quickly when Netherfield is leased and an unexpected true family connection arrives, an attempted murder of Our Dear Girl, the talents of a scoundrel put to positive use to find the person behind the attempt, the discovery of a half brother for Elizabeth and travel to the estate in Scotland where they find long neglect, and prove her ownership. And that’s barely the first half.
This story had an early understanding and marriage for Darcy and Elizabeth. Darcy was pretty much perfect here , as was Elizabeth. The stress was all outside their relationship. The tension was in proving who the murderer was and dealing with their punishment. And then supporting Elizabeth’s newly found brother who had no training whatsoever but now has the responsibilities of an estate to run. The Darcys help of course.
There were really nice HEAs aplenty for so many people in this tale, including a quite surprising character. The epilogue was great. This author is known for her faith-based character reformations and I cheer her on for these. In this story once the mystery was revealed, it became a little too tame or too long. I felt it should have been more dramatic or shorter. Otherwise it’s a grand tale and definitely recommended.
I really liked the premise that Elizabeth was being raised with cousins and loving aunt and uncle, the loving part being a refreshing change from recent reads where the Bennets are portrayed as over-the-top mean and avaricious. But Elizabeth must find out she isn’t a cousin after all when her guardian Mr Bennet receives word that she has inherited an estate now that she is close to her majority. Her connection to the family is nonetheless very heartwarming.
Then everything changes quickly when Netherfield is leased and an unexpected true family connection arrives, an attempted murder of Our Dear Girl, the talents of a scoundrel put to positive use to find the person behind the attempt, the discovery of a half brother for Elizabeth and travel to the estate in Scotland where they find long neglect, and prove her ownership. And that’s barely the first half.
This story had an early understanding and marriage for Darcy and Elizabeth. Darcy was pretty much perfect here , as was Elizabeth. The stress was all outside their relationship. The tension was in proving who the murderer was and dealing with their punishment. And then supporting Elizabeth’s newly found brother who had no training whatsoever but now has the responsibilities of an estate to run. The Darcys help of course.
There were really nice HEAs aplenty for so many people in this tale, including a quite surprising character. The epilogue was great. This author is known for her faith-based character reformations and I cheer her on for these. In this story once the mystery was revealed, it became a little too tame or too long. I felt it should have been more dramatic or shorter. Otherwise it’s a grand tale and definitely recommended.
November 23, 2024
Well... 2.5 Stars
I truly enjoyed the story's beginning and looked forward to how things would unfold. Unfortunately, my interest in the story waned for several reasons.
- A story with over five hundred pages I would expect to be in-depth. Instead, everything was on the surface and stuffed with fillers, so much so that I began to skim most of the book, including the epilogues.
- There were many questions I wanted answers to, along with questionable decision-making. One glaring one is Darcy deciding to fund, for life, the person who attempted to murder his wife twice! The punishment consisted of allowing the guilty party to live on an estate with servants; if the 'prisoner' didn't follow the rules, there wouldn't be any nice dresses or pleasant food. I'm just thinking how many people would kill for that type of easy living/punishment.
- Although D & E were off to a good start, Darcy and Elizabeth's relationship fell flat. Introducing Jenny into the mix served no purpose. Now, knowing Darcy's initial interest in Elizabeth was because of Darcy's childhood memories of Jenny caused me to question the growing bond between the two. Additionally, Darcy repeatedly reminds himself that Elizabeth isn't the most beautiful woman, although his first reaction doesn't support those claims.
Overall, I wanted to like the story, but I was more disappointed.
I truly enjoyed the story's beginning and looked forward to how things would unfold. Unfortunately, my interest in the story waned for several reasons.
- A story with over five hundred pages I would expect to be in-depth. Instead, everything was on the surface and stuffed with fillers, so much so that I began to skim most of the book, including the epilogues.
- There were many questions I wanted answers to, along with questionable decision-making. One glaring one is Darcy deciding to fund, for life, the person who attempted to murder his wife twice! The punishment consisted of allowing the guilty party to live on an estate with servants; if the 'prisoner' didn't follow the rules, there wouldn't be any nice dresses or pleasant food. I'm just thinking how many people would kill for that type of easy living/punishment.
- Although D & E were off to a good start, Darcy and Elizabeth's relationship fell flat. Introducing Jenny into the mix served no purpose. Now, knowing Darcy's initial interest in Elizabeth was because of Darcy's childhood memories of Jenny caused me to question the growing bond between the two. Additionally, Darcy repeatedly reminds himself that Elizabeth isn't the most beautiful woman, although his first reaction doesn't support those claims.
Overall, I wanted to like the story, but I was more disappointed.
October 21, 2024
Thin plot
The details of the plot could be spelled out in half a page, so you can imagine how much descriptive filler this book contains. Well written filler, but filler just the same.
If you're looking for a pleasant, low angst, low drama story to pass the time, you may enjoy this.
The details of the plot could be spelled out in half a page, so you can imagine how much descriptive filler this book contains. Well written filler, but filler just the same.
If you're looking for a pleasant, low angst, low drama story to pass the time, you may enjoy this.
October 4, 2024
Great love...
Great love of family friends and praise for puppies. Also sadness of mean step mothers. Marana has written another winner.
Great love of family friends and praise for puppies. Also sadness of mean step mothers. Marana has written another winner.
October 5, 2024
Elizabeth is a red head. This is one of too many things which differ from canon for my taste. I couldn't warm up to the original characters who made their appearance at around 50%. I quit. This variation is well written and I liked the original treatment of Wickham, hence the two stars. It should appeal to readers who don't mind reading a completely different story (plot and characters).
October 16, 2024
I loved it!
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. Elizabeth’s future is uncertain, but Mr. Darcy’s admiration is not. Before his death, Elizabeth Stowe’s father sent her to live with the Bennets. She has lived most of her life at Longbourn and is startled to learn she is heiress to an estate in Scotland. Mr. Bennet adores his adopted niece, and he could not bring himself to tell Elizabeth the details of her long distant past, but now he must. Fitzwilliam Darcy did not expect to fall in love with a beautiful orphan, but from the moment he met her, he was entranced by Elizabeth’s fine eyes and sharp wit, which relentlessly demand his attention. When Elizabeth is attacked by a mysterious antagonist, it is Darcy who comes to her rescue and finds a way to keep her safe from danger. Does the attack have something to do with her dead mother’s Scottish estate? With Darcy as her protector, Elizabeth leaves Longbourn and steps forward into an uncertain future. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. I highly recommend to everyone.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. Elizabeth’s future is uncertain, but Mr. Darcy’s admiration is not. Before his death, Elizabeth Stowe’s father sent her to live with the Bennets. She has lived most of her life at Longbourn and is startled to learn she is heiress to an estate in Scotland. Mr. Bennet adores his adopted niece, and he could not bring himself to tell Elizabeth the details of her long distant past, but now he must. Fitzwilliam Darcy did not expect to fall in love with a beautiful orphan, but from the moment he met her, he was entranced by Elizabeth’s fine eyes and sharp wit, which relentlessly demand his attention. When Elizabeth is attacked by a mysterious antagonist, it is Darcy who comes to her rescue and finds a way to keep her safe from danger. Does the attack have something to do with her dead mother’s Scottish estate? With Darcy as her protector, Elizabeth leaves Longbourn and steps forward into an uncertain future. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. I highly recommend to everyone.
October 20, 2024
An excellent plot but too much endless prose - 3.75*
I find I am repeating myself from my last review of a book by this author but given the amount of repeats in the book perhaps that is only fair.
This plot is excellent and keeps the pages turning but the excessive and unnecessary prose takes the reader out of the book repeatedly. Descriptive text is a good thing, a very good thing. But flowery text is not so good and there is far too much in this book.
I found the section headings with dates/locations/times very tedious as they were seldom needed and were distracting.
On the plus side the characters are well written and engaging but I do wish this author would deploy a red editing pen or hire an editor to do so on her behalf.
I do like the cover - it is nice to see appropriate regency dress rather than OTT prom queen froth.
The book finished at 91% on my Kindle followed by an excerpt from another book by the author.
I find I am repeating myself from my last review of a book by this author but given the amount of repeats in the book perhaps that is only fair.
This plot is excellent and keeps the pages turning but the excessive and unnecessary prose takes the reader out of the book repeatedly. Descriptive text is a good thing, a very good thing. But flowery text is not so good and there is far too much in this book.
I found the section headings with dates/locations/times very tedious as they were seldom needed and were distracting.
On the plus side the characters are well written and engaging but I do wish this author would deploy a red editing pen or hire an editor to do so on her behalf.
I do like the cover - it is nice to see appropriate regency dress rather than OTT prom queen froth.
The book finished at 91% on my Kindle followed by an excerpt from another book by the author.
November 29, 2024
I liked the story, but it had a lot of descriptive filler, especially all the detailed weather reports.
There were some exciting developments, and I really liked Wickham’s character arc in the story. It’s a little concerning to confess that Wickham was the most interesting character in the story. As always, I really like the Christian elements in her stories.
The villain was not punished appropriately. As another reviewer noted, the consequences for the villain seemed more a reward than punishment.
The timeline near the end is all wrong. Chapter 32 begins on May 11th, and the First Epilogue begins on June 6th. This is less than four weeks and includes a great deal of travel and drama. Even following the author’s timeline (the next day, a week later, etc.) and ignoring there is simply no way that the events could be squeezed into this timeline.
3.5-stars rounded up. Read through KU.
There were some exciting developments, and I really liked Wickham’s character arc in the story. It’s a little concerning to confess that Wickham was the most interesting character in the story. As always, I really like the Christian elements in her stories.
The villain was not punished appropriately. As another reviewer noted, the consequences for the villain seemed more a reward than punishment.
The timeline near the end is all wrong. Chapter 32 begins on May 11th, and the First Epilogue begins on June 6th. This is less than four weeks and includes a great deal of travel and drama. Even following the author’s timeline (the next day, a week later, etc.) and ignoring there is simply no way that the events could be squeezed into this timeline.
3.5-stars rounded up. Read through KU.
October 7, 2024
Support of Family
The idea of Elisabeth not being a Bennet was a very interesting twist to this classic story. While many of the key themes remained the same, I simply loved how the bulk of the story focused on Elizabeth and her inheritance situation. Darcy and Mr. Bennet are much more “visible “ and engaging right from the start. With many working details occurring virtually simultaneously, I really liked the use of letters between characters to convey some very concise and often important information. Focussing on truth, honesty, forgiveness and nurturing personal connections, it was satisfying seeing goodness emerge over evil. I also appreciated the enlightenment and personal
growth of Wickham as well as a rosy glimpse
ten years in the future for many characters. Loved it!
The idea of Elisabeth not being a Bennet was a very interesting twist to this classic story. While many of the key themes remained the same, I simply loved how the bulk of the story focused on Elizabeth and her inheritance situation. Darcy and Mr. Bennet are much more “visible “ and engaging right from the start. With many working details occurring virtually simultaneously, I really liked the use of letters between characters to convey some very concise and often important information. Focussing on truth, honesty, forgiveness and nurturing personal connections, it was satisfying seeing goodness emerge over evil. I also appreciated the enlightenment and personal
growth of Wickham as well as a rosy glimpse
ten years in the future for many characters. Loved it!
December 24, 2024
ew twist on Elizabeth and Darcy
Elizabeth is not a Bennet! It turns out that she is not related to the Bennets at all. She is an orphan, whose father sent her to Mr Bennet when she was two. Her mother had died and he had remarried and he was afraid her stepmother would harm her. So, Elizabeth is hidden until she is 20. She gets a letter from a lawyer who says when she is 21, she will inherit an estate in Scotland. She has met Darcy and he is completely taken by her. There is an attempt on her life. She must be hidden somewhere. Without giving away too much, her stepmother is behind the attempt. Wickham is a reforming “bad” guy. He helps Elizabeth and Darcy to find and bring to justice her stepmother.
Elizabeth is not a Bennet! It turns out that she is not related to the Bennets at all. She is an orphan, whose father sent her to Mr Bennet when she was two. Her mother had died and he had remarried and he was afraid her stepmother would harm her. So, Elizabeth is hidden until she is 20. She gets a letter from a lawyer who says when she is 21, she will inherit an estate in Scotland. She has met Darcy and he is completely taken by her. There is an attempt on her life. She must be hidden somewhere. Without giving away too much, her stepmother is behind the attempt. Wickham is a reforming “bad” guy. He helps Elizabeth and Darcy to find and bring to justice her stepmother.
March 23, 2025
Stretches the imagination
I did not get a convincing sense of romance between Elizabeth and Darcy. One minute she is saying she does not have head space to consider it, next they are engaged. I found it difficult to imagine all of the Bennet girls to be blonde, especially Mary: how ingrained I have become. I love the fact that Elizabeth's locks are referred to as Titian. I have not been used to considering fiery red hair as Titian since I was told during my childhood that I had Titian locks and I don't think mine were fiery, much more subtle than my son's copper. But I was glad to hear the term used! I think I liked how Wickham was dealt with (don't want to give anything away).
I did not get a convincing sense of romance between Elizabeth and Darcy. One minute she is saying she does not have head space to consider it, next they are engaged. I found it difficult to imagine all of the Bennet girls to be blonde, especially Mary: how ingrained I have become. I love the fact that Elizabeth's locks are referred to as Titian. I have not been used to considering fiery red hair as Titian since I was told during my childhood that I had Titian locks and I don't think mine were fiery, much more subtle than my son's copper. But I was glad to hear the term used! I think I liked how Wickham was dealt with (don't want to give anything away).
October 6, 2024
Something different!
I've read a lot of Elizabeth variations where she's a foundling, kidnapped as an infant, a secret heiress, royalty, etc. But this one was unique in that there was no secrecy of who she was, no abuse by the Bennets, and not exceptionally wealthy. The plot was solid inand even though some characters were softened: Mrs. Bennet, Darcy (to some extent), they weren't made unbelievable. I especially loved Wickham's reform as it was not an immediate epiphany. I also liked that all the relatives married outside spouses with a few minor but believable exceptons.
I've read a lot of Elizabeth variations where she's a foundling, kidnapped as an infant, a secret heiress, royalty, etc. But this one was unique in that there was no secrecy of who she was, no abuse by the Bennets, and not exceptionally wealthy. The plot was solid inand even though some characters were softened: Mrs. Bennet, Darcy (to some extent), they weren't made unbelievable. I especially loved Wickham's reform as it was not an immediate epiphany. I also liked that all the relatives married outside spouses with a few minor but believable exceptons.
October 9, 2024
Emotional, funny, interesting, mystery within
Well written and extremely emotional from beginning to the end. This story has a few little twist within storyline that make the plot even better. I could not put the story down, it was so interesting that I need to know what happened.
I found this moving and funny in some parts. I loved the new characters and the ending was incredible.
I loved how Mr B is out and about. Mr W is extremely helpful and good. Collins is the same.
Highly recommended for all to read. Clean, with a section of religious aspect, extremely detailed and very interesting.
Well written and extremely emotional from beginning to the end. This story has a few little twist within storyline that make the plot even better. I could not put the story down, it was so interesting that I need to know what happened.
I found this moving and funny in some parts. I loved the new characters and the ending was incredible.
I loved how Mr B is out and about. Mr W is extremely helpful and good. Collins is the same.
Highly recommended for all to read. Clean, with a section of religious aspect, extremely detailed and very interesting.
October 15, 2024
Loved this book. very different take on the original where E is a distant cousin (everyone believes that) and is a moderate heiress
A letter declaring her inheritance of an estate in Scotland brings lots of changes in her life including an assassination attempt
Darcy, Mr. Bennet stand firm to protect her and that's the story.
a notable point in this novel is Wickham. his gradual transformation is very believable and nicely written
in Ms. kendig's book i have seen multiple versions of good Wickham and this is by far my favorite.
the only problem if i have to state is the we are told Elizabeth is independent and intelligent but we don't get much evidence to it. rather this E is content to let the men handle many matters which doesn't suit the original character
A letter declaring her inheritance of an estate in Scotland brings lots of changes in her life including an assassination attempt
Darcy, Mr. Bennet stand firm to protect her and that's the story.
a notable point in this novel is Wickham. his gradual transformation is very believable and nicely written
in Ms. kendig's book i have seen multiple versions of good Wickham and this is by far my favorite.
the only problem if i have to state is the we are told Elizabeth is independent and intelligent but we don't get much evidence to it. rather this E is content to let the men handle many matters which doesn't suit the original character
October 5, 2024
Fun
I love “not a Bennet stories”. This one has all good Bennets and ODG grows up loved and knowing she is an orphan in contrast to other stories in this category. I did appreciate a Darcy who loved at first site, but was a bit annoyed with the frequent thoughts of, “I love her for other reasons beca although she is pretty, she is not a stunning beauty.” This is a small quibble. Darcy is great and protective without being overbearing. I did think the bad guys were dealt with too easily, but I appreciate the Wickham redemption arc.
I love “not a Bennet stories”. This one has all good Bennets and ODG grows up loved and knowing she is an orphan in contrast to other stories in this category. I did appreciate a Darcy who loved at first site, but was a bit annoyed with the frequent thoughts of, “I love her for other reasons beca although she is pretty, she is not a stunning beauty.” This is a small quibble. Darcy is great and protective without being overbearing. I did think the bad guys were dealt with too easily, but I appreciate the Wickham redemption arc.
October 6, 2024
Another wonderful variation!
This variation was different from the others. I appreciate this author being so different, creative, and consistently clean in her writings.
The story had begun with no insults nor animosity between Elizabeth & Darcy. Yes Caroline was awful and Wickham had his transfer. The Bennet family was changed from the beginning of the storyline. I enjoyed their character changes. Still silly but not over the top. Mary had a surprise ending from my prospective.
I highly recommend all ages read this full length story!!!
This variation was different from the others. I appreciate this author being so different, creative, and consistently clean in her writings.
The story had begun with no insults nor animosity between Elizabeth & Darcy. Yes Caroline was awful and Wickham had his transfer. The Bennet family was changed from the beginning of the storyline. I enjoyed their character changes. Still silly but not over the top. Mary had a surprise ending from my prospective.
I highly recommend all ages read this full length story!!!
October 7, 2024
A different story
I've really enjoyed this different story, Mr and Mrs Bennet are portrayed nicely as are all the sisters and their adopted cousin Lizzy, and Darcy displays an instant attraction to her.
She learns that she is heir to an estate in Scotland but then the story begins to darken when someone tries to kill Lizzy. Wickham begins to slowly understand how his actions have affected others, Caroline, Lady Catherine and Mr Collins all dealt with easily. I enjoyed it very much.
I've really enjoyed this different story, Mr and Mrs Bennet are portrayed nicely as are all the sisters and their adopted cousin Lizzy, and Darcy displays an instant attraction to her.
She learns that she is heir to an estate in Scotland but then the story begins to darken when someone tries to kill Lizzy. Wickham begins to slowly understand how his actions have affected others, Caroline, Lady Catherine and Mr Collins all dealt with easily. I enjoyed it very much.
April 3, 2025
Elizabeth as a redhead!
Elizabeth is a ward but "adopted" into the loving Bennet family. Darcy quickly falls for the redheaded Elizabeth at the assembly and comes to realize that he is falling in love with her. Elizabeth's hidden past is coming to the front as someone does not want her to inherit her birthright. We do have a reformed Wickham This story is more medium than high angst. I do like that Darcy & Elizabeth get together earlier in the story so we can enjoy more of their life together. The narration by Stevie Zimmerman brings up the story another notch.
Elizabeth is a ward but "adopted" into the loving Bennet family. Darcy quickly falls for the redheaded Elizabeth at the assembly and comes to realize that he is falling in love with her. Elizabeth's hidden past is coming to the front as someone does not want her to inherit her birthright. We do have a reformed Wickham This story is more medium than high angst. I do like that Darcy & Elizabeth get together earlier in the story so we can enjoy more of their life together. The narration by Stevie Zimmerman brings up the story another notch.
December 29, 2024
A character fest - many more developed
In addition to the Bennets, Bingleys, Darcys, and Fitzwilliams, we're treated to some new characters. Many of the original characters are a bit different from how they're depicted in Jane Austen's novel, with more aspects to their personalities. The storyline has a new and longer ending than in the original novel. I also enjoyed the extended epilogues.
In addition to the Bennets, Bingleys, Darcys, and Fitzwilliams, we're treated to some new characters. Many of the original characters are a bit different from how they're depicted in Jane Austen's novel, with more aspects to their personalities. The storyline has a new and longer ending than in the original novel. I also enjoyed the extended epilogues.
October 6, 2024
Phenomenal
I absolutely loved this book. I usually always enjoy the "Elizabeth is Not a Bennett" trope, but this one was outstanding. I loved that Darcy was entranced from the beginning. And Wickham's redemption arc was one of the most genuine and realistic that I have read. Wonferful variation!
I absolutely loved this book. I usually always enjoy the "Elizabeth is Not a Bennett" trope, but this one was outstanding. I loved that Darcy was entranced from the beginning. And Wickham's redemption arc was one of the most genuine and realistic that I have read. Wonferful variation!
October 8, 2024
Not a Bennett.
As other reviewers have mentioned, there is action at the beginning of the book. But the latter part is rather dull. There are beautiful descriptions of scenery and detailed descriptions of the characters happily ever afters. Somehow, after a beginning with intrigue, the rest fell short. Perhaps I'm getting burnt out on JAFF?
As other reviewers have mentioned, there is action at the beginning of the book. But the latter part is rather dull. There are beautiful descriptions of scenery and detailed descriptions of the characters happily ever afters. Somehow, after a beginning with intrigue, the rest fell short. Perhaps I'm getting burnt out on JAFF?
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