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Forty Acres
“A thriller in a class by itself—brilliant and scary!” —Terry McMillan
Read the page-turning, provocative thriller that will forever change the way you think about slavery and its legacy in today’s America.
Martin Grey, a smart, talented black lawyer working out of a storefront in Queens, becomes friendly with a group of some of the most powerful, wealthy, and esteemed black men in America. He’s dazzled by what they’ve accomplished, and they seem to think he has the potential to be as successful as they are. They invite him for a weekend away from it all—no wives, no cell phones, no talk of business. But far from home and cut off from everyone he loves, he discovers a disturbing secret that challenges some of his deepest convictions…
Martin finds out that his glittering new friends are part of a secret society dedicated to the preservation of the institution of slavery—but this time around, the black men are called “Master.” Joining them seems to guarantee a future without limits; rebuking them almost certainly guarantees his death. Trapped inside a picture-perfect, make-believe world that is home to a frightening reality, Martin must find a way out that will allow him to stay alive without becoming the very thing he hates.
A novel of rage and compassion, good and evil, trust and betrayal, Forty Acres is the thought-provoking story of one man’s desperate attempt to escape the clutches of a terrifying new moral order.
Read the page-turning, provocative thriller that will forever change the way you think about slavery and its legacy in today’s America.
Martin Grey, a smart, talented black lawyer working out of a storefront in Queens, becomes friendly with a group of some of the most powerful, wealthy, and esteemed black men in America. He’s dazzled by what they’ve accomplished, and they seem to think he has the potential to be as successful as they are. They invite him for a weekend away from it all—no wives, no cell phones, no talk of business. But far from home and cut off from everyone he loves, he discovers a disturbing secret that challenges some of his deepest convictions…
Martin finds out that his glittering new friends are part of a secret society dedicated to the preservation of the institution of slavery—but this time around, the black men are called “Master.” Joining them seems to guarantee a future without limits; rebuking them almost certainly guarantees his death. Trapped inside a picture-perfect, make-believe world that is home to a frightening reality, Martin must find a way out that will allow him to stay alive without becoming the very thing he hates.
A novel of rage and compassion, good and evil, trust and betrayal, Forty Acres is the thought-provoking story of one man’s desperate attempt to escape the clutches of a terrifying new moral order.
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First published July 1, 2014
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About the author
Dwayne Alexander Smith
18 books408 followersWorking professional screenwriter represented by Resolution and Circle of Confusion. I have sold or optioned six spec screenplays and I have been hired by studios for numerous rewrites. Currently I have two movies in post-production, STUCK and THE CLOSET. Both are due to be released in 2014.
My first novel, a thriller titled FORTY ACRES, is scheduled for release by Simon & Schuster July 1st, 2014.
My first novel, a thriller titled FORTY ACRES, is scheduled for release by Simon & Schuster July 1st, 2014.
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June 12, 2014
Where do I begin with this review? I guess from the beginning.
Forty Acres is the debut political thriller by Dwayne Alexander Smith composed of a plot I never saw coming. Off the high of winning a civil rights case, Martin Grey is ready to live the good life. The latest verdict is set to bring the small civil rights practice he shares with his good friend Glen, into the limelight and some serious cash flow.
Seemingly out of the blue, Martin is approached by Damon Darell, who happens to also be opposing counsel in the trial that has made his career. Damon encourages Martin to spend some time with him as he introduces him to a group of other successful black men.
This is where the plot to Forty Acres becomes interesting... and I admit...a little uncomfortable. Damon and his group of cronies are members to a secret society headed by Dr Kasim. Their intent is to reinstate slavery but only for white people. They insist Forty Acres is their way of honoring their ancestors.
Maybe it's all the "black noise" I hear in my ears or whatever but this was wildly insane to me. I couldn't get past my discomfort for a long time. It made reading the first half a bit of a struggle for me. I don't want to give anything away but I'm sure some of their points can leave room for much discussion.
Once Martin is drawn into their sick fantasy, it becomes frighteningly clear that he does not agree with their beliefs which my also place him in harms way. There's no way a secret such as Forty Acres can be revealed without ensuring it's secret is safe, by all means necessary.
Smith's Forty Acres is a riveting story of a man who's faced with determining what his beliefs mean to him and if he's willing to risk his life for them. Martin is such an awesome character that deserved so much more development, but because this is a thriller, thin characters are to be expected. There were many moments I thought that the plot was predictable and then Smith would take it in a whole different direction.
The one huge gripe I had with Forty Acres is the end and the countdown. That's a cheap tool used in movies and not a book. Sorry!!! Just had to call it out.
Ultimately, Forty Acres by Dwayne ALexander Smith was quite a read. It forces readers to question their own morals and what they'd live or die for. I won't forget this novel and am even now questioning the absurdity of the thinking in some characters. Thanks Dwanye Alexander Smith for such a thought-provoking read. Fans of political thrillers will have to read this stunning debut. The point isn't that this novel is not likely or possible, it's the fact that someone out their wishes it is.
Copy provided by Simon & Schuster via Netgalley
Forty Acres is the debut political thriller by Dwayne Alexander Smith composed of a plot I never saw coming. Off the high of winning a civil rights case, Martin Grey is ready to live the good life. The latest verdict is set to bring the small civil rights practice he shares with his good friend Glen, into the limelight and some serious cash flow.
Seemingly out of the blue, Martin is approached by Damon Darell, who happens to also be opposing counsel in the trial that has made his career. Damon encourages Martin to spend some time with him as he introduces him to a group of other successful black men.
This is where the plot to Forty Acres becomes interesting... and I admit...a little uncomfortable. Damon and his group of cronies are members to a secret society headed by Dr Kasim. Their intent is to reinstate slavery but only for white people. They insist Forty Acres is their way of honoring their ancestors.
Maybe it's all the "black noise" I hear in my ears or whatever but this was wildly insane to me. I couldn't get past my discomfort for a long time. It made reading the first half a bit of a struggle for me. I don't want to give anything away but I'm sure some of their points can leave room for much discussion.
Once Martin is drawn into their sick fantasy, it becomes frighteningly clear that he does not agree with their beliefs which my also place him in harms way. There's no way a secret such as Forty Acres can be revealed without ensuring it's secret is safe, by all means necessary.
Smith's Forty Acres is a riveting story of a man who's faced with determining what his beliefs mean to him and if he's willing to risk his life for them. Martin is such an awesome character that deserved so much more development, but because this is a thriller, thin characters are to be expected. There were many moments I thought that the plot was predictable and then Smith would take it in a whole different direction.
The one huge gripe I had with Forty Acres is the end and the countdown. That's a cheap tool used in movies and not a book. Sorry!!! Just had to call it out.
Ultimately, Forty Acres by Dwayne ALexander Smith was quite a read. It forces readers to question their own morals and what they'd live or die for. I won't forget this novel and am even now questioning the absurdity of the thinking in some characters. Thanks Dwanye Alexander Smith for such a thought-provoking read. Fans of political thrillers will have to read this stunning debut. The point isn't that this novel is not likely or possible, it's the fact that someone out their wishes it is.
Copy provided by Simon & Schuster via Netgalley
April 30, 2018
Dang, this was kind of crazy. Parts of it felt under developed, but if you are looking for a quick, page-turning thriller, this is the book for you.
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March 30, 2014
'Forty Acres' is earnest and implausible, just like the actions of its protagonist, Martin Grey. It's a thriller, so I understand its need to move quickly but for the first third of the novel to be spent in expository setup before reaching the titular Forty Acres, that 1/3 didn't do enough work making the relationships between Martin and his law partner Glen or his professional rival Damon as strong as they could've been. I would've liked to know more about how his friendship with Glen informed his strong opposition to the enslavement of whites and more about why he was so quick to trust Damon. What exactly about the prospect of becoming a captain of industry (like the other black men involved with Forty Acres) even appealed to Martin? He didn't seem too interested in it -- which made Damon's enthusiasm about bringing him into the secret society's fold seem rushed and under-motivated.
I could say a lot about this novel: its dialogue, as on-the-nose as it all was, served as an impediment; Martin makes inexplicable, poorly timed, patently unwise choices; the women could've been better written; and it would've been more interesting to spend more time in the Forty Acres setting, watching Martin work as a double agent.
Stories about this -- revenge discrimination fantasies -- seem hard to pull off in general. They run the risk of being more hokey than helpful/cathartic/cautionary/interesting. 'Forty Acres' fails mostly because its protagonist's only reason for endangering himself and his wife with his rash impulses is a generic sense of right and wrong. He's also "too good"; this is a story that would've been better served by characters with a much greater sense of moral ambiguity. The members of the secret society are interchangeably evil and most are underdeveloped.
I wouldn't recommend this book to anyone else in its current form but had it undergone one or two more revisions that rendered plot and character motivations more nuanced and plausible, I might've.
I could say a lot about this novel: its dialogue, as on-the-nose as it all was, served as an impediment; Martin makes inexplicable, poorly timed, patently unwise choices; the women could've been better written; and it would've been more interesting to spend more time in the Forty Acres setting, watching Martin work as a double agent.
Stories about this -- revenge discrimination fantasies -- seem hard to pull off in general. They run the risk of being more hokey than helpful/cathartic/cautionary/interesting. 'Forty Acres' fails mostly because its protagonist's only reason for endangering himself and his wife with his rash impulses is a generic sense of right and wrong. He's also "too good"; this is a story that would've been better served by characters with a much greater sense of moral ambiguity. The members of the secret society are interchangeably evil and most are underdeveloped.
I wouldn't recommend this book to anyone else in its current form but had it undergone one or two more revisions that rendered plot and character motivations more nuanced and plausible, I might've.
January 2, 2015
OMGOSH, if you happen to enjoy a good mystery-thriller, read this super fast-paced debut novel with a shocking theme by Dwayne Alexander Smith. Forty Acres (great title) is a suspenseful story about a secret society of rich & powerful black men who capture and enslave white men and women to do their bidding in an act of revenge against their ancestors.
Great entertainment here with evil doings and brutality that gave me the willies!
June 11, 2018
One word . . EPIC!
A “deal with the devil” has never been so evil!
FORTY ACRES was the most intense political thriller—thought-provoking, and gripping debut novel (my pulse is still racing) - full of power and revenge. Has my vote for “Thriller Debut Novel of 2014”, a talented author, Dwayne Alexander Smith, has just won me over as a “fan for life.”
Amazing writing, brilliantly developed characters, well researched, and an astounding storyline. So much depth to this suspenseful thriller, want to discuss, debate, and challenge the “what if’s” (as I bookmarked something from every chapter); however, this is one of those “ONE in a million books” you dare not say a word to spoil, or hint of anything in a review, to give away the suspense for readers.
From controversial issues of race and power, hatred, wealth, love, trust, betrayal, and secrets--it has it all.
Whereas, “Devil’s Advocate” raised “winning is everything”, FORTY ACRES is about “revenge and power.” Several similarities –both have smart, intuitive wives, devil/master, and both main characters are attorneys who get sucked into a world of mystery, power, and wealth. Of course, Forty Acres in a “class by itself”. A WINNER out of the gate!
FORTY ACRES deserves an unveiling. Each page is just too BLOODY GOOD. You feel yourself experiencing every setting, footstep, movement and facial expression, trying to predict the next move, with details so realistic, you are holding your breath, as you turn the next page to see what lies ahead.
Martin, black attorney and main character ROCKS, and fell in love with him – brilliant strategies, witty one-liners, and oh the dedication of the book by the author was PRICELESS.
As the author is a screenplay writer, I can envision a movie based on this predicted bestseller, with a cast of stars (I want a front row seat) for a total blockbuster. With a surprise at the end – one can only hope for a series to follow. “I guess, my heart can get back to normal until his next book” . . . Here’s hoping it is soon!
Update 2018: Yes, a movie is coming and Will Smith (my hero), starring. I am assuming a entire cast of top stars.
This provocative new novel is most deserving of a 5 STAR and assured to be a hit. Compliments to the author and publisher for an appealing front cover and overview, which drew me in immediately, and exceeded all my expectations. Highly recommend to thriller lovers-fans of Grisham and The Firm will devour.
Since reading Forty Acres digital copy last year recently purchased the audiobook narrated by Andre Blake, with an award-winning performance and also hardcover for my collection.
JDCMustReadBooks
BEST BOOKS OF 2014
Be sure and read The Unkind Hours June 2018. 5 Stars.
A “deal with the devil” has never been so evil!
FORTY ACRES was the most intense political thriller—thought-provoking, and gripping debut novel (my pulse is still racing) - full of power and revenge. Has my vote for “Thriller Debut Novel of 2014”, a talented author, Dwayne Alexander Smith, has just won me over as a “fan for life.”
Amazing writing, brilliantly developed characters, well researched, and an astounding storyline. So much depth to this suspenseful thriller, want to discuss, debate, and challenge the “what if’s” (as I bookmarked something from every chapter); however, this is one of those “ONE in a million books” you dare not say a word to spoil, or hint of anything in a review, to give away the suspense for readers.
From controversial issues of race and power, hatred, wealth, love, trust, betrayal, and secrets--it has it all.
Whereas, “Devil’s Advocate” raised “winning is everything”, FORTY ACRES is about “revenge and power.” Several similarities –both have smart, intuitive wives, devil/master, and both main characters are attorneys who get sucked into a world of mystery, power, and wealth. Of course, Forty Acres in a “class by itself”. A WINNER out of the gate!
FORTY ACRES deserves an unveiling. Each page is just too BLOODY GOOD. You feel yourself experiencing every setting, footstep, movement and facial expression, trying to predict the next move, with details so realistic, you are holding your breath, as you turn the next page to see what lies ahead.
Martin, black attorney and main character ROCKS, and fell in love with him – brilliant strategies, witty one-liners, and oh the dedication of the book by the author was PRICELESS.
As the author is a screenplay writer, I can envision a movie based on this predicted bestseller, with a cast of stars (I want a front row seat) for a total blockbuster. With a surprise at the end – one can only hope for a series to follow. “I guess, my heart can get back to normal until his next book” . . . Here’s hoping it is soon!
Update 2018: Yes, a movie is coming and Will Smith (my hero), starring. I am assuming a entire cast of top stars.
This provocative new novel is most deserving of a 5 STAR and assured to be a hit. Compliments to the author and publisher for an appealing front cover and overview, which drew me in immediately, and exceeded all my expectations. Highly recommend to thriller lovers-fans of Grisham and The Firm will devour.
Since reading Forty Acres digital copy last year recently purchased the audiobook narrated by Andre Blake, with an award-winning performance and also hardcover for my collection.
JDCMustReadBooks
BEST BOOKS OF 2014
Be sure and read The Unkind Hours June 2018. 5 Stars.
March 3, 2016
Here's a fun drinking game: Take a swig of your favorite beverage every time you have to yell, "That's RACIST/MISOGYNIST/BIGOTED/GAY-HATING/ABLEIST!" at me in this review.
You will be super well-hydrated by the end and I will be a huge asshole.
Ok, so, this is pretty much a Hollywood-style revenge fantasy which is great, I like those. I mean, that's the driving force behind vagina dentata tales and such. Revenge! Such stories are evocative and thrilling and I LOVE revenge! It's also billed as a political thriller and while Grisham and Baldacci and them of those ilks grate on my nerves, I can't say I don't occasionally enjoy their stories because, though terribly-written, they can be exciting.
In this novel, a group of affluent black men have created a retreat where they can take back their black man power by because ok, why not. That sounds pretty interesting, actually, despite the vast amounts of ridiculousness that had to be created just to sustain the concept. Whatever. My disbelief is suspended, let's get on with REVENGE!
Only pretend the revenge tale is super-explainy and told by...well, someone like this guy
Yeah.
It sort of kills the tension to have to hear the same stuff re-described over and over again within a page. So that was a big obstacle for me to overcome.
I was also put off by the portrayal of women in this book. Power to the black man is great but what about the black woman? Why can't she have power? WHY? What era are we in, the 1950's? I mean, these characters have cell phones and stuff, but...
Their praise also reminded Anna to keep her man happy or else some young thing or an unhappy wife would be more than eager to snap him up.
WHAT? Maybe this is why I suck at the marriage thing and maybe this really is all my white privilege blinding me to how things really work but I’ve never believed it is a woman's role to work at keeping her man interested, as such insults both the woman and the man in the relationship (i.e.: he’s just a brainless male who will wander if not leashed to the home somehow) I thought, especially now that it's not uncommon for men and women to both work outside the home, marriage was a partnership where both parties work at keeping house, work on their marital relationship, work on being friends and helpmates, and work on their personal selves, as well. Sure, there are plenty of "traditional" partnerships out there but are they really built around the wife keeping her husband happy in order to keep him at home? Is that why she tends to the house and raises children? It's not because she wanted a career in homemaking or that it makes more sense for him to work and her to provide childcare instead of going to work to pay for the same service? If so, we have really not come far at all, have we?
So, anyway, the above quote is shortly followed by some woman mocking a collective group of husbands who go on white-water rafting trips by saying, ...you know men, always pushing to prove their manliness. And another wife chimes in with She’s right...and that especially applies to the ones who just push paper all day. I’ve seen actual studies, [WTF?] then another says, Men are so damn dense. So now we’ve got the stereotypical chicken clatch bashing men because they find their husbands’ pursuits ridiculous. And of course, they get back at these white-water rafting husbands by going on their own trips. They go shopping in some expensive city somewhere in the world and buy a bunch of crap. Because that's just what women do!
Also, all the women at 40 Acres are blonde and beautiful. Because why not? Makes sense, really, what with all black men having a preference for that type.
So, yeah. Black masculinity is a focal point for this story, exploring how it's misunderstood by the entitled, privileged, powerful black males but not by our noble and upstanding protagonist who is a total boyscout and a bit of a dimwit, to boot, but he has to be because otherwise, he might fall prey to the nefarious goings-on at 40 Acres.
Or something.
Regardless, this is not a tale about feminism. No, I didn't expect it to be but I thought maybe, just maybe, there'd be a couple of decent female characters who weren't awful throwbacks to times long gone (not long gone enough, apparently) and such is not the case so just be prepared. Be more prepared than I was, at least.
Then there's the writing style.
This reads like a NA novel. No, really...let's reframe the synopsis, shall we. We're swapping out Martin for Martha and making it female-centric, k?
Martha Grey, a smart, talented black lawyer working out of a storefront in Queens, becomes friendly with a group of some of the most powerful, wealthy, and esteemed black women in America. She’s dazzled by what they’ve accomplished, and they seem to think she has the potential to be as successful as they are. They invite her for a weekend away from it all—no husbands/kids, no cell phones, no talk of business. But far from home and cut off from everyone she loves, she discovers a disturbing secret that challenges some of her deepest convictions…
Still think that sounds like a political thriller? Or does it sound like maybe she's going to learn something about the sex she's about to have for the first time ever despite the fact she had been crazy-intent on saving herself for marriage?
Or! OR! Let me describe the first quarter of the story, again using Martha as the main character. This is seriously what happens in this book, as recounted by me and told with a gender swap:
Martha goes head-to-head with rich, bad boy lawyer Damon...and wins! Afterward, Damon courts Martha’s attentions and she starts hanging out with him and his pack of rich guy friends. Ignoring concerns brought up by her BFFs, Martha follows Damon’s lead so as not to give him and his pack of rich guy friends any reason to think less of her. When Martha begins asking questions, she’s given some fancy alcohol and passes out. Finding out she’d been drugged is just the beginning of her nightmare.
Now change “Martha” to “Martin” and the related pronouns to “she/her” and what does it become? THIS BOOK!
It goes from New Adult fiction to Political thriller and back with the flip of a penis!
AMAZING!
So what I'm getting at is it's a terribly interesting premise, one that should have left me on the edge of my seat with eyes open way too wide in horror/fascination.
However, the story is so clunky and overwritten that it becomes silly and worthy of many an eye-roll.
You know, much like many of the popular suspense/thrillers of today.
Because editing is no longer a thing, apparently.
What is the literary world coming to, I ask you.
You will be super well-hydrated by the end and I will be a huge asshole.
Ok, so, this is pretty much a Hollywood-style revenge fantasy which is great, I like those. I mean, that's the driving force behind vagina dentata tales and such. Revenge! Such stories are evocative and thrilling and I LOVE revenge! It's also billed as a political thriller and while Grisham and Baldacci and them of those ilks grate on my nerves, I can't say I don't occasionally enjoy their stories because, though terribly-written, they can be exciting.
In this novel, a group of affluent black men have created a retreat where they can take back their black man power by because ok, why not. That sounds pretty interesting, actually, despite the vast amounts of ridiculousness that had to be created just to sustain the concept. Whatever. My disbelief is suspended, let's get on with REVENGE!
Only pretend the revenge tale is super-explainy and told by...well, someone like this guy
Yeah.
It sort of kills the tension to have to hear the same stuff re-described over and over again within a page. So that was a big obstacle for me to overcome.
I was also put off by the portrayal of women in this book. Power to the black man is great but what about the black woman? Why can't she have power? WHY? What era are we in, the 1950's? I mean, these characters have cell phones and stuff, but...
Their praise also reminded Anna to keep her man happy or else some young thing or an unhappy wife would be more than eager to snap him up.
WHAT? Maybe this is why I suck at the marriage thing and maybe this really is all my white privilege blinding me to how things really work but I’ve never believed it is a woman's role to work at keeping her man interested, as such insults both the woman and the man in the relationship (i.e.: he’s just a brainless male who will wander if not leashed to the home somehow) I thought, especially now that it's not uncommon for men and women to both work outside the home, marriage was a partnership where both parties work at keeping house, work on their marital relationship, work on being friends and helpmates, and work on their personal selves, as well. Sure, there are plenty of "traditional" partnerships out there but are they really built around the wife keeping her husband happy in order to keep him at home? Is that why she tends to the house and raises children? It's not because she wanted a career in homemaking or that it makes more sense for him to work and her to provide childcare instead of going to work to pay for the same service? If so, we have really not come far at all, have we?
So, anyway, the above quote is shortly followed by some woman mocking a collective group of husbands who go on white-water rafting trips by saying, ...you know men, always pushing to prove their manliness. And another wife chimes in with She’s right...and that especially applies to the ones who just push paper all day. I’ve seen actual studies, [WTF?] then another says, Men are so damn dense. So now we’ve got the stereotypical chicken clatch bashing men because they find their husbands’ pursuits ridiculous. And of course, they get back at these white-water rafting husbands by going on their own trips. They go shopping in some expensive city somewhere in the world and buy a bunch of crap. Because that's just what women do!
Also, all the women at 40 Acres are blonde and beautiful. Because why not? Makes sense, really, what with all black men having a preference for that type.
So, yeah. Black masculinity is a focal point for this story, exploring how it's misunderstood by the entitled, privileged, powerful black males but not by our noble and upstanding protagonist who is a total boyscout and a bit of a dimwit, to boot, but he has to be because otherwise, he might fall prey to the nefarious goings-on at 40 Acres.
Or something.
Regardless, this is not a tale about feminism. No, I didn't expect it to be but I thought maybe, just maybe, there'd be a couple of decent female characters who weren't awful throwbacks to times long gone (not long gone enough, apparently) and such is not the case so just be prepared. Be more prepared than I was, at least.
Then there's the writing style.
This reads like a NA novel. No, really...let's reframe the synopsis, shall we. We're swapping out Martin for Martha and making it female-centric, k?
Martha Grey, a smart, talented black lawyer working out of a storefront in Queens, becomes friendly with a group of some of the most powerful, wealthy, and esteemed black women in America. She’s dazzled by what they’ve accomplished, and they seem to think she has the potential to be as successful as they are. They invite her for a weekend away from it all—no husbands/kids, no cell phones, no talk of business. But far from home and cut off from everyone she loves, she discovers a disturbing secret that challenges some of her deepest convictions…
Still think that sounds like a political thriller? Or does it sound like maybe she's going to learn something about the sex she's about to have for the first time ever despite the fact she had been crazy-intent on saving herself for marriage?
Or! OR! Let me describe the first quarter of the story, again using Martha as the main character. This is seriously what happens in this book, as recounted by me and told with a gender swap:
Martha goes head-to-head with rich, bad boy lawyer Damon...and wins! Afterward, Damon courts Martha’s attentions and she starts hanging out with him and his pack of rich guy friends. Ignoring concerns brought up by her BFFs, Martha follows Damon’s lead so as not to give him and his pack of rich guy friends any reason to think less of her. When Martha begins asking questions, she’s given some fancy alcohol and passes out. Finding out she’d been drugged is just the beginning of her nightmare.
Now change “Martha” to “Martin” and the related pronouns to “she/her” and what does it become? THIS BOOK!
It goes from New Adult fiction to Political thriller and back with the flip of a penis!
AMAZING!
So what I'm getting at is it's a terribly interesting premise, one that should have left me on the edge of my seat with eyes open way too wide in horror/fascination.
However, the story is so clunky and overwritten that it becomes silly and worthy of many an eye-roll.
You know, much like many of the popular suspense/thrillers of today.
Because editing is no longer a thing, apparently.
What is the literary world coming to, I ask you.
June 13, 2018
This was a great story with a great plot and greater characters. The book was so detail and so vivid that you as the reader will feel as though you are there at 40 acres watching the whole story prevail. For humanity purposes I am not sure that I agree with this underground society, however as an African American Woman I do understand. This book gives you a vision of white slavery in lieu of black slavery. I have never read anything like this in my lifetime but I am so glad that I read it, understood it, and received knowledge behind it.
Kudos to the author and all the history that he must have done to put this story together.
It really makes you wonder how many underground societies that just may be going on under our watch!!
Kudos to the author and all the history that he must have done to put this story together.
It really makes you wonder how many underground societies that just may be going on under our watch!!
September 5, 2014
Posted to The Literary Lawyer.ca
A Compelling First Effort - 3.5 Stars
I feel a bit torn over this one. On one hand, I really liked the concept of the novel. The author manages to make a point, avoids being "preachy" while still managing to entertain. Just so the previous comment does not mislead, I do not consider this to be "message fiction". It simply deals with real issues (Slavery and racism) through a plot that it purposely overblown and deeply in the fringes of the most radical of any civil rights movement.
I recently had a discussion with a friend regarding a person deep in the left field of feminism (technically she claims she is not a feminist). If you are interested in an entertaining few minutes, you can check out her views here youtube.com. The point is, like the male culling non-feminist in the link, there is much entertainment value in the fringes of any form of movement.
Plot summary
In all fairness to the author of this novel, he is in no way endorsing any of the insane ideas the antagonists of this novel put forward.
Martin Grey is a successful, African American Lawyer with a passion for civil rights litigation. He and his Jewish business partner have built an up and coming legal practice and are set for great things after a major victory against a big corporation and the city's top lawyer. After his unlikely victory, he finds himself swept up in the company of other titans of their trade, all of whom happen to be black. He soon finds himself invited into their confidence where he learns that some elements of society believe that the best way to heal from the sins of the past is to cleanse ones soul through revenge. Will Martin decide that there is truth amongst the fringe? You will have to read to find out.
The Good
Great Idea
Despite any criticism I have of the novel, the concept was very interesting. I read the novel quickly and was not bored. The story relies on the assumption that the reader is interested in the unlikely. I have seen other reviewers criticise the story for being unrealistic. It might be. Could it happen? Could it be happening right now? I think it is certainly possible. This plot continues to play out all over the world, including right here in North America, on various scales, day in and day out. The unlikely causes the reader to think of what might be likely and to consider what might be the realistic and the proper avenues to deal with injustice and inequality.
The Bad
Almost But Not Quite
While I was taken in by the concept of a society of Black men who wish to persevere the institution of slavery for their own benefit, the writing lacked a certain spark. Overall, I found the prose tended to be simplistic. The story felt like it was a well written, self published novel. The author had a bad habit of stating the obvious. His was good at showing us but then seemed to lose faith in the intelligence of reader and proceeded to explain to us what we just saw. Its like a comedian explaining his jokes to an audience after the laughter subsided.
Final Thoughts
This is not an ordinary thriller and an interesting twist. It may be that the book would have benefited from more stringent and aggressive editing. Regardless, the author has talent and is a good storyteller. If the author continues to write thrillers I will keep my eyes open for his next offering.
Content Advisories
It is difficult to find commentary on the sex/violence/language content of book if you are interested. I make an effort to give you the information so you can make an informed decision before reading. *Disclaimer* I do not take note or count the occurrences of adult language as I read. I am simply giving approximations.
Scale 1 - Lowest 5 - Highest
Sex - 3
There are several scene of sexual encounters. One scene is mildly graphic. There is some sexual discussion between two men and moderately graphic scene depicting a violent rape.
Language - 2
The adult language did not stand out as I was reading. Despite dealing with issue of racism and slavery I do not recall the use of any racially derogatory language nor do I recall much use of any adult language.
Violence - 4
There are several beatings, including several violent whipping. People are kept in captivity and generally treated inhumanely. Violence is a central theme of the book.
A Compelling First Effort - 3.5 Stars
I feel a bit torn over this one. On one hand, I really liked the concept of the novel. The author manages to make a point, avoids being "preachy" while still managing to entertain. Just so the previous comment does not mislead, I do not consider this to be "message fiction". It simply deals with real issues (Slavery and racism) through a plot that it purposely overblown and deeply in the fringes of the most radical of any civil rights movement.
I recently had a discussion with a friend regarding a person deep in the left field of feminism (technically she claims she is not a feminist). If you are interested in an entertaining few minutes, you can check out her views here youtube.com. The point is, like the male culling non-feminist in the link, there is much entertainment value in the fringes of any form of movement.
Plot summary
In all fairness to the author of this novel, he is in no way endorsing any of the insane ideas the antagonists of this novel put forward.
Martin Grey is a successful, African American Lawyer with a passion for civil rights litigation. He and his Jewish business partner have built an up and coming legal practice and are set for great things after a major victory against a big corporation and the city's top lawyer. After his unlikely victory, he finds himself swept up in the company of other titans of their trade, all of whom happen to be black. He soon finds himself invited into their confidence where he learns that some elements of society believe that the best way to heal from the sins of the past is to cleanse ones soul through revenge. Will Martin decide that there is truth amongst the fringe? You will have to read to find out.
The Good
Great Idea
Despite any criticism I have of the novel, the concept was very interesting. I read the novel quickly and was not bored. The story relies on the assumption that the reader is interested in the unlikely. I have seen other reviewers criticise the story for being unrealistic. It might be. Could it happen? Could it be happening right now? I think it is certainly possible. This plot continues to play out all over the world, including right here in North America, on various scales, day in and day out. The unlikely causes the reader to think of what might be likely and to consider what might be the realistic and the proper avenues to deal with injustice and inequality.
The Bad
Almost But Not Quite
While I was taken in by the concept of a society of Black men who wish to persevere the institution of slavery for their own benefit, the writing lacked a certain spark. Overall, I found the prose tended to be simplistic. The story felt like it was a well written, self published novel. The author had a bad habit of stating the obvious. His was good at showing us but then seemed to lose faith in the intelligence of reader and proceeded to explain to us what we just saw. Its like a comedian explaining his jokes to an audience after the laughter subsided.
Final Thoughts
This is not an ordinary thriller and an interesting twist. It may be that the book would have benefited from more stringent and aggressive editing. Regardless, the author has talent and is a good storyteller. If the author continues to write thrillers I will keep my eyes open for his next offering.
Content Advisories
It is difficult to find commentary on the sex/violence/language content of book if you are interested. I make an effort to give you the information so you can make an informed decision before reading. *Disclaimer* I do not take note or count the occurrences of adult language as I read. I am simply giving approximations.
Scale 1 - Lowest 5 - Highest
Sex - 3
There are several scene of sexual encounters. One scene is mildly graphic. There is some sexual discussion between two men and moderately graphic scene depicting a violent rape.
Language - 2
The adult language did not stand out as I was reading. Despite dealing with issue of racism and slavery I do not recall the use of any racially derogatory language nor do I recall much use of any adult language.
Violence - 4
There are several beatings, including several violent whipping. People are kept in captivity and generally treated inhumanely. Violence is a central theme of the book.
October 1, 2015
This was an exciting book. It left me wanting more of the story. Martin Grey was the witty attorney who became the hero both inside and outside of the courtroom. The story begins with Martin representing a client against a giant automaker. It appears the odds were stacked against him until he prevailed in court. After this event, he shows his true character as a person when presented with an invitation of a life time to join powerful men in a secret club that could alter his financial and personal status. On the surface, life seems to be going up for Martin Grey. But, what is hiding in the shadows of the unknown is what makes this novel a thriller. This novel was well written and will leave you wondering, can history repeat itself in reverse? An enjoyable and quick read.
Quote:
"My colleague took an hour and a half to try to convince you of what he claims was in my client's mind. Something we can never know for sure. But, what we do know for sure, what even Mr. Darrell agrees with, is that the video evidence clearly shows that my client, Mr. Watson, was a victim of repeated racial bias. I don't need an hour and half because the truth is plain to see. You know what justice requires of you. Thank you."
Quote:
"My colleague took an hour and a half to try to convince you of what he claims was in my client's mind. Something we can never know for sure. But, what we do know for sure, what even Mr. Darrell agrees with, is that the video evidence clearly shows that my client, Mr. Watson, was a victim of repeated racial bias. I don't need an hour and half because the truth is plain to see. You know what justice requires of you. Thank you."
April 6, 2016
Sometimes, but not very often, we stumble upon a gem previously, and perhaps intentionally, overlooked. A gem murky and raw awaiting its founder to discover its core radiance; that magnificence, that alluring, loud, profound, and appealing luminescence; waiting to come through with care and patience, waiting, like all matters of growth, to be quickly discovered. This is what I found within the overly worked diamond mine of the novel forty acres by screen writer/novelist Dwayne Alexander Smith.
At the start, Forty Acres was a rough read, not complicated, just rough. Its elements, plot, sequence and mechanics screamed newly published writer of this genre (Smith is a screenwriter). The characters were remnants of many we've seen before, and the setting and storyline touched not so subtly on an African-American social/religious organization headed by a charismatic, small stature demigod, both not well received by a plethora of (non-African descendent) Americans. The similarities are immediate unless you're not aware. But therein lies the precious beauty and the gem in the rough.
Smith plays on the subtleties, like an mad scientist who has created a cerebral game of cat and mouse .The novel, a thriller, is about a young Queens attorney who wins a case against a seasoned legal veteran. The story drags along for the first 50-75 pages, setting the stage for what would eventually become a hell of a ride. Martin, the winning young attorney, is invited to attend a "rafting" expedition with a group of powerful and highly respected African-American men. This, as is the hopes of his "sponsor", will lead to membership into what can only be described as a secret society. And so the adventure begins. A private jet, several exaggerated yet colorfully derisive characters, diversion, relocation, river crossings, isolation, and conniving all blend into a cacophony of manipulative events that causes the reader to ask, "Wait... what just happened?" But, as if that is not enough to drive a fully loaded narrative, the author decides that the addition of a reversal of fortune would be ideal to toss into the chronicle. There is a build up to these events and one would not see them if opting not to translate the innuendos.
The author opens the conflict with the gathering at the massive home of Dr. Kasim on the "plantation, " a place in the middle of nowhere flanked by beauty and grandeur; a fantasy locale where every need is met and every call is answered. Smith, for whatever reason, opts not to identify the type of doctor Dr. Kasim is, but alludes to several possibilities. Even the characters are stumped in identifying the areas of the doctor's terminal degree. Smith raises the level of tension between the men, hammering a wedge of doubt between them and building a common cord of discord and distrust, particularly against Martin. Soon the protagonist, Martin, whose wife long had her suspicions about his evasive and overly eager new comrades even before his pensive flight, witnesses the deep and dreadful secret of this multi-acre plot of land and those well-heeled men who are "life-long" members. Slowly, Martin begins the latent connection of the proverbial puzzle, that the "help" are all white, overly accommodating, evasive, and profoundly paranoid. They are automaton. They are broken. They are product; merchandise no greater than fruit plucked from a tree. A few pages deeper into the story and the theme is clear-- vassalege steals, trumps and is the annihilation of privilege. Martin's curiosities expand and his attorney training revs into full gear. From here the story becomes a skating rink of tag. Much happens consequently. The writing takes a slight dive and the story becomes a jumpy array of make believe; sometimes too surreal for even modern television. The story becomes disjointed as if the author is looking for something to thicken the plot and many conflicts that could turn the direction of the story and put the reader on the edge of his seat are quickly and readily solved without the deep plunging drama that one hopes for (this point shows that Smith has a greater comfort for writing for the screen). Yet cleverly he leaves us on the last scene of the novel, asking questions, leaving us dangling, looking for the next chapter that we eagerly await but really secretly hope never materializes; that he lets the story rest in this wrenching uncertainty.
My feelings were mixed. I was entertained and sometimes, unfortunately, disappointed. The author has skills and I rooted for him to apply them expeditiously and with omnipotence, but like an athlete who is facing a seasoned opponent, he held back on well honed skills not wanting to give his all although he was right on the cusp of a knock out. I held a firm position on disliking the novel but found that magical gem within the common stone. I applaud Dwayne Alexander Smith. He left me in a cool mood, but still donning my miners lamp looking for more precious gems. 8/9/2015
At the start, Forty Acres was a rough read, not complicated, just rough. Its elements, plot, sequence and mechanics screamed newly published writer of this genre (Smith is a screenwriter). The characters were remnants of many we've seen before, and the setting and storyline touched not so subtly on an African-American social/religious organization headed by a charismatic, small stature demigod, both not well received by a plethora of (non-African descendent) Americans. The similarities are immediate unless you're not aware. But therein lies the precious beauty and the gem in the rough.
Smith plays on the subtleties, like an mad scientist who has created a cerebral game of cat and mouse .The novel, a thriller, is about a young Queens attorney who wins a case against a seasoned legal veteran. The story drags along for the first 50-75 pages, setting the stage for what would eventually become a hell of a ride. Martin, the winning young attorney, is invited to attend a "rafting" expedition with a group of powerful and highly respected African-American men. This, as is the hopes of his "sponsor", will lead to membership into what can only be described as a secret society. And so the adventure begins. A private jet, several exaggerated yet colorfully derisive characters, diversion, relocation, river crossings, isolation, and conniving all blend into a cacophony of manipulative events that causes the reader to ask, "Wait... what just happened?" But, as if that is not enough to drive a fully loaded narrative, the author decides that the addition of a reversal of fortune would be ideal to toss into the chronicle. There is a build up to these events and one would not see them if opting not to translate the innuendos.
The author opens the conflict with the gathering at the massive home of Dr. Kasim on the "plantation, " a place in the middle of nowhere flanked by beauty and grandeur; a fantasy locale where every need is met and every call is answered. Smith, for whatever reason, opts not to identify the type of doctor Dr. Kasim is, but alludes to several possibilities. Even the characters are stumped in identifying the areas of the doctor's terminal degree. Smith raises the level of tension between the men, hammering a wedge of doubt between them and building a common cord of discord and distrust, particularly against Martin. Soon the protagonist, Martin, whose wife long had her suspicions about his evasive and overly eager new comrades even before his pensive flight, witnesses the deep and dreadful secret of this multi-acre plot of land and those well-heeled men who are "life-long" members. Slowly, Martin begins the latent connection of the proverbial puzzle, that the "help" are all white, overly accommodating, evasive, and profoundly paranoid. They are automaton. They are broken. They are product; merchandise no greater than fruit plucked from a tree. A few pages deeper into the story and the theme is clear-- vassalege steals, trumps and is the annihilation of privilege. Martin's curiosities expand and his attorney training revs into full gear. From here the story becomes a skating rink of tag. Much happens consequently. The writing takes a slight dive and the story becomes a jumpy array of make believe; sometimes too surreal for even modern television. The story becomes disjointed as if the author is looking for something to thicken the plot and many conflicts that could turn the direction of the story and put the reader on the edge of his seat are quickly and readily solved without the deep plunging drama that one hopes for (this point shows that Smith has a greater comfort for writing for the screen). Yet cleverly he leaves us on the last scene of the novel, asking questions, leaving us dangling, looking for the next chapter that we eagerly await but really secretly hope never materializes; that he lets the story rest in this wrenching uncertainty.
My feelings were mixed. I was entertained and sometimes, unfortunately, disappointed. The author has skills and I rooted for him to apply them expeditiously and with omnipotence, but like an athlete who is facing a seasoned opponent, he held back on well honed skills not wanting to give his all although he was right on the cusp of a knock out. I held a firm position on disliking the novel but found that magical gem within the common stone. I applaud Dwayne Alexander Smith. He left me in a cool mood, but still donning my miners lamp looking for more precious gems. 8/9/2015
January 28, 2015
Could not finish. Got to page 193 because I really wanted to see if this was going to get any better, but sadly it just started turning more and more into a roll-my-eyes kind of joke.
The book is about a group of affluent and influential black men who under the tutelage of Dr. Kasim have created a secret hideaway mansion where white people are the slaves. Right away I thought, 'Wow! How daring. This should make for some thought-provoking discussion and reflection.' Well, that was not to be the case. The more I read the more I kept wondering if I was supposed to take it seriously or not. I very rarely look at reviews before finishing the book but I felt like I had too to see if the book was going to take a turn for the better. One review mentioned that in an interview with the author, he said his book was supposed to be a beach read. A beach read? With this kind of topic? What a waste to not take such a subject to a completely different level. Well, with this knowledge now in hand, I tried to read it as such. But it just kept getting more and more ridiculous as the story went along.
Some thoughts:
--The plot, while intriguing, is implausible. There is no way someone could get away with having such a large estate, hidden away, with its own landing strip, and not one person be aware of what's going on inside. Too many people would be required to keep this secret quiet. What about the police in the community? Such a large estate and no one wonders what goes on in there? The missing people would have family wonder about them. I find it hard to believe that this could be pulled off.
--Such a secret society of black men who are doing something that's not only illegal but inhumane want Martin to be a member of their group so bad that before asking him to join they've already dished out $30K to do a thourough investigation on him? And they slip him something in his drink on the plane ride over when Martin starts to question the direction of the sun outside his plane window. Is Martin really such an asset to their little group that they have to drug him in order to get him to Forty Acres (the name of Dr. Kasim's plantation/mansion)?
--The first roll of the eyes came when the book starts going into detail about all the affluence, luxuries, qualities that these men possess. All the wives are beautiful. All the homes, the clothes, the food, the drinks, everything is the best of the best. I expect this type of over-the-top description from a YA book or a cheesy romance/contemporary fluff book, but I wasn't expecting to read this in a book that I was hoping would knock me off my socks.
--Lots of cliches in the book. Martin's best friend and law partner is a white and Jewish. From the start of the book, Martin starts excluding Glen because he doesn't fit in with his new set of buddies.
Martin's wife is pregnant which let's us know that there's more at stake for Martin now if he doesn't join this secret society.
--The POV changes throughout the chapters, so why is it that when we get to Alice's (white slave girl) chapter she is till referring to Martin as Master Grey? This is when the author should have taken the opportunity to show us the fear, the confusion, the urgency to escape, even the hate towards her captors, but instead we get Alice wondering about the difference in Master Grey from her other Masters.
--Okay, now I get to the sex scenes. Nope. Couldn't do it. the whole scene was so laughable and ludricrous. (My aim is to please my Master. Did I do something wrong? Are you enjoying what I'm doing? Would my Master like me to spend the night with him?) Are these willing participants? Cause that's what I was getting from this scene. There's also a male sex slave who is also shown aiming to please his Master. To add to the silliness of it all, Martin (Master Grey, the good guy) is obviously excited by it all but only dry humps his slave because he does not want to do her no harm and wants to be faithful to his wife, only leaving poor Alice, the slave confused about why Master Grey won't do her.
I was highly disappointed by this book. I hope I did not offend anyone with this review but it was meant to be as ridiculous as the the execution of this book.
The book is about a group of affluent and influential black men who under the tutelage of Dr. Kasim have created a secret hideaway mansion where white people are the slaves. Right away I thought, 'Wow! How daring. This should make for some thought-provoking discussion and reflection.' Well, that was not to be the case. The more I read the more I kept wondering if I was supposed to take it seriously or not. I very rarely look at reviews before finishing the book but I felt like I had too to see if the book was going to take a turn for the better. One review mentioned that in an interview with the author, he said his book was supposed to be a beach read. A beach read? With this kind of topic? What a waste to not take such a subject to a completely different level. Well, with this knowledge now in hand, I tried to read it as such. But it just kept getting more and more ridiculous as the story went along.
Some thoughts:
--The plot, while intriguing, is implausible. There is no way someone could get away with having such a large estate, hidden away, with its own landing strip, and not one person be aware of what's going on inside. Too many people would be required to keep this secret quiet. What about the police in the community? Such a large estate and no one wonders what goes on in there? The missing people would have family wonder about them. I find it hard to believe that this could be pulled off.
--Such a secret society of black men who are doing something that's not only illegal but inhumane want Martin to be a member of their group so bad that before asking him to join they've already dished out $30K to do a thourough investigation on him? And they slip him something in his drink on the plane ride over when Martin starts to question the direction of the sun outside his plane window. Is Martin really such an asset to their little group that they have to drug him in order to get him to Forty Acres (the name of Dr. Kasim's plantation/mansion)?
--The first roll of the eyes came when the book starts going into detail about all the affluence, luxuries, qualities that these men possess. All the wives are beautiful. All the homes, the clothes, the food, the drinks, everything is the best of the best. I expect this type of over-the-top description from a YA book or a cheesy romance/contemporary fluff book, but I wasn't expecting to read this in a book that I was hoping would knock me off my socks.
--Lots of cliches in the book. Martin's best friend and law partner is a white and Jewish. From the start of the book, Martin starts excluding Glen because he doesn't fit in with his new set of buddies.
Martin's wife is pregnant which let's us know that there's more at stake for Martin now if he doesn't join this secret society.
--The POV changes throughout the chapters, so why is it that when we get to Alice's (white slave girl) chapter she is till referring to Martin as Master Grey? This is when the author should have taken the opportunity to show us the fear, the confusion, the urgency to escape, even the hate towards her captors, but instead we get Alice wondering about the difference in Master Grey from her other Masters.
--Okay, now I get to the sex scenes. Nope. Couldn't do it. the whole scene was so laughable and ludricrous. (My aim is to please my Master. Did I do something wrong? Are you enjoying what I'm doing? Would my Master like me to spend the night with him?) Are these willing participants? Cause that's what I was getting from this scene. There's also a male sex slave who is also shown aiming to please his Master. To add to the silliness of it all, Martin (Master Grey, the good guy) is obviously excited by it all but only dry humps his slave because he does not want to do her no harm and wants to be faithful to his wife, only leaving poor Alice, the slave confused about why Master Grey won't do her.
I was highly disappointed by this book. I hope I did not offend anyone with this review but it was meant to be as ridiculous as the the execution of this book.
December 21, 2014
Two wrongs don't make a right but it damn sure makes a statement. The secret society that took place on forty acres led by Dr. Kasim was a black man's Utopia that had everything any one could want or possibly need. Every detail was in order to fill a black man's mental, physical or sexual need and security was tight so in order that there was protocol for any possible scenario. What they didn't expect was the conscious of Martin Grey a new inductee in this secret society.
This page turner had me cursing out loud, second guessing the moves of the characters and almost afraid to turn the next page. This thriller moves like a movie and kept me interested to the very end!
This page turner had me cursing out loud, second guessing the moves of the characters and almost afraid to turn the next page. This thriller moves like a movie and kept me interested to the very end!
November 25, 2014
I am shocked at all the reviews praising the fast pace of this novel- absolutely flabbergasted. In the famous words of Mugatu, "I feel like I'm taking crazy pills!" This book is SO SLOW. Perhaps part of the problem with the pacing is that it is also extremely predictable, and despite this, the author still feels the need to try to draw things out, tiptoeing around obvious information, in an attempt to add suspense. Example- at one point a woman is thinking about this surprising news she simply can't wait to tell her husband. You know and I know that there is a 99% chance that this news is that she's pregnant. Instead of just coming out and saying this, there are paragraphs upon paragraphs of filler, hinting at what it could be, suggesting what might be going on, eluding to some big news, even going as far as to describe the pregnancy test itself, before finally just saying, "Yup, pregnant." I found myself repeatedly saying, "Yeah, I know!" and just hoping to get on with the story.
There are odd details sprinkled throughout the story that do nothing except add length. I don't need to know the dimensions of someone's TV screen or that you envision your husband on the couch "eating chips."
The narration is also terrible. Aside from the dialogue, it is read with no emotion and sounds like someone reading a lecture from note cards.
Martin is just a complete idiot. His turning point near the end when he decides to rewrite his entire plan is completely illogical and only written in to create more "drama."
I couldn't wait for this book to be over and not because I was uncomfortable with the content. I agree with everyone else in the respect that the subject matter is quite horrifying and it is intended to stir up some powerful emotions. The delivery just missed the mark for me and I spent the entire time annoyed that it wasn't presented as well as it could have been.
There are odd details sprinkled throughout the story that do nothing except add length. I don't need to know the dimensions of someone's TV screen or that you envision your husband on the couch "eating chips."
The narration is also terrible. Aside from the dialogue, it is read with no emotion and sounds like someone reading a lecture from note cards.
Martin is just a complete idiot. His turning point near the end when he decides to rewrite his entire plan is completely illogical and only written in to create more "drama."
I couldn't wait for this book to be over and not because I was uncomfortable with the content. I agree with everyone else in the respect that the subject matter is quite horrifying and it is intended to stir up some powerful emotions. The delivery just missed the mark for me and I spent the entire time annoyed that it wasn't presented as well as it could have been.
May 22, 2016
I received an ARC of this novel via the publisher and NetGalley, in exchange for an honest review, thanks
It's SO nice to finally read a book that's a bit different to a lot of other novels being published at the moment, Forty Acres, for me, delivered a very exciting and unique read, one of the more memorable reads of 2014.
Martin Grey is an up and coming lawyer, he is invited (rather cleverly) to come along for a weekend trip away that he considers to be all about male bonding and white water rafting, it's a men only invite event, and it's a black African-American only invite also. Much to Martin's surprise (and being drugged en route via a drink) he finds himself nowhere near a white water rafting campsite but instead arriving at a luxurious "mens country club" of sorts, but there is something different about this one, something that sits not quite right with Martin.
It's "staffed" purely by white personnel, waiting hand and foot and meeting EVERY need of the black African-American guests invited to this exclusive lodge. Quickly the mentality of wiping out years of anger and suppression and "doing our black ancestors proud" is pushed upon Martin, but he's not buying it, and he has good reason not to, he's a smart man, a very clever and astute and ethical man. That's not going to go down too well in this place.
The book has a huge shock factor as the tables are reversed and we see the white "slaves" being put through horrific forced acts of varying nature, some of it at times seems quite unbelievable and almost too far-fetched, but it's not really, it's not so different from what black slavery was all about in those dark days long ago.
So the tables are turned, but it gets sinister and more and more disturbing as Martin tries to navigate his way through this well established group of men, the rules of the "club" and get home in one piece, preferably alive.
I think this book will be a popular read with book clubs, it's ripe for discussion and also for some controversy, it will raise some eyebrows, but it's thrilling and it's really got something different that I really just loved. Some of the scenes are very graphic and disturbing, so it's not for the easily offended but by golly it's a darn good read.
Dwayne Alexander Smith has done an outstanding job with this, his debut novel, no doubt it will be a huge success. It's got all the right elements that a great novel should have.
I read it quickly and turned the pages eager for more, I was fascinated with how Martin was going to deal with his predicament and still retain his own dignity. Did he manage to do that? You will have to read the book to find out. But put this one on your reading list as I think a lot of people are going to be talking about this book from one perspective or another, don't miss out.
It's SO nice to finally read a book that's a bit different to a lot of other novels being published at the moment, Forty Acres, for me, delivered a very exciting and unique read, one of the more memorable reads of 2014.
Martin Grey is an up and coming lawyer, he is invited (rather cleverly) to come along for a weekend trip away that he considers to be all about male bonding and white water rafting, it's a men only invite event, and it's a black African-American only invite also. Much to Martin's surprise (and being drugged en route via a drink) he finds himself nowhere near a white water rafting campsite but instead arriving at a luxurious "mens country club" of sorts, but there is something different about this one, something that sits not quite right with Martin.
It's "staffed" purely by white personnel, waiting hand and foot and meeting EVERY need of the black African-American guests invited to this exclusive lodge. Quickly the mentality of wiping out years of anger and suppression and "doing our black ancestors proud" is pushed upon Martin, but he's not buying it, and he has good reason not to, he's a smart man, a very clever and astute and ethical man. That's not going to go down too well in this place.
The book has a huge shock factor as the tables are reversed and we see the white "slaves" being put through horrific forced acts of varying nature, some of it at times seems quite unbelievable and almost too far-fetched, but it's not really, it's not so different from what black slavery was all about in those dark days long ago.
So the tables are turned, but it gets sinister and more and more disturbing as Martin tries to navigate his way through this well established group of men, the rules of the "club" and get home in one piece, preferably alive.
I think this book will be a popular read with book clubs, it's ripe for discussion and also for some controversy, it will raise some eyebrows, but it's thrilling and it's really got something different that I really just loved. Some of the scenes are very graphic and disturbing, so it's not for the easily offended but by golly it's a darn good read.
Dwayne Alexander Smith has done an outstanding job with this, his debut novel, no doubt it will be a huge success. It's got all the right elements that a great novel should have.
I read it quickly and turned the pages eager for more, I was fascinated with how Martin was going to deal with his predicament and still retain his own dignity. Did he manage to do that? You will have to read the book to find out. But put this one on your reading list as I think a lot of people are going to be talking about this book from one perspective or another, don't miss out.
October 30, 2014
This was a great read. This book kept you intrigued wondering what was going to happen next, even when you thought you already knew. The author did a great job of adding enough twist to the story line.
March 8, 2018
So, beginning of the book did not capture my attention. However, shortly after the trial and the relationships started to develop I was hooked. Martin our protagonist keeps getting into situations while sometimes far-fetched made you constantly think “what would I have done”. Once you start book it’s difficult to put down.
May 18, 2018
This has a fantastic concept not fully executed. I'd give it 3.75 stars.
November 20, 2014
Dwayne Alexander Smith has penned what might be the best read of the year! Forty Acres is a nail-biting, edge-of-your-seat kind of read that will leave you thirsty for more. This is the type of book that readers wish for and writers wish they'd thought of. An absolutely brilliant read!! Kudos to Mr. Smith!
Adrienne Thompson
Author of See Me
Adrienne Thompson
Author of See Me
January 15, 2015
This was a thriller that I had to pull an all-nighter on. I wouldn't want to be Martin Grey. The world won't be ready for this to hit the big screen any time soon, especially not with all the protesting currently going on. lol..
February 9, 2025
A bit of a revenge thriller for African Americans. It was good for what it was. Caveat, thrillers are fine every once in a while, but are not my genre. The writing wasn't incredible. Smith's sense of love, lust and romance left me a bit wanting. I have added himbo to the category here for the very male perspective devoid of any female descriptions besides how beautiful they are and descriptions of their bodies. To imply that was the point of the plot, certain people are just things, I'd say that Smith made no distinctions in his descriptions of females and his way too long rumination on their perfect bodies, all descriptions similar, wives, and involuntary workers. Sigh. But in truth, I listened to the last five hours of the audiobook straight through. I had to see how this ended. I'd say that was a mission accomplished for the author. Definitely a fast moving thriller! However, you have to look really hard for some sort of message. Other than turning the tables on who is dominant in society, there were no real depth to this book. A cliche fest. In my view its primary value is as a thriller.
Almost 4ish Stars
Listened to the audiobook. Andre Blake started out a little wooden but got better as the book went on. I'm not sure if it was because of the writing or the narrator. But he was good, not great.
Almost 4ish Stars
Listened to the audiobook. Andre Blake started out a little wooden but got better as the book went on. I'm not sure if it was because of the writing or the narrator. But he was good, not great.
February 16, 2014
This book is a top-notch thriller! Tension builds from page 1 and will keep your heart rate high until the end. If you enjoy thrillers, do yourself a favor and avoid reading detailed reviews of Forty Acres by Dwayne Alexander Smith because spoilers abound. For those who would enjoy a "spoiler free" summary of this excellent book, which will be released in July 2014, the first couple of paragraphs of the publisher's summary are copied below:
"What if overcoming the legacy of American slavery meant bringing back that very institution? A young black attorney is thrown headlong into controversial issues of race and power in this page-turning and provocative new novel.
Martin Grey, a smart, talented black lawyer working out of a storefront in Queens, becomes friendly with a group of some of the most powerful, wealthy, and esteemed black men in America. He’s dazzled by what they’ve accomplished, and they seem to think he has the potential to be as successful as they are. They invite him for a weekend away from it all—no wives, no cell phones, no talk of business. But far from home and cut off from everyone he loves, he discovers a disturbing secret that challenges some of his deepest convictions…"
"What if overcoming the legacy of American slavery meant bringing back that very institution? A young black attorney is thrown headlong into controversial issues of race and power in this page-turning and provocative new novel.
Martin Grey, a smart, talented black lawyer working out of a storefront in Queens, becomes friendly with a group of some of the most powerful, wealthy, and esteemed black men in America. He’s dazzled by what they’ve accomplished, and they seem to think he has the potential to be as successful as they are. They invite him for a weekend away from it all—no wives, no cell phones, no talk of business. But far from home and cut off from everyone he loves, he discovers a disturbing secret that challenges some of his deepest convictions…"
January 3, 2015
I absolutely loved FORTY ACRES. The novel made me think a lot about race, power, money, and history. I could NOT put the book down to save my life! I found myself reading when I woke up, while brushing my teeth, during breakfast, as I walked to the bus stop, on the bus, walking to work, during my lunch break! I was even reading during worship time at my church's watch night service!!!! Dwayne Alexander Smith's writing kept me so intrigued. The plot is interesting, the subject matter is thought provoking, the characters are special. I hate to be premature with my assessments, but I will say that I foresee myself becoming a fan of Smith's writing. I can't wait to explore his other work.
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March 17, 2016I really didn't care much for the revenge fantasy. And there was not enough back story to understand their motivation to do this. A story about how these African-Americans became successful and how they were able to parlay their wealth into another kind of vengeance (like taking over someone's empire, etc.) would have been much more interesting and realistic to me.
October 11, 2022
* I read this book over a week ago and just had to sit with it before I could even start writing a review because wow. I’ll put the synopsis down below as always, but I do think the synopsis gives too much of the story away!
*I thought this book was phenomenal and if I could’ve read this in one day, I would have. This book felt like a Jordan Peele movie in book form (definitely had some “Get Out” vibes). I, as the reader, felt so unsettled and uncomfortable the whole time but that’s the point! I love when an author can so vividly bring a book to life that it feels like I’m watching a movie in my head and I truly did. There are a handful of men at the center of the story, but each of them felt so individual. I think great character building is especially nice to see in a thriller!
*I’ll be honest, the ending wasn’t my absolute favorite, but I thought this book was so good I had to give it five stars anyway! I don’t think this is a book for everyone. It’s definitely not your typical mystery/thriller. But I thought what it did was so smart and I need Jordan Peele to make this into a movie!! I’ve already started casting it in my head😆
*I thought this book was phenomenal and if I could’ve read this in one day, I would have. This book felt like a Jordan Peele movie in book form (definitely had some “Get Out” vibes). I, as the reader, felt so unsettled and uncomfortable the whole time but that’s the point! I love when an author can so vividly bring a book to life that it feels like I’m watching a movie in my head and I truly did. There are a handful of men at the center of the story, but each of them felt so individual. I think great character building is especially nice to see in a thriller!
*I’ll be honest, the ending wasn’t my absolute favorite, but I thought this book was so good I had to give it five stars anyway! I don’t think this is a book for everyone. It’s definitely not your typical mystery/thriller. But I thought what it did was so smart and I need Jordan Peele to make this into a movie!! I’ve already started casting it in my head😆
February 24, 2015
Quick but intense read! What a thought provoking and unusual plot. This would make a good book for discussion. Loved the protagonist. A nightmarish thriller.
June 25, 2014
Although not ostensibly classified as a crime book, I was very keen to include this title as I believe that there are enough elements to fulfil the best of both genres; crime thriller and contemporary American fiction. Drawing on the theme of the continuing calls in present day America for some kind of reparation for the heinous period of American slavery, and the resonance of the falsely promised ‘forty acres and a mule’ for the emancipated slaves, Smith has constructed one of the most thought-provoking novels, with all the essential elements of a thriller, that it has been my pleasure to read for some time.
Martin Grey, a small time African American lawyer, wins a distinctly high profile court case up against a powerful and media savvy prosecution lawyer, Damon Darrell, finds himself quickly, yet mysteriously enfolded into Darrell’s immediate circle. This circle contains a small cabal of some of the most influential and successful black figures in society, and Martin, basking in the honour of being made an intimate of such a group, quickly forms an allegiance with them, despite certain misgivings when called upon to perform a strange act of initiation. Grey is then invited on a weekend of outdoor pursuits; a previous weekend of which resulted in the less than fully explained death of a former member of the group. As Martin witnesses the strange and disturbing events at the weekend retreat of ‘Forty Acres’, we, along with him, begin to bear witness to the twisted and insidiously violent events within its walls, all in the name of seeking vengeance for the sins of America’s past. Through the attempted manipulation of Martin by the cabal, and his refusal to simply see the issues raised in black and white (his name is Grey after all), he finds his highly developed moral barometer is increasingly threatened both mentally and physically…
This is not an easy read, being at times brutal and uncompromising in some of its more violent scenes. There is also an incredibly surprising and shocking reveal, as to the activities that take place within the grounds of the mysterious ‘Forty Acres’, that really pushes the morality issue to the fore. It is also a book that throws up a series of extremely troubling moral and ethical dilemmas, but at the same time steadfastly reminding the reader of the immoral period of slavery and the repercussions of this for generations of black Americans. I think this is most certainly a book that will leave readers with differing opinions and perceptions, and reading this as a white British person (with our own shady involvement in the slavery period) I would be interested to see how say, a white American or African American would perceive the issues raised. There were certainly periods of the book that challenged my own moral sense, and by taking some arguments to the most extreme degree, I found my views were increasingly in line with Martin’s as the book progressed. I think that the book was powerfully effective in highlighting the dangers of extreme beliefs whether they be affiliated with race, gender or religion, but equally how persecution of a particular group of exploited people is so easily ignored and not punished and can resonate through generations.
Smith keeps a tight rein on the build up of tension throughout, slowly accelerating the pace until the breathless denouement with Martin, and those closest to him, in imminent peril, so this more than qualifies the book as a compelling thriller. More importantly though, although not a comfortable read, the book consistently raises interesting and thorny issues in both its narrative and themes. I always enjoy books that challenge the complacency of any reader, and Forty Acres certainly achieves this. If, like me, you want a book that gets you talking, and results in differences of opinion, than this is certainly the book for you. I guarantee it will make you think, and stay in your head some time after you’ve read it. That’s the sign of a good book. Forty Acres more than fits the bill.
Martin Grey, a small time African American lawyer, wins a distinctly high profile court case up against a powerful and media savvy prosecution lawyer, Damon Darrell, finds himself quickly, yet mysteriously enfolded into Darrell’s immediate circle. This circle contains a small cabal of some of the most influential and successful black figures in society, and Martin, basking in the honour of being made an intimate of such a group, quickly forms an allegiance with them, despite certain misgivings when called upon to perform a strange act of initiation. Grey is then invited on a weekend of outdoor pursuits; a previous weekend of which resulted in the less than fully explained death of a former member of the group. As Martin witnesses the strange and disturbing events at the weekend retreat of ‘Forty Acres’, we, along with him, begin to bear witness to the twisted and insidiously violent events within its walls, all in the name of seeking vengeance for the sins of America’s past. Through the attempted manipulation of Martin by the cabal, and his refusal to simply see the issues raised in black and white (his name is Grey after all), he finds his highly developed moral barometer is increasingly threatened both mentally and physically…
This is not an easy read, being at times brutal and uncompromising in some of its more violent scenes. There is also an incredibly surprising and shocking reveal, as to the activities that take place within the grounds of the mysterious ‘Forty Acres’, that really pushes the morality issue to the fore. It is also a book that throws up a series of extremely troubling moral and ethical dilemmas, but at the same time steadfastly reminding the reader of the immoral period of slavery and the repercussions of this for generations of black Americans. I think this is most certainly a book that will leave readers with differing opinions and perceptions, and reading this as a white British person (with our own shady involvement in the slavery period) I would be interested to see how say, a white American or African American would perceive the issues raised. There were certainly periods of the book that challenged my own moral sense, and by taking some arguments to the most extreme degree, I found my views were increasingly in line with Martin’s as the book progressed. I think that the book was powerfully effective in highlighting the dangers of extreme beliefs whether they be affiliated with race, gender or religion, but equally how persecution of a particular group of exploited people is so easily ignored and not punished and can resonate through generations.
Smith keeps a tight rein on the build up of tension throughout, slowly accelerating the pace until the breathless denouement with Martin, and those closest to him, in imminent peril, so this more than qualifies the book as a compelling thriller. More importantly though, although not a comfortable read, the book consistently raises interesting and thorny issues in both its narrative and themes. I always enjoy books that challenge the complacency of any reader, and Forty Acres certainly achieves this. If, like me, you want a book that gets you talking, and results in differences of opinion, than this is certainly the book for you. I guarantee it will make you think, and stay in your head some time after you’ve read it. That’s the sign of a good book. Forty Acres more than fits the bill.
June 30, 2014
Forty Acres – Brilliant
Before I begin I too would like to thank Mr Bill Teitler for encouraging Dwayne Alexander Smith to complete the manuscript which became Forty Acres, without it this brilliant thriller may still be sat in a desk draw. This is the debut novel of Dwayne Alexander Smith, an American screenwriter and now with Forty Acres; novelist.
If you think of American white supremacists you automatically think of them with their compounds out in the woods and forests especially in what had been the confederate states. If you do not fit in to their purview then you are not welcome and more than likely not going to get out of the compound alive. What would the world say if the Afro-Caribbean in the USA were to do something similar? Uproar, violent attacks on them, for separating themselves off from the rest of America? Whatever they did many would sit in judgement up on them.
Martin Grey is a young black lawyer who, with his partner, work out of a shop front in Queens, New York. He is currently a star and talked about as he has just defeated the legendary black lawyer Damon Darrell in a class action, race discrimination case. He really is the talk of New York legal circles and beyond. Damon after the case invites Martin to a dinner party where he introduces him to a lot of influential black business men. This is the first of many introductions that could make his legal practice grow and expand, move in to a brave new world.
As he gets on with his new circle of friends he is invited away for a weekend of relaxing and white water rafting. When he gets to where they are camping it is not quite what he is expecting, no tents but what is an old southern colonial house, more Charleston than modern America, in the middle of nowhere, the only neighbours are the animals that live in the forest.
What he discovers at Forty Acres challenges his convictions to the core and at the same time could also bring around his early demise from this world. Here the black man is the master and the slaves are the white descendants of slave owners and traders. Where violence against the white slave is accepted and nobody in the outside world knows what happens at Forty Acres.
Will Martin Grey be able to escape the heavily guarded compound and get away alive to tell the outside world about Forty Acres. Will he be able to save the white slaves while commiting his black brothers to punishment? What would his black brothers do? Treat him as a traitor and kill him? One thing was clear not everyone is going to get out alive.
Dwayne Alexander Smith has written an exceptional novel of rage and compassion, trust and betrayal. This really is a thought provoking novel which challenges your interpretation of history and also asks the question of what would you do? You really do question yourself about right and wrong.
This is a brilliant new voice who has given the world an excellent thriller that builds and goes from strength to strength, which is both brilliant and scary at the same time. I loved the challenge where my perceptions of right and wrong were constantly challenged all the way through to the last sentence.
Forty Acres is a brilliant and stunning new thriller that will delight all the way to the end. A thriller that will leave you thinking well after you finish.
Before I begin I too would like to thank Mr Bill Teitler for encouraging Dwayne Alexander Smith to complete the manuscript which became Forty Acres, without it this brilliant thriller may still be sat in a desk draw. This is the debut novel of Dwayne Alexander Smith, an American screenwriter and now with Forty Acres; novelist.
If you think of American white supremacists you automatically think of them with their compounds out in the woods and forests especially in what had been the confederate states. If you do not fit in to their purview then you are not welcome and more than likely not going to get out of the compound alive. What would the world say if the Afro-Caribbean in the USA were to do something similar? Uproar, violent attacks on them, for separating themselves off from the rest of America? Whatever they did many would sit in judgement up on them.
Martin Grey is a young black lawyer who, with his partner, work out of a shop front in Queens, New York. He is currently a star and talked about as he has just defeated the legendary black lawyer Damon Darrell in a class action, race discrimination case. He really is the talk of New York legal circles and beyond. Damon after the case invites Martin to a dinner party where he introduces him to a lot of influential black business men. This is the first of many introductions that could make his legal practice grow and expand, move in to a brave new world.
As he gets on with his new circle of friends he is invited away for a weekend of relaxing and white water rafting. When he gets to where they are camping it is not quite what he is expecting, no tents but what is an old southern colonial house, more Charleston than modern America, in the middle of nowhere, the only neighbours are the animals that live in the forest.
What he discovers at Forty Acres challenges his convictions to the core and at the same time could also bring around his early demise from this world. Here the black man is the master and the slaves are the white descendants of slave owners and traders. Where violence against the white slave is accepted and nobody in the outside world knows what happens at Forty Acres.
Will Martin Grey be able to escape the heavily guarded compound and get away alive to tell the outside world about Forty Acres. Will he be able to save the white slaves while commiting his black brothers to punishment? What would his black brothers do? Treat him as a traitor and kill him? One thing was clear not everyone is going to get out alive.
Dwayne Alexander Smith has written an exceptional novel of rage and compassion, trust and betrayal. This really is a thought provoking novel which challenges your interpretation of history and also asks the question of what would you do? You really do question yourself about right and wrong.
This is a brilliant new voice who has given the world an excellent thriller that builds and goes from strength to strength, which is both brilliant and scary at the same time. I loved the challenge where my perceptions of right and wrong were constantly challenged all the way through to the last sentence.
Forty Acres is a brilliant and stunning new thriller that will delight all the way to the end. A thriller that will leave you thinking well after you finish.
May 25, 2014
“Forty Acres” by Dwayne Alexander Smith, published by Atria Books.
Category – Mystery/Thriller Publication Date – July 01, 2014
This book may be the most controversial book of the year, a book that not only provides the reader with a good mystery but one that also takes a look at racial history.
Martin Grey is a lawyer involved in a case that pits him up against one of the best trial lawyers in the country. He manages to win the case and is invited to join a very exclusive club. An African-American club that is very secretive. Martin is invited to join a group of his peers for an outing, an outing that he knows nothing about and is actually drugged so that he does not know where he is going. He finds himself in a palatial estate deep in the woods that is built like a fortress and protected by armed guards. He begins to have doubts about the organization when he notices that all the hired help are Caucasian.
Martin now realizes he is being asked to join a racist group that is governed by the philosophy that the African-American has been programmed to accept a subservient role in society and that they can better themselves by reversing the roles. In fact, the servants have been handpicked being the offspring of former slave owners and slave traders. Martin sees this is wrong and no better than what has happened in past history but he is unable to contact the outside world and has no idea where he is located. He is asked to take part in an initiation rite that causes him to do something morally reprehensible.
A book that delves into the wrongs of past slavery, modern day racism, and the tremendous wrong that is possible when incredible power is put into the wrong hands.
Category – Mystery/Thriller Publication Date – July 01, 2014
This book may be the most controversial book of the year, a book that not only provides the reader with a good mystery but one that also takes a look at racial history.
Martin Grey is a lawyer involved in a case that pits him up against one of the best trial lawyers in the country. He manages to win the case and is invited to join a very exclusive club. An African-American club that is very secretive. Martin is invited to join a group of his peers for an outing, an outing that he knows nothing about and is actually drugged so that he does not know where he is going. He finds himself in a palatial estate deep in the woods that is built like a fortress and protected by armed guards. He begins to have doubts about the organization when he notices that all the hired help are Caucasian.
Martin now realizes he is being asked to join a racist group that is governed by the philosophy that the African-American has been programmed to accept a subservient role in society and that they can better themselves by reversing the roles. In fact, the servants have been handpicked being the offspring of former slave owners and slave traders. Martin sees this is wrong and no better than what has happened in past history but he is unable to contact the outside world and has no idea where he is located. He is asked to take part in an initiation rite that causes him to do something morally reprehensible.
A book that delves into the wrongs of past slavery, modern day racism, and the tremendous wrong that is possible when incredible power is put into the wrong hands.
January 4, 2019
3.5 Honestly the concept of what was happening in this book was so disturbing I almost stopped reading, but it was well written, fast paced and I enjoyed it. Glad I preserved, but it definitely makes you wonder if it is based on truth.
May 16, 2018
Review to come. 4.5 stars. I have issues with ending/closure.
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