This book is actually a very mixed bag, but I still ended up giving it three out of five stars. But maybe I'm just a nice guy. Or maybe I just plain love, love, love, and am always rooting for, various interpretations of Star Trek to actually be... you know... good.
Unfortunately however, the first half of this book reads like typical "Trekker" or "Trekkie" fan fiction, with leisurely, even somewhat classic soap opera-style pacing. The author also seems to have gone to considerable trouble and verbiage to introduce a number of peripheral characters that really don't seem all that necessary, relevant, or even especially interesting from the outset.
As a result, I really had to push myself to plod dutifully ahead, and strenuously hurdle a number of curiously unnecessary pseudo-literary landmines to finally get to the very end of J.M. Dillard's 'The Lost Years' - which in the second half, thankfully, finally begins to take on a readily discernible Star Trek: The Original Series format, flavor, and quality.
The biggest problem for yours truly was the author's periodic inclusion (mostly in the first half) of terribly biased, so-called "feminist" (perhaps even reverse-sexist) oriented social justice style themes, dialog, and commentary that I sincerely doubt would have ever made it past the initial draft stages had this particular story been subjected to the usual, quite rigorous standards of the NBC Television Network, and especially Star Trek's creator, Gene Roddenberry.
Yes, the "Great Bird of the Galaxy," as the much celebrated Mr. Roddenberry became widely known (especially when the show began to dramatically increase in popularity in the early to mid 1970s), was himself constantly attempting to sneak his sometimes thinly veiled social and political commentary past 1960s era Network censors, but I doubt that even he would have let a story like this one pass without at least giving it a good, thorough rewrite - which is in fact what he anonymously did to most of the scripts submitted for at least the first year and a half of the production of the series.
Take the following for example:
"He [one of the easily confused bad guys of the piece] owed the Djanai gratitude for being a patriarchy, one that the Empire decided would relate better to a male authority figure than a female one—a fact which enabled him to beat out several better-qualified female candidates for the job."
Whoa! Now THAT'S rather harsh, one would think. Maybe even just a bit too shamelessly (or perhaps just obliviously) obvious and downright blatant, even. I mean, isn't that kind of... you know... pathetically one or two-dimensional, cardboard cutout villain type thinking right there? But then, there's also this:
"... although in the course of the briefing, it became clear that Olmsted’s political views were nowhere near as liberal as a professor’s. Obviously brilliant, he was nevertheless a right-wing extremist who saw anti-Federationists and Romulans hiding behind every bush and tree."
Okay! Alrighty then! Well, as one might imagine, by that point in the book, I was pretty darn sure where all THAT kind of commentary was headed. And then I got to the part that read, "You see, the Djanai are extremely religious—which makes them very difficult to deal with..." and even, "Their religion scorns technology; like our Amish, they believe their god wants them to keep it simple."
Ooo-kay. Well, I'm sure the author honestly thought she was being the perfect little social justice warrior when she wrote all that, but times really do change, you know! And doggone it, despite the fervent hopes of many so-called "progressives," now in the once thought to be far flung future-scape of the early 21st century, the USA STILL has yet to be taken over by jack-booted "Nazis" who gleefully send minorities off to be gassed and shot into unmarked mass graves, only to return home at the end of a long, hard day of killin' to force their barefoot and ever-pregnant womenfolk to "git back in that thar kitchen and make me a sammich, bee-itch!"
Go figure. But I guess that kind of perhaps wishful thinking, that sort of an apocalyptic, doom-soaked, dystopian hell of an America gone irreversibly just plain BAD, could yet still be on the horizon! Maybe so. But probably... NOT. Although, a whole lot of folks who fancy themselves fancy "liberal" sure do seem to always be decrying the impending coming of such a dastardly and dire scenario anyway. So... tell me again, who is it that sees "Nazis" and "racists" "hiding behind every bush and tree?"
Ahem.
Yet still, taking the book as a whole, and conveniently overlooking completely unnecessary trash talk like the actual, honest to goodness quotes provided above, J.M. Dillard's writing style itself runs the gamut from perfectly adequate to at times really quite good, to downright brilliant. Which, I'm guessing is why most reviewers even bother to rate the book as highly as they do. Hey, it worked for me. Well... mostly anyway.
But again, at least the first half to a third of Dillard's Lost Years really should have been reworked; if for no other reason than to foreshorten the less relevant parts of the narrative, and/or to completely excise some of the extraneous detail, non-essential character development and pathetically biased and horrifically blatant social commentary altogether.
My guess is that the author was in some way pressed (by either the publisher or perhaps even herself) to make the book long enough to be considered a full-fledged novel, and not just follow the standard one hour TV drama teleplay format - that in most cases, only results in a volume that is, interestingly enough, roughly about half the length of this particular title.
The author may also have even written a great deal more to begin with, and only the last half ended up being properly edited/rewritten to make it suitably exciting and thought-provoking - or at least on par with the overall quality of the vast majority of Star Trek material that actually made it to screen during the show's original run - but alas, I'm afraid most readers will never quite know for sure.