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Keepers of the Crossing #1
The Dark Friars
For Seventeen-year-old Liam O’Connor, nightmares become reality when he dreams of a fellow student's murder. Eager to uncover the truth, Liam and his friends investigate, revealing hidden secrets about his identity.
Targeted by the menacing Dark Friars, Liam is saved by the enigmatic Tariq, who introduces him to a supernatural world where good and evil battle in the shadows.
Can Liam juggle college, family, friendships, and desires while bearing the heavy responsibilities of his newfound destiny?
Against the picturesque cathedral city of Sarumbourne, the looming threat of the Dark Friars intensifies, and Liam's normal life shatters amid the chaos.
Targeted by the menacing Dark Friars, Liam is saved by the enigmatic Tariq, who introduces him to a supernatural world where good and evil battle in the shadows.
Can Liam juggle college, family, friendships, and desires while bearing the heavy responsibilities of his newfound destiny?
Against the picturesque cathedral city of Sarumbourne, the looming threat of the Dark Friars intensifies, and Liam's normal life shatters amid the chaos.
322 pages, Paperback
First published November 5, 2024
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Ryan J. Hamshaw
2 books21 followersRyan J Hamshaw is an author based in Wiltshire, UK. His goal is to write inclusive stories where young people can see themselves represented.
Ryan is the author of the young adult, urban fantasy series 'Keepers of the Crossing'. Book one, 'The Dark Friars', was released in November 2024. Book two will follow in 2025.
Ryan is the author of the young adult, urban fantasy series 'Keepers of the Crossing'. Book one, 'The Dark Friars', was released in November 2024. Book two will follow in 2025.
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September 27, 2024
I received an ARC in exchange for an honest review. I'm not a Goodreads user, but posting here at the request of the author.
First off, this book absolutely deserves five stars for its cover alone. It’s darkly stunning and captivating - truly one of the best YA covers I've seen in a while.
Now, onto the story itself. I devoured it in a single day (and night!).
I will say, as this is the author’s debut, I always try to be understanding of certain aspects since it’s their first venture into the literary world, which can be quite daunting. Indie authors, in particular, deserve immense praise for their hard work in bringing their stories to life.
The Dark Friars follows Liam, an openly gay college student who discovers he’s a Keeper, part of a long line of heroes tasked with protecting the town of Sarumbourne from evil nasty things!
Where to begin? I absolutely loved it. It has all the elements you’d want in an urban fantasy, but what surprised me the most was its humor. Several scenes made me LOL! I really appreciated the unexpectedly light-hearted moments even though the cover suggests otherwise. I found the light/dark balance refreshing.
There wasn’t a character I didn’t enjoy, but I’ll highlight a few that stood out. Liam, the main character, embodies every clumsy teen boy I encountered in college; I could easily visualise him, and the author clearly understands his character well. Tariq is a bit more serious but has a playful side that I loved, especially in his dynamic with Liam as their relationship blossoms throughout the story (we love to see it!). Opel’s bluntness is hilarious - I saw a lot of myself in her! Nathaniel comes off as somewhat stuffy, yet he provides a welcome contrast to the teen angst. One critique I have is that I wanted more of Lily and Jack; some of the best moments came when Liam, Lily, and Jack were together, bringing warmth to a fairly dark story. The author has crafted their friendship beautifully, making it feel authentic and natural rather than forced.
Draven is a good villain. Was he my favorite aspect of the story? Not quite. However, he effectively served his role, and there were moments when he felt like a genuine threat. That said, I have a soft spot for monsters, and the wretches truly excited me. I understand why they couldn’t be the main antagonists, but every time they appeared, I felt a thrill that I didn’t always get from Draven or the other Dark Friars.
What really makes this book shine for me is its rich history and lore. There’s so much potential to explore within this world. With this first book, we’ve only scratched the surface - I crave more Keepers, more monsters, and more adventures in Sarumbourne. I was genuinely gutted when I reached the last page!
This is an exciting debut from Ryan J Hamshaw, and I can’t wait to see where this series takes us. We’re in for a ride!
Keepers of the Crossing: The Dark Friars is out on 5th November 2024.
First off, this book absolutely deserves five stars for its cover alone. It’s darkly stunning and captivating - truly one of the best YA covers I've seen in a while.
Now, onto the story itself. I devoured it in a single day (and night!).
I will say, as this is the author’s debut, I always try to be understanding of certain aspects since it’s their first venture into the literary world, which can be quite daunting. Indie authors, in particular, deserve immense praise for their hard work in bringing their stories to life.
The Dark Friars follows Liam, an openly gay college student who discovers he’s a Keeper, part of a long line of heroes tasked with protecting the town of Sarumbourne from evil nasty things!
Where to begin? I absolutely loved it. It has all the elements you’d want in an urban fantasy, but what surprised me the most was its humor. Several scenes made me LOL! I really appreciated the unexpectedly light-hearted moments even though the cover suggests otherwise. I found the light/dark balance refreshing.
There wasn’t a character I didn’t enjoy, but I’ll highlight a few that stood out. Liam, the main character, embodies every clumsy teen boy I encountered in college; I could easily visualise him, and the author clearly understands his character well. Tariq is a bit more serious but has a playful side that I loved, especially in his dynamic with Liam as their relationship blossoms throughout the story (we love to see it!). Opel’s bluntness is hilarious - I saw a lot of myself in her! Nathaniel comes off as somewhat stuffy, yet he provides a welcome contrast to the teen angst. One critique I have is that I wanted more of Lily and Jack; some of the best moments came when Liam, Lily, and Jack were together, bringing warmth to a fairly dark story. The author has crafted their friendship beautifully, making it feel authentic and natural rather than forced.
Draven is a good villain. Was he my favorite aspect of the story? Not quite. However, he effectively served his role, and there were moments when he felt like a genuine threat. That said, I have a soft spot for monsters, and the wretches truly excited me. I understand why they couldn’t be the main antagonists, but every time they appeared, I felt a thrill that I didn’t always get from Draven or the other Dark Friars.
What really makes this book shine for me is its rich history and lore. There’s so much potential to explore within this world. With this first book, we’ve only scratched the surface - I crave more Keepers, more monsters, and more adventures in Sarumbourne. I was genuinely gutted when I reached the last page!
This is an exciting debut from Ryan J Hamshaw, and I can’t wait to see where this series takes us. We’re in for a ride!
Keepers of the Crossing: The Dark Friars is out on 5th November 2024.
September 30, 2024
I binged this…as in I sat down and I just read and read and read and what a ride it was. I am a fantasy reader through and through. Give me an epic fantasy series and I’m there for it…so when Ryan asked me to read his soon to be published book I thought I’d give it a go.
This is a supernatural fantasy with mystery, drama, a touch of thriller and some romance. All of which blend together to create this fast paced novel. The characters are great, there is plenty of banter and humour between them which fully establishes relationships between them. The highlight was of course Tariq and Liam. Their chemistry is natural and heartwarming and a joy to read from the minute they’re introduced.
The novel is written in first person which isn’t my favourite pov, I prefer a third person pov purely because most books I’ve read that have this tend to turn a potentially great character into a whiney moaning protagonist. THIS BOOK DOENST DO THIS AND IM HERE FOR IT! We see the depth of the world, experience the plot through Liams eyes all while getting a sense of his emotional depth
Over all…a great read. Bingeable and if you’re looking for an intro into supernatural fantasy then read this book!
This is a supernatural fantasy with mystery, drama, a touch of thriller and some romance. All of which blend together to create this fast paced novel. The characters are great, there is plenty of banter and humour between them which fully establishes relationships between them. The highlight was of course Tariq and Liam. Their chemistry is natural and heartwarming and a joy to read from the minute they’re introduced.
The novel is written in first person which isn’t my favourite pov, I prefer a third person pov purely because most books I’ve read that have this tend to turn a potentially great character into a whiney moaning protagonist. THIS BOOK DOENST DO THIS AND IM HERE FOR IT! We see the depth of the world, experience the plot through Liams eyes all while getting a sense of his emotional depth
Over all…a great read. Bingeable and if you’re looking for an intro into supernatural fantasy then read this book!
September 10, 2025
Wow. What an absolutely brilliant, fun and addictive YA book! It's not my usual genre at all but I LOVED this one. ❤️
I fell in love with all the main characters and had a giggle and a smile at some of the cheesy lines, pop culture references and old school movie stuff.
I need more. Is this a series? I freaking hope so!
I fell in love with all the main characters and had a giggle and a smile at some of the cheesy lines, pop culture references and old school movie stuff.
I need more. Is this a series? I freaking hope so!
July 11, 2025
4.5* probably but i'll just give it the 5 anyway. lately it's been hard to get myself to read but picking this book up was exactly the right thing to do, cuz holy moly i couldn't put it down. i loved this. honestly i don't even really know how to explain to you why i loved it so much, but i did in fact love it. it was easy to follow, i loved characters, the world was very interesting to me, couldn't stop rooting for the romance to happen... only thing i would have loved to have seen more detailed / thought out was the final battle, i guess. it just felt like it was over too quickly, too easily. i was like huh how did that happen so quickly and easily that seems... sudden and not fitting. but besides that small nit-picky thing i loved it so much. i need more omg. and debut????? crazy work. i will be seated for what's next
October 31, 2024
Couldn’t put it down. Looking forward to more of this series. A fun YA urban fantasy for sure
October 14, 2024
This book earns its 5 stars because it brought me utter JOY!! As a kid I used to regularly read fantasy but as I’ve grown and my tastes have changed I tend to steer more towards historical fiction, literary classics and works of non-fiction. So when I received this book as an ARC I was unsure how much I’d truly engage with it. Well, I devoured it from cover to cover in two days and honestly this book has rekindled my childhood love of all things magical and mysterious!
First off, the look and feel of the book (from the fantastic cover to the chapter titles) has been so well designed that it adds a real sense of style to the whole reading experience. Beyond this, the author’s incredible world-building sucks you in from the very first page and never feels forced or laboured for the reader. Every chapter is full of fabulously funny moments and contemporary references too, which plant the characters in a realistic and relatable world - and these characters have CHARACTER. They are each wonderfully developed and completely three-dimensional, from the stylish, sinister villains to our endearing and loveable heroes - with every single page you want to jump into their world and join the adventure.
And what an adventure! You’ve got everything packed in here, whether it’s foreshadowing nightmares, creepy libraries and demonic monsters that would rival any horror flick or the romances, bromances and unlikely friendships that fuel each character’s journey. I also LOVE that the central relationship is queer, it makes for such a refreshing read and the author crafts it to perfection. Let’s not forget how vital this representation is in all fiction, but particularly YA novels. Hugely laudable - and almost too enjoyable…? I think the enigmatic Tariq will soon become a fan favourite..!
Finally this review would not be complete without mentioning the brilliant locations featured throughout - the fictionalised Sarumbourne is a character all its own. As a resident of the real-life city on which it’s based I am sure I will never quite see certain landmarks in the same way again, and that is wholly due to the author’s brilliantly imaginative and vivid descriptions.
The Dark Friars is a fresh and exciting debut novel that somehow manages to deliver heaps of nostalgia too. For the first time in a long time I felt that magic spark that only fiction can give. And not just because it’s a fantasy story, but because it reminded me of all those ‘first time reads’ as a kid. The first time you dive into an adventure, the first time you discover a favourite author, the first time you meet characters that you know you will carry with you for the rest of your life. For the adults among us who will never get that first time read of a Harry Potter or Anthony Horowitz again, this book comes pretty close. And for anyone who still has those first time reads to come, be sure to add this one to your list too. Either way, you’re sure to be left wanting more of the absolute magic that is fantasy fiction.
Impatiently waiting for book 2…!
First off, the look and feel of the book (from the fantastic cover to the chapter titles) has been so well designed that it adds a real sense of style to the whole reading experience. Beyond this, the author’s incredible world-building sucks you in from the very first page and never feels forced or laboured for the reader. Every chapter is full of fabulously funny moments and contemporary references too, which plant the characters in a realistic and relatable world - and these characters have CHARACTER. They are each wonderfully developed and completely three-dimensional, from the stylish, sinister villains to our endearing and loveable heroes - with every single page you want to jump into their world and join the adventure.
And what an adventure! You’ve got everything packed in here, whether it’s foreshadowing nightmares, creepy libraries and demonic monsters that would rival any horror flick or the romances, bromances and unlikely friendships that fuel each character’s journey. I also LOVE that the central relationship is queer, it makes for such a refreshing read and the author crafts it to perfection. Let’s not forget how vital this representation is in all fiction, but particularly YA novels. Hugely laudable - and almost too enjoyable…? I think the enigmatic Tariq will soon become a fan favourite..!
Finally this review would not be complete without mentioning the brilliant locations featured throughout - the fictionalised Sarumbourne is a character all its own. As a resident of the real-life city on which it’s based I am sure I will never quite see certain landmarks in the same way again, and that is wholly due to the author’s brilliantly imaginative and vivid descriptions.
The Dark Friars is a fresh and exciting debut novel that somehow manages to deliver heaps of nostalgia too. For the first time in a long time I felt that magic spark that only fiction can give. And not just because it’s a fantasy story, but because it reminded me of all those ‘first time reads’ as a kid. The first time you dive into an adventure, the first time you discover a favourite author, the first time you meet characters that you know you will carry with you for the rest of your life. For the adults among us who will never get that first time read of a Harry Potter or Anthony Horowitz again, this book comes pretty close. And for anyone who still has those first time reads to come, be sure to add this one to your list too. Either way, you’re sure to be left wanting more of the absolute magic that is fantasy fiction.
Impatiently waiting for book 2…!
October 2, 2024
A new contender in Modern Fantasy has emerged.
Oh boy do I love me some modern fantasy and this serves it up in spade. Mixing the real with the fantastical and serving it up with some well thought out lore, a little magic, a dash of demons and a generous helping of slow burning, well navigated queer romance. You can't help but fall in love with the cast of characters, both good and evil (honestly, the mark of a good villain is when they make you love to hate them and Draven hits that mark bang on.)
I cannot wait for the next instalment as this is just the start of the series and more Keepers are yet to be revealed.
If you are a fan of The Mortal Instruments by Cassandra Clare, Cemetery Boys by Aiden Thomas or Evocation by S T Gibson then definitely give this a try.
Oh boy do I love me some modern fantasy and this serves it up in spade. Mixing the real with the fantastical and serving it up with some well thought out lore, a little magic, a dash of demons and a generous helping of slow burning, well navigated queer romance. You can't help but fall in love with the cast of characters, both good and evil (honestly, the mark of a good villain is when they make you love to hate them and Draven hits that mark bang on.)
I cannot wait for the next instalment as this is just the start of the series and more Keepers are yet to be revealed.
If you are a fan of The Mortal Instruments by Cassandra Clare, Cemetery Boys by Aiden Thomas or Evocation by S T Gibson then definitely give this a try.
July 30, 2025
What an interesting read. I decided not to read the blurb and just go along with the story. From the first pages i was swept into the story. Each new revelation and detail slowly unwinding the story to me piece by piece. This book was easy to read and follow, i throughly enjoyed the story, the world, it left me feeling like a complete story, but also thrilled to know there’s more to come.
January 9, 2025
Well what can I say …
Ryan’s debut novel The Dark Friars is everything you could ask for in a fantasy book! I couldn’t put it down and finished it faster than I’ve read any other book in recent memory.
From the dynamic characters and their chemistry, to the fictional town of Sarumbourne—which feels like a character in itself—the mystery, the humor, and even the stunning cover art, everything about this book is perfectly executed.
Ryan’s writing brings the characters to life in a way that makes them incredibly relatable, and I have no doubt Tariq will quickly become a fan favorite. The development of the central relationship is beautifully done and incredibly important, offering a heartfelt representation of a queer love story.
Though I’m not typically a fantasy reader, I was hooked from start to finish and can’t wait for the next installment in the series!
Ryan’s debut novel The Dark Friars is everything you could ask for in a fantasy book! I couldn’t put it down and finished it faster than I’ve read any other book in recent memory.
From the dynamic characters and their chemistry, to the fictional town of Sarumbourne—which feels like a character in itself—the mystery, the humor, and even the stunning cover art, everything about this book is perfectly executed.
Ryan’s writing brings the characters to life in a way that makes them incredibly relatable, and I have no doubt Tariq will quickly become a fan favorite. The development of the central relationship is beautifully done and incredibly important, offering a heartfelt representation of a queer love story.
Though I’m not typically a fantasy reader, I was hooked from start to finish and can’t wait for the next installment in the series!
April 1, 2025
I had a lot of fun with The Dark Friars, it was a very well-written YA novel! I felt the world building was really good and the way the mysteries unfolded throughout the book made sure there was no info-dumping. We quickly get to know the characters and even with some dark undertones, there were funny moments and the side characters helped keep it light and breezy. I did find that there were a lot of pop culture references which isn't really my jam, but it kept it fun and current.
My favourite thing about the book was the relationship between Liam and Tariq. This is the kind of queer story I wish I'd had growing up and I really enjoyed watching them together on page. Overall, if you like original world-building, upper YA stories and a touch of magical intrigue then I think you'll love this!
My favourite thing about the book was the relationship between Liam and Tariq. This is the kind of queer story I wish I'd had growing up and I really enjoyed watching them together on page. Overall, if you like original world-building, upper YA stories and a touch of magical intrigue then I think you'll love this!
December 15, 2025
3.75! I really enjoyed this book. It was a pretty easy read writing style wise but it was fun! Who doesn’t love a good gay witchy vibe
December 1, 2024
Keepers of the Crossing: The Dark Friars by Ryan J. Hamshaw - 4 stars ⭐️
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📚 The Dark Friars is a fantasy novel set in the fictional city of Sarumbourne following 17-year-old Liam O’Connor, who is plagued by nightmares of a fellow student’s murder. Liam’s dreams are revealed to be his role as a "Keeper," part of a group destined to protect the city from dark forces, such as the Dark Friars.
Liam is introduced to a supernatural world by the charismatic and mysterious Tariq, as he grapples with the challenges of college, relationships, and his growing responsibilities as a Keeper.
💭 From the start of this novel, I was immersed in the story and immediately attached to the main character, Liam. The supernatural elements, mixed with suspense, drama, and fast pacing made for a really enjoyable read that really reminded me of Buffy.
For me, the characters and their relationships were the absolute highlight. Seeing the relationship between Liam and Tariq go from wariness, to friendship, and finally, to something more was so enjoyable to see play out. It’s not often that queer characters take centre-stage in a fantasy novel so it was so nice to see their relationship evolve alongside the plot of the novel.
I also loved seeing Liam try to balance his regular life with Lily, Jack and his Mum against his life as a Keeper with Tariq, Opel and Nathaniel and the members of the Guild. In particular, the enemies-to-friends type of relationship that Liam shared with Opel was hilarious.
I can’t wait to see how the rest of the series plays out and how the Keepers will keep the dark friars and other dark forces at bay to keep the world safe. Also, I absolutely need to know what happened to the Tempus keeper!
This is Ryan’s debut novel, and so worth a read but especially so if you like Buffy, urban fantasy, and/or a coming-of-age story filled with suspense and magic.
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📚 The Dark Friars is a fantasy novel set in the fictional city of Sarumbourne following 17-year-old Liam O’Connor, who is plagued by nightmares of a fellow student’s murder. Liam’s dreams are revealed to be his role as a "Keeper," part of a group destined to protect the city from dark forces, such as the Dark Friars.
Liam is introduced to a supernatural world by the charismatic and mysterious Tariq, as he grapples with the challenges of college, relationships, and his growing responsibilities as a Keeper.
💭 From the start of this novel, I was immersed in the story and immediately attached to the main character, Liam. The supernatural elements, mixed with suspense, drama, and fast pacing made for a really enjoyable read that really reminded me of Buffy.
For me, the characters and their relationships were the absolute highlight. Seeing the relationship between Liam and Tariq go from wariness, to friendship, and finally, to something more was so enjoyable to see play out. It’s not often that queer characters take centre-stage in a fantasy novel so it was so nice to see their relationship evolve alongside the plot of the novel.
I also loved seeing Liam try to balance his regular life with Lily, Jack and his Mum against his life as a Keeper with Tariq, Opel and Nathaniel and the members of the Guild. In particular, the enemies-to-friends type of relationship that Liam shared with Opel was hilarious.
I can’t wait to see how the rest of the series plays out and how the Keepers will keep the dark friars and other dark forces at bay to keep the world safe. Also, I absolutely need to know what happened to the Tempus keeper!
This is Ryan’s debut novel, and so worth a read but especially so if you like Buffy, urban fantasy, and/or a coming-of-age story filled with suspense and magic.
November 7, 2024
'The Dark Friars' introduces us to seventeen year-old Liam, whose recurring dream about a girl's murder leads him to discover that he is a Keeper - one of six people whose connection to his home town of Sarumbourne grants them both the power and responsibility to hold back the tide of darkness that the Dark Friars want to unleash on the world.
It's undeniably Buffy-esque, which is something that the marketing heavily leaned into - but I do think that there's more than enough to differentiate it from this source of inspiration, and will go as far as to say that the success of the series might rely on it.
If that sounds ominous, it's not meant to. I really enjoyed reading this book. Not only was there a comforting familiarity to this well-written story, but I think the core dynamic between Liam and Tariq (the Keeper who first discovers him and starts to introduce him to this hidden world) is, dare I say it...actually quite cute? Wholesome, even. Tropey, but wholesome.
This brings us to my one complaint: while enjoyable, the story is also a bit too predictable. It's very clear who is filling what role, a deep what is going to happen from scene to scene. And, in some respects, this is very Buffy-esque in its own right, in a 'could there be a connection between Ben and Glory?' kind of way. But, am I hoping that the rest of the series has a bit more complexity to it? Yeah, I am. You might say that I want to find out where Buffy was when she died. If you wanted to belabour the point.
God, I need to rewatch Buffy.
Anyway.
'The Dark Friars' is a competently executed debut in a series that I'm excited to see the next entry of.
Rating: 4.5/5
It's undeniably Buffy-esque, which is something that the marketing heavily leaned into - but I do think that there's more than enough to differentiate it from this source of inspiration, and will go as far as to say that the success of the series might rely on it.
If that sounds ominous, it's not meant to. I really enjoyed reading this book. Not only was there a comforting familiarity to this well-written story, but I think the core dynamic between Liam and Tariq (the Keeper who first discovers him and starts to introduce him to this hidden world) is, dare I say it...actually quite cute? Wholesome, even. Tropey, but wholesome.
This brings us to my one complaint: while enjoyable, the story is also a bit too predictable. It's very clear who is filling what role, a deep what is going to happen from scene to scene. And, in some respects, this is very Buffy-esque in its own right, in a 'could there be a connection between Ben and Glory?' kind of way. But, am I hoping that the rest of the series has a bit more complexity to it? Yeah, I am. You might say that I want to find out where Buffy was when she died. If you wanted to belabour the point.
God, I need to rewatch Buffy.
Anyway.
'The Dark Friars' is a competently executed debut in a series that I'm excited to see the next entry of.
Rating: 4.5/5
February 15, 2025
Character- 3.5/5
Plot- 4.5/5
Pacing 4.25/5
Entertainment- 4.25/5
Rating- 4/5
This is a really strong debut novel with an interesting world that could be flushed out into something incredibly engaging.
We start first with Liam, who is our main protagonist in this book. Liam could do with a little work, he does seem competent and intelligent if perhaps reckless at times, with a strong need to prove himself. But he's lacking a little in backstory and is missing a substantial character journey in this book. He suits his role in this book, which is to help the reader explore the world and understand the magic system, but I'm hoping the next entry spends more time really delving into his personality.
Tariq feels more fully realised, he's flirtatious, dependable and protective of his friends, and the book is generally more interesting in scenes where he's involved and engaging with the other characters. He operates as the gateway into the magical element of this world, and serves his purpose really well. There's also a hint at tragedy in his past, enough to flush out later if the author wishes to.
Where this book shines is in its rather interesting premise. Magic is real, hoarded and hunted for by a secret near religious cult called the dark friars, who have a long standing rivalry with the 'keepers' a group of people who have been inheriting and passing down magical powers for hundreds of years. Liam somehow manages to be one of those that inherits this power, giving him supernatural abilities that he'll have to put to use against the Dark Friars.
This is a great basis for what could be a much larger story in a similarly larger world. The magic system is interesting and could be flushed out into greater detail, but in this story its kept simplistic enough for a reader to quickly pick up the general rules of this contemporary fantasy world. Nothing is overly complicated, and that makes it accessible, and due to the fact that this seems to be drawing in the YA audience, it's perfectly appropriate.
If I was to give a criticism I would say that the earlier chapters have a lot of over explaining and over describing, with a few superfluous moments where we focus on describing surroundings that don't ultimately help the story much. It reminds me of that old bit of writing advice about the gun on the wall- If you go to great detail explaining the gun on the wall in a room, you better intend to come back and have one of your characters use it. Its just something that will tighten up the writing and will come naturally with more experience.
But for a debut novel, this is a really strong effort, and I'm fully on board with exploring this world again. I'm interested to see what kind of stories Ryan Hamshaw can come up with next.
Plot- 4.5/5
Pacing 4.25/5
Entertainment- 4.25/5
Rating- 4/5
This is a really strong debut novel with an interesting world that could be flushed out into something incredibly engaging.
We start first with Liam, who is our main protagonist in this book. Liam could do with a little work, he does seem competent and intelligent if perhaps reckless at times, with a strong need to prove himself. But he's lacking a little in backstory and is missing a substantial character journey in this book. He suits his role in this book, which is to help the reader explore the world and understand the magic system, but I'm hoping the next entry spends more time really delving into his personality.
Tariq feels more fully realised, he's flirtatious, dependable and protective of his friends, and the book is generally more interesting in scenes where he's involved and engaging with the other characters. He operates as the gateway into the magical element of this world, and serves his purpose really well. There's also a hint at tragedy in his past, enough to flush out later if the author wishes to.
Where this book shines is in its rather interesting premise. Magic is real, hoarded and hunted for by a secret near religious cult called the dark friars, who have a long standing rivalry with the 'keepers' a group of people who have been inheriting and passing down magical powers for hundreds of years. Liam somehow manages to be one of those that inherits this power, giving him supernatural abilities that he'll have to put to use against the Dark Friars.
This is a great basis for what could be a much larger story in a similarly larger world. The magic system is interesting and could be flushed out into greater detail, but in this story its kept simplistic enough for a reader to quickly pick up the general rules of this contemporary fantasy world. Nothing is overly complicated, and that makes it accessible, and due to the fact that this seems to be drawing in the YA audience, it's perfectly appropriate.
If I was to give a criticism I would say that the earlier chapters have a lot of over explaining and over describing, with a few superfluous moments where we focus on describing surroundings that don't ultimately help the story much. It reminds me of that old bit of writing advice about the gun on the wall- If you go to great detail explaining the gun on the wall in a room, you better intend to come back and have one of your characters use it. Its just something that will tighten up the writing and will come naturally with more experience.
But for a debut novel, this is a really strong effort, and I'm fully on board with exploring this world again. I'm interested to see what kind of stories Ryan Hamshaw can come up with next.
October 20, 2024
This was so fun! Right from the off it had very strong Buffy the Vampire Slayer vibes and having seen this in the marketing for the book it had drawn me to the book in the first place and I have to say that Ryan truly delivered there! It was so fun and comfortable and yet it felt very fresh. I loved Liam and how whole journey of learning about his destiny.
And Tariq! Good god, Tariq! My new book boyfriend and I am prepared to fight ANYONE who gets in my way. He's so dreamy and has a wonderful personality that I really enjoyed!
I loved the fantastical elements of the book and learning all about the history of why things are the way they are. It was written in a way that was easily accessible and addictive to read. I found myself itching to pick the book back up any time that I wasn't reading it. The easiest 5 stars I've given for a while and I am left SALIVATING for book two! I need more!
And Tariq! Good god, Tariq! My new book boyfriend and I am prepared to fight ANYONE who gets in my way. He's so dreamy and has a wonderful personality that I really enjoyed!
I loved the fantastical elements of the book and learning all about the history of why things are the way they are. It was written in a way that was easily accessible and addictive to read. I found myself itching to pick the book back up any time that I wasn't reading it. The easiest 5 stars I've given for a while and I am left SALIVATING for book two! I need more!
November 12, 2024
Exciting!
I enjoyed this one! Loved the Buffy vibes! Liam is just trying to survive college but he can’t get rid of these dreams in which he watches a girl die. When the girl ends up missing in life he’ll find himself wrapped up in a bigger much more dangerous mystery! They live in a world where monsters and demons are real. The Keepers keep people safe, each keeper has powers. Liam’s a Keeper with super strength, reflexes, and senses. He’ll have to team up with the other keepers, including the handsome Tariq, to stop the Dark Friars. Enjoyable, thrilling, with a little bit of humor and romance! And most excitingly it’s queer! I can’t wait to see what Ryan Hamshaw does next with the series!
I enjoyed this one! Loved the Buffy vibes! Liam is just trying to survive college but he can’t get rid of these dreams in which he watches a girl die. When the girl ends up missing in life he’ll find himself wrapped up in a bigger much more dangerous mystery! They live in a world where monsters and demons are real. The Keepers keep people safe, each keeper has powers. Liam’s a Keeper with super strength, reflexes, and senses. He’ll have to team up with the other keepers, including the handsome Tariq, to stop the Dark Friars. Enjoyable, thrilling, with a little bit of humor and romance! And most excitingly it’s queer! I can’t wait to see what Ryan Hamshaw does next with the series!
February 20, 2025
Oh I’m utterly obsessed.
The friendship between Liam, Lily and Jack was one of the biggest highlights for me.
Tariq stole the whole show for me. I would die for him.
The Buffyverse inspiration is everywhere in this book and I loved every second of it.
I picked this book up because I seen Ryan describe it as “British Buffy but gay..er” and there couldn’t be a better way to describe this book.
Can’t wait for book two
The friendship between Liam, Lily and Jack was one of the biggest highlights for me.
Tariq stole the whole show for me. I would die for him.
The Buffyverse inspiration is everywhere in this book and I loved every second of it.
I picked this book up because I seen Ryan describe it as “British Buffy but gay..er” and there couldn’t be a better way to describe this book.
Can’t wait for book two
February 1, 2025
A pulsing dynamic adventure laced with peril. If you love seeing a determined, untried character navigate all the pitfalls of college set amidst dangerous magic and demons then this is your book! I enjoyed the no-holds-barred pace of this novel in addition to the inescapable feeling of impending evil. As someone who grew up in Salisbury this book captures the beauty, the mysticism and everyday life of this historic town. I will be reaching out for the sequel when GoodReads notifies me!
February 7, 2025
I really enjoyed reading this book! The book made me feel like I was back in high school watching tv shows like Buffy the Vampire Slayer or Charmed. I will definitely be waiting for the next book like I would the next episode of one of my favorite tv shows. OMG. This book combined magic, mystery, and supernatural so well.
December 18, 2025
To be perfectly honest, this synopsis bores me to tears and gives the reader absolutely no clue how fantastic this book actually is. At least, it was for me. Not a single second was wasted. I was hooked from the first few sentences as we get dropped right into Liam’s nightmarishly violent dream. I was so sucked in that the second I finished, I bought a copy—even though it’s on Kindle Unlimited—and then bought the second book a few minutes later. I had zero self-control.
I don’t read a ton of YA. I think I read one or two last year, maybe the same this year. I’m only mentioning this because I don’t have a huge backlog to compare The Dark Friars to, but I can say I enjoyed it as much as my favorite YA of all time, Rotters by Daniel Kraus—just for completely different reasons. Liam, his friends Lily and Jack, Tariq, and the rest of the Keepers and Guild members pulled me straight into a world of immensee magic and the fight between those trying to protect it and those who want to twist it for their own nefarious means.
In a not-small way, The Dark Friars reminds me of my favorite TV show of all time, Buffy the Vampire Slayer. So much so that I’m giving in and breaking out the bullet points, though I still wish I could get away with using a giant Venn diagram.
Like Buffy, Liam gets hit with immense power after the violent death of his predecessor. Unlike Buffy, Liam was forced to dream about that violent death for days.
Buffy becomes the Slayer. Liam becomes the newest Keeper—one of six guardians protecting Sarumbourne from every manner of magical nightmare: shapeshifters, vampires, demons, and, of course, the Dark Friars.
Buffy has the Watchers Council. Liam and the other Keepers have The Guild.
Buffy has Willow and Xander. Liam has Lily and Jack—and honestly, I’d trade Xander for Jack in half a heartbeat. Jack is sooooo much better.
Buffy has Angel. Liam has Tariq, and I’m already confident that Liam and Tariq are going to have a far healthier go of things.
That’s not to say the world the author has created feels derivative, because it absolutely doesn’t. This world stands entirely on its own and feels fully realized—a feat that can be difficult to pull off in the first book of a series. I could follow the paths of Craythorn Forest and Grovely Wood. The campus of Sarumbourne College is as real to me as my own. And I desperately want to wander the halls and rooms of The Seven Angels for myself. I think I would like it there.
All I know is that there better be a third, fourth, fifth, and twelfth book soon. Especially if they all have these gorgeous covers.
I don’t read a ton of YA. I think I read one or two last year, maybe the same this year. I’m only mentioning this because I don’t have a huge backlog to compare The Dark Friars to, but I can say I enjoyed it as much as my favorite YA of all time, Rotters by Daniel Kraus—just for completely different reasons. Liam, his friends Lily and Jack, Tariq, and the rest of the Keepers and Guild members pulled me straight into a world of immensee magic and the fight between those trying to protect it and those who want to twist it for their own nefarious means.
In a not-small way, The Dark Friars reminds me of my favorite TV show of all time, Buffy the Vampire Slayer. So much so that I’m giving in and breaking out the bullet points, though I still wish I could get away with using a giant Venn diagram.
Like Buffy, Liam gets hit with immense power after the violent death of his predecessor. Unlike Buffy, Liam was forced to dream about that violent death for days.
Buffy becomes the Slayer. Liam becomes the newest Keeper—one of six guardians protecting Sarumbourne from every manner of magical nightmare: shapeshifters, vampires, demons, and, of course, the Dark Friars.
Buffy has the Watchers Council. Liam and the other Keepers have The Guild.
Buffy has Willow and Xander. Liam has Lily and Jack—and honestly, I’d trade Xander for Jack in half a heartbeat. Jack is sooooo much better.
Buffy has Angel. Liam has Tariq, and I’m already confident that Liam and Tariq are going to have a far healthier go of things.
That’s not to say the world the author has created feels derivative, because it absolutely doesn’t. This world stands entirely on its own and feels fully realized—a feat that can be difficult to pull off in the first book of a series. I could follow the paths of Craythorn Forest and Grovely Wood. The campus of Sarumbourne College is as real to me as my own. And I desperately want to wander the halls and rooms of The Seven Angels for myself. I think I would like it there.
All I know is that there better be a third, fourth, fifth, and twelfth book soon. Especially if they all have these gorgeous covers.
November 27, 2024
Listen y'all... This book is a MUST! So good!
Great characters. Great Magic. Great plot. And it's only BOOK 1!! I cannot wait for more Keepers of the Crossing! Also... The art work! The cover is soo good. Each chapter has beautiful script. It's just a wonderful book to hold read and look at. And that's not even getting into the story! Liam and Tariq!
I really hope Ryan Hamshaw gets this picked up by a big publisher one day. It's too good!
Go get this book right now.
Then report back to me please so we can have a conversation about it.
Great characters. Great Magic. Great plot. And it's only BOOK 1!! I cannot wait for more Keepers of the Crossing! Also... The art work! The cover is soo good. Each chapter has beautiful script. It's just a wonderful book to hold read and look at. And that's not even getting into the story! Liam and Tariq!
I really hope Ryan Hamshaw gets this picked up by a big publisher one day. It's too good!
Go get this book right now.
Then report back to me please so we can have a conversation about it.
January 21, 2025
Great story from a debut novel! Was interesting to read a book based on my hometown and each chapter had me wanting to continue. Looking forward to book two to see what happens next!
May 23, 2025
I really enjoyed this book! I flew through it, only pausing briefly before diving back in. The characters felt incredibly real and well-developed, and the story was structured in a way that kept me hooked from start to finish.
What stood out most to me was how naturally the LGBTQ+ themes were woven into the narrative. I found it deeply relatable and couldn’t help but wish that books like this had been around when I was younger. A gay main character in a coming-of-age fantasy novel? That would have meant the world to my teenage self.
That’s why I’m so grateful to be reading stories like this now—and even more excited that young readers today get to grow up with them. I’m really looking forward to seeing where the story goes next, and I can’t wait to learn more about the characters and their world.
What stood out most to me was how naturally the LGBTQ+ themes were woven into the narrative. I found it deeply relatable and couldn’t help but wish that books like this had been around when I was younger. A gay main character in a coming-of-age fantasy novel? That would have meant the world to my teenage self.
That’s why I’m so grateful to be reading stories like this now—and even more excited that young readers today get to grow up with them. I’m really looking forward to seeing where the story goes next, and I can’t wait to learn more about the characters and their world.
January 18, 2025
Really enjoyed it could envison the characters really well, can see it on Netflix. Looking forward to book 2
January 5, 2025
I’m not a big reader, but picked this book up as Ryan is an old friend and I was curious and wanted to support his creation. I’m now fully invested in the characters and can’t wait for the next instalment having binged the third act of the book in one sitting last night.
It’s heartwarming, adventurous, the characters are well formed and likeable (apart from the bad guys…) and I could really imagine all the aspects that were on the page.
I can’t wait to see what Liam and the Keepers do next!
It’s heartwarming, adventurous, the characters are well formed and likeable (apart from the bad guys…) and I could really imagine all the aspects that were on the page.
I can’t wait to see what Liam and the Keepers do next!
March 14, 2025
This was the kind of fantasy story I was after! 🙌🏽
When Liam O’Connor’s nightmare of a fellow student’s murder becomes a reality, he discovers a big secret. He is the next in a long of Keepers, who protect our world from all kinds of demons and creatures of the night.
This book was Buffy the Vampire Slayer 2.0 but with a male lead. There’s also elements which reminded me of Charmed. As a boy growing up in the late 90s and early 00s, these tv shows were fundamental in my life so finding this book now as an adult, which perfectly blends both tv shows, has a male protagonist and he’s gay!!!!!! This is the type of story I used to long for when I watched those tv shows!!!
I don’t know where to even start! There’s the whole rich history of the Keepers, which Hamshaw explains in a perfect way, not only are you invested in the history but you fully understand it. The lore maybe complex but at no point did I not understand it. I fully grasped it and can’t wait to see how it all plays out.
Liam is an incredible protagonist! So relatable! He was the male Buffy and I am here for it! Hiding his identity as a Keeper from his friends and family, really brought in that superhero element which perfectly adds to this book. Then there’s the love interest, Tariq. I am obsessed with these two 🫶🏽 Their dynamic was sooooo good! The tension! The fake dating trope! The whole protector thing! I can’t wait to see how their love story progresses!
The supporting cast are also great! From Liam’s close friends to Nathaniel and Opel, to even Heather, who I’m looking forward to seeing more of! I can’t wait to see these characters get pulled more into the story.
In a time where fantasy books are in abundance, this book shines like a diamond 🙌🏽 I need the sequel straight away!!!! I can’t wait to see how everything plays out and for all the books to come! I am sooo invested!
When Liam O’Connor’s nightmare of a fellow student’s murder becomes a reality, he discovers a big secret. He is the next in a long of Keepers, who protect our world from all kinds of demons and creatures of the night.
This book was Buffy the Vampire Slayer 2.0 but with a male lead. There’s also elements which reminded me of Charmed. As a boy growing up in the late 90s and early 00s, these tv shows were fundamental in my life so finding this book now as an adult, which perfectly blends both tv shows, has a male protagonist and he’s gay!!!!!! This is the type of story I used to long for when I watched those tv shows!!!
I don’t know where to even start! There’s the whole rich history of the Keepers, which Hamshaw explains in a perfect way, not only are you invested in the history but you fully understand it. The lore maybe complex but at no point did I not understand it. I fully grasped it and can’t wait to see how it all plays out.
Liam is an incredible protagonist! So relatable! He was the male Buffy and I am here for it! Hiding his identity as a Keeper from his friends and family, really brought in that superhero element which perfectly adds to this book. Then there’s the love interest, Tariq. I am obsessed with these two 🫶🏽 Their dynamic was sooooo good! The tension! The fake dating trope! The whole protector thing! I can’t wait to see how their love story progresses!
The supporting cast are also great! From Liam’s close friends to Nathaniel and Opel, to even Heather, who I’m looking forward to seeing more of! I can’t wait to see these characters get pulled more into the story.
In a time where fantasy books are in abundance, this book shines like a diamond 🙌🏽 I need the sequel straight away!!!! I can’t wait to see how everything plays out and for all the books to come! I am sooo invested!
October 21, 2025
Ryan J Hamshaw’s “The Dark Friars” totally hooked me from the very first chapter! It’s a YA urban fantasy set in the cathedral city of Sarumbourne, and we get to follow Liam O’Connor on his quest to uncover his destiny.
This book was exactly what I needed after a long reading slump. I devoured it, finally breaking my months-long reading slump. It was super easy to read, with a story and characters that kept me hooked the whole time.
I loved it so much that I’ve already read book two! So, a review for that will be coming soon too. I’d recommend this for anyone who’s looking for a lighter read, a nice break after a heavy book. YA brilliance with an LGBTQ+ lead. Add this to your TBR right now, or you might just end up suffering the wrath of the Dark Friars…
5 stars from me ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐
This book was exactly what I needed after a long reading slump. I devoured it, finally breaking my months-long reading slump. It was super easy to read, with a story and characters that kept me hooked the whole time.
I loved it so much that I’ve already read book two! So, a review for that will be coming soon too. I’d recommend this for anyone who’s looking for a lighter read, a nice break after a heavy book. YA brilliance with an LGBTQ+ lead. Add this to your TBR right now, or you might just end up suffering the wrath of the Dark Friars…
5 stars from me ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐
August 26, 2025
Keeper
I just finished reading this book and I will give it a 4/5. I enjoyed the plot and the characters. Although it is young adult, I feel that this book can be enjoyed by a lot of readers. Liam’s nightmares become truth and he is saved by Tariq. Liam’s eyes are opened to a new reality and his own untapped abilities. The Dark Friars is a cult that is trying to destroy the city and then the world. Liam will have to learn about his abilities to help Tariq defeat them. But the two men also develop feelings for each other which could complicate matters. Will Liam be able to juggle the responsibilities of his new life with the existing ones from his old?
I just finished reading this book and I will give it a 4/5. I enjoyed the plot and the characters. Although it is young adult, I feel that this book can be enjoyed by a lot of readers. Liam’s nightmares become truth and he is saved by Tariq. Liam’s eyes are opened to a new reality and his own untapped abilities. The Dark Friars is a cult that is trying to destroy the city and then the world. Liam will have to learn about his abilities to help Tariq defeat them. But the two men also develop feelings for each other which could complicate matters. Will Liam be able to juggle the responsibilities of his new life with the existing ones from his old?
August 10, 2025
I would like more books by this author please — Keepers will be a series, right??? It’s so refreshing to read really great YA fantasy starring queer characters just being part of the story and having all the adventures. I loved the storytelling and the sweetness of the romantic element in this book. (Hey, never underestimate the power of a good kiss, right?) I got right into the world building and loved the blend of historical with the modern. The characters were amazing, too, and the pace of the story was bang on. Kinda would love to watch this as a streaming series!
March 18, 2025
Now that’s a satisfying, well-crafted book! Clearly drawn, likable characters, engaging storyline and fun powers used against creepy villains and creatures. My only minor complaint is the lack of romance and love-story progress. I loved Liam and Tariq so much and wanted more of their sweet romance. Can’t wait for book 2 (The Handsel Witches) in September and hopefully a more fully developed relationship for them. Also, I love that the author’s influences include Buffy!! It shows!
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