As a wave of murders grips Southern California, an unlikely pair must untangle the mysterious patterns of an elusive killer. A propulsive new series by New York Times bestselling author Jeffery Deaver and Wall Street Journal bestselling author Isabella Maldonado.
Carmen Sanchez is a tough Homeland Security agent who plays by the rules. But when her sister is attacked, revealing a connection to a series of murders across Southern California, she realizes a conventional investigation will not be enough to stop the ruthless perpetrator.
With nowhere else to turn, Sanchez enlists the aid of Professor Jake Heron, a brilliant and quirky private security expert who, unlike Sanchez, believes rules are merely suggestions. The two have a troubled past, but he owes her a favor and she’s cashing in. They team up to catch the assailant, who, mystifyingly, has no discernable motive and fits no classic criminal profile. All they have to go on is a distinctive tattoo and a singular obsession that gives this chillingly efficient tactician his Spider.
Over the next seventy-two hours, Sanchez and Heron find themselves in the midst of a lethal chess match with the killer as they race to stop the carnage. As the victims mount, so do the risks. Because this spider’s web of intrigue is more sinister—and goes far deeper—than anyone could possibly anticipate.
#1 international bestselling author of over thirty novels and three collections of short stories. His books are sold in 150 countries and translated into 25 languages. His first novel featuring Lincoln Rhyme, The Bone Collector, was made into a major motion picture starring Denzel Washington and Angelina Jolie. He's received or been shortlisted for a number of awards around the world.
As a fan of Isabella Maldonado’s Nina Guerra and Dani Vega series, I wanted to check out her other work. I’ve never read any Deaver, but I do have some of his work on my to-read list. One of the things that I like about Maldonado’s work is that as a 20+yr veteran of law enforcement and a former agent, she brings a lot of credibility to her characters and stories. Even better though, as a Latina woman, her FMC’s are bold, brass, smart, bad@$$ women, who kick@$$ and take no $#!^ from anyone, least of all some man who thinks he can go around murdering people and causing mayhem! My fave kind of FMC’s!!!
The book summary introduces the primary storyline of Carmen basically inserting herself into the Riverside County Sherriff Department’s (RCSD) investigation of the attack on her little sister, Selina. Because of Carmen’s position as a federal agent for Homeland Security, the RCSD Sherriff extends Carmen every courtesy to their investigation, but makes it clear that it is his department’s case. The young investigating deputy, Ryan, is a little scared of her as well as a little smitten with Selina. Fortunately for Selina, she escaped the attack, thanks to all the self-defense tactics big sis, Carmen, instilled in her. She even managed to injure her attacker and steal his phone. Little sis is definitely a bad@$$ in training!
Carmen brings in Jake, an English Lit professor, as a civilian consultant. Jake also has a side gig as a security expert, who is basically and nerdy tech geek. Carmen and Jake have a “complicated” relationship stemming from an incident four years ago on Christmas Eve. In the after effect of that “incident” Carmen feels like she “owes him one”. It isn’t revealed until much later why. Anyway, Carmen and Jake tie the attacker to a murder prior to the attack of Selina that eventually leads them to more dead bodies before they realize the killer’s motives and agenda. The story flips back and forth between Carmen, Jake and the killer, Spider, because of the spider tattoo on his arm and most of the story revolves around the investigation of the murders and the pursuit of the killer.
I was amused by some of the references to the various SoCA locations, like the one that claimed Anaheim was only 30min from Santa Barbara. The only way one could get from Anaheim to Santa Barbara in 30min is if they were flying low, on a completely deserted 101 freeway, at 269mph. Even helicopter flights from Anaheim to Santa Barbara are longer than 30min. Yeah, former native Angeleno here (I moved to NoCA in Jan2024). Anyway, I guess they didn’t do their research or they did and just took liberties. No worries, it’s not like it had a negative impact on the story. Liberties like that are funny to me and make me chuckle. Fortunately, I’m not the kind of reader whose enjoyment of the story is contingent on the story’s level of believability. Quite the contrary, the crazier the better usually makes for a better reading experience for me.
The character development of most of the MCs throughout the story was good. The pacing was fast-paced and action packed with lots of scary and intense chase and shootout scenes. The storylines were interesting; I especially liked the one between Carmen and Jake. The writing was good and, once again, I’m not familiar with Deaver’s work, but the story seemed liked classic Maldonado! I’m looking at an overall rating of 4.1 that I will be rounding down to a 4star rating. Looking forward to the next installment. I want to thank NetGalley and Thomas & Mercer for sending me this eARC in exchange for my honest review.
TW: If you don't like reading endless details about different kinds of spiders, you may want to skip this book.
Fatal Intrusion opens with Carmen Sanchez, a Homeland Security agent who plays by the rules being paired with Jake Heron, a brilliant and quirky private security expert who believes rules are merely suggestions.
It was a bit of a struggle for me to get into Fatal Intrusion. It felt like too many explanations were bogging down the book's first part. For example, when a character went to a casino to play roulette, there were two pages explaining the history of the roulette wheel. Did I care? No. Did it add anything to the storyline? Not at all.
But then things got interesting for me! I enjoyed the pairing of Carmen and Jake. They played off each other perfectly and I started ignoring all of the spider details. (And I like spiders!!!) Sadly, the book became bogged down again by extraneous parts that made it lose cohesiveness.
I'm not giving up on the series, however! It has so much promise!! I hope there is an editor who will trim some of the chaff from book #2. It's worth giving it another try if only to see Carmen and Jake playing off each other some more!
Many thanks to both #ThomasAndMercer, and #NetGalley for the opportunity to read and review an early copy of #FatalIntrusion. This book is #1 in the #SanchezAndHeronSeries, with an expected publication date of August 6, 2024.
Carmen Sanchez is a tough Homeland Security agent who plays by the rules. When her sister is attacked, revealing a connection to a series of murders across Southern California, she enlists the aid of Professor Jake Heron, a brilliant and quirky private security expert who believes rules are merely suggestions. The assailant has no discernable motive and fits no classic criminal profile. All they have to go on is a distinctive spider tattoo. As the victims mount, so do the risks.
Although I've read some previous novels by Jeffery Deaver, I've never read anything by Isabella Maldonado and I enjoyed their collaboration on Fatal Intrusion. The story featuring Carmen and Jake takes place in Southern California and is told from their points of view, interspersed with sections from the killer's point of view and lots of information about spiders. Shudder! Not my favourite insect by a long shot. The plot was very complex and I doubt if I would ever have worked out the solution on my own. It's scary what computer hacks can do, at least I assume the events have some basis in reality. The book is fast-paced with lots of action, including chases and gunfights along with murder. Even though I found this an absorbing read, I'm not entirely sure I'd read another book in the series, and I understand there's going to be at least one other book, but that's mostly to do with my own reading preferences.
My thanks to Thomas & Mercer via Netgalley for providing a copy of the ARC of this novel. All opinions expressed are my own. Publication Date: September 1, 2024
If you’ve read Deaver for any length of time, you’ll know that twists come along at regular intervals. In fact, I’d go as far as to say that nothing is ever quite what it seems. Here, he teams up with Isabella Maldonado, an author new to me. But though this book is a product of joint authorship, to me, this tale has all the hallmarks of a Jeffery Deaver novel.
Carmen Sanchez, a Homeland Security agent, is horrified to learn that her younger sister, Selina, has survived an attack by an unidentified man. Luckily, Selina has been coached to be attentive to detail and also to be able to look after herself physically. In consequence, she survived reasonably unscathed, and though details are scant, a tattoo of a spider on the wrist of the attacker is one notable clue Selina has been able to supply.
Sanchez needs to go off the books, to some extent, to hunt down the man responsible for the attack, and to aid her investigation she decides to contact Professor Jake Heron, a lecturer and expert on all things related to security and, as he puts it, ‘intrusion’. We’re advised that Sanchez and Heron have history, but the nature of any previous engagement(s) will remain a mystery for now.
The spider man is an interesting character, and as a result of the exploration into his background, his motivations, and his inner thoughts, readers are likely to become something of a minor expert on arachnids. It’s clever enough tale, and there’s good chemistry between Carmen and Jake – expect to see them again at some point. But though I found this an easy and engaging novel, I always felt like I was being somewhat manipulated, and this is not a feeling I particularly relish.
My thanks to Thomas & Mercer for supplying a copy of this book via NetGalley in return for an honest review.
This book is the start of the new Sanchez & Heron series by Jeffery Deaver and Isabella Mondonado. I do always like to get in at the beginning of a new series and I have enjoyed Jeffery Deaver's works before. I had not heard of Mondonado prior to this, but it looks like she's written quite a few books herself.
Description: Carmen Sanchez is a tough Homeland Security agent who plays by the rules. But when her sister is attacked, revealing a connection to a series of murders across Southern California, she realizes a conventional investigation will not be enough to stop the ruthless perpetrator.
With nowhere else to turn, Sanchez enlists the aid of Professor Jake Heron, a brilliant and quirky private security expert who, unlike Sanchez, believes rules are merely suggestions. The two have a troubled past, but he owes her a favor and she’s cashing in. They team up to catch the assailant, who, mystifyingly, has no discernable motive and fits no classic criminal profile. All they have to go on is a distinctive tattoo and a singular obsession that gives this chillingly efficient tactician his nickname: Spider.
Over the next seventy-two hours, Sanchez and Heron find themselves in the midst of a lethal chess match with the killer as they race to stop the carnage. As the victims mount, so do the risks. Because this spider’s web of intrigue is more sinister—and goes far deeper—than anyone could possibly anticipate.
My Thoughts: The description is right and Carmen Sanchez is one tough cookie. She is absolutely fierce as an agent and seems to bend the rules as she feels justified. Jake Heron seemed an unlikely ally, but turned out to be quite an asset and he and Sanchez worked well together. Heron seemed to "go rogue" quite a bit though, making trust an issue sometimes. This was a fast-paced scenario as Sanchez and Heron raced to find this one before another victim was killed. A great start to the series and I recommend to anyone who likes highly tense, fast-paced novels.
Thanks to Thomas & Mercer through Netgalley for an advance copy.
Two Authors team-up on Duo Investigators Review of the Amazon First Reads Kindle eBook edition (August 1, 2024), released in advance of the official publication by Thomas & Mercer (September 1, 2024)
Authors Jeffery Deaver with his twisty murderous tales and Isabella Maldonado with her law enforcement background join forces with this first entry in a planned mini-series (Book #2 is already planned for 2025). Fatal Intrusion introduces Homeland Security agent Carmen Sanchez and professor / security expert / sometime hacker Jake Heron who team up to track down a serial killer who has a secretive cyber backup.
As with just about every Deaver book that I have read, the twists come fast and furious, particularly towards the end as the various levels of culprits are revealed and they begin to turn on each other. What initially seems to be a lone serial killer is revealed to be only the spear point of a much larger conspiracy. It is wildly improbable of course, but Deaver and Maldonado keep the action coming with several 'just-in-time' rescues along the way. Maybe the clues are a bit too easy to figure out and they are being led towards a scapegoat? But then, what is the real plan behind the scenes?
In any case, this was an easy pick out of this month's Amazon First Reads options as the Police Procedural offer. Having two veteran authors as the writers proved to be the best choice. The conclusion to Fatal Intrusion provides a hint about the likely investigation to come in the sequel.
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I have pretty much stayed away from Deavers books, thinking I would not like them. I really don't care for sabotage or espionage, and I thought that was what he wrote. And I still think he does, although I now know he writes plain old mystery thrillers too.
This book is the beginning of the Sanchez and Heron series. Carmen Sanchez is a detective for Homeland Security and Jacoby Heron is a computer geek - with contacts galore. In this book they team up to find a serial killer and pinpoint who the actual target was.
This book was 650 pages and I read it in three days - for two reasons. First and foremost it is the book due for my in person book club - tomorrow - and secondly it was actually that good. It is a page turner. Chapters are short, the plot moves right along without any lulls, and Deaver's character development is good, both for the main characters and the secondary ones. Although I found no big "ah ha" moments in the book, I felt it was just good story telling.
It may be a while, but I do intend to pick up the next book in this series - when it publishes.
Best-selling authors Jeffery Deaver and Isabella Maldonado team up in this page turning and captivating novel. Tough Homeland Security agent Carmen Sanchez plays by the rules. It's not until her sister is attacked, which leads to a connection of murders, that she realizes rules may have to be broken to stop the vicious perpetrator. She enlists the aid of a brilliant private security expert, Professor Jake Heron. They team up to catch the killer who doesn't seem to have a motive. All they have is a distinctive tattoo and a singular obsession. Over the next 72 hours a game of cat and mouse ensues with thrilling action as they race to stop the murders. I highly recommend this murder mystery!
Thank you to NetGalley and Thomas & Mercer for an arc of this novel in exchange for my honest review.
Even though I haven't read any of these authors' earlier works, I think this collaboration is fantastic! I was not expecting to enjoy it so much, but I couldn't put this book down. The plot advances at a steady pace, never becoming mired down in unnecessary details.
The characters in this story were everything I could have hoped for and I felt they worked well together. Despite having different ideas about how to do tasks most effectively, this odd duo is brilliant and efficient when working together.
Just as much as I enjoyed learning about the killers' perspective, who believed they were staying one step ahead of the law, I also admired the intricacy of the technology analysis and investigative methods.
I can’t wait for the next adventures of Carmen Sanchez and Jake Heron. This is an absolute MUST READ new series for fans of thrillers and police procedurals.
Having read and enjoyed books by both these authors - make that a bundle by Mr. Deaver, long a favorite of mine - you can only imagine my delight at getting my eyes on this one. That it's the first in a series only added to my excitement. Well, now that I've finished, I admit to being a little less excited - but looking forward to the next one nonetheless.
Most of the hitches in the gitalong, I think, come from simply trying to establish the backgrounds and personalities of the main characters - Homeland Security agent Carmen Sanchez and college professor and computer security expert extraordinaire Jacoby (Jake) Heron. They have a history of sorts, one that Sanchez, at least, isn't eager to reignite; for now, they're sort of in a hold-hands-to-keep-from-fighting relationship. But while they end up forging some semblance of cohesiveness, they never seemed to really "connect" with each other - nor, for that matter, with me; neither is someone with whom I'm eager to go share a beer (though I probably wouldn't turn down an offer from Jake if he asked).
While she's at work, Carmen receives a text that her mostly estranged sister, Selina, is the victim of an almost fatal knife attack. Because of the relationship, Carmen's boss, Eric Williamson, won't assign her to the case, so she asks for leave so she can investigate on her own. Although Selina can't identify her attacker, she did catch a glimpse of a unique tattoo; other clues, including another murder, lead to the suspicion that a dangerous serial killer is on the prowl. Because her department cronies are off-limits (and that Jake owes her a favor), Carmen reluctantly turns to him for help; they form a somewhat uneasy alliance with the common goal of catching a deadly but elusive killer.
In the mix are chapters from the killer's perspective, plenty of twists and a little too much in-depth descriptions of such things as roulette - actually, kind of interesting to me, though, so I won't complain much. The ending wrapped things up as well as brought fodder for the next installment, so I'm now looking forward to seeing how - or if - these two different personalities get it together when their new adventure begins (bring it on - I'm more than ready). Meantime, I thank the publisher, via NetGalley, for allowing me to get in on the action by way of a pre-release copy.
This looks to be the start of a new series featuring Carmen Sanchez, a Homeland Security agent and Jacoby “Jake” Heron, an unconventional private security expert. It’s clear from the off that these two have an uncomfortable history, but we only learn the details of that via later flashback chapters. It looks like there’s a serial killer on the loose – a man with a distinctive spider tattoo on his wrist. His first victim is a real estate developer whose main hobby is wildlife photography. His next intended victim is a chemistry student who, thankfully, manages to thwart his attempts. She is also Carmen Sanchez’s younger sister Selina, which is when the HS agent gets drawn into the investigation and reluctantly recruits Jake to assist her. As we get drawn into the story, one more murder and two more thwarted attempts, we see the contrasting styles of Carmen and Jake. As a federal agent, she adopts a “by the book” approach but realises how that can sometimes hamper their investigation, so she chooses to turn a blind eye when Jake takes a more freewheeling and pragmatic course. I’ve been a big fan of Jeffery Deaver’s work for almost 30 years, however Isabella Maldonado is a new name to me. It turns out, before she became a full time crime writer, she was a hostage negotiator in the FBI, which certainly adds credibility to the action scenes. In many ways though this is a classic Deaver novel with a complex plot and multiple twists right until the end.
Phew! I feel like I read ten books at once. This was my first full length Jeffery Deaver novel and, for the most part, I enjoyed this. However, there was WAY too much happening in this story. A murder investigation, cyber crime, a family drama, loads of sexual tension amongst pretty much everyone. Normally, I would love the commitment but this was overkill. Some of the dialogue felt like watching an episode of Law and Order if it was five days long and none of the boring parts where cut out. I liked Sanchez and Heron and loved the cliff hanger ending so I'll probably read book #2 but I fear I may be too dumb for this series.
Thanks to Thomas & Mercer and Netgalley for my free arc.
Modern, complicated and clever, this book introduces a duo which matches Carol Jordan and Tony Hill (Val McDermid) in terms of appeal and chemistry. How the authors made their interactions leap off the pages the way they did is impressive beyond even the twisty, turny plot which leads you first down one track and then rapidly down another. I loved the detail of the technological analysis and investigatory processes as much as I enjoyed getting the perspective of the killers who thought they were staying one step ahead of the law. Just fantastic.
This was a good thriller, but it lacked some suspense in the cat and mouse style game between the villain and heroes. The story starts off with a strong hook. It wasn't amazing, and I found myself struggling to become immersed into this story. The pacing of the story felt off. Where I wanted the book to ramp up the tension it slowed, and where I didn't need background detail it was given, which resulted in a book that felt lopsided. I honestly don't know how else to explain it. There was something missing in the balance of this story.
What I did like is the use of hackers to drive a more techno thriller vibe. The thing about Deaver is he will try something new with most things he writes. Sometimes they don't pan out that well, but I think the techno thriller vibe was strong. I would have liked it to delve more deeply into that world because what we're given is fairly shallow. But the book is aimed at a general audience. More detail is probably going to discourage readers when this book receives a sequel.
Thinking now on the two protagonists, and I can't yet say I buy into Sanchez's character. I don't find her relatable nor do I feel she's particularly well written. Heron, on the other hand, I do like. I'd be happy for his character to drive the story. I'm going to say outright that the only reason one character is male and one is female is because the authors want to introduce the will they/won't they trope into the series at some stage. There are already hints, so I'd say it's safe to assume book two may drive that trope home stronger.
Overall, not the strongest beginning to a series, especially when Deaver is one of the authors. But it's not a terrible story and I can see this having wide appeal. I admit I don't know anything about Isabella Maldonado. I may need to remedy that, just so I can unravel what influence her writing has on this story.
Thanks to the authors, the publisher, and Netgalley for providing a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
“Fatal Intrusion” by Jeffery Deaver & Isabella Maldonado is about a female homeland security agent who is out to get the person that attacked her sister. The sister was fortunate to survive and noticed a tattoo of a spider on her attacker which connects him to another murder. There are a lot of layers in this mystery and it delves deeply into the dark web which becomes very intense. I found myself struggling with this book because of the many layers of the story and for me the second half really dragged. The idea behind this story really intrigued me so I will probably give the next book in this new series a try.
Thank you NetGalley and Thomas & Mercer for the ARC of this book in exchange for my honest review.
I am a HUGE fan of Isabella Maldonado, HUGE. This is my first book by Jeffrey Deaver. I LOVED this book. Great characters, non stop action and so many twists.I can’t wait for more in this series. (I’m praying it’s a new series). So good.
Love the Jeffrey Deaver & Isabella Maldonado writing style. This new duo, Carmen & Jake, go well together trying to bring justice for Carmen’s sister after she is attacked despite their antagonistic past together.
It started out slow and OK but after the 40% mark it started reaching heights and corners that you wouldn't think were possible. I loved Sanchez from the first moment but, Jacoby Heron grew on me along the novel, I loved his tactics of bending the rules before breaking them, and the slow creeping feels between the main character, I don't prefer Crime solving partners to be romantic partners too but I might allow Sanchez and Heron. 4.5 Stars rounded up to 5
A fun read. Uses lots of tropes, but in and enjoyable way. Good action and characters interact nicely. Don't rely on it for factual information, not that it's all wrong but the authors made liberal use of poetic license for the sake of the story.
First, I don't like novels about serial killers. That's not life and not even good storytelling; it's like using an assault rifle to blow out the candles on a birthday cake.
Second, if you are going to have several major murders, perform them over a longer time period. I find it difficult to believe that this killer would have the time, energy, and ingenuity to perform these murders in such a short time period.
And the compulsive behavior therapy (whatever this is)? Writing about psychotherapy and psychotherapists in this way just seems unethical and exploitative.
On the other hand, I liked the Sanchez and Heron characters, who were allowed to find their own space in the novel and, Heron especially, grow. Excepting the murders, I liked the twists and developments in this story.
What a duo - Deaver and Maldonado - a masterpiece.
The authors of Fatal Intrusion have written a story of a female agent who seems to play by the rules. However, when her sister is attacked, the protagonist Carmen she steps out of her comfort zone. In trouble, she seeks the help of Professor Jake Heron.
Together, they race against time to stop more killings.
I can tell you that the novel has all of the ingredients to keep you captivated and entertained throughout the entire novel leaving you at the end with the thought that you want more.
Have you ever looked up something on Wikipedia only to find you’re now reading about the mating habits of squirrels on Wikipedia 2 hours later? That seems to have happened to this author. It’s incredibly bogged down with information that isn’t needed. If a character plays roulette, for example, there is a long and lengthy explanation about the history and game.
I have lost interest, mostly finding it too bogged down with Wikipedia lessons. The next book in the series may be better with a different editor who knows how to use m scissors ✂️
As a wave of murders grips Southern California, an unlikely pair must untangle the mysterious patterns of an elusive killer in Fatal Intrusion (Sanchez & Heron, Band 1) by Jeffery Deaver and Isabella Maldonado.
The book was pretty action-packed and had good characters. The story had some very good twists.
Fatal Intrusion is a good crime drama and police procedural with great action.
If I never read the word intrusion again in the near future, I'll be a happy person.
But seriously, this was such an intriguing whodunit thriller. As the reader, we got to know who committed the crimes, but we were blind as to why. Not as blind as the investigators, possibly because Carmen couldn't help being in the way and Jake just let her ruthlessly run rough-shod over everyone, but still. Trying to figure out the motives for each crime was its own sort of fun. And crazy. I enjoyed myself and where this story left off, with the possibility of future books. And maybe a little romance between these characters thrown in?
This is my first book from either author. I don’t know how they section out the writing, but I’m impressed! This is a serial killer book with astonishing details on hacking. I found it very interesting! While I cringe at some of Sanchez’s entitling behaviors (I hate it when authors feel the need to do this to female detectives), partnering with an elite hacker certainly adds to the dynamics of these two. The authors give us all we need to know about this killer’s habits, and then berates us for being so stupid as to buy into it, lol! A second installment will be out in September.