A one star review for otherwise five star books by Richard Paul Evans
First I want to say that all the other books I've read by Richard Paul Evans are five star worthy and I highly recommend you read them.
Robert, the main character and his young daughter are the blameless and innocent ones of this story. The author does very effectively detail the importance and benefit of the grace Robert discovers by forgiving those who have used him in a self serving way that caused him to be deeply resentful. That was the most identifiable and significant part of the story for me.
ALL the other characters, with the exception of Roberts innocent daughter fall below the make to my way of thinking at the books ending. ALL of them totally clueless as to the gift that Robert gave them from the deepest regions of his heart and soul.
I've pasted here below, a review by another verified reader (spoiler alert) who was spot on with her observations.
Read on if you want to know if it's worth your time investment to read this book.
p.s. I guess there is something to be gained from everything we invest our time in pursuing.
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Leona Jewel
Very Poor Effort
May 14, 2010
Format: Mass Market Paperback
I'm very surprised at the large number of favorable reviews that this book received. This being my first time to read a Richard Paul Evans book, I will not read another. I was not so much put off by the Hallmark Hall of Fame'ish sappiness of the storyline as I was by the poor quality writing. (I happen to like Hallmark movies.) My biggest problem was that the storyline was not developed in a believeable manner. For this "perfect" marriage to fall apart after only a four week separation while Robert was on his first book tour just did not seem realistic. Moreover, it was more Allyson's inability to cope with the new situation than it was Robert's attraction to the life of fame and fortune that led to their problems, which, of course, was the opposite of what the author was trying to develop. From my perspective, Robert seemed to stay pretty grounded and behaved about how I would expect. He did not fall for another woman; he was still eating in Appleby's restaurants. The one thing Robert could have done differently was attempt to assert more control over his schedule and not allow his publisher to control him so completely. But, in his position as a first time author and an overnight success, I would expect him to be reluctant to be so brave as to say "no." If Allyson had been so genuinely interested in Robert's success and giving him a chance to live his dream, I think, at least initially, she would have been more willing to go with the flow. If over an extended period of time (one or two years), she grew tired of this new way of life, and he had really demonstrated that his basic character had been adversely influenced by the lure of the high life (and there had been tangible evidence of this in the storyline), then the book might have worked. The author just did not really develop his theme.
One other thing that did not work was the switch between a first person narrative from Robert's perspective and then a narrative from inside Allyson's head.
There were a few glitches in the story. Would it really take an entire day to fly from Salt Lake to Birmingham, Alabama? Also, on the last night, it was mentioned several (way too many) times about how treacherous it was to be out driving in the blizzard, and yet, neither Robert nor Allyson gave any thought to having their daughter out with Nancy in the storm.