He could live forever. But is he willing to pay the price? It's 2099, and the former United States of America is in the midst of another civil war. In the wake of a revolutionary technology that grants people a second chance at life, an impenetrable wall divides the prosperous nation of Zion from the slums of MiddleLand. Stuck inside the wall and desperate to reunite with his fiancée, contraband smuggler Asher is hell-bent on finding a way out. When his uncle offers him a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity, Asher is faced with an impossible impersonate a talented Zion soldier and risk his life in the Canonization, a brutal gladiator duel against a champion who never loses. But defeating an unbeatable opponent and reuniting with his one true love is only the beginning. Asher thought the second life policy was outlawed. But the truth is far more sinister, and he soon finds himself caught up in the middle of a terrifying rebellion that will decide the fate of both sides of the Wall. As an explosive and futuristic sci-fi adventure that artfully weaves together high-octane action and heart-stopping romance, The Wall presents an unforgettable YA dystopia that's perfect for fans of Divergent , The Hunger Games , and Dune .
**Thanks to the publisher and NetGalley for an advance copy of this title in exchange for a fair and honest review**
I wanted to like this book, I really did. The premise sounded interesting (Hunger Games / Divergent vibes) and the cover was beautiful. There were some excellent parts with exciting action and beautiful writing.
However...
- the gushing, lovey dovey, over-descriptive sections were saccharine sweet - the vocabulary choices were jarring at times - e.g. "behooves" & "opines" - the whole thing needed a grammar check - who's / whose, vial / vile & break / brake were all used incorrectly - the religious tones were overbearing and there were too many occasions were the plot relied on an impossible situation being resolved through prayer and something immediately happening to save the day
A good redraft would fix a lot of these problems and I hope it happens because there is a lot of promise. I just don't think it's ready for publication yet.
The Wall is a young adult dystopian Christian fiction novel. Yes, you read that right--this is a Christian fiction for young adults. and if you have somone who loves books like The Hunger Games and Divergent--well, this is going to be a great book for them to explore.
It takes place in the future. Around the year 2099 I believe. Bibles have been banned. Guns have been banned. Religion has been banned--the leader (the sultan) wanting all to believe he has taken the place of God because of the creation of second life. He will take care of everyone now.
You feel the factions aspect from Divergent-- especially with the wall. And it's Hunger Games oriented as the rich are doing it to protect everyone from themselves. And Middle Americas screams District 12.
This is a tale of sacrifice. How far will you go to do what is right? do you trust in yourself or in God and His power? As I said earlier, it is unmistakably Christian fiction and this is really needed for the young adult genre. There is enough excitement to enjoy a rousing adventure. I also enjoyed teh nods to the 1980s.
I felt there were a few inconsistencies but considering it's young adult fiction I don't think it's that big of a deal.
4 stars for the genre.
*I was given a copy of this as an ARC from the publisher and NetGalley. i was not required to give a positive review and all opinions are 100% my own.
Received as a review copy from Booksirens, this is an honest review. The Wall is an absolute, deeply visual and poignant masterpiece of a dystopian story. In this future America is nothing more than a memory and in it's place is a country divided into Zion, the supposed shining place filled with the best of things for the chosen that gets to benefit... protected by a mighty wall. For everyone else they exist awash in a ruined land; steeped in Zion's drugs and trash but people within this hell are fighting back and She's uncle has a very crazy plan to take to the people of privileged. With Asher impersonating a man called Amos, he enters a highly celebrated contest that could earn Asher one of the most precious people he loves: Sarai, the daughter of the man that destroyed Asher's world. Winning the tough-skilled contest is one thing; bringing down a dictatorship with own dark secrets will require a willingness to sacrifice for what it means to be free.
The Wall is a thrilling dystopian novel that gave me major Red Rising vibes while still carving out its own unique identity.
What I loved most was the clean romance, the exciting plot, the constant twists and turns, and the action. The Biblical themes were woven naturally into the story and felt genuinely meaningful. I especially appreciated the idea that drifting from God often isn't one giant leap, but a series of small choices, as well as the emphasis on surrendering our battles to Him. At the same time, the story doesn't shy away from the reality of wrestling with faith through doubt and anger.
The worldbuilding is another strong point. The geography, social hierarchy, and history all feel well developed, creating a setting that's easy to immerse yourself in.
I typically enjoy fast-paced stories, but there were moments when I wished the narrative would slow down and spend more time developing the characters. At times, the commitment to "show, don't tell" made certain descriptions feel a bit unclear, leaving me uncertain about what was happening. There were also a few plot points that had me questioning the characters' decisions, and one time jump that initially felt more like an unmarked flashback.
Overall, though, I highly enjoyed this story. Red Rising is my favorite series, and The Wall was a fun, action-packed, and meaningful journey through territory that felt familiar while still offering something fresh.
The Wall is a fast-paced dystopian sci-fi novel that’s premise involves a wall being put up so that a huge section of the US is completely segregated from Zion (a utilitarian state where the elite are able to be brought back to life as much as they like).
The book follows Asher, son of the former rebel leader of the Defiance, as he goes on a journey to avenge his parents, win back his ‘eternity mate’, and free his citizens from The Middle (what they call the inside of the wall). He’s a great main character, whose love of 20th century pop culture was such a funny part of his character.
The pacing of this book is excellent and I love that it has multiple POVs, although it was a bit jarring at first to flip between first and third person so often. But it massively added to the story and it was great to know what was going on elsewhere in the different facets of the rebellion.
Downfalls for me were that at certain points I felt like we got a lot more detail than needed, and then parts which I think needed to be a lot more fleshed out were barely touched upon. I would have loved to had more of the Canonization in the book - I actually strongly feel that Penn could have easily made this book 200 pages longer and it would have still been just as gripping.
This was such a fun read!! If you were a big fan of The Hunger Games or The Maze Runner - I can see you really enjoying this.
Thanks to the author and Book Sirens for sending me an ARC of this book!
It's rare that I finish a book these days. But The Wall drew me in. Was it the flawed characters? Yes. Asher. Cephas. Similarities with our current world? Probably. But even more so, it's rare to read a dystopian novel that has an underlying component of faith in God.
I would like to thank NetGalley, Brian Penn and BooksGoSocial for an ARC copy of this book in exchange for my honest review
2,5 ⭐ - it's an ok distopian novel, if you like reading futuristic novels. This is the one for you. I found the plot predictable with barely any surprises.
I received this book in exchange for an honest review. I wasn't sure if I was going to be able to get into this one as the book started. I was super interested in the love story between Asher and Sarai, but I didn't get how Cephas and Asher's relationship played into things and some of the nods back to things that exist now or in the 80s was odd. But, once the book got moving, I was in for the long haul. As soon as Asher was set to battle Legion and try to get through the tower, I was hooked. I was literally waiting for Renatus to figure things out and when he realized he was duped, he was just as pissed as expected. It was not the ending I anticipated but it was good closure.
"There is no greater love than to lay down one’s life for one’s friends.”
“Don’t shelter yourself from the storms of life, son. Absorb it, relish it. It’s okay to get soaked in it; the sun always returns.”
Excellent Christian dystopian novel. There were great Biblical principles throughout, and I loved the 2 main characters. Only 4 stars since there were several more battles than I would have liked (although very appropriate for the storyline.) The ending was amazing! Enjoyed it and will continue the series.
The Wall is a thought-provoking, unforgettable, and incredibly entertaining novel that will take its readers on a brilliant journey full of twists and turns galore! The reader in The Wall will be thrust into a dystopian future in the year 2099 where we witness a fractured United States that has plunged into civil war with a wall that divides the wealthy from the poor. The reader will be introduced to Asher, a smuggler who is desperate to reunite with his one true love but it won’t be easy, after all, everyone is fighting to get their clutches on a technology that promises eternal life, and with this comes great danger and dark secrets. The reader will follow Asher as he is thrown into the chaos as he fights to be reunited with his beloved, but things will only get more complicated for Asher when he finds himself caught up in a rebellion that could change the course of history. What follows is a shocking and thrilling dystopia tale in which Asher will have to decide whether to risk it all or keep true to his original plan and this book lovers is the short premise of the incredible The Wall!
The story laced between the pages of The Wall is thrilling, and unlike anything, I have read before! The story is an intriguing one because, from the beginning, the book is shrouded in mystery and secrecy. The reader does not know what is about to happen, and so it captivates them to read. As I read the book, I found myself invested very quickly in the story and wanted to know more!
Brian Penn has managed to write an incredible novel that is full of suspense and poignancy. This will keep readers of The Wall turning the pages into the early hours of the morning. Penn is a writer who does not hold back; he thrusts his readers into the thick of the drama very early on, and he keeps them turning the pages thanks to his excellent descriptive powers. The author perfectly describes the scenes in his book, as well as his characters, and this correctly places the reader in the thick of the story as the reader can imagine every place and event perfectly.
I really wanted to like this book. Dystopia, Christian, some romance? What’s not to like. Unfortunately (for me at least) practically the whole novel. The plot in of itself isn’t bad—typical dystopian stuff—rich snobby elites, poor righteous folks, and a wall between them. The Second Life policy was very interesting and definitely set this apart from other dystopian novels. And Christianity was a part of this plot. That being said, here are the things I personally cannot get over: - the povs; its first person for Asher (MMC) and then third person for everyone else. This is just strange to read one, because there aren’t chapter breaks between each (so you don’t always realize you’re switching characters), and two it almost makes it feel like Asher is washing all of the different plot events occur. Idk it could just be a me thing, but I found this very distracting. - SO MUCH TELLING; “show, not tell” is a common phrase expressed in the writing community but I never realized how much of an impact showing actually makes. I had almost zero emotional connection to this book. I hate to say it, but reading the proposal scene, the trials, and most of the romantic aspects left no emotional impact on me. It could be because of a lack of a depth, but I think the bigger issue is that I was always told what was happening and never allowed to experience the fields along with the characters. - can we not use normal dialogue tags?; as a writer, myself, I understand the constant quandary of over using “said.” however, “said” was used as a dialogue tag 3 times in the entire novel. THREE. Other than that, they’re either weren’t dialogue tags, or they were strange things that were trying too hard not to be “said.” tell me why he’s being kissed, then snarled at, and then kissed again?😭 - meshing of the faith aspect; I think Christian fiction/incorporating Christianity into fiction can be done two ways: very well, or reading-it-as-a-Christian-makes-me-itchy. At the beginning of this novel, I was quite itchy. I think this could be because this feels almost like it’s set in a different world, and I often find myself itchy when explicit, true Christianity is introduced into fictitious worlds. As the book went along, I did find myself less and less itchy with the inclusion of Christianity, but I’m not sure that would apply to non-Christian readers. It also just felt kind of shallow overall…? Idk maybe that’s harsh, but I felt like the characters had very dramatic moments of trust or ultimate not-trust. - adjectives; why so many? Kind of going along with the dialogue tags, I have never had to search so many words while reading a book. These are some of the most obsolete adjectives, and they often take away from the actual text itself. You do not need to describe a battle in so many words. In fact, it’s probably better if you don’t. My mind can fill that stuff in, but if you have to describe it all, I have to pause the mental battle scene going on to try and adjust for the description of whatever it is being described. Here’ just one example: “I wait for my flying voltaic crescent-disc to spin its way back to my hand before my burning quadriceps conquer the last set of stairs.” 😭😭😭 I *promise* there is a better way to describe that. I had to reread this part about four times before I understood what was happening, and at that point all the intensity that had built up before then was lost.
I’m going to be honest, I think the main reason I actually finished this book is so that I could leave a review of the whole book – because it had the chance to get better. Unfortunately, that didn’t happen. I doubt I’ll read the rest of the series. It gets the second star for the Christian aspect.
🗡️Violence: not very explicit, violence is told about far more than it’s actually shown 🤬Language: far more than I expected from a Christian novel (h*ll, d*mn, etc) 🌶️Spice: 1.5/5 • kissing, nothing explicit, but more was implied than I was expecting 📚Genre: dystopian and sci-fi with a side of romance and Christian Fiction 🔁Rereadability: probably never will reread
Outstanding! Perfect for fans of UNWIND, THE HUNGER GAMES, DIVERGENT, UNDER THE DOME, and ORYX AND CRATE
Whether you are an avid sci-fi/fantasy and dystopian reader, you're looking for a solid introduction to the genre, or you've vowed to read more futuristic dystopian fiction in the new year, look no further than Brian Penn's THE WALL.
Action-packed, thoughtful, romantic, dystopian, and dark, this is a perfect read for fans of The Hunger Games, Divergent, Under the Dome, Oryx and Crate, and The Windup Girl. I'd also compare it to the films The Island, Surrogates, and Ready Player One.
From the beginning, Penn deeply immerses us in a world of depravity, greed, poverty, and moral ambiguity, both inside and outside of The Wall. At every turn, the choices that these characters make are complex, as are the characters themselves. As much as we might want to judge a character for their choices, or how much we might want to hate a character upon first introduction, Penn's nuanced descriptions force us to appreciate the complexities of the world he has built as well as the societal and psychological complexities that come with the human condition.
There is also the goings-on of this world that makes this book so unique, including the possibilities for living a second life after cellular resuscitation, not to mention "blood-letting" and "sculpting," which are more complex and dangerous (and honestly, steampunk) forms of plastic surgery and blood transfusion. It's these aspects that so easily lend themselves to the 2005 film The Island (which I say with the utmost respect; I love that movie), as similar themes of the value of life, and perceiving the poor as lesser life forms are questioned. There's also the recurring theme here that nothing can be valued if it is offered in an unlimited supply, which literally leads to lives not being valued, because they can always be lengthened or replaced... but at what cost?
I don't want to give too much of the story away, because this book is such an incredible journey. But I loved the world of this book, its moral and philosophical leanings, the dystopian and steampunk elements, and of course, its "eternity mate" love story. It's an incredible book, I congratulate the author on the accomplishment of coming up with it and writing it, and I cannot wait to read what comes next from Brian Penn.
An extraordinary work that stands out as a true masterpiece in contemporary literature. The intricacy of the plot is nothing short of remarkable, I was left in complete awe of the author's genius and creativity. Penn's ability to weave such a compelling dystopian narrative infused with profound themes of faith and moral resilience showcases his intellectual depth and storytelling acumen. The novel invites readers to explore a richly constructed, tyrannical world that not only captivates the imagination but also prompts critical reflection on the human condition.
The descriptive prose employed throughout the book allows readers to become fully immersed in the narrative, allowing for an easy appreciation of the wealth of detail that Penn meticulously assembles. Many have drawn parallels between this work and Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet, a comparison I wholeheartedly agree with. Yet, I contend that The Wall more effectively embodies the thought-provoking essence of George Orwell's literature, resulting in a completely unique and multifaceted experience that combines romance, action, and so much more, keeping readers engrossed and eagerly anticipating each twist and turn.
As the plot unfolds, the excitement intensifies with every page, revealing unexpected developments that challenge the characters and engage the audience. The manner in which the author integrates pertinent scripture into the prose as an integral part of the narrative enhances it significantly for me, and illustrates how God's Word remains eternally true and trustworthy across all times. While I don’t wish to divulge any specific plot details that might spoil the journey for future readers, I can confidently assert that the conclusion is nothing short of brilliant! Overall, this book comes highly recommended from me, particularly for teens and young adults who are drawn to drama-laden narratives that inspire contemplation and inspire introspection. I now eagerly look forward to exploring more works by this impressive author, which I believe is a hallmark of an excellent read.
The Wall is a captivating dystopian tale that pulls you in from the start. Penn wastes no time with excessive backstory, immersing you in the here and now which shocked me. I wasn’t sure what to think at the start but I guess all you needed to know about was The Wall, one side “has it all” and one side was the dumping grounds. Everything else can be picked up as it goes.
The concept of The Wall felt familiar to me but I couldn’t quite place it. As the story progressed, I realized it had a combination of The Hunger Games and 1984, two classics. And where it branches out was an interesting idea that brought to mind the movie The Island, one of my favorites – so it’s in incredibly good company in my eyes.
Welland’s narration is a standout, striking the perfect balance between performance and storytelling. His ability to convey emotions adds a layer of depth to the characters and the plot, keeping me hooked from start to finish.
One aspect that may divide listeners is the increasing focus on religion (specifically God, The Bible, and prayer) as the story unfolds. To each their own here – but I started to get that “okay this is a bit much” feel for me. I don’t want to take away from the author, character, or readers’ beliefs – so I want to make sure and say that this could be just a “me issue” – so don’t base my review off of that alone. I did not take away or add any stars because of this.
Overall, The Wall is a gripping listen that will leave you thinking long after the final chapter. Which is great because this is apparently the first book in a trilogy!? I didn’t realize that going into it and it has a full arc to it (kudos for no cliffhanger). I have an idea of where the series will go and I’m intrigued to see if I’m right.
Penn’s storytelling, coupled with Welland’s narration, makes this audiobook a standout in the dystopian genre.
Set in 2099, this story takes place in what used to be America. A wall separates the privileged, while on the other side, Asher, a contraband smuggler, living in what is practically a wasteland of drugs and trash, where guns and Bibles are banned.
As Asher joins a rebellion, he undergoes a sculpting process to assume the identity of Amos, a soldier of Zion, in hopes of reuniting with his fiancée, Sarai, on the other side of the wall. Asher discovers what the Lazarites are up to and must choose between fighting to expose them or fall to temptation.
The pacing kept me engaged, but everything felt a bit rushed. I think the book could have benefited from a longer length, which would have allowed for more in-depth backstory to some things. There was quite a bit left to the imagination. I found myself annoyed with the lack of character development, but it eventually materialized.
This YA dystopian novel combines romance and action, with some religious themes present. That is not something I seek out in a book, however, those religous elements did add to the story.
Asher's references to 80s music and even quoting The Terminator seemed out of place in a 2099 setting.
I found the ending satisfying and unexpected...This book is the first in a trilogy.
I typically read multiple genres to avoid recognizing similarities and comparing them. Unfortunately, that happened with this book, which says it is for fans of The Hunger Games and Red Rising. Having recently read the first three books in the Red Rising series, followed by Sunrise on the Reaping, I couldn't help but make some comparison, which is unfair to this story. That's a me problem and part of the reason I usually split up likewise genres.
Thanks to the author, Brian Penn, for providing the audiobook. Overall, it was an enjoyable listen with a compelling storyline and I think fans of YA Dystopian will appreciate this.
In The Wall, we delve into the intricate life of Asher, a smuggler trapped by an insurmountable barrier that starkly divides the affluent state of Zion from the impoverished MiddleLand. Driven by the haunting memory of his late fiancée, Sarai, and the mystery surrounding her untimely death—believed by some to be more than just an unfortunate accident—Asher's journey is one of determination and heartbreak.
As the narrative unfolds, Asher is confronted with an ethically challenging proposition by his uncle: to impersonate a soldier of Zion and thereby ensure his liberation. Recognizing the monumental risks, Asher valiantly embarks on this daring endeavor. In doing so, he grapples with a seemingly invincible foe, pushing his limits in unprecedented ways. Amidst these trials, his unwavering resolve to reunite with his beloved Sarai remains steadfast.
The Wall proved to be a captivating young adult dystopian novel blended with Christian values. Its characters are richly developed, pulling readers into the labyrinth of their aspirations and fears. The meticulously woven plot keeps one riveted, eagerly anticipating each subsequent revelation. The romantic narrative that anchors the tale is moving, resonating deeply, and leaving an indelible mark.
Admittedly, the book's momentum does wane slightly as the story unfolds. Nevertheless, this fleeting lapse in pace hardly diminishes the novel's overarching allure. Asher's tribulations strike a chord, endearing him to readers and invoking empathy.
For readers of dystopian and science fiction tales, this novel is a must-read. Penn's adept storytelling, combined with the riveting character dynamics, make The Wall an absorbing read—one that challenges you to reflect upon the depths of love and the indomitable nature of the human spirit.
Thanks to NetGalley and booksgosocial for my first read of the year. This dystopian science fiction is based in the year 2099 when the technology has been invented so that people get a second chance at life - if they die, they can be brought back to life. But this technology is available to only the privileged. The rest of the populace are made to live like vermins and kept alive only to serve the needs of the rich. They are caged within an electric wall with no ocean borders. In such a world, a boy from the downtrodden falls in love with any elite girl. Will their love survive? Will they be able to fight the system in order to claim their life together, and more importantly, the lives of the downtrodden?
This book got me hooked from the very first page. It is written in a simple way which is easy to read, and so can be completed fast. The book is medium paced, just the way I like it. The main characters are lovable, and the author was able to get me involved in their cause. I also liked the supporting set of characters, especially Cephas and Kenan. I especially liked there portrayal of the leader of the elites, the villain. The author added enough grey to his character to make him more human, and to show that no man is all evil, but his misplaced purposes can make him so. The conversations throughout the book were poignant. The world building was well thought out and adequate.
I was a bit put off by the Christian themes in the story, though. Moreover, many of the achievements of the main characters seemed just to easy. I felt some parts could have been described in more details, like the canonization trials. I also wasn't a fan of the ending. I realise it was supposed to make the story more poignant, but for me it ended up reading a bit hollow.
With all these pros and cons, I still liked the story and will recommend it to all fans of Dystopian novels.
I received this advanced reading copy from NetGalley and the publisher, some time ago, in order to give an honest review...
Overall, I enjoyed this novel of one possible future of the United States. The action takes place in 2099, on both sides of the wall built when a civil war again breaks out. The Wall is erected around a reservation area covering a square roughly running from Wyoming to Wisconsin to Arkansas to New Mexico. Those living within the borders of these reservations struggle to survive; the government of the rest of the former USA air drop drugs into the area to keep many docile. Readers who read post-apocalyptic books will recognize the living conditions.
The surrounding areas are now called Zion and living conditions are much better there. Medical technology has progressed to the point that those dying can be rejuvenated. Unfortunately, this requires that someone else must die to provide the necessary "life cell". Guess who that means! There is a class divide in Zion, so these treatments are now pretty much limited to those in power.
The book covers a lot of ground and a variety of genres. There is a love story, somewhat similar to Romeo and Juliet, between two people from both sides of the Wall. In order to see his love once more, Asher agrees to go undercover in Zion. But first, there's a section of the book that has a Hunger Games vibe; with a little flash to a bit of Game of Thrones, for me. There's battles, sacrifices, noble deeds, etc. The book is definitely also religious fiction. In other words, a lot of ground is covered, so it may appeal to a wide range of readers for various reasons. The ending may surprise some readers, but did fit the tone of the book.
Brian Penn's The Wall has all the makings of a great series starter. Action, adventure, an awful dystopian setting in a recognizable USA, and characters you want to root for and others you love to hate.
For many reasons, I wanted to give this book a 5* rating. I loved the Christian dystopian angle (which I know others won't, and that's why I mention it). Asher's character was well-developed and his motivations, flaws, ticks, and goals were clear, for the most part.
Where things started getting muddy for me was with the too-large cast of characters, a less-than-well-developed romance between Asher and Sarai, and the many grammar errors. I can overlook the large cast and just skip over names (this is easy enough to solve by combining characters), but the romance between the two MC's fell flat for me and the grammar issues pushed my rating down the scale. And an occasional grammar error is no issue for me. I've even noticed these in the best selling traditionally-published book or two. But the number of grammatical errors was distracting at times and I even put the book down once because of it. Ultimately, I picked the book back up and finished it because I needed to know what happened to Asher's vision.
Overall, I can still recommend this book for those who don't mind the grammar issues, the large cast or the mediocre romance. The Wall was packed with action and had a timely message about unity and working together across class / educational / ethnic and other divides that this nation needs desperately.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
The Wall throws readers into a future America, fractured by civil war in 2099. A revolutionary technology promising eternal life fuels the conflict, with an impenetrable wall separating the privileged who have access from those left behind.
Our protagonist, Asher, is a smuggler yearning to reunite with his lost love across the divide. However, his world is upended when he discovers the dark secret behind the coveted immortality – it comes at a horrific cost to those on the other side of the Wall.
The novel is a thrilling blend of elements. We have the high-stakes world-building of a dystopian YA adventure, reminiscent of Divergent or The Hunger Games. This is layered with a heart-wrenching romance, driving Asher's determination to defy the established order.
Asher grapples with the allure of eternal life for himself and his love contrasted with the devastating consequences it inflicts on others. Will he succumb to temptation or risk everything to expose the truth?
Readers seeking action and suspense will find themselves engaged in Asher's fight against an "unbeatable opponent." The inclusion of a rebellious group, The Defiance, adds another layer of intrigue, suggesting a potential uprising against the oppressive system.
Overall, The Wall seems is a fast-paced adventure with a captivating blend of romance, rebellion, and moral conflict. Fans of dystopian fiction who enjoy a dash of forbidden love and a fight for a just cause will enjoy it to the core.
I loved how it turned out, I will definitely recommend it.
What would you pay to live forever? The Wall is an action-filled YA dystopian novel I thoroughly enjoyed. The premise is intriguing. The world-building is impeccable. The characters are diverse and unforgettable. While some may say this is futuristic, it's not too far away.
Let's start with the world-building. To say Brian Penn is an expert when it comes to world-building is an understatement. The world he's created is filled with complexities and nuances. This world is rooted in reality so it feels familiar yet is so far gone, it's fantastical. The layers of construct only illuminate the author's writing ability. Once I dove in, I didn't want to leave.
The characters are well written. I connected with Asher and his quest to find a way through the wall. He goes through so many obstacles yet retains his strength, his fortitude. His very existence is cause for alarm, but his actions will justify the means. The rest of the characters are truly unforgettable. Each character has their own voice, their own personality.
If you're looking for a fresh, original YA dystopian with a splash of romance, take my advice and read The Wall.
I'll start with what I liked about this book. The writing style is very good and the vocabulary is great for a teen, especially seeing those SAT words being applied to a story. The characters and overall plot are YA appropriate, or "clean" as others have mentioned. In particular, I really enjoyed the beginning of the book that was definitely reminiscent of the Hunger Games. The plot is decent, and although parts are predictable, the ending itself wasn't what I expected.
There's parts of this book that fall short though. There are really only two female characters in the entire book (the main character's girlfriend and her mother), which I feel is a huge oversight. There's no diversity among characters either. There is also a religious/Christian element introduced later in the book. Personally, I'm not a religious person so this isn't really an aspect of a book I seek out, but I feel like religion was pretty surface level without much exploration.
Overall, the book was a little hit-and-miss for me but like others have mentioned, it's a "clean" read for a teen.
I received a free copy and am leaving a review voluntarily. Thank you to Hidden Gems Books and author.
Dystopian and science-fiction fans would enjoy reading Brian Penn's latest novel "The Wall". The main character of the story is Asher, the last son of The Great Defiance. The year is 2099. There is The Wall located in the middle of the former United States of America. It separates Zion from the Middleland.
Asher's fiancée Sarai is in Zion and Asher is in Middleland. Both of them are eager to know whether their soulmate is alive. Sarai's father built The Wall fourteen years ago.
Six months after her engagement, Sarai died in an accident. She was secretly given a second-life protocol. When Asher got a chance to enter Zion, he immediately agreed to it. Asher is all set to enter a territory that could be dangerous for him but he could go to any extent to reunite with his love.
I appreciate the vivid imagination of the author in world building. The character of Asher is well written and my favorite from the story. The book is well paced and there are no dull moments in it. The writing style of the author is nice. The cover photo is eye-catching and I loved the title of the book. Add it to your tbr.
How can one tyrant erect a wall and destroy a section of a nation? It was done in the Cold War. And it has been done since. The author reflects, “The first step in what was then an emerging dictatorship was to take away means to defend yourself, then force the population to become dependent on your provisions, then mollify them with drugs and booze. Soon they no longer care that The Wall even exists, perhaps they don’t even notice it anymore.”
Propaganda, rich with false promises and suggestions that life is much better than they imagine, is nothing new. Harvesting lives to support the rich? It’s happening today in illegal organ transplants. This story isn’t that farfetched, unfortunately.
In a Romeo and Juliet romance of division, enmity, and cruel government, we step into an awful dystopian future in the United States. The characters must choose between the lies they’ve been fed and the brazen truth of God’s word in Scripture.
However, the ending births hope and the story lives on. It’s a dynamic read, one which engages readers in the spicy characters, and challenges their natural tendency to judge others’ choices and actions.
This book is a pretty in the middle YA dystopian sci-fi. I read this book pretty quickly and I think it speeds through most things that could have really used more time. I think this book could have blossomed if it was separated into two longer detail oriented about what came to be instead of flying through its defeat. Comparing it to other dystopian classics is a bit of a stretch but I can definitely see the really good parts of the story but I don’t find myself getting worried if things will work out for the main character because almost all of the time it does work out. Also, you reach a point in the book where all of the sudden God and the Bible is very prevalent to how the story is told and to me that just sticks out when is comes to sci-fi. I definitely still think it was an okay read but I find a lot of the writing to just be full of complex words most people don’t use in conversation as well as sometimes cringe references, but I just think I am too old for the demographic of this book. I still enjoyed it overall.
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The first thought I had once the main character decides to go through the transformation for the sake of his love was: I want to play this video game, but I am OK too if it's turning into a show. It grabs us from the very first page. A wall was risen to separate the people and rank them, they are being used as a life resource for the rich and powerful to prolong life, and the couple in love is separated not only by death, a second life, a wall but by the fact that he is the son of the rebellion and she is the daughter of the powerful ruler. It gave me Romeo and Juliet meets Jasmine vibes; she has a fun, stormy personality. With multiple POVs, there is a plan in action, and we can't stop turning the page. A lot, I mean a lot of 70s, 80s, references, sometimes a bit too much. I want to be focused on this new futuristic worldbuilding, and it pulls me away. It will please action, gamers, or just dystopian readers to reunite the couple. Great size for a book 1. I got a copy from the author for an honest review. My opinions are my own.
I want to start off by saying that I received a complimentary audiobook. In return for my honest thoughts and review. I am very new to this author and can’t wait for more books after listening to this book. The narrator does amazing job keeping me into this book. I couldn’t stop listening to it. I love dystopia books. Sometimes I do have a hard time with these types of book. But I didn’t have any issues with this audiobook. I honestly fell in love with the cover alone. That’s another reason I said yes. I am super glad too. I love the world and the writing style and the characters. Asher is a young man who is trying to get the love of his life. A world divided by a wall. One side is wealthy and while the other is struggling to find food addicted to things. Asher try’s to go to the other side of the wall to save his love and his home. I highly recommend this audiobook. Thank you the author for allowing me the opportunity to read/listen to this book.All these thoughts and my own opinions
If you’re looking for a solid YA book with Christian themes that you can actually feel good about handing to your teens, put The Wall by Brian Penn on your list. This is a YA dystopian set in the year 2099. Think the class divide and romance of Powerless, the high-stakes tension and games of The Hunger Games, and the tech-heavy, militarized world of Divergent—all rolled into one story. Asher is stuck inside the slums behind the Wall, while the girl he loves is the princess of Zion. They love each other, but the system is stacked against them, and Asher has to risk everything to escape and reach her. The stakes are high from the start. This book has action, romance, and plenty of twists to keep you hooked. It’s fast-paced, clean, and engaging for both boys and girls. I flew through it and genuinely enjoyed the ride. I think it's perfect for ages 15+ and a great pick for teens who love dystopian stories with meaning.
*A special thanks to the author, Brian Penn, for sending me a copy of the audiobook to listen to!