From the classic ELEMENTS OF STYLE to STEIN ON WRITING to Stephen King's ON WRITING to E.M Forster's ASPECTS OF THE NOVEL (which are lectures on the novel, rather than a book on writing advice), I've read many a book on writing. So, how does WRITER WITH A DAY JOB compare?
Other than keeping an eye on how to squeeze writing time in-between work hours, the book is straightforward in its writing advice. Some of the advice is good, none of it is bad. The best advice concerns rewrites, giving and receiving feedback, and resources for things like writer's groups and writing retreats, complete with websites. It also covers topics like slander (i.e. why you should be careful plopping down identifiable people in your writing) and includes short interviews in the back with successful authors who either had day jobs or still have them.
Like a day job, unfortunately, the writing tends to be bland. Oh, Greaney follows the rules of writing: it's just that her writing is businesslike with little room for fun. And when we get fun [like in comparing finishing a bag of bite-size Twix bars to how writing works: in "daily, bite-sized nibbles" (197)], the wording and imagery..isn't brilliant. The other writing books I've read have made me want to go out and read (or re-read) more books by the author: this one doesn't. Still, it offers up nuggets that, not matter how obvious, still need to be heard (one I read was in the interviews in the back, where one author stated that most "writing time" is spent thinking about writing, not actually putting down words on a page. For those of you who write, I hope you realize how liberating a statement this is). Greaney also includes writing exercises at the end of each chapter (most of which I skipped), which will help some people with some aspects of writing, but feels too much like homework for a book written for people who already have enough work to do.
Since its focus is on finding time to write while working full-time, one shouldn't expect to read it if you want to know how to vastly improve your writing, despite the writing advice it includes. In that case, THE ELEMENTS OF STYLE, ON WRITING, and STEIN ON WRITING will serve you better. Worth checking out for working writers, but I wouldn't make this your only writing book.