Nope. This reads like a bad spy movie. Spies that have been in the business for decades doing really dumb stuff like trying to kill someone by hosing down a car with submachine guns at 50 meters & no one notices.
Please! I don't demand absolute accuracy, but the author needs to at least make a nod to common sense & logic. Not only is that the outside limit of their effective range, but none of the bullets penetrated the car door & they drove away without checking. And then the bad guy spy uses his own car for a stakeout which allows the good guy to know who he is easily. That's bad, but then there is a Navy pilot diverting his carrier landing to deliver pilfered information when waiting a day would have allowed him to walk it off without comment. He's done it so many times everyone is commenting on it. Besides, no one checked the plane once he landed, except the good guy, who of course uses the info to figure stuff out.
On the plus side, it was well narrated. The plot was kind of an interesting idea, although it's been done many times before.