PROTAGONIST: Miles Kendrick, former mob guy, now under Witness Protection
SERIES: Stanadlone thriller
RATING: 1.5
Jeff Abbott was first published in the mid 1990s, when the Jordan Poteet series was introduced. Living in a small town in Texas, Poteet was a librarian and sometimes sleuth. Although the series was on the cozier side, it was one that I enjoyed. In fact, Do Unto Others won both the Agatha Award and the Macavity Award for Best First Novel. After writing four Poteet books, Abbott went on a hiatus in 1996, returning five years later with a new series featuring Whit Mosley, a judge in a small coastal town in Texas. The three books in that series had a harder edge and more focus on action than the Poteet series.
In the past few years, Abbott has gone in a completely new direction and is writing standalone thrillers. Certainly, this type of book has done very well in the marketplace—witness the success of authors such as Harlan Coben, Lee Child, et al. But no matter what the "genre of the moment" may be, an author has to deliver on the writing basics: competent plotting, character development, setting and writing technique. Unfortunately, Abbott seems to have put most of those by the wayside to write a book that feels to me to be designed to appeal to the masses rather than to have any literary value.
Fear follows four main characters whose lives have been impacted by Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD). Miles Kendrick is a former mobster spy who is part of the Witness Protection Program and scheduled to testify in a federal trial. He is also haunted by the friend that he killed in a shoot-out. Celeste Brent is the winner of a TV reality show whose husband was killed by her stalker and has since become agoraphobic. Dennis Groote is an FBI agent turned hit man whose daughter spent 36 hours in a car with her dead mother after an accident. He likes to torture people. And Nathan Ruiz served in Iraq. Because of a lapse in his attention, several soldiers in his company were killed. A pharmaceutical company has trialed a drug called "Frost" that is extraordinarily effective in overcoming PTSD by muting the memory of the trauma in the patient; and these four are seeking its curative powers. Of course, there are many other groups who have high interest in Frost; the economic potential is huge with the formula worth billions on the open market.
Basically, the book proceeds with one or more of the four main characters facing a situation. The situation is then resolved through a confrontation or gunfight. New situation; new confrontation. Repeat. None of these characters ever felt remotely human. They were merely puppets placed on an exploding stage. By the end of the book, Miles is haunted not by one person, but three, people dead from his mistakes. Except they’re not all dead. There are a plethora of villains coming out of the woodwork. And I believe that a world record was set for number of gunshots that missed their target.
Fear is likely to appeal to the reader who is an action junkie and doesn't demand in-depth characterization. For me, it was a huge disappointment. Certainly, after having spent more than ten years as a mid-list author, it's understandable that Abbott would try to write something with more mainstream appeal than the small town cozies he started with. But sadly, Fear felt like it was written to a formula that didn't fit the author. His ability to write characters as demonstrated in the Jordan Poteet series was not on display here. Everything felt very staged; nothing felt genuine. Ultimately, Fear is a book that doesn't have a heart. It's all fists and knuckles.