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The Godling Chronicles #0.5
The Jewel of Dantenos: A Lee Starfinder Adventure
Filled with confidence and no small measure of arrogance, young Lee Starfinder, along with Millet Gristall, set off on their very first adventure. Lee quickly discovers that life beyond Hazrah can be far deadlier than he could have ever imagined. And soon he must learn that muscle and steel cannot replace loyalty, bravery and friendship.
56 pages, ebook
First published March 29, 2013
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About the author
Brian D. Anderson
47 books691 followersKnown as one of the O.G. independent authors of the 2010-2012 indie explosion, Brian D. Anderson gained massive popularity right out of the gate with his debut series, The Godling Chronicles. His follow-up series, Dragonvein, was just as popular, Book One becoming a Top Five Finalist on Audible.com for Fantasy Book of the Year in 2015 – becoming the very first independent to reach the finals. But Anderson was far from finished.
After co-authoring Akiri with Steven Savile (Warhammer, Pathfinder, Dr. Who, and Sherlock Holmes) Anderson became the first independent author in history to secure a six-figure audio only deal for his highly anticipated two-book sequel of The Godling Chronicles.
Anderson continued with his indie career with The Vale series. But even after twenty novels, he felt there was more to accomplish. So he secured a three-book deal with Tor Books for The Sorcerer’s Song series.
When not writing, Brian D. Anderson divides his time enjoying his friends and family at home in the sleepy little southern town of Fairhope, Alabama, and riding atop his Harley Davidson, dubbed The Mighty Puck, traveling the country from convention to convention, meeting fans and signing books.
After co-authoring Akiri with Steven Savile (Warhammer, Pathfinder, Dr. Who, and Sherlock Holmes) Anderson became the first independent author in history to secure a six-figure audio only deal for his highly anticipated two-book sequel of The Godling Chronicles.
Anderson continued with his indie career with The Vale series. But even after twenty novels, he felt there was more to accomplish. So he secured a three-book deal with Tor Books for The Sorcerer’s Song series.
When not writing, Brian D. Anderson divides his time enjoying his friends and family at home in the sleepy little southern town of Fairhope, Alabama, and riding atop his Harley Davidson, dubbed The Mighty Puck, traveling the country from convention to convention, meeting fans and signing books.
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January 30, 2016
The Jewel of Dantenos by Brian D. Anderson is sort of like getting a banana split from an ice cream stand: it’s flavorful and fun, but not at all nutritious and you kind of regret it afterwards.
I have noticed about myself, and I have heard other Goodreads friends say that after a few serious, heavy reading projects, it’s a good idea to gear down and read something light, and that’s where this fits in. This is a short story that introduces readers to a hero for a series of books, Lee Starfinder. A quick review shows that Mr. Anderson has published six of these adventures (The Godling Chronicles).
It’s all fun and games until you run out of pimple cream and your eighth grade teacher gives you extra work for daydreaming.
Actually, this reminded me of a Marvel Conan the Barbarian comic book I read 30 years ago.
I have noticed about myself, and I have heard other Goodreads friends say that after a few serious, heavy reading projects, it’s a good idea to gear down and read something light, and that’s where this fits in. This is a short story that introduces readers to a hero for a series of books, Lee Starfinder. A quick review shows that Mr. Anderson has published six of these adventures (The Godling Chronicles).
It’s all fun and games until you run out of pimple cream and your eighth grade teacher gives you extra work for daydreaming.
Actually, this reminded me of a Marvel Conan the Barbarian comic book I read 30 years ago.
December 17, 2019
The Jewel of Dantenos
The FREE Lee Starfinder Adventure: from the World of the Godling Chronicles, Book 0.5
By: Brian D. Anderson
Narrated by: Derek Perkins
I have had this book for a long time but forgot about it. This is a terrific short story about Lee Starfinder. I guess it's a prequel for the Godling books. Although it is a short tale it is excellent in story and narration! I love this s series.
The FREE Lee Starfinder Adventure: from the World of the Godling Chronicles, Book 0.5
By: Brian D. Anderson
Narrated by: Derek Perkins
I have had this book for a long time but forgot about it. This is a terrific short story about Lee Starfinder. I guess it's a prequel for the Godling books. Although it is a short tale it is excellent in story and narration! I love this s series.
August 17, 2015
This novella is currently free on Audible. It is entertaining and definitely worth the price. The story is decent, but the characters are underdeveloped. Lee himself is 23, but the voice employed for him is that of a grizzled old man. Overall, though I was not smitten with it, I enjoyed the story and the series may have potential.
December 10, 2017
Short story, set in front of a so far six-book-long fantasy series. Sword and sorcery/heroic fantasy. Nothing serious or deep, just some fluff with adventuring heroes trying to retrieve some treasure. Add some swords, horses, demigods and a little magic, stir and voila.
I throughly disliked the main character and really only made it through the whole 1 hour and 52 minutes, because I was stuck on a plane without anything better to do and the audio came for free through audible.
It was ok, barely. I have no interest in picking up the series.
I throughly disliked the main character and really only made it through the whole 1 hour and 52 minutes, because I was stuck on a plane without anything better to do and the audio came for free through audible.
It was ok, barely. I have no interest in picking up the series.
July 1, 2021
Interesting, this was my first audio book 💖
December 21, 2018
I like this. It is off to a good start. Anderson is very skilled at writing colorful characters. They emerge from the pages and straight to the reader's vision.
June 24, 2013
Nice little book that welcomes you into the World of The Godling. I have not read the bigger books, only this one.
This book delves into magic, and made me quite interested to see where the book itself will go.
This book delves into magic, and made me quite interested to see where the book itself will go.
October 14, 2016
it was a nice free listen on Audible, but I really wasn't impressed with the two main characters or the narrator. This did not inspire me to want to read or listen to the rest of the series.
Fine for free, but that's all for me.
Fine for free, but that's all for me.
April 11, 2022
This is a prequel novella to The Godling Chronicles, and the latest I’ve finished from the included prequels on Audible.
I really liked how this one started. Lee is a man born of lower status that was later in life left an inheritance that allowed for him to parade around as a nobleman. Mention of parties every night, a butler like assistant, expensive horses and swords. That’s not to say that I liked him, he is a pompous prick in this, but I liked that it was a different approach on the character set up. Oh, and did I mention that he’s a godling? That fact kind of threw the lowborn status up in the air for me, but I liked that seemingly no on at all knows this.
The world building/lore isn’t a lot, but it is present. I liked what I heard, but this one really closely follows what the character is doing with little information or deviation.
The jewel part of the story itself was kind of convoluted to me though. Not to mention that the jewel speaks to people and tampers with their brain in an all-too-Gollum like way. The climax was kind of dull and ended quickly to the point of almost being pointless. I guess though, if you have read the series, the backstory may be a nice pay off. I don’t think I’ll continue though.
I really liked how this one started. Lee is a man born of lower status that was later in life left an inheritance that allowed for him to parade around as a nobleman. Mention of parties every night, a butler like assistant, expensive horses and swords. That’s not to say that I liked him, he is a pompous prick in this, but I liked that it was a different approach on the character set up. Oh, and did I mention that he’s a godling? That fact kind of threw the lowborn status up in the air for me, but I liked that seemingly no on at all knows this.
The world building/lore isn’t a lot, but it is present. I liked what I heard, but this one really closely follows what the character is doing with little information or deviation.
The jewel part of the story itself was kind of convoluted to me though. Not to mention that the jewel speaks to people and tampers with their brain in an all-too-Gollum like way. The climax was kind of dull and ended quickly to the point of almost being pointless. I guess though, if you have read the series, the backstory may be a nice pay off. I don’t think I’ll continue though.
December 29, 2017
This was free on Audible, and I’m pretty glad that it was. The plot was alright, though the characters were underdeveloped and the narrator completely the wrong choice for the character age wise. It just didn’t pull me in, and it doesn’t make me want to listen to the rest of the series.
October 29, 2018
Pretty standard fantasy fare. Not a series I will continue.
July 10, 2019
Selected from my Free Audible Original monthly list. A teaser and intro in to a series. Left me very curious and wanting to know what happened to the characters!
May 19, 2024
This short introduction to the series has good action and intrigue. My rating 4.25.
Lee Starfinder is an arrogant young man who knows his strength and fighting skills exceed others. He has a special background, as a Godling, that makes him view himself as superior. Lee suffers through the companionship of his servant/assistant, Mill Gristall. They are traveling on Lee’s first adventure when they are distracted on the path by a young woman who appears to be in distress. They move beyond their normal cautious routines to help her only to be led into a trap.
Lee and Mill are captured by a pirate gang who are set on uncovering the rumored Jewel of Dantenos. The leader is convinced he has a reliable map to the treasure. However, they have found a dark, deadly presence in the caves which is killing his men. Lee makes a deal that if he can kill the dark “demon” he and Mill will go free.
Lee has no idea what he is facing when the darkness first attacks. Then it begins to communicate with him. Still, Lee may have taken on more than he can handle. He may find that there are times even Godlings need help from others to succeed.
This was a fast and interesting story. I liked the mysterious tone, the action and the puzzle that leads to survival. Lee isn't the most likeable character at first but he grows on you. Mill on the other hand is a wonderfully warm and strong character. This gives just a little taste of the series, but enough to draw me in so I am interested in the first full book.
Audio Notes: Derek Perkins does a good job of narrating this. He gives each character a distinct voice and he conveys good intensity. I did have to get used to the fact that the voice made Lee seem older than he is. Still, the narration enhanced my enjoyment.
Lee Starfinder is an arrogant young man who knows his strength and fighting skills exceed others. He has a special background, as a Godling, that makes him view himself as superior. Lee suffers through the companionship of his servant/assistant, Mill Gristall. They are traveling on Lee’s first adventure when they are distracted on the path by a young woman who appears to be in distress. They move beyond their normal cautious routines to help her only to be led into a trap.
Lee and Mill are captured by a pirate gang who are set on uncovering the rumored Jewel of Dantenos. The leader is convinced he has a reliable map to the treasure. However, they have found a dark, deadly presence in the caves which is killing his men. Lee makes a deal that if he can kill the dark “demon” he and Mill will go free.
Lee has no idea what he is facing when the darkness first attacks. Then it begins to communicate with him. Still, Lee may have taken on more than he can handle. He may find that there are times even Godlings need help from others to succeed.
This was a fast and interesting story. I liked the mysterious tone, the action and the puzzle that leads to survival. Lee isn't the most likeable character at first but he grows on you. Mill on the other hand is a wonderfully warm and strong character. This gives just a little taste of the series, but enough to draw me in so I am interested in the first full book.
Audio Notes: Derek Perkins does a good job of narrating this. He gives each character a distinct voice and he conveys good intensity. I did have to get used to the fact that the voice made Lee seem older than he is. Still, the narration enhanced my enjoyment.
January 2, 2015
I received an electronic copy of this book as part of the EPIC: Fourteen Books Of Fantasy boxed set in exchange for an honest review.
This is a short story about a rather proud young man who has a wise advisor. He constantly fails to take the advisor's advice and ends up in trouble because of it. And, in the end, the advisor gets him out of it yet again. There's more to the story than that, but it'd all be spoilers.
The plot is shallow, the characters more so and the story a rather bland retelling of much more interesting works. Like say, anything by Wodehouse, P.G.. A light read, but not a particularly tasty one.
This is a short story about a rather proud young man who has a wise advisor. He constantly fails to take the advisor's advice and ends up in trouble because of it. And, in the end, the advisor gets him out of it yet again. There's more to the story than that, but it'd all be spoilers.
The plot is shallow, the characters more so and the story a rather bland retelling of much more interesting works. Like say, anything by Wodehouse, P.G.. A light read, but not a particularly tasty one.
March 14, 2020
I have never read this author before but have heard some good things about him and the series. This was a nice introduction to the characters and what they will be like and within the confines of this story and those that are to come later. Because it is a short story you do not get to really find out what type of people they are but I am sure that this will come later as they have more adventures.
Lee Starfinder along With Millet Gristall set off on their very first adventure. Lee quickly learns that life outside of Hazrah is far deadlier than he had ever imagined, He also learns that muscle and steel are no match for loyalty, bravery, and friendship.
A nice start to what I hope will be an interesting and fun way to spend some of my downtimes.
Lee Starfinder along With Millet Gristall set off on their very first adventure. Lee quickly learns that life outside of Hazrah is far deadlier than he had ever imagined, He also learns that muscle and steel are no match for loyalty, bravery, and friendship.
A nice start to what I hope will be an interesting and fun way to spend some of my downtimes.
April 6, 2016
This book is a good read, Lee Starfinder is prideful and arrogant of his birth rite and his stature and so much more. He will find out the hard way that some things are more important than your birth rite and your sword/steel and it is called honor and friendship, he finds this out as he grows/matures on his first adventure and faces many obstacles. One hint I will give you about the book is to be careful of crystals hmmmm......Good book
June 20, 2014
This is a fun quick little read. It adds to the story wonderfully and gives a little more depth to some of the characters. The Godling Chronicalls have quickly become one of my favorite series and I would consider this as an extension to that story. This little spin off I found entertaining and would definitely read more of them if published.
January 26, 2015
This was a great short story. I love that the author credits his son. As a writer, I have encountered people with great stories but either no desire, patience or ability to write.
The story was a stand-alone with a reference to the future, but it doesn't rely in the series. It was an excellent short story. I'm going to start the series and hope that it's as good.
The story was a stand-alone with a reference to the future, but it doesn't rely in the series. It was an excellent short story. I'm going to start the series and hope that it's as good.
October 17, 2014
Not sure if this is supposed to be YA or not, but I will assume it is, since it seemed that way. It's a decent fun short fantasy story, that is free.
So enjoy.
So enjoy.
January 15, 2015
very good. think I will get the series when I get a chance.
May 19, 2015
I was hooked by this short story I'm going to start the series! But first...
August 4, 2015
A hour and a half romp through a world of fantasy and magic. And it's free!
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July 12, 2017Simple and mesmerizing at the same time . A combination hard to find
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October 6, 2016Review to come.
August 4, 2024
Introduction
Gather 'round, my fellow adventurers, for a tale spun from the frigid winds of fantasy and epic quests, The Jewel of Dantenos: A Lee Starfinder Adventure. This 2-page short story, authored by the well-versed Brian D. Anderson, is a prequel set in the universe of The Godling Chronicles. As the ancient frost of my homeland, HowlStrom, etches tales of valor and despair into the icy tundra, Anderson carves out a narrative that invites you to step into the shoes of Lee Starfinder, a young upstart venturing into a world far more dangerous than he could ever imagine. Released as an audio novella in 2014 by Podium Publishing, this story is but a fleeting breeze in the vast landscape of epic fantasy—a taste of what's to come in Anderson's broader series.
Plot Summary
In the shadowy corners of Hazrah, where the icy winds rarely blow but danger is ever-present, we find our protagonist, Lee Starfinder—a young man brimming with arrogance and naivety, much like a cub who thinks he can challenge the pack leader. Alongside his companion, Millet Gristall, Lee embarks on his very first adventure. Their journey soon takes a treacherous turn as they are drawn into a deadly hunt for the fabled Jewel of Dantenos, a gem said to possess untold powers. Captured by a band of ruthless pirates led by the cunning Jaleel, Lee and Millet are forced to confront a malevolent force lurking within the dark, foreboding caves of Dantenos. It is here that Lee learns a harsh lesson—that muscle and steel are no match for the bonds of loyalty, bravery, and the unyielding strength of friendship. But in a world where gods and mortals walk side by side, even these virtues may not be enough to survive.
The Author
Brian D. Anderson, one of the early pioneers of the 2010-2012 indie explosion, is no stranger to the world of fantasy. Known for his Godling Chronicles series, Anderson quickly made a name for himself with his ability to craft immersive worlds and compelling characters. His writing is often praised for its accessibility and its ability to balance classic fantasy tropes with fresh, original ideas. In The Jewel of Dantenos, Anderson showcases his talent for building tension and crafting fast-paced narratives, although some might argue that this novella, like a sudden winter storm, ends all too quickly. For those familiar with Anderson's work, this prequel offers a glimpse into his broader universe, setting the stage for the epic adventures that follow.
Characters
Ah, the characters—those pawns in the grand game of fate, each moving through the icy landscape of Anderson's imagination. Lee Starfinder is our protagonist, a young man whose arrogance is as vast as the frozen tundras of HowlStrom. He is a character who, at first glance, might remind one of a wolf cub who thinks he’s ready to lead the pack. Lee’s journey from naive arrogance to a more tempered wisdom is the heart of this short tale, though some might find his development a bit rushed, like a snowstorm that blows through too quickly to leave a lasting impact.
Millet Gristall, on the other paw, serves as the voice of reason—an older, wiser companion whose role is to guide Lee through the treacherous waters of their journey. Millet is like the ancient wolves of HowlStrom, whose wisdom is carved from centuries of surviving the harshest winters. His dynamic with Lee is one of the more compelling aspects of the story, though, like the rest of the novella, it feels as if it’s only just beginning to scratch the surface of what could be a much deeper relationship.
Jaleel, the pirate leader, is an interesting character—a blend of honor and ruthlessness. He’s the kind of character you’d expect to find leading a band of cutthroats, yet there’s a complexity to him that hints at a deeper backstory, one that we, unfortunately, don’t get to explore in this short tale. His interaction with Lee adds a layer of tension to the story, though again, it feels like we’re only seeing the tip of the iceberg.
The true wild card in this tale is the malevolent force that guards the Jewel of Dantenos, a mysterious entity that adds a dark, foreboding element to the story. It’s a shadowy presence, much like the eternal night skies of HowlStrom, where unseen dangers lurk just beyond the horizon.
Structure
Now, let’s talk structure, my fellow wolves. The Jewel of Dantenos is a brisk 2-page tale (or nearly two hours of audio) that feels more like a fleeting snowflake than a full-blown blizzard. The pacing is swift, with little time for the story to breathe and develop. It’s clear that Anderson was aiming for a fast-paced adventure, but in doing so, the narrative sacrifices some of the depth and complexity that could have made it truly memorable.
The story is organized into a linear progression, with little deviation from the main plotline. There’s no time for subplots or deeper character development—this is a story that’s all about the action. And while that’s not necessarily a bad thing, it does mean that the tale feels somewhat shallow, like a frozen lake that you can’t quite see the bottom of.
Themes & Analysis
The central theme of The Jewel of Dantenos is one of growth and humility. Lee Starfinder’s journey is a classic coming-of-age tale, where the young hero learns that the world is far more dangerous and complex than he ever imagined. It’s a story about the importance of loyalty, bravery, and friendship—virtues that are tested time and again as Lee and Millet face the dangers of their quest.
There’s also a theme of power and its corrupting influence, as seen in the allure of the Jewel of Dantenos. The jewel’s power is a temptation that threatens to consume those who seek it, much like the icy winds of HowlStrom that can freeze even the strongest of hearts. This theme is a common one in fantasy literature, but Anderson handles it with a deft touch, creating a sense of foreboding that hangs over the entire story.
However, as with many short stories, the themes are only lightly touched upon, leaving much of the deeper analysis to the reader’s imagination. It’s clear that Anderson has more to say on these topics, but this novella feels like just the beginning of a much larger conversation.
World-Building
Ah, world-building—the very foundation of any good fantasy tale. Anderson gives us a glimpse into the world of The Godling Chronicles, a place where gods and mortals walk side by side, and danger lurks around every corner. The setting of Hazrah and the dark caves of Dantenos are described with enough detail to give the reader a sense of place, though there’s a sense that we’re only seeing a small part of a much larger world.
The world of The Godling Chronicles is one where magic is real, and the gods play an active role in the lives of mortals. It’s a world that feels lived-in, with a rich history and culture that are hinted at but not fully explored in this short tale. For those who are familiar with Anderson’s broader series, this novella serves as a tantalizing glimpse into a world that is ripe for exploration.
However, for those who are new to the series, the world-building might feel a bit underdeveloped, like a landscape obscured by a thick layer of snow. There’s potential here, but it’s clear that The Jewel of Dantenos is just the beginning of what could be a much deeper and more immersive world.
Praise & Critique
Let’s howl at the moon for a moment and talk about what The Jewel of Dantenos does well. Anderson’s writing is crisp and engaging, with a fast-paced narrative that keeps the reader hooked from start to finish. The dialogue is sharp, and the interactions between characters, particularly Lee and Millet, are well-crafted and add a layer of depth to the story.
The action scenes are well-executed, with a sense of urgency that drives the narrative forward. Anderson knows how to build tension, and there are moments in this novella where the reader can feel the cold breath of danger on their neck, much like the icy winds of HowlStrom.
However, as much as there is to praise, there are also areas where the novella falls short. The most glaring issue is the lack of depth and development, both in terms of the characters and the story itself. This is a tale that feels like it’s only just beginning to scratch the surface of what could be a much richer narrative. The characters, while interesting, are not given enough time to fully develop, and the story’s conclusion feels rushed, leaving the reader wanting more.
There’s also the issue of the narration in the Audible edition. While Derek Perkins is a skilled narrator, his voice feels mismatched for the character of Lee, who is supposed to be a young man in his early twenties. Instead, Lee comes across as much older, which can be jarring for the listener and takes away from the immersion of the story.
Comparison
For those who are familiar with Anderson’s broader body of work, The Jewel of Dantenos can be seen as a small but significant piece of a much larger puzzle. Compared to the main entries in The Godling Chronicles series, this novella feels like a side quest—an appetizer before the main course. It doesn’t have the same depth or complexity as the full-length novels, but it offers a taste of the world and characters that will be expanded upon in the series.
When compared to other works in the fantasy genre, The Jewel of Dantenos falls somewhere in the middle of the pack. It doesn’t have the epic scope of something like The Lord of the Rings, nor does it have the gritty realism of A Song of Ice and Fire. Instead, it sits comfortably in the realm of accessible fantasy—stories that are easy to read (or listen to) and provide a quick escape into a world of magic and adventure.
Personal Evaluation
From the perspective of this old Alpha Ice Wolf, The Jewel of Dantenos is a tale that, while enjoyable, doesn’t quite live up to its potential. It’s a story that feels like it’s only just getting started, leaving the reader with more questions than answers. The characters are intriguing, but they’re not given enough time to fully develop, and the world-building, while promising, is only lightly touched upon.
That being said, there’s still something to be appreciated in this short tale. Anderson’s writing is engaging, and the story’s themes of growth, loyalty, and the corrupting influence of power are timeless and resonate even in this brief narrative. It’s clear that Anderson has a much larger story to tell, and for those who are intrigued by this novella, there’s a whole series waiting to be explored.
Conclusion
In conclusion, The Jewel of Dantenos is a tantalizing glimpse into the world of The Godling Chronicles, offering a brief but engaging adventure that sets the stage for the epic tales to come. While it may not have the depth or complexity of Anderson’s full-length novels, it serves as a solid introduction to the series and leaves the reader wanting more.
For those who are new to Anderson’s work, this novella is a good place to start, offering a taste of his world-building and character-driven storytelling. And for those who are already fans of The Godling Chronicles, The Jewel of Dantenos is a must-read, providing valuable backstory and setting the stage for the adventures to come.
So, my fellow wolves, if you’re looking for a quick and engaging read that will transport you to a world of magic, danger, and epic quests, then The Jewel of Dantenos might just be the tale for you. Just don’t expect it to be the full meal—it’s more of a tantalizing appetizer, leaving you hungry for the main course.
Rating: 🐾🐾🐾½ out of 5
Just a whisper of what’s to come, but a compelling one nonetheless.
Now, off you go, fellow adventurers��there are more tales to be discovered, more worlds to explore, and more epic quests to undertake. And as always, may the icy winds guide your path and the warmth of friendship light your way.
Gather 'round, my fellow adventurers, for a tale spun from the frigid winds of fantasy and epic quests, The Jewel of Dantenos: A Lee Starfinder Adventure. This 2-page short story, authored by the well-versed Brian D. Anderson, is a prequel set in the universe of The Godling Chronicles. As the ancient frost of my homeland, HowlStrom, etches tales of valor and despair into the icy tundra, Anderson carves out a narrative that invites you to step into the shoes of Lee Starfinder, a young upstart venturing into a world far more dangerous than he could ever imagine. Released as an audio novella in 2014 by Podium Publishing, this story is but a fleeting breeze in the vast landscape of epic fantasy—a taste of what's to come in Anderson's broader series.
Plot Summary
In the shadowy corners of Hazrah, where the icy winds rarely blow but danger is ever-present, we find our protagonist, Lee Starfinder—a young man brimming with arrogance and naivety, much like a cub who thinks he can challenge the pack leader. Alongside his companion, Millet Gristall, Lee embarks on his very first adventure. Their journey soon takes a treacherous turn as they are drawn into a deadly hunt for the fabled Jewel of Dantenos, a gem said to possess untold powers. Captured by a band of ruthless pirates led by the cunning Jaleel, Lee and Millet are forced to confront a malevolent force lurking within the dark, foreboding caves of Dantenos. It is here that Lee learns a harsh lesson—that muscle and steel are no match for the bonds of loyalty, bravery, and the unyielding strength of friendship. But in a world where gods and mortals walk side by side, even these virtues may not be enough to survive.
The Author
Brian D. Anderson, one of the early pioneers of the 2010-2012 indie explosion, is no stranger to the world of fantasy. Known for his Godling Chronicles series, Anderson quickly made a name for himself with his ability to craft immersive worlds and compelling characters. His writing is often praised for its accessibility and its ability to balance classic fantasy tropes with fresh, original ideas. In The Jewel of Dantenos, Anderson showcases his talent for building tension and crafting fast-paced narratives, although some might argue that this novella, like a sudden winter storm, ends all too quickly. For those familiar with Anderson's work, this prequel offers a glimpse into his broader universe, setting the stage for the epic adventures that follow.
Characters
Ah, the characters—those pawns in the grand game of fate, each moving through the icy landscape of Anderson's imagination. Lee Starfinder is our protagonist, a young man whose arrogance is as vast as the frozen tundras of HowlStrom. He is a character who, at first glance, might remind one of a wolf cub who thinks he’s ready to lead the pack. Lee’s journey from naive arrogance to a more tempered wisdom is the heart of this short tale, though some might find his development a bit rushed, like a snowstorm that blows through too quickly to leave a lasting impact.
Millet Gristall, on the other paw, serves as the voice of reason—an older, wiser companion whose role is to guide Lee through the treacherous waters of their journey. Millet is like the ancient wolves of HowlStrom, whose wisdom is carved from centuries of surviving the harshest winters. His dynamic with Lee is one of the more compelling aspects of the story, though, like the rest of the novella, it feels as if it’s only just beginning to scratch the surface of what could be a much deeper relationship.
Jaleel, the pirate leader, is an interesting character—a blend of honor and ruthlessness. He’s the kind of character you’d expect to find leading a band of cutthroats, yet there’s a complexity to him that hints at a deeper backstory, one that we, unfortunately, don’t get to explore in this short tale. His interaction with Lee adds a layer of tension to the story, though again, it feels like we’re only seeing the tip of the iceberg.
The true wild card in this tale is the malevolent force that guards the Jewel of Dantenos, a mysterious entity that adds a dark, foreboding element to the story. It’s a shadowy presence, much like the eternal night skies of HowlStrom, where unseen dangers lurk just beyond the horizon.
Structure
Now, let’s talk structure, my fellow wolves. The Jewel of Dantenos is a brisk 2-page tale (or nearly two hours of audio) that feels more like a fleeting snowflake than a full-blown blizzard. The pacing is swift, with little time for the story to breathe and develop. It’s clear that Anderson was aiming for a fast-paced adventure, but in doing so, the narrative sacrifices some of the depth and complexity that could have made it truly memorable.
The story is organized into a linear progression, with little deviation from the main plotline. There’s no time for subplots or deeper character development—this is a story that’s all about the action. And while that’s not necessarily a bad thing, it does mean that the tale feels somewhat shallow, like a frozen lake that you can’t quite see the bottom of.
Themes & Analysis
The central theme of The Jewel of Dantenos is one of growth and humility. Lee Starfinder’s journey is a classic coming-of-age tale, where the young hero learns that the world is far more dangerous and complex than he ever imagined. It’s a story about the importance of loyalty, bravery, and friendship—virtues that are tested time and again as Lee and Millet face the dangers of their quest.
There’s also a theme of power and its corrupting influence, as seen in the allure of the Jewel of Dantenos. The jewel’s power is a temptation that threatens to consume those who seek it, much like the icy winds of HowlStrom that can freeze even the strongest of hearts. This theme is a common one in fantasy literature, but Anderson handles it with a deft touch, creating a sense of foreboding that hangs over the entire story.
However, as with many short stories, the themes are only lightly touched upon, leaving much of the deeper analysis to the reader’s imagination. It’s clear that Anderson has more to say on these topics, but this novella feels like just the beginning of a much larger conversation.
World-Building
Ah, world-building—the very foundation of any good fantasy tale. Anderson gives us a glimpse into the world of The Godling Chronicles, a place where gods and mortals walk side by side, and danger lurks around every corner. The setting of Hazrah and the dark caves of Dantenos are described with enough detail to give the reader a sense of place, though there’s a sense that we’re only seeing a small part of a much larger world.
The world of The Godling Chronicles is one where magic is real, and the gods play an active role in the lives of mortals. It’s a world that feels lived-in, with a rich history and culture that are hinted at but not fully explored in this short tale. For those who are familiar with Anderson’s broader series, this novella serves as a tantalizing glimpse into a world that is ripe for exploration.
However, for those who are new to the series, the world-building might feel a bit underdeveloped, like a landscape obscured by a thick layer of snow. There’s potential here, but it’s clear that The Jewel of Dantenos is just the beginning of what could be a much deeper and more immersive world.
Praise & Critique
Let’s howl at the moon for a moment and talk about what The Jewel of Dantenos does well. Anderson’s writing is crisp and engaging, with a fast-paced narrative that keeps the reader hooked from start to finish. The dialogue is sharp, and the interactions between characters, particularly Lee and Millet, are well-crafted and add a layer of depth to the story.
The action scenes are well-executed, with a sense of urgency that drives the narrative forward. Anderson knows how to build tension, and there are moments in this novella where the reader can feel the cold breath of danger on their neck, much like the icy winds of HowlStrom.
However, as much as there is to praise, there are also areas where the novella falls short. The most glaring issue is the lack of depth and development, both in terms of the characters and the story itself. This is a tale that feels like it’s only just beginning to scratch the surface of what could be a much richer narrative. The characters, while interesting, are not given enough time to fully develop, and the story’s conclusion feels rushed, leaving the reader wanting more.
There’s also the issue of the narration in the Audible edition. While Derek Perkins is a skilled narrator, his voice feels mismatched for the character of Lee, who is supposed to be a young man in his early twenties. Instead, Lee comes across as much older, which can be jarring for the listener and takes away from the immersion of the story.
Comparison
For those who are familiar with Anderson’s broader body of work, The Jewel of Dantenos can be seen as a small but significant piece of a much larger puzzle. Compared to the main entries in The Godling Chronicles series, this novella feels like a side quest—an appetizer before the main course. It doesn’t have the same depth or complexity as the full-length novels, but it offers a taste of the world and characters that will be expanded upon in the series.
When compared to other works in the fantasy genre, The Jewel of Dantenos falls somewhere in the middle of the pack. It doesn’t have the epic scope of something like The Lord of the Rings, nor does it have the gritty realism of A Song of Ice and Fire. Instead, it sits comfortably in the realm of accessible fantasy—stories that are easy to read (or listen to) and provide a quick escape into a world of magic and adventure.
Personal Evaluation
From the perspective of this old Alpha Ice Wolf, The Jewel of Dantenos is a tale that, while enjoyable, doesn’t quite live up to its potential. It’s a story that feels like it’s only just getting started, leaving the reader with more questions than answers. The characters are intriguing, but they’re not given enough time to fully develop, and the world-building, while promising, is only lightly touched upon.
That being said, there’s still something to be appreciated in this short tale. Anderson’s writing is engaging, and the story’s themes of growth, loyalty, and the corrupting influence of power are timeless and resonate even in this brief narrative. It’s clear that Anderson has a much larger story to tell, and for those who are intrigued by this novella, there’s a whole series waiting to be explored.
Conclusion
In conclusion, The Jewel of Dantenos is a tantalizing glimpse into the world of The Godling Chronicles, offering a brief but engaging adventure that sets the stage for the epic tales to come. While it may not have the depth or complexity of Anderson’s full-length novels, it serves as a solid introduction to the series and leaves the reader wanting more.
For those who are new to Anderson’s work, this novella is a good place to start, offering a taste of his world-building and character-driven storytelling. And for those who are already fans of The Godling Chronicles, The Jewel of Dantenos is a must-read, providing valuable backstory and setting the stage for the adventures to come.
So, my fellow wolves, if you’re looking for a quick and engaging read that will transport you to a world of magic, danger, and epic quests, then The Jewel of Dantenos might just be the tale for you. Just don’t expect it to be the full meal—it’s more of a tantalizing appetizer, leaving you hungry for the main course.
Rating: 🐾🐾🐾½ out of 5
Just a whisper of what’s to come, but a compelling one nonetheless.
Now, off you go, fellow adventurers��there are more tales to be discovered, more worlds to explore, and more epic quests to undertake. And as always, may the icy winds guide your path and the warmth of friendship light your way.
October 1, 2023
Introduction
Greetings, fellow beings of the cosmos. I am Kiba Snowpaw, an Alpha Ice Wolf from the frozen world of HowlStrom, where the icy winds sing the songs of ancient warriors. Today, I bring forth a tale not of my icy abode but of a different realm, woven into the audio waves of "The Godling Chronicles #0.5: The Jewel of Dantenos" by Brian D. Anderson.
Basic Plot Summary
In the cold embrace of Hazrah, young Lee Starfinder, brimming with arrogance akin to the towering icebergs of HowlStrom, embarks on an adventure with Millet Gristall. A journey that promises the warmth of bravery, the chill of betrayal, and the enigmatic dance of friendship and loyalty, akin to the eternal dance of frost and flame in our icy world.
Analysis/Evaluation
As the icy winds carve stories into the frozen landscapes of HowlStrom, so does Anderson weave a narrative, albeit with the subtlety of a blizzard. The tale, though short, is a storm of fantasy elements, echoing the roars of ancient beasts trapped in the icy mountains of my world.
Characters
Lee Starfinder, a youngling not unlike the impulsive cubs of HowlStrom, is a maelstrom of arrogance and courage. Millet Gristall, his companion, mirrors the ancient, wise wolves of my icy realm, where wisdom and power flow as one. Their dynamic is as contrasting yet harmonious as the icy and fiery veins that course through the heart of HowlStrom.
Structure
The narrative, though as swift as the icy winds, lacks the depth of the frozen oceans of my world. It’s a skirmish, not the epic battle of the elements we witness every century on HowlStrom. The characters, though carved from the icy embrace of adventure, lack the intricate frost patterns that adorn the ancient ice sculptures of my realm.
Impact
Yet, amidst the storm of youthful exuberance and ancient wisdom, a gem of loyalty and friendship gleams, as radiant as the auroras that grace the eternal night skies of HowlStrom. It’s a reminder that even in the icy desolation, warmth pulsates, alive and vibrant.
Hook and Thesis
The tale, though echoing the eternal conflict of ice and fire, of arrogance and wisdom, is but a whisper amidst the roaring winds of epic sagas. It’s the first snowflake of the impending storm, the silent harbinger of the tumultuous dance of elements.
Praise and Critique
Anderson’s narrative is as enticing as the mysterious icy caves of HowlStrom, yet as elusive as the ethereal spirits that haunt them. The characters, though carved with the precision of the ancient ice sculptors, lack the soul, the fiery essence that dwells within the icy confines.
Evaluation
As an Alpha Ice Wolf, bred amidst the eternal dance of frost and flame, I find the tale a reflection of the silent storms that rage within the icy silence. It’s a dance of elements, yet silent, subdued, a whisper amidst the roaring winds.
Comparison
In the icy silence of HowlStrom, ancient tales of warriors and mages, of icy realms and fiery abysses, echo with the fervor of a thousand storms. Anderson’s tale, though a storm, is yet to reach the crescendo, the tumultuous dance of elements that defines the epics of my icy world.
Conclusion
As the icy winds of HowlStrom weave tales of ancient battles, of icy desolations and fiery abysses, "The Godling Chronicles #0.5: The Jewel of Dantenos" emerges as a whisper, a prelude to the impending storm. It’s a dance of frost and flame, yet silent, awaiting the roar of the eternal elements.
In the words of a LitRPG quote, as reminiscent of the icy echoes of HowlStrom, “In the dance of destiny, we are but pawns, yet amidst the icy silence, the fiery soul emerges, as tumultuous as the eternal storm, as silent as the icy desolation.”
As Kiba Snowpaw, the Alpha Ice Wolf of the icy realm of HowlStrom, I find the tale an echo of the silent storms, a dance of frost and flame, awaiting the roar of the eternal elements. It’s a journey, not the destination, a whisper amidst the roaring winds of epic sagas.
Greetings, fellow beings of the cosmos. I am Kiba Snowpaw, an Alpha Ice Wolf from the frozen world of HowlStrom, where the icy winds sing the songs of ancient warriors. Today, I bring forth a tale not of my icy abode but of a different realm, woven into the audio waves of "The Godling Chronicles #0.5: The Jewel of Dantenos" by Brian D. Anderson.
Basic Plot Summary
In the cold embrace of Hazrah, young Lee Starfinder, brimming with arrogance akin to the towering icebergs of HowlStrom, embarks on an adventure with Millet Gristall. A journey that promises the warmth of bravery, the chill of betrayal, and the enigmatic dance of friendship and loyalty, akin to the eternal dance of frost and flame in our icy world.
Analysis/Evaluation
As the icy winds carve stories into the frozen landscapes of HowlStrom, so does Anderson weave a narrative, albeit with the subtlety of a blizzard. The tale, though short, is a storm of fantasy elements, echoing the roars of ancient beasts trapped in the icy mountains of my world.
Characters
Lee Starfinder, a youngling not unlike the impulsive cubs of HowlStrom, is a maelstrom of arrogance and courage. Millet Gristall, his companion, mirrors the ancient, wise wolves of my icy realm, where wisdom and power flow as one. Their dynamic is as contrasting yet harmonious as the icy and fiery veins that course through the heart of HowlStrom.
Structure
The narrative, though as swift as the icy winds, lacks the depth of the frozen oceans of my world. It’s a skirmish, not the epic battle of the elements we witness every century on HowlStrom. The characters, though carved from the icy embrace of adventure, lack the intricate frost patterns that adorn the ancient ice sculptures of my realm.
Impact
Yet, amidst the storm of youthful exuberance and ancient wisdom, a gem of loyalty and friendship gleams, as radiant as the auroras that grace the eternal night skies of HowlStrom. It’s a reminder that even in the icy desolation, warmth pulsates, alive and vibrant.
Hook and Thesis
The tale, though echoing the eternal conflict of ice and fire, of arrogance and wisdom, is but a whisper amidst the roaring winds of epic sagas. It’s the first snowflake of the impending storm, the silent harbinger of the tumultuous dance of elements.
Praise and Critique
Anderson’s narrative is as enticing as the mysterious icy caves of HowlStrom, yet as elusive as the ethereal spirits that haunt them. The characters, though carved with the precision of the ancient ice sculptors, lack the soul, the fiery essence that dwells within the icy confines.
Evaluation
As an Alpha Ice Wolf, bred amidst the eternal dance of frost and flame, I find the tale a reflection of the silent storms that rage within the icy silence. It’s a dance of elements, yet silent, subdued, a whisper amidst the roaring winds.
Comparison
In the icy silence of HowlStrom, ancient tales of warriors and mages, of icy realms and fiery abysses, echo with the fervor of a thousand storms. Anderson’s tale, though a storm, is yet to reach the crescendo, the tumultuous dance of elements that defines the epics of my icy world.
Conclusion
As the icy winds of HowlStrom weave tales of ancient battles, of icy desolations and fiery abysses, "The Godling Chronicles #0.5: The Jewel of Dantenos" emerges as a whisper, a prelude to the impending storm. It’s a dance of frost and flame, yet silent, awaiting the roar of the eternal elements.
In the words of a LitRPG quote, as reminiscent of the icy echoes of HowlStrom, “In the dance of destiny, we are but pawns, yet amidst the icy silence, the fiery soul emerges, as tumultuous as the eternal storm, as silent as the icy desolation.”
As Kiba Snowpaw, the Alpha Ice Wolf of the icy realm of HowlStrom, I find the tale an echo of the silent storms, a dance of frost and flame, awaiting the roar of the eternal elements. It’s a journey, not the destination, a whisper amidst the roaring winds of epic sagas.
November 7, 2020
Title: The Jewel of Dantenos: A Lee Starfinder Adventure (The Godling Chronicles #0.5)
Author: Brian D. Anderson (Narrator: Derek Perkins)
Format: Audible (Free)
[ Enjoyed ] No.
[ Last Listen ] Several days ago.
[ Relisten ] No thanks.
[ Cover Lust ] No.
[ Intriguing Title ] Maybe.
[ Interesting Premise/Plot ] Not really.
[ Preview Impressions ] Did not preview.
[ Kept My Attention ] On and off, eventually off.
[ Got Bored / Mind Wandering ] Towards middle and end, yes.
[ Skimmed/Skipped Scenes/Chapters ] No.
[ Relisten Past Scenes For Fun ] Nooooo.
[ Relisten Past ScenesCause My Memory Sucks To Clear Confusion ] Didn't bother.
[ Stayed Up Late ] Hell no.
[ Took a Long Break Midway ] No.
[ Ending Left Me Feeling ] *stops listening to preview of first book in series after several minutes*
[ Easy Light Listening ] Probably.
[ Turn Brain Off ] Might as well.
[ Guilty Pleasure ] No.
Other thoughts I'm throwing in: (Might contain spoilers; I fail at identifying them.)
I listened to this in chunks while doing daily light exercise. The first couple minutes my mind zoned out, so if I read this via a book, there's no way I would have made it past the third page. Eventually I started getting interested in their adventure but since I'm horrible at remembering names and can't easily reread--er, relisten--since my hands are too busy to wake tablet up and rewind--I kept mixing up the Millet and Lee. (Serious, I thought Millet was the main char for half the story.) Eventually I got those two sorted out, but still failed to remember other characters' names. Once Lee begins battling the...blackness...I completely lost interest. (Well, my mind stopped paying attention.) I think if I was familiar with the series then this prequel would have held my attention better (cause you know, a little backstory to a char I already know). It certainly didn't make me interested in the series.
Author: Brian D. Anderson (Narrator: Derek Perkins)
Format: Audible (Free)
[ Enjoyed ] No.
[ Last Listen ] Several days ago.
[ Relisten ] No thanks.
[ Cover Lust ] No.
[ Intriguing Title ] Maybe.
[ Interesting Premise/Plot ] Not really.
[ Preview Impressions ] Did not preview.
[ Kept My Attention ] On and off, eventually off.
[ Got Bored / Mind Wandering ] Towards middle and end, yes.
[ Skimmed/Skipped Scenes/Chapters ] No.
[ Relisten Past Scenes For Fun ] Nooooo.
[ Relisten Past Scenes
[ Stayed Up Late ] Hell no.
[ Took a Long Break Midway ] No.
[ Ending Left Me Feeling ] *stops listening to preview of first book in series after several minutes*
[ Easy Light Listening ] Probably.
[ Turn Brain Off ] Might as well.
[ Guilty Pleasure ] No.
Other thoughts I'm throwing in: (Might contain spoilers; I fail at identifying them.)
I listened to this in chunks while doing daily light exercise. The first couple minutes my mind zoned out, so if I read this via a book, there's no way I would have made it past the third page. Eventually I started getting interested in their adventure but since I'm horrible at remembering names and can't easily reread--er, relisten--since my hands are too busy to wake tablet up and rewind--I kept mixing up the Millet and Lee. (Serious, I thought Millet was the main char for half the story.) Eventually I got those two sorted out, but still failed to remember other characters' names. Once Lee begins battling the...blackness...I completely lost interest. (Well, my mind stopped paying attention.) I think if I was familiar with the series then this prequel would have held my attention better (cause you know, a little backstory to a char I already know). It certainly didn't make me interested in the series.
February 7, 2024
Anderson's Conan tale (The Child) brought me here. This is my first look at Anderson's stories (outside of Conan) and I enjoyed what I read. Though Lee and Lyndria are young and cocky, Millet's wisdom and wit partnered well against it, as well as Jaleel's honor (though a murderous pirate). The environment of growth is evident but the most interesting character was the immortal and torn Chaudre, a son of death and a seeker of life.
Saraf and Dantenos,
Notes:
Saraf and Dantenos,
Notes:
October 18, 2018
Arrogant, young rich guy thinks he is amazing at everything and doesn't need anyone else but finds that, for all his money and strength with a sword, there is nothing without friendship and loyalty. Our main character, Lee, is on a journey with his servant, Millet, and is captured by pirates who are looking for a valuable jewel. They end up having to fight the beast that guards the jewel.
I had this free on audible a few years ago. It is not my usual read, though when I downloaded it I was reading fantasy, but today I just needed something light to listen to. This was exactly what I needed. I actually quite enjoyed it (though I didn't particularly like Lee). The narration was excellent, though I do think that the voice chosen to portray Lee was a bit old; considering he was only supposed to be around 23 he sounded like a grizzled old man. I think that these freebies are designed to hook you into buying a series and there is actually a series about the Godlings. Although I enjoyed this today and I am glad I listened to it I wont be reading any others in the series.
I had this free on audible a few years ago. It is not my usual read, though when I downloaded it I was reading fantasy, but today I just needed something light to listen to. This was exactly what I needed. I actually quite enjoyed it (though I didn't particularly like Lee). The narration was excellent, though I do think that the voice chosen to portray Lee was a bit old; considering he was only supposed to be around 23 he sounded like a grizzled old man. I think that these freebies are designed to hook you into buying a series and there is actually a series about the Godlings. Although I enjoyed this today and I am glad I listened to it I wont be reading any others in the series.
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