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Given Good Principles #3
All the Appearance of Goodness
What is a young woman to do? One handsome young man has all the goodness, while the other the appearance of it. How is she to separate the gentleman from the cad?
When Darcy joins his friend, Bingley on a trip to Meryton, the last thing on his mind is finding a wife. Meeting Elizabeth Bennet changes all that, but a rival for his affections appears from a most unlikely quarter. He must overcome his naturally reticent disposition if he is to have a chance of winning her favor.
Elizabeth’s thoughts turn to love and marriage after her sister, Mary’s, engagement. In a few short weeks she goes from knowing no eligible young men, to being courted by two. Both are handsome gentleman, but one conceals secrets and the other conceals his regard. Will she determine which is which before she commits to the wrong one?
When Darcy joins his friend, Bingley on a trip to Meryton, the last thing on his mind is finding a wife. Meeting Elizabeth Bennet changes all that, but a rival for his affections appears from a most unlikely quarter. He must overcome his naturally reticent disposition if he is to have a chance of winning her favor.
Elizabeth’s thoughts turn to love and marriage after her sister, Mary’s, engagement. In a few short weeks she goes from knowing no eligible young men, to being courted by two. Both are handsome gentleman, but one conceals secrets and the other conceals his regard. Will she determine which is which before she commits to the wrong one?
342 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 17, 2013
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Maria Grace
100 books315 followersSix time BRAG Medallion Honoree, #1 Best-selling Historical Fantasy author Maria Grace has her PhD in Educational Psychology and is a 16-year veteran of the university classroom where she taught courses in human growth and development, learning, test development and counseling. None of which have anything to do with her undergraduate studies in economics/sociology/managerial studies/behavior sciences. She pretends to be a mild-mannered writer/cat-lady, but most of her vacations require helmets and waivers or historical costumes, usually not at the same time.
She stumbled into Jane Austen fan-dom in the mid '90s with Emma Thompson's Sense and Sensibility film, having somehow graduated HS without ever having read Austen. It was only a short leap then to consume all of Austen's works, in all their various media forms. In the hopes of discovering more works by Austen, she stumbled into the fan fiction forums, which naturally led to asking 'What if...' herself. Twenty nine books later, she still asks that question.
She writes gaslamp fantasy, historical romance and non-fiction to help justify her research addiction.
She stumbled into Jane Austen fan-dom in the mid '90s with Emma Thompson's Sense and Sensibility film, having somehow graduated HS without ever having read Austen. It was only a short leap then to consume all of Austen's works, in all their various media forms. In the hopes of discovering more works by Austen, she stumbled into the fan fiction forums, which naturally led to asking 'What if...' herself. Twenty nine books later, she still asks that question.
She writes gaslamp fantasy, historical romance and non-fiction to help justify her research addiction.
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October 4, 2022
A different Mr. Collins
Mr. Collins is good looking, smart enough to be a crook and needs money.
Lizzy is of course taken in by Collins at first. He turns out to be another Wickham and stays around to cause problems until the very end of the story. Lots of angst, lots of misunderstandings and lots of conversation where everyone talks in riddles so as to not be rude.
Third volume of a four volume series.
Mr. Collins is good looking, smart enough to be a crook and needs money.
Lizzy is of course taken in by Collins at first. He turns out to be another Wickham and stays around to cause problems until the very end of the story. Lots of angst, lots of misunderstandings and lots of conversation where everyone talks in riddles so as to not be rude.
Third volume of a four volume series.
May 15, 2013
(Note: Potential readers should be made aware that this is the third volume in the Given Good Principles series, and that it is recommended that volume one and two are read prior to reading this one.)
In volume one of Maria Grace's Given Good Principles series, Darcy's Decision, readers are introduced to a grief-stricken Darcy as he copes with the lost of his father and takes on the responsibilities he left behind. In volume two, The Future Mrs. Darcy, readers encounter Elizabeth Bennet as she tries to manage her sisters and keep their fragile reputation in tact. Both books follow Darcy and Elizabeth separately and can be labeled as prequels since they take place before Mr. Bingley's arrival at Netherfield. Volume three is where Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet finally meet and interact with each other. Mr. Darcy with a little less selfish disdain and Elizabeth with a little more understanding.
All the intriguing twists and inventive plot devices Maria Grace manifested in volume one and two of this terrific series set the stage beautifully for this wholly unique variation. A Mr. Darcy who does not insult Elizabeth Bennet at the Meryton Assembly, a Mary Bennet who is soon to be married, and a Wickham that never sets foot in Meryton are only some of the interesting alterations readers will find in this novel. Readers will find some noticeable changes in Louisa Bingley, who is amiable like her brother and friendly with the Bennet sisters, and Mr. Collins, who is a handsome charmer that Elizabeth Bennet finds attractive! Even with the abundance of plot changes to Jane Austen's novel and liberties taken with her characters this book still conveys the essence and charm of Pride and Prejudice.
My favorite aspect about this series is how Maria Grace delved into her characters psychologically and emotionally. I enjoyed her portrayal of a Mr. Darcy who battles with social anxiety, a Mrs. Bennet suffering from deep-rooted insecurities and fears of failure, and a Mr. Bennet whose peculiarities range from anxieties with change to a physical need for silence and solitude. It was interesting to see these characters depicted in such a perceptive and sympathetic light.
Another element I took great pleasure in with was the focus on close relationships and friendships displayed throughout the novel. It was heartwarming to witness Darcy's father-son relationship with Mr. Bradley and the Bennet sisters close sisterly bonding and connection with each other. So sweet and endearing!
While I greatly enjoyed observing the unique character alterations in this series, I wasn't so fond of the fact that some characters started to strongly resemble others. Colonel Fitzwilliam, completely besotted with “his angel,” reminded me a lot of Mr. Bingley, Caroline Bingley's rude and domineering behavior made her seem like a young Lady Catherine, and Mr. Collins behaved very similar to Mr. Wickham with his depravity and schemes. In addition, it felt like the antagonists in this novel, Caroline Bingley and Mr. Collins – who were definitely more devious and manipulative than they usually are – were granted a lot of leniency by the other characters. I found it a little surprising that their malicious actions were tolerated and went uninterrupted for as long as they did.
Regardless of my quibbles, I found this inventive and original series to be delightful and diverting! Maria Grace is a captivating and clever storyteller! I highly recommend!
Psst! I heard a rumor that there might be another installment in the Given Good Principles series...something about a Christmastide novella...
Austenesque Reviews
In volume one of Maria Grace's Given Good Principles series, Darcy's Decision, readers are introduced to a grief-stricken Darcy as he copes with the lost of his father and takes on the responsibilities he left behind. In volume two, The Future Mrs. Darcy, readers encounter Elizabeth Bennet as she tries to manage her sisters and keep their fragile reputation in tact. Both books follow Darcy and Elizabeth separately and can be labeled as prequels since they take place before Mr. Bingley's arrival at Netherfield. Volume three is where Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet finally meet and interact with each other. Mr. Darcy with a little less selfish disdain and Elizabeth with a little more understanding.
All the intriguing twists and inventive plot devices Maria Grace manifested in volume one and two of this terrific series set the stage beautifully for this wholly unique variation. A Mr. Darcy who does not insult Elizabeth Bennet at the Meryton Assembly, a Mary Bennet who is soon to be married, and a Wickham that never sets foot in Meryton are only some of the interesting alterations readers will find in this novel. Readers will find some noticeable changes in Louisa Bingley, who is amiable like her brother and friendly with the Bennet sisters, and Mr. Collins, who is a handsome charmer that Elizabeth Bennet finds attractive! Even with the abundance of plot changes to Jane Austen's novel and liberties taken with her characters this book still conveys the essence and charm of Pride and Prejudice.
My favorite aspect about this series is how Maria Grace delved into her characters psychologically and emotionally. I enjoyed her portrayal of a Mr. Darcy who battles with social anxiety, a Mrs. Bennet suffering from deep-rooted insecurities and fears of failure, and a Mr. Bennet whose peculiarities range from anxieties with change to a physical need for silence and solitude. It was interesting to see these characters depicted in such a perceptive and sympathetic light.
Another element I took great pleasure in with was the focus on close relationships and friendships displayed throughout the novel. It was heartwarming to witness Darcy's father-son relationship with Mr. Bradley and the Bennet sisters close sisterly bonding and connection with each other. So sweet and endearing!
While I greatly enjoyed observing the unique character alterations in this series, I wasn't so fond of the fact that some characters started to strongly resemble others. Colonel Fitzwilliam, completely besotted with “his angel,” reminded me a lot of Mr. Bingley, Caroline Bingley's rude and domineering behavior made her seem like a young Lady Catherine, and Mr. Collins behaved very similar to Mr. Wickham with his depravity and schemes. In addition, it felt like the antagonists in this novel, Caroline Bingley and Mr. Collins – who were definitely more devious and manipulative than they usually are – were granted a lot of leniency by the other characters. I found it a little surprising that their malicious actions were tolerated and went uninterrupted for as long as they did.
Regardless of my quibbles, I found this inventive and original series to be delightful and diverting! Maria Grace is a captivating and clever storyteller! I highly recommend!
Psst! I heard a rumor that there might be another installment in the Given Good Principles series...something about a Christmastide novella...
Austenesque Reviews
July 11, 2023
Returning to this series after getting distracted, I gladly dove back into a solid, engaging series. First book was Darcy's time to grow and prepare for his adult life and second book was Elizabeth's coming of age tale. Now, in All the Appearance of Goodness, we see them meet and what further hurdles life throws at them.
All the Appearance of Goodness is third in a series that is meant to be read in order.
As I mentioned, I was returning to the series and I took a while so I was crossing my fingers that what came before would come back to me so I wasn't lost navigating this latest in the series.
The series is a variation on Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice. The setting and characters are from the original, Pride and Prejudice, but the story-line and personalities of the characters are all original to Maria Grace. She carefully places her characters into what felt like an authentic Regency world of Austen, but what they say, what they do, and where they go will be a delightful surprise to all.
The central figures, Darcy and Elizabeth are not antagonistic and do have a friendship of sorts, but their path to true love is hampered by a rival. And, here, people, was one of the stunners. Those who read a plethora of variations will know that a rivalry for Elizabeth's hand between Darcy and Collins is unicorn unique. This Collins is handsome and charming though, yes, he still has the gift of gab. The first surprise is followed up by the fact that Lydia, the wild child, is the one to figure out first which man has the appearance of goodness and which is actually good, before her sister.
Other delightful surprises were seeing steady Mary be the first of the five sisters to find lasting love. Then Jane and Kitty get different beaus who I liked for them. Interesting situation among the Bennet elders who are softer toward each other. Whew, Caroline Bingley was a ball of fire, but this version of Louisa was a gem.
The plot of the story has a love triangle-ish trope without all the annoyances I generally feel for that type of plot. I liked that this was about Elizabeth figuring out the essential nature of the two men, Darcy and Collins, and them showing who they really are as the story progresses.
Wonderful character-driven piece!
All the Appearance of Goodness is third in a series that is meant to be read in order.
As I mentioned, I was returning to the series and I took a while so I was crossing my fingers that what came before would come back to me so I wasn't lost navigating this latest in the series.
The series is a variation on Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice. The setting and characters are from the original, Pride and Prejudice, but the story-line and personalities of the characters are all original to Maria Grace. She carefully places her characters into what felt like an authentic Regency world of Austen, but what they say, what they do, and where they go will be a delightful surprise to all.
The central figures, Darcy and Elizabeth are not antagonistic and do have a friendship of sorts, but their path to true love is hampered by a rival. And, here, people, was one of the stunners. Those who read a plethora of variations will know that a rivalry for Elizabeth's hand between Darcy and Collins is unicorn unique. This Collins is handsome and charming though, yes, he still has the gift of gab. The first surprise is followed up by the fact that Lydia, the wild child, is the one to figure out first which man has the appearance of goodness and which is actually good, before her sister.
Other delightful surprises were seeing steady Mary be the first of the five sisters to find lasting love. Then Jane and Kitty get different beaus who I liked for them. Interesting situation among the Bennet elders who are softer toward each other. Whew, Caroline Bingley was a ball of fire, but this version of Louisa was a gem.
The plot of the story has a love triangle-ish trope without all the annoyances I generally feel for that type of plot. I liked that this was about Elizabeth figuring out the essential nature of the two men, Darcy and Collins, and them showing who they really are as the story progresses.
Wonderful character-driven piece!
March 21, 2013
I loved it! After reading the first two in the series I knew I would love this engaging conclusion! The story was set up beautifully for this third novel. I would recommend not a long wait time between reading all three, because I found I had to rake my brain to recap some of the events from previous books.
I had thought it would be smooth sailing for Darcy and Elizabeth, but I was very wrong! Who would have thought if Mr. Collins had a touch of Wickham in him how he could have been a rival for Darcy? Austen's Collins is a pitiable fool, whereas Grace's Collins is a sinister cad. I've never been so frustrated at a character before! Except maybe Grace's Caroline Bingley. I loved reading Darcy and Elizabeth's interactions as well as their inner turmoil, there's still plenty of room for them to conquer their inner prejudices and pride.
There were some changes to the main storyline, but this was set up in the first two novels, and I feel they fit well!
I had thought it would be smooth sailing for Darcy and Elizabeth, but I was very wrong! Who would have thought if Mr. Collins had a touch of Wickham in him how he could have been a rival for Darcy? Austen's Collins is a pitiable fool, whereas Grace's Collins is a sinister cad. I've never been so frustrated at a character before! Except maybe Grace's Caroline Bingley. I loved reading Darcy and Elizabeth's interactions as well as their inner turmoil, there's still plenty of room for them to conquer their inner prejudices and pride.
There were some changes to the main storyline, but this was set up in the first two novels, and I feel they fit well!
August 21, 2016
Purchased as: Given Good Principles Box Set: Vol. 3 All the Appearance of Goodness
“By their fruits you will know them.” Matthew 7:16
The tone of this book is very unusual. We start off by repeating the last of Vol. 2 in order to remind us of how Darcy and Elizabeth met. When we left Vol. 2, we were given the impression that there was definite interest between the two parties. I just knew things would be different in Vol. 3 because Wickham had been dispatched in Vol. 2, so there shouldn’t be any problems…right? Oh how naïve I was to believe it would be that simple. I was so amused at how the author lulled me into thinking all would be smooth sailing from here on out.
In this third of four books, we still have a very nervous Mrs. Bennet who falls apart at the drop of her handkerchief. She is a bundle of nerves even more severe than in canon. Mr. Bennet has banned sister Mrs. Philips from Longbourn because her visits upset and incite Mrs. Bennet. There is still an undercurrent that has not been made clear. Either that or I completely missed the point somewhere.
Darcy and Elizabeth: at times I wondered at their boldness. Elizabeth seemed too bold; Darcy was too tongue-tied. His shyness was near incapacitating. Only if he were doing business or needed to rise to the occasion, then the Master of Pemberley would come forth. OH MY GOODNESS!!! Whew…he did do that well.
Charles arrived to look at leasing Netherfield. His sister Louisa was to act as hostess until Caroline barged in and broke up their little respite from her and demanded preference.
Caroline: OMG, this was the most outlandish behavior even for her. She was horrid, simpered, complained, turned her nose up at everything and everybody. Darcy finally could tolerate her no longer and helped Bingley man-up and take care of her. I loved seeing Bingley assume his position in his family. It was delicious.
We see a new side to Louisa Bingley. She is scheduled to marry Mr. Hurst upon his return from his business to the continent. I really liked her and felt sorry for her as she was controlled and dominated by Caroline. She was upset because Caroline was insisting on going with them on their wedding trip and then living with them afterwards.
Lydia…will that girl EVER learn, she was still such a pill and uncontrollable. I don’t have the words. She had already been reigned in somewhat. She was still being shunned by most of Meryton society. There wasn’t too much trouble she could get herself in. However, I still kept expecting the ax to fall. You simply can’t trust her. And she doesn’t see that her actions are so very bad.
Jane…awh Jane, she gets her HEA, need I say more.
Kitty: I liked this Kitty. She was so creative with her designs and creating fashion gowns for herself and her sisters. She was really coming into her own.
Enter Mr. Collins. At first the ladies at Longbourn were impressed with this version of Mr. Collins. This guy was handsome, articulate, well read, well mannered, intelligent and glib tongued [remind you of anyone?]. This was not the toady sycophant that you normally see in canon and most JAFF variations. Having said that…you HAVE to read what happened. I…can’t even describe what went down.
NO SPOILERS*** I refused to read any spoilers before reading this and I am so glad I didn’t. OMG!!! I have NEVER seen this sort of action…mystery…suspense…and…I was gasping as I read page after page of ‘I cannot believe this is happening’ type of drama. I am still speechless regarding what happened. OMG!!! How creative and I do so love surprises, but this was beyond anything I could imagine. Got me good!!! I loved it.
Problems: minor editing. However, the shifting POV drove me crazy. I don’t mind being in more than one head and trailing several thought processes. There was Darcy, Elizabeth, Mr. Bennet, Colonel Fitzwilliam…it got pretty crowded and messy.
The problem was one section would this person’s thoughts, then the next section would be another person’s thoughts during the same time period. I kept flipping back and forth trying to decide who was talking and where we were on the timeline. The jumping around, back and forth, was just too disconcerting. Other than that, I LOVED this story.
The author was so creative in taking Austen’s dialogue and then having the most unlikely person deliver it. It was so surprising to see those favorite speeches in someone else’s mouth…I had to laugh.
“By their fruits you will know them.” Matthew 7:16
The tone of this book is very unusual. We start off by repeating the last of Vol. 2 in order to remind us of how Darcy and Elizabeth met. When we left Vol. 2, we were given the impression that there was definite interest between the two parties. I just knew things would be different in Vol. 3 because Wickham had been dispatched in Vol. 2, so there shouldn’t be any problems…right? Oh how naïve I was to believe it would be that simple. I was so amused at how the author lulled me into thinking all would be smooth sailing from here on out.
In this third of four books, we still have a very nervous Mrs. Bennet who falls apart at the drop of her handkerchief. She is a bundle of nerves even more severe than in canon. Mr. Bennet has banned sister Mrs. Philips from Longbourn because her visits upset and incite Mrs. Bennet. There is still an undercurrent that has not been made clear. Either that or I completely missed the point somewhere.
Darcy and Elizabeth: at times I wondered at their boldness. Elizabeth seemed too bold; Darcy was too tongue-tied. His shyness was near incapacitating. Only if he were doing business or needed to rise to the occasion, then the Master of Pemberley would come forth. OH MY GOODNESS!!! Whew…he did do that well.
Charles arrived to look at leasing Netherfield. His sister Louisa was to act as hostess until Caroline barged in and broke up their little respite from her and demanded preference.
Caroline: OMG, this was the most outlandish behavior even for her. She was horrid, simpered, complained, turned her nose up at everything and everybody. Darcy finally could tolerate her no longer and helped Bingley man-up and take care of her. I loved seeing Bingley assume his position in his family. It was delicious.
We see a new side to Louisa Bingley. She is scheduled to marry Mr. Hurst upon his return from his business to the continent. I really liked her and felt sorry for her as she was controlled and dominated by Caroline. She was upset because Caroline was insisting on going with them on their wedding trip and then living with them afterwards.
Lydia…will that girl EVER learn, she was still such a pill and uncontrollable. I don’t have the words. She had already been reigned in somewhat. She was still being shunned by most of Meryton society. There wasn’t too much trouble she could get herself in. However, I still kept expecting the ax to fall. You simply can’t trust her. And she doesn’t see that her actions are so very bad.
Jane…awh Jane, she gets her HEA, need I say more.
Kitty: I liked this Kitty. She was so creative with her designs and creating fashion gowns for herself and her sisters. She was really coming into her own.
Enter Mr. Collins. At first the ladies at Longbourn were impressed with this version of Mr. Collins. This guy was handsome, articulate, well read, well mannered, intelligent and glib tongued [remind you of anyone?]. This was not the toady sycophant that you normally see in canon and most JAFF variations. Having said that…you HAVE to read what happened. I…can’t even describe what went down.
NO SPOILERS*** I refused to read any spoilers before reading this and I am so glad I didn’t. OMG!!! I have NEVER seen this sort of action…mystery…suspense…and…I was gasping as I read page after page of ‘I cannot believe this is happening’ type of drama. I am still speechless regarding what happened. OMG!!! How creative and I do so love surprises, but this was beyond anything I could imagine. Got me good!!! I loved it.
Problems: minor editing. However, the shifting POV drove me crazy. I don’t mind being in more than one head and trailing several thought processes. There was Darcy, Elizabeth, Mr. Bennet, Colonel Fitzwilliam…it got pretty crowded and messy.
The problem was one section would this person’s thoughts, then the next section would be another person’s thoughts during the same time period. I kept flipping back and forth trying to decide who was talking and where we were on the timeline. The jumping around, back and forth, was just too disconcerting. Other than that, I LOVED this story.
The author was so creative in taking Austen’s dialogue and then having the most unlikely person deliver it. It was so surprising to see those favorite speeches in someone else’s mouth…I had to laugh.
August 10, 2016
And in the 3rd book Mr. Darcy and Lizzy Bennet finally meet. Mr. Darcy is marriage minded and in search of a young woman who will fulfill the duties of a proper mistress to Pemberley and enjoy country society. He first encounters Lizzy as she returns from a tenant visit and is walking in the woods. He on the other hand is lost and tangled in a raspberry bush.
This book introduces us to a kind, caring and thoughtful Louisa Bingley, away from Caroline and welcome to new friends. Bradley joins Darcy & Bingley in Meryton and is thrilled to meet his old friend Bennet as well as the Bennet ladies who he knows well from his correspondence with Madalyn Gardiner. He is also visiting with Meryton's deacon to consider him for the post at Pemberley. The deacon is engaged to Mary Bennet.
To add to the excitement Mr. Collins has come to call upon the Bennets. Mr. Bennet is desirous of acquiring a mortgage to improve Longbourn and requires Collins' approval. This is not Mr.Collins of P & P but a Collins / Wickham chimera; obsequious, attractive and duplicitous. The irony is that Lydia alone recognizes the danger he represents but her protestations are dismissed as malicious jealously.
The visit of Mr. Collins sends Mrs. Bennet to her chambers with an emotional collapse but it is much more than her nerves
While the Bennet sisters are enjoying Miss Bingley's company and Darcy & Bingley acquaint themselves with Netherfield and Meryton, Mr. Collins slimes his way into the Bennet family. He with the assistance of a nasty Caroline Bingley attempts to turn Lizzy irrevocably against Darcy. Resulting in Lizzy hiding away from everyone.
Meanwhile Col. Fitzwilliam (ret.) is wooing Miss Jane Bennet and Bingley is just a happy go lucky fool.
When Mr. Collins fails at his wooing for Lizzy he appeals to her father and suggests he will agree to the mortgage for Lizzy's hand. When that is rebuffed he attempts to compromise Lizzy.
The author reminds us endlessly of the perilous position of the young lady in Regency England and how her wants and needs could be easily ignored to soothe society.
This book introduces us to a kind, caring and thoughtful Louisa Bingley, away from Caroline and welcome to new friends. Bradley joins Darcy & Bingley in Meryton and is thrilled to meet his old friend Bennet as well as the Bennet ladies who he knows well from his correspondence with Madalyn Gardiner. He is also visiting with Meryton's deacon to consider him for the post at Pemberley. The deacon is engaged to Mary Bennet.
To add to the excitement Mr. Collins has come to call upon the Bennets. Mr. Bennet is desirous of acquiring a mortgage to improve Longbourn and requires Collins' approval. This is not Mr.Collins of P & P but a Collins / Wickham chimera; obsequious, attractive and duplicitous. The irony is that Lydia alone recognizes the danger he represents but her protestations are dismissed as malicious jealously.
The visit of Mr. Collins sends Mrs. Bennet to her chambers with an emotional collapse but it is much more than her nerves
While the Bennet sisters are enjoying Miss Bingley's company and Darcy & Bingley acquaint themselves with Netherfield and Meryton, Mr. Collins slimes his way into the Bennet family. He with the assistance of a nasty Caroline Bingley attempts to turn Lizzy irrevocably against Darcy. Resulting in Lizzy hiding away from everyone.
Meanwhile Col. Fitzwilliam (ret.) is wooing Miss Jane Bennet and Bingley is just a happy go lucky fool.
When Mr. Collins fails at his wooing for Lizzy he appeals to her father and suggests he will agree to the mortgage for Lizzy's hand. When that is rebuffed he attempts to compromise Lizzy.
The author reminds us endlessly of the perilous position of the young lady in Regency England and how her wants and needs could be easily ignored to soothe society.
November 4, 2021
I bought this book when it was listed for $.99 on an Austen authors site, not realizing it was the third in a series. Maybe that is the reason I found the beginning to be disjointed and confusing. Characters, Bradley and Pierce, had no introduction and so it took some reading to figure out who they were and their setting among the other characters. I was surprised when Collins was introduced as a handsome and charming man (the description reminded me of St. John's in Jane Eyre) and Lydia's opinion of the man. I kept wondering while reading if this author was going to have Elizabeth end up engaged or married to Collins and maybe then kill Collins off or have the engagement ended for some reason, etc. The ending for Collins was a little over the edge for me, even though I did want him to get his comeuppance. And Bingley had almost no role, more a background figure! I have read at least one other novel in which Jane and Col. Fitzwilliam end up together and that is an acceptable pairing for me, although others may cling to JA's story line. I liked this book as it kept me guessing but did give me/us the ending we expect and love. Now to read the other 2 stories.
August 13, 2014
I liked the 1st and 2nd books in this series much more than the final book. Mr. Collins must stand in as the resident villain, Wickham having been disposed of in book 1. I must say he's more evil than Wickham and that's about the highlight of the book. Col. Fitzwilliam makes an appearance and unfortunately he woos and wins Jane Bennet, leaving Bingley to mill about like a fool and keep company with Kitty and Lydia. Luckily no romantic notions form there. Caroline Bingley is dealt with quite nicely (for once!). But it all turns quite gothic at the end.
What I missed most in this variation was the sisterly interaction between Jane and Elizabeth... neither one talks to the other about her feelings...nor are we privy to many of their thoughts.
What I disliked most was reading other characters talk about events instead of the allowing the reader to witness the events firsthand. For instance, we don't realize that Darcy has sought Lizzie's hand from her father until Darcy is talking about it to Bradley. I would have preferred to read the actual scene as it unfolded but was sadly denied.
Not a "true" variation at all. As much as I like Col. Fitzwilliam... Jane needs to be with Bingley!
What I missed most in this variation was the sisterly interaction between Jane and Elizabeth... neither one talks to the other about her feelings...nor are we privy to many of their thoughts.
What I disliked most was reading other characters talk about events instead of the allowing the reader to witness the events firsthand. For instance, we don't realize that Darcy has sought Lizzie's hand from her father until Darcy is talking about it to Bradley. I would have preferred to read the actual scene as it unfolded but was sadly denied.
Not a "true" variation at all. As much as I like Col. Fitzwilliam... Jane needs to be with Bingley!
October 31, 2022
Loved it couldn't put itndown
It was an excellent turn paving book. The story was a great contiuation of the prior part of the series ....Loved it on to read the next
It was an excellent turn paving book. The story was a great contiuation of the prior part of the series ....Loved it on to read the next
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November 3, 2017All the Appearance of Goodness is Volume III in Maria Grace’s Given Good Principles series of Pride and Prejudice variations. The series began with Darcy’s Decision, in which a young Fitzwilliam Darcy comes to terms with his responsibilities as master of Pemberley, and The Future Mrs. Darcy, in which Elizabeth Bennet must take control of the household and rein in her foolish little sister Lydia before she ruins the Bennet family’s reputation. In this installment, Darcy and Elizabeth finally cross paths, as he accompanies Mr. Bingley to Netherfield Park.
With his vicar and trusted advisor Mr. Bradley at his side, Darcy hopes his time in the country will allow him to practice his social skills, but he is caught off guard when he gets lost on the Bennet’s property and encounters a lively Elizabeth. It’s not long before the Bennet sisters have befriended Darcy, Bingley, and Bingley’s sister Louisa, and Jane Bennet immediately catches the eye of Darcy’s cousin Colonel Fitzwilliam. But things become chaotic as the Bennets begin to plan Mary’s wedding, Caroline Bingley arrives with an arrogance and outspokenness that would give Lady Catherine a run for her money, and Mr. Collins comes to check out the estate he will one day inherit and immediately sets his sights on Elizabeth.
Mr. Collins has good looks and good manners, and Darcy soon realizes he has some competition in his quest to win Elizabeth’s affections. It soon becomes apparent that Mr. Collins may not be what he seems, but Darcy’s inability to express his thoughts and feelings doesn’t do much to help his cause either. A confused Elizabeth is forced to determine which man has all the goodness and which only has the appearance of it.
All the Appearance of Goodness was so different and so exciting that after two cups of tea, I was already more than halfway through the book, and I dismissed my plans for the rest of the day because I just had to see how it all played out. Watching Mr. Darcy and Mr. Collins try to outdo one another was amusing at first, but I was surprised (and delighted, of course) when the story took a more sinister turn. I loved that Louisa Bingley was so likeable and Caroline Bingley much more despicable in this variation, and their confrontation is an absolute must-read. I found it a little odd that Bingley, as amiable as ever, was relegated to the background and spent most of his time with Kitty and Lydia, but it worked here. But mostly I enjoyed having no idea how the expected happily ever after would be achieved.
Maria Grace has a knack for shaking things up in her variations, as evidenced by her latest novel, Remember the Past (which I loved). I don’t know why it took me so long to continue this series, but I’m so glad I did. There is a lot that happens in the first two volumes that shape Grace’s versions of Darcy and Elizabeth, so readers will want to read them before picking up All the Appearance of Goodness. From Grace’s original characters like Mr. Bradley to her portrayal of characters we already love to hate, All the Appearance of Goodness was a pure delight. I immediately picked up the next book in the series, Twelfth Night at Longbourn, so stay tuned for my review.
Review posted on Diary of an Eccentric
I received a free copy of this book for review.
With his vicar and trusted advisor Mr. Bradley at his side, Darcy hopes his time in the country will allow him to practice his social skills, but he is caught off guard when he gets lost on the Bennet’s property and encounters a lively Elizabeth. It’s not long before the Bennet sisters have befriended Darcy, Bingley, and Bingley’s sister Louisa, and Jane Bennet immediately catches the eye of Darcy’s cousin Colonel Fitzwilliam. But things become chaotic as the Bennets begin to plan Mary’s wedding, Caroline Bingley arrives with an arrogance and outspokenness that would give Lady Catherine a run for her money, and Mr. Collins comes to check out the estate he will one day inherit and immediately sets his sights on Elizabeth.
Mr. Collins has good looks and good manners, and Darcy soon realizes he has some competition in his quest to win Elizabeth’s affections. It soon becomes apparent that Mr. Collins may not be what he seems, but Darcy’s inability to express his thoughts and feelings doesn’t do much to help his cause either. A confused Elizabeth is forced to determine which man has all the goodness and which only has the appearance of it.
All the Appearance of Goodness was so different and so exciting that after two cups of tea, I was already more than halfway through the book, and I dismissed my plans for the rest of the day because I just had to see how it all played out. Watching Mr. Darcy and Mr. Collins try to outdo one another was amusing at first, but I was surprised (and delighted, of course) when the story took a more sinister turn. I loved that Louisa Bingley was so likeable and Caroline Bingley much more despicable in this variation, and their confrontation is an absolute must-read. I found it a little odd that Bingley, as amiable as ever, was relegated to the background and spent most of his time with Kitty and Lydia, but it worked here. But mostly I enjoyed having no idea how the expected happily ever after would be achieved.
Maria Grace has a knack for shaking things up in her variations, as evidenced by her latest novel, Remember the Past (which I loved). I don’t know why it took me so long to continue this series, but I’m so glad I did. There is a lot that happens in the first two volumes that shape Grace’s versions of Darcy and Elizabeth, so readers will want to read them before picking up All the Appearance of Goodness. From Grace’s original characters like Mr. Bradley to her portrayal of characters we already love to hate, All the Appearance of Goodness was a pure delight. I immediately picked up the next book in the series, Twelfth Night at Longbourn, so stay tuned for my review.
Review posted on Diary of an Eccentric
I received a free copy of this book for review.
December 11, 2016
Another winner from Maria Grace. This series of three books can boast that each is as compelling as the other. Not one is my favorite. It is a compliment to the author that she was able to set a high standard of storytelling and was able to reach it again and again. Well done!
July 14, 2016
The third in the series brings our characters together and in some interesting pairings. Mr Collins is even more of a "bad" guy than ever and Caroline Bingley was written perfectly awful. Our happy couple finds the love in their hearts after they are willing to take a chance.
November 18, 2022
Great love story
Very good story, just think a handsome Mr Collins who turned out to be worse than Wickham. I guess that's why didn't was not in this story. Loved Bradley and the colonel. Daddy and lizzys love story was great. Wished for an epilogue!!
Very good story, just think a handsome Mr Collins who turned out to be worse than Wickham. I guess that's why didn't was not in this story. Loved Bradley and the colonel. Daddy and lizzys love story was great. Wished for an epilogue!!
March 31, 2015
All the Appearance of Goodness (Given Good Principles)
Book 3 begins with Darcy, Bradley, and the Bingleys' travel to Meryton. When Darcy leaves Bingley at the inn, he continues on to Mr. Pierce's cottage at the edge of Longbourn. Before getting there, he tells Bradley that he will check out Netherfield and head back to London. Bradley has more than a few words for him. When he drops Bradley off at Pierce's he'll return to the inn. He taps the roof of his carriage so he can get out to walk back to town. Seeing a little path, he decides to take it through the woods. Seeing
some raspberry bushes, he steps off the path. When he finishes eating the raspberries, he forgets his direction. Elizabeth teases him, and he actually talks to her, smiles, and chuckles. He is drawn to her fine eyes, and she, his dimples Good start for Darcy. Bradley would be proud of him. Bradley and Pierce are getting along very well, because they seem to have a lot in common. Mamma wants the girls to meet the sister. Jane met her in town already, and they decide to visit today. She is in the common room when they arrive. She is serving tea when Bingley and Darcy come in to join them. Elizabeth is happy to see Darcy again. Bascombe is confronted by Darcy with all of Netherfield's many concerns in need of repair. Bascombe tries his best to get out from under Darcy's scrutiny, but underestimates Darcy. Getting all the concessions requested, Netherfield is rented by Bingley. Darcy goes for a ride and comes upon Jane and Elizabeth. Dismounting his horse, Darcy begins to walk with them. Suddenly, another horse comes charging behind them. Colonel Fitzwilliam is introduced to both ladies and immediately is struck by Jane. Fitzwilliam has found someone to soothe his soul. Seeing the Bennet ladies home, plans are set for tomorrow and later for their welcome dinner Ms. Bennet had planned. Caroline is already on her high horse about going and is told to stay behind a Netherfield. She goes, makes them late, Darcy being always on time is furious with her behavior. He suggests that they leave and if she wants to come, walk. A night of fun games is had by all, but Lydia tells Elizabeth Collins is down £50. Elizabeth accuses her of not liking him and tells her it was probably 5 pence. The next morning, Kitty, Elizabeth, and Lydia walk into town Kitty is in need of sewing materials, Elizabeth has a list from her mother to purchase, and Lydia runs off. Seeing Charlotte and Maria, she ducks into the first store she comes to. Unfortunately for her, it is the book store. Inside is Collins trying to sell on of Mr. Bennet's rare books. Again Lizzy tells her to stop making up lies about Collins. The next morning, Darcy, Fitzwilliam, Bingley, and Louisa plan to sneak out so Caroline doesn't see them. No one wants her along. She goes along, but is not thrilled. Getting to Longbourn, the group is headed towards their targets. Fitzwilliam heads for Jane, Darcy heads to Elizabeth, Louisa heads to Kitty with Bingley following his sister, and Caroline is stuck sitting next to Collins. Fitzwilliam and Darcy take a walk with their ladies. Suddenly, Caroline runs up to Darcy with Collins behind, and they congratulate him on his engagement to his cousin. Madder than a wet when, he confronts them both by spreading lies, but by that time the damage is done. Lizzy is confronted by Collins and indicates she is too below his sphere for him to consider her. She doesn't want to be near him either, pushes him away and runs. Fitzwilliam immediately tells Jane that he is not, nor was he ever, and will never be engaged to his cousin that this his Aunt's dream. Back at Netherfield, Bingley confronts Caroline for the hurt and humiliation she has caused Darcy. He begins to relate some of her hurtful things that have caused mortification to Louisa and himself. He tells Darcy to stay. Caroline says she'll be humiliated. Bingley's response is, "Just like you humiliated him." Bingley makes arrangements for Caroline and her maid to travel to their aunt in Scarborough by post. After talking with Elizabeth, Louisa decides to confront her with a long overdue set down and what she will longer tolerate. Caroline is furious, but Louisa is happy an feels like a weight has been lifted. Like it or not, Caroline is put on the post coach. Throughout this mess, Bradley is constantly at Darcy. Darcy realizes that he needs to fight for Elizabeth, because he wants her forever. The morning of Mary's wedding, Collins talks Elizabeth into walking in the garden. His long winded blithering goes from obnoxious to alarming. Elizabeth is afraid of his words and untoward behavior. The night of the Meryton Assembly is upon them, and Darcy has made up his mind to fight for his Elizabeth. Darcy and Fitzwilliam meet the Bennet carriage. Fitzwilliam helps Jane out, when Darcy starts to aid Elizabeth, Collins pushes in to intercept Elizabeth. She agrees to one dance, but gives her hand to Darcy to help her from the carriage. Collins' conversation during the dance with Elizabeth is filled with sexual innuendos that make Elizabeth uneasy. She tells him of his impropriety and turns to walk away. She turns to protect herself and as he trips, she sees her world coming to an end. Luckily, Darcy was there to grab him. Collins says he hurt his ankle and says she must stay with him to give him comfort as is her duty. Darcy tells to fetch her father from the card room. Mr. Bennet tells him it is not her duty, he can come with him to the card. Collins protects, but Mr. Bennet will not change his mind. Mrs. Bennet calls for the carriage, because she's concerned about Collins' leg. Elizabeth refuses to ride in the carriage with Collins so Darcy's plan to take Elizabeth and Jane in his carriage is accepted by Mr. Bennet. Along the road, Darcy's carriage breaks a wheel. Everybody is okay, but another carriage must be brought to them. Longbourn being closer, a carriage is sent for. While talking with Elizabeth, Darcy gives her the book from town. When she looks at him with questioning in her eyes, he tells her there's a paper that will explain everything. Elizabeth leaves with Papa's book, and Darcy's letter. The letter explains everything: why the book was sold, by whom, and the reason. Besides the book, Darcy explains why Collins is so anxious to get a wife. He is promised by Lady Catherine de Bourgh all his debts will be covered if he brings back a wife from one of his cousins to keep him in line. Elizabeth is angry, astounded, and finally any motivation she had for him has been damaged and wants nothing to do with him. Finding her father and Collins gone to the surgeon, Elizabeth waits for his return. While waiting Fitzwilliam has come to propose to Jane. His acceptance is immediately given. Coming back to the house, Bennet and Collins have returned. His ankle is neither broken nor sprained badly at all. Collins faking everything, falls stating that he cannot get up because of his ankle thing. Fitzwilliam picks his up, slings him over his shoulder lie a sack of grain, carries him upstairs, and drops him in bed. Fitzwilliam comes to ask for Jane's hand and is granted. Collins confronts Mr. Bennet about Elizabeth. He wants her as his wife and batters with the mortgage Bennet wanted. Bennet is livid and tells Collins he is out of his house, and when Elizabeth tells him to get lost, he was done at Longbourn. Later, Collins catches her alone in her father's library. He confronts her with marriage, and she tells him no in harshest words possible. He tries to compromise her, but she escapes and runs to Netherfield regardless of the storm. Unfortunately shortly after her admittance, Collins follows. Unknown to Bingley what has transpired, he allows him to stay. Seeing Elizabeth's reaction to his presence, Bradley takes her into the library to find out what's wrong. As the rest of the group follows without Collins, they all pledge to o protect her from Collins. After dinner, the men sing and preform,, then the ladies. Kitty suggests the game of Aviary. Bradley is the bird keeper. Once they all tell him from which bird they'd pluck a feather, Bradley announces that but one picked a peacock, and Collins owes seven forfeits. Angry, he accuses Bradley of cheating. He goes to bed thinking of his plan for getting Elizabeth compromised. When the rest retire for the night, Bradley suggests the ladies take the room at the end of the ball for their hen party. Fitzwilliam and Darcy take the room were Elizabeth was shown. A footman is stationed at the far end of the hallway, and Bradley says his door will be open so he can hear anyone in the hallway. Collins waits until he hears no noise, creeps through the servant's passageway, continues towards the other side of the main ball, and counts doors to enter Elizabeth's room. His candle barely shows anything within the room, a and when he approaches the bed, grabs what he thinks is her chest only to find the bed occupied by Fitzwilliam. When jumps back, the candle catches his shirt on fire. He runs and throws himself out the second story glass window. Netherfield is on fire, and Darcy makes sure everyone is out of the building. The men and servants start a fire brigade putting the flames out. Collins is dead. Bradley's ankle is injured. Carriages are called to take them to Longbourn. After everything is revealed, Darcy asks for a private meeting. Mr. Bennet doesn't give him the same reception he gave Fitzwilliam, and he is upset. Bradley tells him he can run, or continue to fight for Elizabeth. When her father questions her, she tells him she loves Darcy. He tells her Darcy is in the garden. Darcy proposes, and Elizabeth accepts. Mrs. Bennet is in a tizzy. They decide on a double wedding. Kitty is frantically sketching bridal gowns. Mrs. Bennet the wedding breakfast. The men are talking care of Netherfield. Bradley is officiating the ceremony. Weeks flew by and finally the day had come. He helped her to her feet, and they turned to face their friends, their family, and the rest of their lives as man and wife. Great continuation.
Book 3 begins with Darcy, Bradley, and the Bingleys' travel to Meryton. When Darcy leaves Bingley at the inn, he continues on to Mr. Pierce's cottage at the edge of Longbourn. Before getting there, he tells Bradley that he will check out Netherfield and head back to London. Bradley has more than a few words for him. When he drops Bradley off at Pierce's he'll return to the inn. He taps the roof of his carriage so he can get out to walk back to town. Seeing a little path, he decides to take it through the woods. Seeing
some raspberry bushes, he steps off the path. When he finishes eating the raspberries, he forgets his direction. Elizabeth teases him, and he actually talks to her, smiles, and chuckles. He is drawn to her fine eyes, and she, his dimples Good start for Darcy. Bradley would be proud of him. Bradley and Pierce are getting along very well, because they seem to have a lot in common. Mamma wants the girls to meet the sister. Jane met her in town already, and they decide to visit today. She is in the common room when they arrive. She is serving tea when Bingley and Darcy come in to join them. Elizabeth is happy to see Darcy again. Bascombe is confronted by Darcy with all of Netherfield's many concerns in need of repair. Bascombe tries his best to get out from under Darcy's scrutiny, but underestimates Darcy. Getting all the concessions requested, Netherfield is rented by Bingley. Darcy goes for a ride and comes upon Jane and Elizabeth. Dismounting his horse, Darcy begins to walk with them. Suddenly, another horse comes charging behind them. Colonel Fitzwilliam is introduced to both ladies and immediately is struck by Jane. Fitzwilliam has found someone to soothe his soul. Seeing the Bennet ladies home, plans are set for tomorrow and later for their welcome dinner Ms. Bennet had planned. Caroline is already on her high horse about going and is told to stay behind a Netherfield. She goes, makes them late, Darcy being always on time is furious with her behavior. He suggests that they leave and if she wants to come, walk. A night of fun games is had by all, but Lydia tells Elizabeth Collins is down £50. Elizabeth accuses her of not liking him and tells her it was probably 5 pence. The next morning, Kitty, Elizabeth, and Lydia walk into town Kitty is in need of sewing materials, Elizabeth has a list from her mother to purchase, and Lydia runs off. Seeing Charlotte and Maria, she ducks into the first store she comes to. Unfortunately for her, it is the book store. Inside is Collins trying to sell on of Mr. Bennet's rare books. Again Lizzy tells her to stop making up lies about Collins. The next morning, Darcy, Fitzwilliam, Bingley, and Louisa plan to sneak out so Caroline doesn't see them. No one wants her along. She goes along, but is not thrilled. Getting to Longbourn, the group is headed towards their targets. Fitzwilliam heads for Jane, Darcy heads to Elizabeth, Louisa heads to Kitty with Bingley following his sister, and Caroline is stuck sitting next to Collins. Fitzwilliam and Darcy take a walk with their ladies. Suddenly, Caroline runs up to Darcy with Collins behind, and they congratulate him on his engagement to his cousin. Madder than a wet when, he confronts them both by spreading lies, but by that time the damage is done. Lizzy is confronted by Collins and indicates she is too below his sphere for him to consider her. She doesn't want to be near him either, pushes him away and runs. Fitzwilliam immediately tells Jane that he is not, nor was he ever, and will never be engaged to his cousin that this his Aunt's dream. Back at Netherfield, Bingley confronts Caroline for the hurt and humiliation she has caused Darcy. He begins to relate some of her hurtful things that have caused mortification to Louisa and himself. He tells Darcy to stay. Caroline says she'll be humiliated. Bingley's response is, "Just like you humiliated him." Bingley makes arrangements for Caroline and her maid to travel to their aunt in Scarborough by post. After talking with Elizabeth, Louisa decides to confront her with a long overdue set down and what she will longer tolerate. Caroline is furious, but Louisa is happy an feels like a weight has been lifted. Like it or not, Caroline is put on the post coach. Throughout this mess, Bradley is constantly at Darcy. Darcy realizes that he needs to fight for Elizabeth, because he wants her forever. The morning of Mary's wedding, Collins talks Elizabeth into walking in the garden. His long winded blithering goes from obnoxious to alarming. Elizabeth is afraid of his words and untoward behavior. The night of the Meryton Assembly is upon them, and Darcy has made up his mind to fight for his Elizabeth. Darcy and Fitzwilliam meet the Bennet carriage. Fitzwilliam helps Jane out, when Darcy starts to aid Elizabeth, Collins pushes in to intercept Elizabeth. She agrees to one dance, but gives her hand to Darcy to help her from the carriage. Collins' conversation during the dance with Elizabeth is filled with sexual innuendos that make Elizabeth uneasy. She tells him of his impropriety and turns to walk away. She turns to protect herself and as he trips, she sees her world coming to an end. Luckily, Darcy was there to grab him. Collins says he hurt his ankle and says she must stay with him to give him comfort as is her duty. Darcy tells to fetch her father from the card room. Mr. Bennet tells him it is not her duty, he can come with him to the card. Collins protects, but Mr. Bennet will not change his mind. Mrs. Bennet calls for the carriage, because she's concerned about Collins' leg. Elizabeth refuses to ride in the carriage with Collins so Darcy's plan to take Elizabeth and Jane in his carriage is accepted by Mr. Bennet. Along the road, Darcy's carriage breaks a wheel. Everybody is okay, but another carriage must be brought to them. Longbourn being closer, a carriage is sent for. While talking with Elizabeth, Darcy gives her the book from town. When she looks at him with questioning in her eyes, he tells her there's a paper that will explain everything. Elizabeth leaves with Papa's book, and Darcy's letter. The letter explains everything: why the book was sold, by whom, and the reason. Besides the book, Darcy explains why Collins is so anxious to get a wife. He is promised by Lady Catherine de Bourgh all his debts will be covered if he brings back a wife from one of his cousins to keep him in line. Elizabeth is angry, astounded, and finally any motivation she had for him has been damaged and wants nothing to do with him. Finding her father and Collins gone to the surgeon, Elizabeth waits for his return. While waiting Fitzwilliam has come to propose to Jane. His acceptance is immediately given. Coming back to the house, Bennet and Collins have returned. His ankle is neither broken nor sprained badly at all. Collins faking everything, falls stating that he cannot get up because of his ankle thing. Fitzwilliam picks his up, slings him over his shoulder lie a sack of grain, carries him upstairs, and drops him in bed. Fitzwilliam comes to ask for Jane's hand and is granted. Collins confronts Mr. Bennet about Elizabeth. He wants her as his wife and batters with the mortgage Bennet wanted. Bennet is livid and tells Collins he is out of his house, and when Elizabeth tells him to get lost, he was done at Longbourn. Later, Collins catches her alone in her father's library. He confronts her with marriage, and she tells him no in harshest words possible. He tries to compromise her, but she escapes and runs to Netherfield regardless of the storm. Unfortunately shortly after her admittance, Collins follows. Unknown to Bingley what has transpired, he allows him to stay. Seeing Elizabeth's reaction to his presence, Bradley takes her into the library to find out what's wrong. As the rest of the group follows without Collins, they all pledge to o protect her from Collins. After dinner, the men sing and preform,, then the ladies. Kitty suggests the game of Aviary. Bradley is the bird keeper. Once they all tell him from which bird they'd pluck a feather, Bradley announces that but one picked a peacock, and Collins owes seven forfeits. Angry, he accuses Bradley of cheating. He goes to bed thinking of his plan for getting Elizabeth compromised. When the rest retire for the night, Bradley suggests the ladies take the room at the end of the ball for their hen party. Fitzwilliam and Darcy take the room were Elizabeth was shown. A footman is stationed at the far end of the hallway, and Bradley says his door will be open so he can hear anyone in the hallway. Collins waits until he hears no noise, creeps through the servant's passageway, continues towards the other side of the main ball, and counts doors to enter Elizabeth's room. His candle barely shows anything within the room, a and when he approaches the bed, grabs what he thinks is her chest only to find the bed occupied by Fitzwilliam. When jumps back, the candle catches his shirt on fire. He runs and throws himself out the second story glass window. Netherfield is on fire, and Darcy makes sure everyone is out of the building. The men and servants start a fire brigade putting the flames out. Collins is dead. Bradley's ankle is injured. Carriages are called to take them to Longbourn. After everything is revealed, Darcy asks for a private meeting. Mr. Bennet doesn't give him the same reception he gave Fitzwilliam, and he is upset. Bradley tells him he can run, or continue to fight for Elizabeth. When her father questions her, she tells him she loves Darcy. He tells her Darcy is in the garden. Darcy proposes, and Elizabeth accepts. Mrs. Bennet is in a tizzy. They decide on a double wedding. Kitty is frantically sketching bridal gowns. Mrs. Bennet the wedding breakfast. The men are talking care of Netherfield. Bradley is officiating the ceremony. Weeks flew by and finally the day had come. He helped her to her feet, and they turned to face their friends, their family, and the rest of their lives as man and wife. Great continuation.
May 30, 2013
This book is the third volume and longest in the trilogy, Given Good Principles, by Maria Grace. Volume I & II are both prequels to Pride and Prejudice with Volume I focusing on Darcy and his life prior to his trip to Herefordshire with Charles Bingley. Some background of the Bennet family and the reputations of Kitty and Lydia comprise the story for Volume II. I highly recommend reading both before reading Volume III.
In the beginning of All the Appearance of Goodness, Darcy and Lizzy meet for the first time. (And in a most unusual way) I loved this scene and the repertoire between my two favorite characters. It was very well done and brought many smiles. Another good thing about it was that it made for some nice references later in the book.
George Wickham is mentioned but is not in this story as he was dealt with in Volume I. He does have a replacement of sorts, in the form of Mr. Collins, the handsome and charming clergyman. (Yes, you read right!) Lizzy is true to character here as she is, at first, taken in by his looks and eloquence of speech. Lydia, not true to character, is not, and has an intense dislike for their fetching cousin. She even tries to convince Lizzy of her reasons for mistrusting him but Lizzy will not listen. What could Lydia possibly know…except maybe a bit of jealousy?
Darcy’s good friend and now vicar, Mr. Bradley, plays a big part again in this volume. He still is the mentor that Darcy needs and is pivotal in helping him see things without prejudice. This character that Ms. Grace has created is one I much love and of whom I would like to read again.
Louisa Bingley is unmarried but betrothed. Her personality is much improved and even likable. Mary has a much bigger role and a good one. It was great to see her happy and having good things happen to her for a change. Some of the other characters are matched up much differently than in the original book, but it made for fun reading. I loved the allusions to a relationship that might be developing for Kitty! You will never guess the fellow and I won’t spoil the surprise!
Darcy and Lizzy have misunderstandings of which their relationship is renowned. That makes the understanding between them all the better when it does happen. Toward the end it gets extremely intense. I couldn’t put the book down. Anyone that loves P & P retellings will want to read this book! It is most excellent! Thank you, Maria Grace, for these three volumes. I am hearing rumors that there may be a fourth! I hope that is true!
I actually rated this book 4.5 stars out of 5 stars
PG for no explicit sex
I was given an ARC eBook by the author for an honest and fair review.
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In the beginning of All the Appearance of Goodness, Darcy and Lizzy meet for the first time. (And in a most unusual way) I loved this scene and the repertoire between my two favorite characters. It was very well done and brought many smiles. Another good thing about it was that it made for some nice references later in the book.
George Wickham is mentioned but is not in this story as he was dealt with in Volume I. He does have a replacement of sorts, in the form of Mr. Collins, the handsome and charming clergyman. (Yes, you read right!) Lizzy is true to character here as she is, at first, taken in by his looks and eloquence of speech. Lydia, not true to character, is not, and has an intense dislike for their fetching cousin. She even tries to convince Lizzy of her reasons for mistrusting him but Lizzy will not listen. What could Lydia possibly know…except maybe a bit of jealousy?
Darcy’s good friend and now vicar, Mr. Bradley, plays a big part again in this volume. He still is the mentor that Darcy needs and is pivotal in helping him see things without prejudice. This character that Ms. Grace has created is one I much love and of whom I would like to read again.
Louisa Bingley is unmarried but betrothed. Her personality is much improved and even likable. Mary has a much bigger role and a good one. It was great to see her happy and having good things happen to her for a change. Some of the other characters are matched up much differently than in the original book, but it made for fun reading. I loved the allusions to a relationship that might be developing for Kitty! You will never guess the fellow and I won’t spoil the surprise!
Darcy and Lizzy have misunderstandings of which their relationship is renowned. That makes the understanding between them all the better when it does happen. Toward the end it gets extremely intense. I couldn’t put the book down. Anyone that loves P & P retellings will want to read this book! It is most excellent! Thank you, Maria Grace, for these three volumes. I am hearing rumors that there may be a fourth! I hope that is true!
I actually rated this book 4.5 stars out of 5 stars
PG for no explicit sex
I was given an ARC eBook by the author for an honest and fair review.
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April 9, 2013
All the Appearance of Goodness is the third book in the Given Good Principles Trilogy. In the first book, Darcy’s Decision, Darcy becomes a better man before meeting Elizabeth. In the second, The Future Mrs. Darcy, we watch the Bennet girls learn some valuable lessons, and learn to curb their behavior before meeting Mr. Darcy. At last, in All the Appearance of Goodness Darcy and Elizabeth meet! But all is not perfect...
I was intrigued and delighted by the many twists Maria Grace puts in this story. Her pairing of couples is fun, and Darcy has some competition vying for Elizabeth’s attention. Of all people, it’s Mr. Collins! A handsome and charming Mr. Collins at that! But appearances can be deceiving.
Colonel Fitzwilliam is in Meryton also staying a Netherfield. He is retired from the military and is on the look out for a wife. Could he possibly be interested in any of the Bennet girls?
Mr. Bradley, Darcy’s vicar accompanies Darcy to Meryton. He's come hoping to persuade Mr. Pierce to become the curate in Derbyshire. I quite enjoy Mr. Bradley's subtle way of giving out advice!
I also truly liked Louisa Bingley. She is not yet married to Mr. Hurst, but they are engaged. She has accompanied Bingley to Meryton to be mistress of Netherfield. Louisa has more of Bingley’s disposition, and she is not as close to Caroline as she is in the original.
I enjoyed reading All the Appearance of Goodness. It’s a fun, surprisingly mixed up Pride and Prejudice variation! I would encourage you to read the first two volumes first.
**I was provide an e-ARC of the book for my honest review.**
I was intrigued and delighted by the many twists Maria Grace puts in this story. Her pairing of couples is fun, and Darcy has some competition vying for Elizabeth’s attention. Of all people, it’s Mr. Collins! A handsome and charming Mr. Collins at that! But appearances can be deceiving.
Colonel Fitzwilliam is in Meryton also staying a Netherfield. He is retired from the military and is on the look out for a wife. Could he possibly be interested in any of the Bennet girls?
Mr. Bradley, Darcy’s vicar accompanies Darcy to Meryton. He's come hoping to persuade Mr. Pierce to become the curate in Derbyshire. I quite enjoy Mr. Bradley's subtle way of giving out advice!
I also truly liked Louisa Bingley. She is not yet married to Mr. Hurst, but they are engaged. She has accompanied Bingley to Meryton to be mistress of Netherfield. Louisa has more of Bingley’s disposition, and she is not as close to Caroline as she is in the original.
I enjoyed reading All the Appearance of Goodness. It’s a fun, surprisingly mixed up Pride and Prejudice variation! I would encourage you to read the first two volumes first.
**I was provide an e-ARC of the book for my honest review.**
May 23, 2013
4.5 stars... It was a good conclusion to the series. I loved how Elizabeth's relationship with each Bennet sister prospered. I love Arts role and character in this novel. I hated Caroline even more but loved Louisa for being a kind spirit who loved her fiancé and wanted to be friends with the Bennets. What was assuming was that Mr Collins is actually a good looking, charming man who catches Lizzys fancy (like Wickham in the original) and I loved that Darcy had competition for Lizzys attention, smiles and laugh. One thing that I found hard to accept was Jane (spoiler alert) didn't fall for Bingley although I loved the character that brought more to focus and wins her heart so I quickly got over my disappointment and enjoyed this version. The eventuality for Collins was suprising and I loved reading speeches portrayed between Darcy and Lizzy in anger in Pride and Prejudice portrayed differently in this version and sometimes with entirely different characters. It was a shame we didn't see into the relationship between Lizzy and Georgiana but I think the author has good grounds for a part 4 should she choose to write it!
April 22, 2013
This third volume in the series follows Darcy and Elizabeth from first meeting to marriage. After patiently awaiting this third book I was pleased, but still yet wanting more to the story. Will there be a fourth?
I enjoyed how Maria Grace creates a quirky banter between the characters and changes the plot quite significantly. I was actually surprised when certain characters ended up with new matches, and was content to say it worked. I really liked this Darcy and his attention towards Elizabeth. A good amount of angst and misunderstanding drove the plot and that successfully imitated the feel of Pride and Prejudice. I certainly enjoyed it.
I enjoyed how Maria Grace creates a quirky banter between the characters and changes the plot quite significantly. I was actually surprised when certain characters ended up with new matches, and was content to say it worked. I really liked this Darcy and his attention towards Elizabeth. A good amount of angst and misunderstanding drove the plot and that successfully imitated the feel of Pride and Prejudice. I certainly enjoyed it.
July 18, 2013
As much as I liked the first two books, this third book in the series jumps the shark to the point that it no longer held my interest. The characters are either all good or all bad. And by the time we get to the end of the book, the story hardly resembles the Pride and Prejudice universe. The elements that made the original so enjoyable to read were removed and replaced with a motley crew of of Mary Sues, Marty Stus, and dastardly evil villains. This was a series that started out with a lot of promise, but ended up a dud. No thanks.
March 30, 2014
This is my favourite of the series, because finally we see Darcy and Elizabeth togheter. Someone might argue that some characters are really different from the original and somehow it's true: some bad characters are fare worse than the original and some good characters are even better. But what is important to me when I read a P&P variation is that Elizabeth and Darcy are the same, and they are.
This novel was an enjoyable reading and I can't wait to begin the fourth and last volume.
This novel was an enjoyable reading and I can't wait to begin the fourth and last volume.
August 19, 2014
It is an absolutely delightful and intuitive look into “what might have been”, had things happened just a little bit differently than the events in Pride and Prejudice.
Read full review in the 2013 May issue of InD’tale Magazine.
Read full review in the 2013 May issue of InD’tale Magazine.
July 17, 2013
I preferred the second book to the third, I think because there was a lot more character development happening. Still, this is a good end to the series.
All throughout reading this trilogy I've maintained that it should be one book rather than 3 novellas. I still stand by this, as it would have been nice to see the story intertwined and in one larger volume.
Still, a surprisingly good read!
All throughout reading this trilogy I've maintained that it should be one book rather than 3 novellas. I still stand by this, as it would have been nice to see the story intertwined and in one larger volume.
Still, a surprisingly good read!
January 12, 2014
Not one of the good P&P variations. Although I did like that Mr Collins was made to be a sly villain. However there were large sections that were stagnant. Though the plot sounded interesting I didn't feel the author carried out its promise. Feel free to skip this one.
September 23, 2018
A lovely story
After reading the second installment of this series and needing relief from such a downer of a story, thank God this third book contained some joy and humor. I did find it hard to believe that Elizabeth rebounded so dramatically from the conclusion of the second book, and was instantly cheerful and witty with her Darcy encounter at the start of the third book. She goes from hopeless and anxious to the point of illness, to bright and breezy and carefree in the blink of an eye. Oh well, such is artistic license.
I also found the pairing of Jane and Colonel Fitzwilliam, while satisfying, went along almost too easily. Where was the angst all the others had to contend with?
This author writes well. The treatment of Mr. Collins' character was a clever departure from canon. The disposition of Caroline Bingley was nice. I have to wonder, though, what is wrong with Mrs. Bennett? She is given a weakness of mind in these stories that is extreme and makes it seem a miracle that she endured the birthing and raising of five children. Some situation in her younger years that affected her negatively is mentioned, but in these stories she almost seems like she should be in Bedlam.
All in all, an enjoyable read.
After reading the second installment of this series and needing relief from such a downer of a story, thank God this third book contained some joy and humor. I did find it hard to believe that Elizabeth rebounded so dramatically from the conclusion of the second book, and was instantly cheerful and witty with her Darcy encounter at the start of the third book. She goes from hopeless and anxious to the point of illness, to bright and breezy and carefree in the blink of an eye. Oh well, such is artistic license.
I also found the pairing of Jane and Colonel Fitzwilliam, while satisfying, went along almost too easily. Where was the angst all the others had to contend with?
This author writes well. The treatment of Mr. Collins' character was a clever departure from canon. The disposition of Caroline Bingley was nice. I have to wonder, though, what is wrong with Mrs. Bennett? She is given a weakness of mind in these stories that is extreme and makes it seem a miracle that she endured the birthing and raising of five children. Some situation in her younger years that affected her negatively is mentioned, but in these stories she almost seems like she should be in Bedlam.
All in all, an enjoyable read.
July 21, 2021
Confusing
3.5 stars
I really enjoy the whole series, and reread it a few times a year. This, Volume 3, is the most problematic, simply because of the lack of attention to detail. Volume II intimates that Mrs Bennet dislikes visitors for one reason, but in Volume III we are given a completely different reason.
Lizzy’s lack of logic is also troubling. Lydia gives her a surefire way to confirm Collins’ character, and she doesn’t take it. Not only would it have taken 3 minutes, but the proof involved a very dear possession of her father’s. It’s illogical that she wouldn’t check out Lydia’s claim.
Even with these easily fixable flaws, the tale is still very readable.
3.5 stars
I really enjoy the whole series, and reread it a few times a year. This, Volume 3, is the most problematic, simply because of the lack of attention to detail. Volume II intimates that Mrs Bennet dislikes visitors for one reason, but in Volume III we are given a completely different reason.
Lizzy’s lack of logic is also troubling. Lydia gives her a surefire way to confirm Collins’ character, and she doesn’t take it. Not only would it have taken 3 minutes, but the proof involved a very dear possession of her father’s. It’s illogical that she wouldn’t check out Lydia’s claim.
Even with these easily fixable flaws, the tale is still very readable.
July 25, 2018
I've waiting years for Caroline Bingley to get her comeuppance and Maria finally gives me what I want...excellent. A good 3rd book in the series, I loved that Darcy was more approachable in this book and that Mary finally gets a good story. Mr Collins was definitely a surprise as he's written in this version and it made a lovely change that he wasn't portrayed as the oily sycophant rather a charming one. Threw me a bit the relationships changing but as long as Darcy gets Elizabeth I'm happy.
October 9, 2018
This series was incredible. I finished all four books in about 24 hours. (I was on holiday!).
Why was it so good?
- whole series is out (four books)
- it’s free with kindle unlimited
- and featured in depth stories in continuation with all of our favourite characters
I won’t say more but even if at times it’s not of the perspective of odc it’s still good. I’m now going to read all of the authors other books.
Why was it so good?
- whole series is out (four books)
- it’s free with kindle unlimited
- and featured in depth stories in continuation with all of our favourite characters
I won’t say more but even if at times it’s not of the perspective of odc it’s still good. I’m now going to read all of the authors other books.
January 22, 2021
Welcome to Pride and Prejudice: The Twilight Zone, in which:
Overcoming all obstacles, Elizabeth Bennet and Fitzwilliam Darcy still wind up together at the end, blissfully happy.
Overcoming all obstacles, Elizabeth Bennet and Fitzwilliam Darcy still wind up together at the end, blissfully happy.
May 5, 2017
One of her new acquaintances seems to be all that is good and proper, another one does not give a good impression, how to get things right?
It will take some mistakes and learning some hard lessons for Elizabeth to find the truth.
A very recommended story.
It will take some mistakes and learning some hard lessons for Elizabeth to find the truth.
A very recommended story.
July 7, 2019
SO MANY tweaks from canon! I didn't love this book, but needed to know where things were going to go after the changes in the 2nd book. Reading this book was sprinkled with a lot of "What?!" exclamations! Totally kept my attention.
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